-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Please ranked this map :>

Red : Unrankable thing
Bold : Recommended to fix it
Black : Normal suggestion

[General]
- i think white color combo is unrankable :3 idk nobody else mentioned it before I think it's fine


[Easy]
00:18:881 (3,1) - too close D: I think it's fine D:
00:29:747 (2,4) - stacked pls :> Done
00:35:889 (1,2) - the shape between this two sliders slider not same ~ Fixed
01:01:637 (2,3,4,5) - i'm disagree about this pattern ~ ( i think 1/1 beat is better at all ) and why u follow vocal here? since you follow instrument here 01:08:015 (1,2,3,4) Changed 2,3
01:16:519 (2,3,4) - fix blanket can't make the blanket better with the same shape
01:19:354 (1) - remove NC It's ok because it's long

[Normal]
00:18:409 (2,2) - overlap The first one will be gone before the second one appears
00:47:464 (2,4) - bad overlap for me Fixed
00:49:117 (1,1) - stacked or avoid overlap Fixed
00:59:984 (7) - NC and then remove NC the next one No NC is on big white line
01:02:346 (6) - NC (to reduce the combo) ^
01:05:889 - add circle here (for consistent pattern) Uh it's consistent with 00:56:676 (1,2,3) -
01:06:125 (4) - NC (same as before the reason)
01:09:905 (5) - ^
01:13:448 - circle (same as before)
01:13:684 - NC (you know what i mean right? )
01:17:228 - add circle here (since she still singing the next lyric here) ^ All of these same reason

[Hard]
00:10:141 (3) - remove whistle sound It should be there
00:27:858 (2,4) - overlap please Not too sure whatt you mean
00:41:322 (4,5,6) - i think follow vocal here its not a right choice ~ maybe remove 00:41:322 (5) this slider and add 1 circle then 1/2 slider instead ~
do same with 00:42:267 (7) Done
00:45:810 (6) - NC? Not really necessary
00:52:897 (1) - remove NC I think it's fine cuz of big white line
01:00:928 (2,3) - bad flow :> Eh

GL ~ with your mapset ~

2018-01-26 01:46 neonat: 00:42:914 (4,1) - can you adjust 1 so no overlapping?
2018-01-26 01:46 neonat: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/910780 Yasuda Rei - Mirror -TV edit- [Emilia's Easy]]
2018-01-26 01:48 Rtyzen: ok i rotated it abit
2018-01-26 01:48 neonat: should there be a whistle on the start of 01:16:930 (2) - ?
2018-01-26 01:48 neonat: also 01:18:820 (4) - 
2018-01-26 01:49 Rtyzen: i dont think so
2018-01-26 01:49 Rtyzen: its on 01:16:694 -
2018-01-26 01:49 Rtyzen: but no note
2018-01-26 01:49 Rtyzen: but actually should i add it so it sounds better
2018-01-26 01:49 neonat: well at least cuz 01:18:820 (4) - sounds the same as 01:03:702 (4) - 
2018-01-26 01:49 neonat: the earlier one maybe it was like the end of 01:00:867 (1) - 
2018-01-26 01:51 Rtyzen: but the end of 01:00:867 (1) - doesnt have whistle either
2018-01-26 01:51 neonat: I'm just working the reasoning out as I go, yes it does not have
2018-01-26 01:52 Rtyzen: so u saying both should have?
2018-01-26 01:52 neonat: nah don't have to
2018-01-26 01:53 Rtyzen: ok
2018-01-26 01:54 Rtyzen: ok i just realized the preview point is weird i changed it alr
2018-01-26 01:55 neonat: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/910782 Yasuda Rei - Mirror -TV edit- [Normal]]
2018-01-26 01:55 neonat: 00:14:332 (2) - the whistle on sliderstart
2018-01-26 01:55 neonat: 00:16:221 (2) - 
2018-01-26 01:56 Rtyzen: fixed
2018-01-26 01:56 neonat: 00:19:292 (1,2) - 
2018-01-26 01:56 neonat: 00:21:182 (1,2) - 
2018-01-26 01:56 Rtyzen: ok wtf
2018-01-26 01:59 Rtyzen: ok theres like a bunch of useless green lines
2018-01-26 02:00 neonat: there's some long parts, maybe for 01:07:009 (5,6,7) - change it to a circle at 01:07:009 - and a slider from 01:07:245 - 01:07:717 - would also match up to the vocals
2018-01-26 02:01 Rtyzen: does that not sound off when compared to the rest of the chorus
2018-01-26 02:01 neonat: 01:18:820 (6) - add a whistle to the end
2018-01-26 02:01 neonat: then you can edit 01:03:229 (6,7) - as well
2018-01-26 02:02 neonat: waiot
2018-01-26 02:03 neonat: no changing that is just fine, it's not sounding the same as the other parts of the chorus
2018-01-26 02:03 Rtyzen: edit?
2018-01-26 02:04 neonat: the closest other part in the chorus to 1:07:009 is 01:21:654 (1,2) - 
2018-01-26 02:04 neonat: which is also red line based
2018-01-26 02:04 neonat: 01:23:072 (3) - remove the finish
2018-01-26 02:04 Rtyzen: I changed this part 01:06:536 (4,5) - to your suggestion alr
2018-01-26 02:04 Rtyzen: seems ok
2018-01-26 02:07 Rtyzen: ok i removed the finish at 01:23:072 - for all diffs alr
2018-01-26 02:08 neonat: forgot in easy, NC this? 00:55:198 (5) - 
2018-01-26 02:08 neonat: it's out of the 8 beat phrase
2018-01-26 02:09 neonat: just note that this is just 4 beats NC 01:19:765 (1) - idk if that's intentional, it's the only one
2018-01-26 02:10 neonat: that leads me to the Normal, verse is all 4 beat, chorus is 8 beat except for 01:19:765 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - so not sure what is the pattern you are going for
2018-01-26 02:10 Rtyzen: fixed both
2018-01-26 02:10 Rtyzen: fixed also
2018-01-26 02:14 neonat: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919587 Yasuda Rei - Mirror -TV edit- [Hard]]
2018-01-26 02:14 neonat: 00:14:332 (3) - whistle on start
2018-01-26 02:14 neonat: 00:16:221 (3) - 
2018-01-26 02:14 Rtyzen: ok on hard theres also alot of missing whistles
2018-01-26 02:14 Rtyzen: i fixed them alr
2018-01-26 02:14 Rtyzen: like i recently realized how to check hitsounds by lowering volume to like 15%
2018-01-26 02:15 Rtyzen: so im doing that for the diffs now
2018-01-26 02:16 neonat: 00:51:654 (2) - some of the sliderborder is out of the client
2018-01-26 02:17 Rtyzen: fixed
2018-01-26 02:18 neonat: 01:19:528 (1,2) - this is weird because of 01:20:001 (2) - starting on the off beat
2018-01-26 02:18 neonat: you can just use actual triplets at 01:19:528 (1) - and fit in the slider on the on beat instead
2018-01-26 02:19 Rtyzen: yea i was thinking of changing it to that
2018-01-26 02:19 Rtyzen: nc on the white line right
2018-01-26 02:19 neonat: yea
2018-01-26 02:20 neonat: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258871 Yasuda Rei - Mirror -TV edit- [Insane]]
2018-01-26 02:20 neonat: 00:03:938 (9,1) - better to no stack them
2018-01-26 02:20 neonat: 00:03:229 (6,4) - these dont
2018-01-26 02:21 neonat: 00:12:442 (3) - out of field
2018-01-26 02:22 Rtyzen: the gap is just 1/2 so stack is not that bad
2018-01-26 02:22 neonat: I'd say it's odd one out
2018-01-26 02:23 Rtyzen: these dont what
2018-01-26 02:23 neonat: these dont stack with the previous
2018-01-26 02:23 Rtyzen: 00:07:717 (9,1) -  this one is the same
2018-01-26 02:23 neonat: unstack too then
2018-01-26 02:23 Rtyzen: oh ok
2018-01-26 02:23 Rtyzen: I mean 00:07:717 (9,1) - is different
2018-01-26 02:24 Rtyzen: i thought u were just referring to 1/2
2018-01-26 02:26 neonat: 00:52:127 (3,4,5) - 
2018-01-26 02:26 neonat: mainly 00:52:481 (5) - cuz 00:52:363 (4) - is a hold
2018-01-26 02:27 Rtyzen: wait what do you want me to do
2018-01-26 02:28 neonat: remove that circle, have the slider start there and extend
2018-01-26 02:28 Rtyzen: oh yeah that makes more sense
2018-01-26 02:30 neonat: 01:11:143 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - make the spacing from slider more even to the stream
2018-01-26 02:31 Rtyzen: fixed
2018-01-26 02:36 neonat: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/516000 Yasuda Rei - Mirror -TV edit- [Refraction]]
2018-01-26 02:36 neonat: 00:10:552 (3,4) - kinda close, given it's the 1/2 and not 1/4
2018-01-26 02:36 neonat: maybe shift 00:09:843 (1,2) - slightly closer too
2018-01-26 02:38 Rtyzen: I shifted 00:51:772 (2) - to 317|292
2018-01-26 02:40 neonat: 00:20:473 (4,5) - kinda close
2018-01-26 02:40 neonat: 00:24:489 (5) - NC
2018-01-26 02:41 Rtyzen: i think by that time they will be used to the pattern and be able to read it just fine
2018-01-26 02:41 Rtyzen: why nc
2018-01-26 02:42 neonat: 00:36:064 - ignores the vocal here by leaving it blank
2018-01-26 02:43 neonat: the sv changes everywhere god lol
2018-01-26 02:44 Rtyzen: the change isnt that big
2018-01-26 02:45 Rtyzen: i just added a circle 00:36:064 -
2018-01-26 02:47 neonat: 01:12:914 (3,6) - ew that unstack lol
2018-01-26 02:49 Rtyzen: whoops
2018-01-26 02:52 neonat: 00:59:686 (4,5) - the only 1/4 stack it seems in the kiai
2018-01-26 02:53 Rtyzen: well theres 01:22:363 (4,5) - but ill change it
2018-01-26 02:55 neonat: could change that one too, that's lkike the peak
2018-01-26 02:56 neonat: update so I can check the hitsounds lol
2018-01-26 02:56 Rtyzen: changed both
2018-01-26 02:56 Rtyzen: yep was gonna ask u to double check the hs
2018-01-26 02:59 Rtyzen: updated
2018-01-26 03:05 Rtyzen: shit i missed a whistle
2018-01-26 03:05 Rtyzen: highest diff 01:22:363 (4) -
2018-01-26 03:06 neonat: go ahead and update that, I havent reached it
2018-01-26 03:09 neonat: the clap on 01:05:355 (3) -  in insane is kinda odd
2018-01-26 03:10 Rtyzen: it follows the same pattern as the other parts
2018-01-26 03:10 Rtyzen: just no clap on 01:05:119 -