Normal
00:04:307 (3) - end the slider at 00:04:843
00:06:450 (1,4) - if you want to stack the ends, stack perfectly, they are currently not aligned
00:20:735 (1,3) - this looks really weird
00:40:378 (1) - this doesn't really fit to the song as there is the start of vocals at 00:40:735 which is important yet overlooked here
01:03:593 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:02:878 (1)
01:13:235 (5,7) - blanket them
01:15:557 (1,1) - shift the spinner 01:15:557 (1) to start at 01:15:735 and end at 01:16:807 and remove 01:16:985 (1) and place a circle instead at 01:17:164 - this would fit the song better
01:23:593 (3) - place elsewhere, don't touch 01:21:807 (5)
Hard
00:10:468 (6) - this note is irrelevant, I suggest removing it
00:11:985 (6,7) - swap places, circle before slider, circle at 00:11:985 slider at 00:12:164
00:12:700 (8,1) - swap places like above ^ circle before slider, circle at 00:12:700 and slider at 00:12:878
00:19:307 (8) - less curvy, less scrunched up
00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too packed, it looks more confusing that it should be and doesn't look so nice
00:36:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird pattern to come up right after the previous one, they don't really mix
00:53:771 (5,6) - don't let them overlap with 00:52:164 (1,2,3)
01:00:200 (2) - less curve
01:08:414 (1) - too packed, show more of the slider body
01:09:843 (1) - ^
01:17:164 (2,1) - better blanket and because 01:17:700 (1) is so short, the overlap doesn't look that great because the body and end are covered
01:20:557 (5) - it goes over the beat at 01:20:735 which is important
01:21:093 (6) - too close to previous note
01:23:057 (7) - goes over the beat at 01:23:235 which is important
Insane
00:21:807 (1,2,3) - use the same shape
00:24:843 (2) - repeat arrow is covered by 00:24:485 (6) when hit and 300 comes out, this is unrankable
00:42:700 (1) - this is ugly looking
00:43:593 (1) - ^
00:44:307 (2) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1)
00:45:021 (1) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1)
00:45:021 (1,2,3) - looks too packed
00:53:057 (4) - goes over beat at 00:53:235 which is important
00:53:593 (5,6) - does it need to overlap
01:16:093 (3,4) - blanket
01:18:950 (8,1,2) - too close to each other
01:21:807 (4) - this doesn't fit into the music and rhythm, change the rhythm here
Clyine's Extra
00:01:986 (1) - the bend at the end of the slider is not nice looking
00:05:200 - the beat here is crucial, but you did not map to it
00:24:307 (3,5) - stack them
00:26:450 (1) - should end at 00:26:807 which makes more sense with the vocals, it ends in no-mans-land right now
00:27:879 (1) - ^
00:30:736 (1) - ^
00:37:879 (1,1,1) - ^
00:39:843 (2,3) - blanket
00:53:950 (5,1) - blanket better
01:01:271 (3,5) - stack the ends properly
01:04:843 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:06:093 (1) - remove finish on start of slider, it doesn't fit
01:13:771 (7) - you go over the beat at 01:13:950 which is important, end the slider there and add an additional circle to the stream
01:17:879 (4) - unexpected and doesn't fit the song, remove the slider velocity, it goes against the song. New combos also indicate a change which you didn't even use either. But this isn't a place to use a faster slider velocity, there is no reason to change it
Good luck
00:04:307 (3) - end the slider at 00:04:843
00:06:450 (1,4) - if you want to stack the ends, stack perfectly, they are currently not aligned
00:20:735 (1,3) - this looks really weird
00:40:378 (1) - this doesn't really fit to the song as there is the start of vocals at 00:40:735 which is important yet overlooked here
01:03:593 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:02:878 (1)
01:13:235 (5,7) - blanket them
01:15:557 (1,1) - shift the spinner 01:15:557 (1) to start at 01:15:735 and end at 01:16:807 and remove 01:16:985 (1) and place a circle instead at 01:17:164 - this would fit the song better
01:23:593 (3) - place elsewhere, don't touch 01:21:807 (5)
Hard
00:10:468 (6) - this note is irrelevant, I suggest removing it
00:11:985 (6,7) - swap places, circle before slider, circle at 00:11:985 slider at 00:12:164
00:12:700 (8,1) - swap places like above ^ circle before slider, circle at 00:12:700 and slider at 00:12:878
00:19:307 (8) - less curvy, less scrunched up
00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too packed, it looks more confusing that it should be and doesn't look so nice
00:36:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird pattern to come up right after the previous one, they don't really mix
00:53:771 (5,6) - don't let them overlap with 00:52:164 (1,2,3)
01:00:200 (2) - less curve
01:08:414 (1) - too packed, show more of the slider body
01:09:843 (1) - ^
01:17:164 (2,1) - better blanket and because 01:17:700 (1) is so short, the overlap doesn't look that great because the body and end are covered
01:20:557 (5) - it goes over the beat at 01:20:735 which is important
01:21:093 (6) - too close to previous note
01:23:057 (7) - goes over the beat at 01:23:235 which is important
Insane
00:21:807 (1,2,3) - use the same shape
00:24:843 (2) - repeat arrow is covered by 00:24:485 (6) when hit and 300 comes out, this is unrankable
00:42:700 (1) - this is ugly looking
00:43:593 (1) - ^
00:44:307 (2) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1)
00:45:021 (1) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1)
00:45:021 (1,2,3) - looks too packed
00:53:057 (4) - goes over beat at 00:53:235 which is important
00:53:593 (5,6) - does it need to overlap
01:16:093 (3,4) - blanket
01:18:950 (8,1,2) - too close to each other
01:21:807 (4) - this doesn't fit into the music and rhythm, change the rhythm here
Clyine's Extra
00:01:986 (1) - the bend at the end of the slider is not nice looking
00:05:200 - the beat here is crucial, but you did not map to it
00:24:307 (3,5) - stack them
00:26:450 (1) - should end at 00:26:807 which makes more sense with the vocals, it ends in no-mans-land right now
00:27:879 (1) - ^
00:30:736 (1) - ^
00:37:879 (1,1,1) - ^
00:39:843 (2,3) - blanket
00:53:950 (5,1) - blanket better
01:01:271 (3,5) - stack the ends properly
01:04:843 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:06:093 (1) - remove finish on start of slider, it doesn't fit
01:13:771 (7) - you go over the beat at 01:13:950 which is important, end the slider there and add an additional circle to the stream
01:17:879 (4) - unexpected and doesn't fit the song, remove the slider velocity, it goes against the song. New combos also indicate a change which you didn't even use either. But this isn't a place to use a faster slider velocity, there is no reason to change it
Good luck