Project Grimoire - Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~

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MirinH
ok mod it is
Do u want a guest diff(
[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.
[Yoru's Hyper]
00:02:268 (1,1) - plz blanket it well
00:02:268 (1,2) - not really stacking
00:04:514 (1,2) - I think 3/4 slider is not good here because the music is not very high. I will put 4/4 slider and a note here if I'm mapping.
00:08:258 - you need add some note here.
00:09:007 (1,3) - doesn't really staking
00:09:381 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:751 (4,1) - ^
00:14:248 (1,2) - ^
00:14:623 (2,2) - stacking
00:19:472 (2,2,1) - ^
00:21:186 (1,2) - blanket
00:22:901 (2,3,1) - stacking
00:23:586 (2,2) - ^
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket
00:39:014 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g flow better
00:42:785 (1,1) - stacking
00:44:156 (5,6,7,3) - ^
00:54:784 (3,1) - ^
01:01:812 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - looks not good
01:08:326 (3,1) - stacking
01:08:497 (1,4) - ^
01:09:183 (1,4) - Blanket
01:14:668 (6,1) - ^
:o I dont want write more, there is many problem like those, u need all fix it
[Insane]
00:38:328 (2) - I think clap here its better
00:46:556 (2) - ^
00:47:585 (6,7) - ^
01:45:180 (1,2) - maybe stack
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-[Hikari]-

- D a s z x - wrote:

ok mod it is
Do u want a guest diff( glad if you can make a more difficult one
[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.
[Yoru's Hyper]
00:02:268 (1,1) - plz blanket it well
00:02:268 (1,2) - not really stacking
00:04:514 (1,2) - I think 3/4 slider is not good here because the music is not very high. I will put 4/4 slider and a note here if I'm mapping.
00:08:258 - you need add some note here.
00:09:007 (1,3) - doesn't really staking
00:09:381 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:751 (4,1) - ^
00:14:248 (1,2) - ^
00:14:623 (2,2) - stacking
00:19:472 (2,2,1) - ^
00:21:186 (1,2) - blanket
00:22:901 (2,3,1) - stacking
00:23:586 (2,2) - ^
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket
00:39:014 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g flow better
00:42:785 (1,1) - stacking
00:44:156 (5,6,7,3) - ^
00:54:784 (3,1) - ^
01:01:812 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - looks not good
01:08:326 (3,1) - stacking
01:08:497 (1,4) - ^
01:09:183 (1,4) - Blanket
01:14:668 (6,1) - ^
:o I dont want write more, there is many problem like those, u need all fix it
[Insane]
00:38:328 (2) - I think clap here its better
00:46:556 (2) - ^
00:47:585 (6,7) - ^
01:45:180 (1,2) - maybe stack All fixed
IamKwaN
不給十張票 (dance

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Topic Starter
-[Hikari]-

IamKwaN wrote:

不給十張票 (dance

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thx bakakwan~
IamKwaN
Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 現在的BG不合規格,用這張1024*768?
  2. Title應該是這個:
    Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
    Reference:
  3. Inconsistent Combo Colors of zjwautumn's Easy.
  4. 全部diff的Widescreen Support都不用勾,因為沒有Storyboard.
  5. Diff name有點問題,Hyper不是用於beatmania? 還是你想整個set都用beatmania的難度名? 那就要改成Beginner-->Normal-->Hyper-->Another了,不然就用最基本ENHI.
  6. 最好map掉Insane的break,感覺4個diff都無break比較一致,map了的話就所有diff都不用勾"Letterbox in Breaks".

Insane

  1. 00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041.
  2. Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time
  3. 00:19:130 (3) - NC吧,開了紅線
  4. 00:27:186 (1,2) - Swap NC, 我看你都是大白線開NC的
  5. 00:40:385 (3,2) - 這是故意不stack? 01:30:953 (4,1)跟01:55:465 (6,2)也是
  6. 其實我有點不理解你NC的pattern,例如00:34:214 (1)沒啥特別又不是大白線為何NC? 其他例子: 01:03:698 (1) - 01:07:297 (1) - 這個應該是01:07:469 (2)NC吧
  7. 01:15:697 (7,1) - 交換NC
  8. 01:56:494 (1) - why NC?
  9. 節奏沒問題,但音效的whistle pattern我不能理解,比如說00:19:130 (3,4),高音的地方是在滑條頭而不是尾,所以我比較能理解whistle放在head,這3/4曲子我推薦你用1whistle3clap的pattern,default的那個clap也是比較違和
  10. 00:43:813 (1,2) - Normal-finish on heads
  11. 01:08:497 (1) - ^
  12. 01:16:725 (1) - Finish; same for 01:17:754 (1)

Yoru's Hyper

  1. HP+1, 對於一個Hard來說,HP只有4是太低了
  2. 00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041.
  3. Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time,01:16:725 也是比較合理的開始點
  4. 00:04:888 (2) - 這是跟什麼map的?自創的音? 換成一個3/2滑條就好
  5. 00:08:258 - 為啥漏音反而在前面自創節奏?
  6. 00:14:248 (1,3) - Stack 很多細節的stack都沒做好,00:22:901 (2,1) - 00:39:357 (3,2) - 00:42:785 (1,1) - 00:44:585 (6,7,3) - 01:10:126 (5,6,3) -
  7. 00:30:443 (1) - 用折返滑條來捉節奏有點不能理解;我聽到00:30:786跟00:31:129都是樂器的重音,而前面的長滑條節奏也是比較鬆,這裡用來回折返我覺得不太合適,這樣如何?
  8. 00:34:214 (1,2,3) - 有啥特別原因不用4個相同的滑條? 00:34:557也是比較重的鼓點
  9. 00:58:212 (1,2,1,2) - 節奏上這兩段有明顯區別,實在不適合用平衡結構,00:59:241 (1,2) - 3個白線的節奏比前面強烈很多,可以嘗試用3/4滑條再加點變速,因你這Hyper 空拍很多,DS很少,顯得難度有點不足
  10. 01:08:497 (1) - finish on head
  11. 01:14:668 (6,1) - Overlap很醜
  12. 01:24:953 - 這段開始對於我來說節奏一樣緊湊,用正常的SV更能體現音樂
  13. 01:40:038 (1,2,3) - 同樣
  14. 02:04:033 (2) - 這個頭的whistle能刪除
  15. 排列還算可以,但很多細節還沒做好,比如那些stack,overlap,overlap我指01:59:028 (1,3)這種,明明有很多位置,為何要逼在一起?
  16. Hyper的做法無論是節奏還是排列你可以參考:
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/285414
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258595
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341673
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/438547
  17. 至於音效,前奏缺少很多whistle,基本上大白線都可以放,因為音樂是比較高音;另外後面內置Normal的whistle跟clap很違和耶,特別是哨子很吵,跟整首歌曲的氣氛很不合

zjwautumn's Easy

  1. 加上kiai time吧? 這曲子的kiai也很明顯
  2. Easy的stack leniacy改回7吧,跟Normal一樣
  3. 01:45:521 - 把這綠線snap到01:45:523.
  4. 這EZ的難度跟Hyper是相反,Hyper是太容易,Easy是太難,建議減少連續的圓圈,最多兩個就好,多用長滑條
    00:12:376 (1,2,3) -
    00:39:357 (1,2) - Stack是絕對不建議,就算是Normal也被噴
    00:53:413 (3,4,1) -
    00:56:155 (1,2,3) -
    00:59:584 (2,3,1) -
    01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:10:554 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:14:668 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:16:382 (1,2) -
    01:28:039 (3,4,1) -
    01:30:096 (1,2,3) -
    01:33:181 (1,2,3) -
    01:35:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 絕對是Normal的節奏
    01:45:523 (1,2,3) -
    01:58:652 (1,2) -
  5. 自訂的S:C2 clap跟S:C1 whistle是也是比較違和,建議另外找一套
  6. 01:38:324 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:42:095 (1) - 整個EZ的DS要一致,不能為了排列犧牲Distance Snap.
  8. 粗略看了幾眼,節奏的取捨是最大的問題,另外就是為了排列犧牲DS,其他NC,音效的問題等你改了節奏再摸
@Hikari: 順便幫我更新一下
osu file format v13

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Hakurei Yoru

- D a s z x - wrote:

ok mod it is
caonima
all fixed
you're best mappppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppperrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

红白跑出来了
我得把她关回去,所以改不完。
先房。
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Topic Starter
-[Hikari]-

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 現在的BG不合規格,用這張1024*768?
  2. Title應該是這個:
    Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
    Reference:
  3. Inconsistent Combo Colors of zjwautumn's Easy.
  4. 全部diff的Widescreen Support都不用勾,因為沒有Storyboard.
  5. Diff name有點問題,Hyper不是用於beatmania? 還是你想整個set都用beatmania的難度名? 那就要改成Beginner-->Normal-->Hyper-->Another了,不然就用最基本ENHI.
  6. 最好map掉Insane的break,感覺4個diff都無break比較一致,map了的話就所有diff都不用勾"Letterbox in Breaks". general部分我得等GDer的修改,先放着

Insane

  1. 00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041. fixed
  2. Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time fixed
  3. 00:19:130 (3) - NC吧,開了紅線 fixed
  4. 00:27:186 (1,2) - Swap NC, 我看你都是大白線開NC的 fixed
  5. 00:40:385 (3,2) - 這是故意不stack? 01:30:953 (4,1)跟01:55:465 (6,2)也是 stack不上……
  6. 其實我有點不理解你NC的pattern,例如00:34:214 (1)沒啥特別又不是大白線為何NC? 其他例子: 01:03:698 (1) - 01:07:297 (1) - 這個應該是01:07:469 (2)NC吧 fixed
  7. 01:15:697 (7,1) - 交換NC fixed
  8. 01:56:494 (1) - why NC? fixed(本来这里一个note一个nc……
  9. 節奏沒問題,但音效的whistle pattern我不能理解,比如說00:19:130 (3,4),高音的地方是在滑條頭而不是尾,所以我比較能理解whistle放在head,這3/4曲子我推薦你用1whistle3clap的pattern,default的那個clap也是比較違和
  10. 00:43:813 (1,2) - Normal-finish on heads
  11. 01:08:497 (1) - ^
  12. 01:16:725 (1) - Finish; same for 01:17:754 (1) Hitsound all fixed

Yoru's Hyper

  1. HP+1, 對於一個Hard來說,HP只有4是太低了
  2. 00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041.
  3. Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time,01:16:725 也是比較合理的開始點
  4. 00:04:888 (2) - 這是跟什麼map的?自創的音? 換成一個3/2滑條就好
  5. 00:08:258 - 為啥漏音反而在前面自創節奏?
  6. 00:14:248 (1,3) - Stack 很多細節的stack都沒做好,00:22:901 (2,1) - 00:39:357 (3,2) - 00:42:785 (1,1) - 00:44:585 (6,7,3) - 01:10:126 (5,6,3) -
  7. 00:30:443 (1) - 用折返滑條來捉節奏有點不能理解;我聽到00:30:786跟00:31:129都是樂器的重音,而前面的長滑條節奏也是比較鬆,這裡用來回折返我覺得不太合適,這樣如何?
  8. 00:34:214 (1,2,3) - 有啥特別原因不用4個相同的滑條? 00:34:557也是比較重的鼓點
  9. 00:58:212 (1,2,1,2) - 節奏上這兩段有明顯區別,實在不適合用平衡結構,00:59:241 (1,2) - 3個白線的節奏比前面強烈很多,可以嘗試用3/4滑條再加點變速,因你這Hyper 空拍很多,DS很少,顯得難度有點不足
  10. 01:08:497 (1) - finish on head
  11. 01:14:668 (6,1) - Overlap很醜
  12. 01:24:953 - 這段開始對於我來說節奏一樣緊湊,用正常的SV更能體現音樂
  13. 01:40:038 (1,2,3) - 同樣
  14. 02:04:033 (2) - 這個頭的whistle能刪除
  15. 排列還算可以,但很多細節還沒做好,比如那些stack,overlap,overlap我指01:59:028 (1,3)這種,明明有很多位置,為何要逼在一起?
  16. Hyper的做法無論是節奏還是排列你可以參考:
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/285414
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258595
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341673
    http://osu.ppy.sh/b/438547
  17. 至於音效,前奏缺少很多whistle,基本上大白線都可以放,因為音樂是比較高音;另外後面內置Normal的whistle跟clap很違和耶,特別是哨子很吵,跟整首歌曲的氣氛很不合

zjwautumn's Easy

  1. 加上kiai time吧? 這曲子的kiai也很明顯
  2. Easy的stack leniacy改回7吧,跟Normal一樣
  3. 01:45:521 - 把這綠線snap到01:45:523.
  4. 這EZ的難度跟Hyper是相反,Hyper是太容易,Easy是太難,建議減少連續的圓圈,最多兩個就好,多用長滑條
    00:12:376 (1,2,3) -
    00:39:357 (1,2) - Stack是絕對不建議,就算是Normal也被噴
    00:53:413 (3,4,1) -
    00:56:155 (1,2,3) -
    00:59:584 (2,3,1) -
    01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:10:554 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:14:668 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:16:382 (1,2) -
    01:28:039 (3,4,1) -
    01:30:096 (1,2,3) -
    01:33:181 (1,2,3) -
    01:35:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 絕對是Normal的節奏
    01:45:523 (1,2,3) -
    01:58:652 (1,2) -
  5. 自訂的S:C2 clap跟S:C1 whistle是也是比較違和,建議另外找一套
  6. 01:38:324 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:42:095 (1) - 整個EZ的DS要一致,不能為了排列犧牲Distance Snap.
  8. 粗略看了幾眼,節奏的取捨是最大的問題,另外就是為了排列犧牲DS,其他NC,音效的問題等你改了節奏再摸
@Hikari: 順便幫我更新一下
osu file format v13

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Snowy Wings

- D a s z x - wrote:

[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.er...change a bit(1.3ds)
thanks

IamKwaN wrote:

zjwautumn's Easy

  1. 加上kiai time吧? 這曲子的kiai也很明顯已加
  2. Easy的stack leniacy改回7吧,跟Normal一樣改回7了(其实改不改都没差诶。。反正都没有stack了)
  3. 01:45:521 - 把這綠線snap到01:45:523.已改
  4. 這EZ的難度跟Hyper是相反,Hyper是太容易,Easy是太難,建議減少連續的圓圈,最多兩個就好,多用長滑條不好意思我很少做EZ,对EZ的节奏掌握不好。
    00:12:376 (1,2,3) -
    00:39:357 (1,2) - Stack是絕對不建議,就算是Normal也被噴
    00:53:413 (3,4,1) -
    00:56:155 (1,2,3) -
    00:59:584 (2,3,1) -
    01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:10:554 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:14:668 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:16:382 (1,2) -
    01:28:039 (3,4,1) - 除了这个其他的都修改了,这里感觉改成滑条不太合适
    01:30:096 (1,2,3) -
    01:33:181 (1,2,3) -
    01:35:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 絕對是Normal的節奏
    01:45:523 (1,2,3) -
    01:58:652 (1,2) -
  5. 自訂的S:C2 clap跟S:C1 whistle是也是比較違和,建議另外找一套
  6. 01:38:324 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:42:095 (1) - 整個EZ的DS要一致,不能為了排列犧牲Distance Snap.
  8. 粗略看了幾眼,節奏的取捨是最大的問題,另外就是為了排列犧牲DS,其他NC,音效的問題等你改了節奏再摸音效重做了一下

谢谢mod:)
Wing My Way
[Insane]
前面空白太多了,歌又短。
00:20:158 (2) - 类似这种有特色的颤音可以做的更有创意
00:34:557 (1) - 应该换成连打吧?
00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这种空拍衔接的很不好,后面还有好多类似的地方比较多,和kiai难度差距太大,可以有点内容。后面类似的注意一下
00:59:583 (5,9) - 加NC
01:10:554 (1) - 容易误读
01:36:609 (1,1) - 去NC
01:41:409 (3) - 后面的break没必要
01:56:237 (6,1) - 则呢玩

以上纯属瞎扯
Lily-Cook
IN:爷爷 00:47:927 (1) - 大跳直接fail。
01:00:269 (1) - 这个note影藏太深,反正我是看不见

Hard:00:09:007 (1) - 这竟然不是单点,连跪几次,顺便hard的连打全是在滑条结尾,要不要这样
Hyper要不要和Hard这么像...

KwaN's Normal:00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了,而且在之前的note下面,跪了

Xingyao's Normal:01:04:383 (1) - 直接跪在这的短距离单点note+折返,而且01:05:412 (1) - 和前面那个单点折返有空拍距离是相等的,坑!

Easy点个赞
Streliteela
我来摸图啦lol

[General]

cytus的好曲子,节奏明快音效丰富很适合作图。BPM和offset测得不错;easy和normal问题都不大,适当改改小问题就好;hard难度问题比较多,建议进行整体修改;对于hard来说,放太多读图梗并不是一个明智的选择,局部的flow也有一点问题(详细见下文);Insane排版很有进步,但难度分布不均匀;一些梗的难度已经到了ex级别但其它某些地方的节奏处理又偏于hard级别,建议重新调整一下一些大跳和读图梗的ds,太大实在相当坑orz可以test自己感受一下

[Insane]

od8感觉是没问题的(如果没有那些坑爹梗的话);楼上几位有提到曲子开头空了一大段很浪费,这个问题希望好好考虑一下,尽量把前面的部分也摆出来

00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 前面的部分你跟了主旋律的节奏,在这里还是跟着主旋律走比较好些;三个note单点有点破坏之前滑条的流畅感
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 梗的思路不错但这难度陡增的有点突兀,尤其00:32:500 (1,2,3,4) - 这大跳直接就飞出去了
00:34:557 (1) - 如果不打算在这里放转盘而放长滑条的话,请改一改它的形状。。这个太难看了orz
00:35:585 (1) - 奇怪为什么主旋律到了节奏反而变缓了?!这样处理的话完全把节奏处理成hard了,尤其前面那个大跳坑刚打完活下来的触们在刚经历完生死考验以后正准备迎接更鬼畜的洗礼结果发现变成hard了sad。。这部分如果再和前面一样跟主旋律用长滑条的话就不妥了,建议跟鼓点走,减少一些1/2滑条的使用,改用1/4或者单点来丰富节奏是非常必要的。
00:43:299 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的位置相当别手。。
00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方是最要吐槽的。。前面节奏都是1/2滑条这里咣咣咣来几个大跳。。不知你自己打的时候这里是不是随手碾压。。反正我是不行根本反应不过来 :o 而且说排列的话,前面那个大跳梗也是差不多这个思路,都是对称的几何大跳。。你试试可以换换其它思路,比如可以这样?(以 00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 部分为例,随手摆的,位置和ds不一定合适)

00:51:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 还有这个地方也是够难读的,可能我水平有限
00:59:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 为何上面那个地方那么不明显都拆串了这个地方却用了个整串?三连---三连---三连的节奏感觉会更舒服一些,而且也会避免01:00:098 (10,1) - 这个地方难读的问题
01:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个加速串重新摆,太难看;尤其01:08:154 (9) - 基本快成一个大直棒子捅下去了orz
01:12:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这地方节奏是这样的么?怎么怪怪的
01:24:953 (1) - 这后面又是难读骤减。。你想人家刚打完你前面那一堆大间距串突然一下子又变回hard。。柑橘萌萌哒w
01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 这个地方可以适当拉开些距离,不用拉太远,类似这样就行

01:40:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 爷爷,这真心打不了。。求碾压手元
01:48:094 (4,5,6) - 打起来特别特别特别特别地别手
01:54:265 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:55:294 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:48:094 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 打起来相当相当相当相当地难读
01:55:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 重新摆,这串太难看根本看不下去orz
02:04:447 (2,1,1) - 这结尾也是相当怪异。。后面还有余音啊喂。。转盘到那里就停止了感觉怪怪的啊。。但具体改发我也没有什么特别好的思路,总之感觉很违和sad

[Hard]

这个我就不细摸了,问题比较多;就找几个地方笼统的说一说吧,总之可能需要大改。下面说几个个人认为问题最严重的地方:
ctrl+A看看你的整体排列分布,全挤在中间四个角基本都是空的(尤其左边两个角),差评
00:08:258 (3,1) - 个人非常非常非常非常非常不喜欢这种梗,尤其是在hard里面出现
00:27:357 (3,1,1) - 重新拉滑条,形状太诡异了orz
00:30:443 (1) - 这种1/2多次折返滑条我个人认为在hard里面绝对是败笔,削弱了太多的打击感
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这几个中间的停顿个人也是觉得相当违和,可能有人说过适当的停顿有神效,这话没错,但这个地方我是真没感觉出神效orz
00:34:214 (1) - 就这么一个折返滑条miss掉这么多节奏也是夫妻
00:43:471 (1,2,3) - 这种地方在hard里面基本就读不出来,类似的滑条尾重叠note的现象还有很多不一一赘述
01:03:440 (1) - 这转盘加的也是莫名其妙
01:30:096 (3,1,2) - 这种奇怪的ds也有很多地方出现,01:30:096 (3,1) - 的节奏明显和01:31:124 (1,2) - 不一样但排列上却排成了等距,这种还是不要在hard里面用到的好

[Normal]
做的不错
00:36:614 (3,4,1) - 把这里微调一下,让1、4滑条头和3形成正三角,再让4包1更好看
00:42:785 (3,4) - 平行?
00:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方有些微微不好看,考虑把3移动一下让123的形状y轴对称,再将4上移包住3。见下图

01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 对normal难度来说是不是有点难度大。。
01:36:952 (6) - 这个遮挡确实在nm里难度大了
02:03:620 (1,2,1) - 这个结尾同样的,我没有好的改进方法,总之目前这种排列对于nm还是难

Easy我没有做过所以就不摸了,基本没什么问题
嗯就这样w加油 :)
liaoxingyao

lily-cook wrote:

IN:爷爷 00:47:927 (1) - 大跳直接fail。
01:00:269 (1) - 这个note影藏太深,反正我是看不见

Hard:00:09:007 (1) - 这竟然不是单点,连跪几次,顺便hard的连打全是在滑条结尾,要不要这样
Hyper要不要和Hard这么像...

KwaN's Normal:00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了,而且在之前的note下面,跪了

Xingyao's Normal:01:04:383 (1) - 直接跪在这的短距离单点note+折返,而且01:05:412 (1) - 和前面那个单点折返有空拍距离是相等的,坑!

Easy点个赞
奇怪 我NM都被删了你还摸 有点服
Topic Starter
-[Hikari]-

Wing My Way wrote:

[Insane]
前面空白太多了,歌又短。 前面不太打算补了,因为我开始时难度就低
00:20:158 (2) - 类似这种有特色的颤音可以做的更有创意 ;w;这里…我考虑了一会儿画不好
00:34:557 (1) - 应该换成连打吧? 这里是一个长音,以前连打改成滑条的
00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这种空拍衔接的很不好,后面还有好多类似的地方比较多,和kiai难度差距太大,可以有点内容。后面类似的注意一下 恩…难度分配不均我也注意到了,我考虑考虑
00:59:583 (5,9) - 加NC fixed
01:10:554 (1) - 容易误读 ;w;应该怎么改?
01:36:609 (1,1) - 去NC 滑条变速不是要NC的么……?
01:41:409 (3) - 后面的break没必要 不补也行吧?我思考思考
01:56:237 (6,1) - 则呢玩 ;w;fixed

以上纯属瞎扯
Topic Starter
-[Hikari]-

lily-cook wrote:

IN:爷爷 00:47:927 (1) - 大跳直接fail。 间距变小了
01:00:269 (1) - 这个note影藏太深,反正我是看不见 看缩圈能看出来吧…………

Hard:00:09:007 (1) - 这竟然不是单点,连跪几次,顺便hard的连打全是在滑条结尾,要不要这样
Hyper要不要和Hard这么像...

KwaN's Normal:00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了,而且在之前的note下面,跪了

Xingyao's Normal:01:04:383 (1) - 直接跪在这的短距离单点note+折返,而且01:05:412 (1) - 和前面那个单点折返有空拍距离是相等的,坑!

Easy点个赞
Hakurei Yoru

Streliteela wrote:

我来摸图啦lol

[General]

cytus的好曲子,节奏明快音效丰富很适合作图。BPM和offset测得不错;easy和normal问题都不大,适当改改小问题就好;hard难度问题比较多,建议进行整体修改;对于hard来说,放太多读图梗并不是一个明智的选择,局部的flow也有一点问题(详细见下文);Insane排版很有进步,但难度分布不均匀;一些梗的难度已经到了ex级别但其它某些地方的节奏处理又偏于hard级别,建议重新调整一下一些大跳和读图梗的ds,太大实在相当坑orz可以test自己感受一下


[Hard]

这个我就不细摸了,问题比较多;就找几个地方笼统的说一说吧,总之可能需要大改。下面说几个个人认为问题最严重的地方:
ctrl+A看看你的整体排列分布,全挤在中间四个角基本都是空的(尤其左边两个角),差评
00:08:258 (3,1) - 个人非常非常非常非常非常不喜欢这种梗,尤其是在hard里面出现
00:27:357 (3,1,1) - 重新拉滑条,形状太诡异了orz
00:30:443 (1) - 这种1/2多次折返滑条我个人认为在hard里面绝对是败笔,削弱了太多的打击感
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这几个中间的停顿个人也是觉得相当违和,可能有人说过适当的停顿有神效,这话没错,但这个地方我是真没感觉出神效orz
00:34:214 (1) - 就这么一个折返滑条miss掉这么多节奏也是夫妻
00:43:471 (1,2,3) - 这种地方在hard里面基本就读不出来,类似的滑条尾重叠note的现象还有很多不一一赘述
01:03:440 (1) - 这转盘加的也是莫名其妙
01:30:096 (3,1,2) - 这种奇怪的ds也有很多地方出现,01:30:096 (3,1) - 的节奏明显和01:31:124 (1,2) - 不一样但排列上却排成了等距,这种还是不要在hard里面用到的好
AF 不想说什么,但折返我还是那样不过采的重音小小改了下,至少我觉得那里放折返没有错。
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Topic Starter
-[Hikari]-

Streliteela wrote:

我来摸图啦lol

[General]

cytus的好曲子,节奏明快音效丰富很适合作图。BPM和offset测得不错;easy和normal问题都不大,适当改改小问题就好;hard难度问题比较多,建议进行整体修改;对于hard来说,放太多读图梗并不是一个明智的选择,局部的flow也有一点问题(详细见下文);Insane排版很有进步,但难度分布不均匀;一些梗的难度已经到了ex级别但其它某些地方的节奏处理又偏于hard级别,建议重新调整一下一些大跳和读图梗的ds,太大实在相当坑orz可以test自己感受一下 我会把间距改小的

[Insane]

od8感觉是没问题的(如果没有那些坑爹梗的话);楼上几位有提到曲子开头空了一大段很浪费,这个问题希望好好考虑一下,尽量把前面的部分也摆出来 因为我一开始就是水段所以再往前摆只会更水;w;

00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 前面的部分你跟了主旋律的节奏,在这里还是跟着主旋律走比较好些;三个note单点有点破坏之前滑条的流畅感 fixed,换成一个滑条
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 梗的思路不错但这难度陡增的有点突兀,尤其00:32:500 (1,2,3,4) - 这大跳直接就飞出去了 改小了
00:34:557 (1) - 如果不打算在这里放转盘而放长滑条的话,请改一改它的形状。。这个太难看了orz …为啥我觉得还不错
00:35:585 (1) - 奇怪为什么主旋律到了节奏反而变缓了?!这样处理的话完全把节奏处理成hard了,尤其前面那个大跳坑刚打完活下来的触们在刚经历完生死考验以后正准备迎接更鬼畜的洗礼结果发现变成hard了sad。。这部分如果再和前面一样跟主旋律用长滑条的话就不妥了,建议跟鼓点走,减少一些1/2滑条的使用,改用1/4或者单点来丰富节奏是非常必要的。 我把前面的大跳改小了,本意就是不打算从这里开始坑人的……
00:43:299 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的位置相当别手。。 ;w;我觉得还好?
00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方是最要吐槽的。。前面节奏都是1/2滑条这里咣咣咣来几个大跳。。不知你自己打的时候这里是不是随手碾压。。反正我是不行根本反应不过来 :o 而且说排列的话,前面那个大跳梗也是差不多这个思路,都是对称的几何大跳。。你试试可以换换其它思路,比如可以这样?(以 00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 部分为例,随手摆的,位置和ds不一定合适)
减小间距了;w;
00:51:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 还有这个地方也是够难读的,可能我水平有限 这里不改动
00:59:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 为何上面那个地方那么不明显都拆串了这个地方却用了个整串?三连---三连---三连的节奏感觉会更舒服一些,而且也会避免01:00:098 (10,1) - 这个地方难读的问题 (10,1)那里是个6分拍,之前我拆一下看看,本来是长串和折返交替的
01:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个加速串重新摆,太难看;尤其01:08:154 (9) - 基本快成一个大直棒子捅下去了orz 改了一下9的弧度
01:12:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这地方节奏是这样的么?怎么怪怪的 的确是这样的
01:24:953 (1) - 这后面又是难读骤减。。你想人家刚打完你前面那一堆大间距串突然一下子又变回hard。。柑橘萌萌哒w ;w;我觉得可以降低一点难度……我看看
01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 这个地方可以适当拉开些距离,不用拉太远,类似这样就行
fixed,换了种摆法
01:40:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 爷爷,这真心打不了。。求碾压手元 这里我就故意一下吧…
01:48:094 (4,5,6) - 打起来特别特别特别特别地别手
01:54:265 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:55:294 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ;w;我觉得这三个地方都没问题啊……
01:48:094 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 打起来相当相当相当相当地难读 fixed
01:55:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 重新摆,这串太难看根本看不下去orz fixed
02:04:447 (2,1,1) - 这结尾也是相当怪异。。后面还有余音啊喂。。转盘到那里就停止了感觉怪怪的啊。。但具体改发我也没有什么特别好的思路,总之感觉很违和sad 又加了个转盘
IamKwaN

lily-cook wrote:

KwaN's Normal:00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了,而且在之前的note下面,跪了 沒問題 只是普通的一個stack 而且沒有polarity的問題

Streliteela wrote:

[Normal]
00:36:614 (3,4,1) - 把这里微调一下,让1、4滑条头和3形成正三角,再让4包1更好看
00:42:785 (3,4) - 平行?故意CTRL + H +G
00:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方有些微微不好看,考虑把3移动一下让123的形状y轴对称,再将4上移包住3。 blanket我感覺更不好看,把那flow拐下去
01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 对normal难度来说是不是有点难度大。。 再難點我也做過
01:36:952 (6) - 这个遮挡确实在nm里难度大了 也不是
02:03:620 (1,2,1) - 这个结尾同样的,我没有好的改进方法,总之目前这种排列对于nm还是难 你對nm難度的定義有點過窄,我這裡全都只是1/2,排列也沒啥特別
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374,157,75697,2,0,L|475:143,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,43,76382,2,0,L|413:50,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,57,76725,6,0,B|314:64|314:64|266:52,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,67,77411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,121,77754,2,0,P|68:170|89:214,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,297,78439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,330,78782,6,0,L|334:335,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,278,79468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,184,79811,2,0,L|459:80,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,198,80839,6,0,L|338:98,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,77,81868,2,0,L|152:176,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,235,82554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,324,82896,6,0,P|72:335|121:321,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,277,83582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,309,83925,2,0,P|353:298|400:311,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,248,84610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,84953,6,0,P|330:145|307:53,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,53,85982,2,0,P|208:102|185:145,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,165,86667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,251,87010,6,0,P|189:262|219:300,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,329,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,302,88039,2,0,L|439:199,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,88724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,51,89067,6,0,B|287:35|287:35|238:41,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,90096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,161,90438,2,0,B|287:177|287:177|238:171,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,164,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,158,91124,6,0,P|121:204|130:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,335,91810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,322,92153,2,0,P|333:329|383:310,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,233,92838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,135,93181,6,0,L|426:35,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,167,94038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,94210,2,0,P|245:206|180:130,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,33,95238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,105,95581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,198,95924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,128,96609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,299,97295,6,0,B|145:331|199:300|199:300|237:320|284:306,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,362,98324,2,0,B|397:308|366:254|366:254|386:216|372:169,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,88,99352,6,0,B|375:56|321:87|321:87|283:67|236:81,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,130,100381,2,0,P|101:139|51:127,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,182,101409,6,0,L|227:282,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,102094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,258,102437,2,0,L|36:253,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,103123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,295,103466,6,0,P|283:291|331:306,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,289,104151,2,0,L|432:240,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,104494,2,0,L|414:91,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,37,105180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,79,105522,6,0,L|187:85,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,63,105866,2,0,L|42:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,173,106551,2,0,P|10:218|36:263,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,322,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,278,107580,6,0,L|213:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,278,108609,2,0,L|299:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,320,109465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,352,109637,6,0,P|417:365|463:348,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,250,110322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,153,110665,2,0,L|462:98,2,50,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,111351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,146,111694,6,0,B|246:132|246:132|210:98,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,63,112380,2,0,L|62:68,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,162,113066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,249,113409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,323,113751,6,0,P|189:333|241:322,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,265,114437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,165,114780,2,0,P|287:175|235:164,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,107,115466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,38,115808,6,0,P|274:28|326:39,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,88,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,181,116837,2,0,B|437:229|401:255|401:255|444:306|421:358,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,325,117900,6,0,L|227:334,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,283,118652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,204,119028,2,0,L|300:213,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,162,119780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,61,120157,6,0,P|437:70|474:105,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,81,121285,2,0,P|241:91|196:74,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,22,122037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,120,122428,6,0,L|2:131,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,123620,6,0,L|263:203,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,217,124654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125289,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:
IamKwaN
Hai, recheck on Easy.

[zjwautumn's Easy]
  1. 加兩個靜音的sliderslide,感覺前奏特別吵,你可以用我那個soft-sliderslide88.wav
  2. 其實還是有些DS不一致,例如00:01:145 (2,3) - 00:22:215 (4,1) - 00:38:671 (5,1) - 00:41:756 (4,1) - 00:47:927 (1,2,3,1) - 01:23:925 (4,1) - 01:39:352 (1,1) - 不過我可以接受,因為排列上只能這樣放,但我不知道看圖的BAT能不能接受,所以要有心理準備要全部改成一致
  3. 00:07:884 (4) - 這個應該能做到1.3x
  4. 01:02:326 (1) - 可以不用NC
  5. 01:06:440 (3) - 這種短滑條的折返箭嘴很難讀,所以新手好難知道折返多於一次,建議把它弄成長滑條
  6. 01:16:725 (2) - DS 1.57x 有點過份,是不是放錯了?
  7. 01:24:953 (1) - 碰到了下面的誤差提示條,嘗試改變一下滑條的形狀
  8. 00:25:300 (3) - 尾巴可以whistle
  9. 00:27:015 (1) - Drum-sampleset? 也蠻合曲
  10. 00:35:585 (2) - 其實我感覺頭部放normal-finish比較適合,因為跟背景音樂類似
  11. 00:43:813 (2) - ^
  12. 00:53:413 (3,4) - 背景我聽不出有whistle的聲音,刪除比較合曲,然後在(4)用drum-sample
  13. 01:06:440 (3) - 中間兩個沒有whistle比較舒服
  14. 01:08:497 (2) - 頭default Normal/後面用soft,那就soft-finish
  15. 01:28:039 (3,4,1) - How about something like this to reduce the difficulty? And then NC on
  16. 01:32:153 (3) - 尾巴的finish有點吵,降低一點音量
  17. 01:36:267 (2) - 頭部像01:35:238 (1)一樣finish?它們在音樂上好像差不多,或者01:35:238 (1)移除finish來凸顯01:37:295 (1,2,1) 的finish
  18. 01:39:352 (1) - 刪除NC
  19. 02:03:620 (2) - NC 因為BPM轉了
    節奏簡化了不少 好
Snowy Wings

IamKwaN wrote:

Hai, recheck on Easy. requote on my Easy =w=
[zjwautumn's Easy]
  1. 加兩個靜音的sliderslide,感覺前奏特別吵,你可以用我那個soft-sliderslide88.wav 好的,前面部分改爲soft88(雖然說沒感覺前面很吵)
  2. 其實還是有些DS不一致,例如00:01:145 (2,3) - 00:22:215 (4,1) - 00:38:671 (5,1) - 00:41:756 (4,1) - 00:47:927 (1,2,3,1) - 01:23:925 (4,1) - 01:39:352 (1,1) - 不過我可以接受,因為排列上只能這樣放,但我不知道看圖的BAT能不能接受,所以要有心理準備要全部改成一致儘量修復了許多不一致的DS,不知道還有木有XD
  3. 00:07:884 (4) - 這個應該能做到1.3x 已修復~
  4. 01:02:326 (1) - 可以不用NC 要NC!就要NC!
  5. 01:06:440 (3) - 這種短滑條的折返箭嘴很難讀,所以新手好難知道折返多於一次,建議把它弄成長滑條 位置都擠滿了,改成長滑條的話放不下 :?
  6. 01:16:725 (2) - DS 1.57x 有點過份,是不是放錯了? XD
  7. 01:24:953 (1) - 碰到了下面的誤差提示條,嘗試改變一下滑條的形狀 直接Ctrl+J翻過來了 :D
  8. 00:25:300 (3) - 尾巴可以whistle 感覺whistle不太舒服,改爲CS2的Finish好了
  9. 00:27:015 (1) - Drum-sampleset? 也蠻合曲 好滴
  10. 00:35:585 (2) - 其實我感覺頭部放normal-finish比較適合,因為跟背景音樂類似 感覺就是敲桶聲啊,還是不改了
  11. 00:43:813 (2) - ^ 这這裏和背景音樂不類似嘍
  12. 00:53:413 (3,4) - 背景我聽不出有whistle的聲音,刪除比較合曲,然後在(4)用drum-sample
  13. 01:06:440 (3) - 中間兩個沒有whistle比較舒服 那把whistle删了吧
  14. 01:08:497 (2) - 頭default Normal/後面用soft,那就soft-finish 聽不懂…… :?
  15. 01:28:039 (3,4,1) - How about something like this to reduce the difficulty? And then NC on hmm...I choose another slider instead of yours
  16. 01:32:153 (3) - 尾巴的finish有點吵,降低一點音量 音量減小了10%
  17. 01:36:267 (2) - 頭部像01:35:238 (1)一樣finish?它們在音樂上好像差不多,或者01:35:238 (1)移除finish來凸顯01:37:295 (1,2,1) 的finish 想了下,還是不改了,這裏放finish是想讓01:32:153 (3) - 的finish不會太突兀
  18. 01:39:352 (1) - 刪除NC 已刪
  19. 02:03:620 (2) - NC 因為BPM轉了
    節奏簡化了不少 好
Easy都能找出這麼多問題,很專業 很細心 好 8-)
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