Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Fanfare · forum

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-07-05T19:52:53+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October-07-14 at 11:15:38 PM

Artist: Nagarekawa Girls
Title: Mirai Fanfare
Source: 普通の女子校生が【ろこどる】やってみた。
Tags: Opening Futsuu no Joshikousei ga [Locodol] Yattemita. Misawa Sachika 三澤紗千香 Itou Miku 伊藤美来 No Dap
BPM: 178
Filesize: 17120kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.62 stars, 110 notes)
Insane (4.58 stars, 384 notes)
No Dap's Hard (3.22 stars, 254 notes)
Normal (2.04 stars, 158 notes)

Download: Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Fanfare
Download: Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Fanfare (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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What i Need:
New BG
New MP3 - Done
Metadata Check - Done
GDs? - Done
Thx to lightlance7 for video

Kibbleru inc.™

Last edited by Kibbleru 2014-10-24T20:13:22+00:00, edited 71 times in total.

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-07-06T00:50:48+00:00

~~yey moe pink girl bg~~

Here's that link again: http://www.zerochan.net .3.

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-07-09T18:36:37+00:00

[some metadata]

source: 普通の女子校生が【ろこどる】やってみた。
title: ミライファンファーレ
artist: 流川ガールズ
tags: Futsuu no Joshikousei ga [Locodol] Yattemita. Misawa Sachika 三澤紗千香 Itou Miku 伊藤美来
video if needed: http://puu.sh/a3Y8K/517ed332cc.rar

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-10T01:22:04+00:00

noob diff

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/a4sZ9/7de790faa9.zip

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-07-10T04:39:40+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[some metadata]
source: 普通の女子校生が【ろこどる】やってみた。
title: ミライファンファーレ
artist: 流川ガールズ
tags: Futsuu no Joshikousei ga [Locodol] Yattemita. Misawa Sachika 三澤紗千香 Itou Miku 伊藤美来
video if needed: http://puu.sh/a3Y8K/517ed332cc.rar

perfect! just what i needed! thanks xD

Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-07-12T08:23:12+00:00

Hi,m4m here

[Insane]

00:21:141 (5) - add normal-additions clap
00:24:006 (5,6) - how about change to a slider,I think it will more fit.like 00:34:792 (7) -
00:27:040 (1) - ctrl+g,better flow and fix the high jump with 00:27:377 (2) -

[No Dap's Hard]

00:33:613 (5) - add normal-additions clap and whistle
00:33:781 (1) - slider head cancel all hitsound，end add normal-additions clap and whistle01:04:118 (3) -
01:04:118 (3) - slider head also add normal-additions clap and whistle
01:17:601 (4) - ^

[Easy]

01:14:230 (2) - blanket

tags add your cp
beauty

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-07-12T09:25:08+00:00

[General]

Really nice beatmap. To be honest, it's hard to find something to mod.

I must give you a star, hope you get this map ranked!

[Esay]

00:28:725 (5) - For a better flow, how about moving it to X80 y248?

00:56:028 (3) - add NC?

01:02:096 (1,2) - I don't think the rhythm here is right, how about just using 1/1?

SPOILER

[Normal]

00:10:860 (1) - make a blanket with 00:10:186 (4) or move the white dot at x124 y364 in the slider to x140 y360?

00:37:320 (5,1) - The stack here makes it a bit confusing to play...Umm..but I have no idea how to fix it, sorry for this.

[No Dap's Hard]

00:13:219 (4) - How about this? (Using 1.5DS)

SPOILER

00:38:669 (4) - The DS here is not unfied. Is it on purpose?

00:54:848 (4,1) - To make it look good,I think you can move it to x256 y168(Just right a bit)

01:28:556 (1,2) - Well, for something different,you can stack (1) at 01:26:702 (3), and stack (2) at 01:26:534 (2)

[Insane]

00:53:500 (4) - Convert it to stream? I think there should be two circles, not a short slider.

01:18:107 (4) - Move it to x304 y215 for better flow

01:20:214 (7) - Add NC？

01:28:893 (2) - For a nicer appearance, move it to x120 y132 to make 01:28:051 (2,3,1,2) a parallelogram.

Poor mod, hope it helps. Good Luck！

Ozato Fumika

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Ozato Fumika 2014-07-12T10:37:16+00:00

Frey wrote:
[General]
[No Dap's Hard]

00:13:219 (4) - How about this? (Using 1.5DS) I don't hear anything at 00:13:388 - so I don't want to use circles there.
SPOILER

00:38:669 (4) - The DS here is not unfied. Is it on purpose? yes, its intentional

00:54:848 (4,1) - To make it look good,I think you can move it to x256 y168(Just right a bit) oops, ok fixed

01:28:556 (1,2) - Well, for something different,you can stack (1) at 01:26:702 (3), and stack (2) at 01:26:534 (2) DX I can't understand your point, but I don't think I want to fix this pattern yet..

Thanks for mod~

SPOILER

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Number5

245 posts

Joined March 2014

Number5 2014-07-12T10:39:32+00:00

From your M4M queue~
[Easy]
I thought this like normal...
CS -1
00:47:938 (1) - Maybe too hard?

[Normal]
No issues~

[Hard]
00:04:118 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard in the song starting?

[Insane]
Sorry... I can't pass it...

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-07-12T12:51:28+00:00

No Dap wrote:
01:28:556 (1,2) - Well, for something different,you can stack (1) at 01:26:702 (3), and stack (2) at 01:26:534 (2) DX I can't understand your point, but I don't think I want to fix this pattern yet..

Though it's meaningless, I have to explain this.

I mean,move 01:28:556 (1) to x108 y236, and move 01:28:893 (2) to x276 y200.

sorry for my poor English.

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-07-12T15:37:59+00:00

Hey. M4M in your queue.

Easy

00:09:511 (3) - Maybe a blanket with the tail of 00:08:500 (2) ?
00:28:725 (5) - Move this to x:76 y:252 for a better flow.

Normal

00:06:815 (4) - Maybe make a blanket with the head of 00:07:489 (5) for a better appearance? But this suggestion make 00:06:815 (4,5) to be further to each other.
00:09:511 (3,4) - ^
00:27:714 (2,3) - ^
00:43:051 (5) - Make a perfect stack with the head of 00:43:219 (1) .
00:44:568 (1) - Move the last point to x:150 y:232 so it could be on the same line with 00:45:242 (2) .
01:24:174 (2) - Do the same thing as the suggestion above.

Insane

00:07:826 (2) - Make a mirror pattern by copy and paste 00:07:489 (1) and Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J, and place it where it was.

No Dap's Hard

00:06:141 (2) - Add a point at x:216 y:140 so it could have the same aspect as 00:06:815 (3) .

Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask on the forum PM or by poking me in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map. It should deserve a star.

SPOILER

WHAT IS THIS?

I might be blind.

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Kibbleru 2014-07-12T20:34:31+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
Hi,m4m here

[Insane]
00:21:141 (5) - add normal-additions clap nice catch fix
00:24:006 (5,6) - how about change to a slider,I think it will more fit.like 00:34:792 (7) - mm i like it how it is
00:27:040 (1) - ctrl+g,better flow and fix the high jump with 00:27:377 (2) - hm good idea ok
[Easy]
01:14:230 (2) - blanket fix
tags add your cp im confused do i add "your cp" to tags o-o or something else?
beauty

ill get back to ur map soon! ty

Frey wrote:
[General]

Really nice beatmap. To be honest, it's hard to find something to mod.

I must give you a star, hope you get this map ranked!

[Esay] this essay xD

00:28:725 (5) - For a better flow, how about moving it to X80 y248? hmm i like the little zig zag thing tho i think it makes it more interesting to play

00:56:028 (3) - add NC? i will consider this but for now, i don't really want to small of a combo lol

01:02:096 (1,2) - I don't think the rhythm here is right, how about just using 1/1? ehh i c ur point but blah i don't really like 1/1 rhythms lel since i think they're boring :X
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[Normal]

00:10:860 (1) - make a blanket with 00:10:186 (4) or move the white dot at x124 y364 in the slider to x140 y360? why i think this is fine owo

00:37:320 (5,1) - The stack here makes it a bit confusing to play...Umm..but I have no idea how to fix it, sorry for this. i think its fine o-o gotta make it a bit challenging for normal

[Insane]

00:53:500 (4) - Convert it to stream? I think there should be two circles, not a short slider. better emphasis for white tick

01:18:107 (4) - Move it to x304 y215 for better flow i don't think it really matters lol

01:20:214 (7) - Add NC？added on white tick instead

01:28:893 (2) - For a nicer appearance, move it to x120 y132 to make 01:28:051 (2,3,1,2) a parallelogram. uh ok fix i guess

Poor mod, hope it helps. Good Luck！

ty for mod and star

Number5 wrote:
From your M4M queue~
[Easy]
I thought this like normal... maybe, it's a bit harder easy tho and spread should be fine
CS -1 err no that would ruin it since i made it originally with cs3
00:47:938 (1) - Maybe too hard? it's fine Oo it follows music and all u gotta do is hold it down anyway

[Normal]
No issues~

[Insane]
Sorry... I can't pass it...

ty for ur mod

sheela901 wrote:
Hey. M4M in your queue.
Easy
00:09:511 (3) - Maybe a blanket with the tail of 00:08:500 (2) ? nah i like it q:
00:28:725 (5) - Move this to x:76 y:252 for a better flow. as in preveious mod, i like the zigzag, makes it interesting
Normal
00:06:815 (4) - Maybe make a blanket with the head of 00:07:489 (5) for a better appearance? But this suggestion make 00:06:815 (4,5) to be further to each other. nah i like it how it is q:
00:09:511 (3,4) - ^
00:27:714 (2,3) - ^
00:43:051 (5) - Make a perfect stack with the head of 00:43:219 (1) . this is just an editor bug thing, stack leniency will fix
00:44:568 (1) - Move the last point to x:150 y:232 so it could be on the same line with 00:45:242 (2) . hmm i like it a bit off path so no change
01:24:174 (2) - Do the same thing as the suggestion above.
Insane
00:07:826 (2) - Make a mirror pattern by copy and paste 00:07:489 (1) and Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J, and place it where it was. ahh i like it like this :X
Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask on the forum PM or by poking me in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map. It should deserve a star.
SPOILER
WHAT IS THIS?

I might be blind.
lol im not sure, i think osu fked it up or something cuz i cant see it in the original image

ty for mod and star!

ill get back to all ur maps in a day or 2

got no dap to change something. pro. u can die in peace now q:

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-13T00:29:55+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
No Dap's Hard
00:06:141 (2) - Add a point at x:216 y:140 so it could have the same aspect as 00:06:815 (3) .

Intentional

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-07-13T00:33:19+00:00

haha I mean add ‘’no dap‘’ in tags lol

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Kibbleru 2014-07-13T02:03:20+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
haha I mean add ‘’no dap‘’ in tags lol

how could i have forgotten q-q

sorry mom

[ Joey ]

390 posts

Joined May 2013

[ Joey ] 2014-07-13T04:30:12+00:00

Hello Kibbleru! ~M4M~

Insane

Test Play: http://puu.sh/a907m/c2adc6e88f.osr
00:01:084 - Sounds like a spinner could start here
00:03:781 - Remove the NC here
00:18:276 (1,2) - I think this part should be hitcircles, because you used hitcircles here 00:02:938 - and it sounds the same. Maybe make some anti-jumps?
00:22:320 - 1/1 slider here to match 00:19:624 (4) - ?
00:34:371 - Should add a note here so it goes with the trumpets (I don't actually know what instrument that is but it sounds like trumpets xD)
00:54:848 (2,1) - Feels good if you stack these
01:06:815 - You should add a stream of drums here

http://puu.sh/a8ZEE/1f4eca366b.jpg
00:37:995 (2,3) - I think you should spread these out more people don't read it as a 1/2 note spacing (That's what I did. ;_;)

Mom's Hard

00:10:691 (5,6,1) - Sounds good if you make all of this normal hitclaps (including the end of the slider)
You should add a note here 00:15:410 - and here 00:16:084 - . It would make it match your previous beat 00:13:556 (1,2,3) - because you added a note here 00:14:062 -
00:48:613 (1,1) - Interesting....idk if I like it or not lol
00:50:466 - Note should go here
00:51:309 (1,2) - These notes shouldn't be stacked. The beats are too heavy here
01:19:708 (1) - This slider should end here 01:20:298 - . 01:20:635 - 1/2 slider here. 01:20:972 - Hitcircle with finish here.
(Or if you want, make the slider end here 01:20:635 - . Either way, there needs to be a note on 01:20:972 - )

Normal

AI Mod says you have some distance snap errors. You might want to double check them.
00:02:601 (2) - I think this might be better as a hitcircle....idk though

00:04:624 - A note should be here. You miss a really big drum hit
Not much else I could find in this diff

Easy

Idk if it's because I'm bad at modding easy's. or if its just that perfect, but I couldn't find anything lol. I went over it multiple times. Very well done!

Really fun mapset! (I had trouble finding things to mod xD)
Shot ya a star

Message me in game if you have any questions about my mod
Good luck!!

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-07-13T12:14:42+00:00

SPOILER

21:05 No Dap: 모딩하시는김에
21:05 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/454959 Nagaregawa Girls - Mirai Fanfare [No Dap's Hard]]
21:05 No Dap: ㄱㄱ
21:05 Sonnyc: ㅋ
21:05 Sonnyc: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1813429
21:06 Sonnyc: 저도 암걸린 기억이.
21:07 Sonnyc: 모딩큐 처리느 언제<<
21:07 No Dap: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:07 No Dap: 신속한 irc모딩하죠
21:07 No Dap: 제난이도만
21:07 Sonnyc: 네 님꺼만
21:08 Sonnyc: 00:12:208 (1,3) - Not a perfect parallel
21:09 Sonnyc: 00:38:669 (4,5) - Check spacing
21:09 No Dap: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:09 No Dap: 봐주세요
21:09 Sonnyc: 00:12:714 (3) - 이거 복붙해서 ctrl+shit+S로 0.5배 해서 (1) 자리에 놓으시면 끝이에요
21:09 No Dap: 수정
21:10 No Dap: 꼬리 한그리드 내리니까 대충된듯
21:10 Sonnyc: 키아이 휘슬 패턴 해설좀
21:11 No Dap: 저도모르겟음
21:11 Sonnyc: 01:22:657 (2,3) - 좀 흐름이 부자연스러운데 수정하시려면 해주세요
21:11 No Dap: 뭐지 이 ㅟ슬은
21:11 No Dap: 분명 제맵인데
21:12 Sonnyc: 01:09:511 (2,1) - 모르시면 이거 머리에도 휘슬 삽입이 좋을듯요
21:12 Sonnyc: 끝

IRC modded with No Dap. Feel free to feed me kudosu or not. Good luck~

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-13T12:15:32+00:00

Fixed some from Joey's mod

and applied Sonnyc's suggestions

SPOILER

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Ntasuto

286 posts

Joined April 2013

Ntasuto 2014-07-13T12:38:47+00:00

Hiiiiiii o/

Mod for your M4M Q

General:
Inconsistent Kiai time: - No Dap's Hard : 1st Kiai 00:56:534 to 01:20:972

Easy:

SPOILER

General: -

00:31:084 (3,1) - make blanket a bit better better. Adjust slider(1)'s tail .
00:48:613 (1) - remove NC
00:49:624 (2) - add NC

Normal

SPOILER

General: -

00:06:478 (3,5) - unnecessary overlap
00:36:478 (3,4,5,1,2) - maybe do something to decrease the difficulty here? maybe replacing this 00:36:983 (4) - with a note @ 00:37:152 -
01:04:118 (5,1) - not appealing.
01:14:230 (3) - angle the slider so its head faces 01:14:736 (4)
01:22:152 (4,6) - not appealing.

No Dap's Hard

SPOILER

General:

00:32:433 (1) - remove NC 00:32:096 (5,1) - they are follow up beats
00:32:601 (2) - add NC . here start the vocal with new rhythm
00:45:579 (4,1) - Not appealing
00:47:096 (4,1,1,1,1,1,1) - O.O what's wit the color combo spam here? needs fix.
00:56:028 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:028 (1,1) - it would be much better if 00:56:534 (1) - would only overlap with the parallel part of 00:56:028 (1) - like this:

01:12:545 (3,1) - unnecessary overlap
01:24:848 (1,2) - Make (2) to be 100% aligned with 01:25:523 (1) - head. Don't know if you tried to already but its not

and also make em perfectly parallel.
01:25:523 (1) - no need new combo here, its a follow up beat ,remove it

Insane

SPOILER

General: Check your single notes jumps overlaps. there are a lot and i cant really say which are intentional or not.

00:02:264 (1,2,1,2) - hardcore overlapping. 00:02:264 (1,2) - move these sliders, there is so much space

00:05:804 (1) - remove NC . the beat here is follow up. it feels that 00:05:298 (1,2,1) - must stay together !

00:06:141 (2) - add NC
00:10:860 (1,3) - not appealing
00:32:096 (6,1,2) - bad flow imo.
00:40:523 (1,3) - make them overlap better . Like this maybe :

00:47:938 (1) - is this 1/16 tail snap legit ? you probably wanted it to end @ 00:48:107 -

00:49:455 (5) - add NC
00:49:961 (1) - remove NC
01:08:500 (6,1) - not so appealing
01:10:186 (1,2) - ^ ( even less appealing this . sr)

Good luck with your map. Hope it get's ranked asap

P.S.I liked the Song and Maps very much so i shot 2 stars ^^

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-13T12:50:22+00:00

kiai

no need to be consistent with guest mapper's diff. I think mine makes sense, so I will use mine

fixed 1 thing

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Kibbleru

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Topic Starter

Kibbleru 2014-07-13T18:33:29+00:00

[ Joey ] wrote:
Hello Kibbleru! ~M4M~
Insane

Test Play: http://puu.sh/a907m/c2adc6e88f.osr
00:01:084 - Sounds like a spinner could start here maybe but i don't really like adding spinners for just random stuff :/
00:03:781 - Remove the NC here its for readability
00:18:276 (1,2) - I think this part should be hitcircles, because you used hitcircles here 00:02:938 - and it sounds the same. Maybe make some anti-jumps? uhh yeah but sliders work too owo
00:22:320 - 1/1 slider here to match 00:19:624 (4) - ? i want some jumps
00:34:371 - Should add a note here so it goes with the trumpets (I don't actually know what instrument that is but it sounds like trumpets xD) that would be overmapping?
00:54:848 (2,1) - Feels good if you stack these maybe. but i already have an antijump anyway so i don't think it makes that big of a difference
01:06:815 - You should add a stream of drums here http://puu.sh/a8ZEE/1f4eca366b.jpg yeah but i dun wana ;w;
00:37:995 (2,3) - I think you should spread these out more people don't read it as a 1/2 note spacing (That's what I did. ;_;) added some NC for readability instead

AI Mod says you have some distance snap errors. You might want to double check them. ah they were just stacks that got fked up by an editor glitch
00:02:601 (2) - I think this might be better as a hitcircle....idk though i made this as a slider because i didn't want a 3/2 gap between objects which is awkward to play
00:04:624 - A note should be here. You miss a really big drum hit true o-o fixed
Not much else I could find in this diff[/notice]
Easy

Idk if it's because I'm bad at modding easy's. or if its just that perfect, but I couldn't find anything lol. I went over it multiple times. Very well done!

Really fun mapset! (I had trouble finding things to mod xD)
Shot ya a star
Message me in game if you have any questions about my mod
Good luck!!

ty4mod and star

Ntasuto wrote:
Hiiiiiii o/

Mod for your M4M Q

General:
Inconsistent Kiai time: - No Dap's Hard : 1st Kiai 00:56:534 to 01:20:972

Easy:
SPOILER
General: -

00:31:084 (3,1) - make blanket a bit better better. Adjust slider(1)'s tail . fix
00:48:613 (1) - remove NC no for these, it follows my pattern
00:49:624 (2) - add NC

Normal
SPOILER
General: -

00:06:478 (3,5) - unnecessary overlap well, im not sure what "unappealing" means for u but i like like these overlaps
00:36:478 (3,4,5,1,2) - maybe do something to decrease the difficulty here? maybe replacing this 00:36:983 (4) - with a note @ 00:37:152 - i don't think its too hard Oo
01:04:118 (5,1) - not appealing.
01:14:230 (3) - angle the slider so its head faces 01:14:736 (4) bleh its fine atm
01:22:152 (4,6) - not appealing.

Insane

SPOILER
General: Check your single notes jumps overlaps. there are a lot and i cant really say which are intentional or not.

00:02:264 (1,2,1,2) - hardcore overlapping. 00:02:264 (1,2) - move these sliders, there is so much space i like this
00:05:804 (1) - remove NC . the beat here is follow up. it feels that 00:05:298 (1,2,1) - must stay together ! oh ur right
00:06:141 (2) - add NC nah
00:10:860 (1,3) - not appealing Oo i like it
00:32:096 (6,1,2) - bad flow imo. meh true but its fun to play
00:40:523 (1,3) - make them overlap better . Like this maybe : i like it how it is

00:47:938 (1) - is this 1/16 tail snap legit ? you probably wanted it to end @ 00:48:107 - LOL whoops
00:49:455 (5) - add NC nah
00:49:961 (1) - remove NC ^
01:08:500 (6,1) - not so appealing i like
01:10:186 (1,2) - ^ ( even less appealing this . sr) ^

Good luck with your map. Hope it get's ranked asap

P.S.I liked the Song and Maps very much so i shot 2 stars ^^

ty 4 mod and 2 stars!

Tari

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Tari 2014-07-14T19:47:05+00:00

cool.

[Easy]

00:10:860 (1) - I would make the start curve a little bit more, I understand what effect your trying to get with the slider, and thats to emphasize the trumpets, but as you can see the squiggly movement in the slider should last until the trumpet ends , which is not until 00:11:534 -
00:02:938 (2,3,) - For some strange reason I think 00:02:938 (2,3,) - is overmapped, there not really prominent sound to put notes on , there definitely a sound, but not enough to put notes on and considering this is an easy.
00:17:096 (2,3,4) - I would do the same slider shapes you did at 00:06:141 (2,3,4) - for some more structured designing, but since a break of consistent design is here to show transition, it might be good, your choice~
00:28:388 (1) - Add new combo here? and also the triangle in 00:28:388 (1,2,3) - , I always wondered why the triangle shape with the 3 notes formed doesn't match up with 00:27:039 (1,2,3) - , you could of improved triangle shape at 00:28:388 (1,2,3) - or you could make 00:27:039 (1,2,3) - just 1 slider and not need to add a combo at all.
00:39:174 (3) - Same as first suggestion, make it squiggle more? the trumpet still goes on.
00:50:635 (4) - Parts like these, make me curious why you don't do more red part sliders. but here http://puu.sh/abdMd.jpg
00:56:028 (3) - This slider touches 00:54:006 (1) - , which doesn't seem intentional.
01:14:230 (2) - Finish sounds better at the start than whistle.
01:20:972 - Kiai should end here.
01:23:669 (1) - I don't understand the point of making this slider such a weird shape? doesn't really show anything to be honest, but that seems fine I guess

[Normal]

00:07:489 (5) - You must like blankets alot if your going prioritize them over overlaps.
00:16:590 (2) - I would place them like : http://puu.sh/abeyv.jpg definitely flows better in my eyes.
00:28:388 (3) - Some of these blankets feel really "forced" they don't seem like something you did not intentionally.
00:42:292 - I would tone down on all the usage of red tick rhythms here, this part was suppose to calm and easy!
00:57:377 (2,3) - Why can't you just remove 3 and reverse 2? It's a simplified version, but it seems to do well here.
00:59:399 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could make these two sliders symmetrical, they both have "pon" sound in vocals
01:08:163 (2,3) - Same as 00:57:377 (2,3) -

[Hard]

This diff is fine, just some little things.
00:32:938 (3) - Well, considering how you like to put jumps on this part of the music, I would place this above the previous slider rather than below.
01:01:421 (3,4,5) - It would be better to remove 4 and reverse 3 orz ><
01:27:882 (1,2) - Little confusing to play >< maybe place them somewhere else so people don't think its 1/2 apart when its 1/4 apart.
Cool~

[Insane]

00:14:399 (5) - I would overlap this just slightly to make it more readable~
00:57:882 (5) - ^
00:57:545 (4) - The flow would be better if you placed the slider like this : http://puu.sh/abhOK.jpg
01:01:422 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here doesn't work as well as you thought, personally there should be a jump to 3. try something like this: ? http://puu.sh/abi7V.jpg
01:08:332 (5,6) - A slider would really fit the rhythm better in this part, try to place them like this : http://puu.sh/abigV.jpg that flows much better to me.
00:07:489 (1) - It would be better if you curved this down to connect it better with the next note.

star~

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-07-14T20:23:31+00:00

Tari wrote:
cool.

[Easy]

00:10:860 (1) - I would make the start curve a little bit more, I understand what effect your trying to get with the slider, and thats to emphasize the trumpets, but as you can see the squiggly movement in the slider should last until the trumpet ends , which is not until 00:11:534 - yeah but i don't have any ideas ;w; and for the slider shape stuff idk haha, i don't really try to shape the slider to match the music :/ i juts put whatever looks nice lol
00:02:938 (2,3,) - For some strange reason I think 00:02:938 (2,3,) - is overmapped, there not really prominent sound to put notes on , there definitely a sound, but not enough to put notes on and considering this is an easy. good point, i just removed this part
00:17:096 (2,3,4) - I would do the same slider shapes you did at 00:06:141 (2,3,4) - for some more structured designing, but since a break of consistent design is here to show transition, it might be good, your choice~ nah
00:28:388 (1) - Add new combo here? and also the triangle in 00:28:388 (1,2,3) - , I always wondered why the triangle shape with the 3 notes formed doesn't match up with 00:27:039 (1,2,3) - , you could of improved triangle shape at 00:28:388 (1,2,3) - or you could make 00:27:039 (1,2,3) - just 1 slider and not need to add a combo at all. im confused ;w; but i didn't want to nc to keep the consistency
00:39:174 (3) - Same as first suggestion, make it squiggle more? the trumpet still goes on. yeahh ^ no creativity lol
00:50:635 (4) - Parts like these, make me curious why you don't do more red part sliders. but here http://puu.sh/abdMd.jpg yeah again, i don't really think when i make my sliders lol fixed tho
00:56:028 (3) - This slider touches 00:54:006 (1) - , which doesn't seem intentional. whoops
01:14:230 (2) - Finish sounds better at the start than whistle. true!
01:20:972 - Kiai should end here. hm ur right ill fix other diffs too
01:23:669 (1) - I don't understand the point of making this slider such a weird shape? doesn't really show anything to be honest, but that seems fine I guess it looks cool tho ;w;
[Normal]

00:07:489 (5) - You must like blankets alot if your going prioritize them over overlaps. actually i kinda like this overlap idk why o_O but it doesn't interfere with readability so i don't see why not ;w;
00:16:590 (2) - I would place them like : http://puu.sh/abeyv.jpg definitely flows better in my eyes. mm i don't really like how that looks
00:28:388 (3) - Some of these blankets feel really "forced" they don't seem like something you did not intentionally. forced owo? im confused a bit lol
00:42:292 - I would tone down on all the usage of red tick rhythms here, this part was suppose to calm and easy! true ok
00:57:377 (2,3) - Why can't you just remove 3 and reverse 2? It's a simplified version, but it seems to do well here. hm i wanted to give some difficulty to this since my easy is a bit harder too
00:59:399 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could make these two sliders symmetrical, they both have "pon" sound in vocals ahh i don't like how that looks ;w; /me runs i'm not a big fan of symmetry /me runs
01:08:163 (2,3) - Same as 00:57:377 (2,3) -

[Insane]

00:14:399 (5) - I would overlap this just slightly to make it more readable~ stack leniency and the ar should make it plenty readable enough
00:57:882 (5) - ^
00:57:545 (4) - The flow would be better if you placed the slider like this : http://puu.sh/abhOK.jpg ehh not rly imo
01:01:422 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here doesn't work as well as you thought, personally there should be a jump to 3. try something like this: ? fixed it my own wayhttp://puu.sh/abi7V.jpg
01:08:332 (5,6) - A slider would really fit the rhythm better in this part, try to place them like this : http://puu.sh/abigV.jpg that flows much better to me. jumps <3
00:07:489 (1) - It would be better if you curved this down to connect it better with the next note. nah this is fine, i want it to be the same as 00:06:815 (1) - for a particular pattern

star~

ty for mod and star!

mod was very good im just a stubborn motherfawk

Ozato Fumika

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Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-14T21:39:03+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Hard]

This diff is fine, just some little things.
00:32:938 (3) - Well, considering how you like to put jumps on this part of the music, I would place this above the previous slider rather than below. I like the current flow :3
01:01:421 (3,4,5) - It would be better to remove 4 and reverse 3 orz >< nice ><
01:27:882 (1,2) - Little confusing to play >< maybe place them somewhere else so people don't think its 1/2 apart when its 1/4 apart. I might fix this later. too demotivated to think of any other pattern right now..
Cool~

Thanks for mod baka

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Prayer_old_1

Prayer_old_1 2014-07-15T05:32:33+00:00

Hi

Easy

clear

Norma

00:30:410 (3), 00:33:781 (4), 01:14:736 (4) - these sliders cover HP bar ;w;
00:41:871 (3) - try this or add note at 00:42:545

01:28:556 (1,2) - quite hard to know the timing for newbie players because of low AR. put a slider instead of circles

Hard

00:18:950 (1,2) - stack
00:20:129 (5,1) - ^
00:22:152 (3,4) -^
00:47:096 (4,1) - ^
01:22:826 (3) - better flow

01:24:848 (3) - remove NC

Insane

00:04:118 (1,2,3) - make distance between 2 and 3 larger. It can be confused as 1/4 beat. change like this?

00:10:691 - i think there should be a triplet. How about this pattern

00:19:624 (4) - beacause of 00:20:467 (2), up-moving seems better for flow

00:39:427 - add note
01:00:073 (1,3) - stack
01:15:242 (5) - make the end of slider and 01:15:579 (1) smoothier.

01:19:961 (1) - NC here instead of 01:20:298 (3)
01:24:174 (1,2) - pattern suggestion + 01:24:511 - NC here not to confuse 1/1 beat.

01:28:556 (1,2) - make distance larger please~

I hope these would be helpful Good luck!

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-15T12:29:15+00:00

Fixed stack error only

SPOILER

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