Ms Yuyuko wrote:

Hey there, nice map you have here.

Overall: 8.

I'd change the tick rate to 2.

00:05:245 (1) - Shorten this slider to the other white tick, and add hitcircles 00:05:774 (2) - and 00:05:951 (3) -

00:07:363 (7) - Make this slider shorter, to the other white tick, and add a repeat.
00:08:245 (8) - And then, add a hitcircle in this location.

00:12:304 (1) - Remove this slider.
Add a hitcircle in the start of it, and a spinner from 00:12:480 (1) - to 00:13:363 (1) -

00:23:069 (9) - 00:23:421 (11) - 00:23:774 (13) - Try out placing hitcircles there.

01:18:833 (10) - Again, try adding a hitcircle here.

02:26:951 (6) - Place a hitcircle here, and start a spinner from 02:27:127 (1) - to 02:29:425 (1) -

To 03:22:892 (10) - , I must say, I love it.

03:27:303 (4) - This hitcircle is not in line, the others are X-447 and this is X-448. Place it in line.

03:54:127 (1) - Move this spinner here, and add a hitcircle here 03:53:951 (9) -

03:59:598 (1) - End this slider in 04:00:480

04:05:245 (10) - Hitcircle here, and start the spinner here 04:05:421 (1) -

And, I'll end the map with a circle 05:21:127 (13) - , sounds more fitting to the way it ends.

That's all, nice map so far!, getting hopes in it.

Seikatu wrote:

Привет, с #modreqs.

Генерал:
Убери "BABYMETAL" из тэгов и добавь megitsune, т.к. это альбом откуда собсна песенка.
В графе Title оставь только иероглифы.
Letterbox during breaks я думаю лучше отключить, но в общем хз.

Маратхон:
00:02:422 (1) - тут посередине на белом тике есть звук, можно разбить на 2 слайдера, примерно вот:

00:22:186 (1) - тут тоже примерно похожая ситуация.
00:32:069 (1) - тут можно просто поставить кружок и сделать слайдер с 00:32:421 - до 00:32:774 -
01:01:716 (1,2,3,4) - вот эти эелементы можно расположить подальше друг от друга. (там дальше есть еще несколько похожих моментов)
01:21:127 (4) - сделай что-бы стакалось с 01:20:069 (4)
02:44:597 (5,1) - вот эти два выглядят так как будто они должны были быть бланкнуты, но они нет.
03:17:245 (1,2,3,4) - тоже можно спейсинг побольше
03:18:657 (1,2,3,4) - и тут
03:23:951 (5,6,7,8) - тут 5 и 6 заспейсены, а остальные нет. выглядит странно
03:32:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - убери подальше от предыдущего, я подумал что это один стрим
03:33:127 (1,2,3,4) - и тут еще тоже заспейсить можно
04:10:892 (8,9,10,11) - ^
И ваще попбробуй увеличить спейсинг везде где он меньше единицы.
Вроде все. Удачи!

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi mod from queue
Well, I'm not so good in modding Marathon + Extra diffs so I am really sorry if my mod is really bad TT
Anyway, ignore my poor English and the mods below are mostly suggestions <=These words are important lol
Feel free to PM me if you can't understand my mod

[General]
The settings of NC (New Combo) in notes is confusing and not in a systematic pattern so it should be fixed

[Marathon]
00:02:422 (1) - The slider should end at 00:02:951, following the background music
00:03:657 (3) - Suggest that the slider is placed vertically upwards, just like Ctrl+G of 00:03:304 (2)
00:12:304 (5) - Suggest placing the note at x:256 y:64
00:14:245 (3,4) - This slider connection is not so suitable here, try fix this
00:15:304 (4) - If you want to follow the vocal, this should be started at 00:15:480
00:16:539 (8,9) - Remove 00:17:421 (9), extend 00:16:539 (8) until 00:17:421
00:19:186 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe place them into something like this?
00:21:304 (9,10,11) - Placement can be more beautiful
00:23:245 (2) - Move to 00:23:069 to follow piano
00:31:186 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Try another placement that is more beautiful, maybe a regular-hexagon pattern?
00:36:833 (13) - Place at centre
01:01:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggest sliders parallel to each other like this
01:07:274 (12,13) - Move 01:07:274 (12) to x:200 y:44, together with 01:07:363 (13) to x:208 y:84
01:08:951 (3,4,5) - The placement is not so nice, in my opinion
01:08:774 - Add circle here with 'Finish' hitsound
01:34:186 (7,8,9) - Not nice for me
01:57:480 (1,2,3) - ^ Same
02:15:657 (3) - Move point x:29 y:65 to x:44 y:64
02:25:010 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrangements is not so nice here
02:26:951 (1) - Change to a spinner that ends at 02:29:245 or extend the slider until 02:29:245, following the vocal
03:21:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make the curve smoother

You can try move them together to...

03:22:274 (3) - x:368 y:244
03:22:362 (4) - x:336 y:292
03:22:450 (5) - x:288 y:320
03:22:538 (6) - x:236 y:340
03:22:627 (7) - x:180 y:336
03:22:715 (8) - x:128 y:316
03:22:804 (9) - x:88 y:276
03:22:892 (10) - x:72 y:224

03:52:539 (4,5) - Separate them
03:53:245 (6,7,8,9) - The flow is not so nice

Anyway, the song is so good OMG
And the beatmap is awesome too
Hope your mapset gets ranked and good luck
Oh, I gave you a kudos too~

musoraninn wrote:

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi mod from queue
Well, I'm not so good in modding Marathon + Extra diffs so I am really sorry if my mod is really bad TT
Anyway, ignore my poor English and the mods below are mostly suggestions <=These words are important lol
Feel free to PM me if you can't understand my mod

[General]
The settings of NC (New Combo) in notes is confusing and not in a systematic pattern so it should be fixed

[Marathon]
00:02:422 (1) - The slider should end at 00:02:951, following the background music
00:03:657 (3) - Suggest that the slider is placed vertically upwards, just like Ctrl+G of 00:03:304 (2)
00:12:304 (5) - Suggest placing the note at x:256 y:64
00:14:245 (3,4) - This slider connection is not so suitable here, try fix this
00:15:304 (4) - If you want to follow the vocal, this should be started at 00:15:480
00:16:539 (8,9) - Remove 00:17:421 (9), extend 00:16:539 (8) until 00:17:421
00:19:186 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe place them into something like this?
00:21:304 (9,10,11) - Placement can be more beautiful
00:23:245 (2) - Move to 00:23:069 to follow piano
00:31:186 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Try another placement that is more beautiful, maybe a regular-hexagon pattern?
00:36:833 (13) - Place at centre
01:01:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggest sliders parallel to each other like this
01:07:274 (12,13) - Move 01:07:274 (12) to x:200 y:44, together with 01:07:363 (13) to x:208 y:84
01:08:951 (3,4,5) - The placement is not so nice, in my opinion
01:08:774 - Add circle here with 'Finish' hitsound
01:34:186 (7,8,9) - Not nice for me
01:57:480 (1,2,3) - ^ Same
02:15:657 (3) - Move point x:29 y:65 to x:44 y:64
02:25:010 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrangements is not so nice here
02:26:951 (1) - Change to a spinner that ends at 02:29:245 or extend the slider until 02:29:245, following the vocal
03:21:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make the curve smoother

You can try move them together to...

03:22:274 (3) - x:368 y:244
03:22:362 (4) - x:336 y:292
03:22:450 (5) - x:288 y:320
03:22:538 (6) - x:236 y:340
03:22:627 (7) - x:180 y:336
03:22:715 (8) - x:128 y:316
03:22:804 (9) - x:88 y:276
03:22:892 (10) - x:72 y:224

03:52:539 (4,5) - Separate them
03:53:245 (6,7,8,9) - The flow is not so nice

Anyway, the song is so good OMG
And the beatmap is awesome too
Hope your mapset gets ranked and good luck
Oh, I gave you a kudos too~

Thanks ! good mod !
i just dont get "[General]
The settings of NC (New Combo) in notes is confusing and not in a systematic pattern so it should be fixed" ^_^

[sekai] wrote:

mods and more mods

[sekai] wrote:

mod

02:26:951 (1) - Change to a spinner that ends at 02:27:245
02:55:892 fix
02:56:069 Move ( x:230 y:150 )
02:56:245 Move ( x:356 y:152 )
02:56:421 Move ( x:296 y:40 )
02:56:598 Move ( x:408 y:40 )
03:55:186 Add a note here~
03:55:274 ok
04:07:363 Fix
03:21:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make the curve

musoraninn wrote:

[sekai] wrote:

mod

02:26:951 (1) - Change to a spinner that ends at 02:27:245
02:55:892 fix
02:56:069 Move ( x:230 y:150 )
02:56:245 Move ( x:356 y:152 )
02:56:421 Move ( x:296 y:40 )
02:56:598 Move ( x:408 y:40 )
03:55:186 Add a note here~
03:55:274 ok
04:07:363 Fix
03:21:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make the curve

THANKS