Disasterpeace - Jolly Frolic [Osu|Taiko]

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-Visceral-
Saw this in #modreqs :D

Insane
00:01:462 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Spacing here feels awkward. Maybe move 00:01:649 (4,5,6) down a little bit and maybe space them apart just a LITTLE bit?


Hard
00:17:212 (1,2,3,4) - Flip all of those sliders around. I fee like it would flow a lot nicer that way.


Normal
00:06:149 (5,6) - It would look better if the end of the slider was aligned horizontally with 00:06:337 (6) in my opinion.

Easy
All good!

Really sweet map :)
Topic Starter
LeaK
Applied the things on Hard and Normal but not the suggestion in Insane since 00:01:649 (4,5,6) - is a triangle, 00:01:649 (4) - a blanket of 1, 00:02:024 (6) - the sliderend of 1, and 00:01:649 (4,5,6,1) - is a diamond and that'd kinda screw with the structure :|
Silverboxer
Easy
00:02:587 (4) - move this one square down and one square to the right for a perfect blanket
00:04:837 (3) - also move this one down and one right to match the previous blanket
00:28:837 (1,2) - maybe make the gap between these a little bigger? http://puu.sh/9Y3Lq/18d4584b18.jpg
00:30:899 (1) - start on blue tick to be consistent

Normal
00:05:587 (4,5,6) - this overlap doesn't look good, even if it's the right spacing. maybe change it to .8x
00:12:337 (4,1,2) - ^
00:13:837 (3) - make this a curved slider instead, I think it makes the triangle pattern look nicer
00:30:899 (1) - start on blue tick to be consistent

Hard
00:03:899 (2,3) - move these over so circle 2 is on x:68, y:196 if you want it to be a square
00:05:962 (3) - slider is too close to the previous circle. Either move it, or change it to a bent/curve slider
00:23:212 (1) - not lined up properly with 00:22:462 (3,4)
00:23:212 (1,2,3) - I think you need to rotate each slider a bit more for the blankets to work nicely

Insane
00:23:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap is so small here, it doesn't look good to me. Space it out a bit more
00:29:962 (1) - new combo to show different distance snap

Also AR8.5 doesn't look too slow, if you want to see more DT attempts and piss off more non-HR players :P

There wasn't much to fix here, nice map.
Topic Starter
LeaK

Silverboxer wrote:

Easy
00:02:587 (4) - move this one square down and one square to the right for a perfect blanket
00:04:837 (3) - also move this one down and one right to match the previous blanket
00:28:837 (1,2) - maybe make the gap between these a little bigger? http://puu.sh/9Y3Lq/18d4584b18.jpg The movement is supposed to be horizontal
00:30:899 (1) - start on blue tick to be consistent #modhelp yea

Normal
00:05:587 (4,5,6) - this overlap doesn't look good, even if it's the right spacing. maybe change it to .8x Doesn't look bad to me tbh o-o I'll ask someone else tho ok
00:12:337 (4,1,2) - ^ Same ye
00:13:837 (3) - make this a curved slider instead, I think it makes the triangle pattern look nicer
00:30:899 (1) - start on blue tick to be consistent Same as Easy

Hard
00:03:899 (2,3) - move these over so circle 2 is on x:68, y:196 if you want it to be a square A square was my initial goal at first but I was really pissed by 3 not matching 5s end lol
00:05:962 (3) - slider is too close to the previous circle. Either move it, or change it to a bent/curve slider I kinda agree but the straight-ish downwards motion is there to support the change in tone, I'll think of something hopefully
00:23:212 (1) - not lined up properly with 00:22:462 (3,4) Can't line up a curved slider with straight points :P
00:23:212 (1,2,3) - I think you need to rotate each slider a bit more for the blankets to work nicely These are A+ blankets what are you talking about http://puu.sh/9Y6do/eeb0987b2d.jpg

Insane
00:23:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap is so small here, it doesn't look good to me. Space it out a bit more That's because 00:23:587 (3,4) - are blanketed by 00:22:462 (3,4) - and additionally 00:23:774 (4) - is an overlay of 00:22:087 (2) -. The small overlaps are to keep the consistent spacing of 00:23:212 (1,3) - and 00:23:399 (2,4) -. Also 00:23:212 (1,2) - are placed the way they are because they make a neat-o diamond with the ends of 00:22:462 (3,4) -
00:29:962 (1) - new combo to show different distance snap

Also AR8.5 doesn't look too slow, if you want to see more DT attempts and piss off more non-HR players :P

There wasn't much to fix here, nice map. Thanks :3
No comment=fixed :3
Overwrite
I was wondering, do you accept GDs? Because I mapped half of the song alerady in an attempt to make an Extra but I don't want this to be complete wasted effort so I wanna know this beforehand.
Topic Starter
LeaK
4 people want to GD this what the firetruck ; ~;

Idk I wouldn't really accept any upfront except for Irre's shitmapping <3
Overwrite
Whatever, catch my diff anyways. Rushmapping yea
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Ringating
bg mod from modreqs sort of

you bg is off-center, which wouldn't be a problem if you didn't do symmetrical patterns in your maps. But you do, so here is a slightly altered version of your image that has the triangle horizontally centered:
no kudosu
Topic Starter
LeaK

Overwrite wrote:

Whatever, catch my diff anyways. Rushmapping yea
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118,170,11399,6,0,L|140:192,1,30,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,148,11587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,172,11774,2,0,L|294:193,1,30,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,11962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,256,12149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
118,170,12337,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,240,12524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,328,12712,6,0,L|288:240,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,172,13274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,172,13462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,120,13649,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,100,13712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,96,13774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,112,13837,2,0,L|452:196,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,248,14212,6,0,P|156:264|128:128,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,14774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,248,14962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,236,15149,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,300,15337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,248,15524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,188,15712,2,0,L|228:68,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,16087,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,16274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,136,16462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,16649,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,236,16837,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,264,17024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,136,17212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,17399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,74,17587,2,0,L|304:152,2,120,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,172,18149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,288,18337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,264,18524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,264,18618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,264,18712,6,0,L|256:248,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,18899,2,0,L|222:195,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,19087,2,0,L|193:248,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,256,19274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,244,19368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,232,19461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,72,19649,6,0,L|200:36,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,19837,2,0,L|393:62,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,20024,2,0,L|274:221,2,60,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,20305,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,144,20399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,140,20493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,20587,2,0,L|164:140,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,227,20774,2,0,L|184:212,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,292,20962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,21149,6,0,L|348:200,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,21337,2,0,L|403:136,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,252,21524,2,0,L|440:219,2,60,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,300,21899,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,49,22087,2,0,L|344:156,2,120,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,22649,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,152,22743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,22837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,324,23024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,324,23118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,324,23212,6,0,L|256:208,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,23587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,328,23774,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,152,23962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,324,24149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,324,24243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,324,24337,2,0,L|512:304,2,120,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,212,24899,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,92,25087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,164,25274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,164,25368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,164,25462,2,0,L|64:288,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,284,25743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,300,25837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,25930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,324,26024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,336,26118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,348,26212,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,26399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,224,26493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,26587,2,0,P|420:184|412:96,2,120,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,27149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,224,27337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,132,27524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,220,27712,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,12,27899,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,136,28087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,40,28274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,116,28462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,28649,2,0,L|184:60,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,29212,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,29399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,140,29587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,292,29774,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,152,29962,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,76,30337,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,192,30712,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30805,12,8,32024,0:0:0:0:
I am barely impressed ; ~;

Ringating wrote:

bg mod from modreqs sort of

you bg is off-center, which wouldn't be a problem if you didn't do symmetrical patterns in your maps. But you do, so here is a slightly altered version of your image that has the triangle horizontally centered:
no kudosu
Cool thanks <3
Overwrite
lol
BlueStarYoshi
hello here responding to your modding request! Blue & Alepat Modding Team
i just found a few details about your map

Normal
00:06:337 (6) - move this note from X346 Y109 to x349 y155
00:25:462 (3) -same here! x432 y128 to X426 y100

Hard
if you open this diff for editing from the song selecting menu it shows you are using a 1/16 in the snap divisor please change it to 1/4
00:08:305 (1) - move the sppiner a little (just a suggestion)
from here
to here
00:30:899 (1) -same here
00:17:024 (6) - move this note from Y 252 to Y248

Nwolf's Muzukashii
00:30:712 (132,133,134) just a suggestion, the 2 final notes doesn't sound fine ,maybe consider to remove or replace with a larger slider

Nwolf's Oni
00:20:212 (98,99) - change note don to kat
00:20:399 (100,101) - change note kat to don

i hope this helps .-.
good luck :)
[I]MMoRTal[S]
o.O !? 30 sec

From my queue

[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
Fine ~

[Nwolf's Oni]
00:07:087 (29) - d
00:10:087 (44) - d

Good Luck ~ :)
Topic Starter
LeaK
Applied everything from the suggestions in Hard and the second suggestion from Normal @BlueStarYoshi
Nwolf

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

o.O !? 30 sec

From my queue

[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
Fine ~

[Nwolf's Oni]
00:07:087 (29) - d changed to how it was previously mapped, the suggestion was quite... wrong
00:10:087 (44) - d ^

Good Luck ~ :)
cheesiest
!?? letterbox in breaks conflict w/ tiakos
Topic Starter
LeaK
whoops fixed thanks
Ciyus Miapah
quickmod™ fort quick song :D

[Insane]
First try

maybe use CS5 or CS 4.5 is good

00:19:462 (7) - maybe NC this

your map so good, i cant find anything wrong but this http://puu.sh/a4AHh/dcba5dc03a.png (AIbot you're genius! :idea: )
Topic Starter
LeaK
00:19:462 (7,6) - NC'd and CS 4.5
Kritikally
[Easy]
00:27:985 (1)- Slider's approach event stacks for too long with previous slider event at 00:26:587 (3)-. Potential difficulty issue.

[Normal]
No issues detected.

[Hard]
No beatmap-related issues detected.

[Insane]
No beatmap-related issues detected.

[Note]
I don't feel confident in my Taiko experience to mod the two Taiko maps, so will omit them.

[Summary]
The beatmaps and hitsounds in this mapset are really well done. In my opinion regarding difficulty names, it feels like the Hard should be labelled Insane and the Insane difficulty should be labelled something even more intense. Other than that, I really saw nothing significant to note besides the one issue in Easy.

Absolutely love the song choice! Good luck getting approved!
Topic Starter
LeaK
Fixed woop woop
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