Hi' mod req via pm
late as usuall ,_, sorry
i hope it'll be usefull
[Nardo's Oni]
mm some lack of consistency in specific parts in you kiais. See at - 00:13:576 -, you miss a vocal beat at - 00:13:988 - to follow the high thing at - 00:13:782 -. But then at - 00:20:172 - you don't miss the vocal beat at - 00:20:584 - but this time you miss the thing at - 00:20:378 -. Same problem in the others kiai, i guess/maybe that was intended but that is still a bit weird when you look closely at the map. If it is not intended then try to chose one thing that you'll repeat (follow the vocal beat or the thing before).
- 01:01:710 - maybe add d ? kd dk are sometimes cooler to play imo.
- 01:20:778 - add something here (d), or do another 5notes pattern/3notes pattern+1note ? vocal beat missed, xx xy sounds a bit weird, and for more consistency with parts like - 01:13:975 -.
- 01:32:116 (378) - isn't it supposed to be a finish (and then del the next notes)? just like at - 01:18:923 (310) -.
- 01:37:270 (10) - maybe move this to - 01:37:373 - ? can't really explain why but it fits better the guitar melody sound imo.
- 01:39:743 (22) - move this to - 01:40:465 - ? i think so a 5notes pattern is deserved around there and to emphasize more - 01:39:537 (21) -.
- 01:42:114 (37) - maybe move this to - 01:42:217 - ? dk dk doesn't really follow the melody imo.
- 01:45:515 - I git and idea here, try something like this ? :
cursor is at - 01:46:752 -, I changed some color and added a lot of notes, to emphasize more the rise of ddk (and i don't think this part needs a break here).
- 01:56:853 (108) - maybe change this to k and then add d at - 01:57:059 - ? vocal/drum beat missed there.
cool diff tho, gj.
[Nardo's Muzukashii]
same comment about kiais i guess.
- 00:23:677 (36) - not sure that a finish is really needed here, sounds like - 00:24:501 - or - 00:25:120 -. Well i think that finiser are deserved around this part but only this one here is a bit weird. I can't really suggest anything else good tho x_x idk (same for the others kiai then).
- 01:36:651 (5,6,7) - k d instead of kdk ? that kdk doesn't really fit the song/melody imo.
- 02:16:643 (150,151,152,153) - maybe kkk d k instead of k dk d ? the xxx y x structure that you usually use at these part sounds better imo.
- 02:36:433 (228,229,230,231) - ^.
[Futsuu]
- 00:01:001 (2) - del ? better keep nothing after a finish in Futsuu imo (+ it emphasizes that finish).
- 00:07:597 (14) - ^.
- 00:24:295 (51) - del ? just to make it easier + not really needed
- 00:34:671 (17,18) - i'm not against 1/3 at all but why only here x_x ? there are a lot of 1/3 on this part, following the vocal. if you do it here then you should do it on the whole part, or not at all. it means remove these two notes and maybe add d at - 00:34:808 -.
Else if you chose to follow the vocal on the whole part (which is not a bad idea, even tho the difficulty might ups too much) but you are not sure about what to change, look at Nardo's Muzukashii on this part (or ask me ingame), it follows pretty well the vocal (well make it more airy ofc)
- 01:16:655 (20) - del ? more consistency with - 01:10:059 -.
- 01:20:984 - that break feels a bit weird, why not add something like at the other similar parts (ex: - 01:14:388 (15) -).
- 01:27:581 - ^.
- 01:52:730 (26) - del x_x this pattern is too long.
- 01:55:410 (34) - ^. not that long but the part is calm so better keep it simple.
- 02:06:542 - why nothing here ?
- 02:15:818 (81) - move this to - 02:16:024 - ? the vocal is more important here imo.
- 02:17:055 - refer to - 01:20:984 -.
- 02:45:205 (142) - del ? too much notes again, also you could change some d to k here.
- 02:47:358 (150) - del ?
[Kantan]
- 00:15:843 (25) - move this to - 00:16:255 - and then change - 00:17:080 (27) - to d ? more instinctiv to play.
- 00:23:264 (35) - move this to - 00:22:852 - ? more instinctiv again. + maybe change - 00:24:913 (39) - to d as i suggested before.
- 01:10:265 (5,6) - del these two ntoes and add k at - 01:10:677 - ? more instinctiv again, the purpose is not really to follow perfectly the vocal atc but to get something simple to play and use only odd patterns is the best way imo).
- 01:17:686 (18) - move this to - 01:17:274 - ? same reason again. Well now you should get it, please do the same changes on the rest of that kiai + the other kiai if you applied the 4 suggestions above. (call me ingame again if you think you can't find these part).
- 01:59:739 (30,31) - refer to - 01:10:265 (5,6) -.
Well i don't have anything else to say, only the changes about getting only odd patterns x_x (use only 1/3/5notes patterns) .The diff should then become much more instinctiv to play and then easier for beginners.
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Good luck'
