1. Hard (2,84 stars, 258 notes)
2. Normal (1,96 stars, 189 notes)

[-Sophie-] wrote:

[Normal]
Note : Is kiai time needed in the start of the map? [ Please some reply to this ]
00:02:083 - Add note here
00:09:234 - Remove this note
00:39:583 - ^
00:44:815 - 00:47:257 - Sounds off beat.
01:24:757 - Reverse slider not needed
01:26:850 - ^
02:01:385 - Add note here (?)
02:06:094 - Sliders seem off
02:41:327 (3) - Remove note
I really can't mod normals all that well, please excuse this mod if its bad.
I like this song, so chill, star given,

[ OxyDian ] wrote:

NORMAL

00:18:827 - these die off slider or the map will not be ranked
00:46:036 - ^
00:54:059 (5) - This slider is out of time you could do me up here 00:53:885 -
01:31:385 - these die off slider or the map will not be ranked
02:32:432 - ^

HARD
01:22:141 - kiai time during the break?

Ok is a good map ;D

DoYouPlay_Osu wrote:

[Hard]
00:14:990 (6) - NC
00:19:873 (5) - NC, note after no NC
00:22:664 (4) - ^
00:24:059 (2,3) - Give these some room
00:28:245 (5) - NC
01:03:827 (1) - NC, note after no NC
01:51:618 (4) - Move this closer to the previous slider, make the jump the beat after

[Normal]
00:03:478 (1,2,3) - These jumps might be too big for a Normal difficulty
00:59:641 (6) - NC
02:06:966 (2) - Bring this down

Suggestion for both, the sliders that are similar to 02:45:687 (2,3) that overlap, I would space apart more so it flows better. Beautiful song, map, and storyboard. Really hope this gets ranked <3

Shirayuki wrote:

Nice song, nice map, and specially beautiful Story Board ;w;

Here's my suggestions:

[Normal]
00:03:478 (1,2,3) - - Adjust 1 a bit so it lines up with 2 and 3
00:05:745 (2) - Consider removing this because this is for new players? ;w;
00:06:966 - Add a circle?
00:51:094 (7) - Consider removing this, or making 6 7 and 1 into a slider?
01:13:071 (2) - Same as above
01:14:815 (7) - Same as above
01:53:187 (1) - Same as above
02:22:838 (2) - Same as above
02:25:629 (3) - Same as above
02:38:362 (4,5,6,7) - They can line up a bit better xD

Angelin Dash wrote:

Notice: The hard diff is not done yet

I guess I should wait until you finish it ;w;

Overall I like it!

RenzMichael wrote:

bg should be kaku seiga and awa should be Awa

Angelin Dash wrote:

RenzMichael wrote:

bg should be kaku seiga and awa should be Awa

Thanks, i didn't notice that.
And i don't think i have to change bg, Remilia is fine.

Hathz wrote:

00:05:397 (3,4) - Select both and CTRL+G. I feel like it plays better if it's mirrored from the other side. Maybe even NC on the 00:05:222 (2).
00:08:187 (1) - RC
00:08:711 (3) - NC, because new measure starts
00:14:990 (4) - Make this another jump, move down to like 208,280
00:17:432 (8) - NC
00:17:780 (1) - RC
00:19:873 (6) - NC
00:20:920 (1) - RC
00:20:920 (2) - Move to 120,200
00:21:269 (3) - Move to 288,304
00:22:664 (5) - NC
00:23:711 (1) - RC
00:26:501 (4) - Move to 156,308, it forms a better "line" with 00:26:152 (3) circle and the end point of 00:26:850 (5) slider.
00:28:245 (6) - NC
00:39:408 (1) - I don't think the jump is necessary when just coming out from a break, so move to 256,200
00:41:501 (1) - Jump? (move to 324,312)
00:43:943 (3,4) - Select both and CTRL+G
00:45:338 (6) - NC
00:45:687 (1) - RC
00:47:780 (6) - NC
00:49:176 (1) - RC, especially because of the jump so the player gets the arrows
00:50:222 (5) - CTRL+G
00:50:920 (6) - NC
00:51:269 (1) - RC, move to 364,220 so it forms a "line" with 00:51:269 (2) that crosses over the 00:51:618 (3) slider
00:53:711 (7) - NC, move to 200,280 so it nicely flows with the preceeding slider
00:54:059 (1) - RC for jump arrow
00:56:501 (5) - Move to 428,132 for a better shape
00:57:199 (7) - NC
00:58:594 (1) - RC
01:00:687 (7) - NC, move to 148,32
01:01:036 (1) - RC
01:02:083 (3) - NC
01:03:827 (1) - RC
01:04:525 (6) - NC
01:06:618 (1) - RC
01:07:315 (7) - NC
01:11:501 (2) - NC
01:18:478 (4) - NC
01:20:571 (1) - RC
01:21:269 (6) - NC
01:22:664 (3) - CTRL+G
01:26:152 (3) - CTRL+G
01:28:245 (4,5) - A minor complaint here because the end of the 01:29:292 (5) slider ends up on a downbeat. What you could do is make 01:28:245 (4) slider without repeat and then something like this screenshot: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/O6DI9nq.jpg (note the #1 purple circle is at the end point of the first slider, a bit hard to see on the screenshot)
01:29:990 (1) - RC
01:30:687 (3) - NC so it's slightly easier to read IMO
01:35:222 (3) - NC
01:36:269 (1) - RC
01:38:013 (1) - NC
01:51:966 (5) - NC
01:53:013 (1) - RC
01:57:548 (4) - NC
02:00:338 (6) - I think this is waaaay too close to the slider, easily misread if you're not paying attention to approach circle. Either make it NC to fix it or move it further away. In case you do make it NC, then also RC from 02:00:687 (1)
02:04:176 (2) - NC
02:06:269 (5) - NC
02:07:664 (1) - RC
02:09:059 (5) - NC
02:09:059 (5) - RC
02:11:501 (6) - NC
02:17:083 (3) - NC
02:17:432 (2) - CTRL+G, maybe also make it's shape and rotation mirrored from 02:16:036 (2)
02:18:129 (1) - NC
02:19:873 (5) - NC
02:24:059 (3,4,5) - I feel like adding notes inbetween each of these, on the red ticks
02:25:455 (5) - NC
02:26:501 (2,3) - Swap these two
02:28:594 (7) - NC
02:29:292 (1) - RC
02:31:385 (5) - NC
02:32:432 (1) - RC
02:34:525 (6) - NC
02:35:571 (1) - RC
02:36:966 (6) - NC
02:38:711 (1) - RC
02:39:757 (5) - NC
02:43:943 (2) - CTRL+G
02:44:641 (3) - CTRL+G
02:45:338 (4) - NC
03:02:432 (1) - Maybe make this slider's hitsound really quiet by setting volume to like 10%

1. Nothing tag o:? add tag 'Ten Desires' and 'Shinreibyou' please! this is game name!
   

1. OD5→OD4 try? so, beginner player more easily get ACC! 5 is bit high normal diff ._.
2. try all Distance snap unity! so, biginner player confuse ;w; 00:01:036 (2,3) - symmetry is good, but, distance snap is very far.
3. 00:05:920 (6) - Add NC! because, change song part!
4. 00:28:245 (4) - add finish! so, this is symbal part! but, Additions is Soft!
5. 00:39:408 (1) - ^ add finish! and Additions is soft!
6. 00:49:176 (3,4,1) - i think close spacing these!
7. 00:49:873 (1) - add finish slider end! also, Additions is soft!
8. 01:13:071 (2) - 1/4 snap is hard for biginner player ;w;. i think remove better! if you want this sound, try reverse slider!
9. 01:14:641 (4,5,1) - again close spacing!
10. 01:37:315 (2) - add finish slider end! also, Additions is soft!
11. 01:49:176 (1) - add finish and Additions is soft!
12. 01:53:013 (4) - Spacing very far ;w;. so, you use x:2.05... try other placement!
13. 02:00:338 (4) - additions is soft!
14. 02:22:838 (2) - 1/4 snap again! try remove or reverse slider?
15. 02:32:083 (1) - spacing very far!
16. 02:39:408 (4) - add finish and Additions is soft!
17. 03:02:432 (1) - add whistle this spinner?

1. try add finish and additons is soft! (normal diff check against please :3)
2. 01:37:664 x) - try add note! fit song!
3. 03:02:432 (1) - add whistle!

Rush_FTK wrote:

From #modreqs channel~

Mod

Poor both modding and language skill,I hope it can help you.

My computer shut down when i'm modding so i lost a lot of mod text,sad
[General]
Warning(You must fix it):
- Check Ai Mod(Ctrl+Shift+A),fix the problem the Ranking Criteria mentioned.
Suggestion:
- 00:00:339~00:05:571 Set Hit Vol.=30%.I can hardly listening the songs,only listening hit sounds.
- 03:05:920 The last SB start at here.


[Normal]
Suggestion:
- 00:46:036 (6,7,1) Wrong timing it should like this:

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ambff/85ecd18e8a.jpg
- 00:51:269 (2) move to 00:51:182
- 00:53:711 (5) move to 00:53:885
- 00:54:059 (6) replace to a note in 00:54:408
- 00:55:455 (1,2) replace to a slider which can turn back at 00:55:804
- 01:12:897 (1) start at 01:12:809
- 01:14:990 (1) replace to a slider which can turn back at 01:15:338.becasue 01:15:338 have a drum sound.
- 01:20:222 add a note.
- 01:23:013 add a note.
- 01:36:966 add a note in center.
- 02:01:036 (5) move to 02:00:949.
- 02:01:734 (1) replace to a circle in 02:01:559,then add a note in 02:03:129..is the bpm right?seemed bpm has changed.
- 02:03:827 (2,3) like ^ former move 1/8 snap;latter move 1/4 snap.
- 02:14:990 (4) move to 02:14:902
- 02:39:059 (3,4) replace it to a slider which can turn back at 02:39:234.

My Opinion:
- 00:03:478 (1,2,3) You can change like this(a little harder but I think it's acceptable.)

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am8Kt/73ab2066d4.jpg
- 00:13:594 (4,1,2) Move a little.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am93t/b54b3eb4eb.jpg
- 00:20:571 (4,1,2,3,4,5) Rearrgenment..

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am9lv/e7677c739f.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am9mb/a5ca690b43.jpg
- 01:12:199 (3) move to (348,184)
- 01:13:943 (2) move to (52,168)
- 01:14:641 (4,5) too hard for normal diff?

[Hard]
Suggestion:
- SV+0.2 Since it's hard difficult,and it help you easy to shape the slider.
- Too much same arrangement,try to make the map variety.
- 00:43:245

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ameRF/7b5801be54.jpg
- 00:50:571

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amf5F/9abc522ae5.jpg
- 01:12:722 add a note.
- 01:23:711 (1,3) remove.

My Opinion:
- 00:03:129 ~ 00:05:571 a idea.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amduk/bdce791318.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amdyq/26798dab64.jpg
- 00:08:711 (1) replace to a note in 00:09:059 and 00:09:408.
- 00:11:501 ~ 00:14:990 re arrgenment then so that looks more comfortable.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ame0x/696d6b4859.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ame2p/74683d05c7.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amejm/02279ae6ce.jpg

- 01:49:176 ~ 01:55:455 an idea.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhd9/5962644753.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhdS/dd839a2fc2.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhhJ/81d836c49e.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhuZ/569ba43d04.jpg
- 01:55:804

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhEA/5499be2296.jpg

BG seemed beautiful ,Thanks for brings this beatmap for us

Angelin Dash wrote:

Rush_FTK wrote:

From #modreqs channel~

Mod

Poor both modding and language skill,I hope it can help you.

My computer shut down when i'm modding so i lost a lot of mod text,sad
[General]
Warning(You must fix it):
- Check Ai Mod(Ctrl+Shift+A),fix the problem the Ranking Criteria mentioned.
Suggestion:
- 00:00:339~00:05:571 Set Hit Vol.=30%.I can hardly listening the songs,only listening hit sounds.
- 03:05:920 The last SB start at here.


[Normal]
Suggestion:
- 00:46:036 (6,7,1) Wrong timing it should like this:

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ambff/85ecd18e8a.jpg
- 00:51:269 (2) move to 00:51:182
- 00:53:711 (5) move to 00:53:885
- 00:54:059 (6) replace to a note in 00:54:408
- 00:55:455 (1,2) replace to a slider which can turn back at 00:55:804
- 01:12:897 (1) start at 01:12:809
- 01:14:990 (1) replace to a slider which can turn back at 01:15:338.becasue 01:15:338 have a drum sound.
- 01:20:222 add a note.
- 01:23:013 add a note.
- 01:36:966 add a note in center.
- 02:01:036 (5) move to 02:00:949.
- 02:01:734 (1) replace to a circle in 02:01:559,then add a note in 02:03:129..is the bpm right?seemed bpm has changed.
- 02:03:827 (2,3) like ^ former move 1/8 snap;latter move 1/4 snap.
- 02:14:990 (4) move to 02:14:902
- 02:39:059 (3,4) replace it to a slider which can turn back at 02:39:234.

My Opinion:
- 00:03:478 (1,2,3) You can change like this(a little harder but I think it's acceptable.)

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am8Kt/73ab2066d4.jpg
- 00:13:594 (4,1,2) Move a little.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am93t/b54b3eb4eb.jpg
- 00:20:571 (4,1,2,3,4,5) Rearrgenment..

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am9lv/e7677c739f.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/am9mb/a5ca690b43.jpg
- 01:12:199 (3) move to (348,184)
- 01:13:943 (2) move to (52,168)
- 01:14:641 (4,5) too hard for normal diff?

[Hard]
Suggestion:
- SV+0.2 Since it's hard difficult,and it help you easy to shape the slider.
- Too much same arrangement,try to make the map variety.
- 00:43:245

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ameRF/7b5801be54.jpg
- 00:50:571

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amf5F/9abc522ae5.jpg
- 01:12:722 add a note.
- 01:23:711 (1,3) remove.

My Opinion:
- 00:03:129 ~ 00:05:571 a idea.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amduk/bdce791318.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amdyq/26798dab64.jpg
- 00:08:711 (1) replace to a note in 00:09:059 and 00:09:408.
- 00:11:501 ~ 00:14:990 re arrgenment then so that looks more comfortable.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ame0x/696d6b4859.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/ame2p/74683d05c7.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amejm/02279ae6ce.jpg

- 01:49:176 ~ 01:55:455 an idea.

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhd9/5962644753.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhdS/dd839a2fc2.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhhJ/81d836c49e.jpg

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhuZ/569ba43d04.jpg
- 01:55:804

img link(if you can't see this image)
http://puu.sh/amhEA/5499be2296.jpg

BG seemed beautiful ,Thanks for brings this beatmap for us

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Nothing of them was helpful. I'm sorry for that.. In fact,I want to make the beatmap's arrgenment more variety.or this map is too boring foe player.
And 1/8 makes everything worse, I am sorry. Your object is actually set in a wrong timing position,please use 25% playback to check it .No one want to use 1/8 snap if no necessary.Maybe because the songs changed bpm in somewhere cause that.
///I don't know how to fix the AI mod thingy. I will update the solution later. DONE

update

[About Ai Mod]
There are a lot of pictures so that it took times to download.

1.You must fix it,or your map is unrankedable.

cause:
You use Flash color in there:

RC:

solution:
Open epilepsy warning,It's in song setup.


2.

cause:
You use this file in your storyboard,but it's not in your .osz folder.
solution:
1.Delete the section which used this file.
2.Add this file in songs folder,then reupload.

3.

cause:
As It say.
solution:
You can ignore that.

4.You must fix it,or your map is unrankedable.

cause:
As It say.
RC:

solution:
Turn to a suitful Timing section,then:


5.

cause:
As It say.
solution:
Keep the letterbox setup in each diff insist.

6.

cause:
As It say.
solution:
It's in Guidelines,no more 24MB if you include a storyboard.you can ignore that.
but I think you can lower the resolution of the picture,and save as .jpg file instead of .png file,so that it more suit for download.

No kds because it's not a mod.