So this is my presonal opinion, which you may find very subjective: I would stay away from the map.
Why?
- The beginning has tons of the same sliders rotated by random angles (they may look logical enough for each pair of two adjacent sliders, but the whole pattern, for example, 00:07:217 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:08:629 (1,2,3,4) - , looks random). Then it gets only worse, because you love to use the same curve, slightly altering it and putting many sliders of the same type in a row. I mean, that wouldn't be this bad, if the whole map didn't consist solely of these sliders.
- Your patterns need polishing. As said above, the sliders look randomly placed and don't fit each other (example, moved all three to the same starting point and removed a note or 2 inbetween: http://puu.sh/btgvV/9454816761.jpg)
- The movement also seems to be random sometimes; some of your jumps, such as 00:21:335 (1,2,3,4) - , or
- The whistling and wobbling sounds you mapped caused your sliders to both look and play random. You can say they follow the music, and yes, they do, but
asdflujksdfa;uilsfdgbn,sdfgbn,mfdsgbn,dsfg oh well there goes my bitching about patterns and their appearance (removed a couple of ssentences each of which had the word "random")
In fact, there are a few of patterns I enjoyed to look at, but they're quite rare. For example, 01:49:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - or the whole part between 04:24:230 and 05:04:864, but
only because of extremely low note density (you can observe very few objects at the same time). And again, things like 02:10:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kill even this little bit of charm your map has. It's not even about the pattern itself, it's more about how frequently you use it and how messy it looks due to angle and spacing difference. And this is only one of the things I am unhappy with.
Sorry for disappointing, if anything has hit you, but I don't like it.
Before you ask, yes, I went through the whole map and didn't change my view for a second.