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把tag里的vocaloid换成utau吧 原曲就是重音的所以和v家没关系 no kd for this post
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kamisamaaa wrote:

M4M还债
[general]
其实感觉ar都偏高。虽然BPM有192 但是是三分拍 其实相当于144BPM。所以insane ar8-8.5 hard ar7左右比较合适吧 (我才不会说是因为ar8.8我DT不了的原因) 妥,改8.5了
[insane]
00:06:371 (4) - 这个我怎么总是感觉慢了一点 有点违和 但是放慢了听节奏有没错 错觉? 错觉
00:25:121 (7,8,9,10) - 这四个音两个一组不太一样 这么放成一排不太好 不如前两个组成2连和前面那个做成一个梗 然后后面两个note换成滑条 这样能体现出音乐差别 而且和后面那几个anti-jump也能更好区分一些 懒改
00:36:163 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 直接用更大的间距啊 最好是note略微分离不要有遮挡那种距离! 感觉在这里超级合适 要不然这里这么重的一串 和前面你那些2连区分不开啊 而且也没特色 像玲爷一样那种大间距才是真的爽~(我说的是这种这图我就想弄正常点,所以间距保持,稍微动了下位置
00:45:433 (3,1,2) - 虽然明白你的想法 但是觉得好难看 顺便 后面呢写也建议和上面一样的大间距。。。像maware的那种感觉?no
01:20:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里感觉没啥值得距离渐增的地方。。是没啥,我喜欢
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - 略蠢。 huehue
03:21:996 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 你这个渐增怎么和前面不一样 前面是0.8x 1.0x 1.2x 你这里变成0.65x 0.8x 0.95x了 莫名,改回来了
别的也没啥说的了 就是感觉音效很带感但是图没那么带感。其实还好啦 :D

Baihe House wrote:

这游戏好难玩,打你的insane手指都跳舞了,acc不上90%~ ;w;!!!~

[Normal]
  1. 用01:41:788 (1) -包住01:43:038 (2) - 是不是美观一点?0.0 两个一组的同类滑条,所以不改啦
  2. 没唱的部分可以适当blank把


[Hard]
  1. 好像没有转圈也 0.0 是故意的吗 为啥一定要有啊


[Insane]
  1. 也是没有转圈w
  2. 00:25:121 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - 组合起来感觉不是很美观,不过有可玩性,可以考虑00:25:538 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个note叠在一起。 叠起来会因为stack而变位置的,所以不改
  3. 03:12:413 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 为什么这么叼,这种梗都想到了;w; ;w;


insane从视觉方面还是觉得乱,不过呢可能主要是丰富可玩性把w 善用距离的变化这方面做的不错~

Irie Miyuki wrote:

把tag里的vocaloid换成utau吧 原曲就是重音的所以和v家没关系 no kd for this post
ok, thanks

thanks for modding~
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from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:56:163 (3) - nc, so as 01:51:163 (3) - etc. for read jumping pattern easier
  2. 01:08:038 (1) - note+2/3 repeathing slider+note? just my taste. same patterns after this as well
  3. 01:14:288 (1) - ctrl+g, 01:15:538 (1) - ,too...?
  4. 02:28:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note

Hard

  1. 00:18:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note, and 03:26:163 (3) - , etc.
  2. 00:28:975 (3) - move to 00:28:871, and maybe change this to slider or add slider after this. follow the vocal should be done here imo. or, u need to larger ds between 00:28:350 (2,3) - . otherwise players can hardly catch the rhythm here in a sudden
  3. 00:40:538 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, thou stuff like 01:35:538 (1,2) - is fine to me
  4. 03:46:683 (3) - 337,250

Normal

  1. 00:33:975 (4,1) - perfect this blanket
  2. 03:34:288 (3,4) - ^
  3. 03:40:538 (1,2) - ^
star*2

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck
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Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:56:163 (3) - nc, so as 01:51:163 (3) - etc. for read jumping pattern easier nope, that's fine imo
  2. 01:08:038 (1) - note+2/3 repeathing slider+note? just my taste. same patterns after this as well hmm, nope
  3. 01:14:288 (1) - ctrl+g, 01:15:538 (1) - ,too...? nope
  4. 02:28:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note ok changed

Hard

  1. 00:18:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note, and 03:26:163 (3) - , etc. k
  2. 00:28:975 (3) - move to 00:28:871, and maybe change this to slider or add slider after this. follow the vocal should be done here imo. or, u need to larger ds between 00:28:350 (2,3) - . otherwise players can hardly catch the rhythm here in a sudden nope, because the following are the same rhythm and it's not so hard to catch imo
  3. 00:40:538 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, thou stuff like 01:35:538 (1,2) - is fine to me this is also fine to me :>
  4. 03:46:683 (3) - 337,250 k

Normal

  1. 00:33:975 (4,1) - perfect this blanket
  2. 03:34:288 (3,4) - ^
  3. 03:40:538 (1,2) - ^ all fixed
star*2

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck


thanks for modding
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看到上面的评论瞬间觉得自己就是个渣......感谢作者做的图
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hey。
5544?
[Insane]
00:50:225 (5) - 408,128
00:56:371 (4) - 384,180 感觉向上过头了
01:21:788 (1) - 108,328?
01:51:371 (4) - 248,296
01:55:433 (4) - 216,324 虽然是微小的调整
02:32:413 (3,4) - 感觉这两个之间间距小了……02:32:621 (4) - 移到244,240?稍微好一些但不是很多……而且对后面的flow反而降低了些……不过功大于过这种感觉……你看着办
03:01:683 (4) - 40,312
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - lol 人性呢
03:33:663 (3) - 248,112
mtb你个御姐控lol
[Hard]
00:56:163 (2,3) - 放一起吧……
01:51:163 (2,3) - lol
[Normal]
没看出啥毛病各种1/1摸个头啊……笑
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check out the mods you've not replied and poke me to mod it.
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恭喜rank
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Oh. I may mod it later.
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ts8zs wrote:

hey。
5544?
[Insane]
00:50:225 (5) - 408,128 做了点小调整
00:56:371 (4) - 384,180 感觉向上过头了
01:21:788 (1) - 108,328?
01:51:371 (4) - 248,296 这个也稍微动了下
01:55:433 (4) - 216,324 虽然是微小的调整
02:32:413 (3,4) - 感觉这两个之间间距小了……02:32:621 (4) - 移到244,240?稍微好一些但不是很多……而且对后面的flow反而降低了些……不过功大于过这种感觉……你看着办 这个我觉得问题不大
03:01:683 (4) - 40,312
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - lol 人性呢 其实不难
03:33:663 (3) - 248,112
mtb你个御姐控lol lol
[Hard]
00:56:163 (2,3) - 放一起吧……
01:51:163 (2,3) - lol
[Normal]
没看出啥毛病各种1/1摸个头啊……笑
其他没回复的都是没改,因为感觉差不多其实,我1/3摆的都是0.8x,所以就keep啦
thanks for modding
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Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. With an internal discussion, we're sure that you must add a 18+ Warning Label in your creator's word
    Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.


[Insane]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - i suppose whistles could be applied to these notes.
  2. 00:17:933 - perhaps you may add a note here for consistent beat
  3. 00:21:683 - ^
  4. 00:41:163 (3) - unnecessary clap i think
  5. 00:48:038 (1,2,3) - about the beat here... it's not bad, just another way you may try:
  6. 01:08:038 (1) - two sliders maybe better?
  7. 01:14:288 (1,2,1,2,1) - the beat around here is heard boring a little
  8. 01:18:038 - this part could be started from here
  9. 01:51:163 (3,4) - i'd like to apply a ctrl+g here
  10. 02:08:975 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - also boring beat o_o
  11. 02:48:060 - i may not choose to place a break here
  12. 03:29:913 (3) - ctrl+g?


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane, whistle is suggested


[Normal]
  1. 00:14:288 (3,4,5) - same


Not bad, call me back to recheck when you're ready
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Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. With an internal discussion, we're sure that you must add a 18+ Warning Label in your creator's word
    Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.

ok added
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - i suppose whistles could be applied to these notes. added
  2. 00:17:933 - perhaps you may add a note here for consistent beat
  3. 00:21:683 - ^ 这里不太想改pattern,00:17:933 - 前面没加是想和00:15:538 (1) - 有个照应,打起来我觉得更有节奏感,这里也是一样
  4. 00:41:163 (3) - unnecessary clap i think removed
  5. 00:48:038 (1,2,3) - about the beat here... it's not bad, just another way you may try: 都要改的话工程有点大,后面也有一段,想想我还是善良点吧:3,所以不改啦
  6. 01:08:038 (1) - two sliders maybe better? maybe better, 不过将善良进行到底,不改了
  7. 01:14:288 (1,2,1,2,1) - the beat around here is heard boring a little 因为没梗了QAQ
  8. 01:18:038 - this part could be started from here I follow the beat here so start at 01:18:663 (1) -
  9. 01:51:163 (3,4) - i'd like to apply a ctrl+g here 我感觉现在这样的flow比较好
  10. 02:08:975 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - also boring beat o_o QAQ mentioned above
  11. 02:48:060 - i may not choose to place a break here imo the break here is fine
  12. 03:29:913 (3) - ctrl+g? i keep it


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane, whistle is suggested added


[Normal]
  1. 00:14:288 (3,4,5) - same same


Not bad, call me back to recheck when you're ready
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Bubbled~~!!
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瞎了
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提前占位庆祝:D
稍微耽误了一下你的rank进程呢,sry XD
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Scorpiour wrote:

Bubbled~~!!
Thanks sco~

ts8zs wrote:

提前占位庆祝:D
稍微耽误了一下你的rank进程呢,sry XD
没事,你也加油撒
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Go go go~
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这么快… 哭哭… 要是不AFK我也想做的说… ;w;
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[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Important things. You should consider
  3. Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix
[General]

  • Fine
[Insane]
  1. AR8.7 fits the difficulty better, some patterns in ar8.5 look messy.
  2. 00:27:413 (3) -–remove clap at sliderend, it’s the kick drum in music not snare drum, so you don’t need to add it. For the same reason, 00:30:225 -00:32:725 -00:35:225 -
  3. 00:41:163 (3) –missing clap, it’s the same drum as 00:19:913 -, also add clap at 00:41:475 (5) – and 00:41:579 (6)-sliderend which are the same.
  4. 01:18:663 (1,2) –soft custom7’s hitnormal fits here better. 02:13:663 (1,2) -
  5. 01:15:538 (1,2) –both of them ctrl+g will make the flow more natural from01:14:288 (1,2) -
  6. 01:43:350 (2) –missing clap
  7. 01:36:475 (5) –and 01:36:579 (6) –sliderend add clap, same reason
  8. 02:16:371 (6,7,1) – make them in a line, just move 02:16:475 (7) –to(397,280)
  9. 02:36:788 –volume is a little small here, I sugget you change to50%, can’t hear the soft-whistle you added…
  10. 03:14:288 -03:15:538 –again, soft-custom7’s hitnormal fits better imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:392 (2) –remove clap from sliderend, it’s not snare drum
  2. 01:21:788 (1) –remove clap only keep finish, the clap souns a little weird here.
  3. 01:43:350 (2) –missing clap
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:288 (3,4,5,6) –stack is hard for such bpm’s lowest diff imo, I highly recommend you not stack them
  2. 00:25:538 (1,2) –rhythm is a bit odd here, maybe following music not the drum will be better, http://puu.sh/bbfku/95d1ea6fb2.jpg, in high diffs following drum is fine because rhythm is variety
    . Also, your normal diff almost follow 1/1 drums which is really boring, so this may give more interest to it.
  3. 00:56:788 (1) –this is a little soon after the spinner, I recommend you move this to the center to let new players easy to catch (避免像小船那图那样被针对)
  4. 01:43:350 –missing clap!
  5. 02:56:788 (1,2) –why not add clap like03:21:788 (1,2) -

Call me back after you reply this.
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Fycho wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 01:18:663 (1,2) –soft custom7’s hitnormal fits here better. 02:13:663 (1,2) - imo sc1 is better here, i keep this
  2. 02:16:371 (6,7,1) – make them in a line, just move 02:16:475 (7) –to(397,280) i have made 02:15:538 (1,4,1) - in one line here...
  3. 03:14:288 -03:15:538 –again, soft-custom7’s hitnormal fits better imo same above

Call me back after you reply this.
Others all fixed
02:56:788 - here add clap in all diffs
thanks
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