[4k MX]
00:04:513 - Why not:
00:25:051 (25051|1,26897|2) - Make them end a tick earlier
00:32:436 (32436|3,32436|0) - Make them finish two ticks later
00:41:666 (41666|2,41666|0) - Make them finish a tick earlier
01:04:166 (64166|3,64281|0,64281|3,64397|0) - Better a scale from left to right. The number of beats are correct
01:05:089 - Add a note on | 2 |
01:07:974 (67974|2,67974|1,67974|3,68089|0) - Revert them vertically
01:07:974 (67974|2,67974|1,67974|3,68089|0) - Same ^
01:26:204 (86204|0,86781|0) - Convert them into LN
01:28:743 - From here you should place a LN on | 1 | instead of | 2 | and | 3 | and remap the other 3 columns
01:31:051 (91051|3) - Remove note
01:31:166 - Add note | 4 |
01:31:281 (91281|3) - Move to | 3 |
01:32:089 - Add note | 1 |
01:32:204 (92204|0) - Move to | 4 |
01:33:012 - Add note | 2 |
01:33:127 (93127|2) - Remove note
01:33:358 - Add note | 3 |
01:33:589 (93589|0,93820|1,94051|3) -
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01:35:204 -
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01:36:127 (96127|3) - You should remap the time line of this LN (all columns). There are a lot of notes you could use yet you don't. Slow down the song and pay attention to all rhythms: you'll hear a lot of instruments playing that doesn't fit in the passage you did :/
01:43:512 (103512|0) - Same ^
01:46:512 (106512|3) - Same ^ (too much LNs here :3)
01:50:897 (110897|0) - Same again ^
01:54:474 - Add note | 4 |
01:54:589 - Add note | 3 |
01:54:704 - Add note | 4 |
01:55:281 (115281|2) - Move to | 2 |
01:55:397 (115397|3) - Move to | 3 |
01:56:435 (116435|3) - Slice it in half (make it end where the other LN starts) and remap the rest
02:06:127 -
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02:08:089 - Add note | 2 |
02:08:666 - Add note | 4 |
02:09:358 - Add note | 1 |
02:09:820 - Add note | 2 |
02:10:512 - Add note | 3 |
02:10:166 (130166|1) - Remove this note
02:10:974 - Add note | 1 |
02:11:204 (131204|0,131320|3) - Remove them
02:11:204 - Add note | 2 | 3 |
02:13:051 (133051|0) - Again a LN that should be remapped
02:14:897 - From here to 02:16:512 here, you should put doubles (hear the guitar)
02:17:666 - 02:22:281 - The rhythm has been slowed down too much
02:46:281 (166281|0) - Same as 01:36:127 (96127|3)
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The rest of the song has the same errors I already told you and I think you can find them by yourself