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Xiao Xu - Lin An Chu Yu [Osu|Taiko]

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Streliteela
612 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月31日 at 13:35:28

Artist: Xiao Xu
Title: Lin An Chu Yu
Tags: 水浒Q传 墨明棋妙 HITA 心然 枫影儿 月吟诗 Finale 风流 cmn_891127 Hollow Wings Nardoxyribonucleic Guu
BPM: 81.1
Filesize: 10636kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. cmn's Insane (3.29 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Guu's Insane (4.06 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Hard (3.03 stars, 194 notes)
  4. HW's EX (5.46 stars, 274 notes)
  5. Insane (4.34 stars, 254 notes)
  6. Nardo's Muzukashii (2.13 stars, 204 notes)
  7. Nardo's Oni (2.59 stars, 251 notes)
  8. Normal (1.96 stars, 127 notes)
Download: Xiao Xu - Lin An Chu Yu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Streliteela , edited 43 times in total.
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
是这首啊
当初我有玩网游水浒Q传！听过，超好听
要测变速啊，加油！
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
From my Queue :)

原來我是頭香啊... :o
這是我不知道的音樂，還蠻對我胃口的，現在這裡跟你說聲謝謝 :lol:

General
Design-
Widescreen Support 選項不要勾
Letterbox during breaks 同上

歌曲名稱的部分，我也找不到...無能為力
不過我覺得不用動，也不用轉繁體


Hard
00:14:406 (5,6) - circle跟Slider頭的距離跟00:14:036 (4,5) 不太一樣的說
00:31:393 (4,5) - 這裡你都知道要黏在一起，為什麼00:32:018 (6,7) 卻是這樣跳咧?? (Insane才有這種跳法 :D )
00:53:893 (8,9) - 這裡同上，我大概知道要大大你要做什麼。不過既然是Hard我建議你不要這樣跳 (Easy到Hard難度都是全程開著DS作的，我個人連Insane也都是開著DS，這點要注意一下)
01:03:893 (7,8) - ^
01:24:987 (1,2,3,1) - ^
01:26:393 (3) - 這裡也省略太多了吧

NC也順便幫你調一下
00:08:104 (4) - NC
00:11:814 (1) - 去掉NC
00:14:036 (4) - NC
00:25:147 (1) - 我覺得這Slider去掉NC也沒差
00:28:118 (6) - NC
00:32:800 (8) - ^
00:35:300 (15) - ^
00:35:925 (1) - 去掉NC
00:39:987 (10) - NC
00:40:925 (1) - 去掉NC
00:43:425 (8) - NC
00:49:987 (11) - ^
00:53:425 (7) - ^
00:55:300 (14) - ^
00:55:925 (1) - 去掉NC
00:58:425 (7) - NC
01:04:987 (11) - ^
01:05:925 (1) - 去掉NC
01:07:175 (5) - NC
01:29:050 (9) - ^


Easy
00:14:776 (1,2,3) - 這三個slider的擺法，如果我是新手，最後一個slider會讓我很不開心，頭不對尾 (Easy, Normal大部分都是頭對尾這樣運作的，我Mod過的很多圖都是這樣)
00:26:165 (1) - 我不會建議你把這個放在slider下方擋住
00:35:612 (5) - 漏掉circle
01:06:550 (2) - 這Slider不流暢，建議換個位置
01:13:112 (3,4) - 不建議這樣擺，不順暢，不對頭尾的感覺
01:18:112 (4,5) - ^
01:24:675 (6,1) - 這段之間的電音太明顯了，建議跟這段電音會比較好

Easy的NC好難調，我調了幾次都不是很好看，請下一個人幫你吧
我盡力了


最後，這圖其實本身還不錯
我是覺得可以在加個Insane，這樣也不會有太多限制
如果不要，上面那句當我沒說，一切看你

還有，謝謝你的Mod，加油 :)
Fuuyu
856 posts
Joined September 2013
Fuuyu
From . .
xLoupGarou's Modding Queue


*Mp3 --> Nyan~LINK
-I did a little change in your Mp3
especially the last part I saw that you were not using it, So Here :)

*BG - OK

Nyan~MOD
[Normal]
HP Drain +2
OD +3
AR +1
01:18:112 (118112|4,118425|5) ctrl+g . . like this?


[Hard]
00:21:443 Blanket?
00:26:165 (1) ctrl+g
00:32:643 Add a note
00:33:737 Apply NC
00:38:737 ^
00:42:175 ctrl+h . . like this?


00:43:893 Apply NC
00:44:362 until 00:44:987 Re-position here, too far from each other
00:48:425 Apply NC
00:53:425 ^
00:55:300 maybe, like this?


00:58:425 Apply NC
00:58:893 Too far, try moving it closer . . maybe like this?


01:03:425 until 01:04:362 Re-position, like this maybe?


01:04:831 Also align this part with my suggestion ( if you'll apply it XD )


01:19:362 Blind Spot, maybe try this?


01:19:987 (119987|1,120143|2) ctrl+g , like this


01:20:456 (120456|1,120612|2) ctrl+g, same as above


01:29:675 Apply NC

That's All, Calm Song . . Nice
Good Luck~
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
http://1drv.ms/1iPLBmL
无音效
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
请问我可不可以做一个diff
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
原来是你的map。。。话说上次那个我还没做完就给rank了是怎么回事 我考试没和你说吗。。
Streliteela
612 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Sun Rainbow wrote:

原来是你的map。。。话说上次那个我还没做完就给rank了是怎么回事 我考试没和你说吗。。
没啊我没看到任何关于你去考试了的消息，还以为你美丽。。。没想到图这么快就rank了。。orz
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
as guu’s request

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:941 (4,5) - 合成1/1滑条
  2. 00:14:791 (1,2,3) - 由00:14:791开始改成
    SPOILER
  3. 00:26:135 (5) - 放在1/6了，改为放在1/8
  4. 00:26:935 (6) - 这里附近应该还是缺了一条红线，音对不上物件，所有难度都是
  5. 00:31:872 (2) - finish
  6. 00:38:747 (6) - ^
  7. 00:42:185 (3) - 尾巴加clap，60%vol.
  8. 00:43:747 (5) - 头加finish
  9. 00:44:372 (6) - ^
  10. 00:47:810 (4) - 尾巴加finish
  11. 00:49:997 (4) - 取消whistle
[Hard]
我觉得如果调速的话滑条需要NC？
  1. 00:05:913 (2) - NC
  2. 00:07:023 (3) - NC
  3. 00:08:132 (4) - NC
  4. 00:10:722 (7) - NC
  5. 00:11:831 - 多余的绿线
  6. 00:13:681 - 这条绿线好像没什么意义
  7. 00:14:791 (6) - NC
  8. 00:22:189 (5) - NC
  9. 00:59:685 (11,12) - 都加clap，60%vol.
  10. 01:19:997 (1) - 改为clap
  11. 01:20:153 (2) - 取消clap
  12. 01:26:403 (3) - 这条滑条直接覆盖了01:26:560这个关键音，改成这样？
    SPOILER
[Guu's Insane]
  1. 00:08:872 (7) - NC
  2. 00:10:722 (1) - 取消NC
  3. 00:11:831 (2) - NC
  4. 00:20:709 (7) - NC
  5. 00:45:622 (9) - 头加clap
  6. 00:50:622 (9) - 这个不要离这么远了，好坑
  7. 00:57:810 (5) - 这个放得太低了，拉上点
  8. 01:25:466 (7) - 移开一点，不要与滑条碰了
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:722 (5) - NC
  2. 00:19:970 (2) - NC
  3. 00:20:709 (1) - 取消NC
  4. 00:50:622 (5,6) - 位置调换一下？5应该是跳的
  5. 01:07:966 (8,9,10,1) - 干脆弄个1/8，放连打
  6. 01:29:919 - 这里1/8有个很明显的音，没物件觉得有点怪，将01:29:841 (7) - 改成1/8滑条
good luck
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
96bpm的红线的offset拉到28475

00:39:881 (8) - whistle+clap
00:40:662 (12) - 滑条头whistle+clap 滑条尾whistle
00:42:225 (5) - 滑条头whistle+clap
00:47:225 (5) - 滑条尾finish
Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Guu
normal
00:43:747 (5,6) - 滑条头没在白线有点不舒服，把5改单点然后紧接滑条6然后下一条白线空拍，美如画
01:24:685 (6,1) - 这段还是不要空着吧
01:25:622 (1,2) - 节奏虽然很风骚但是一般人第一反应还是那个邦邦邦的声音所以还是改回白线吧。比如这样↓
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1798925

hard
01:26:403 (3) - 压住了白线的节奏，没有体现出来
00:22:189 (5,1) - 位置打着不太舒服
00:24:408 (4,1,1) - 还是位置不舒服，滑条方向再调整调整
后面赞赞赞

cmn's insane
00:33:435 (1,2) - 这里感觉节奏不太合理，即使熟悉了几次还是别扭
00:47:810 (8,1,2) - 这里节奏有点奇怪
00:52:810 (7,8) - 00:55:622 (2,3) - 自创节奏？感觉和音乐不是很配合，打的时候也读不懂
00:57:028 (5) - 这里我觉得应该是1/6
01:00:778 (6) - 去掉
note间距太近了又是ar8太难读，打了好几遍全程断，试了试改成ar9也还是断。。。而且note太近滑条又太慢中间又有些间距不等的情况下，打完整个人都难受了orz。。。求把间距拉开一点;w;

insane
00:18:860 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - 这一段全是滑条有点缺乏变化，建议夹杂几个单点
00:31:560 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 间距3-4-5都比较远然后5-9又突然在一起打的时候有点坑。你看看能不能弄成渐变一类的
00:39:216 少了一个节奏，把4改成滑条吧
00:45:622 (9,1) - 这里衔接不是很舒服
00:49:685 (6,1) - 建议这两个重叠，后面的六边形稍为重排一下。00:50:622 (5,6) - 这两个位置调换。不然很难读，打着也不舒服。
00:59:685 (5,6,7,8) - 这地方没那么多节奏，酷爱减掉两个休息下= =
01:07:653 (6,7) - 还是间距变化太突然的问题，试试用滑条过渡
01:09:060 (3,1) - 位置不舒服

窝的难度美如画
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Hey, Streliteela!
I only modded your Normal and Hard; the rest are too hard for me to mod (Sorry:| )
Well, here's my mod!

Normal:
1) 00:26:135~ I suggest a new combo here.
2) 00:38:747~ New combo.
3) 00:43:747~ New combo again.
4) 00:53:747~ New combo.
5) 01:02:185~ Remove new combo here, and add new combo here then: 01:03:747.
6) 01:28:435~ This slider looks a bit out of place. Maybe move it so that it's just a longer version of this slider: 01:27:185.
It must look something like this:
Picture
7) I think it will look better if you blanket this slider: 01:30:935 with this slider: 01:32:185.
It must then look something like this:
Picture

[b]Hard:
I have ALOT of new combo suggestions:
1) 00:22:189~ NC
2) 00:33:747~ NC
3) 00:34:997~ NC
4) 00:38:747~ NC
5) 00:39:997~ NC
6) 00:43:435~ NC
7) 00:44:997~ NC
8) 00:49:060~ NC
9) 00:49:997~ NC
10) 00:53:435~ NC
11) 00:54:997~ NC
12) 00:58:435~ NC
13) 00:59:997~ NC
14) 01:03:435~ NC
15) 01:04:997~ NC
16) 01:07:810~ NC
17) 01:09:997~ NC
18) 01:10:466~ NC
19) 01:14:685~ NC
20) 01:15:778~ NC
21) 01:17:185~ NC
22) 01:18:747~ NC
23) 01:23:747~ NC
24) 01:28:747~ NC
These combos support the song better in my opinion.

Other:
1) 00:31:560~ Maybe move this slider so that it rather looks like this:
Picture
2) Straighten this slider: 00:56:560, so that it looks like this:
Picture

These two suggestions are just my own opinion.

And that's that.
Hope you'll find my mod helpful.
Good Luck! :D
Last edited by -Nya- , edited 1 time in total.
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127

Guu wrote:

cmn's insane
00:33:435 (1,2) - 这里感觉节奏不太合理，即使熟悉了几次还是别扭 节奏应该木有问题，我把(3)移到(4)前面了
00:47:810 (8,1,2) - 这里节奏有点奇怪 还好吧
00:52:810 (7,8) - 00:55:622 (2,3) - 自创节奏？感觉和音乐不是很配合，打的时候也读不懂 00:52:810 (7) - 这个是颤音，我修改了一下节奏。00:55:622 (2) - 这个有很明显的从高到低的滑音，所有没有改
00:57:028 (5) - 这里我觉得应该是1/6 改成两段slider
01:00:778 (6) - 去掉 还好吧
note间距太近了又是ar8太难读，打了好几遍全程断，试了试改成ar9也还是断。。。而且note太近滑条又太慢中间又有些间距不等的情况下，打完整个人都难受了orz。。。求把间距拉开一点;w;
这个note间距近是为了做成人工stack，保证重叠的方向跟slider一致
sv我改成了1.8
超级感谢~~~~
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntwTkoT
chaee
chaee
❤

From: chaee's queue

[Normal]

00:14:791 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these sliders should match 00:13:311 (5,6) -
00:39:060 (7,1,3) - Stack these better
01:26:403 (2,3) - Blanket

[Hard]

00:12:941 (3,6) - These sliders aren't perfectly symmetrical
00:48:435 (1) - NC
00:53:435 (1) - ^
00:58:435 (1) - ^

[Insane]

❤

[Guu's Insane]

❤

[cmn's Insane]

❤
sullyjhf
59 posts
Joined October 2012
sullyjhf
Hey, from my Modding Queue

I really like the skin you've used, it suits the song well!
This goes for all diffs:
Why don't you add a drum finish/clap sound on each of the sliders/notes where there is the big drum playing in the music?
AiMod says the MP3 is too long so you might want to crop it down with Audacity or something.
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:135 (5) - I think this is meant to be snapped onto the yellow tick, however this part is strange in all diffs so you might consider changing it to something less weird :P
  2. 00:26:135 (5) - Blanket better?
  3. 01:26:403 (2,3) - Blanket this
  4. Sorry normal mod is so short I don't really play them much and so don't know the technicalities of them, but I hope these helped anyway :)

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:421 (5,6) - Need to be a tiny bit further apart.
  2. 01:03:435 (6,7) - Blanket better?
  3. 01:13:747 (1,2) - Too far apart, well too big of a distance snap change.
  4. 01:14:997 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:15:778 (4,1) - ^
  6. 01:19:372 (1,2,3) - same here, you literally have 3 notes just before this with the same timing and a MUCH smaller distance snap.

[Insane]
  1. First thing I noticed were the streams turning into notes that I was able to single tap. On my first play I played the notes in a line as a stream, alternating my fingers, but then later in the map these turned into really spread apart notes. Not really a mod or anything just an interesting note, it might be a good idea to have the streams near the start spread out a bit more in order to emphasise the fact that they are not streams, but idk it's your reference really.
  2. 00:26:166 (1) - Remove NC here.
  3. 00:26:535 (2) - And add NC here. Seems to fit the music better.
  4. 00:38:747 (2,3,4) - This is what I was talking about with the streams and distance snapping. These should definitely be snapped or something, like move the (3) up into the middle maybe.
  5. 00:49:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this alternate a bit better, swapping the 5 and 6 on the timeline at the top works fine.
  6. 00:59:372 (4,5) - Having this just after having this: 00:54:841 (6,3,4) feels weird, as they have the same distance snapping, but different timing. Same with this 00:40:935 (1,2) and this 00:50:935 (1,2)
  7. 01:01:560 (3,4) - Move these a little bit further away. Maybe even add NC on 01:01:872 (4)
  8. 01:07:810 (7,8,9,10,1) - Really small distance snapping again.
  9. 01:24:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel this distance snap change is quite drastic, just make it a little smaller. like this maybe.
  10. Overall a pretty fun diff to play!

Good Luck to you Streliteela!
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
[Insane]
00:29:997 (1,2,3) - 不知道怎么回事感觉和歌有点对不上 是我神经过敏？
00:33:435 (1) - 感觉10的角度应该往右偏一点(20°?)，做个椭圆的flow 这里放这么尖锐的转向感觉反而不顺了
SPOILER
00:38:747 (2,3,4) - 这该怎么才能读出来……
顺便音乐似乎是从4开始就是两个一组了 现在似乎漏掉一个音
我个人的理解
00:47:185 (5) - 头可以压在3的尾巴上
00:52:810 (7) - ctrl+g 瞬间炫酷爆炸（别打我
01:06:872 (4,5) - 这flow怪怪的 不顺手
01:10:778 (1) - 和3叠着舒服些？
01:19:528 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没听到有三个一组的音啊……是我音响有问题吗？
01:21:872 (3,4,5,6) - 和前面有点近

[Guu]
00:34:997 (8) - 碰血条了
00:48:435 (1) - 我个人觉得要偏也应该偏在下边 弧度大太扭手了
滑条有点太自由了啊 虽然只看头尾没问题

[cmn]
none.

[Hard]
00:07:023 (3) - 减速还是给个nc提示吧

[Noraml]
00:14:791 (1,2) - 不平行
01:07:185 (3) - 往左放一点？

大概就这样 摸完I就困了 想补觉
Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Guu

cmn_891127 wrote:

Guu wrote:

cmn's insane
00:33:435 (1,2) - 这里感觉节奏不太合理，即使熟悉了几次还是别扭 节奏应该木有问题，我把(3)移到(4)前面了
00:47:810 (8,1,2) - 这里节奏有点奇怪 还好吧
00:52:810 (7,8) - 00:55:622 (2,3) - 自创节奏？感觉和音乐不是很配合，打的时候也读不懂 00:52:810 (7) - 这个是颤音，我修改了一下节奏。00:55:622 (2) - 这个有很明显的从高到低的滑音，所有没有改
00:57:028 (5) - 这里我觉得应该是1/6 改成两段slider
01:00:778 (6) - 去掉 还好吧
note间距太近了又是ar8太难读，打了好几遍全程断，试了试改成ar9也还是断。。。而且note太近滑条又太慢中间又有些间距不等的情况下，打完整个人都难受了orz。。。求把间距拉开一点;w;
这个note间距近是为了做成人工stack，保证重叠的方向跟slider一致
sv我改成了1.8
我基本是从玩家的角度来看这张图的，也是太不习惯这种图风，当时刚打完被坑的不轻，写的主观成分很大orz先道个歉。。。
现在客观一点来说，主要问题就是短滑条混在一堆note中太难分辨出来造成不可读。改1.8我试了试，感觉变化不是特别大。能不能改成3.62.0呢？
至于stack，你要坚持的话我也不说什么了，确实是一大特色= =
不过既然滑条改快了，间距也会配合着调大一点吧O.O
能被三星图虐成这样不得不服(打滚)
Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Guu

imoutosan wrote:

[Guu]
00:34:997 (8) - 碰血条了 改好了O.O之前没太注意
00:48:435 (1) - 我个人觉得要偏也应该偏在下边 弧度大太扭手了 好的
滑条有点太自由了啊 虽然只看头尾没问题
滑条我自己也觉得蠢orz 考虑再整体修一修
蟹蟹~
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

Streliteela wrote:

Sun Rainbow wrote:

原来是你的map。。。话说上次那个我还没做完就给rank了是怎么回事 我考试没和你说吗。。
没啊我没看到任何关于你去考试了的消息，还以为你美丽。。。没想到图这么快就rank了。。orz
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Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Normal]
00:26:135 (5) - NC for BPM change
00:26:935 (6,7,8) - Prefer change to slider (easiest diff in map)
00:37:810 (5) - DS
00:48:747 (1) - Prefer this to swap with 00:49:372 (2,3) - , first 2 hit is circle then a slider
01:23:122 (4) - Blanket with 01:23:435 (5) - , the slider tail is a bit off
01:32:185 (2) - NC for BPM change

[Hard]
00:07:023 (3) - NC for SV change (if you want it easier to be read)
00:10:722 (7) - NC for anti-jump and SV change
00:22:189 (5) - NC
00:26:166 (1) - Remove NC, and NC at 00:26:535 (2) -
00:29:997 - Can try 0.9 SV or something just a little slower here, at least not 1.0
00:32:810 (7) - Make it stop at 00:33:278 - and put a circle at 00:33:435 - , then NC it (make something hittable)
00:38:435 - My personal preferences, I don't like numbers more than (10) appear in slow song, you can try to increase HP drain instead of long combos (applies for other combos)

[cmn's Insane]
00:31:872 (6) - NC here for anti-jump, like 00:33:435 (1) -
01:34:233 (4) - NC, end ~

[Insane]
Looks cool!
00:10:722 (5) - NC
01:14:685 (2) - NC, a bit distance in timing
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