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Yukarinyan - Lolicon de Yokatta~

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Awaken

kamisamaaa wrote:

为啥换BG啊 原来的BG多棒的!!怨念 >:(
爷爷 原来的画质太低啦
EncoreW
wpcap居然是翻唱
tags 是不是应该把初音也加进去
预览时间点改到01:03:951 - 这里似乎不错

Yokatta:
00:01:045 - 这里似乎能加一个note
01:02:920 (6,7,8) - 没摆好?

Normal:
00:14:545 - 00:15:670 - 这两个地方似乎都能放一个note
01:02:358 (1) - 转盘似乎太短了

大概就是这样了
水平有限 请务必不要介意
Sun Rainbow
啥 泡了? 你们都bubble 不bubble还是人
jonathanlfj
irc
2014-08-19 23:04 jonathanlfj: ok我们来看看
2014-08-19 23:04 Awaken: 好owo!
2014-08-19 23:04 jonathanlfj: 首先你和kwan的diff绿线都是unsnap的
2014-08-19 23:04 Awaken: 等一下我先update最新版本>.<
2014-08-19 23:04 jonathanlfj: 嗯
2014-08-19 23:06 Awaken: 好了!
2014-08-19 23:07 Awaken: 可能需要重新add一下diff >.<
2014-08-19 23:07 jonathanlfj: 首先kwan的diff所有绿线要-4ms
2014-08-19 23:07 Awaken: 好
2014-08-19 23:07 jonathanlfj: 你的要+6
2014-08-19 23:09 jonathanlfj: 然后你的diff说几点就差不多了
2014-08-19 23:09 jonathanlfj: 其他的都没什么问题
2014-08-19 23:12 Awaken: 掉了;w; 绿线都修正了
2014-08-19 23:13 jonathanlfj: 嗯
2014-08-19 23:13 jonathanlfj: 你的diff
2014-08-19 23:13 jonathanlfj: 00:01:045 - 不加个note?
2014-08-19 23:14 Awaken: 一开始我觉得不加比较好owo
2014-08-19 23:14 Awaken: 不过不知道是不是比较难读
2014-08-19 23:14 jonathanlfj: 你可以先放个slider
2014-08-19 23:15 Awaken: 1/2折返?
2014-08-19 23:15 Awaken: 懂了 现房slidere
2014-08-19 23:15 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/aZVgY.jpg
2014-08-19 23:15 jonathanlfj: 别忘了把绿线也提前一些
2014-08-19 23:16 Awaken: 好
2014-08-19 23:18 jonathanlfj: 01:03:201 (1) - 为什么这个跟02:04:701 (1) 不一样
2014-08-19 23:20 Awaken: 好 改了
2014-08-19 23:22 jonathanlfj: 02:11:920 (9) - 这个地方有点难读
2014-08-19 23:23 jonathanlfj: 可以往上提一些增加与02:11:358 (4,5,6,7,8) - 的间距
2014-08-19 23:24 Awaken: 好
2014-08-19 23:24 Awaken: 不过感觉往上更难了;w;
2014-08-19 23:25 jonathanlfj: 这里难点没问题
2014-08-19 23:25 jonathanlfj: 反正最后的kiai全都是跳
2014-08-19 23:25 jonathanlfj: 02:17:920 (9) - 我想说你这里可以离得近一些吗
2014-08-19 23:26 Awaken: 好
2014-08-19 23:27 Awaken: 这里原本是为了搞stack能看起来整洁一些
2014-08-19 23:27 jonathanlfj: 话说你是不是改了一些1/4的节奏
2014-08-19 23:27 jonathanlfj: 感觉少了几个滑条多了一些连打
2014-08-19 23:27 Awaken: 0.0 对 还有多了几个跳
2014-08-19 23:28 jonathanlfj: 嗯差不多这样了
2014-08-19 23:28 jonathanlfj: 我扫一下别的diff
2014-08-19 23:28 Awaken: owo
2014-08-19 23:28 jonathanlfj: 1话说这是国人歌姬?
2014-08-19 23:29 Awaken: 恩
2014-08-19 23:29 jonathanlfj: Yogali这名字跟小缘有什么关系
2014-08-19 23:29 Awaken: 感觉比原版好听很多啊lol
2014-08-19 23:29 Awaken: 我看缘是yogali
2014-08-19 23:29 Awaken: 思考
2014-08-19 23:29 jonathanlfj: ?
2014-08-19 23:31 Awaken: 缘的罗马音是yogali 所以我就把这个填上去了o.o
2014-08-19 23:31 jonathanlfj: 如果是我的话会写
2014-08-19 23:31 jonathanlfj: xiao yuan
2014-08-19 23:31 jonathanlfj: 因为是中国人
2014-08-19 23:32 Awaken: 好
2014-08-19 23:32 jonathanlfj: 话说00:26:920 - preview time应该在这里
2014-08-19 23:32 jonathanlfj: "Xiao Yuan" 这样
2014-08-19 23:33 jonathanlfj: 或者Xiaoyuan
2014-08-19 23:33 Awaken: 好像yogali比较美观 肯定是我的幻觉>.<
2014-08-19 23:33 Awaken: 不过改了~
2014-08-19 23:33 jonathanlfj: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/93746 Tianshi - Melancholic]
2014-08-19 23:33 jonathanlfj: 天时 -> Tianshi
2014-08-19 23:33 jonathanlfj: 所以小缘 -> Xiaoyuan
2014-08-19 23:34 Awaken: 我一直以为是天使;w;
2014-08-19 23:34 Awaken: 好~改了
2014-08-19 23:34 jonathanlfj: 我也是直到不久以前
2014-08-19 23:36 jonathanlfj: 改完了叫我
2014-08-19 23:37 Awaken: 小缘好像有罗马音名0.0
2014-08-19 23:37 Awaken: Yukarinyan
2014-08-19 23:37 Awaken: http://www.weibo.com/yukarinyan?from=pr ... =infdomain
2014-08-19 23:37 jonathanlfj: 那就用这个
2014-08-19 23:37 Awaken: ok
2014-08-19 23:38 jonathanlfj: 话说是Y还是y
2014-08-19 23:44 Awaken: 好了
2014-08-19 23:44 Awaken: updated
2014-08-19 23:46 jonathanlfj: 我去绿线悲剧了
2014-08-19 23:46 Awaken: ;w;
2014-08-19 23:46 jonathanlfj: easy一直到02:39:108 (1) -
2014-08-19 23:47 jonathanlfj: 这之前的绿线要+4
2014-08-19 23:49 jonathanlfj: yokatta 01:15:858 - 这之后的绿线要-6
2014-08-19 23:51 Awaken: ok done
2014-08-19 23:53 Awaken: updated
2014-08-19 23:54 jonathanlfj: 话说你确定这个bg不会被和谐
2014-08-19 23:54 Awaken: 应该不会吧>< 天国地狱都还好
2014-08-19 23:55 jonathanlfj: 我去这些绿线...
2014-08-19 23:55 jonathanlfj: easy - http://puu.sh/aZXPM.png
2014-08-19 23:55 Awaken: ;w;
2014-08-19 23:55 jonathanlfj: yokatta - http://puu.sh/aZXQH.png
2014-08-19 23:59 Awaken: updated..;w;
2014-08-19 23:59 Awaken: 这次应该没有了..
2014-08-20 00:01 jonathanlfj: 恩这回没问题了
we fixed some unsnapped green lines (took longer than expected) and changed the romanized artist, as well as some minor pattern modifications. Should be good to go now!

Ranked~
F D Flourite
沙发!!!
Gratz~
Topic Starter
Awaken
Thank you lfj!!!>3<
Fycho
又rabk,拉黑
Rizia
gratz
kamisamaaa
graz~ :)
Koiyuki
卧槽小缘喵,我本来还想开小缘的神のまにまに的就是不知道aritist怎么写
Topic Starter
Awaken

Minakami Yuki wrote:

卧槽小缘喵,我本来还想开小缘的神のまにまに的就是不知道aritist怎么写
卧槽 那个也是超好听啊111111
ErunamoJAZZ
etto... Ranking Criteria say:
There must not be any obscene imagery in the background/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity, near-nudity, sexual references, violence, drug abuse, etc. Keep things PG, suitable for ages 12+.
A girl just with pantsu on a bed ... yeah, it's super cute, but do not think it 12+... just say.
Crystal
gratz!

wpcpa不会un吧
Topic Starter
Awaken

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

etto... Ranking Criteria say:
There must not be any obscene imagery in the background/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity, near-nudity, sexual references, violence, drug abuse, etc. Keep things PG, suitable for ages 12+.
A girl just with pantsu on a bed ... yeah, it's super cute, but do not think it 12+... just say.
I found this bg with a long time and this is only one I find fit with the song...;w;
maybe there was no secret so it's okay
ErunamoJAZZ

Awaken wrote:

I found this bg with a long time and this is only one I find fit with the song...;w;
maybe there was no secret so it's okay
honestly, I do not think that the fund is suitable for all ages ... especially by pretty well drawn is the girl hahaha! :P

In any case, are the BAT who decide whether a map is unclassified or not. My advice is to seek help for a less insinuating BG (a girl in pajamas would be nice, I suppose).


Btw, if unclassified..
[rsk's Hard]
02:03:483 (3) - why a circle?, this feel wrong, imo. pls, make it a slider.
Sharlo
找狗难 难于上青天
一边这么说着 一边rank了3rd

Anyway, congratz!
Sellenite
这个擦破听
btw,sexy loli
rinsukir
gratz!
我啥时候也能找到狗啊
BeatofIke
Pantsu<3 <3 <3
IamKwaN

BeatofIke wrote:

Pantsu<3 <3 <3
kirigherkins
Chris Hansen is displeased.
BlueIlis
nicemap:)
Farex_old
What's up with the BG and the tags?
JMC
lol dat tag <3
p3n
Unqualified for several reasons:

The team decided the BG is not appropriate.
Tags contain unnecessary items like <3.
Romanized title field "ろりこん" should be "Lolicon".


Please fix the mentioned points above and get a re-qualification from a member of the BAT.
E14
Thanks p3n, so this map gonna delete and upload again...
this might take long... -_-

I have fun on this map and i gonna start it over again orz
Topic Starter
Awaken

p3n wrote:

Unqualified for several reasons:

The team decided the BG is not appropriate. finding..
Tags contain unnecessary items like <3. I don't know who added it but it's online tag I can't delete
Romanized title field "ろりこん" should be "Lolicon". ok


Please fix the mentioned points above and get a re-qualification from a member of the BAT.
captin1
following up on other things not mentioned before

soft-hitfinish4 is not used in the mapset, and should be removed.

[Rainbow's Normal]
  1. Numberous hitsounding problems throughout the difficulty.
  2. 00:17:358 (2) - Clap missing from end
  3. 00:17:920 (3) - ^
  4. 00:18:858 (4) - ^
  5. 00:20:733 (2) - Clap missing
  6. 00:33:108 (2) - Clap missing from end
  7. 00:45:108 (1) - Remove Clap
  8. 00:46:608 (1) - Remove Clap from start and end (00:46:608 - 00:47:358 - )
  9. 00:57:108 - to 01:01:983 - Hitsounds are completely missing
  10. 01:18:858 (1) - Clap should be on repeat, not end (01:19:233 - )
  11. 01:19:983 (2) - Clap missing
  12. 01:45:483 (4) - ^
  13. 01:56:358 (2) - Clap should be on end, not start (01:56:733 - )
  14. 02:36:108 - to 02:41:358 - Hitsounds are completely missing
  15. 02:47:746 (2) - Clap missing from both ends
  16. 02:51:496 (3) - ^
  17. 02:57:496 (2) - ^
  18. 03:05:371 (3) - Clap missing from end
Sun Rainbow

captin1 wrote:

following up on other things not mentioned before

soft-hitfinish4 is not used in the mapset, and should be removed.

[Rainbow's Normal]
  1. Numberous hitsounding problems throughout the difficulty.
  2. 00:17:358 (2) - Clap missing from end
  3. 00:17:920 (3) - ^
  4. 00:18:858 (4) - ^
  5. 00:20:733 (2) - Clap missing
  6. 00:33:108 (2) - Clap missing from end
  7. 00:45:108 (1) - Remove Clap
  8. 00:46:608 (1) - Remove Clap from start and end (00:46:608 - 00:47:358 - )
  9. 00:57:108 - to 01:01:983 - Hitsounds are completely missing
  10. 01:18:858 (1) - Clap should be on repeat, not end (01:19:233 - )
  11. 01:19:983 (2) - Clap missing
  12. 01:45:483 (4) - ^
  13. 01:56:358 (2) - Clap should be on end, not start (01:56:733 - )
  14. 02:36:108 - to 02:41:358 - Hitsounds are completely missing
  15. 02:47:746 (2) - Clap missing from both ends
  16. 02:51:496 (3) - ^
  17. 02:57:496 (2) - ^
  18. 03:05:371 (3) - Clap missing from end
I am sorry for my diff on hitsound problem :o
All fixed!Thanks for your mod><
Topic Starter
Awaken
updated and removed
Trust
Some suggestions~

[Rainbow's Normal]

  1. 01:45:858 (5) - Check your spacing here.
[Yokatta!]

HP +2~2.5. Not sure why it's lower than Hard.
  1. 00:26:170 (3,4,5,6) - This just feels wrong and very strange to play through on my first try. You have a downbeat skipped on 00:26:358 meanwhile 00:26:451 (5) follows nothing present in the music. I recommend moving (5) forward by 1/4 and making a stacked triplet with 00:26:170 (3,4,5).
  2. 01:17:920 (5,6,1) - Shift this down a bit. Stack leniency causes some of the notes to overlap with the life drain bar.
  3. 01:54:108 (6) - NC here and remove on 01:54:858 (1) so the combo that follows isn't needlessly short.
  4. 01:57:108 (6) - Use a NC to break up this combo for consistency with your patterning.
  5. 02:00:108 (7) - ^
  6. 02:40:983 (1) - Finish should be on the end and not the second last repeat. More importantly this should be snapped in 1/6 and should follow as such. Don't forget to put a finish on (2):
Call me once you've checked this.
Topic Starter
Awaken

Trust wrote:

Some suggestions~
[Yokatta!]

HP +2~2.5. Not sure why it's lower than Hard. Because I found if I use od7, hr will be hard to pass x.x maybe the reason is that od is a little high but I still HP+1
  1. 00:26:170 (3,4,5,6) - This just feels wrong and very strange to play through on my first try. You have a downbeat skipped on 00:26:358 meanwhile 00:26:451 (5) follows nothing present in the music. I recommend moving (5) forward by 1/4 and making a stacked triplet with 00:26:170 (3,4,5). fixed and added some new rhythm
  2. 01:17:920 (5,6,1) - Shift this down a bit. Stack leniency causes some of the notes to overlap with the life drain bar. changed the pattern
  3. 01:54:108 (6) - NC here and remove on 01:54:858 (1) so the combo that follows isn't needlessly short.
  4. 01:57:108 (6) - Use a NC to break up this combo for consistency with your patterning.
  5. 02:00:108 (7) - ^ ok fixed three above
  6. 02:40:983 (1) - Finish should be on the end and not the second last repeat. More importantly this should be snapped in 1/6 and should follow as such. Don't forget to put a finish on (2): ah my mistake :O
Call me once you've checked this.
woooh~~!!
Poruteri
excuse me, awaken
00:39:108 (1) - I think that slider is not fit to song
and the diff name has not fixed yet. :3 [Roricon!]→ [Lolicon!]
Topic Starter
Awaken

Poruteri wrote:

excuse me, awaken
00:39:108 (1) - I think that slider is not fit to song
and the diff name has not fixed yet. :3 [Roricon!]→ [Lolicon!]
ah I think adding this slider would be better for the circle jumps behind :33!!

Maybe just my opinion but I think Rorikon is cuter than Lolicon xD
ts8zs
我感觉现在这个背景依旧很糟糕……来条圣光怎么样……
Topic Starter
Awaken

ts8zs wrote:

我感觉现在这个背景依旧很糟糕……来条圣光怎么样……
有些俗气
Trust
Re, no kd of course.

[General]

  1. Uncheck widescreen on Rainbow's Normal.
[Rainbow's Normal]

  1. 01:45:483 (4,5) - Spacing jump between these remains unchanged. Keep it consistent with distance snap.
[rsk's Hard]

  1. HP -1. It's currently the same as Rorikon! (which is why I initially suggested +2 to the Insane).
[Rorikon!]

  1. 00:26:264 (4) - Add a clap.
Topic Starter
Awaken
fixed all :S
Trust
Issues raised by QAT have been taken care of as well as the concerns brought up in my mod.

Let's hope to get this back in qualified soon.

Nemis
Fixed some stuff via IRC. Re-ranked :>
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