forum

Renard - Feel Better

posted
Total Posts
107
show more
Micka
sry but i just made it. i regret ;_;

plus: add tag idm synth and remove tag drum

shitlife

try it its nice i think .-. love u take my stra.. PLS ACCEPT>> :(((((((((((((

its hard diff - ,-

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.Renard - Feel Better.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 512
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15324,29980,44637,48301,62958
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Feel Better
TitleUnicode:Feel Better
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:PeaseMaker
Version:RM
Source:
Tags:breakcore drum lapfox trax queenston vulpvibe records drum n bass dnb blue dragon nogard
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:187298

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"meow.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
742,229.007633587786,4,2,0,75,1,0
742,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
15398,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
24215,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
24558,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
30054,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
38871,-200,4,2,0,75,0,1
39215,-200,4,2,0,75,0,1
39315,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
44482,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
44711,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,75,0,0
45169,-153.846153846153,4,2,0,75,0,0
45627,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
48146,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
63032,-200,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 171,171,171
Combo2 : 132,145,179
Combo3 : 197,164,154

[HitObjects]
88,120,512,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,232,742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,224,971,2,0,P|208:232|172:204,1,85
328,64,1429,2,0,P|264:72|228:168,1,170
384,116,2116,2,0,B|412:84|400:40|400:40|424:4|496:12,1,170
424,184,2803,2,0,P|372:196|332:180,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,3719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,292,3948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,4177,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,264,4406,2,0,L|168:268,1,85
180,116,4864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,5093,2,0,B|56:180|24:216|24:216|0:168|8:136,1,170
180,116,5780,2,0,P|224:192|184:264,1,170
256,160,6467,2,0,P|304:168|344:148,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,136,7383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,244,7612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,7841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,7955,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,8070,2,0,L|180:308,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,8757,2,0,B|132:228|108:268|108:268|64:256|56:192,1,170
196,152,9444,2,0,B|252:164|260:216|260:216|292:196|336:204,1,170
220,80,10131,2,0,P|172:80|132:108,1,85
56,116,10589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,116,11047,6,0,B|60:176|60:176|76:220|76:220|80:288,1,170
156,252,11619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,324,11734,2,0,L|284:336,1,85
376,332,12192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,240,12421,2,0,L|220:256,1,170
240,120,13108,2,0,L|428:136,1,170
256,36,13795,6,0,B|168:36|156:112|156:112|80:92|40:152,2,255,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,112,15398,6,0,L|288:208,1,85
384,280,15627,2,0,L|376:164,1,85
284,204,15856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,324,15971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,324,16028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,324,16085,6,0,P|224:320|184:336,1,85
96,276,16314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,256,16371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,240,16429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,16486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,16543,6,0,P|108:172|92:120,1,85
224,40,16772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,204,16887,2,0,L|288:252,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,48,17116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,17230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,17287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,256,17344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,17459,6,0,P|356:168|256:132,1,170
239,124,17745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,120,17802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,124,17859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,137,17916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,18032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,300,18146,5,0,0:0:0:0:
163,292,18203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,293,18260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,292,18317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,297,18375,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,18490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,18547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,18604,6,0,L|312:324,1,85
416,76,18833,2,0,L|412:200,1,85
304,131,19062,2,0,L|308:216,1,85
304,232,19234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,244,19291,6,0,P|268:248|224:288,1,85
96,208,19520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,19635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,270,19749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,19864,2,0,L|88:112,1,85
360,320,20093,2,0,L|368:216,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,20322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,168,20436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,20493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,182,20550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,183,20607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,181,20665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,20780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,20894,2,0,P|80:232|72:168,1,85
98,21,21123,2,0,P|135:41|152:80,1,85
256,56,21352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,21467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,168,21581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,21696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,21810,6,0,L|136:296,1,85
304,216,22039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,212,22096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,209,22153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,22268,6,0,L|328:312,1,85
504,240,22497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,22612,2,0,P|328:112|312:88,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,22841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,56,22955,2,0,P|365:45|345:41,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,104,23184,6,0,P|216:112|160:80,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,16,23413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,37,23528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,53,23585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,23642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,93,23700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,114,23757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,133,23814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,152,23871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,23929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
54,180,23986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,184,24043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,184,24215,6,0,L|36:224,1,21.25
72,336,24329,2,0,L|76:360,1,21.25
140,216,24444,2,0,L|144:240,1,21.25
208,296,24558,2,0,L|312:288,1,85
432,224,24787,2,0,L|328:232,1,85
272,128,25016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
259,145,25073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,158,25130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,167,25187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,172,25245,2,0,P|192:192|164:216,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,25474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,244,25531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,265,25588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,286,25645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,308,25703,6,0,P|196:340|216:344,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,344,25932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,335,25989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,335,26046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,342,26103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,348,26161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,345,26218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,337,26275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,322,26332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,300,26390,6,0,L|404:188,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,26619,2,0,L|324:48,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,26848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,164,26963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,288,27077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,27192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,156,27306,6,0,B|108:104|108:104|112:72|112:72|104:16,2,127.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,156,27707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,156,27764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,27879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,68,27993,2,0,P|352:100|364:124,1,85
244,196,28222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,28337,2,0,P|144:296|132:272,1,85
243,197,28566,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,248,28680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,114,28795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,280,28909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,146,29024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,146,29253,5,0,0:0:0:0:
302,114,29367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,29482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,29596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,56,29711,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,172,29825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,288,29940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,30054,6,0,P|224:256|272:216,1,127.5
272,140,30283,2,0,L|296:244,1,85
291,222,30455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,222,30512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,344,30627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,280,30741,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,260,30798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,239,30855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,218,30912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,197,30971,2,0,L|425:129,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,136,31200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,142,31257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,144,31314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,139,31371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,31429,6,0,L|288:140,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,148,31658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,158,31715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,163,31772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,163,31829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,176,31887,6,0,L|208:276,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,332,32116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,32230,2,0,L|121:139,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,32459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,32574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,32688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,32745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,32803,6,0,P|148:32|104:52,1,85
64,120,33032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,100,33146,2,0,P|280:104|324:84,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,188,33375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,33490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,174,33547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,169,33604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,161,33661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,33719,6,0,P|152:204|160:268,1,85
224,356,33948,2,0,P|248:320|240:256,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,264,34119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,34177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,216,34291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,348,34406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,216,34520,6,0,P|80:168|92:120,1,85
176,64,34749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,67,34806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,67,34863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,67,34920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,34978,6,0,L|356:64,1,85
420,120,35207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,35322,2,0,L|212:152,1,85
96,196,35551,6,0,P|84:148|100:108,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,35780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,36009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,36123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,344,36238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,356,36352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,36467,6,0,B|216:204|216:204|204:156,1,85
272,92,36696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,36810,2,0,B|277:283|277:283|281:323,1,85
352,192,37039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,174,37096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,164,37153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,164,37210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,173,37268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,167,37325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,157,37383,6,0,L|112:168,1,85
32,44,37612,2,0,L|115:54,1,85
228,72,37841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,64,37898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,37955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,100,38070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,38184,6,0,P|284:292|308:344,1,85
380,184,38413,2,0,P|384:132|360:80,1,85
204,104,38642,2,0,P|200:156|224:208,1,85
208,188,38986,2,0,L|180:192,1,21.25
168,264,39101,2,0,L|136:268,1,21.25
200,340,39215,5,0,0:0:0:0:
229,328,39272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,340,39329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,334,39386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,329,39444,6,0,L|412:340,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,39673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,232,39787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,39902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,40016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,236,40131,6,0,L|172:248,1,85
116,172,40360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,86,40474,2,0,L|284:96,1,85
304,104,40646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,110,40703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,109,40760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,113,40817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,40932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,41047,5,0,0:0:0:0:
247,226,41104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,235,41161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,243,41218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,247,41276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,254,41333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,244,41390,6,0,L|24:248,1,85
37,247,41562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,247,41619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,41734,2,0,L|232:156,1,85
136,84,41963,2,0,B|84:96|68:140|68:140|40:128|8:172,2,127.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,42421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,42535,6,0,P|304:104|300:0,1,170
248,136,42879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,155,42936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,174,42993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,194,43050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,213,43108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,43222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,247,43337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,308,43451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,214,43566,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,305,43680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,163,43795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,71,43909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,43967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,68,44024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,72,44081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,68,44138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,44196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,44253,6,0,B|280:60|280:60|272:72|272:72|360:68,1,170
244,216,44711,6,0,B|184:216|184:216|188:208|188:208|124:208,1,127.500004863739
312,264,45169,6,0,B|364:264|364:264|356:272|356:272|426:272,1,110.499994941712
208,316,45627,6,0,L|120:320,1,85
84,108,48146,6,0,L|92:204,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,48604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,48833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,49062,2,0,B|166:80|166:80|216:92|260:48,1,170
88,52,49749,2,0,L|100:228,1,170
172,156,50436,2,0,L|180:248,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,148,51352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,51581,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,51810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,156,52039,2,0,B|368:100|320:60|320:60|392:44,1,170
272,128,52726,2,0,P|216:160|128:112,1,170
204,80,53413,2,0,L|188:264,1,170
284,300,54100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,54329,6,0,P|384:220|424:204,1,85
420,88,54787,2,0,P|368:76|328:92,1,85
252,152,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,88,55474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,55589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,116,55703,6,0,L|136:216,1,85
208,244,56161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,200,56390,2,0,B|60:248|60:248|20:304|64:360,1,170
252,328,57077,2,0,P|192:356|116:292,1,170
260,256,57764,2,0,P|308:280|328:320,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,212,58451,6,0,P|148:200|112:152,1,85
136,56,58909,2,0,P|168:68|204:116,1,85
276,80,59253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,44,59367,6,0,L|356:228,1,170
256,356,60054,2,0,L|264:172,1,170
360,64,60741,2,0,L|368:248,1,170
256,192,61257,12,0,63032,0:0:0:0:
Micka
.
NiceWolf4
Привет.
  • [Hard]
    В целом эта диффа мне понравилась, но я не очень понял твое хаотичное расположение финиш-хитсаундов в тихих частях(начало и конец). Я бы хотел предложить вставлять финиш на начало предложения песни. Да, я туго объясняю сейчас покажу на примере:
    Пример
    1. 00:03:032 - убираем финиш тут.
    2. 00:04:177 - ^
    3. 00:05:093 - ^
    4. 00:06:925 - ^
    5. 00:07:612 - ^
    6. 00:14:024 - ^
    7. 00:04:406 - ставим финиш тут.
    8. 00:08:070 - ^
    9. 00:13:566 - ^
    Что-то вроде такого. Может тебе это чем-то поможет и ты возьмешь все или часть на вооружение :)
    • [Insane]
  1. 00:03:489 (4) - Убрал бы эту ноту.
  2. 00:51:123 (4) - ^
  3. 00:58:451 (4) - ^
  4. 00:27:478 - Поставить здесь ноту и сделать что-то вроде такого? http://puu.sh/9SafZ/1db0fc67a0.jpg
Был рад, если смог помочь. Удачи в маппинге!
Topic Starter
Quashqai

NiceWolf4 wrote:

Привет.
  • [Hard]
    В целом эта диффа мне понравилась, но я не очень понял твое хаотичное расположение финиш-хитсаундов в тихих частях(начало и конец). Я бы хотел предложить вставлять финиш на начало предложения песни. Да, я туго объясняю сейчас покажу на примере:
    Пример
    1. 00:03:032 - убираем финиш тут.
    2. 00:04:177 - ^
    3. 00:05:093 - ^
    4. 00:06:925 - ^
    5. 00:07:612 - ^
    6. 00:14:024 - ^
    7. 00:04:406 - ставим финиш тут.
    8. 00:08:070 - ^
    9. 00:13:566 - ^
    Что-то вроде такого. Может тебе это чем-то поможет и ты возьмешь все или часть на вооружение :)
    • [Insane]
  1. 00:03:489 (4) - Убрал бы эту ноту.
  2. 00:51:123 (4) - ^
  3. 00:58:451 (4) - ^
  4. 00:27:478 - Поставить здесь ноту и сделать что-то вроде такого? http://puu.sh/9SafZ/1db0fc67a0.jpg
Был рад, если смог помочь. Удачи в маппинге!
Спасибо. Пофикшено всё кроме последнего.
Micka
i thought cant make diff? whys there ends extra? ;_;
wetdog123
This mod is either gonna be shit or really critical and rude. I'll try my best.

I got mad trying to mod this.

check your inbox mate
blaterwolf

RenzMichael wrote:

i thought cant make diff? whys there ends extra? ;_;
Renz... Please Nogard X Ends Please :v

call AngelHoney Please :v (or Lan)
Natteke desu
[ OxyDian ]
EASY

00:22:726 - Add a easy pattern in order not to become repetitive map
01:03:032 - end here and add to map the spin at the end for example here 01:03:032 -

NORMAL

00:13:795 - for not to attempt to map this part?
00:49:978 - try putting a normal pattern that goes to the beat
01:01:429 - as I said at the end of difficulty easy

HARD

00:14:367 - this spin will cause trouble to many people replace it with a slider
00:55:703 - you may want to add a pattern to change a bit map style

INSANE

00:37:611 (2) - careful you do a jump with these notes
01:02:001 - could end up with a slider in the shape of a star and then the stream

Exstra

00:55:245 - you could add a pattern for a change

IS MY FIRST MOD
good luck is a good map!! :D
DakeDekaane
Soon™

Only rhythm check as requested.

[Insane]
00:40:990 (1) - Remove this note, the stream should begin in the white tick.
00:42:192 (2) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it matches better the music.
00:43:795 (1) - Music has only 1/2 beats here so better make it a 1/2 slider or 2 circles.

[Extra]
00:16:142 (7) - This note shouldn't be here imo.
00:17:230 (1,2) - Correct rhythm

00:19:062 (1) - 1/2 slider matches better the music.
00:22:726 (1) - ^
00:23:470 (5,7) - These notes shouldn't be here as there's only 1/2 beats there, better put a 5-note stream in 00:23:184.
00:24:100 (1) - 1/2 slider here.
00:25:245 (6) - Remove 1 repeat here.
00:25:760 (4) - Remove this note too, the music pattern goes in 5-note streams, not a full stream
00:27:306 (1) - Maybe use a 1/2 slider here + a circle in the 1/4 beat, it'll follow better the main rhythm, as you did in previous spots.
00:27:650 (4) - 1/2 slider.
00:31:886 (1,2) - ^
00:33:718 (1) - ^
00:34:005 (3) - Remove this note.
00:34:692 (5) - ^
00:36:237 (4) - The music here has only 1/2 beats.
00:36:925 (4) - 1/2 slider.
00:38:299 (1,2) - ^
00:39:272 (2,4) - Remove these ones too.
00:41:447 (5,9) - Same as I said a bit before, music goes in 5-note streams, not a full stream, better remove these two.
00:42:421 (3,4) - 2 circles in 1/2 would work better here.
00:43:165 (3,5) - Remove these ones too.

I feel like some other notes are missing, maybe because you misplaced some 5-note streams, I may be wrong though, but I suggest adding some notes more (if possible) in:
00:16:944 -
00:41:104 -
00:42:135 -

Also it'd be better if you make your Normal a bit harder, the gap is quite big imo (1.57 N -> 3.15 H). In Hard you use a lot of 1/2 rhythm, but in Normal you barely use 1/1 rhythm, introduce more of them, don't be afraid of making it a bit harder, songs calls for a hardish mapset after all.

Good luck.
Topic Starter
Quashqai
Thanks you so much! Fixed all. Recheck rhythm. Update*
Sieg
Hello

General:
mp3 bitrate is 320kbps is unrankable, muct be max at 192 kbps, don't forget to recheck offset after changing mp3

Ends' Extra:
tags are inconsistent with other diffs
disable "widescreen support"
OD is way too low for top tier diff and AR 9.5 consider OD 8
00:16:658 (5) - end on 00:16:829 is wrong, according to music you should end it on 16:772
00:18:490 (3) - end is misplaced on emphasized note, should be something like it follows music better
00:22:096 () - also i don't like that you random skip some of beats
00:36:467 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:40:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's kinda strange that you use absolutely different rhythms on identical music parts
00:36:753 (2) - placed wrong your rhythm in 00:40:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) represent that part much better
in general this diff rhythms is a weak spot and require a bit more work\mods

Nogard's Extra:
00:18:604 (2) - your slider end here on emphasized note and start is not, generally this is not a good idea can work better
00:19:062 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - sounds off, should it be like e.g. 00:19:978 (2) - "long" sound starts on 20:093 ends on 00:20:207
00:28:337 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -^ that part also
00:33:147 (2,3) - try ctrl+g, follows rhythm better
00:38:184 (3,4,5) - ^
seems like you were not pay much attention to the rhythm while mapping :\

Extra:
sudden normal whistles... uh... but addictive somehow
HP 7.5 seems high, you should let players to miss some time also it's easier to die on calm parts, 6-6.5 will be better
00:17:230 (1,2) - should they end on reds?
00:31:886 (1,2) - ^
00:37:153 (5) - ^
best extra over here, good work

Insane:
check slider ends 00:18:833 (4) -
00:40:474 (2) -

rest seems fine but as DakeDekaane said you should deal somehow with gap between Hard and Normal

good luck!
Churcheell
Hi!

-----

Normal

00:13:795 - You can put a spinner in here

Hard

00:18:948 Could use a little distance between these two sliders, makes it a bit hard to read
00:49:749 Drag this slider down a bit, the overlap seems weird to me
01:00:054 Same here

Extra

OD 8.5 me thinks
Sognux
Tried to mod this, this is my first mod so don't be to hard on me! :)

Didnt find anything that really bothered me on the Normal, Hard and the Insane difficulty.

Extra: 00:23:184 - Had a hard time to react to it since it's such a small slider and got 2 hit circles immediatly after it, change it if possible :P

Almost killed myself while playing Nogard's Extra :(
Hate this part with my whole heart: 00:18:146 - I do not approve of sliders at the same place
Also had a hard time reacting to this: 00:20:894 - Didnt like those spaced jumps >:(
00:36:009 - I think these 4 jumps are abit too spaced. (Might be good for a Extra diff but i didnt like 'em)
00:38:184 (3) - Maybe change it's position to x: 352 y: 232 Prev: 1,37x Next: 1,84x

End's Extra
00:21:009 - abit smaller jump from that to the next note if possible? ;)
00:24:787 (2) - I think you should change the position to x:88 y:280 Prev: 1,92x Next: 0,98x

These are all the thing that i didnt quite like with these difficulties, change them if possible! :P Might just be me who's a complete noob at this game but oh well! ^^
As i said, this is my first mod EVER so don't be to harsh if i didnt do a good job. Also hoping that this beatmap will get ranked sometime soon, really liked it! :D
Mismagius
I may remap my diff. This one is really old and not that good lol
Topic Starter
Quashqai

Blue Dragon wrote:

I may remap my diff. This one is really old and not that good lol
lol, remap if u want. It will be good, because you can make new diff more awesomeness!
Mismagius
remap
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.Renard - Feel Better.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 512
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: -2,15348,44637
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Feel Better
TitleUnicode:Feel Better
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:PeaseMaker
Version:Nogard's Extra
Source:
Tags:breakcore drum lapfox trax queenston vulpvibe records drum n bass dnb blue dragon nogard priti foreverends
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"meow.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,44682,47621
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
742,229.007633587786,4,2,0,75,1,0
742,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
15398,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
30054,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
44482,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
48072,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
62574,-200,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 248,171,67
Combo2 : 255,111,62
Combo3 : 152,35,14
Combo4 : 227,200,87

[HitObjects]
152,164,512,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,164,742,2,0,P|228:156|300:236,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,1429,2,0,P|180:332|108:252,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,176,2116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,72,2574,6,0,P|440:68|472:44,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,28,3261,2,0,P|304:76|244:200,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,232,3948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,124,4177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,300,4406,6,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,344,4864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,5093,2,0,P|400:168|460:84,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,181,5780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,36,6238,6,0,P|244:60|188:60,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,28,6696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,88,6925,2,0,P|20:185|88:240,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,260,7612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,156,7841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,8070,6,0,P|173:348|217:342,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,272,8528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,380,8757,2,0,L|192:228,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,9444,2,0,L|400:244,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,320,10131,5,0,0:0:0:0:
476,184,10360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,376,10589,2,0,P|308:380|244:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,11276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,116,11505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,11734,6,0,P|48:140|0:128,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,36,12421,2,0,L|336:64,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,13108,2,0,P|424:140|496:232,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,288,15398,6,0,P|84:244|104:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,15627,2,0,P|256:324|236:368,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,380,15856,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,184,15971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,16028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,16085,1,0,0:3:0:0:
392,308,16200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,16257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,312,16314,6,0,P|484:308|512:288,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,220,16543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,140,16658,2,0,P|488:88|464:52,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,16887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,16944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,17001,2,0,L|272:56,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,17230,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,112,17287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,17345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,17459,1,4,0:0:0:0:
40,348,17688,5,2,0:0:0:0:
28,312,17745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,276,17803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,240,17860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,216,17917,2,0,L|40:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,18146,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,308,18203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,18261,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,296,18318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,272,18375,2,0,P|284:228|268:168,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,20,18604,2,0,P|196:64|212:124,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,356,18833,1,4,0:0:0:0:
408,72,19062,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,204,19177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,24,19291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,256,19406,2,4,P|340:264|296:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,19635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,288,19749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,304,19864,2,0,L|8:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,64,20093,6,0,L|144:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,368,20322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,152,20436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,152,20493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,152,20551,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,224,20665,2,0,P|356:220|392:196,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,20894,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,164,21009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,368,21123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,324,21238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,21352,2,0,P|136:304|144:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,21581,2,0,P|440:176|432:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,60,21810,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,224,21925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,80,22039,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,56,22096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,44,22154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,40,22211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,22268,2,0,P|344:56|292:36,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,20,22497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,52,22554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,22612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,116,22669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,148,22726,6,0,P|80:160|32:148,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,48,22955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,48,23012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,48,23070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,23184,2,0,L|32:348,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,368,23356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,368,23413,2,0,P|80:360|112:372,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,23642,6,0,P|208:280|208:256,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,284,23757,2,0,P|284:253|274:231,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,23871,2,0,P|340:195|323:178,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,144,23986,2,0,P|375:123|353:114,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,24100,2,0,P|284:60|300:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,16,24329,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,80,24444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,24558,6,0,L|484:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,24787,2,0,L|280:12,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,25016,2,0,P|132:236|104:236,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,136,25131,2,0,P|58:135|80:131,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,256,25245,2,0,P|132:261|106:272,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,120,25360,2,0,P|56:110|75:98,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,40,25474,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,32,25532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,25589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,25646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,88,25703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,196,25818,2,0,L|232:240,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,300,25932,2,0,L|308:256,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,26047,5,2,0:0:0:0:
484,356,26161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,356,26219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,356,26276,2,0,L|496:312,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,240,26390,6,4,L|492:148,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,48,26619,1,6,0:0:0:0:
456,48,26677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,48,26734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,92,26848,2,0,P|312:104|272:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,68,27077,2,0,P|88:56|128:64,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,27306,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,188,27421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,220,27478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,27535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,292,27593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,320,27650,2,0,L|224:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,376,27879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,299,27993,2,0,L|488:287,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,252,28222,6,0,P|300:204|316:152,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,28451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,57,28566,2,0,P|209:105|193:157,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,105,28795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,28909,2,4,L|408:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,29138,2,4,L|405:157,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,29367,2,4,L|343:283,2,90,2|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,105,29825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,56,30054,6,0,P|468:104|464:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,220,30283,2,0,P|383:265|395:308,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,256,30512,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,132,30627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,30684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,30741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,348,30856,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,356,30913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,356,30971,2,0,L|160:344,2,45,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,31200,2,0,L|308:208,2,45,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,226,31371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,226,31429,2,0,P|170:178|174:138,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,104,31600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,72,31658,2,0,L|104:52,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,168,31887,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,288,32001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,124,32116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,331,32230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,32345,2,0,L|60:4,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,32574,2,0,L|332:172,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,32803,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,108,32917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,33032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,33146,2,0,P|284:332|300:376,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,33375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,33489,2,0,P|196:124|180:80,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,33719,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,244,33833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,33948,2,0,L|300:168,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,168,34119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,34177,2,0,P|364:204|364:212,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,68,34406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,36,34520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,132,34635,6,0,L|496:236,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,248,34806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,284,34864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,316,34921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,34978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,376,35093,2,0,L|272:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,35322,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,32,35551,6,0,P|88:48|132:40,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,35780,2,0,P|188:128|144:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,168,36009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,36,36123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,260,36238,2,0,P|84:308|96:356,1,90
52,168,36467,2,0,L|0:92,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,36810,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,260,36867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,36925,2,0,P|304:260|368:284,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,296,37096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,328,37154,2,0,L|460:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,48,37383,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,88,37497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,37612,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,4,37726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,37841,2,0,P|320:184|276:172,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,100,38070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,38184,6,0,P|64:184|92:308,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,38528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,272,38642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,344,38757,2,0,L|416:368,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,38986,2,0,L|164:172,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,39215,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,160,39329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,60,39444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,16,39558,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,60,39673,6,0,P|128:68|84:60,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,4,39902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,164,40016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,92,40131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,252,40245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,332,40360,2,0,L|292:320,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,280,40589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,280,40646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,292,40703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,320,40761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,360,40818,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41047,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41276,2,0,L|404:88,1,45
380,148,41390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,41505,2,0,P|248:40|232:44,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,41619,2,0,P|148:92|132:88,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,41734,2,0,L|44:140,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,300,41963,6,0,P|52:300|68:296,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,42077,2,0,P|152:248|168:252,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,292,42192,2,0,L|312:312,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,368,42421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,260,42535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,42650,2,0,P|280:132|296:72,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,56,42879,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,176,42993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,43051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,43108,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,120,43222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,112,43337,2,0,L|40:128,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,220,43566,2,0,P|88:276|104:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,43795,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,268,43909,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,320,44024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,316,44081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,44138,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,336,44196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,364,44253,2,2,L|488:256,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,44482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,64,48146,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,48375,2,0,P|144:56|196:128,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,49062,2,0,P|148:232|96:160,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,49749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,48,50207,6,0,P|436:48|476:32,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,28,50894,2,0,P|204:32|128:108,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,51581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,188,51810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,136,52039,6,0,P|12:112|28:48,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,52726,2,0,P|80:316|24:349,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,244,53413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,216,53871,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,140,54100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,54329,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,320,54558,2,0,P|308:344|204:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,55245,2,0,L|168:128,1,90
196,36,55703,6,0,P|144:24|96:40,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,56390,2,0,P|348:128|446:67,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,19,57077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,184,57535,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,272,57764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,356,57993,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,268,58222,2,0,P|316:208|272:100,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,58909,2,0,L|100:88,1,90
8,124,59367,6,0,P|0:64|16:20,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,200,60054,2,0,L|0:372,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,60741,2,0,L|196:180,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61314,12,0,62574,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Quashqai

Blue Dragon wrote:

remap
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.Renard - Feel Better.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 512
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: -2,15348,44637
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Feel Better
TitleUnicode:Feel Better
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:PeaseMaker
Version:Nogard's Extra
Source:
Tags:breakcore drum lapfox trax queenston vulpvibe records drum n bass dnb blue dragon nogard priti foreverends
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"meow.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,44682,47621
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
742,229.007633587786,4,2,0,75,1,0
742,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
15398,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
30054,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
44482,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
48072,-200,4,2,0,75,0,0
62574,-200,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 248,171,67
Combo2 : 255,111,62
Combo3 : 152,35,14
Combo4 : 227,200,87

[HitObjects]
152,164,512,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,164,742,2,0,P|228:156|300:236,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,1429,2,0,P|180:332|108:252,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,176,2116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,72,2574,6,0,P|440:68|472:44,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,28,3261,2,0,P|304:76|244:200,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,232,3948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,124,4177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,300,4406,6,0,L|352:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,344,4864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,5093,2,0,P|400:168|460:84,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,181,5780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,36,6238,6,0,P|244:60|188:60,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,28,6696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,88,6925,2,0,P|20:185|88:240,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,260,7612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,156,7841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,8070,6,0,P|173:348|217:342,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,272,8528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,380,8757,2,0,L|192:228,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,9444,2,0,L|400:244,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,320,10131,5,0,0:0:0:0:
476,184,10360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,376,10589,2,0,P|308:380|244:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,11276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,116,11505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,11734,6,0,P|48:140|0:128,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,36,12421,2,0,L|336:64,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,13108,2,0,P|424:140|496:232,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,288,15398,6,0,P|84:244|104:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,15627,2,0,P|256:324|236:368,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,380,15856,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,184,15971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,16028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,16085,1,0,0:3:0:0:
392,308,16200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,16257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,312,16314,6,0,P|484:308|512:288,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,220,16543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,140,16658,2,0,P|488:88|464:52,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,16887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,16944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,17001,2,0,L|272:56,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,17230,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,112,17287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,17345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,17459,1,4,0:0:0:0:
40,348,17688,5,2,0:0:0:0:
28,312,17745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,276,17803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,240,17860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,216,17917,2,0,L|40:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,18146,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,308,18203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,18261,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,296,18318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,272,18375,2,0,P|284:228|268:168,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,20,18604,2,0,P|196:64|212:124,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,356,18833,1,4,0:0:0:0:
408,72,19062,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,204,19177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,24,19291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,256,19406,2,4,P|340:264|296:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,19635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,288,19749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,304,19864,2,0,L|8:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,64,20093,6,0,L|144:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,368,20322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,152,20436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,152,20493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,152,20551,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,224,20665,2,0,P|356:220|392:196,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,20894,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,164,21009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,368,21123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,324,21238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,21352,2,0,P|136:304|144:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,21581,2,0,P|440:176|432:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,60,21810,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,224,21925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,80,22039,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,56,22096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,44,22154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,40,22211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,22268,2,0,P|344:56|292:36,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,20,22497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,52,22554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,22612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,116,22669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,148,22726,6,0,P|80:160|32:148,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,48,22955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,48,23012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,48,23070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,23184,2,0,L|32:348,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,368,23356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,368,23413,2,0,P|80:360|112:372,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,23642,6,0,P|208:280|208:256,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,284,23757,2,0,P|284:253|274:231,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,23871,2,0,P|340:195|323:178,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,144,23986,2,0,P|375:123|353:114,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,24100,2,0,P|284:60|300:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,16,24329,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,80,24444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,24558,6,0,L|484:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,24787,2,0,L|280:12,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,25016,2,0,P|132:236|104:236,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,136,25131,2,0,P|58:135|80:131,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,256,25245,2,0,P|132:261|106:272,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,120,25360,2,0,P|56:110|75:98,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,40,25474,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,32,25532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,25589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,25646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,88,25703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,196,25818,2,0,L|232:240,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,300,25932,2,0,L|308:256,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,26047,5,2,0:0:0:0:
484,356,26161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,356,26219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,356,26276,2,0,L|496:312,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,240,26390,6,4,L|492:148,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,48,26619,1,6,0:0:0:0:
456,48,26677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,48,26734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,92,26848,2,0,P|312:104|272:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,68,27077,2,0,P|88:56|128:64,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,27306,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,188,27421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,220,27478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,27535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,292,27593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,320,27650,2,0,L|224:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,376,27879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,299,27993,2,0,L|488:287,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,252,28222,6,0,P|300:204|316:152,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,28451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,57,28566,2,0,P|209:105|193:157,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,105,28795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,28909,2,4,L|408:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,29138,2,4,L|405:157,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,29367,2,4,L|343:283,2,90,2|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,105,29825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,56,30054,6,0,P|468:104|464:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,220,30283,2,0,P|383:265|395:308,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,256,30512,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,132,30627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,30684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,30741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,348,30856,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,356,30913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,356,30971,2,0,L|160:344,2,45,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,31200,2,0,L|308:208,2,45,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,226,31371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,226,31429,2,0,P|170:178|174:138,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,104,31600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,72,31658,2,0,L|104:52,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,168,31887,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,288,32001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,124,32116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,331,32230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,32345,2,0,L|60:4,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,32574,2,0,L|332:172,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,32803,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,108,32917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,33032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,33146,2,0,P|284:332|300:376,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,33375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,33489,2,0,P|196:124|180:80,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,33719,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,244,33833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,33948,2,0,L|300:168,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,168,34119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,34177,2,0,P|364:204|364:212,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,68,34406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,36,34520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,132,34635,6,0,L|496:236,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,248,34806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,284,34864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,316,34921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,34978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,376,35093,2,0,L|272:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,35322,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,32,35551,6,0,P|88:48|132:40,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,35780,2,0,P|188:128|144:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,168,36009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,36,36123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,260,36238,2,0,P|84:308|96:356,1,90
52,168,36467,2,0,L|0:92,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,36810,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,260,36867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,36925,2,0,P|304:260|368:284,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,296,37096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,328,37154,2,0,L|460:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,48,37383,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,88,37497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,37612,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,4,37726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,37841,2,0,P|320:184|276:172,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,100,38070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,38184,6,0,P|64:184|92:308,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,38528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,272,38642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,344,38757,2,0,L|416:368,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,38986,2,0,L|164:172,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,39215,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,160,39329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,60,39444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,16,39558,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,60,39673,6,0,P|128:68|84:60,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,4,39902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,164,40016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,92,40131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,252,40245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,332,40360,2,0,L|292:320,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,280,40589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,280,40646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,292,40703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,320,40761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,360,40818,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41047,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,41276,2,0,L|404:88,1,45
380,148,41390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,41505,2,0,P|248:40|232:44,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,41619,2,0,P|148:92|132:88,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,41734,2,0,L|44:140,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,300,41963,6,0,P|52:300|68:296,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,42077,2,0,P|152:248|168:252,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,292,42192,2,0,L|312:312,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,368,42421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,260,42535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,42650,2,0,P|280:132|296:72,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,56,42879,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,176,42993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,43051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,43108,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,120,43222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,112,43337,2,0,L|40:128,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,220,43566,2,0,P|88:276|104:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,43795,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,268,43909,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,320,44024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,316,44081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,44138,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,336,44196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,364,44253,2,2,L|488:256,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,44482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,64,48146,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,48375,2,0,P|144:56|196:128,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,49062,2,0,P|148:232|96:160,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,49749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,48,50207,6,0,P|436:48|476:32,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,28,50894,2,0,P|204:32|128:108,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,51581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,188,51810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,136,52039,6,0,P|12:112|28:48,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,52726,2,0,P|80:316|24:349,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,244,53413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,216,53871,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,140,54100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,54329,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,320,54558,2,0,P|308:344|204:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,55245,2,0,L|168:128,1,90
196,36,55703,6,0,P|144:24|96:40,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,56390,2,0,P|348:128|446:67,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,19,57077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,184,57535,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,272,57764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,356,57993,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,268,58222,2,0,P|316:208|272:100,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,58909,2,0,L|100:88,1,90
8,124,59367,6,0,P|0:64|16:20,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,200,60054,2,0,L|0:372,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,60741,2,0,L|196:180,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61314,12,0,62574,0:0:0:0:

WOW. so fast!
jesse1412
[extra]

00:23:184 (3,4,5) - I dislike this, coming out of a hold slider like that onto 2 1/4's doesn't feel good.
00:43:222 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - I don't like this entire pattern, it's just incredibly awkward.

[ends' extra]

00:23:527 (2,1) - Maybe reduce this jump a little, feels a little to odd right now, the sliders work fine though.
00:25:703 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Awkward pattern.
00:40:818 (6,1) - Dislike this anti jump.

[nogard's extra]

00:17:459 (4) - Move this note closer to 00:17:688 (1) - , feels weird right now.
00:25:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - The only thing more awkward than going into this stream is going into these sliders after 00:25:818 (6,7) - , change both please.
00:26:047 (1,2) - Make this jump smaller please.
00:30:856 (1,2,3) - I think this should be a 5 note stream, holding that slider is awkward.
00:31:887 (1,2,3,4) - I would appreciate changing these jumps, I find them awkward.
00:39:902 (2,3,4,5) - Very awkward jumps.
00:41:276 (5,6,7) - This feels very awkward, maybe remove the note and make the first slider a reverse slider?
00:41:734 (9,1) - Jump too big for my liking, really this entire section is just panic mode.

[all diffs]

The intro to this map made me want to kill myself just when testing the map. I'll probably want to kill myself if I ever try to fc it just like image material.
Topic Starter
Quashqai

jesus1412 wrote:

[extra]

00:23:184 (3,4,5) - I dislike this, coming out of a hold slider like that onto 2 1/4's doesn't feel good. It's easy to make all "300". I have fc on that diff.
00:43:222 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - I don't like this entire pattern, it's just incredibly awkward. Yea, fixed



[all diffs]
The intro to this map made me want to kill myself just when testing the map. I'll probably want to kill myself if I ever try to fc it just like image material.
Thanks a lot :)
CrazyrabbitKGE
[Extra]
00:22:211 (4) - 60 132 feels better.
00:23:814 (2,3,4,5,6) - it would be better if they were... like a smooth curve.
00:32:344 (3,4,5,6) - not clean. try moving 4 a bit to the right.

dang, I was surprised by all the extra diff maps. that detail though.

[Insane]
00:11:047 (4) - it would be better to play if that were something other than a stop.
00:44:253 (4) - don't really like those red points...

[Easy]
0:16:772 - you need something here.
0:21:352 - ^
0:25:932 - ^
0:28:680 - ^

that's all, I love everything else.
I'm just gonna keep this beatmap just to see people beating this insane beatmap when it's ranked!
Avena
No, all this undermapping is intentional to make this Easy level considering how fast the song is.
Mismagius
i'll fix it sometime
Topic Starter
Quashqai
I look forward to fixeses nogard. After this i want find BAT for check something wrong placeses | Easy diff so perfect, i think Priti not needed mods
Extra - fixed + some new hitsounds
End's Extra - fixed
Insane - Fixed
Mismagius

jesus1412 wrote:

[nogard's extra]

00:17:459 (4) - Move this note closer to 00:17:688 (1) - , feels weird right now. k
00:25:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - The only thing more awkward than going into this stream is going into these sliders after 00:25:818 (6,7) - , change both please. k
00:26:047 (1,2) - Make this jump smaller please. k
00:30:856 (1,2,3) - I think this should be a 5 note stream, holding that slider is awkward. the problem is that the next part of the combo goes a bit apeshit in the music so this is what i could do
00:31:887 (1,2,3,4) - I would appreciate changing these jumps, I find them awkward. i like them, the high AR helps on reading
00:39:902 (2,3,4,5) - Very awkward jumps. i know about these, but i have no idea on how to do them decently and song-fitting
00:41:276 (5,6,7) - This feels very awkward, maybe remove the note and make the first slider a reverse slider? k
00:41:734 (9,1) - Jump too big for my liking, really this entire section is just panic mode. it's not that hard really
http://puu.sh/aLnpF/bfbe1ae239.osu
Topic Starter
Quashqai
ty~ Updated
Pho
Mod from modding queue~

No need for KD here, this is pretty short.
You should ask for better players/modders/BATs to test/mod this since all I'm able to do is just tapping randomly through your insane+ diffs (and I'm not a real fan of +220bpm songs, I should add this as new rule in my MQ ;-; ).
Your easier diffs are pretty good so far, only thing I want to point out is that the hitsounding from your map is very different vom Priti's one. Shouldn't it be more consistent?

These are ALL suggestions, so no need to put in any of them.

[Hard]
00:41:963 (1,2) - check blanket
00:44:195 (3) - i'd delete this one from the hard map, it's already harder than hard ._.
00:50:894 (4,1) - check the blanket again
00:56:390 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:14:253 (7) - reposition at x:204 y:184
01:01:657 (5) - I'd reposition 5 at x:228 y:108, but just preference in flow

[Extra]
00:03:260 (3,4,5) - I don't really hear an indicator in the music for the jump from 4 -5, wouldn't it make more sense to make a jump on 00:04:005 (5,1) - ?
00:22:726 (1,2) - check blankets again
00:24:558 (1,2) - ^

Good luck! I'm eager to see if you can get this ranked. :)

Greetings,
paseli
Topic Starter
Quashqai

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

No need for KD here, this is pretty short.
You should ask for better players/modders/BATs to test/mod this since all I'm able to do is just tapping randomly through your insane+ diffs (and I'm not a real fan of +220bpm songs, I should add this as new rule in my MQ ;-; ).
Your easier diffs are pretty good so far, only thing I want to point out is that the hitsounding from your map is very different vom Priti's one. Shouldn't it be more consistent?

These are ALL suggestions, so no need to put in any of them.

[Hard]
00:41:963 (1,2) - check blanket - ok
00:44:195 (3) - i'd delete this one from the hard map, it's already harder than hard ._. - yea =)
00:50:894 (4,1) - check the blanket again - fixed
00:56:390 (2,3) - ^ - fixed

[Insane]
00:14:253 (7) - reposition at x:204 y:184 ok, i think it's true
01:01:657 (5) - I'd reposition 5 at x:228 y:108, but just preference in flow yes

[Extra]
00:03:260 (3,4,5) - I don't really hear an indicator in the music for the jump from 4 -5, wouldn't it make more sense to make a jump on 00:04:005 (5,1) - ? - it's easy jump, so ez to see it, [/color]
00:22:726 (1,2) - check blankets again - fixed
00:24:558 (1,2) - ^ - fixed

Good luck! I'm eager to see if you can get this ranked. :)

Greetings,
paseli
Get kd, because mod give me some help.
TicClick
Hey.

[General]
  1. Renard - Feel Better.mp3 is unused, please remove
  2. Any chance you would find the current background in 16:9 aspect ratio? 4:3 is fine, but vast majority of maps has it for widescreens..
  3. All difficulties:
    1. Consider ending kiai on 00:44:253, like Priti did; this is a good moment to it;
    2. Drag the break's beginning @ 00:44:711 so it starts *exactly* on the big white tick. Hover the cursor before the "Break" word, click and move it to the right.
    3. Make the ending spinner more quiet!
    4. Offset +6 (should be 748)
[BD's Extra]
HP +1? Also, lower the very first and last song section's volume by 20%; they are a bit noisy.
  1. 00:15:971 (4,5,6) - I'd use normal sampleset here (also similar moments), such a good addition to soft you use all the time for some reason
  2. 00:25:016 (3,5) - I'd move these up a bit, closer to the previous pair
  3. 00:25:474 (1,5) - these whistles sound just odd; also this is the only time you use them
  4. 00:30:684 (5) - this note feels unneeded and unnecessary, consider removing, because that triplet really sounds like two notes in music
  5. 00:31:887 (1,2,3,4) - consider changing to something like this: http://puu.sh/b71sL/dae490eff1.jpg
  6. 00:40:016 (3,4,5,6) - this movement is awkward and, to be honest, really uncomfortable; change it so that (4) is lower than (5). http://puu.sh/b71xM/418482c2e8.jpg (note I also moved the whole pattern down)
  7. 00:41:963 (1,2,3) - no matter how you like it, I'd strongly recommend you to change it to this, so it follows the music: http://puu.sh/b71Fe/6f98b89c90.jpg There is also a similar moment @ 00:27:306 you may want do something with
  8. 00:43:108 (4,5,6) - isn't the jump too big? I would move it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1964480
[Ends' Extra]
HP +1? Also, lower the very first and last song section's volume by 20%; they are a bit noisy.
  1. 00:04:406 (2) - you should put new combo here, not on the previous note
  2. 00:04:635 (3,4) - remove the jump; it is more fitting between 00:04:864 (4,5)
  3. 00:08:070 (2) - you should put new combo here, not on the previous note
  4. 00:15:971 (4) - I'd use normal sampleset here, just like in BD's Extra.
  5. 00:44:253 (1) - move it a bit to the left to add some extra space between this note and the triplet
  6. 01:01:200 (5) - I'd add a new combo and also whistle
  7. 01:01:314 (1) - finish doesn't fit as there's no sound, please remove it
The calm parts of nearly every of your difficulties are mapped in such a way that most of big white ticks that denote the beginning of a new part in the music can't be hit. In other words, you are supposed to emphasize the vocals. However, you don't map to them, not even to the beat, but only to produce long sliders that end on downbeat. This is incorrect, and I strongly recommend you to go through your difficulties and fix this by shortening the said sliders. If you have troubles finding them, check the new combo markup, because ending a slider on the big white tick breaks it:
Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure.

[Extra]
Your Extra is not any harder than BD's or Foreverends', yet it has higher OD and HP, please reduce them (OD8 and HP7 would be great). And, instead of AR 9.3, you could use either 9 or 9.5 if you feel like it, because decimal values don't matter that much.
  1. The drum hitsounds in the beginning sound odd, as there's no loud and/or clear sound in the music. Could you please remove them and, if you wish, use soft whistles where appropriate? Fix this on each of your difficulties, please, since they all have the same hitsounding pattern.
  2. For the rest of the map, drum whistle sounds unfitting and sort of harsh, compared to the music itself. You could replace all the drum whistles with soft ones, that'll definitely give the better result. Fix this on each of your difficulties, please, since they all have the same hitsounding pattern.
  3. 00:16:314 (1) - should have started this slider at 00:16:200: http://puu.sh/b73Qh/195cf8954c.jpg
  4. 00:18:375 (2,3) - swap these, because the sound that fits the slider starts on the red tick
  5. 00:18:718 (4,5) - same here; you'll have to remap it a little, though
  6. 00:19:863 (1) - make it half as long and start the next slider on the red tick
  7. 00:30:684 (5) - this note feels unneeded and unnecessary, consider removing, because that triplet really sounds like two notes in music
  8. 00:36:810 (3,4) - and again, swap these two due to the same reason
  9. Thinking about that, I recommend you to add finishes only when the singer says "doesn't", like you did in the beginning: 00:04:405 (1) - 00:11:734 (1). Fix this on each of your difficulties, please, since they all have the same hitsounding pattern.
  10. 00:55:131 (2) - remove the note, as there's absolutely no sound in the music it's supposed to be mapped to
  11. 00:55:703 - should have a hit object you could add new combo to, because the slider you have now shadows the downbeat and also breaks the correct new combo markup. Use the above extra difficulties as examples
  12. 00:57:535 - same as above
  13. 00:59:367 - same as above
  14. 01:01:200 (5) - add new combo?
[Insane]
HP -1, this should *not* drain more than extras.
  1. 00:04:406 - the new combo must be there, and your slider with a repeating arrow is what gets in the way. Please, fix this by starting the slider from the big white tick (remove the repeat first and add a missing note @ 00:04:177)
  2. 00:13:108 (4) - please, don't end sliders on big white ticks, since they don't really follow the music. There also must be a new combo
  3. 00:18:375 (2,3) - remove these and map them like 00:18:031 (5,1) to follow the music (note + slider): http://puu.sh/b73iH/117091fc5d.jpg
  4. 00:19:864 (4,1) - swap these two (the same reason)
  5. 00:29:138 (5,6,1) - could be confusing to read; consider moving the note to the right or stack all three objects completely
  6. 00:44:253 (4) - why? This looks unneeded (hilarious, though). Give it a better shape with some space in center (example: http://puu.sh/b73zs/47205984cd.jpg)
  7. 00:50:665 (3,4) - I'd remove finish from their ends
  8. 00:55:245 (1) - make it half as long and put a proper note with new combo on the big white tick; also remove new combo
  9. 01:00:741 (3) - and you skip the very last meaningful measure's downbeat by making the slider end there. Please fix this and apply new combo
[Hard]
Use HP 5.5 if you want decimals, or HP6.
  1. 00:19:749 (4,1) - in music, you can easily recognize the patter I've been pointing out on the higher difficulties. What this is supposed to be: http://puu.sh/b74XR/289527ed44.jpg
  2. 00:23:413 (3,1) - same as above
  3. 00:29:138 (1) - remove the repeat and add it to 00:29:711 (2), moving it 1/2 backwards: http://puu.sh/b752o/4581e1c560.jpg
  4. 00:38:069 (1) - remove the repeat, there should be a note, or a slider starting on the downbeat to let the player hit it
  5. 00:42:879 (1) - I would unstack it for a better playability; this requires moving the whole pattern, though
  6. 00:43:795 (1) - in order to follow the music, this needs to be started 1/2 earlier; you also want a slider at 00:44:024, so the whole combo becomes this: http://puu.sh/b75ca/185e2bbd60.jpg
[Normal]
OD +1
  1. 00:11:734 (2) - add new combo
  2. 00:21:811 (2) - and once again, you run into the same trouble. Please, map downbeats and avoid ending sliders on them.
  3. 00:30:054 - due to lack of hit objects, the whole kiai section sounds loud; reduce the volume a bit, please (10% would do)
Priti's Easy
It's priti easy, also no mistakes whatsoever. You could use a bit higher velocity, though.

Summary: you should have collected more mods before asking me. Good luck with that!
Avena
Ranking process ain't got shit on me.
Topic Starter
Quashqai
TicClick mod
SPOILER

TicClick wrote:

Hey.

[General]
  1. Renard - Feel Better.mp3 is unused, please remove
  2. Any chance you would find the current background in 16:9 aspect ratio? 4:3 is fine, but vast majority of maps has it for widescreens..
  3. All difficulties:
    1. Consider ending kiai on 00:44:253, like Priti did; this is a good moment to it;
    2. Drag the break's beginning @ 00:44:711 so it starts *exactly* on the big white tick. Hover the cursor before the "Break" word, click and move it to the right.
    3. Make the ending spinner more quiet!
    4. Offset +6 (should be 748)
[BD's Extra]
HP +1? Also, lower the very first and last song section's volume by 20%; they are a bit noisy.
  1. 00:15:971 (4,5,6) - I'd use normal sampleset here (also similar moments), such a good addition to soft you use all the time for some reason
  2. 00:25:016 (3,5) - I'd move these up a bit, closer to the previous pair
  3. 00:25:474 (1,5) - these whistles sound just odd; also this is the only time you use them
  4. 00:30:684 (5) - this note feels unneeded and unnecessary, consider removing, because that triplet really sounds like two notes in music
  5. 00:31:887 (1,2,3,4) - consider changing to something like this: http://puu.sh/b71sL/dae490eff1.jpg
  6. 00:40:016 (3,4,5,6) - this movement is awkward and, to be honest, really uncomfortable; change it so that (4) is lower than (5). http://puu.sh/b71xM/418482c2e8.jpg (note I also moved the whole pattern down)
  7. 00:41:963 (1,2,3) - no matter how you like it, I'd strongly recommend you to change it to this, so it follows the music: http://puu.sh/b71Fe/6f98b89c90.jpg There is also a similar moment @ 00:27:306 you may want do something with
  8. 00:43:108 (4,5,6) - isn't the jump too big? I would move it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1964480
[Ends' Extra]
HP +1? Also, lower the very first and last song section's volume by 20%; they are a bit noisy.
  1. 00:04:406 (2) - you should put new combo here, not on the previous note
  2. 00:04:635 (3,4) - remove the jump; it is more fitting between 00:04:864 (4,5)
  3. 00:08:070 (2) - you should put new combo here, not on the previous note
  4. 00:15:971 (4) - I'd use normal sampleset here, just like in BD's Extra.
  5. 00:44:253 (1) - move it a bit to the left to add some extra space between this note and the triplet
  6. 01:01:200 (5) - I'd add a new combo and also whistle
  7. 01:01:314 (1) - finish doesn't fit as there's no sound, please remove it
The calm parts of nearly every of your difficulties are mapped in such a way that most of big white ticks that denote the beginning of a new part in the music can't be hit. In other words, you are supposed to emphasize the vocals. However, you don't map to them, not even to the beat, but only to produce long sliders that end on downbeat. This is incorrect, and I strongly recommend you to go through your difficulties and fix this by shortening the said sliders. If you have troubles finding them, check the new combo markup, because ending a slider on the big white tick breaks it:
Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure.

[Extra]
Your Extra is not any harder than BD's or Foreverends', yet it has higher OD and HP, please reduce them (OD8 and HP7 would be great). And, instead of AR 9.3, you could use either 9 or 9.5 if you feel like it, because decimal values don't matter that much.
  1. The drum hitsounds in the beginning sound odd, as there's no loud and/or clear sound in the music. Could you please remove them and, if you wish, use soft whistles where appropriate? Fix this on each of your difficulties, please, since they all have the same hitsounding pattern.
  2. For the rest of the map, drum whistle sounds unfitting and sort of harsh, compared to the music itself. You could replace all the drum whistles with soft ones, that'll definitely give the better result. Fix this on each of your difficulties, please, since they all have the same hitsounding pattern.
  3. 00:16:314 (1) - should have started this slider at 00:16:200: http://puu.sh/b73Qh/195cf8954c.jpg
  4. 00:18:375 (2,3) - swap these, because the sound that fits the slider starts on the red tick
  5. 00:18:718 (4,5) - same here; you'll have to remap it a little, though
  6. 00:19:863 (1) - make it half as long and start the next slider on the red tick
  7. 00:30:684 (5) - this note feels unneeded and unnecessary, consider removing, because that triplet really sounds like two notes in music
  8. 00:36:810 (3,4) - and again, swap these two due to the same reason
  9. Thinking about that, I recommend you to add finishes only when the singer says "doesn't", like you did in the beginning: 00:04:405 (1) - 00:11:734 (1). Fix this on each of your difficulties, please, since they all have the same hitsounding pattern.
  10. 00:55:131 (2) - remove the note, as there's absolutely no sound in the music it's supposed to be mapped to
  11. 00:55:703 - should have a hit object you could add new combo to, because the slider you have now shadows the downbeat and also breaks the correct new combo markup. Use the above extra difficulties as examples
  12. 00:57:535 - same as above
  13. 00:59:367 - same as above
  14. 01:01:200 (5) - add new combo?
[Insane]
HP -1, this should *not* drain more than extras.
  1. 00:04:406 - the new combo must be there, and your slider with a repeating arrow is what gets in the way. Please, fix this by starting the slider from the big white tick (remove the repeat first and add a missing note @ 00:04:177)
  2. 00:13:108 (4) - please, don't end sliders on big white ticks, since they don't really follow the music. There also must be a new combo
  3. 00:18:375 (2,3) - remove these and map them like 00:18:031 (5,1) to follow the music (note + slider): http://puu.sh/b73iH/117091fc5d.jpg
  4. 00:19:864 (4,1) - swap these two (the same reason)
  5. 00:29:138 (5,6,1) - could be confusing to read; consider moving the note to the right or stack all three objects completely
  6. 00:44:253 (4) - why? This looks unneeded (hilarious, though). Give it a better shape with some space in center (example: http://puu.sh/b73zs/47205984cd.jpg)
  7. 00:50:665 (3,4) - I'd remove finish from their ends
  8. 00:55:245 (1) - make it half as long and put a proper note with new combo on the big white tick; also remove new combo
  9. 01:00:741 (3) - and you skip the very last meaningful measure's downbeat by making the slider end there. Please fix this and apply new combo
[Hard]
Use HP 5.5 if you want decimals, or HP6.
  1. 00:19:749 (4,1) - in music, you can easily recognize the patter I've been pointing out on the higher difficulties. What this is supposed to be: http://puu.sh/b74XR/289527ed44.jpg
  2. 00:23:413 (3,1) - same as above
  3. 00:29:138 (1) - remove the repeat and add it to 00:29:711 (2), moving it 1/2 backwards: http://puu.sh/b752o/4581e1c560.jpg
  4. 00:38:069 (1) - remove the repeat, there should be a note, or a slider starting on the downbeat to let the player hit it
  5. 00:42:879 (1) - I would unstack it for a better playability; this requires moving the whole pattern, though
  6. 00:43:795 (1) - in order to follow the music, this needs to be started 1/2 earlier; you also want a slider at 00:44:024, so the whole combo becomes this: http://puu.sh/b75ca/185e2bbd60.jpg
[Normal]
OD +1
  1. 00:11:734 (2) - add new combo
  2. 00:21:811 (2) - and once again, you run into the same trouble. Please, map downbeats and avoid ending sliders on them.
  3. 00:30:054 - due to lack of hit objects, the whole kiai section sounds loud; reduce the volume a bit, please (10% would do)
Priti's Easy
It's priti easy, also no mistakes whatsoever. You could use a bit higher velocity, though.

Summary: you should have collected more mods before asking me. Good luck with that!

Thanks a lot!
Ringating

TicClick wrote:

  1. Any chance you would find the current background in 16:9 aspect ratio? 4:3 is fine, but vast majority of maps has it for widescreens..
yes, that

I found this image and applied a very slight selective blur in order to mitigate any artifacts (it's a fairly clean image, though, so the filter was really light). I then resized it to 1366x768 and losslessly compressed it. Here is the final product:
no kudosu
Foreverends

TicClick wrote:

[Ends' Extra]
HP +1? Also, lower the very first and last song section's volume by 20%; they are a bit noisy.
  1. 00:04:406 (2) - you should put new combo here, not on the previous note Fixed
  2. 00:04:635 (3,4) - remove the jump; it is more fitting between 00:04:864 (4,5)
  3. 00:08:070 (2) - you should put new combo here, not on the previous note Fixed
  4. 00:15:971 (4) - I'd use normal sampleset here, just like in BD's Extra. Fixed
  5. 00:44:253 (1) - move it a bit to the left to add some extra space between this note and the triplet Fixed
  6. 01:01:200 (5) - I'd add a new combo and also whistle Fixed
  7. 01:01:314 (1) - finish doesn't fit as there's no sound, please remove it Fixed
Thank you so much for modding \:D/
here you go \:D/
http://puu.sh/b9WYe/3f4b7fc01b.osu
Mismagius
oh wow i forgot about this, i'll check the mod in a bit
Mismagius

TicClick wrote:

[BD's Extra]
HP +1? Also, lower the very first and last song section's volume by 20%; they are a bit noisy. HP7 seems really way too hard, but I'll put 6.5. done the volume thing
  1. 00:15:971 (4,5,6) - I'd use normal sampleset here (also similar moments), such a good addition to soft you use all the time for some reason I'm already using drums tho >:
  2. 00:25:016 (3,5) - I'd move these up a bit, closer to the previous pair done
  3. 00:25:474 (1,5) - these whistles sound just odd; also this is the only time you use them I think PeaseMaker broke something here? These should be soft-whistles, not normal ones.
  4. 00:30:684 (5) - this note feels unneeded and unnecessary, consider removing, because that triplet really sounds like two notes in music done
  5. 00:31:887 (1,2,3,4) - consider changing to something like this: http://puu.sh/b71sL/dae490eff1.jpg feels kinda weird to play and ugly
  6. 00:40:016 (3,4,5,6) - this movement is awkward and, to be honest, really uncomfortable; change it so that (4) is lower than (5). http://puu.sh/b71xM/418482c2e8.jpg (note I also moved the whole pattern down) changed to something else
  7. 00:41:963 (1,2,3) - no matter how you like it, I'd strongly recommend you to change it to this, so it follows the music: http://puu.sh/b71Fe/6f98b89c90.jpg There is also a similar moment @ 00:27:306 you may want do something with done
  8. 00:43:108 (4,5,6) - isn't the jump too big? I would move it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1964480
believe me, it plays fine
sorry for the horrendous delay

http://puu.sh/bJBP8/53ab1d416a.osu
Topic Starter
Quashqai
Update o/
Myxo
Irc Mod
2014-09-22 20:56 PeaseMaker: Hello
2014-09-22 20:56 Desperate-kun: hi
2014-09-22 20:56 PeaseMaker: wow, so fast
2014-09-22 20:56 PeaseMaker: you are not busy?
2014-09-22 20:56 Desperate-kun: i am :D
2014-09-22 20:57 PeaseMaker: Can you modding my map please? ( 1 min | 26sp )
2014-09-22 20:57 PeaseMaker: i think it's ready
2014-09-22 20:57 PeaseMaker: ._.
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: hmm
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: the renard one?
2014-09-22 20:57 PeaseMaker: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/450447 Renard - Feel Better]
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/449560 Renard - Feel Better]
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: f*** you ninja'd me
2014-09-22 20:57 PeaseMaker: yes XD
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: btw
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: when will you fix the mod on
2014-09-22 20:57 Desperate-kun: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/470607 Bruno Mars - Liquor Store Blues (feat. Damian Marley)]
2014-09-22 20:58 PeaseMaker: after rank renard
2014-09-22 20:58 PeaseMaker: im going rank next map
2014-09-22 20:58 Desperate-kun: okay
2014-09-22 20:58 PeaseMaker: i can't mapping and rank all map's
2014-09-22 20:58 PeaseMaker: it's pretty hard for me
2014-09-22 20:58 PeaseMaker: im noob mapper
2014-09-22 20:58 Desperate-kun: no you are not
2014-09-22 20:58 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/449560 Renard - Feel Better [Priti's Easy]]
2014-09-22 20:58 Desperate-kun: who bubbled?
2014-09-22 20:59 PeaseMaker: what?
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: who bubbled it o.o
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: wait, i'll look
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: wait a moment
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: it's not bubbled
2014-09-22 20:59 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: <- baka
2014-09-22 20:59 PeaseMaker: yes
2014-09-22 20:59 PeaseMaker: <- idioto
2014-09-22 20:59 PeaseMaker: XD
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: if it's perfect i might rank it
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: * bubble
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: LOL
2014-09-22 20:59 Desperate-kun: or atleast almost perfect
2014-09-22 21:00 PeaseMaker: wow wow
2014-09-22 21:00 PeaseMaker: maybe
2014-09-22 21:00 PeaseMaker: you spectate me
2014-09-22 21:00 PeaseMaker: i can play it
2014-09-22 21:00 PeaseMaker: <- fast fingers baby
2014-09-22 21:00 PeaseMaker: XDD
2014-09-22 21:00 Desperate-kun: no
2014-09-22 21:00 Desperate-kun: i want to play it myself
2014-09-22 21:00 Desperate-kun: xD
2014-09-22 21:01 PeaseMaker: XD
2014-09-22 21:01 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:02 PeaseMaker: nice c:
2014-09-22 21:03 PeaseMaker: 262 bpm pretty hard for many people
2014-09-22 21:04 PeaseMaker: go go my extra
2014-09-22 21:04 PeaseMaker: lel
2014-09-22 21:04 PeaseMaker: XD
2014-09-22 21:08 Desperate-kun: hmm hard had some patterns that bothered me
2014-09-22 21:08 Desperate-kun: i'll see later
2014-09-22 21:09 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:12 PeaseMaker: write here
2014-09-22 21:12 PeaseMaker: please
2014-09-22 21:12 Desperate-kun: okay
2014-09-22 21:12 PeaseMaker: im leave #spectator
2014-09-22 21:12 PeaseMaker: (
2014-09-22 21:12 Desperate-kun: okay
2014-09-22 21:12 Desperate-kun: so basically
2014-09-22 21:12 Desperate-kun: you understand what i mean? o.o
2014-09-22 21:13 Desperate-kun: the normal needs to be made more difficult by adding 1/2
2014-09-22 21:13 Desperate-kun: simple 1/2
2014-09-22 21:13 Desperate-kun: and then the easy needs to be a little more intense too
2014-09-22 21:13 Desperate-kun: there is not really a different solution
2014-09-22 21:13 PeaseMaker: how i can make normal more difficult
2014-09-22 21:14 PeaseMaker: if song have 262 bpm
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: that's exactly the problem
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: i mean
2014-09-22 21:15 PeaseMaker: and
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: you could reduce the density of the hard a bit
2014-09-22 21:15 PeaseMaker: if i make 1\2 in normal
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: when i look at it like this
2014-09-22 21:15 PeaseMaker: doubletime crash all diff
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: but then spread to insane
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: meh
2014-09-22 21:15 Desperate-kun: ehh it's difficult
2014-09-22 21:16 Desperate-kun: meeeeeh i'm unsure
2014-09-22 21:19 Desperate-kun: hmm okay you are right
2014-09-22 21:22 PeaseMaker: 262 speedcore maps... never get rank XDD
2014-09-22 21:22 Desperate-kun: priti's easy is fine
2014-09-22 21:23 PeaseMaker: yea)
2014-09-22 21:23 PeaseMaker: Priti proud
2014-09-22 21:23 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/449559 Renard - Feel Better [Normal]]
2014-09-22 21:23 Desperate-kun: 00:22:732 (4) - nc please
2014-09-22 21:24 Desperate-kun: 00:26:396 (3,1) - swap nc
2014-09-22 21:24 Desperate-kun: 00:28:228 (3) - and nc
2014-09-22 21:25 PeaseMaker: complete
2014-09-22 21:25 Desperate-kun: 00:44:488 (4,5) - the stack doesn't feel necessary
2014-09-22 21:26 Desperate-kun: stacks in lower diffs are always a risky thing and
2014-09-22 21:26 Desperate-kun: many newbies have problems reading it
2014-09-22 21:26 PeaseMaker: maybe
2014-09-22 21:26 PeaseMaker: http://puu.sh/bJFOP/8c02e62605.jpg
2014-09-22 21:26 Desperate-kun: nice
2014-09-22 21:26 Desperate-kun: :3
2014-09-22 21:26 PeaseMaker: :з
2014-09-22 21:27 PeaseMaker: :3 :з
2014-09-22 21:27 PeaseMaker: 3 <- bad
2014-09-22 21:28 Desperate-kun: xD
2014-09-22 21:30 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/447061 Renard - Feel Better [Hard]]
2014-09-22 21:30 Desperate-kun: 00:19:412 (2,3,4,5) - this actually was quite hard to get
2014-09-22 21:30 Desperate-kun: this:
2014-09-22 21:30 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/bJGcB/2ad9910924.jpg
2014-09-22 21:30 Desperate-kun: would work better imo
2014-09-22 21:31 Desperate-kun: that means deleting 00:19:755 (4) - and repeating (3) if you don't see it :3
2014-09-22 21:31 PeaseMaker: complete
2014-09-22 21:31 PeaseMaker: i see ALL
2014-09-22 21:31 Desperate-kun: xD
2014-09-22 21:31 Desperate-kun: okay
2014-09-22 21:31 Desperate-kun: sometimes there are some mappers who can't see it in screenshots
2014-09-22 21:31 Desperate-kun: :(
2014-09-22 21:32 PeaseMaker: ok(
2014-09-22 21:33 PeaseMaker: what do you think
2014-09-22 21:33 PeaseMaker: about it
2014-09-22 21:33 PeaseMaker: 00:22:274 - add note
2014-09-22 21:33 PeaseMaker: stack with 1 slider
2014-09-22 21:33 PeaseMaker: 00:22:732 (1) -
2014-09-22 21:33 Desperate-kun: yeah i just wanted to say that this pattern is a bit confusing
2014-09-22 21:34 Desperate-kun: because the 1/1 spacing is so low
2014-09-22 21:34 Desperate-kun: compared to the 1/2 spacing
2014-09-22 21:34 PeaseMaker: http://puu.sh/bJGvI/c349c8ba5c.jpg
2014-09-22 21:34 PeaseMaker: ?
2014-09-22 21:34 Desperate-kun: yeah that'S good
2014-09-22 21:34 PeaseMaker: \o/
2014-09-22 21:34 Desperate-kun: 00:22:732 (1,2) - and also remove this jump
2014-09-22 21:34 Desperate-kun: because it looks simlar to previous 1/1 gaps
2014-09-22 21:34 Desperate-kun: and it doesn't play so smooth for hard
2014-09-22 21:35 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:36 Desperate-kun: 00:30:862 (4,1) - that would sound much better if you ctrl+g the rhythm
2014-09-22 21:36 Desperate-kun: because of the vocals
2014-09-22 21:37 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:37 Desperate-kun: and this placement http://puu.sh/bJGMG/70a1bbcfda.jpg would work just fine imo
2014-09-22 21:37 Desperate-kun: 00:31:893 (5) - missing nc
2014-09-22 21:38 Desperate-kun: 00:35:557 (1,2) - what the spacing though o.o
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: ehm
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: mayve
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: 00:35:900 - add note
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: ?
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: because
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: 00:39:564 -
2014-09-22 21:39 Desperate-kun: hmm
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: have note
2014-09-22 21:39 Desperate-kun: yeah but i'd recommend you to get rid of the huge stack then
2014-09-22 21:39 PeaseMaker: What do u think?
2014-09-22 21:40 Desperate-kun: i mean, 00:36:015 (2,3) - could be replaced by a slider then
2014-09-22 21:40 PeaseMaker: egm
2014-09-22 21:40 PeaseMaker: http://puu.sh/bJH5A/40c98f4488.jpg
2014-09-22 21:40 PeaseMaker: whats about it?
2014-09-22 21:40 Desperate-kun: okay
2014-09-22 21:41 Desperate-kun: :3
2014-09-22 21:41 Desperate-kun: rest of the hard is fine
2014-09-22 21:41 PeaseMaker: normaly?
2014-09-22 21:41 Desperate-kun: huh? o.o
2014-09-22 21:41 Desperate-kun: it looks good
2014-09-22 21:42 Desperate-kun: insane looks fine too
2014-09-22 21:42 Desperate-kun: the rest i can't mod properly ;w;
2014-09-22 21:43 PeaseMaker: ._.
2014-09-22 21:43 Desperate-kun: i'd recommend you to ask jesse for a tesplay for the extras to spot potential problems (patterns that play bad)
2014-09-22 21:43 PeaseMaker: jesse?
2014-09-22 21:43 Desperate-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/230116
2014-09-22 21:44 Desperate-kun: :D
2014-09-22 21:44 Desperate-kun: just ask him when he is online
2014-09-22 21:44 PeaseMaker: i have mod
2014-09-22 21:44 PeaseMaker: from he
2014-09-22 21:44 Desperate-kun: wait really
2014-09-22 21:44 PeaseMaker: check forum
2014-09-22 21:44 PeaseMaker: 3rd page
2014-09-22 21:45 PeaseMaker: 3rd post
2014-09-22 21:45 PeaseMaker: ops
2014-09-22 21:45 PeaseMaker: 4
2014-09-22 21:45 Desperate-kun: i see
2014-09-22 21:45 PeaseMaker: ^^
2014-09-22 21:45 Desperate-kun: sorry i was too lazy to read the thread yet xD
2014-09-22 21:45 Desperate-kun: when i want to bubble i'd do it ofc
2014-09-22 21:45 PeaseMaker: i know
2014-09-22 21:46 PeaseMaker: stop
2014-09-22 21:46 Desperate-kun: well then let me check your technical aspects
2014-09-22 21:47 Desperate-kun: why is widescreen support enabled
2014-09-22 21:47 PeaseMaker: disable now!
2014-09-22 21:48 Desperate-kun: also disable letterbox please . it's quite useless for this small break
2014-09-22 21:48 Desperate-kun: and end's diff doesn't have breaks
2014-09-22 21:48 Desperate-kun: so it's completely useless there
2014-09-22 21:49 PeaseMaker: delete spinner in Ends diff?
2014-09-22 21:49 Desperate-kun: no
2014-09-22 21:49 Desperate-kun: why would you
2014-09-22 21:49 Desperate-kun: o.o
2014-09-22 21:50 PeaseMaker: he said
2014-09-22 21:50 PeaseMaker: i can little mod him diff
2014-09-22 21:50 PeaseMaker: if i want
2014-09-22 21:50 Desperate-kun: okay
2014-09-22 21:50 Desperate-kun: then do it and insert a break
2014-09-22 21:50 Desperate-kun: and remove the inherited sections in the break because why not
2014-09-22 21:51 Desperate-kun: tell me when you fixed please
2014-09-22 21:51 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:51 PeaseMaker: update
2014-09-22 21:51 PeaseMaker: updated*
2014-09-22 21:51 Desperate-kun: your preview point is unsnapped a little bit o.o
2014-09-22 21:51 PeaseMaker: ?
2014-09-22 21:52 PeaseMaker: whete
2014-09-22 21:52 PeaseMaker: where?
2014-09-22 21:52 Desperate-kun: 00:00:518 -
2014-09-22 21:52 Desperate-kun: here
2014-09-22 21:52 Desperate-kun: see the yellow line
2014-09-22 21:52 Desperate-kun: it's unsnapped ;w;
2014-09-22 21:52 Desperate-kun: just a little bit
2014-09-22 21:52 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:52 PeaseMaker: i fix
2014-09-22 21:52 PeaseMaker: it
2014-09-22 21:52 PeaseMaker: now
2014-09-22 21:53 Desperate-kun: :D
2014-09-22 21:54 PeaseMaker: Complete
2014-09-22 21:54 PeaseMaker: tell me please
2014-09-22 21:54 PeaseMaker: if i change my nickname now
2014-09-22 21:55 PeaseMaker: it's broke map creator?
2014-09-22 21:55 Desperate-kun: i don't know owo
2014-09-22 21:55 PeaseMaker: ><
2014-09-22 21:55 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 21:55 PeaseMaker: i dosen't change it now
2014-09-22 21:56 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/450447 Renard - Feel Better [Ends' Extra]]
2014-09-22 21:56 Desperate-kun: 00:44:488 (1,1) - could you remove these NCs?
2014-09-22 21:57 Desperate-kun: i don't see why a NC spam would be needed here
2014-09-22 21:57 Desperate-kun: the 1/1 gaps are already shown with the first nc
2014-09-22 21:57 PeaseMaker: fixed
2014-09-22 22:00 Desperate-kun: okay i'll let mao playtest the extra
2014-09-22 22:00 Desperate-kun: *-s
2014-09-22 22:00 Desperate-kun: he's pro :b
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: lol
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: mao?
2014-09-22 22:01 Desperate-kun: Mao
2014-09-22 22:01 Desperate-kun: :3
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: Mao
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: :З
2014-09-22 22:01 Desperate-kun: :³
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: Who is that?
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: XDD
2014-09-22 22:01 Desperate-kun: a BAT
2014-09-22 22:01 PeaseMaker: wtfd
2014-09-22 22:01 Desperate-kun: and my twin brother
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: Im pro
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: too
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: :C
2014-09-22 22:02 Desperate-kun: yees
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: #920 !!!
2014-09-22 22:02 Desperate-kun: but i have to let him testplay so that he can judge if the extras are ready
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: im farming rightnow
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: because
2014-09-22 22:02 PeaseMaker: u bats
2014-09-22 22:03 PeaseMaker: T_T
2014-09-22 22:04 PeaseMaker: my extra so ez
2014-09-22 22:06 Desperate-kun: when i'd bubble it now it would be my first lazy bubble
2014-09-22 22:06 PeaseMaker: ahaha
2014-09-22 22:06 PeaseMaker: XDDD
2014-09-22 22:06 Desperate-kun: but i want to keep my image as a careful BAT so i will recheck it
2014-09-22 22:09 Desperate-kun: it just needs to be check carefully
2014-09-22 22:09 Desperate-kun: then everything is alright ;)
2014-09-22 22:09 Desperate-kun: or atleast should be
2014-09-22 22:09 PeaseMaker: i know
2014-09-22 22:09 Desperate-kun: i'm still worrying about
2014-09-22 22:09 Desperate-kun: the diff spread
2014-09-22 22:09 Desperate-kun: with normal hard what i told you
2014-09-22 22:11 PeaseMaker: whats Mao does said?
2014-09-22 22:11 Desperate-kun: he said the extras play well
2014-09-22 22:12 PeaseMaker: \o/
2014-09-22 22:12 Desperate-kun: i'll recheck the map tomorrow
2014-09-22 22:12 Desperate-kun: when i had some sleep
2014-09-22 22:12 Desperate-kun: because i'm really tired atm
2014-09-22 22:12 Desperate-kun: then i'll most likely bubble it afterwards
2014-09-22 22:13 PeaseMaker: ok
2014-09-22 22:13 PeaseMaker: i must going sleep too
2014-09-22 22:13 PeaseMaker: Good Night
2014-09-22 22:13 Desperate-kun: good night :3

Good map :3
Myxo
Recheck :3


  • General
  1. The Preview Point is still unsnapped in the Easy.
  2. You can remove "drum n" from the tags. "drum" is already in the tags earlier, and osu! doesn't allow to search for single letters, so the "n" in the tags is useless. You can try it out: Delete both words and you can still search for "drum n bass" to find the mapset.
  3. Add "broken" to the tags since the name of the album is "Broken Core" (no need to add core, since it is already included in "breakcore")


  • Hard
  1. 00:31:893 (1,2) - Spacing o.o


  • Insane
  1. 00:16:206 (1,2) - Ctrl+g them rhythm-wise to fit the loud instrument that plays on the red ticks better. You can do the placement + NCing like this then: http://puu.sh/bR6Nf/69ab0422dd.jpg Please don't forget to check hitsounds.


  • End's Extra


    Aka testplayed all Extras. We came to the conclusion that these fixes should be made, in order to make this better playable:
  1. 00:18:839 (1) - Please avoid this slowdown - It's very sudden and breaks the flow!
  2. 00:23:190 (1,2,1,2) - This is too hardcore for this BPM, especially with the transition to the following stream! A good solution would be to make these reverse-sliders like this: http://puu.sh/bSQR5/61d2a8f7ed.jpg One reverse is actually enough telling from the music.
  3. 00:24:049 - Add a note here, it's very loudly to hear in the music! And it makes the stream play more intuitive, because it will end on a white tick then :3

Call me back!
Topic Starter
Quashqai
fixed & updated <3
Myxo
Everything seems ready to go now! Congratz on your first bubble :3

Bubbled (ノ 'ω')ノ

Thanks for avoiding a triplet post ;w;
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply