Riari wrote:

Mod req from my queue~

Love the song and the background is great.

General

1. You need a preview point, I would suggest 01:34:910 (1) - this point is quite nice. added. thank you :>
2. I would suggest finding away to change the background dimensions to 1024x768 so it doesn't letterbox and looks nice. okay, I'll

Rain

1. 00:39:342 (3,1,2) - This part seems to be memory or dumb luck, I don't like patterns like these, if possible I would remap the 1/2 keeping the hyper but stopping the side to side. I'm sorry, but I want to keep this part
2. 01:10:364 (2) - Ctrl+g to ~x=248 or so? I don't like the pattern of the old hyper and I feel like it could hyper into 01:10:705 (3) - at the same time. fixed!
3. 01:49:569 (3) - Ctrl+g ? Ctrl+g

Platter

1. AIMod, 01:18:204 (4) - this isn't snapped. fixed
2. 00:37:637 (1,2) - I would put a dash between these with 00:37:978 (2) - at ~x=480 cool
3. 00:40:364 (1,2) - Something similar to above maybe? fixed

Salad

1. AIMod, 00:18:204 (4) - and 01:08:318 (6) - need snapping. fixed
2. 00:16:330 (4,5) - Bigger distance? Seems a great spot for a dash. fixed
3. 00:29:114 (1,2,1,2) - Distance between these is a bit lackluster, feels like distancing for a cup to me. fixed, also I added a jump on 00:31:842 (1,2) - too
5. 01:49:058 (1,2) - More distance between these? I can do them without dashing but It would be much better if it required one in my opinion. fixed

Love the mapset, good luck with it~

Serena- wrote:

m4m 왓습니당

[General]
preview point가 설정되지않았네여 수정해주시길
00:56:728 (1) - 여기서부터 키아이타임시작해도 괜찮을꺼같네요 반짝거리는 효과만 넣었습니다.

[Salad]
AI Mod


이난이도 대쉬없이 다받을수있네요 점프좀 늘려주세요 늘렷습니다 ㅎ

00:44:455 (2,3,4) - 나머진 다 피아노에 맞췄는데 보컬에맞춰서 약간 이상하게 들리네요 저기는 보컬이 너무 잘들려서.. 어쩔수가 없네요 ㅠ 그래도 지적감사합니다
01:29:626 (1) - 스핀 01:31:501 - 에끊어주시고 01:32:183 - 에 하나 더넣어주시는게 어떨까여 Fixed
02:06:955 (1) - 여기에 뭐잇는데 지워주세요 ??? 지웠습니다

패턴은 괜찮아보이네여

[Platter]

00:37:978 (2) - 여기에 점프넣어보시는게? 위에 모딩에서 넣었습니다 ㅎ
00:42:410 (5) - 거리좀 줄여주세요 수정
00:43:944 (3,4) - 컵이랑마찬가지 마찬가지네요
01:00:137 (1) - 여기에 하이퍼는 플래터에는 조금 안어울리는거같네요 점프로 교체했습니다
01:08:660 (6) - ^ 수정완료!

[Rain]
01:29:626 (1) - 컵이랑 플래터와 동일 수정!

사실 지금 멘탈이 좀 나간상태라그런지 패턴은 다 괜찮아보이네요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 힘내세요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ


화이팅

LZD wrote:

good song choice spect

ExGon wrote:

irc modded (hitsounds)

00:15 ExGon: 히트사운드 관련해서
00:16 ExGon: circle은 샘플셋 애디션 되더라고요
00:16 ExGon: 서클에 타이밍 노가다 하실 필요 없으심 ㅋㅋ
00:16 Spectator: 서클하고 슬라 앞부분은 되는데
00:16 Spectator: 리버스 애로우하고 뒷부분이 안되요 ㅋㅋ
00:16 ExGon: 리버즈 슬라이더가 아닌
00:17 ExGon: 그냥 슬라이더는 샘플셋 빼고 애디션만 되고
00:17 ExGon: 리버즈 슬라이더가 포함된 슬라이더는 복잡함
00:17 Spectator: 리버스가 첨가되면 버그가 생기는듯 하네요..
00:17 ExGon: 경우에 따라서는 앞에서 샘플 애디션 한걸 나중에 나오는 리버즈애로우가 받는 경우도 있더라고요
00:18 Spectator: ㄷㄷ.. 그런 경우도 있군요
00:18 ExGon: 00:58:433 (2) -
00:18 ExGon: 이부분 clap이 좋을듯
00:18 ExGon: whistle이랑 같이 넣어도 되고요
00:19 Spectator: 추가했습니다
00:19 ExGon: 01:00:478 (3) -
00:19 ExGon: 이부분은 서클이니
00:19 ExGon: 애디션에 소프트 넣으시고 whistle 넣으시면 될듯
00:20 Spectator: 오 작동하네요
00:20 Spectator: 추가했습니다
00:20 ExGon: 01:08:660 (3) - 이부분은 샘플셋 노말 애디션 소프트 whistle
00:21 ExGon: 01:10:705 (3) - 이부분은 앞이랑 고려해서 clap 소리를 빼고 샘플셋만 노말로 하시거나
00:21 Spectator: 수정했습니다
00:21 ExGon: 앞부분을 이노트랑 똑같이 고쳐주세요
00:21 Spectator: 여기도 수정했습니다
00:23 ExGon: 고치신 양이 적으니 플래터랑 샐러드에도 직접 넣으시면 될듯
00:23 ExGon: 아니면 히트사운드 복사 프로그램을 사용하셔도
00:23 Spectator: 이정도면 일일히 해도 될거같네요ㅋㅋ
00:23 ExGon: 샐러드에
00:23 Spectator: 포럼에 올리시면 kds 드릴께요
00:23 ExGon: 01:00:137 (4) -
00:23 ExGon: 이부분은 슬라이더라서 샘플셋 못넣죠
00:24 ExGon: 그런데 타이밍이 노말로 되있으니
00:24 Spectator: 아뇨 저거 앞부분이라
00:24 Spectator: 아마 될거에요
00:24 ExGon: 슬라이더 끝부분에 애디션 soft로 하셔서
00:24 ExGon: whistle 넣어주세요
00:24 Spectator: 아 끝부분은 안되요 ㄷㄷ
00:24 ExGon: 끝부분은 됨 ㄷㄷ
00:25 ExGon: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1763258
00:25 Spectator: 어 되네요
00:25 Spectator: 보통 에딧에선 되다가 플레이할땐 안되던데..
00:25 ExGon: 01:08:319 (6) - 이 슬라이더 또한 같은 방법으로 해주세요
00:26 Spectator: 수정했습니다
00:28 ExGon: 01:32:183 (1) -
00:28 ExGon: 이부분은 의견이지만 finish를 넣어보시는건 어떠심
00:29 Spectator: 추가했습니다
00:31 ExGon: 이정도면 히트사운드는 된거같네요

Kurokami wrote:

M4M :3

[General]

Your bg is 1024x767 tho the rankable is 1024x768. I dunno if this will cause problems but I think you should make your whole img 1025x768 then just cut that one px.

[Salad]

How about AR 6,5? (If you accept my suggestion about AR and Platter then with this your spread will be awesome. fixed :3

I missed the very first fruit. Oh god I will quit. baka ><

Nice difficulty.

[Platter]

AR8,5 is a bit high for a Platter. I know its new and stuff but still. How about just using 7,5 here? 8,5 and 9 are a bit close to each other anyways.
I just fixed it to the AR 7.8! thank you for the suggestion

Oh, I just had 3 misses at first play. Nice. :3

00:20:421 (2,3) - One of my misses. I don't like to jumping out from the flow. Try to add a little curve to (2) which can lead players towards (3). added
00:25:535 - This is really feels empty. I suggest you to delete 00:25:194 (3) and just use 3 circle with a small jump between them. sorry, but I don't think it feels like empty there
01:38:148 (2,3) - As I told you above. sorry. again


[Rain]

00:12:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This and your stream on this map is kinda boring. How about trying to add some curve to them? I know its hard to find one which is "easy" to fc but once you find it the map will be interesting. :3 added!
01:06:273 (1,2) and 01:08:319 (2,3) As I already told you on Platter. Maybe something similar can work here too. sorry, but I think rest symbols works better than note on those parts :3

I like this map. Its easy to fc tho I missed about 20 fruits. Maybe some jump can be shortened but I won't point them out because probably I missed them because of my slow reflex. orz Good work. o/
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In overall I think this mapset is ready for ranking. Maybe you should shorten the last spinner a bit. Its really boring there. q.q Good luck and have my star. :3/

Xinely wrote:

Mod as requested ~

• 
  Salad

1. So many unnecessary greenlines like 00:13:603 - 00:13:944 - 00:15:989 - 00:16:501 - etc lol
2. CS 3,5? i know maybe you wanna keep the CS but imo since this salad is the easiest diff, (CS 3,7) seems a little bit small for play by newbie fixed!
3. 00:07:296 (2) - how about use circle and 1/1 slider here with a little bit dash on 00:07:637 - for emphasize the piano sound? sorry, but I want to keep this slider
4. 00:21:785 - add note to follow the piano sound as you followed here? added
5. 00:18:546 (1) - make a dash here to emphasize the cymbal? x:344 added
6. 00:18:546 (1,2) - remove 00:19:569 (2) - and extend 00:18:546 (1) - the repeat to 00:19:058 - to follow that loud piano at 00:19:058 - fixed
7. 00:29:455 (2,2) - please make 00:29:455 (2) - this one has bigger spacing than 00:32:183 (2) - because the power of music. imo the first one has bigger power than the second one >< fixed
8. 00:34:569 (1) - change this slider become circle and 1/2 slider. 00:34:739 - music appear quite loud here that feel weird to use repeat (for me) I just changed them to the three circles
9. 00:37:637 (1,1) - pianos at tails, feel strong and loud, give some movement on tail to emphasize its? example 00:37:637 (1) - tail x:176 00:39:001 (1) - x:360 (less than previous become the piano getting lower) fixed
10. 00:42:410 (2) - x:356 for emphasize more the piano loud? fixed
11. 00:44:683 (3) - move to 00:44:796 - because the piano sound just want to follow the vocal sound here, no change :3
12. 00:59:796 (3) - bigger spacing because the strong crystal sound? x:48 , and 01:00:137 (4) - x:180 for anything you want >< fixed
13. 01:06:273 (6) - add clap because same sound with 00:58:433 - added
14. 01:09:001 (1) - whistle at head because strong crystal sound added
15. 01:10:023 (2) - ^ ^
16. 01:34:910 (1) - add finish on head because cymbal :< added :>
17. 01:40:364 (1) - x:280 for emphasize the cymbal with dash? fixed
18. 01:45:137 (3,4,5,6,1) - these circles, a little bit hard and need a nice timing to catch them without dash, these might make newbie confuse, how about reduce a little bit each spacing on circles? fixed
19. 01:45:819 (1) - finish because crash cymbal added
20. 01:51:273 (1) - finish at head because cymbal too added
21. 01:54:001 (1) - finish at head. i heard a little cymbal but up to you give or not but if you don't want add finish, at least whistle for piano + power of vocal addedwhistle instead of finish here

• 
  Platter

1. Still have unnecessary greenlines like 00:21:103 - 00:24:512 - 00:25:535 - etc
2. 00:09:683 (3) - imo HDash here unnecessary because only vocal that not loud too. reduce the spacing? x: 196, 00:10:024 (4) - x:60 for HDash emphasize the 00:10:364 - piano sound? fixed
3. 00:18:546 (1) - make a jump (at least) for emphasize the cymbal? :< , you can move head x:144 tail x:8 fixed
4. 00:26:046 (2) - the sound only drum, you can remove the finish, finish feels too loud o.o fixed
5. 00:27:751 (3) - finish remove, both vocal and music are calm removed
6. 00:30:308 - add note here because the piano sound like you mapped at whitetick? nope.. sorry
7. 00:30:819 (1) - i feel the finish is too loud, change it with whistle is enough ok
8. 00:32:183 (1) - finish at head, music is same with 00:34:910 - added
9. 00:31:330 (2) - this is quite hard to catch imo. x:300 instead? (easier HDash) fixed
10. 00:44:455 (4) - change with 1/1 slider and circle at 00:44:967 - . i dunno what sound you mapped at blue tick since piano at whitetick and vocal at 00:44:626 - well, in fact, the vocal sound is on 00:44:711 :p. so there's no problem
11. 01:41:046 (3) - imo this is should be normal dash because too hard. like rain imo. x:280?
12. 01:45:478 (4) - i'm still sad 01:45:819 - no jump at this cymbal :< added
13. 01:56:728 (1) - since the vocal is calm and music too. x:304? fixed
14. Awesome pattern, but needs finish at kiai time like 01:34:925 - 01:45:819 - 01:51:273 - 01:54:001 - because cymbal added

• 
  Rain

1. 00:14:967 (1) - change finish become whistle because piano. vocal still calm :< changed!
2. 00:44:455 (1) - same as Platter same as platter
3. 00:21:188 (4) - remove this circle, overmapped :< removed
4. 00:48:546 (1) - you can remove finish here. finish feels too loud. whistle is enough imo removed
5. 00:50:592 (1) - remove finish. vocal and music is calm :< ^
6. 01:56:728 (1) - same reason as Platter, x:328? sorry, but I do not want to remove this jump in Rain either :p
7. How to mod the pattern? Awesome Rain *_* thanks <3
8. but needs finish at kiai time like 01:34:925 - 01:45:819 - 01:51:273 - 01:54:001 - because cymbal ok :3

Consider the hitsounds especially finishes C:
Other it, Awesome map here
Take my star and Good Luck on ranking

1. Source is Deemo
2. Can be added as tags : Mag Mell (futur name of the album with this song), cytus, rayark, projectmili
3. 00:13:092 - Kiai flashes aren't allowed
4. 00:55:535 - Same

1. 00:29:114 (1,2) - Ctrl+g (re-check your hs just after or just use a ctrl+h). To have an alternation of movement to the right, to the left, to the right ... Until 00:37:637 (1) -
2. 00:30:648 - 00:36:588 - Consider to add break here also by logic with the 2 others.
3. 00:44:455 (2,3,4) - Consider to slightly reduce the spacing here ( 1/3 snapping can be quickly confusing) or to move (3) to the other side x=444
4. 00:51:614 (4) - Really weird to have this kind of timeline where you can't really map the 2claps with an interesting jump like here 00:56:047 (8,9) - Consider to change your timeline to remap this quickly.
5. 01:03:887 (1) - Try to change your sv to 1,5 to have a larger movement here
6. 01:07:296 - 01:07:637 - Useless greenlines
7. 01:09:342 - 01:09:683 - 01:10:023 - 01:10:364 - 01:11:046 - Useless greenlines
8. 01:25:123 - Not snapped greenline
9. 01:45:989 - Weird to have this kiai beginning on nothing. Consider to add a note here
10. 01:49:058 - 01:49:569 - 01:49:910 - Useless greenlines

1. 00:50:592 (1,2,3) - Try to lean them to the left to have something slightly more interesting (like that http://puu.sh/a6k6z/bf582683f6.jpg)
2. 00:51:614 (4) - Same as salad
3. 00:56:046 (1) - Deserve something slightly harder try x=120
4. 01:03:887 (3) - Same as salad
5. 01:17:183 (1,2,3,4) - Try this to avoid the monotony (don't worry you'll keep your hdash) ? http://puu.sh/a6kKb/112b18d4f9.jpg

Krah wrote:

Omg a wild spec's map.
Mod go !!


[General]

1. Source is Deemo added
2. Can be added as tags : Mag Mell (futur name of the album with this song), cytus, rayark, projectmili added all!
3. 00:13:092 - Kiai flashes aren't allowed
4. 00:55:535 - Same fixed T.T

[Salad]

1. 00:29:114 (1,2) - Ctrl+g (re-check your hs just after or just use a ctrl+h). To have an alternation of movement to the right, to the left, to the right ... Until 00:37:637 (1) - fixed
2. 00:30:648 - 00:36:588 - Consider to add break here also by logic with the 2 others. added
3. 00:44:455 (2,3,4) - Consider to slightly reduce the spacing here ( 1/3 snapping can be quickly confusing) or to move (3) to the other side x=444 fixed like this
4. 00:51:614 (4) - Really weird to have this kind of timeline where you can't really map the 2claps with an interesting jump like here 00:56:047 (8,9) - Consider to change your timeline to remap this quickly. fixed
5. 01:03:887 (1) - Try to change your sv to 1,5 to have a larger movement here I'm sorry, but I just want to keep this
6. 01:07:296 - 01:07:637 - Useless greenlines removed
7. 01:09:342 - 01:09:683 - 01:10:023 - 01:10:364 - 01:11:046 - Useless greenlines all removed
8. 01:25:123 - Not snapped greenline fixed
9. 01:45:989 - Weird to have this kiai beginning on nothing. Consider to add a note here fixed like this, I don't feel good when I only add one note and it's awkward, so I just added slider with reverse :3
10. 01:49:058 - 01:49:569 - 01:49:910 - Useless greenlines deleted

[Platter]

1. 00:50:592 (1,2,3) - Try to lean them to the left to have something slightly more interesting (like that http://puu.sh/a6k6z/bf582683f6.jpg) good
2. 00:51:614 (4) - Same as salad same as salad
3. 00:56:046 (1) - Deserve something slightly harder try x=120 fixed
4. 01:03:887 (3) - Same as salad sorry again ;_;
5. 01:17:183 (1,2,3,4) - Try this to avoid the monotony (don't worry you'll keep your hdash) ? http://puu.sh/a6kKb/112b18d4f9.jpg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1805512

[Rain]

Don't forget that you can change the name of this diff. ok

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Krah wrote:

Map more spread please

(╯°□°）╯

koreapenguin wrote:

unrank plz

Deif wrote:

It's not even a problem. Got removed without the need of an unrank o.o