1. A stupid thing: 01:51:658 (2,3) - Might you move (2) to X=280;Y=52 and (3) to X=460;Y=155 to make A BIT better flow? xD
2. 01:54:039 (5,1) - Because the vocals go as they go I suggest to make NC at (5), not at (1). I think it would be more reasonable. Also I think (4) would include a whistle because the accordion (or some similar instrument) make a perfect moment to whistle to it.
3. 03:25:944 (1) - To be honest it doesn't follow the rhythm correctly. I think the ending used in Hard difficulty would be used in this difficulty too. How do you think?

1. 02:45:944 (6) - I think it's a good place to start NC here.
2. 02:54:515 (5) - This is another good place to start NC - just listen to the percussion. *.*

1. 01:09:277 (2,4) - To be honest: I don't know why, but I have a feeling it would be a bit more challenging if (2) the note was on the top of the (4) slider. Now I just feel it's too usual if we compare this moment to the whole kiai. Challenge accepted? xD
2. 03:26:539 (3) - Just a suggestion - maybe remove a whistle at the very end to show how the notes in the song are disolving and getting lower.

Ms Yuyuko wrote:

Medium:

Nothing really much..

03:26:896 (1) - Ending the spinner in 03:29:515 would fit well. ok

Heavy:

HP Drain Rate: 6/6.5 changed to 6

Approach Rate: 8 no

Overall: 6/6.5 changed to 6

The same thing about the Spinner, it does fit better in 03:29:515, at least in my case, good work, I can't find almost anything wrong. ok

Dancing:

Approach Rate: 8.5 no

Overall: 8 ^

I don't think it's much of a trouble personally, but Dancing does not have Widescreen Support, unlike Medium and Heavy. unchecked WS

And.. once again.. Spinner...

After all, I thought I was going to find mistakes or anything, but, seems like I got out wrong, it's a good map, I like it. c:

I hope somehow I helped you, although I didn't do much.

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
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1. Maybe you can change the diff name to the normal one, but this's yours, so i'm not going to make you change it
   Nothing major issue founded

1. Change CS to 4 | https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Hard

1. Maybe change AR to 8.5 or 8 atm
2. 00:28:791 (1) - You can decrease the end point to the red tick before it, or increase it to the white tick next it and remove the circle in white tick
3. 01:21:410 (5) - NC?

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

1. Maybe you can change the diff name to the normal one, but this's yours, so i'm not going to make you change it
   Nothing major issue founded

[Medium]
Clear~

[Heavy]

1. Change CS to 4 | https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Hard

Hmm . okey

[Dance]

1. Maybe change AR to 8.5 or 8 atm ok. AR8 (and OD: 7)!
2. 00:28:791 (1) - You can decrease the end point to the red tick before it, or increase it to the white tick next it and remove the circle in white tick
3. 01:21:410 (5) - NC?

nope

Sorry because i just found this, and good luck for you

1. You could increase the volumen on kiai times a bit. It makes a better sense

1. 00:22:124 (2) It flows better if you move the second red sliderpoint to x:40 y:104.
   
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2. 00:53:553 (2) Don't you think that this flows better if you move the second sliderpoint to x:80 y:208?. It's flows better imo
3. 02:13:077 (5) Is this NC really necessary?. You should remove it. It's the same than 00:49:029 (1). So , remove it for consistency!(It's the same that 01:12:124 (1) )
4. 02:13:553 (6) Following your combo pattern , a NC should be on here
5. 03:10:219 (3,1) This pattern doesn't flow very good at all. Try something like this:
   
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1. 00:54:505 (4) Try something like this for a better transition with the following pattern:
   
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2. 01:19:029 (x) You should add a note on here. I feel very neccesary a note on here because the music needs it!
3. 01:26:648 (x) (^) Feel fre to do it if you want. And try doing this in others parts if you want , but in my opinion you should do it. Because it feels a bit weird that you are ignoring some sounds
4. 01:32:362 (2) This slider follows very BAD the music. Try making a 1/2 slider with reverse and add circle on 01:33:077 (x)
5. 01:36:172 (2) - 01:39:981 (2) (^) It's important to change it please
6. 01:50:696 (1) Hmm.. Maybe something like this
7. 02:52:600 (4,5) Make (4) a bit curved to make a better blanket with (5). In addition , it will improve the flow.
8. 03:26:410 (2) Move this slider to x:208 y:264 for a better flow

1. I don't really know about custom diff name rules, but I think only the most difficult diff can have a different name, for example Medium and Heavy has to be Normal and Hard, but the last diff can be named Dance. But seriously, I'm not really sure about this.

1. 00:30:219 (1) - If you added NC here, why not in 00:22:124 (2)? In my opinion you could add NC in (2) or maybe remove NC in (1) and add NC in 00:31:172 (2).
2. 00:33:553 (1) - Why this NC? I consider it unnecessary imo.
3. 00:37:362 (1) - Same.
4. 00:41:172 (1) - Same.
5. 00:45:458 (1, 2) - NC should be in (2) imo :3
6. 00:49:029 (4) - NC~
7. 00:53:077 (1, 2) - NC in (2) please.
8. 00:56:648 (1) - Okay, you did it good here, but remove NC in 00:57:839 (1) ><
9. 01:00:219 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo.
10. 01:04:505 (1, 2) - NC should be in (2) I guess too.
11. 01:12:124 (1, 2) - Same.
12. 01:25:934 (4) - According to the previous NCs, you should add another one here.
13. 01:29:743 (4) - Same.
14. 01:46:410 (1, 2) - I prefer NC in (2).
15. 02:04:505 (4) - Maybe is it too down? It's touching this. http://puu.sh/aSacW/b52a94c4fe.jpg Idk if it's a problem...
16. 02:19:267 (4) - NC? You added it in 02:23:077 (1) and it's the same case :3
17. 02:47:362 (6, 1) - I prefer NC in (6).
18. 02:50:934 (4, 1) - NC in (4), like in the other same sliders.
19. 03:13:077 (4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/aSarb/552f661ad6.jpg It fits better for me.

1. CS:3,5 is too big for a Hard (I guess it's Hard) imo. CS:4 it's ok, but that's just my opinion.
2. 00:19:267 (4, 1) - You could do a little jump here, and curve a bit more (1) for a better flow. Something like this? http://puu.sh/aSaDY/efbde9a039.jpg :3
3. 00:20:696 (1, 3) - NC should be in (3).
4. 00:21:886 (1) - Remove NC.
5. 00:24:505 (1) - Same.
6. 00:26:410 (1, 3) - I prefer NC in (3).
7. 00:30:219 (1, 3) - Same.
8. 00:32:362 (6) - What about leave (6) in x:256 y:136? Looks good for me.
9. 00:52:839 (1, 2) - Better NC in (2).
10. 01:23:553 (1, 3) - NC in (3).
11. 01:31:410 (4) - Maybe this in x:148 y:124? I'm not really sure though, do whatever you want ><
12. 01:37:362 (4) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:276 y:204, flows better for me :3
13. 01:52:600 (6) - Add NC here.
14. 01:53:791 (1) - Remove NC.
15. 02:20:934 (1, 2) - NC in (2).
16. 02:26:886 (5) - NC please.
17. 02:30:219 (1, 3) - Add NC in (3) instead of (1).
18. 03:08:791 (7) - NC.
19. 03:09:743 (1) - Remove NC.

1. 01:01:886 (3) - Maybe moving this to x:308 y:192? Is just a little suggestion ^^
2. 01:14:981 (2) - Ctrl+G?
3. 01:23:553 (1, 4) - NC in (4) please ><
4. 01:27:362 (1, 3) - NC in (3).
5. 01:29:267 (1, 4) - NC in (4) =w=
6. 01:44:505 (1, 4) - Same.
7. 01:50:696 (6) - NC.
8. 01:51:648 (1, 4) - Remove NC in (1) and add it in (4) xD
9. 02:02:839 (3) - Same kinda suggestion which personally I like so much: move it to x:304 y:96 :3
10. 02:12:362 (5) - What about moving it to x:256 y:124? It could be a nice jump.
11. 03:16:886 (2, 3) - Ctrl+G? At least in (2).
12. 03:25:458 (1) - Unnecessary NC.

Inyuschan wrote:

I don't really know about custom diff name rules, but I think only the most difficult diff can have a different name, for example Medium and Heavy has to be Normal and Hard, but the last diff can be named Dance. But seriously, I'm not really sure about this.

1. 00:07:839 "All Mapset" sounds weird , "Mapset & Storyboard by Kazuya" is better
   
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2. 00:45:934 - 01:01:172 Maybe you could dim a bit here the background since music decrease the volumen here
3. 01:01:172 What about to add some kind of Flash at the beginning of each kiai time?.

Not much to mod really . Good luck ~

1. 00:38:315 (1) - try a blanket with 00:37:362 (4) -
2. 00:47:839 (1,2,3) - i dislike how (3) are stacked over 00:49:029 (1) - ... i feel is not a good idea for a calm seccion in a easily diff.... btw, pls, try:
   
3. 00:55:458 (1,2,3) - ^ or
   
4. 01:48:791 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 01:56:410 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 02:42:124 (1,2,3) - and 02:49:743 (1,2,3) - , you can leave them, lest the whole map is equal. btw, as is the final part, I think it's fine

1. 01:08:553 (5,6) - flow here is wrong X.x...
   mm... i think you can try some like it:
   01:06:886 (1) -
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   01:07:362 (2,3) - Ctrl+H
2. all ok

1. Make the spinner-metre visible,and add something to the spinener-circle.png to make the rotation visible. When we spin the spinner with your current spinner it is seriously hard to tell whether we spin or now without looking at RPM.
2. You don't really need to display storyboard in fron of the combo fire. Why would you? You don't have any fake-hitobjects or anything that would require this at all.
3. Tags SB and storyboard are unnecessary. There is an option to look for storyboarded maps, you know.
4. Also, the tag Swedish isn't really necessary. The song has no swedish lyrics, so using it as a tag doesn't really help people to find the map.
5. Just a friendly suggestion, but you could use Light/Advanced or Standard/Heavy as the diffnames, since they look better. Well, at least to me they look better.

1. For a relaxing song with low BPM I would use AR4. Keep in mind, that this is also the easiest diff of the mapset. And to make diff settings more balanced, drop OD to 3.
2. 00:17:362 (1) - 00:26:886 (1) - 00:31:172 (1) - I would highly suggest you to remove these new combos. They seem overused, do not really fit and break your consistent pattrn. Furthermore, thy give too much HP to players when it's not necessary at all.
3. 00:30:219 (1) - the slider does not fit here because the downbeat is unstressed. Try this to keep your rhythm more natural. It will also make your comboing a bit more reasoanble, by the way
4. 00:34:029 (6,1) - minor - the transition does not work well here, it looks a bit untidy comparing with the rest of the patterns. Give a try to this pattern, it flows better, I believe.
5. 00:48:315 (2,3) - the rhythm did not work well here because vocals take the lead at this part and they're ignored in the map. Give a try to this rhythm.
   Note: 00:55:458 (1,2,3) - quite a same thing happens to this one. Make sure to fix this as well! / 01:47:839 (2,1,2,3) - same here, by the way. The parts are mapped in a very similar way, so, please, fix AL the similar parts in order to keep the consistency.
6. 00:53:077 (1) - I am pretty sure that there should not be any sounds on its tail + the hitsound on the head of this slider should get quiter because it sounds too loud while in music we can hardly hear it.
7. 01:00:219 (4) - I am sure that it will match perfectly with the drums if you replace the circle with an 1/2 slider.
8. 01:06:886 (1) - comboing gets sorta irregular again, I can see the reason, but it still feels extra. I highly suggest removing this new combo.
   Note: 01:14:505 (1) - same here. And the same applies for the rest of the diffs.
9. 03:16:410 (1) - minor - it gets overlapped with the HP-Bar. Your own custom HP-Bar. So, please, fix that by moving the slider down a bit.
   
   Your comboing might need a bit more work, also the rhythm during the calm parts might need a bit more attention. Overall, that's a clean and very enjoyable diff, I liked it a lot!

1. The comboing feels a bit irregular, please, find one more modder to check it and to make sure that it all going right. Re-considering comboing by yourself would also be fine.
2. To be honest, I would go with AR 6,5 since 7 fees a bit too slow for this diff.
3. 00:52:839 (4) - the same about hitsounding applies to this diff. Oh, and don't forget to take the clap off the slider's hhead, I believe that it will sound much better.
4. 01:12:600 (1,2) - although the pattern is cute, the jump feels exaggerated. Try to keep DS consistent here, please. The jumps like this and 01:25:934 (1,2) - feel random and a bit forced. I would highly suggest to avoid them at this diff.
5. 01:18:315 (1,2) - minor - uneven DS here, shouldn't be a problem, but why not to fix this?
6. 02:43:077 (3,1) - minor - the transition did not flow good here. Try to improve it by rotating the slider a bit. Flow
   
   Just the comboing, t bugs me a bit. Everything else looks great!

1. I'd reduce OD by 0,5 due to rather big amount of doubles/triplets wich may get kinda difficult to play. Along with this, you can increase HP by 0,5 to make it a bit more challenging to play.
2. 01:07:362 (2,3) - the jump is exaggerated and does not represent the music well. Please, reduce the DS to make them more playable, natural and fitting.
3. 01:37:839 (2,3,4,5) - a sudden switch from compressed 1/4s to x2,0 DS does not play well here. try to gradually increase spacing like x0,4 > x1.2 > x1.6..
   Note: 02:39:505 (1,2,3) - you might want to use lower DS here, as well. The part is calm and jumps feel really wird here.
   
   There is somewhat charming in this diff. Although som of the jump were a bit random, I really, really liked the diff. Good job!

Also, the tag Swedish isn't really necessary. The song has no swedish lyrics, so using it as a tag doesn't really help people to find the map.

The comboing feels a bit irregular, please, find one more modder to check it and to make sure that it all going right. Re-considering comboing by yourself would also be fine.

1. The "storyboard in fornt of combo fire" is still enabled in Heavy and Dance.
2. Tags conflict with the Medium diff. // Also, Swedish is not related to the song, since she doesn't sing Swedish.

1. 01:14:505 (3) - just consider adding a new combo here since you had new combos added to similar atterns like 02:15:458 (1) - 03:16:410 (1) .
2. 03:16:410 (1) - is still overlapped with your HP-Bar. I would recommend you to fix that.

1. I thouth we've already discussed that HP should be set to 5,5.
2. 01:22:124 (1,2) - they are meant to be symmetrical, aren't they?

1. 02:07:362 (4) - overlapped with HP-Bar, not a big deal, but better avoid it, I guess.
2. 02:44:981 (1,3) - super-minor - would you like to make them parallel? Looks better, huh?

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