1. Hard (3.03 stars, 73 notes)
2. Insane (4.29 stars, 714 notes)

HandHeldPillow wrote:

Insane

change offset to 6,666 - Thanks Dexus
00:06:848 (2) - move to x:272 y:56
00:51:037 (9) - move to x:224 y:72
00:51:645 (2,3,4) - move to x:160 y:208
01:50:227 (6) - evil just evil
02:10:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a star jump?
02:17:389 (4) - move to x:432 y:128
02:30:564 (6) - move to x:48 y:160
03:04:517 (7) - make this stack
add countdown <3

Notes: best offset ever

Indeed wrote:

Hi hi, this is going to be a really long, detailed post, so ready your eyes. Keep this in mind: All of these are suggestions of how I personally would change the map to make it look better. You do not have to use any of them, they are purely suggestions.

[General]

1. Since you changed your offset, you need to resnap your timing points, your first object, and Kiai times, open AiMod to figure out where.
2. Also, your first Kiai time should end here 01:24:301, instead of 01:21:260. That's where the chorus, the most powerful part of the song, ends.
3. For a cool effect, you could toggle Kiai time off here 02:23:287 and toggle it back on here 02:24:909.
4. 03:19:638 - You should toggle your Kiai time back on here and end it here 03:22:882, the chorus doesn't end until this point.

[Insane]

1. I'm not sure your entire map needs to be in 1.5-2.0 SV, I think just having it as normal SV during non-Kiai times is fine and during Kiai, you could bump it up to 1.25 for a nice effect. That being said, you should change the normal SV of your map to 1.60 if you implement this change. You will have to resnap all of your sliders though, so I'm not sure you will want to do this change.
2. Watch your triples. Some of the triples you have placed are confusing in the map, and in my opinion make the map uglier. I understand the popular thing to do in insanes nowadays is to stick stars and triples and triangles in them, but you should try to find a style that works for you. Making your own style makes your maps more noticeable to players who play your maps, and they will start to say things like, "Ah, Moo-chan's style is so nice, I'm going to download all of their maps!"
3. Finding your own style is something all mappers should try to do, no one likes to play the same style over and over, people like variety! So try out some different things that you like, take inspiration from some of your favorite mappers, and keep mapping! The more you map, the more you form a style.
   Enough of that, time for the mod.
4. 00:06:646 (1) - this object is not snapped, fix it by simply dragging it to the right a little on your timeline.
5. 00:07:679 (6,7,8) - Since it's so early in the song, you could make this a reverse 1/4 slider to set the "tone" of the song. This simply tells the player that there will be a lot of this rhythm in the song, and better prepares them for it.
   00:08:490 (1) - If you're trying to stay with the vocals, this note should be here 00:08:388, 1/4 of a beat earlier. I'm not sure you want to do that, as it would be confusing to have a circle randomly on a blue tick, but I'm not sure how to change this to make it flow better in the rhythm. Maybe something like this would make it sound better in the rhythm. You will have to connect those notes though and change your placement around a little to make it work, so I'm not sure you will want to change it.
6. 00:10:922 (1,2,3) - this does follow the vocals, but makes for a weird rhythm. I think you should change the 3 to a 1/4 slider, that would make it look like this. In my opinion, it sounds and looks better this way.
7. 00:11:530 (4) - make this a reverse slider, it looks quite awkward the way it is now, and the rhythm seems off a little.
8. 00:11:834 (5) - I would delete this if you decide to do the change above, having a circle start on a blue tick just feels awkward to me and changing it this way feels much smoother to me.
9. 00:15:078 (5,6) - I would stack these under the end of the previous slider, the way it is now makes it seem like there is space in between the notes and the previous slider and could confuse the player. Also, it just looks nicer.
10. 00:16:395 (3) - If you're going to follow the vocals, this should be a 1/2 slider.
11. 00:16:598 (4) - if you decide to do the change above, this needs to be deleted.
12. 00:17:003 (7,8,9,10) - I think you should connect these by putting a circle here 00:17:307, to me it sounds nicer and you could make a nice symmetry effect with the 5 circles following it.
13. 00:18:422 - If you listen closely, this should be the start of a long stream, ending here 00:19:638. It would be a nice addition to make your map more insane-y, if you don't want to put a stream here, this spot would also be good for a spinner.
14. 00:31:395 - I don't think a spinner should be here, I think you should map it, it would be a nice place for a 1,2,3 jump, followed by a 1 1/2 slider. You could make it a cool pattern too! The circles would have to be placed in 1/3 beat snap divisor, so watch for that if you do end up mapping it.
15. 00:34:436 (2,3,4) - this triple isn't needed, delete the 3.
16. 00:35:247 (7,8) - I would make this a 1/2 slider, it sounds better to me.
17. 00:36:260 (3) - if you're going to do repeating triplets, you should make each one a new combo, it just looks better to me. So make this note a new combo.
18. 00:37:071 (4,5,6) - make the 4 a new combo, and I'm not sure I would stack these, I think you should move it somewhere else. It would look better and for people using the HD mod, it would make it less confusing. But maybe you made it that way on purpose, if so, ignore me.
19. 00:37:476 (7) - new combo
20. 00:37:476 (7,8,9) - again, not sure I would stack these.
21. 00:37:882 (1,2,3) - same thing here
22. 00:38:693 (6) - I'm all for different sliders, but in my personal opinion, sliders like this are ugly. Maybe changing it to a Z slider would make it look nicer, and still have the same effect you were going for.
23. 00:41:936 (4,5,6) - This doesn't need to be a triple, delete the 5.
24. 00:42:747 (3) - new combo
25. 00:43:557 (4) - ^
26. 00:44:368 (4) - ^
27. 00:47:206 (6,7,8) - This does not need to be a triple, it would work better if you either A) delete the 7, or B) make it a 1/2 slider.
28. 00:49:943 (3) - delete this, it doesn't fit anything in the song, and since you seem to be following the vocals, it doesn't fit it either.
29. 00:50:855 (7,8,9,10,11) - I'm not sure this fits, but if you do keep it, make the 7 a new combo and I would change the placement of it to make it more symmetrical.
30. 01:08:693 (2,3) - I would connect these, since the first slider ends on a red tick and the slider following it starts on a blue tick, it basically just gives the player a heads up, saying "Hey! This slider starts earlier!"
31. 01:10:517 (5) - In my opinion, circular sliders are just plain unsightly, consider changing it to just a normal curved slider or you could try to connect it with the slider following it, like this
32. 01:21:564 - I think there should be a circle here, it would create a nice rhythm in the map. I also changed a few other things, like taking out 01:21:970 (4,5) and 01:22:274 (4,1). I think you should copy and paste the new rhythm, and make it look nice, so the final result I created looks like this and this
33. 01:22:882 (4,5,6) - this doesn't need to be a triple, it would be fine without the 5.
34. 01:24:605 (3) - this doesn't need to be here, delete it.
35. 01:25:314 (5) - move this to this time 01:25:517, I'll explain in the next one
36. 01:25:720 (6) - move this to this time 01:25:314. If you make these two changes, it sounds a lot better, it just basically repeats the pattern in the map and follows the vocals better, since the vocals repeat themselves. It makes it a lot smoother and sounds very nice this way.
37. 01:26:936 (7) - again, I'm all for different sliders, but making this a simple Z slider would suffice.
38. 01:30:280 (10) - this doesn't really fit, although I get what you were trying to go for. The vocals make a high "Ooh" sound, but it starts on the end of your reverse slider. If you want to accent the vocals, I would make 01:29:774 (9) - not reverse, and simply add a circle here 01:30:179.
39. 01:37:882 (3,4,5) - this doesn't need to be a triple.
40. 01:42:138 (6) - I wouldn't hide this slider under the 3, it looks a little weird to me. Maybe you should fiddle around with its placement and find something that looks nicer.
41. 01:42:747 (2,3,4) - this doesn't need to be a triplet, you could either delete the 3 or make it into a 1/2 slider.
42. 01:43:152 (5,6) - I would connect these since the second slider starts on a blue tick, it just tells the player to start the next slider earlier.
43. 01:44:368 (4) - new combo
44. 01:44:774 (1) - no need for new combo
45. 01:45:584 (1) - ^
46. 01:46:598 (2) - this slider is okay, but I'm not sure the change in SV is really needed. It would have the same effect and frankly, it would look nicer without the dramatic change in SV.
47. 01:49:638 (4,5) - I would connect these since the second slider starts on a blue tick, it just tells the player to start the next slider earlier.
48. 01:51:260 (4) - new combo
49. 01:52:071 (1) - no need for new combo
50. 01:52:476 (1) - ^
51. 01:55:720 (8,9,10) - triplet is not needed here
52. 01:59:165 (8) - This slider seems a little compact to me, maybe you should space it out a little more, to make it look like this
53. 02:00:584 (6) - new combo
54. 02:01:801 (2) - putting a long slider like this seems a little lazy to me, it's very easily mappable, the rhythm would look something like this
55. 02:06:057 (4) - new combo
56. 02:06:260 (5,6,7) - this doesn't really need to be a triplet, but it would be okay if you kept it here.
57. 02:10:314 (1,3) - this change and the following ones are just to make the star look nicer, move these to x:444 y:200
58. 02:10:517 (2) - move to x:276 y:312
59. 02:10:922 (4) - move to x:248 y:200
60. 02:11:328 (6) - move to x:348 y:128
61. 02:15:179 (2,3,4) - this doesn't need to be a triple
62. 02:26:328 (4) - new combo
    02:33:929 (9) - this looks a little weird, and it would fit a lot better to just put a stream here that connects to the following slider. If you did this, it would look like this. I also moved the following slider to start on the white tick, it goes with the vocals and looks better.
63. 02:35:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - this seems a little out of place, maybe you should try to follow the vocal exactly by placing two 1/4 sliders where the singing starts each time, so it would look like this
64. 02:36:463 (3,4) - I would connect these since the second slider starts on a blue tick, it just tells the player to start the next slider earlier.
65. 02:37:476 - to me, starting a break here and ending it here 02:43:963 would look better instead of having two back to back spinners.
66. 02:50:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should add a circle here 02:50:956 and connect these to make a stream, it would sound nicer and having it this way would make it play a lot smoother too.
67. 02:53:997 - there should be a circle here
68. 02:54:098 (3) - delete this, now you will have nice doubles that go with the song!
69. 02:54:909 (9) - this should be moved here 02:55:008 to keep with the doubles
70. 02:54:503 (6) - new combo
71. 03:13:557 (8,9,10) - this is sort of a weird rhythm here, I would change it somehow so that the 10 doesn't start on a blue tick. Maybe you could change it to something like this
72. 03:15:382 (4) - new combo

That's all I see, good luck on your map and other difficulties!

Squigly wrote:

- 00:08:490 (1) - put a not on the blue tick before the slider that leads into the slider before it ever so slightly
- 00:08:895 (3) - change this into a slider (lasting to the blue tick) and space it from the other slider a bit ofcourse
- 00:09:301 (5) - put another note inbetween this and the slider
- 00:09:503 (7,8) - shorten the slider by one tick, and put the note where the slider originally ended for the mew if thats what you were looking for
- 00:10:111 (1,2,3) - remove the note, put a note before the first slider, and then shorten the last slider by one tick and move it back one tick
- 00:10:922 (1) - put a note before this slider
- 00:11:226 (3) - remove this and put a not where the slider ended
- 00:11:530 (4) - dont repeat this and put a slider leading into the long slider.
- 00:11:936 (6,7,8) - remove the first note of this combo, and then make a small slider leading into the rest, the same angle as the previous short slider.
- 00:12:747 (1,2) - remove both and put a slider on the white tick up until the red tick
- 00:13:963 (1) - move up one tick, and place a note before it
- 00:15:078 (20) - remove this
- 00:15:382 (22) - change into slider and remove the next note
- 00:16:395 (4) - a note before this
- 00:16:801 (6) - remove this and put a short slider 1 tick before it
- 00:17:105 (7) - remove this and maybe reorganize
- 00:17:915 (4,5) - remove the 2nd note and make the other into a slider until blue tick
- 00:18:422 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remap to something like this

SPOILER

maybe ill mod more tomorrow, because there is a lot of stuffs and im tired

Squigly wrote:

you actually kinda had to change everything there o: a lot of it was timing issues and notes not being where they should you silly goose.

Xellie wrote:

TORI I LOVE YOU c: time to try and mod and only listen to me if you agree, Maybe you'll get to listen to me for once instead of the other way around c: <3
There's some parts in the intro where you don't map the bass hit on the white tick and imo it makes the timing kinda awkward Yea I know, I suck at mapping the beginning of songs lol
between 00:08:084 (7) - and 00:08:388 (1) -
between 00:09:706 (9) - and 00:10:010 (1) -
between 00:10:314 (3) - and 00:10:821 (1) -
Not mapping the white tick makes it feel odd because that's the beat that gives it a steady rhythm, I'll leave it up to you how to remap though cause it'd make the jumps you have now unrealistic
00:14:571 (5,6,7) - I'd say you should move the slider start to the white tick, and shorten it to end on the red tick, and add a note on each blue tick like this

like this

I'd say to make this spinner 00:30:787 (1) - start on the white tick after where it is and make it still end on the same white tick
00:39:909 (3,4,5) - Make this into sliders like this instead cause it matches the vocals better

like this

00:41:530 (3,4,5) - Same kind of thing

like this

00:50:855 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - I dun hear a stream here, I'd do this maybe

this

00:54:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd say turn each third note into a slider to the white tick to match the vocals maybe
00:58:963 (4) - I'd say make this a slider to the red tick to match vocal <3
00:59:368 (1,2) - turn this into a slider maybe instead of two notes since vocal is a held note
01:02:814 (4,5) - ^
01:04:638 (4) - Turn this into a slider to the red tick kinda like this 01:07:882 (4) -
01:05:652 (3,4,5) - make this a slider from 3-5 like how you did it here 01:02:409 (3) -
01:08:287 (1,2,3) - I think this isn't mapped to the beat right, I'd say something like this

like this

01:10:517 (5,1) - For this I'd say that this fits better

this

01:15:787 (4) - I think this should be a slider to the white tick
01:16:193 (1,2,3) - and that this should be a slider from 1-3 since the vocals keep the same pitch
01:17:611 (4) - same as before, slider to red tick to fit vocals better
01:18:625 (3,4,5) - slider 3-5 for vocals
01:19:030 (6) - slider till the white tick
01:20:855 (4) - slider to red tick <3
01:21:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - for here I'd say something more like dis would fit the beat better

like this

01:23:490 (7) - I'd take this out and change it to two sliders from the red to white ticks
01:26:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this would fit better like this

this

maybe turn 01:30:584 (1) - into a slider to where 01:30:990 (1) - is
01:37:071 (1) - into a slider to where01:37:476 (1) - is
01:37:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe change this

like this

01:40:314 (4) - maybe make this a more fun shape since the vocals jump up
01:41:328 (3,4,5,6) - maybe change this

like this

01:43:760 (7) - maybe make this into a single note on the red tick
01:46:395 (1,2) - Maybe add a note on the blue tick and make the slider end on the red tick instead, also adding a note on the white tick for the bass
01:50:247 (6) - maybe put a single on the red tick, and make the slider go from the white tick to blue tick
02:07:476 (1,1,1,1) - maybe make these sliders up to each other since the vocals sound held
02:12:544 (4,5,6) - maybe slider from 4-6
02:15:787 (5,6,7) - maybe slider from 5-7
02:19:030 (4) - turn this to a slider to the white tick maybe
02:25:111 (3,4,5) - slider from 3-5
02:30:584 (6) - slider till red tick
02:53:895 (2) - another note on blue tick after this
02:59:774 (1) - slider to red tick
03:01:193 (4) - note on white tick after this/ make 4 a slider to the white tick
03:04:030 (5,6) - note on blue tick between these
03:09:909 (6) - slider to red tick <3
03:13:557 (8) - single on white tick and slider from red tick to white tick where 03:13:963 (9) - starts, then single note where 03:13:963 (9) - would end
03:20:247 (3,4,5) - sldier from 3-5
03:23:490 (3,4) - note on the blue tick in between des
03:26:328 (8) - slider until 3:26:936
That's all <3 please don't yell at me/beat me for being bad at this >.< (well you can beat me if you want :p pls) Hope I helped Tori-senpai <3 lub ya I'll go through and make changes tomorrow. I'm quite tired atm and don't feel like mapping ;w;