I'd prefer the HP of each difficulty to be removed by 1 or 0.5, your choice but yeah, personally I'm not a fan of the current HP drains.

00:35:186 (2,3) - The jump from 1 to this feels a bit weird to me when I play it. Maybe move this to x:88?
00:40:436 (1) - x:272, increased distance feels good here for the strong note.

00:43:436 (3) - A dash fits here, maybe move this to x:400?
01:04:436 (1) - x:16 here, a dash fits nicely and this currently isn't a dash.
01:23:686 (6) - x:352 to ensure a dash here.
01:27:686 (6) - x:256 here, nice dash for the sound here and to finish off the song.

00:01:686 (6,7) - This movement just kinda feels awkward to me right now, I always miss 7. Maybe just drag this part to x:288 to make the movement easier?
00:30:186 (5) - This movement feels weird to me, maybe just make this a slider moving to the right?
00:33:936 (4) - I can't hear any sound at the start of this slider... just place a circle on the 1/4 at the slider end.
00:52:936 (2) - Dash to this please, x:224 feels nice.
00:53:936 (7) - Again, dash please, x:192?
01:23:561 (7,8,9) - Curve 6,7,8 feels too sharp to me, maybe drag these 3 notes and move to x:232, weakens the curve whilst keeping the jump to 9.
01:27:686 (8,9) - Because of the dash to 9 here, this triplet actually feels better a slight bit uneven, so I'd drag these 2 notes to x:224 for better flow.

00:07:811 (11) - Reduce this distance a tiny bit, x:96 feels good to me.
00:18:373 (9,10) - A slight curve here feels nicer flow to me. Maybe move this section to x:160?
00:26:436 (1) - x:184 please, maintains the hyper whilst making it flow slightly more naturally.
00:42:436 (1) - x:416, this flow feels a bit awkward to me right now, this fixes the difficult jump to 2.
00:54:186 (8) - x:112, just to make this jump feel more natural.
01:11:436 (1,2,3,4) - x:160, makes the jump feel nicer to play from this, whilst maintaining the hyper from it.

tfw appearing out of literally nowhere

[General]I'd prefer the HP of each difficulty to be removed by 1 or 0.5, your choice but yeah, personally I'm not a fan of the current HP drains. well i think those are okay for the HP in every diffs xD i would like to keep them

[Cup]00:35:186 (2,3) - The jump from 1 to this feels a bit weird to me when I play it. Maybe move this to x:88? okay~
00:40:436 (1) - x:272, increased distance feels good here for the strong note. sure!

[Salad]00:43:436 (3) - A dash fits here, maybe move this to x:400? i keep mine here since i used the mirror pattern on these notes 00:42:436 (1,2,3,4) - ><
01:04:436 (1) - x:16 here, a dash fits nicely and this currently isn't a dash. i changed something by myself here :p
01:23:686 (6) - x:352 to ensure a dash here. sure
01:27:686 (6) - x:256 here, nice dash for the sound here and to finish off the song. kay!

[Platter]00:01:686 (6,7) - This movement just kinda feels awkward to me right now, I always miss 7. Maybe just drag this part to x:288 to make the movement easier? it would make an anti-flow one if i move it >< i think the current one is okay and i think it's not really hard tho
00:30:186 (5) - This movement feels weird to me, maybe just make this a slider moving to the right? sure
00:33:936 (4) - I can't hear any sound at the start of this slider... just place a circle on the 1/4 at the slider end. i didn't follow all the instruments there, like i did on 00:25:936 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:29:936 (4,5) - >< i keep mine here
00:52:936 (2) - Dash to this please, x:224 feels nice.
00:53:936 (7) - Again, dash please, x:192? the normal one are better imo, i keep mine again here
01:23:561 (7,8,9) - Curve 6,7,8 feels too sharp to me, maybe drag these 3 notes and move to x:232, weakens the curve whilst keeping the jump to 9. sure
01:27:686 (8,9) - Because of the dash to 9 here, this triplet actually feels better a slight bit uneven, so I'd drag these 2 notes to x:224 for better flow. sure!

[Rain]00:07:811 (11) - Reduce this distance a tiny bit, x:96 feels good to me.
00:18:373 (9,10) - A slight curve here feels nicer flow to me. Maybe move this section to x:160?
00:26:436 (1) - x:184 please, maintains the hyper whilst making it flow slightly more naturally.
00:42:436 (1) - x:416, this flow feels a bit awkward to me right now, this fixes the difficult jump to 2.
00:54:186 (8) - x:112, just to make this jump feel more natural.
01:11:436 (1,2,3,4) - x:160, makes the jump feel nicer to play from this, whilst maintaining the hyper from it. mostly all changed \w/

Got told you quit just after I finished this mod ;w; well I finished it anyway, just in case you ever return, this'll be very quick to rank.

2016-01-02 11:24 ZiRoX: miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing
2016-01-02 11:24 mingmichael: heeyy hooo
2016-01-02 11:24 mingmichael: o/
2016-01-02 11:24 ZiRoX: how are you!
2016-01-02 11:25 mingmichael: perfectly fine here \w/
2016-01-02 11:26 mingmichael: and you there?
2016-01-02 11:26 ZiRoX: fine
2016-01-02 11:26 ZiRoX: back to osu ?
2016-01-02 11:27 mingmichael: just in winter holiday :p
2016-01-02 11:28 ZiRoX: lol
2016-01-02 11:28 ZiRoX: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/449486 Taneda Risa - Wareta Ringo (TV edit)]
2016-01-02 11:28 ZiRoX: update offset :_>
2016-01-02 11:29 mingmichael: OOOOH
2016-01-02 11:29 mingmichael: i forget that map
2016-01-02 11:29 mingmichael: xD
2016-01-02 11:29 mingmichael: hahahahah
2016-01-02 11:29 mingmichael: kaykay xD
2016-01-02 11:43 mingmichael: i've fixed and uploaded it xD
2016-01-02 11:43 ZiRoX:
2016-01-02 12:02 ZiRoX: ming ming ming :>
2016-01-02 12:03 mingmichael: yes yes yes?
2016-01-02 12:04 ZiRoX: 00:58:449 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this part bugs me a little, mind reducing the distances a tiny bit?
2016-01-02 12:04 mingmichael: ohhh
2016-01-02 12:04 mingmichael: okay, i'll try
2016-01-02 12:05 ZiRoX: 01:04:449 (1,2,3,4) - the jump back to the triplet may be easily misseable after the hyperdash, I think the distance you used on 00:56:449 (1,2) - (which is x1,84) plays really nice
2016-01-02 12:06 mingmichael: wait wait xD
2016-01-02 12:06 ZiRoX: lol
2016-01-02 12:06 ZiRoX: haha
2016-01-02 12:08 mingmichael: okay i've changed all of them
2016-01-02 12:11 ZiRoX: and on platter
2016-01-02 12:11 ZiRoX: 00:01:699 (6,7) - 00:05:699 (7,8) - for these both, x3,40 distance as in 00:03:449 (6,7) - plays better
2016-01-02 12:12 mingmichael: ahhh okay xD
2016-01-02 12:12 ZiRoX: 00:07:449 (6,7,8) - and you could move this one gridspace to the right, to reduce the distance to the next one (same type of pattern)
2016-01-02 12:13 mingmichael: okay
2016-01-02 12:15 ZiRoX: and on that last one, actually two would be better (distance to next note should be x3,60)
2016-01-02 12:15 mingmichael: okayy xD
2016-01-02 12:16 ZiRoX: nerfing the distances huehue
2016-01-02 12:16 ZiRoX: 00:09:699 (5,6) - x3,40 :3?
2016-01-02 12:16 ZiRoX: 00:11:449 (6,7,8) - x3,60 :3?
2016-01-02 12:17 ZiRoX: 00:21:699 (4,5) - x3,40 :3
2016-01-02 12:17 mingmichael: all done :3
2016-01-02 12:20 ZiRoX: 01:10:824 (4,5) - 01:11:824 (4,5) -
2016-01-02 12:20 ZiRoX: and these two, maybe
2016-01-02 12:20 ZiRoX: because of the movement back to the next note
2016-01-02 12:21 mingmichael: okieee
2016-01-02 12:21 ZiRoX: and that's all of it :3
2016-01-02 12:21 mingmichael: okayyy xD
2016-01-02 12:22 ZiRoX: \:D/
2016-01-02 12:22 mingmichael: let me upload it then huehuehuee
2016-01-02 12:23 mingmichael: done \w/
2016-01-02 12:24 ZiRoX: okay time to testplay for one last time

ajarin ngemap ctb pls wong saia saja sudah lupa ngemap ctb begimana toh huehue x"D