150P - Shuuen no Shiori [Taiko|Osu]

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Topic Starter
Yasora

-Famous- wrote:

Mod request from my Queue

Normal
  1. The distance seems too close. Maybe try a distance that's larger than one. seems fine like this for me o3o
  2. 00:13:196 (4,5) - Seems like blanket. Try to blanket 00:12:053 (3,4).
  3. 00:32:339 (4) - Add NC and remove NC 00:32:624 (1)? That's easier to read, because of the longer break between the notes. But I'm not sure about it.
  4. 00:33:481 (3) - Add NC, same reason as above.
  5. Suggestion: add NC 00:34:624 (3); remove NC 00:34:910 (1); add NC 00:36:910 (5); remove NC 00:37:196 (1); add NC 00:39:196 (5); remove NC 00:39:481 (1). That fits more to the singing.
  6. 01:15:767 and 01:16:910 feels like a note is missing. try to following vocal in here..
  7. 01:21:481 (2) - is a little bit close to 01:20:624 (1).
  8. 01:33:196 to 02:37:196 - Did you copy & paste the whole part? If yes, copy & paste it again after the changes.
  9. 03:42:339 (1) - I guess the spinner is too short for Normal. Enpoint: 03:45:767? seems too long, changed until 03:44:481 instead
Hard
  1. The spacing between 00:12:339 (2,3) and 00:13:624 (3,4) is too small.
  2. 01:02:053 (6,1) - Blanket. it's not blanket from beginning..
  3. 01:10:053 (7,1) - The spacing is too huge. Compare it with 01:10:624 (2,3).
  4. 01:12:910 (2,3) - The spacing is too small again.
  5. 01:39:624 (6,1) - Spacing too big.
Insane

Looks fine, except some blankets:
  1. 00:32:624 (5,6) - Blanket.
  2. 00:54:339 (3,4) - Make better blanket.
  3. 00:57:196 (3) - Move to x:92 ; y:156. Blanket looks better.
  4. 00:57:481 (4,5) - Fix blanket.
  5. 00:59:624 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:02:767 (6,7) - ^
  7. 01:48:053 (6,1) - ^
  8. 02:04:053 (5) - Move the last slider point to x:300 ; y:48 for better blanekt fix it by myself
Demise

Nothing to say, except 03:14:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2). Sounds wrong to me.why? I heard a bit fast drum sound in there o.o

Nice mapset, I like it. Good luck! :)
thank you :3!

for taiko modders, pls be patience for waiting betsu' reply..
Betsuto
here I come ~
a lot of fix

Betsu's Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/ahy1v/8fae8ffd23.osu
Betsu's Oni : http://puu.sh/ahy4e/91306bd913.osu

Thanks XD
Topic Starter
Yasora
updated~
mliencheng
Taiko mod from mod queue request ~


00:40:339(191,192) ctrl G

00:45:053(216,217) ctrl G

01:02:767 k, high pitch here

01:40:339(496,497) ctrl G

02:00:196(591,592) k. Normally there's only 1/4 ddd or kkk in muzukashii diffs

02:05:481 add d

02:10:624 slider finishes here looks better ?
00:22:839 I suggest removing this note if there's no clear sound (same for 00:27:410)

01:17:910 k

01:20:481 D in consistency with 01:19:339

01:29:839 move to 01:29:696 following guitar sound

02:06:481 the stream here is according to the background sound, which is Inner Oni style. Maybe simplify it to something following the vocal.
As for the stream here 02:09:767, since there's no vocal , I think it's ok to follow drum sounds

02:25:624 D, consistency with 02:24:481

02:26:481(902,903,904) kkk would be nice
Moo-Chan
From my modding queue~

[Insane]
  1. I think you should make it AR9
  2. 00:26:767 (1,2) - Blanket this
  3. 00:45:196 (1,2) - ^^
  4. 02:58:624 (3,4,5) - ^^
  5. 02:59:196 (5) - Sounds like there's a whistle on this slider that shouldn't be there
  6. 03:42:339 (1) - Should drag this out to 03:45:767 and then make the ending of this spinner quieter

That's all I see c: Good luck with ranking~
ts8zs
hey:3
[Demise]
01:55:910 (1,2,3) - ds
02:05:339 (2,3) - swap
03:01:624 (3) - 368,264
03:10:053 (6) - 348,92
03:33:624 (2) - 140,328
03:51:481 (3) - del
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - sv x0.75
02:32:910 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+J
02:59:196 (5) - del slider whistle
Normal's sliderslide make it default

lazy._.
Topic Starter
Yasora

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane]
  1. I think you should make it AR9 too fast imo
  2. 00:26:767 (1,2) - Blanket this not aim to blanket that..
  3. 00:45:196 (1,2) - ^^ ^
  4. 02:58:624 (3,4,5) - ^^ ^
  5. 02:59:196 (5) - Sounds like there's a whistle on this slider that shouldn't be there
  6. 03:42:339 (1) - Should drag this out to 03:45:767 and then make the ending of this spinner quieter changed into 03:44:481 instead (consistency with other diff

That's all I see c: Good luck with ranking~

ts8zs wrote:

hey:3
[Demise]
01:55:910 (1,2,3) - ds
02:05:339 (2,3) - swap seems weird
03:01:624 (3) - 368,264 ^
03:10:053 (6) - 348,92
03:33:624 (2) - 140,328 too far
03:51:481 (3) - del music end in there..
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - sv x0.75 will weird though
02:32:910 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+J
02:59:196 (5) - del slider whistle
Normal's sliderslide make it default how..

lazy._. lol it's fine
thanks both of you!

new page comboer
Hanten
omg yes a shuuen map ;;w;;

hi yasora.i think you should probably add suzumu to the tags since he wrote the lyrics :)

good luck /o/
Neku Okazaki
[Muzukashii]
00:40:624 (193) - k | Have diferent sound
01:50:481 (550,551,552) - Make it 1/2 | 1/4 alone sees bad
02:28:339 - Add d

Good map, I see good the oni ~
ts8zs
Normal's sliderslide make it default how..
del normal-sliderslide
Topic Starter
Yasora

koronyanko wrote:

omg yes a shuuen map ;;w;;

hi yasora.i think you should probably add suzumu to the tags since he wrote the lyrics :)

good luck /o/
sure why not :D

ts8zs wrote:

Normal's sliderslide make it default how..
del normal-sliderslide
ic ic lol sorry that was stupid question yea...
Verlaren
From my queue.

Normal:
00:14:339 (1) - maybe move on 00:14:624, add note on 00:14:339 and move NC on this note from 00:14:624 ?
02:48:910 - add note?
03:10:053 (2) - remove this pattern;
03:09:196 (1) - remove NC;
03:05:767 (1) - repainted in red color (do it only if you have made changes here 03:10:053 (2) and here 03:09:196 (1));

Hard:
00:21:624 (5) - remove this pattern and add note on 00:21:767;
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - too many whistles, a bit hurt to listen.
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^
03:38:910 (4) - add whistle on slider's start;

Insane:
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - same as in hard. I think that here you are using whistles fairly too often.
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^

Demise:
Same as in previous diffs. (about whistles, I think they should used here a little sparingly).


sorry for poor mod. I am not doing this within one year.
Topic Starter
Yasora

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue.

Normal:
00:14:339 (1) - maybe move on 00:14:624, add note on 00:14:339 and move NC on this note from 00:14:624 ? sounds weird for me
02:48:910 - add note?
03:10:053 (2) - remove this pattern; following vocal..
03:09:196 (1) - remove NC; no
03:05:767 (1) - repainted in red color (do it only if you have made changes here 03:10:053 (2) and here 03:09:196 (1));

Hard:
00:21:624 (5) - remove this pattern and add note on 00:21:767; nuu
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - too many whistles, a bit hurt to listen. but it follow the vocal ;-;
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^ ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^ ^
03:38:910 (4) - add whistle on slider's start; it will be not consistent..

Insane:
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - same as in hard. I think that here you are using whistles fairly too often. same too lol sorry ;-;
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^

Demise:
Same as in previous diffs. (about whistles, I think they should used here a little sparingly).


sorry for poor mod. I am not doing this within one year. wow..
thank you! :)



stuck again in BSS ;-;
Betsuto
Topic Starter
Yasora
updated~
Chyo-Kun
Requested in my modding queue : t/229105



Normal


 
  1. 00:15:481 (1,2,3) - I think that the fact that you don't have any beats between those sliders is intentional, but I can't see why. It's a normal, I think you can afford to put beats between those, just like you did 00:17:767 (5,6,1)  here..
     
     

    Hard


     
  2. Looks totally fine to me!
     
     

    Insane


     
  3. 00:51:624 (4) - This beat is sooo misleading and confusing. I suggest not stacking it with 00:51:196 (1) - ..
  4. 01:32:624 (2,3) - Snap those sliders a little closer to each other?
     
  5. 01:55:624 (4) - Same thing I pointed out before with the same pattern. (These two are a personal opinion)
     

    Demise


     
  6. 00:05:481 (2,3,4,5) - This stream starts one tick late, probably on purpuse, but it still sound kind of awkward while playng. I suggest adding a beat 00:05:410  here (Where it misses on purpose) and connect the whole stream to the previous slider ( 00:05:053 (1) ) to create a better gameplay experience. This is only an opinion, try to do what I said, test it out and then decide if you want to change it or let it the way it is now.
     
  7. 00:12:767 (3) - I suggest moving this beat on 00:12:339 (1) this slider tail (x:236 y:324), this because having that beat there creates a more natural movement and better experience. I know that the spacing becomes quite awkward, but you are not even using it in this difficulty, so I don't see how this is going to stop you from changing.
     

    頑張って!


Sorry if you got this mod quite late after the request, I had problems that I won't go into here.
Also my mod is full of suggestions because the map lacks any technical problems at all, but I just don't like this mapping style and it was very hard to not be lazy. Hope it somewhat helped anyway.
Topic Starter
Yasora
will reply when I'm home (at holiday right now ;w;)
Kaguya Hourain
Let's go!

[General]
All's good.

[Normal]
00:03:910 (1,2) - Bend (1) more so that the cursor movement feels more natural.
00:21:196 (1,2) - Rotate this a little bit for more flowy cursor movement.
00:25:767 (1,2,3) - Move these to the right for better movement. No reason for (1) to be this left from the previous slider.
00:46:339 (3) - Move the middle point to x:120 y:136 for a perfect blanket.
00:49:196 (3) - Bend this a little why not.
00:54:339 (1) - Move this to x:424 y:96, flows better.
01:24:053 (1,1,1) - You could end the first spinner where the circle is and move the circle to where the first spinner starts and start the spinner 1/2 later.
02:13:053 (1) - Move the first point to x:144 y:296, middle point to x:132 y:228 and endpoint to x:148 y:176, blankets better.
02:29:196 (1,1,1) - Same as previous section.
02:50:910 (4) - If you're following the vocals this should go to the red point backwards.
03:24:053 (1,1,1) - Same as previous section.
03:37:481 (3) - x:416 y:340, better blanket.
03:38:339 (1) - x:352 y:128, better flow.
Many many flow faults. Look out for them. Also I spotted many rhythm inconsistencies. Unless you just wanted to go with a custom rhythm of your own you should change the placement of many sliders in the timeline since they don't precisely follow the vocals.

[Hard]
HP -1
OD -0.5 or -1
00:07:767 (2) - Move this a little bit lower for flow.
00:10:053 (2,3,4) - Slider > slider > circle rather than the opposite.
00:11:481 (3,4) - Slider > circle > rather than circle > slider.
00:13:481 (2,3) - ^
00:54:767 (2,3,1,2) - Ok. This song needs its sliders starting on white ticks, not red ticks. Try doing that.
01:09:481 (5,6,7) - More like this (timeline).
03:07:910 (1) - Midpoint one grid higher betters the blanket.
Flow problems again. There's just so many to mention all of them.

[Insane]
00:20:339 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - Everything like the second section should become like the first. Meaning slider > slider > circle.
00:21:624 (3,1) - Little stacking problem here. Fix it please.
00:22:624 (2,4) - Here as well.
00:28:624 (3,4,5) - Confusing. Make the circles part of the slider.
00:58:910 (1,3,5) - Why not blanket (1)'s curve with (3) and then stack (5) on it?
The biggest problem of the map is the 1/2 sliders starting on red ticks they're everywhere! Fix them please!!!
Another problem is the flow of the map but it's not that significant. Also there are some blankets you can do better on.

[Demise]
HP imo is too high, but sustainable.
Again with the red tick sliders. All your diffs have the same exact problems. Redtick sliders, bad flow and unperfect blankets.
There really is nothing else wrong with this map. But these problems are what basically every map needs to look out for.

Well that's it from me. Hope I helped. Good luck!
o7
Minao
Hi! From my special Vocaloid queue!

[General]
This mapset is very good :o I'll not have a lot to say ._."

[Normal]
00:09:624 (3) - The blanket can be improved if you look at (2) hitcircle.
00:30:624 (3) - ^ if you ctrl+g (2)
01:00:053 (3) - The end is a little too much curved, (4)'s hitcircle can help to see.
01:14:910 (1) - Maybe do something a little symetric with (2) like: http://puu.sh/ayvNC/674152a9c9.jpg because with the actual pattern (1) and (2) seems a little "in conflict"
02:13:053 (1) - The blanket can be improved if you look at (3)'s hitcircle
03:03:339 (3) - The blanket can fit better with (2)'s end

[Hard]
00:52:053 (1) - Maybe rework a little this slider to make it fit with (2)'s hitcircle
01:35:481 (1) - Maybe make the blanket fit with (6)...
02:55:339 (6) - I don't really like the little wriggle at the end, maybe delete it: http://puu.sh/aywGM/7b6f93a611.jpg
03:07:910 (1) - The blanket can be curved a little more... I feel so useless in this mod XD

[Insane]
00:08:481 (1) - The blanket is too curved if you look at (7)'s end.
00:24:910 (2) - Maybe curve it a little more
00:29:624 (2) - The blanket can be improved if you lookt at (1)'s end.
00:39:910 (2) - Mabye curve it more to fit with (1)'s end
01:33:624 (2) - ^
02:16:196 (4) - Maybe curve this one a little more
02:33:339 (3) - I prefer a 100% straight slider here
03:10:624 (2,4) - Maybe curve a little more these ones

[Demise]
00:19:910 (1) - Curve it a little more?

Well sorry it was not a veru helpful mod @__@"
Ready for ranking in my opinion...
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Yasora

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/229105



Normal


 
  1. 00:15:481 (1,2,3) - I think that the fact that you don't have any beats between those sliders is intentional, but I can't see why. It's a normal, I think you can afford to put beats between those, just like you did 00:17:767 (5,6,1)  here..
     
     

    Hard


     
  2. Looks totally fine to me!
     
     

    Insane


     
  3. 00:51:624 (4) - This beat is sooo misleading and confusing. I suggest not stacking it with 00:51:196 (1) - .. I don't have any idea where I should move..
  4. 01:32:624 (2,3) - Snap those sliders a little closer to each other?
     
  5. 01:55:624 (4) - Same thing I pointed out before with the same pattern. (These two are a personal opinion)
     

    Demise


     
  6. 00:05:481 (2,3,4,5) - This stream starts one tick late, probably on purpuse, but it still sound kind of awkward while playng. I suggest adding a beat 00:05:410  here (Where it misses on purpose) and connect the whole stream to the previous slider ( 00:05:053 (1) ) to create a better gameplay experience. This is only an opinion, try to do what I said, test it out and then decide if you want to change it or let it the way it is now. yeah I know, but it will look weird at placement imo..
     
  7. 00:12:767 (3) - I suggest moving this beat on 00:12:339 (1) this slider tail (x:236 y:324), this because having that beat there creates a more natural movement and better experience. I know that the spacing becomes quite awkward, but you are not even using it in this difficulty, so I don't see how this is going to stop you from changing. it will ruin triangle pattern, but I try to change it that not far from your suggestion :3
     

    頑張って!


Sorry if you got this mod quite late after the request, I had problems that I won't go into here.
Also my mod is full of suggestions because the map lacks any technical problems at all, but I just don't like this mapping style and it was very hard to not be lazy. Hope it somewhat helped anyway.

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Let's go!

[General]
All's good.

[Normal]
00:03:910 (1,2) - Bend (1) more so that the cursor movement feels more natural.
00:21:196 (1,2) - Rotate this a little bit for more flowy cursor movement.
00:25:767 (1,2,3) - Move these to the right for better movement. No reason for (1) to be this left from the previous slider. move by myself ._.
00:46:339 (3) - Move the middle point to x:120 y:136 for a perfect blanket.
00:49:196 (3) - Bend this a little why not.
00:54:339 (1) - Move this to x:424 y:96, flows better.
01:24:053 (1,1,1) - You could end the first spinner where the circle is and move the circle to where the first spinner starts and start the spinner 1/2 later. nope
02:13:053 (1) - Move the first point to x:144 y:296, middle point to x:132 y:228 and endpoint to x:148 y:176, blankets better.
02:29:196 (1,1,1) - Same as previous section. same
02:50:910 (4) - If you're following the vocals this should go to the red point backwards. but when click seems more better at white tick
03:24:053 (1,1,1) - Same as previous section.same
03:37:481 (3) - x:416 y:340, better blanket.
03:38:339 (1) - x:352 y:128, better flow.
Many many flow faults. Look out for them. Also I spotted many rhythm inconsistencies. Unless you just wanted to go with a custom rhythm of your own you should change the placement of many sliders in the timeline since they don't precisely follow the vocals. it's hard to follow some vocal in here ugu blame high bpm

[Hard]
HP -1 too low for hard
OD -0.5 or -1 -1 for balance imo..
00:07:767 (2) - Move this a little bit lower for flow.
00:10:053 (2,3,4) - Slider > slider > circle rather than the opposite. I don't see what the different in rhythm..
00:11:481 (3,4) - Slider > circle > rather than circle > slider. ^
00:13:481 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:54:767 (2,3,1,2) - Ok. This song needs its sliders starting on white ticks, not red ticks. Try doing that. why, it's still comfortable to click ._.
01:09:481 (5,6,7) - More like this (timeline).
03:07:910 (1) - Midpoint one grid higher betters the blanket.
Flow problems again. There's just so many to mention all of them.

[Insane]
00:20:339 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - Everything like the second section should become like the first. Meaning slider > slider > circle. I just don't understand, what the different.. sound fine with me :?
00:21:624 (3,1) - Little stacking problem here. Fix it please. already fixed this many times, but seems it back again like this :'(
00:22:624 (2,4) - Here as well.
00:28:624 (3,4,5) - Confusing. Make the circles part of the slider.
00:58:910 (1,3,5) - Why not blanket (1)'s curve with (3) and then stack (5) on it?
The biggest problem of the map is the 1/2 sliders starting on red ticks they're everywhere! Fix them please!!!
Another problem is the flow of the map but it's not that significant. Also there are some blankets you can do better on.

[Demise]
HP imo is too high, but sustainable.
Again with the red tick sliders. All your diffs have the same exact problems. Redtick sliders, bad flow and unperfect blankets.
There really is nothing else wrong with this map. But these problems are what basically every map needs to look out for.
m-my first time heard put starting slider at red tick is problem.. I guess it still fit with music so why not.. also maybe about flow you and me have different sense, imo my flow fine with mouse movement :) and for unperfect blanket I can't help it since I'm bad at that huehuehue. but still thanks for honest opinion! hope I'm not misunderstand you :3

Well that's it from me. Hope I helped. Good luck!
o7

Minao wrote:

Hi! From my special Vocaloid queue!

[General]
This mapset is very good :o I'll not have a lot to say ._."

[Normal]
00:09:624 (3) - The blanket can be improved if you look at (2) hitcircle.
00:30:624 (3) - ^ if you ctrl+g (2)
01:00:053 (3) - The end is a little too much curved, (4)'s hitcircle can help to see. changed pattern.. not good with blanket ;-;
01:14:910 (1) - Maybe do something a little symetric with (2) like: http://puu.sh/ayvNC/674152a9c9.jpg because with the actual pattern (1) and (2) seems a little "in conflict"
02:13:053 (1) - The blanket can be improved if you look at (3)'s hitcircle
03:03:339 (3) - The blanket can fit better with (2)'s end

[Hard]
00:52:053 (1) - Maybe rework a little this slider to make it fit with (2)'s hitcircle
01:35:481 (1) - Maybe make the blanket fit with (6)...
02:55:339 (6) - I don't really like the little wriggle at the end, maybe delete it: http://puu.sh/aywGM/7b6f93a611.jpg
03:07:910 (1) - The blanket can be curved a little more... I feel so useless in this mod XD fixed from mod above :3

[Insane]
00:08:481 (1) - The blanket is too curved if you look at (7)'s end.
00:24:910 (2) - Maybe curve it a little more
00:29:624 (2) - The blanket can be improved if you lookt at (1)'s end.
00:39:910 (2) - Mabye curve it more to fit with (1)'s end seems fine.. but will considering it.. :3
01:33:624 (2) - ^
02:16:196 (4) - Maybe curve this one a little more want this slider look same with (1)
02:33:339 (3) - I prefer a 100% straight slider here seems boring :(
03:10:624 (2,4) - Maybe curve a little more these ones

[Demise]
00:19:910 (1) - Curve it a little more? wanna parallel with (3)

Well sorry it was not a veru helpful mod @__@"
Ready for ranking in my opinion...
Good luck!
thanks a lot all :3!
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