150P - Shuuen no Shiori [Taiko|Osu]

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Yasora

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from my modding queue

[General]
Check letter box during breaks because your map has break time

[Demise]
00:44:624 (4) - NC no
00:57:196 (4) - ^ ^
01:38:624 (8) - NC then delete NC 01:38:910 (1) -
02:01:196 (5) - NC no
02:55:910 (3) - NC ^

[Insane]
If my NC suggestions aren't useful ignore it
00:05:339 (1,2) - How about convert to stream? I like slider like this :''3
00:32:624 (5) - NC no
00:44:053 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:44:481 (2) -
00:48:624 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:49:053 (2) - no
00:53:196 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:53:624 (2) - ^
00:57:767 (5) - NC ^
01:00:053 (5) - ^ ^
01:02:339 (5) - ^ ^
01:15:910 (5) - ^ ^
01:32:624 (2,3) - How about convert to stream? ^
01:34:339 (5) - NC ^
01:38:910 (6) - ^ ^
01:48:053 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:48:481 (2) -
01:50:910 (7,8) - How about convert to stream? no
01:52:624 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:53:053 (2) - ^
01:57:196 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:57:624 (2) - ^
02:57:624 (5) - NC and delete NC 02:58:053 (1) - ^
02:58:767 (4) - NC ^
03:00:767 (3) - NC ^
03:11:339 (5) - ^ ^
03:32:624 (2) - How about convert to stream? ^
The patterns are okay

[Normal]
00:48:624 (2,4) - Make these look same changed that part lol
skip NC mod

[Hard]
Patterns are fine but skip NC mod

[Overall]
I skip NC mod on normal and hard or they will be too much mod on NC , it's just somehow look like the same idea of where to NC in Insane
Also I give this map a star, good map

Good luck
thank you for mod and star!
Charlotte
Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Betsu's Muzukashii

SV1.5→1.4 OD6→OD4or5 HP6→5
Song Setup→Design→Letter box (uncheck)

00:28:481 (130) - change k
02:35:624 (774) - ^

Betsu's Oni

SV1.5→1.4
Song Setup→Design→Letter box (uncheck)

01:05:272 - add k
02:06:624 (757) - change k
02:06:767 (759) - change d
02:06:910 (761) - change k
02:10:624 (792) - change k

It is a great overall 8-)

good luck :)
toara_fict
Hi. Taiko Mod request from Yasora.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that



[ General]
  1. all recheck this

  2. SV : 1.5 => 1.4

  3. BG : Change Video => BG


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[ Betsu's Oni]
  1. 00:28:696 - add note here ( have drum sound. )


  2. 00:46:196 (263,264) - swap ( 00:46:339 (264) - have Cymbals? sounds. )


  3. 00:56:339 (320) - Change d ( 00:56:339 (320,321) - some sounds. )


  4. 01:27:481 (523) - Change k ? ( have Cymbals? sounds. )


  5. 01:50:196 (664,665,666,667) - if you follow drum sound => swap ? ( if vocal follow => no change plz. )


  6. 02:10:053 (783) - d ( not k sounds. this note d )


  7. 02:19:410 (851) - delete & 02:19:553 - 02:19:696 - add k here ? ( Want to follow drum sound >< )


  8. 02:40:624 - add k here ? ( 02:40:339 (991,992) - some sounds. )


  9. 03:22:553 (121) - why k ? this note d.


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Muzu is fine.

Good Luck ~ :3
[I]MMoRTal[S]
From my queue

00:03:481 (11,12) - Ctrl+G
03:41:767 (204) - k
00:15:196 (78) - d
00:56:339 (320) - d
03:33:053 (192) - d
03:41:767 (260,261,262,263,264,265,266) - ddkkddk


Good Luck ~ :)
-Famous-
Mod request from my Queue

Normal
  1. The distance seems too close. Maybe try a distance that's larger than one.
  2. 00:13:196 (4,5) - Seems like blanket. Try to blanket 00:12:053 (3,4).
  3. 00:32:339 (4) - Add NC and remove NC 00:32:624 (1)? That's easier to read, because of the longer break between the notes. But I'm not sure about it.
  4. 00:33:481 (3) - Add NC, same reason as above.
  5. Suggestion: add NC 00:34:624 (3); remove NC 00:34:910 (1); add NC 00:36:910 (5); remove NC 00:37:196 (1); add NC 00:39:196 (5); remove NC 00:39:481 (1). That fits more to the singing.
  6. 01:15:767 and 01:16:910 feels like a note is missing.
  7. 01:21:481 (2) - is a little bit close to 01:20:624 (1).
  8. 01:33:196 to 02:37:196 - Did you copy & paste the whole part? If yes, copy & paste it again after the changes.
  9. 03:42:339 (1) - I guess the spinner is too short for Normal. Enpoint: 03:45:767?
Hard
  1. The spacing between 00:12:339 (2,3) and 00:13:624 (3,4) is too small.
  2. 01:02:053 (6,1) - Blanket.
  3. 01:10:053 (7,1) - The spacing is too huge. Compare it with 01:10:624 (2,3).
  4. 01:12:910 (2,3) - The spacing is too small again.
  5. 01:39:624 (6,1) - Spacing too big.
Insane

Looks fine, except some blankets:
  1. 00:32:624 (5,6) - Blanket.
  2. 00:54:339 (3,4) - Make better blanket.
  3. 00:57:196 (3) - Move to x:92 ; y:156. Blanket looks better.
  4. 00:57:481 (4,5) - Fix blanket.
  5. 00:59:624 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:02:767 (6,7) - ^
  7. 01:48:053 (6,1) - ^
  8. 02:04:053 (5) - Move the last slider point to x:300 ; y:48 for better blanekt
Demise

Nothing to say, except 03:14:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2). Sounds wrong to me.

Nice mapset, I like it. Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Yasora

-Famous- wrote:

Mod request from my Queue

Normal
  1. The distance seems too close. Maybe try a distance that's larger than one. seems fine like this for me o3o
  2. 00:13:196 (4,5) - Seems like blanket. Try to blanket 00:12:053 (3,4).
  3. 00:32:339 (4) - Add NC and remove NC 00:32:624 (1)? That's easier to read, because of the longer break between the notes. But I'm not sure about it.
  4. 00:33:481 (3) - Add NC, same reason as above.
  5. Suggestion: add NC 00:34:624 (3); remove NC 00:34:910 (1); add NC 00:36:910 (5); remove NC 00:37:196 (1); add NC 00:39:196 (5); remove NC 00:39:481 (1). That fits more to the singing.
  6. 01:15:767 and 01:16:910 feels like a note is missing. try to following vocal in here..
  7. 01:21:481 (2) - is a little bit close to 01:20:624 (1).
  8. 01:33:196 to 02:37:196 - Did you copy & paste the whole part? If yes, copy & paste it again after the changes.
  9. 03:42:339 (1) - I guess the spinner is too short for Normal. Enpoint: 03:45:767? seems too long, changed until 03:44:481 instead
Hard
  1. The spacing between 00:12:339 (2,3) and 00:13:624 (3,4) is too small.
  2. 01:02:053 (6,1) - Blanket. it's not blanket from beginning..
  3. 01:10:053 (7,1) - The spacing is too huge. Compare it with 01:10:624 (2,3).
  4. 01:12:910 (2,3) - The spacing is too small again.
  5. 01:39:624 (6,1) - Spacing too big.
Insane

Looks fine, except some blankets:
  1. 00:32:624 (5,6) - Blanket.
  2. 00:54:339 (3,4) - Make better blanket.
  3. 00:57:196 (3) - Move to x:92 ; y:156. Blanket looks better.
  4. 00:57:481 (4,5) - Fix blanket.
  5. 00:59:624 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:02:767 (6,7) - ^
  7. 01:48:053 (6,1) - ^
  8. 02:04:053 (5) - Move the last slider point to x:300 ; y:48 for better blanekt fix it by myself
Demise

Nothing to say, except 03:14:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2). Sounds wrong to me.why? I heard a bit fast drum sound in there o.o

Nice mapset, I like it. Good luck! :)
thank you :3!

for taiko modders, pls be patience for waiting betsu' reply..
Betsuto
here I come ~
a lot of fix

Betsu's Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/ahy1v/8fae8ffd23.osu
Betsu's Oni : http://puu.sh/ahy4e/91306bd913.osu

Thanks XD
Topic Starter
Yasora
updated~
mliencheng
Taiko mod from mod queue request ~


00:40:339(191,192) ctrl G

00:45:053(216,217) ctrl G

01:02:767 k, high pitch here

01:40:339(496,497) ctrl G

02:00:196(591,592) k. Normally there's only 1/4 ddd or kkk in muzukashii diffs

02:05:481 add d

02:10:624 slider finishes here looks better ?
00:22:839 I suggest removing this note if there's no clear sound (same for 00:27:410)

01:17:910 k

01:20:481 D in consistency with 01:19:339

01:29:839 move to 01:29:696 following guitar sound

02:06:481 the stream here is according to the background sound, which is Inner Oni style. Maybe simplify it to something following the vocal.
As for the stream here 02:09:767, since there's no vocal , I think it's ok to follow drum sounds

02:25:624 D, consistency with 02:24:481

02:26:481(902,903,904) kkk would be nice
Moo-Chan
From my modding queue~

[Insane]
  1. I think you should make it AR9
  2. 00:26:767 (1,2) - Blanket this
  3. 00:45:196 (1,2) - ^^
  4. 02:58:624 (3,4,5) - ^^
  5. 02:59:196 (5) - Sounds like there's a whistle on this slider that shouldn't be there
  6. 03:42:339 (1) - Should drag this out to 03:45:767 and then make the ending of this spinner quieter

That's all I see c: Good luck with ranking~
ts8zs
hey:3
[Demise]
01:55:910 (1,2,3) - ds
02:05:339 (2,3) - swap
03:01:624 (3) - 368,264
03:10:053 (6) - 348,92
03:33:624 (2) - 140,328
03:51:481 (3) - del
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - sv x0.75
02:32:910 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+J
02:59:196 (5) - del slider whistle
Normal's sliderslide make it default

lazy._.
Topic Starter
Yasora

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane]
  1. I think you should make it AR9 too fast imo
  2. 00:26:767 (1,2) - Blanket this not aim to blanket that..
  3. 00:45:196 (1,2) - ^^ ^
  4. 02:58:624 (3,4,5) - ^^ ^
  5. 02:59:196 (5) - Sounds like there's a whistle on this slider that shouldn't be there
  6. 03:42:339 (1) - Should drag this out to 03:45:767 and then make the ending of this spinner quieter changed into 03:44:481 instead (consistency with other diff

That's all I see c: Good luck with ranking~

ts8zs wrote:

hey:3
[Demise]
01:55:910 (1,2,3) - ds
02:05:339 (2,3) - swap seems weird
03:01:624 (3) - 368,264 ^
03:10:053 (6) - 348,92
03:33:624 (2) - 140,328 too far
03:51:481 (3) - del music end in there..
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - sv x0.75 will weird though
02:32:910 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+J
02:59:196 (5) - del slider whistle
Normal's sliderslide make it default how..

lazy._. lol it's fine
thanks both of you!

new page comboer
Hanten
omg yes a shuuen map ;;w;;

hi yasora.i think you should probably add suzumu to the tags since he wrote the lyrics :)

good luck /o/
Neku Okazaki
[Muzukashii]
00:40:624 (193) - k | Have diferent sound
01:50:481 (550,551,552) - Make it 1/2 | 1/4 alone sees bad
02:28:339 - Add d

Good map, I see good the oni ~
ts8zs
Normal's sliderslide make it default how..
del normal-sliderslide
Topic Starter
Yasora

koronyanko wrote:

omg yes a shuuen map ;;w;;

hi yasora.i think you should probably add suzumu to the tags since he wrote the lyrics :)

good luck /o/
sure why not :D

ts8zs wrote:

Normal's sliderslide make it default how..
del normal-sliderslide
ic ic lol sorry that was stupid question yea...
Verlaren
From my queue.

Normal:
00:14:339 (1) - maybe move on 00:14:624, add note on 00:14:339 and move NC on this note from 00:14:624 ?
02:48:910 - add note?
03:10:053 (2) - remove this pattern;
03:09:196 (1) - remove NC;
03:05:767 (1) - repainted in red color (do it only if you have made changes here 03:10:053 (2) and here 03:09:196 (1));

Hard:
00:21:624 (5) - remove this pattern and add note on 00:21:767;
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - too many whistles, a bit hurt to listen.
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^
03:38:910 (4) - add whistle on slider's start;

Insane:
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - same as in hard. I think that here you are using whistles fairly too often.
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^

Demise:
Same as in previous diffs. (about whistles, I think they should used here a little sparingly).


sorry for poor mod. I am not doing this within one year.
Topic Starter
Yasora

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue.

Normal:
00:14:339 (1) - maybe move on 00:14:624, add note on 00:14:339 and move NC on this note from 00:14:624 ? sounds weird for me
02:48:910 - add note?
03:10:053 (2) - remove this pattern; following vocal..
03:09:196 (1) - remove NC; no
03:05:767 (1) - repainted in red color (do it only if you have made changes here 03:10:053 (2) and here 03:09:196 (1));

Hard:
00:21:624 (5) - remove this pattern and add note on 00:21:767; nuu
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - too many whistles, a bit hurt to listen. but it follow the vocal ;-;
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^ ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^ ^
03:38:910 (4) - add whistle on slider's start; it will be not consistent..

Insane:
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - same as in hard. I think that here you are using whistles fairly too often. same too lol sorry ;-;
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^

Demise:
Same as in previous diffs. (about whistles, I think they should used here a little sparingly).


sorry for poor mod. I am not doing this within one year. wow..
thank you! :)



stuck again in BSS ;-;
Betsuto
Topic Starter
Yasora
updated~
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