Rakuen wrote:

Recheck!

Sorry was a bit busy

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Easy

1. 00:45:839 (4) - NC

Regraz's Normal

1. 01:01:313 (1) - 1.2 DS? only use 1.0 at 01:02:576 (1) -
2. 03:41:102 (2,3,4) - Symmetry middle?

Irie's Hard

1. 00:15:050 - Remove whistle? (not sure abt hitsound)
2. 02:39:522 - Finish

yf's Extra

1. 01:27:208 (4) - Normal set?
2. 02:33:996 (5) - NC?

Umbrella

1. 01:57:602 (5) - What hitsound?
2. 02:08:655 (2) - Wrong snap

Call me back!

yf_bmp wrote:

help me

OniJAM wrote:

思考 我好像画过一个伞

Elaine wrote:

OniJAM wrote:

思考 我好像画过一个伞

哎 之前好像被批判了一番然后被取缔 苦苦

OniJAM wrote:

怎么每次想找mapper irc的时候总是不在线

1. Easy and Unbrella diffs should have consistency in combo colours

1. 00:01:945 - Different sampleset between red line and green line
2. 00:54:997 -
3. 01:02:892 -
4. 02:13:313 -
5. 03:00:049 -
6. 03:52:312 -
7. 03:53:575 -
8. 03:54:996 -
9. 04:26:101 -
10. 04:26:575 - useless green lines above

1. 03:40:155 -
2. 03:53:576 - useless green lines above

1. 00:22:155 - useless green line
2. 02:13:313 - Different sampleset and volume between green line and red line
3. 03:40:155 - same as above

1. 02:39:523 - useless and unsnapped green line
2. 02:59:734 - same as above
3. 03:17:418 - 1ms unsnapped and cause the different slider length. btw, i think 03:17:417 (1) - should snapped to 1/2 or 3/4 for consistency, I fell that vocal falls later than 2/3 but a little earlier than 3/4, so 3/4 is more closed and reasonable point to me. If you're not sure, snapped at 1/2 for drum.

1. 00:07:629 (5) - branket
2. 00:17:734 (5) - same

yf_bmp wrote:

help me agian XD
话说你萌都上狗了呀

tm1209 wrote:

[Irie's Hard]


OD5太低？

00:01:945 (1) - 拉长了还是故意的？

00:17:102 (1,2) - 这两个从音乐上听起来似乎比较适合用相反方向的滑条？2朝下比较好？不过考虑到2之后还有很多东西那么1朝下也不错？

00:46:945 (4,5) - 00:49:471 (4,5) - 这地方似乎应该摆个3连啊，00:47:023 - 应该也有鼓点的，反正AR8应该也不介意这么个东西吧

01:15:839 (1) - 01:16:471 (1) - 加快一点滑条速度？

02:41:259 (2) - 02:41:891 (1) - 02:42:522 (1) - ^

02:41:733 (3,2,2) - 这三个NC应该比较好，这样的话后面跟的滑条也都是2了，统一一点总是好的

02:38:180 (1) - 这个转盘的音量似乎不用这么大




[Hard]



总感觉AR6看上去舒服点我他吗能3mod

00:15:997 (4) - 这个似乎应该出现在00:15:839 - 这里更好？

00:45:681 (3) - 开头的地方没啥东西啊，00:45:997 - 倒是这里似乎有个音节没放

01:04:155 - 这个鼓点应该非常明显了

01:22:787 (1) - 这一段开始减小一点滑条的速度？

03:09:680 - 其实我觉得这里也可以放一个，感觉效果也还可以

04:35:417 (1) - 不用放感觉都可以。。

yf_bmp wrote:

[Hard]
00:59:418 (3) - 换位置
01:04:155 - 空着不好 还有鼓点
01:52:945 - 不建议空kiai前还是空了
03:09:838 (1) - 上移三格
03:51:206 (1,2,3) - 距离你看着办吧按ds摆的啊...

Regraz wrote:

算了

256,344,271943,6,0,B|256:304|256:304|252:300|252:300|260:296|260:296|256:292|256:292|256:264|256:264|252:260|252:260|260:256|260:256|256:252|256:252|256:220|256:220|252:216|252:216|260:212|260:212|256:208|256:208|256:192|256:192|288:172|324:192|324:192|376:172|424:192|424:192|412:108|348:48|256:32|256:32|164:48|100:108|88:192|88:192|140:172|188:192,1,950,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

271943,-400,4,2,3,25,0,0
272259,-400,4,2,3,20,0,0
272575,-400,4,2,3,15,0,0
272891,-400,4,2,3,10,0,0
277943,-400,4,2,3,5,0,0

OniJAM wrote:

Umbrella version 2.0!

256,344,271943,6,0,B|256:304|256:304|252:300|252:300|260:296|260:296|256:292|256:292|256:264|256:264|252:260|252:260|260:256|260:256|256:252|256:252|256:220|256:220|252:216|252:216|260:212|260:212|256:208|256:208|256:192|256:192|288:172|324:192|324:192|376:172|424:192|424:192|412:108|348:48|256:32|256:32|164:48|100:108|88:192|88:192|140:172|188:192,1,950,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Also, add these code in your .osu file (TimingPoints, replace old timelines after 04:31:943 - )

271943,-400,4,2,3,25,0,0
272259,-400,4,2,3,20,0,0
272575,-400,4,2,3,15,0,0
272891,-400,4,2,3,10,0,0
277943,-400,4,2,3,5,0,0

Then combine two spinners in your Easy and Hard into one which ends at 04:37:943 - . (If possible, I suggest to change other diffs too)

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1. 02:01:471 - this soft sampleset delete here. awkward imo
2. 04:07:943 ~ 04:08:891 - this part mapping please

1. 01:01:313 (1,1,2) - check spacing
2. 01:56:892 (3) - suggust
   
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3. 02:49:628 (1) - missing blanket
4. 03:27:365 (1) - head add Finish?
5. 03:37:628 (1) - suggust
   
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6. 03:49:154 (2) - i think this rhythm finish 03:49:627 - this batter imo
7. 04:06:364 (1) - spiner increase 04:08:891 - here
8. 04:16:469 (1) - you can this slider shape change
9. 04:25:944 (4) - hmm.. this reverse one add please.
   
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10. 04:33:127 - what's this green line?

1. Awaken's Insane diff small Easer so can you change AR 7.0?
2. 00:24:839 (2) - move 460:300
   
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3. 00:29:734 (5) - NC
4. 00:35:734 (5) - clap
5. 01:47:734 (4) - suggust
   
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6. 01:57:366 (3,4) - Ctrl+G please. change rhythm batter imo
7. 03:00:049 - Delete finish.
8. 04:03:996 (1) - same Normal.

1. 00:01:945 (1) - unsnap slider?
2. 01:34:155 (5) - check spacing.
   
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3. 01:50:576 - delete whistle
4. 02:41:259 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - oh.. nice patten. but i think this hader patten.. so can you change this patten? same 01:15:208 (1,2,1,2,1) - this.
5. 03:01:943 (4) - Ctrl+G is flow batter
6. 04:03:917 (1) - same Normal diff

1. AR 8.5? batter
2. 02:06:681 (6) - Ctrl+G

1. Nice >w<

1. 00:32:260 (1,2) - suggust
   
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HabiHolic wrote:

wow. gratz your BNG! here my gift! Ranked!

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

Loctav wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

I am stunned by the weight of your explanation. Now I can see why it is setup like that. I feel superly illuminated.

Okay, jokes aside. What's that. "You don't understand that"? Excuse me, but this was a legitimate question. If you are unable to answer in a proper fashion, please leave this forum - or at least do not reply.