Sorry if I don't pick up some things, or if I ask to change things that are OK
Let's see...
The beat is slightly off to your timing. The bpm is 202.534, and the offset is 9,273.
00:09:289 (1,2) - Can you make this a more organized pattern like 00:09:880 (1,2)?
00:14:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove one of these stacks please, it's too crowded.
00:15:791 (1) - Change this to a different shape please (this one looks ugly)
00:44:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The stream ends awkwardly, can you shorten it to 4 notes and add another circle to the combo 00:45:563 (1,2)?
00:47:933 (1,2,1) - If you want a repeating slider like that, please either delete the circle before it or add another one before it. (I would add another circle)
00:55:487 (1) - Either shorten the slider slightly (which will make it more in time with the music) or add another slider (which will make it consistent with the last phrase)
01:04:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps you could reshape this to be more consistent (sorry but I don't know how to take pictures in a spoilerbox)
01:08:077 (1,1,1,1) - The notes here don't correspond to the song. Please change the notes' timings!
01:12:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream begins and ends on an offbeat. Please make this a half-beat later or earlier
01:15:039 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - The sliders themselves are OK, but as a whole, they begin and end on an offbeat. (They're also not evenly spaced)
01:24:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream ends awkwardly. Can you shorten it to 8 notes and change the length of the next slider?
01:30:444 (1,2,3) - Some of the notes in the section beginning around here are 3/4 of a beat away, not just the later ones.
01:37:110 (5,1) - The slider's timing doesn't make sense unless you start it in the circle's timing.
01:38:295 (1) - This could end on a regular beat...
01:54:440 (1,1,1,2) - Just my opinion, but there are 3 notes back to back, and there's only two in the map.
02:07:475 (1,2,3,4,1) - The sliders begin and end on an offbeat
02:12:215 (1) - This slider needs to start a 1/2 beat earlier
02:28:360 (1,2) - Do you really need these notes?
Thanks for your time!
Edit: How should I send you my guest diff? I don't know how to send it via message or post.
Edit 2: It's called
Make a Move, not Make a Love. (If you're not sure, listen closely, and download
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110557
