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kuroanchan

Joined July 2012

kuroanchan 2014-07-26T03:36:51+00:00

[Easy]
AR -1
00:52:596 (1) - try this
01:13:773 (1) - try this

[Normal]
AR -1
00:33:773 (1) - it will be good if you not put the spinner here, let it blank
01:14:949 (5) - NC

[Hard]
AR -1

sorry if too few, because nothing wrong for me

GL~

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-07-26T06:27:52+00:00

anre u eeq

ichia7x wrote:

[Hard Collab]
00:59:067 (4,5) - ini spacenya dijauhin dikit aja, beda sama sebelumnya yang memang beda 2 tick, ini beda 4 tick ayy intentional
01:10:684 (7) - mungkin ini di remove aja, coba di dengerin ulang ^

xChippy wrote:
[Hard]
alot of NC inconsistency is present here, parts like 00:38:332 (3) - and 00:47:743 (1) - has the same worth but has inconsistent NC's imo its a bit weird :< aa sorry, didn't see that one. nc'ed 00:38:332 (3) -
Is there an SB coming or something? If not it would be cool to add into the creators words who did what . umm will leave that to anre
00:15:390 (2,3,4) - I see no need for this spacing inconsistency, so make this consistent? ~~so it wouldn't be too dense~~ok fix
00:15:979 (5,6) - Awkward because of the structure of both sliders which counters each other. Try something like this instead? fix
box
00:24:361 (1) - Unneeded reduce of spacing, it makes it awkward instead imo, around 432|268 will do. fix
00:28:184 (3) - Move to 380|56 to even out the spacing again, I see no need for a change >< ~~didn't use DS lol~~ fix
00:30:243 (2,3,4) - Try using the same hitsound pattern as 00:25:537 (2,3,4) - sounds alot cooler imo
00:57:890 (2) - Remove the repeat? it emphasizes nothing significant also this way you can do the cool overlapping you did here 00:59:067 (4) - fix
00:59:508 (5) - add an NC? fix
~~~~
will leave hitsound suggestion to anre /bitchslapped

thank you for mod guys!!

Baka94

106 posts

Joined March 2012

Baka94 2014-07-26T10:04:20+00:00

Here is the NM:

All other difficulties exept for easy are already very good and I didn't find anything to modify in them. Here is what I'd change about easy easy:

Difficulty feels good but you used way too many sliders. Consider changing some of them to circles. Also short sliders like this one 00:36:714, imo, shouldn't be used on easy. Change those so that you have circle at the start of the slider and nothing at the end of it.

SeNoZinD

32 posts

Joined May 2014

SeNoZinD 2014-07-26T14:48:21+00:00

From the Rakutenshi modding queue~ (SeNoZinD

General
Well done, and nice choice of song

Not much to improve imo

Easy
The space between 00:27:890 (3) - and 00:29:067 (1) - feels out of rhythm, consider adding a circle at 00:28:773 -
00:58:332 (2) - Maybe shouldn't overlap with 01:00:684 (2) - ?

Normal
00:13:184 - add a circle here
00:54:802 (7) - add NC here instead of 00:54:949 (1) -

Hard Collab
00:59:067 (4) - Ctrl-G maybe?

Fly!!
00:14:067 (2) -Ctrl-G?
00:26:420 (5) -^^Ctrl-G maybe?
01:04:655 (2) - ^^^ Flippity flip
01:03:920 (4) - ^^^^the flip is real

Yuthuil

476 posts

Joined April 2014

Yuthuil 2014-07-26T15:20:57+00:00

Easy:

00:14:949 (1,2) - The fact that one is longer than the other is slightly creepy.
00:52:596 (1) - you should map this part.
01:00:684 (2) - change this to this [url]puu.sh/arUCv/4adcc37443.jpg[/url]
01:05:096 (2) - add reverse arrow?
01:13:773 (1) - start this here - 01:14:666.
01:28:773 (1) - reverse arrow.

Normal:

01:17:890 (1) - this was blocked by my score bar.

Hard:

00:08:920 (3) - this was blocked by my score numbers.
I was thinking the drain is too high.

Sorry for the lousy mod

kumoko

2 posts

Joined December 2013

kumoko 2014-07-26T17:14:41+00:00

nice map!!!!!!!!!!

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-07-27T04:18:50+00:00

Mass Replies~

Fort wrote:
im here for my quickmod™ lololololol

[Fly]
No deathstream, no thrill, no miss, no retries, looks like boring xD but this nice diff bro! suitable for newbie to learn insanes
(my suggestion use AR8 makes this map is harder to play, and makes it easier to use Double time mod → AR9.6)

99%

00:00:684 - seems this is the start note! check that note like this http://puu.sh/areWd/e659becfa1.jpgehh no, wanna keep it quiet at the start
00:05:243 (7) - new combo this (keep distance consistent)not really necessary, the antijump is quite readable without NC
00:13:699 - add circle xDsure, let's see how this goes
00:14:655 (4,1) - stream or triplet plsnope, nothing's in the background to indicate any of those, would be overmapping
00:32:596 (5) - new comboya
00:56:861 - add circle and stack with 00:57:155 (1) - *nevermind, im just not looking next patterndid something here
01:07:008 (2,3) - make it like this http://puu.sh/arfsP/44e8d5bc8c.jpg, ver consistant with 01:07:743 (1,2,3) - combonope doesn't look really good, it will also dampen the flow

okay the overall of this map is good, but just one thing i want → little overmapping it better i thinkuhh nope? I don't really like overmap :/
see ya, correct me if im wrong

Thank you for the mod Fort~

kuroanchan wrote:

[Easy]
AR -1eh the song is quite fast, reducing AR won't do good
00:52:596 (1) - try this
01:13:773 (1) - try this

[Normal]
AR -1^
00:33:773 (1) - it will be good if you not put the spinner here, let it blankeh why not? The vocal is quite heavy there owo
01:14:949 (5) - NCohiya lol fixed

[Hard]
AR -1^

sorry if too few, because nothing wrong for me
GL~

Thank you for the mod Kuroanchan~

Baka94 wrote:
Here is the NM:

All other difficulties exept for easy are already very good and I didn't find anything to modify in them. Here is what I'd change about easy easy:
[notice]Difficulty feels good but you used way too many sliders. Consider changing some of them to circles. Also short sliders like this one 00:36:714, imo, shouldn't be used on easy. Change those so that you have circle at the start of the slider and nothing at the end of it.

I don't know, but I'm actually perfectly fine with this slider, using a circle only will form a hard to read rhythm- trasitioning from white tick to red tick, and this is my main reason for using a slider.The shortness isn't a big problem as it is actually a 1/2 beat rhythm - a shorter 1/1 beat, which should be very easy to grasp even for beginners. I hope you(and other modders) would understand owo. Thanks for your opinion though, Baka94

SeNoZinD wrote:
From the Rakutenshi modding queue~ (SeNoZinD

General
Well done, and nice choice of song \:D/
Not much to improve imo

Easy
The space between 00:27:890 (3) - and 00:29:067 (1) - feels out of rhythm, consider adding a circle at 00:28:773 - yeah, I noticed this too while mapping and was torn between inserting a circle or left it blank. Added now!
00:58:332 (2) - Maybe shouldn't overlap with 01:00:684 (2) - ?intended to be a stack actually lol. Fixed!

Normal
00:13:184 - add a circle herei want to add a pause effect here, so I'll keep this one
00:54:802 (7) - add NC here instead of 00:54:949 (1) - eh the stanza and the heavy beat is actually here, I'll keep this one

Hard Collab
00:59:067 (4) - Ctrl-G maybe?

Fly!!
00:14:067 (2) -Ctrl-G?I wanna add a continuing pattern instead of a jump here, so keep owo
00:26:420 (5) -^^Ctrl-G maybe?the jump would be too big compared to the other notes on this section ><
01:04:655 (2) - ^^^ Flippity flip
01:03:920 (4) - ^^^^the flip is realxD

Thank you for the mod SeNoZinD \:D/

Yuthuil wrote:
Easy:

00:14:949 (1,2) - The fact that one is longer than the other is slightly creepy.ehh it's okay tho right xD
00:52:596 (1) - you should map this part.umm was intending to emphasize the ascending drum on the background, sorry if it seemed lazy><
01:00:684 (2) - change this to this [url]puu.sh/arUCv/4adcc37443.jpg[/url]nope, I'm following the drum here
01:05:096 (2) - add reverse arrow?it will sound a bit weird and deosn't fit with the song owo
01:13:773 (1) - start this here - 01:14:666.
01:28:773 (1) - reverse arrow.

Normal:

01:17:890 (1) - this was blocked by my score bar.uhh it's not? it may looked like it in editor, but it's still quite far from the scorebar when played ovo

Hard:

00:08:920 (3) - this was blocked by my score numbers. ^
I was thinking the drain is too high.sure, reduced by 1

Sorry for the lousy mod no no it isn't >v<~

Thank you for the mod Yuthuil

kumoko wrote:
:D
nice map!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks~

I'll reply you later, Chippy \:'D/

Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2014-07-27T06:04:33+00:00

Hiii there, from my queue
Blue means personal opinion

[Easy]

00:14:949 (1) - NC move to 00:14:361 (2)
00:17:302 (1) - NC move to 00:16:714 (3)
00:19:655 (1) - NC move to 00:19:067 (3)
00:38:332 (1) - ^ 00:37:890 (4)
00:40:684 (1) - ^ 00:40:243 (3)
01:08:920 (1) - ^ 01:08:479 (4)
01:11:567 (1) - ^ 01:10:832 (4)
Diff is pretty good so only NC mods here Also easy MIGHT be abit too hard since easy is supposed to be below 1.5 stars.

[Normal]

00:13:184 - Add note here?
00:13:773 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:949 (1) - NC move to 00:14:361 (2)
00:17:302 (1) - NC move to 00:16:714 (3)
00:19:655 (1) - ^ 00:19:067 (3)
00:22:008 (1) - ^ 00:21:714 (4)
00:24:361 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:537 (1) - NC move to 00:25:243 (2)
00:40:096 (4) - Clap on head move to the reverse arrow
00:45:390 (1) - NC move to 00:44:949 (5)
01:01:861 (1) - ^ 01:01:420 (3)
01:04:214 (1) - ^ 01:03:773 (4)
01:11:273 (1) - ^ 01:10:832 (5)

[Hard collab]

00:20:537 (5) - NC
00:31:420 (5) - NC
00:32:596 (1) - Remove NC(you decide)
00:45:390 (1) - NC move to 00:44:949 (8)
00:50:096 (1) - ^ 00:49:655 (6)
01:01:861 (1) - ^ 01:01:420 (8)
01:05:979 (3) - Make it one circle and one reverse
01:12:449 (7) - NC

[Fly!!]

I couldn't find anything on this diff besides the NC stuff I mentioned in the previous diffs. And I think some of those triangle jumps might be abit intense for 204 BPM but then again it's supposed to be an extra right?

That's it from me, feel free to ignore the NC stuff if some of those were meant to be like that. Quite good mapset, hope it gets ranked soon~
Good luck!~

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-07-28T04:44:45+00:00

From my queue

Easy

1. 00:33:773 (1) - Short spinner, better use a slider. Because if your Easy is aimed at beginners, they will just - "what?" then get a 50 for it lol.

Normal

1. 00:56:714 (1) - Something like the slider is too short or too slow, it looks like a stub instead of a slider. Don't slow down at the moment. It really looks like two overlapping circles lol.

2. 01:01:420 (3) - Well this really look like two circles. Make it faster to extend its length.

Hard

1. 00:48:332 (3) - Put it's head on 00:47:743 (1) 's tail. Increases difficulty

Fly!

1. 00:00:684 - The notes at the starting can be snapped closer since it's still not heating up, and speed up a little at 00:03:184.

2. 00:20:537 (4,1) - This blanket is almost perfect! Make it perfect please.

Done! Great map

Hope to see it gets ranked

Chyo-Kun

308 posts

Joined May 2012

Chyo-Kun 2014-07-28T06:38:39+00:00

Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

General

According to the Ranking Criteria, your background image is too big for 4:3 and too small for 16:9. Resize it to 1024x768 and it will be fine.
Kiai times in this mapset are somewhat different in all the difficulties. I suggest making them precisely the same in every diff.
The audio Lead-In is ~800ms in all difficulties. I highly suggest to change this to 2000, so you follow the ranking criteria guidelines.

Your hitsounds in the beginning are very loud compared to the song. I would suggest making two quick changes to make it sound overall better:
00:00:832 - Use 15% audio on this greenline. Sounds way better.
00:03:184 - The song is slowly getting louder. Add a greenline here with 20% audio.

Those changes should be applied to all your difficulties.

Easy
00:24:214 Unsnapped green line
00:27:890 (3) - Unnecessary clap
00:28:920 Unsnapped green line
00:33:773 (1) - A finish would sound better than a clap in this difficulty. Why? Because in the song there are 3 clap-like sounds and in your spinner you can have only one. So instead of having only one clap, add one finish which sounds fine.
00:52:596 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner? (Keep the clap)
01:13:773 (1) - ^ Same thing but this time keep the whistle
01:28:773 (1) - Add a clap to this beat, but keep the finish.

Normal
00:07:890 (1) - Mhh.. Listen to how whistle+clap would sound on this beat and then decide if you want to add it or not. Because I think there should be a clap, but the vocal goes up,so a whistle is an option aswell.
00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
00:56:714 (1) - I don't really like how this slider is shaped.. I see the effect you want to achieve there, but I still think that a normal straight slider would be better
01:01:420 (3) - ^
01:29:067 (1) - Add a clap to this beat (Keep the finish)

Hard Collab
00:23:920 (1,2,3) - In my opinion this jump is a little too "Cruel" considering that we're just at the beginning of the map. Consider reducing the distance between the beats. (Just an opinion, you can keep it like this if you want).
00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
00:26:714 (1) - Mh.. Does this slider have any reason to be shaped up like this? It's not very good-looking among all the other different ones..
00:28:920 - Unsnapped green line

Fly!!
00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
00:28:920 - ^
00:38:920 (3) - This slider touches the healtbar. I suggest moving the whole pattern down by a little
01:16:567 (4) - NC To help the player distinguish the two triangle jumps
01:28:331 (4) - ^
01:28:773 (7) - ^

I hope this helped your map. 頑張って！

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2014-07-28T11:27:40+00:00

hi from my Q

[Easy]
check AImod

00:15:979 (2) - (456,184)
00:19:655 (1) - the ending point of slider move to (260,328)
01:03:773 (4) - (272,324)

my suggestion is in EZ you'd better not grab vocals, try to grab rhythm or the drums. Cuz not everybody know the rhythm of vocals. As for someone who listen the song first time, they probably do not understand the rhythm of vocals, but everybody knows the rhythm of drums. So, this is only my suggestion.

[Normal]
check AImod

00:05:243 (6,1) - and 00:07:302 (2,1) - why their DS is different?
00:43:626 (2,3,4) - ^
00:45:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:00:684 (2,3) - up the DS
01:04:214 (1,2,3) - different DS
01:25:832 (2) - move the ending point of slider to(332,290)

[Hard Collab]
00:15:390 (2,3,4) - DS....
00:15:684 (4,5) - why?
00:20:832 (7,8) - DS
00:20:832 (7,8) - there, DS is reasonable, but I didn't understand 00:23:037 (4,5) -
00:28:184 (3,4) - DS
00:48:332 (3,6) - overlap
01:04:802 (8,9,1) - the sound here didn't crescendo, keep same DS?

[Fly]
00:11:420 (1,2) - and 00:12:596 (1,2) - same rhythm, but different DS?
01:06:420 - there's drum is fast, you can make 4 notes to reflect it chz the diff is hardest
01:10:831 (3,4,5) - DS should be same

good luck~

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-07-30T15:13:30+00:00

Thank you very much for the mod guys! I will reply it as soon as I can, when I have more time ><

Thank you anyway! <3

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-08-01T07:51:26+00:00

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, AnreFM !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Easy

00:07:302 – add circle,
00:09:655 (2) - ^,
00:12:596 (1) – you don’t need this ‘New Combo’ (I think?)
00:57:155 (1,2,1,2) – change them to a slider (per-combo)

Normal

01:29:067 (1) – remove finish.

Hard Collab

Perfect chart, nothing to mod 

Fly!

I think you must change some slider with Stream, Why ? Because it’s Expert diff 

That’s All AnreFM ! Good luck !

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-08-01T12:10:14+00:00

Wheeeeeeeee~~~ ~~~ ~~~~

Gomene an kun O^O Yu chan hasn't modded in a while and well I conclude I can't mod this map of yours >.> So sorry

Alsho, mee outta kudosu so ima can't star spam jyur map ((_ _)) Another day >wO)/

And Easy and Normal's rhythm is almost exactly the same shame on you

Easy AR quite high oso

and dat BPM.......

Oh well

Sorry again

Bye

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-08-02T16:17:28+00:00

*No comment/blue = Fixed *Red = keep

Rtyzen wrote:
Hiii there, from my queue
Blue means personal opinion
[Easy]
00:14:949 (1) - NC move to 00:14:361 (2)
00:17:302 (1) - NC move to 00:16:714 (3)
00:19:655 (1) - NC move to 00:19:067 (3)
00:38:332 (1) - ^ 00:37:890 (4)
00:40:684 (1) - ^ 00:40:243 (3)
01:08:920 (1) - ^ 01:08:479 (4)
01:11:567 (1) - ^ 01:10:832 (4)
Diff is pretty good so only NC mods here Also easy MIGHT be abit too hard since easy is supposed to be below 1.5 stars.

[Normal]
00:13:184 - Add note here?nope, wanna keep it steady
00:13:773 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:949 (1) - NC move to 00:14:361 (2)
00:17:302 (1) - NC move to 00:16:714 (3)
00:19:655 (1) - ^ 00:19:067 (3)
00:22:008 (1) - ^ 00:21:714 (4)
00:24:361 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:537 (1) - NC move to 00:25:243 (2)
00:40:096 (4) - Clap on head move to the reverse arrowsure
00:45:390 (1) - NC move to 00:44:949 (5)
01:01:861 (1) - ^ 01:01:420 (3)
01:04:214 (1) - ^ 01:03:773 (4)
01:11:273 (1) - ^ 01:10:832 (5)

[Hard collab]
00:20:537 (5) - NC
00:31:420 (5) - NC
00:32:596 (1) - Remove NC(you decide)
00:45:390 (1) - NC move to 00:44:949 (8)
00:50:096 (1) - ^ 00:49:655 (6)
01:01:861 (1) - ^ 01:01:420 (8)
01:05:979 (3) - Make it one circle and one reverseit kinda plays the same, but I like mine better so I'll keep this one owo
01:12:449 (7) - NC

[Fly!!]
I couldn't find anything on this diff besides the NC stuff I mentioned in the previous diffs. And I think some of those triangle jumps might be abit intense for 204 BPM but then again it's supposed to be an extra right?

That's it from me, feel free to ignore the NC stuff if some of those were meant to be like that. Quite good mapset, hope it gets ranked soon~
Good luck!~ Thank you very much! I have fixed some NCs though I kinda forgot which one is the original x_x Thank you very much!

jinhang_ang wrote:
From my queue

Easy
1. 00:33:773 (1) - Short spinner, better use a slider. Because if your Easy is aimed at beginners, they will just - "what?" then get a 50 for it lol.sure fixed

Normal
1. 00:56:714 (1) - Something like the slider is too short or too slow, it looks like a stub instead of a slider. Don't slow down at the moment. It really looks like two overlapping circles lol. ya sure!

2. 01:01:420 (3) - Well this really look like two circles. Make it faster to extend its lengthehh I guess it won't be a big problem imo.

Hard
1. 00:48:332 (3) - Put it's head on 00:47:743 (1) 's tail. Increases difficulty it's quite hard already, so I'll keep this ;w;

Fly!
1. 00:00:684 - The notes at the starting can be snapped closer since it's still not heating up, and speed up a little at 00:03:184.

2. 00:20:537 (4,1) - This blanket is almost perfect! Make it perfect please.

Done! Great map Hope to see it gets ranked Thank you for the mod and star <3!

Chyo-Kun wrote:
Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

        General

According to the Ranking Criteria, your background image is too big for 4:3 and too small for 16:9. Resize it to 1024x768 and it will be fine.
 
Kiai times in this mapset are somewhat different in all the difficulties. I suggest making them precisely the same in every diff.
 
The audio Lead-In is ~800ms in all difficulties. I highly suggest to change this to 2000, so you follow the ranking criteria guidelines.
 
Your hitsounds in the beginning are very loud compared to the song. I would suggest making two quick changes to make it sound overall better:
 
00:00:832 - Use 15% audio on this greenline. Sounds way better.
00:03:184 - The song is slowly getting louder. Add a greenline here with 20% audio.

Those changes should be applied to all your difficulties.

Easy

00:24:214 Unsnapped green line
 
00:27:890 (3) - Unnecessary clap
 
00:28:920 Unsnapped green line
 
00:33:773 (1) - A finish would sound better than a clap in this difficulty. Why? Because in the song there are 3 clap-like sounds and in your spinner you can have only one. So instead of having only one clap, add one finish which sounds fine.sure
 
00:52:596 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner? (Keep the clap)removed this one lol
 
01:13:773 (1) - ^ Same thing but this time keep the whistle
 
01:28:773 (1) - Add a clap to this beat, but keep the finish.
 

Normal
 
 
00:07:890 (1) - Mhh.. Listen to how whistle+clap would sound on this beat and then decide if you want to add it or not. Because I think there should be a clap, but the vocal goes up,so a whistle is an option aswell.whistle it is then
 
00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
 
00:56:714 (1) - I don't really like how this slider is shaped.. I see the effect you want to achieve there, but I still think that a normal straight slider would be betterI can't think of something better atm lol
 
01:01:420 (3) - ^
 
01:29:067 (1) - Add a clap to this beat (Keep the finish) 

Hard Collab
 
 
00:23:920 (1,2,3) - In my opinion this jump is a little too "Cruel" considering that we're just at the beginning of the map. Consider reducing the distance between the beats. (Just an opinion, you can keep it like this if you want).sure I've change this, thanks
 
00:24:214 -  Unsnapped green line
 
00:26:714 (1) - Mh.. Does this slider have any reason to be shaped up like this? It's not very good-looking among all the other different ones..
 
00:28:920 - Unsnapped green line
 

Fly!!
 
 
00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
 
00:28:920 - ^
 
00:38:920 (3) - This slider touches the healtbar. I suggest moving the whole pattern down by a littleya
 
01:16:567 (4) - NC To help the player distinguish the two triangle jumps
 
01:28:331 (4) - ^
 
01:28:773 (7) - ^^ fixed
 
 
 
 
I hope this helped your map. 頑張って！Thank you for the mod!

_Stan wrote:
hi from my Q

[Easy]
check AImod

00:15:979 (2) - (456,184)
00:19:655 (1) - the ending point of slider move to (260,328)
01:03:773 (4) - (272,324)

my suggestion is in EZ you'd better not grab vocals, try to grab rhythm or the drums. Cuz not everybody know the rhythm of vocals. As for someone who listen the song first time, they probably do not understand the rhythm of vocals, but everybody knows the rhythm of drums. So, this is only my suggestion.

[Normal]
check AImod

00:05:243 (6,1) - and 00:07:302 (2,1) - why their DS is different?they have different SVs
00:43:626 (2,3,4) - ^
00:45:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
01:00:684 (2,3) - up the DS
01:04:214 (1,2,3) - different DS
01:25:832 (2) - move the ending point of slider to(332,290)

[Hard Collab]
00:15:390 (2,3,4) - DS....
00:15:684 (4,5) - why?
00:20:832 (7,8) - DS
00:20:832 (7,8) - there, DS is reasonable, but I didn't understand 00:23:037 (4,5) -
00:28:184 (3,4) - DS
00:48:332 (3,6) - overlap
01:04:802 (8,9,1) - the sound here didn't crescendo, keep same DS?

[Fly]
00:11:420 (1,2) - and 00:12:596 (1,2) - same rhythm, but different DS?I kinda like the flow, so I'll keep this
01:06:420 - there's drum is fast, you can make 4 notes to reflect it chz the diff is hardest
01:10:831 (3,4,5) - DS should be same

good luck~ Thanks for the mod~

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, AnreFM !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
Easy
00:07:302 – add circle,
00:09:655 (2) - ^,eh no, it's quite hard for Easy as it already is
00:12:596 (1) – you don’t need this ‘New Combo’ (I think?)stanzass
00:57:155 (1,2,1,2) – change them to a slider (per-combo)
Normal
01:29:067 (1) – remove finish.eh why
Hard Collab
Perfect chart, nothing to mod 
Fly!
I think you must change some slider with Stream, Why ? Because it’s Expert diff 
That’s All AnreFM ! Good luck !Thank you for the mod!

and as for Chippy, I have also applied all of your hitsounding suggestions, thank you very much for those! as for other things, I can reply you ingame in case you want to, I just forgot which I fix and didn't due to lots of fixing at once, deeply sorry for that x_x

And thanks again for the mods guys! You guys rock!

Last edited by AnreFM 2014-08-03T06:24:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Kihhou 2014-08-02T21:39:12+00:00

urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrra

[Flly]

00:18:184 (4,1) - increase ds to emphasize 1 more? its a stronger vocal than the one emphasized at 00:17:743 (3) - . maybe move (4) to 442, 39?
SPOILER
00:23:479 (2,3) - slider 3 doesnt really follow anything significant. 00:23:479 - follows a pretty strong vocal while 00:23:626 (3) - has the vocal on the tail and nothing that stands out on the head. it would follow the music better if you switched it and tried this rhythm and maybe this kind of setup?
SPOILER
00:52:449 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk about this. all your strong drum and finishes are on the tails of the sliders so it sounds really off. i recommend having the head of the sliders on the emphasized parts so you can feel the beats better when playing. ofc if you make this change, dont forget to move the hitsounds to the head
SPOILER
00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?
00:59:508 (1) - normally, this would be fine but for the other two, you put sliders instead of a hitcircle. this one is the same as 00:57:155 (1,1) - except the vocal is a bit faster so you should make it a slider for consistency. try this?
SPOILER
01:14:949 (6,1) - imo (6) is more emphasized than (1) so try putting (1) farther away from 01:14:655 (5) - ? can stack it on 288,256. feels a lot better that way
SPOILER
01:17:743 - silence here? add inherited point at 15% volume?
01:18:184 - ^

[haard]

00:16:420 (5,6,7) - this doesnt really flow well and the gap at 00:17:155 - is very off putting. 00:16:861 (7) - also doesnt follow anything significant since the head is right inbetween two strong vocals and drums and lands on neither so its really weird to click inbetween them. try this and adjust the placement?
SPOILER
00:49:214 (5,6,7,8) - the flow here is pretty bad o_o its reaaaaally uncomfortable to play since you had a rotation change at 00:49:361 - and then another one immediately at 00:49:508 - . try another pattern or ctrl-g 00:49:655 (6,7) -
00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?
01:05:979 (3) - make it a 1reverse and add a note at 01:06:420 - . the 2nd reverse is pretty unpredictable and itll flow better into the kiai time if theres more objects and a direct flow into the slider 01:06:567 (1) - . maybe something like this?
SPOILER
01:15:096 (6) - right now, this slider skips right over a clap at 01:15:243 - when this should be a heated section with lots of objects. i think a 1/1 slider doesnt fit well here. try shortening it to a 1/2 and then add a hitcircle at 01:15:390 - ?
SPOILER
theres a couple notes that arent fully stacked and i dont see a reason for it to be intentionally unstacked. may want to check over thatr~

[Norm]

00:56:714 (1) - drum finish on head

[Easy]

ok~

nice clean mapset~ hard might be a bit too hard but oh well

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-08-03T06:31:05+00:00

Kihhou wrote:
urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraurrrrrooooooo

[Flly]
00:18:184 (4,1) - increase ds to emphasize 1 more? its a stronger vocal than the one emphasized at 00:17:743 (3) - . maybe move (4) to 442, 39?
SPOILER
yeah, fixed. and uh the overlap dooesn't looked really nice so I'm changing the shape there
00:23:479 (2,3) - slider 3 doesnt really follow anything significant. 00:23:479 - follows a pretty strong vocal while 00:23:626 (3) - has the vocal on the tail and nothing that stands out on the head. it would follow the music better if you switched it and tried this rhythm and maybe this kind of setup?
SPOILER
gonna keep this one as I used (3) to follow the main beatso that the next 3 jump circles can be read better owo
00:52:449 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk about this. all your strong drum and finishes are on the tails of the sliders so it sounds really off. i recommend having the head of the sliders on the emphasized parts so you can feel the beats better when playing. ofc if you make this change, dont forget to move the hitsounds to the head
SPOILER
sure, fixed the rhythm
00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?mm
00:59:508 (1) - normally, this would be fine but for the other two, you put sliders instead of a hitcircle. this one is the same as 00:57:155 (1,1) - except the vocal is a bit faster so you should make it a slider for consistency. try this?
SPOILER
01:14:949 (6,1) - imo (6) is more emphasized than (1) so try putting (1) farther away from 01:14:655 (5) - ? can stack it on 288,256. feels a lot better that way
SPOILER
01:17:743 - silence here? add inherited point at 15% volume?
01:18:184 - ^fixx^
[haard]
00:16:420 (5,6,7) - this doesnt really flow well and the gap at 00:17:155 - is very off putting. 00:16:861 (7) - also doesnt follow anything significant since the head is right inbetween two strong vocals and drums and lands on neither so its really weird to click inbetween them. try this and adjust the placement?
SPOILER
00:49:214 (5,6,7,8) - the flow here is pretty bad o_o its reaaaaally uncomfortable to play since you had a rotation change at 00:49:361 - and then another one immediately at 00:49:508 - . try another pattern or ctrl-g 00:49:655 (6,7) - removed the shitty jumps and arranged a more friendly pattern lol
00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?ya
01:05:979 (3) - make it a 1reverse and add a note at 01:06:420 - . the 2nd reverse is pretty unpredictable and itll flow better into the kiai time if theres more objects and a direct flow into the slider 01:06:567 (1) - . maybe something like this?
SPOILER
nice!
01:15:096 (6) - right now, this slider skips right over a clap at 01:15:243 - when this should be a heated section with lots of objects. i think a 1/1 slider doesnt fit well here. try shortening it to a 1/2 and then add a hitcircle at 01:15:390 - ?
SPOILER
suure
theres a couple notes that arent fully stacked and i dont see a reason for it to be intentionally unstacked. may want to check over thatr~welp I'm so bad at that, hope I didn't miss another one
[Norm]
00:56:714 (1) - drum finish on headsure
[Easy]
ok~~
nice clean mapset~ hard might be a bit too hard but oh weloh well indeed loll

Thank you for the modz Kihhouu \:D/

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-08-03T15:22:54+00:00

Chyo-Kun wrote:
Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

Hard Collab

00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line fix

00:26:714 (1) - Mh.. Does this slider have any reason to be shaped up like this? It's not very good-looking among all the other different ones.. nooooo.....

00:28:920 - Unsnapped green line fix

I hope this helped your map. 頑張って！

_Stan wrote:
hi from my Q

[Hard Collab]
00:15:390 (2,3,4) - DS.... fix
00:15:684 (4,5) - why? idk either
00:28:184 (3,4) - DS fix

good luck~

Kihhou wrote:
urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaayy

[haard]
00:16:420 (5,6,7) - this doesnt really flow well and the gap at 00:17:155 - is very off putting. 00:16:861 (7) - also doesnt follow anything significant since the head is right inbetween two strong vocals and drums and lands on neither so its really weird to click inbetween them. try this and adjust the placement? adjusted the placement, but will reconsider about the rhythm
SPOILER
theres a couple notes that arent fully stacked and i dont see a reason for it to be intentionally unstacked. may want to check over thatr~
nice clean mapset~ hard might be a bit too hard but oh well remapped some parts yay

Thank you for mods!!

edit :

update wheezeee

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AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-08-03T15:53:08+00:00

Updated!

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-08-04T07:00:13+00:00

Yo; modding!

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Easy

00:18:332 (2,3,4,1) - Coba bikin posisi gini biar flow dari (4) ke (1) lebih bagus + tampak lebih rapi? Pokoknya coba bikin agar (4) kelihatan lebih "nyambung" ke (1).
00:24:361 - Tambah finish? Ada bunyi instrumen yang cukup nyaring di sini, dan rasanya aneh kalau cuma ditekanin pake whistle. Kalau merasa terlalu nyaring tinggal kurangi volume aja.
00:29:067 - ^
00:33:773 (1) - ^. (Yang ini gak perlu dikurangi ofc, dan bunyinya jelas banget loh...) Dan ini lebih bagus kalau dijadiin slider 4/1 lalu ditambah circle di 00:35:243. Lebih akurat dalam ngikutin ritme di sini dan gak terkesan kosong. Kalau nggak yah, ganti circle ini dengan spinner sampai 00:34:949 kayak di diff-diff yang lain.
00:49:655 (3,2) - Dua slider ini nyentuh satu sama lain, dan secara sekilas kelihatan nimpa waktu main. Coba pertimbangin untuk ngatur dua slider ini.
01:05:096 (2,1) - ^ (Ini jauh lebih "sekilas" sih, tapi ya...)
01:17:743 - Timing point di sini gak dipake kan? Hapus aja.

>Normal

00:02:596 (4) - Pindahin ke (352,16) biar blanket di 00:01:861 (3,4) kelihatan lebih bagus?
00:40:096 (4,1) - Sebenernya gak gitu kelihatan sih, tapi apa 1,06x gak terasa dikit lebih gede dari spacing default?
01:00:684 - Finish ketinggalan atau gimana nih? Di sini jelas banget loh cymbal-nya...

>Hard Collab

Gak terlalu penting sih, tapi mungkin mau buat SB kecil-kecilan berupa nama mapper di part milik mereka?
00:16:420 (6,7) - Saya pribadi terkecoh waktu pertama main pattern ini, karena saya pikir jarak antara kedua objek ini satu ketukan, bukannya setengah. Saya gak tahu sih buat yang lain, tapi ini rasanya... menjebak karena spacing dari objek-objek sebelum pola ini.
00:20:096 (4,5) - Gak apa yah spacing kayak gini... Gampang kebaca jadi seperti berjarak 1/4 ketukan IMO. (Berlaku buat pattern yang seperti ini.)
00:49:214 (5,6,7,8,1) - Coba bikin seperti ini biar flow jadi lebih bagus? Ini juga bakal bikin gerakan kursor jadi gak terkesan maksa, seperti kalau ngemainin pattern yang ada sekarang.
01:07:743 (5,6,7,8) - Dan coba bikin kayak gini? Sekali lagi, ini buat flow, biarpun yang ini masih bisa dikatakan minor.

>Fly!!

00:26:420 (5,1) - Blanket di sini sempurna menurut approach circle, tapi kalau diperhatiin lagi, lengkungan (1) masih dikit terlalu mencekung ke kanan. Coba geser-geserin node di sini.
00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO, segienam ini belum terlihat sempurna (apalagi dilihat dari distance spacing antara keenam circle ini). Kalau mau gampang sih, pake Create Polygon Circles aja.
01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Segienam ini sah-sah aja, tapi jauh lebih pas sama lagu kalau dibikin jadi dua segitiga terpisah. Optional sih ini; gak mau juga gak masalah.

Udah gitu aja owob

Good luck on the way

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Mortem 2014-08-04T09:32:36+00:00

Hi, as requested.

Normal
00:47:743 (1,2) - You made a great alignment of the sliders before. Just move the redpoint little bit closer to the beginning point.
00:52:155 (4) - Same ^^

I think that's all I found. I know, there can be some more mistakes, but I didn't find them.
Hope that helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-08-05T19:15:07+00:00

Aw maaan, I'd have mapped this awesome song too. ;_;

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-08-06T15:21:39+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Yo; modding!

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Easy
00:18:332 (2,3,4,1) - Coba bikin posisi gini biar flow dari (4) ke (1) lebih bagus + tampak lebih rapi? Pokoknya coba bikin agar (4) kelihatan lebih "nyambung" ke (1).agak nggak suka flow yg lurus2 banget gitu, lebih baik zigzag gini imo
00:24:361 - Tambah finish? Ada bunyi instrumen yang cukup nyaring di sini, dan rasanya aneh kalau cuma ditekanin pake whistle. Kalau merasa terlalu nyaring tinggal kurangi volume aja.
00:29:067 - ^^ fixed
00:33:773 (1) - ^. (Yang ini gak perlu dikurangi ofc, dan bunyinya jelas banget loh...) Dan ini lebih bagus kalau dijadiin slider 4/1 lalu ditambah circle di 00:35:243. Lebih akurat dalam ngikutin ritme di sini dan gak terkesan kosong. Kalau nggak yah, ganti circle ini dengan spinner sampai 00:34:949 kayak di diff-diff yang lain.[/color]
00:49:655 (3,2) - Dua slider ini nyentuh satu sama lain, dan secara sekilas kelihatan nimpa waktu main. Coba pertimbangin untuk ngatur dua slider ini.hmm fine2 aja sih sama overlapnya karena gak terlalu jelek imo, agak diubah sedikit
01:05:096 (2,1) - ^ (Ini jauh lebih "sekilas" sih, tapi ya...)^
01:17:743 - Timing point di sini gak dipake kan? Hapus aja.
>Normal
00:02:596 (4) - Pindahin ke (352,16) biar blanket di 00:01:861 (3,4) kelihatan lebih bagus?sure
00:40:096 (4,1) - Sebenernya gak gitu kelihatan sih, tapi apa 1,06x gak terasa dikit lebih gede dari spacing default?fixx
01:00:684 - Finish ketinggalan atau gimana nih? Di sini jelas banget loh cymbal-nya...[/color]
>Hard Collab
Gak terlalu penting sih, tapi mungkin mau buat SB kecil-kecilan berupa nama mapper di part milik mereka?
00:16:420 (6,7) - Saya pribadi terkecoh waktu pertama main pattern ini, karena saya pikir jarak antara kedua objek ini satu ketukan, bukannya setengah. Saya gak tahu sih buat yang lain, tapi ini rasanya... menjebak karena spacing dari objek-objek sebelum pola ini.
00:20:096 (4,5) - Gak apa yah spacing kayak gini... Gampang kebaca jadi seperti berjarak 1/4 ketukan IMO. (Berlaku buat pattern yang seperti ini.)
00:49:214 (5,6,7,8,1) - Coba bikin seperti ini biar flow jadi lebih bagus? Ini juga bakal bikin gerakan kursor jadi gak terkesan maksa, seperti kalau ngemainin pattern yang ada sekarang.
01:07:743 (5,6,7,8) - Dan coba bikin kayak gini? Sekali lagi, ini buat flow, biarpun yang ini masih bisa dikatakan minor.
>Fly!!
00:26:420 (5,1) - Blanket di sini sempurna menurut approach circle, tapi kalau diperhatiin lagi, lengkungan (1) masih dikit terlalu mencekung ke kanan. Coba geser-geserin node di sini.
00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO, segienam ini belum terlihat sempurna (apalagi dilihat dari distance spacing antara keenam circle ini). Kalau mau gampang sih, pake Create Polygon Circles aja.
01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Segienam ini sah-sah aja, tapi jauh lebih pas sama lagu kalau dibikin jadi dua segitiga terpisah. Optional sih ini; gak mau juga gak masalah.all fixed!
Udah gitu aja owob

Good luck on the way

Thanks for the mod, Kak Hinsvar!

Pjecoo wrote:
Hi, as requested.

Normal
00:47:743 (1,2) - You made a great alignment of the sliders before. Just move the redpoint little bit closer to the beginning point.
00:52:155 (4) - Same ^^

I think that's all I found. I know, there can be some more mistakes, but I didn't find them.
Hope that helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck![/color]

Thank you for the mod~

Konei wrote:
Aw maaan, I'd have mapped this awesome song too. ;_;

Koneiiii ;w;

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-08-07T11:22:54+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Yo; modding!

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Hard Collab
Gak terlalu penting sih, tapi mungkin mau buat SB kecil-kecilan berupa nama mapper di part milik mereka? anre males
00:16:420 (6,7) - Saya pribadi terkecoh waktu pertama main pattern ini, karena saya pikir jarak antara kedua objek ini satu ketukan, bukannya setengah. Saya gak tahu sih buat yang lain, tapi ini rasanya... menjebak karena spacing dari objek-objek sebelum pola ini. fix
01:07:743 (5,6,7,8) - Dan coba bikin kayak gini? Sekali lagi, ini buat flow, biarpun yang ini masih bisa dikatakan minor. fix
Udah gitu aja owob

Good luck on the way

makasih kak Hinsvar

Update

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AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-08-11T15:33:36+00:00

updated!

bats ;w;

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-08-13T15:19:26+00:00

star

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-08-13T15:21:23+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
love

Ikeee <3

Mystyk

osu! Alumni

950 posts

Joined June 2011

Mystyk 2014-08-22T19:02:40+00:00

Hi! Mod from my mod queue!

[General]
Turn off widescreen support on the Hard Collab difficulty because that's the only one which has it turned on so it's inconsistent with the other difficulties.

[Easy]

00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - I would put these further from each other since they are far from each other on the timeline - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953741 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953762 (just examples)
00:59:508 (1,2) - why don't you add finish on these too? the music is just as loud as here 00:57:155 (1,2) - so they should be similar
01:05:096 (2,1) - same problem as 00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - they are too close but on the timeline they are far, so there should be more distance between them, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953795 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953799 (of course it can be done in a nicer way >.<)
01:10:832 (4) - small thing but try to rotate this slider to have equal distance - http://puu.sh/b38MI/5de092f48f.jpg --> http://puu.sh/b38Tj/3a52a54812.jpg (I also replaced 01:11:567 (1) - a little bit, and it also makes the blanket nicer)
01:13:773 (1) - you should start this spinner at 01:14:067 (1) - to give some time for beginners to react

Also, I would rather avoid using slider velocity changes on the Easy difficulty, so please try to avoid it in the future.

[Normal]

00:33:184 (4) - the spinner starts a bit early right after the slided ends so I would rather remove one reverse from the slider to give some break for beginners
00:53:479 (4,5,6) - the begininng of (6) is too close to (4) which is confusing, so I would suggest something like this to make it easier to read: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953939
00:56:126 - I would rather remove this slider velocity change, it makes 00:56:714 (1) - too short which might be hard to read because 2 hit circles can look like that too http://puu.sh/b3aSO/29c2074a68.jpg - but if you remove the slider velocity change it's obvious that it is a slider because it will be clear that there is no number at the end of the slider >.< also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953971 - like this 00:57:155 (1,2) - will be also easier to read because the sliderends won't be too close
00:59:508 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because the music is loud and you used it here too 01:00:684 (2) -
01:05:390 (3) - add finish to the beginning because the music is loud
01:17:890 (1) - I can't really hear this, I would rather rase the volume up to about 30-40% and add soft whistle, it wouldn't be loud but it would fit the music and it would still be audible
01:20:684 (1,2,3) - make this blanket (and pattern) a bit nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954042

[Hard Collab]

00:13:626 (1,2) - don't start these sliders on red ticks, the end on big beats, so they should start on the white ticks, and also I would add a hit circle here 00:13:626 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954149
00:15:684 (4,5,6,7) - well firstly replace (4) to make the distance better (it will look nicer) 00:15:684 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/b3e2d/a815768b78.jpg
also I believe you can make this blanket nicer too 00:15:979 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954195 - and thirdly try not to start this on the red tick 00:16:861 (7) - I think it will play better if you do what is shown on the screenshot (remove reverse from (6), put (7) earlier and add a hit circle here 00:17:008 -
00:20:096 (4,5) - and 00:22:449 (2,3) - I don't understand these kind of distant changes, it is kind of misleading, I would rather perfectly stack them or use the same distance that you used before
00:24:361 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the music is loud there (you can lower the volume a little bit if you add finish)
00:29:067 (1) - add finish here too because the music has a finish sound too
00:36:052 (1) - I don't know what happened here but this slider should start on the red tick at 00:35:979 -
00:47:743 (1,3) - I'm not really a fan of this half stack, try to replace some things, examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954957 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954956 or etc.
00:53:479 (4,5,6) - it's better to play if sliders start on white ticks both because of the beats and vocals - http://puu.sh/b3spD/5c8e09759b.jpg
01:03:037 (3) - why not add a finish to the beginning of the slider? the music is loud and it's similar to this 01:01:861 (1) -
01:05:390 (1) - add finish to the beginning too because it's in the music
01:17:890 (1) - same that I said on Normal, I can't really hear this so you should turn up the volume until about 30-40% to make it audible (and personally I think that it is annoying to play something that I can't even hear)

[Fly!!]

00:04:655 (6,7) - stack properly? I think it would be easier to read since it wouldn't be misleading and you stacked these too 00:08:920 (4,5) -
00:24:361 (1) - a finish at the beginning would fit
00:29:067 (1) - same here about adding finish to the beginning
00:33:773 (1,1) - you should end the spinner earlier, it is hard to hit 00:34:949 (1) - because the spinner end is too close http://puu.sh/b3thO/8734db8fbb.jpg
00:59:508 (1,1) - like I suggested on previous difficulties, add finish because of the loud music
01:00:979 (2) - I know what you map to here, but I think less would be enough because this is a slow part - http://puu.sh/b3tvs/99997dc9d5.jpg
01:05:979 (3,4) - why don't you add a stream here? I can hear the fast sounds in the music, and this is the hardest difficulty, so I think it wouldn't hurt to use a stream (or a reverse slider) it might be more fun to play in my opinion http://puu.sh/b3tzA/f0e42770e4.jpg or http://puu.sh/b3tBb/462d0c6cdf.jpg
01:14:949 (6) - this beat is a little stronger than the others, I think you could emphasize it with a finish
01:17:743 - same thing that I told on the other difficulties, please turn up the volume
01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better if you only emphasized the big beats, it sounds a bit overmapped in its current state http://puu.sh/b3tWF/9c620bc5b6.jpg

Good luck!

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-08-23T18:37:58+00:00

Metadata check as per Mystyk's request, but there is not a official source that says this needs a label such as TV Size.　About the artist, the current one is correct. In short, there is nothing wrong with metadata.

SPOILER

http://www.j-haikyu.com/anime/music.html

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-08-24T05:19:39+00:00

Mystyk wrote:
Hi! Mod from my mod queue!

[Hard Collab]
00:15:684 (4,5,6,7) - well firstly replace (4) to make the distance better (it will look nicer) 00:15:684 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/b3e2d/a815768b78.jpg
also I believe you can make this blanket nicer too 00:15:979 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954195 - and thirdly try not to start this on the red tick 00:16:861 (7) - I think it will play better if you do what is shown on the screenshot (remove reverse from (6), put (7) earlier and add a hit circle here 00:17:008 - fix
00:24:361 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the music is loud there (you can lower the volume a little bit if you add finish) fix

Thank you for mod!!

update

osu file format v13

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Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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AnreFM

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AnreFM 2014-08-25T14:24:33+00:00

Sorry for the late reply, school's too chaotic ;w;

Mystyk wrote:
Hi! Mod from my mod queue!

[General]
Turn off widescreen support on the Hard Collab difficulty because that's the only one which has it turned on so it's inconsistent with the other difficulties.fixed

[Easy]
00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - I would put these further from each other since they are far from each other on the timeline - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953741 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953762 (just examples)
00:59:508 (1,2) - why don't you add finish on these too? the music is just as loud as here 00:57:155 (1,2) - so they should be similar
01:05:096 (2,1) - same problem as 00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - they are too close but on the timeline they are far, so there should be more distance between them, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953795 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953799 (of course it can be done in a nicer way >.<)
01:10:832 (4) - small thing but try to rotate this slider to have equal distance - http://puu.sh/b38MI/5de092f48f.jpg --> http://puu.sh/b38Tj/3a52a54812.jpg (I also replaced 01:11:567 (1) - a little bit, and it also makes the blanket nicer)
01:13:773 (1) - you should start this spinner at 01:14:067 (1) - to give some time for beginners to react
^ Fixed them all, thank you~

Also, I would rather avoid using slider velocity changes on the Easy difficulty, so please try to avoid it in the future.

[Normal]
00:33:184 (4) - the spinner starts a bit early right after the slided ends so I would rather remove one reverse from the slider to give some break for beginnerssure
00:53:479 (4,5,6) - the begininng of (6) is too close to (4) which is confusing, so I would suggest something like this to make it easier to read: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953939ok
00:56:126 - I would rather remove this slider velocity change, it makes 00:56:714 (1) - too short which might be hard to read because 2 hit circles can look like that too http://puu.sh/b3aSO/29c2074a68.jpg - but if you remove the slider velocity change it's obvious that it is a slider because it will be clear that there is no number at the end of the slider >.< also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953971 - like this 00:57:155 (1,2) - will be also easier to read because the sliderends won't be too closelol yeah, I don't like this one too. removed the SV change and changing this one to a circle, hope it's good ><
00:59:508 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because the music is loud and you used it here too 01:00:684 (2) -
01:05:390 (3) - add finish to the beginning because the music is loud
01:17:890 (1) - I can't really hear this, I would rather rase the volume up to about 30-40% and add soft whistle, it wouldn't be loud but it would fit the music and it would still be audible^ Fixed
01:20:684 (1,2,3) - make this blanket (and pattern) a bit nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954042sure
[Hard Collab]
00:13:626 (1,2) - don't start these sliders on red ticks, the end on big beats, so they should start on the white ticks, and also I would add a hit circle here 00:13:626 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954149moved this one further
00:15:684 (4,5,6,7) - well firstly replace (4) to make the distance better (it will look nicer) 00:15:684 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/b3e2d/a815768b78.jpg
also I believe you can make this blanket nicer too 00:15:979 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954195 - and thirdly try not to start this on the red tick 00:16:861 (7) - I think it will play better if you do what is shown on the screenshot (remove reverse from (6), put (7) earlier and add a hit circle here 00:17:008 -
00:20:096 (4,5) - and 00:22:449 (2,3) - I don't understand these kind of distant changes, it is kind of misleading, I would rather perfectly stack them or use the same distance that you used beforeyeah, noticed that too, why did I do this lol
00:24:361 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the music is loud there (you can lower the volume a little bit if you add finish)
00:29:067 (1) - add finish here too because the music has a finish sound too^ fixed
00:36:052 (1) - I don't know what happened here but this slider should start on the red tick at 00:35:979 -lolol
00:47:743 (1,3) - I'm not really a fan of this half stack, try to replace some things, examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954957 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954956 or etc.umm I'm actually quite fine with this imo. My intention is to keep the distance Normal and this kind of pattern isn't all too unusual, I hope ypu can understand><
00:53:479 (4,5,6) - it's better to play if sliders start on white ticks both because of the beats and vocals - http://puu.sh/b3spD/5c8e09759b.jpg
01:03:037 (3) - why not add a finish to the beginning of the slider? the music is loud and it's similar to this 01:01:861 (1) -
01:05:390 (1) - add finish to the beginning too because it's in the music
01:17:890 (1) - same that I said on Normal, I can't really hear this so you should turn up the volume until about 30-40% to make it audible (and personally I think that it is annoying to play something that I can't even hear)Fixed all above
[Fly!!]
00:04:655 (6,7) - stack properly? I think it would be easier to read since it wouldn't be misleading and you stacked these too 00:08:920 (4,5) - yeah fixed
00:24:361 (1) - a finish at the beginning would fitsure
00:29:067 (1) - same here about adding finish to the beginningmm
00:33:773 (1,1) - you should end the spinner earlier, it is hard to hit 00:34:949 (1) - because the spinner end is too close http://puu.sh/b3thO/8734db8fbb.jpgokay
00:59:508 (1,1) - like I suggested on previous difficulties, add finish because of the loud musicyes
01:00:979 (2) - I know what you map to here, but I think less would be enough because this is a slow part - http://puu.sh/b3tvs/99997dc9d5.jpgsorry but I kinda like the effect created by these two reverses and the beat is quite audible in the background so I'd like to keep this ;w;
01:05:979 (3,4) - why don't you add a stream here? I can hear the fast sounds in the music, and this is the hardest difficulty, so I think it wouldn't hurt to use a stream (or a reverse slider) it might be more fun to play in my opinion http://puu.sh/b3tzA/f0e42770e4.jpg or http://puu.sh/b3tBb/462d0c6cdf.jpgsure, hope it's not too bad now haha
01:14:949 (6) - this beat is a little stronger than the others, I think you could emphasize it with a finishsure
01:17:743 - same thing that I told on the other difficulties, please turn up the volumesure
01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better if you only emphasized the big beats, it sounds a bit overmapped in its current state http://puu.sh/b3tWF/9c620bc5b6.jpghmm I actually would like to keep the consistency with the earlier part, and since this one is the last beats, having it a bit difficult wouldn't be too bad imo, I'll keep this for now owo
Good luck!

Thank you for the mod Mystyk <3

KSHR wrote:
Metadata check as per Mystyk's request, but there is not a official source that says this needs a label such as TV Size.　About the artist, the current one is correct. In short, there is nothing wrong with metadata.

SPOILER

http://www.j-haikyu.com/anime/music.html

Alright then, thanks for checking KSHR

Updated!

Come[Back]Home

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Come[Back]Home 2014-12-10T18:45:24+00:00

Mod :3

Easy
00:07:890 (1) Delete NC
00:12:596 (1) ^
00:36:714 (2) I dont know if this is okay in an Easy diff
01:19:508 (3,4) The overlap looks ugly
01:28:773 (1) Delete NC

Normal
Its depressing that i couldnt find anything after looking at it twice....

Hard Collab
00:11:420 (3) Stack it ordinary with the end of 00:10:243 (1)
00:14:067 (2,3) Why the jump here?
00:47:670 (1,3) I really dislike the overlap

Fly!!
00:00:684 Add HC
00:00:758 ^

This Map is awesome. Im pretty sure it will get ranked really fast because its so nice. Sadly its depressiv for modders to mod it because it is so good

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-12-11T01:24:56+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Mod :3

Easy
00:07:890 (1) Delete NC
00:12:596 (1) ^I'm using DC per 2 stanza, so leaving this one will make it a bit too long beat-wise
00:36:714 (2) I dont know if this is okay in an Easy diffit.. should be? lol I'll try to see BAT's opinion
01:19:508 (3,4) The overlap looks uglyhmm fixed I guess
01:28:773 (1) Delete NCfixed

Normal
Its depressing that i couldnt find anything after looking at it twice....lol it's fine

Hard Collab
00:11:420 (3) Stack it ordinary with the end of 00:10:243 (1)okay
00:14:067 (2,3) Why the jump here?oh yeah I just realized that it's really really bad, fixed
00:47:670 (1,3) I really dislike the overlaphmm it's intentional. The pattern is a bit unusual and I'm trying to make the readability better

Fly!!
00:00:684 Add HC
00:00:758 ^eh what's HC? orz

This Map is awesome. Im pretty sure it will get ranked really fast because its so nice. Sadly its depressiv for modders to mod it because it is so good lol I'll try to get it ranked soon, don't worry about stuffs like can't find anything xD

Updated, thanks!

gyuwife

19 posts

Joined October 2012

gyuwife 2014-12-11T06:02:50+00:00

Hello
Alpaca's request
I'm still learning to mod, so my apology if it's not perfect

Easy

00:05:537 (1,1) - Distance is too close. Beginners can be tricked
00:10:243 (1,1) - Same
00:28:773 (4) - How about deleting this note? Because the vocal stopped here
01:05:096 (2,1) - Distance is too close

Normal

00:35:537 (1) - Really not good when I played it. Also, Hard diff and Easy diff don't have this rhythm

Hard Collab

00:04:214 (3,4) - Stack this properly
00:13:332 (2,1) - It's really hard to read this. Maybe because the previous notes follow the vocal while the notes after this follow the drum
00:21:273 (8,10) - Stack this properly
00:23:184 (5,1) - Stack this properly
00:24:214 (3) - Move to X:384 Y:176 if you want better triangle formation
00:49:949 (8,1) - Stack this properly
01:05:390 (1,3) - Stack this properly

Insane

00:04:655 (6,7) - Stack this properly
00:06:567 (4,5) - Stack this properly
00:08:920 (4,5) - Stack this properly, maybe you should turn off Grid-Snap when doing this

Good Luck

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-12-11T06:24:59+00:00

Here as requested from my modding queue and a mighty fine song choice from the volleyball anime. If only kuroko had songs that could be made

[Easy]

00:17:302 (1) - DS also at the same time adjust it to something like this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUtf/946806376a.jpg
00:19:361 (4) - DS I'm ok with millimeter change but this isn't a millimeter =)
00:24:361 (1) - Major snap error I believe, or maybe it's just the SV change that created the problem for me
00:37:155 (3) - DS
00:37:155 (3,4) - Do this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUAv/05534c2129.jpg
00:46:126 (2) - Move down and left a bit for the same reason
01:03:773 (4) - Snap and move up a little bit so the note/slider can be perfectly aligned and moving in the space direction
01:22:302 (2) - DS

[Normal]

00:05:537 (1) - DS
00:07:890 (1) - DS

[Hard Collab]

00:18:037 (4,5,6) - Allow these 3 to have equal spacing for balance
00:19:655 (3,4) - Something like this looks pretty cool too http://puu.sh/dpVYv/c4a406d488.jpg

That's about it. The Fly!! difficulty was really good. Overall this mapset is amazing. Reason I'm so strict on DS for easy/normal is because it can be lead to not rankable material. Balance is key, yes there we SV changes but during those changes inside the time frames there we still error in spatial distribution and that is critical. I revise to go back and make sure all your DS is how you want them to be. I hope I helped you in anyway. Hope to see this ranked in the future

Come[Back]Home

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Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2014-12-11T14:18:33+00:00

I forgot to leave a star for this Map.... How emberassing

AnreFM

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-12-11T15:01:03+00:00

gyuwife wrote:
Hellohey there~
Alpaca's request
I'm still learning to mod, so my apology if it's not perfect

Easy

00:05:537 (1,1) - Distance is too close. Beginners can be trickedguess not, I mean the distance time-wise is far enough, I think this one should be fine
00:10:243 (1,1) - Same^
00:28:773 (4) - How about deleting this note? Because the vocal stopped hereeh it would make the rhythm harder to read due to the gap, I'll keep this one
01:05:096 (2,1) - Distance is too close

Normal

00:35:537 (1) - Really not good when I played it. Also, Hard diff and Easy diff don't have this rhythmyeah good point, fixed

Hard Collab

00:04:214 (3,4) - Stack this properly
00:13:332 (2,1) - It's really hard to read this. Maybe because the previous notes follow the vocal while the notes after this follow the drumyeah, removed all the stupid notes
00:21:273 (8,10) - Stack this properly
00:23:184 (5,1) - Stack this properly
00:24:214 (3) - Move to X:384 Y:176 if you want better triangle formation
00:49:949 (8,1) - Stack this properly
01:05:390 (1,3) - Stack this properlyfixed the stacks I guess lol

Insane

00:04:655 (6,7) - Stack this properly
00:06:567 (4,5) - Stack this properly
00:08:920 (4,5) - Stack this properly, maybe you should turn off Grid-Snap when doing this^

Good Luck

Thanks for the mod! :3

Kocari wrote:
Here as requested from my modding queue and a mighty fine song choice from the volleyball anime. If only kuroko had songs that could be made

[Easy]

00:17:302 (1) - DS also at the same time adjust it to something like this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUtf/946806376a.jpgfix
00:19:361 (4) - DS I'm ok with millimeter change but this isn't a millimeter =)lol fixed
00:24:361 (1) - Major snap error I believe, or maybe it's just the SV change that created the problem for me
00:37:155 (3) - DS fixed
00:37:155 (3,4) - Do this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUAv/05534c2129.jpg^
00:46:126 (2) - Move down and left a bit for the same reason^
01:03:773 (4) - Snap and move up a little bit so the note/slider can be perfectly aligned and moving in the space directionhmm I liked the current position better, if I moved it up, there would be a overlap with the comboburst
01:22:302 (2) - DSaye

[Normal]

00:05:537 (1) - DS
00:07:890 (1) - DS^ fixed

[Hard Collab]

00:18:037 (4,5,6) - Allow these 3 to have equal spacing for balanceoh nice, fixed
00:19:655 (3,4) - Something like this looks pretty cool too http://puu.sh/dpVYv/c4a406d488.jpgdon't want to add more difficulty on this diff lol, it's pretty hard already on some part, I'll keep this one simple :')

That's about it. The Fly!! difficulty was really good. Overall this mapset is amazing. Reason I'm so strict on DS for easy/normal is because it can be lead to not rankable material. Balance is key, yes there we SV changes but during those changes inside the time frames there we still error in spatial distribution and that is critical. I revise to go back and make sure all your DS is how you want them to be. I hope I helped you in anyway. Hope to see this ranked in the future

Thank you! I noticed that there may be a few of the notes' distance that looked off based on the DS due to the SV changes, but I've arranged some of them by spacing them based on their grid, this way it won't create much problem for the readability since all notes will be spaced the same between each other, I hope you can understand >.<

Anyway, thank you for the mods you two, and also for the star, Kocari and Come[Back]Home! <3

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-12-12T22:18:57+00:00

Hello

[General]

mp3 quality really bad, these overloads sounds horrible. So try to search for better one version maybe #modhelp can help
add "haikyu" to tags, since crunchyroll… well this will not hurt anyone
Check your first kiai end for consistency, I don't see a reason why they are not.
Timing: http://puu.sh/drXPh/74ec2fd06e.png It would be great if you get second check for this

[Easy]

All these SV changes on easy looks strange, but well… whatever
00:33:773 (1) - There should be 1 full measure for recovery after spinner for easy. Consider to replace this spinner. Or just place circle 00:33:773 () and leave this place for short-break. Also this spinner is way too short for easy.
00:52:596 (1) - ^
01:13:773 (1) - ^

[Normal]

[Hard Collab]

00:19:361 (2) - Something like ~284:320 will improve readability a lot here
00:23:920 (1,2,3) - Flow is kinda sharp here, try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds0zt/48605f20fa.jpg
00:44:655 (7,8,1) - Some kind of aesthetics improvement http://puu.sh/ds137/0996568e33.jpg
00:46:273 (4,5) - Feels like too big jump, consider to lower a bit
00:49:655 (6,7,8) - Make DS equal here. I don't see a reason why they are not.
01:14:949 (5,6) - Since lyrics is not landing on 01:15:096 () accurately It would be better to Ctrl+G them
01:22:302 (6,7,8,9) - Flow is bad here, also 01:21:861 (5,7) - hurts this even more, you can try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds08B/27893890b9.jpg

[Fly!!]

Last jumps are bit complicated compared to the rest of diff.

I'll give detailed look for Insane and Hard on weekend. There is some spots I'd like to mention.

Last edited by Sieg 2014-12-13T11:41:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-12-12T23:25:00+00:00

- RECIZE YOUR BGFILE INTO 1024x768 or 1366x768 (RECOMMENDED)
- REMOVE USELESS GREENLINE LIKE 01:17:890 (same volume, same sv rate, same kiai status)

Easy

consider reducing AR just a bit.

00:39:214 (2) - this can be confusing. call me on ingame then lets consider the alternatives.
00:52:596 (1) - spinner begins before the slider 3 ends.
01:13:626 (4) - this can be confusing too. + spinner issue again.
01:27:890 (4) - NC for newbeat.

Normal

00:40:096 (4) - i found someway weird here.
01:06:126 (1) - no need for NC here
nothing else

Hard

00:19:067 (1,2,3) - keep spacingconsistency.
00:20:832 (1) - NC is needed imo
00:36:567 (3,4) - rhythm should be switched.
00:49:949 (8,1) - rotate -30' for better flow. and move this 00:50:684 (3) - to 249:294

Fly

00:56:126 (1) - I think red tick is enough. reduce a tick.

edit : call me if u r ready

Last edited by DeletedUser_1574070 2014-12-15T03:01:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

AnreFM 2014-12-13T17:05:42+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello ><

[General]
mp3 quality really bad, these overloads sounds horrible. So try to search for better one version maybe #modhelp can help I'll try getting a new one then
add "haikyu" to tags, since crunchyroll… well this will not hurt anyoneokay
Check your first kiai end for consistency, I don't see a reason why they are not.fixed them all
Timing: http://puu.sh/drXPh/74ec2fd06e.png It would be great if you get second check for this
[Easy]
All these SV changes on easy looks strange, but well… whatever
00:33:773 (1) - There should be 1 full measure for recovery after spinner for easy. Consider to replace this spinner. Or just place circle 00:33:773 () and leave this place for short-break. Also this spinner is way too short for easy.
00:52:596 (1) - ^
01:13:773 (1) - ^I felt that there's enough time for this two, compared to the above, so I I'll keep this for now
[Normal]
[Hard Collab]
00:19:361 (2) - Something like ~284:320 will improve readability a lot herefixed
00:23:920 (1,2,3) - Flow is kinda sharp here, try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds0zt/48605f20fa.jpgfixed
00:44:655 (7,8,1) - Some kind of aesthetics improvement http://puu.sh/ds137/0996568e33.jpgalright
00:46:273 (4,5) - Feels like too big jump, consider to lower a bitreduced it
00:49:655 (6,7,8) - Make DS equal here. I don't see a reason why they are not.yeah
01:14:949 (5,6) - Since lyrics is not landing on 01:15:096 () accurately It would be better to Ctrl+G themI actually am following the bass here and doesn't really focus on the vocal, so I'll keep this one for now, I hope you understand
01:22:302 (6,7,8,9) - Flow is bad here, also 01:21:861 (5,7) - hurts this even more, you can try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds08B/27893890b9.jpgyeah fixed
[Fly!!]
Last jumps are bit complicated compared to the rest of diff.alright changed it to become similar with thte previous jump patterns
I'll give detailed look for Insane and Hard on weekend. There is some spots I'd like to mention.

Thank you very much for the check Sieg, I hope I can solve those problems on Easy and the mp3 quickly ><

Kloyd wrote:
- RECIZE YOUR BGFILE INTO 1024x768 or 1366x768 (RECOMMENDED)fixes
- REMOVE USELESS GREENLINE LIKE 01:17:890 (same volume, same sv rate, same kiai status)alright, checked them all and I hope there isn't one anymore

Easy

consider reducing AR just a bit.
00:39:214 (2) - this can be confusing. call me on ingame then lets consider the alternatives.
00:52:596 (1) - spinner begins before the slider 3 ends.
01:13:626 (4) - this can be confusing too. + spinner issue again.
01:27:890 (4) - NC for newbeat.
Normal
00:40:096 (4) - i found someway weird here.
01:06:126 (1) - no need for NC herekay
nothing else
Hard
00:19:067 (1,2,3) - keep spacingconsistency.fixed
00:20:832 (1) - NC is needed imoalright
00:36:567 (3,4) - rhythm should be switched.
00:49:949 (8,1) - rotate -30' for better flow. and move this 00:50:684 (3) - to 249:294did changes based on Sieg's suggestion, I think it's better now :3
Fly
00:56:126 (1) - I think red tick is enough. reduce a tick.alrighty

Thank you for the check Kloyd, I hope we can conclude a better adjustments for the Easy and that one slider in Normal ><

Anyway, thank you very much again, both of you, I really appreciated it :'3 I know that my main issue right now is the rhythm on the Easy and meanwhile I'm not really bothered with it, I hope you can help me with a better with suggestion if you can >< (And I'll look for a better mp3)

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