1. i felt that timing is a bit early when i tried several times. try to +5.
2. disable Widescreen support.

1. 00:11:972 ~ 00:15:972 - so hard to get these rhythms. you should be reduced some notes. ex:00:12:347 (12) - ,00:12:722 (13) - ,00:14:347 (17) - ,00:14:722 (18) -
2. 00:22:222 (7) - actually unnecessary note. btw dat timestamp.
3. 00:23:222 (9,10) - remove. dont use such rhythm on Kantan. it doesnt work really well on 240bpm.
4. 00:27:222 (17,18) - the same.
5. 00:31:472 (26) - ^
6. 00:35:347 (35,36) - ^ i will omit the same suggestion.
7. 00:52:722 (79) - 00:54:722 (82) - remove.
8. 00:55:972 ~ suddenly backbeats... just needs a kindness for Kantan.
9. 01:00:722 (95) - remove. it would be fine for the consistency with 01:01:722 - .
10. then, 00:59:972 (93,95) - change to K? those are so strong.
    
    
11. there is too many unnecessary notes there. i think that this is still insufficient diff as Kantan. so please remove more notes then it will get better.

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - dont follow the song purely. this part has almost Muzukashii~Oni level imo. maybe you can remove these notes 00:12:597 (31) - 00:14:597 (37) -
2. 01:00:972 (205) - should be d or D? current pattern feels inconsistent.
3. 01:20:847 (283) - i dont recommend to use 4-plet. so remove this one?
4. 01:21:972 (289,290,291,292,293) - kinda hard. i guess that it should be changed to more simple pattern such as ddddk.
   
   
5. overall nice. but please consider changing some notes on "bbbbb-bonfire" like 00:23:597 (68) - . so such note can move to 00:23:472 - . current rhythm plays so hard ;_;

1. 00:15:972 ~ 00:17:722 - feels kinda weird. consider changing more simple and easy to beat pattern so like this? http://puu.sh/bjHRM/37eca19d13.jpg
2. 00:31:972 ~ 00:34:597 - you should remove some notes since this part isnt kiai time. so such long pattern makes me weird.
3. 00:54:784 (290) - => 00:54:722 - move here? plays kinda bad rhythm. it acutually fits the song but doesnt fit with the flow imo.

1. 00:23:847 (131) - how about d? for sure, there is the snaredrum sound but d will work better to emphasize next K
2. 00:48:097 (335) - remove? for the consistency with 00:44:097 - . or, move to 00:47:847 - as a k because there is strong drumroll sound.
3. 00:53:972 - add a d. because of 00:51:972 (365) - and 00:55:972 (386) -

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - this part should be reduced some notes. please make a break of 1/2. like 00:13:097 (84) - ,00:14:097 (92) - ,00:15:097 (100) - . current pattern doesnt fit the song/flow since this part is so quiet.
2. 01:24:659 (802) - remove. a bit long pattern only here.

1. just one thing. HP5 is tooooooo easy to pass.

TKS wrote:

[ General]

1. i felt that timing is a bit early when i tried several times. try to +5.
2. disable Widescreen support. Dolphin can fix these~

[ Dain's Kantan]

1. 00:11:972 ~ 00:15:972 - so hard to get these rhythms. you should be reduced some notes. ex:00:12:347 (12) - ,00:12:722 (13) - ,00:14:347 (17) - ,00:14:722 (18) - fixed two, but the other two I felt were necessary to keep a stable rhythm.
2. 00:22:222 (7) - actually unnecessary note. btw dat timestamp. fixed www
3. 00:23:222 (9,10) - remove. dont use such rhythm on Kantan. it doesnt work really well on 240bpm. I actually decided to try simplifying the rhythm a bit to 3 1/1s instead; this isn't really different from the non-Kiais so I think it works.
4. 00:27:222 (17,18) - the same. see above.
5. 00:31:472 (26) - ^ I think this one helps to keep a more stable rhythm; 4/1 gap might be a bit long for this part imo, since it's not exactly clear-cut, hence the extra note
6. 00:35:347 (35,36) - ^ i will omit the same suggestion. I actually altered the rhythm to make it simpler but to also follow the main instruments, it's a 2/1 thing now so yay?
7. 00:52:722 (79) - 00:54:722 (82) - remove. I didn't remove the notes since they help to keep the rhythm more stable imo. like I said before, 4/1 gap might be a bit big, but ask other BATs about this section, to see if it should be nerfed as you suggest.
8. 00:55:972 ~ suddenly backbeats... just needs a kindness for Kantan. But it's the main beat going on right now; again the rhythm is a bit more stable and I've actually seen way worse on Kantans just suddenly following back-beats out of the blue (this actually has sort of a buildup because doublets were used before)
9. 01:00:722 (95) - remove. it would be fine for the consistency with 01:01:722 - .
10. then, 00:59:972 (93,95) - change to K? those are so strong. Sure, fixed!
    
    
11. there is too many unnecessary notes there. i think that this is still insufficient diff as Kantan. so please remove more notes then it will get better. removed more notes for consistency in other parts, right now I'm at 209 notes and star rating is 1.8* so I'm not sure how much more I'd have to remove if you do ask me to

goodluck!

TKS wrote:

[ General]

1. i felt that timing is a bit early when i tried several times. try to +5. offset is now -23
2. disable Widescreen support. ok

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - dont follow the song purely. this part has almost Muzukashii~Oni level imo. maybe you can remove these notes 00:12:597 (31) - 00:14:597 (37) - removed the notes you mentioned
2. 01:00:972 (205) - should be d or D? current pattern feels inconsistent. fixed to D
3. 01:20:847 (283) - i dont recommend to use 4-plet. so remove this one? ok
4. 01:21:972 (289,290,291,292,293) - kinda hard. i guess that it should be changed to more simple pattern such as ddddk. fixed accordingly.
   
   
5. overall nice. but please consider changing some notes on "bbbbb-bonfire" like 00:23:597 (68) - . so such note can move to 00:23:472 - . current rhythm plays so hard ;_; sure, i'll fix these!

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:15:972 ~ 00:17:722 - feels kinda weird. consider changing more simple and easy to beat pattern so like this? http://puu.sh/bjHRM/37eca19d13.jpg fixed accordingly, fits nice!
2. 00:31:972 ~ 00:34:597 - you should remove some notes since this part isnt kiai time. so such long pattern makes me weird. fixed this section and the other section with the same melody.
3. 00:54:784 (290) - => 00:54:722 - move here? plays kinda bad rhythm. it acutually fits the song but doesnt fit with the flow imo. sure, fixed.

[Oni]

1. 00:23:847 (131) - how about d? for sure, there is the snaredrum sound but d will work better to emphasize next K sure, fixed!
2. 00:48:097 (335) - remove? for the consistency with 00:44:097 - . or, move to 00:47:847 - as a k because there is strong drumroll sound. removed the note.
3. 00:53:972 - add a d. because of 00:51:972 (365) - and 00:55:972 (386) - fixed.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - this part should be reduced some notes. please make a break of 1/2. like 00:13:097 (84) - ,00:14:097 (92) - ,00:15:097 (100) - . current pattern doesnt fit the song/flow since this part is so quiet. I added breaks but not on same exact spots you pointed out!
2. 01:24:659 (802) - remove. a bit long pattern only here. fixed.

[ innerest of ;_;]

1. just one thing. HP5 is tooooooo easy to pass. changed to HP6

goodluck! thanks, i need it ;W;

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