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kd pls

COME AT ME BATS QATS.

_Gezo_ wrote:

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[innerest of onis]
00:12:597 (98,99,100,101,102) - Following your logic on how you map this whole part, that is kats on claps and hardcore kicks (those separated by 3/4 of a beat), this pattern should be kkdkd. fixed
00:14:597 (117,118,119,120,121) - Same for here, unless you want to keep it as kddkd. But both this one and the above one are equivalent. i think keeping it kddkd is better because of variation.
00:32:097 (347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356) - I don't know what you think of kkdkd kkddk instead, so you follow more the synth while keeping most of your structure. (It's almost the opposite of your current pattern lol) eh, im personally against it because right now it both plays well and follows the music accurately (in my opinion) so no change.
00:43:222 (507,508,509,510,511) - kkdkd on these ? The snare follows a Φ * * Ο | * O * Φ structure, which you are following more or less with the "bo". sure.
00:52:097 (612,614) - Claps at these notes, put k as you're doing the same on all other claps until the next bookmark. fixed
01:00:222 (678,679,680,681) - Make it 5-notes, so you have the same thing until the long stream, like you did for 00:16:222 (133,134,135,136,137) - . ddkkd it is!
01:16:097 (895,896,897,898,899,900,901,902,903,904) - Same as 347-356, since it's... the same. same reasoning.

[inner oni]
00:08:847 (44) - I don't know how to explain that, but I see k fitting more than d. i actually get it. vocals + a small higher pitched percussion noise of sorts. fixed.
00:09:597 (51) - AND HERE I CAN'T EITHER, but that's the opposite, for some reason d fits more than k. Maybe on both that's my transitive sense of mapping speaking. fixed.
00:23:347 (171,172,173) - dkd, to follow the snare. ok
00:27:347 (218,219,220) - ^ fix
00:52:097 (482) - Same as for innerest, kat as there's a clap. fix
01:27:347 (839,840,841) - ^ fixed

[oni]
00:52:097 - Add a kat for claps, as for innerest? fix
3rd kiai and especially 4th should include more breaks due to higher difficulty patterns and restless thingies at 240 bpm; as well as the in-between kiai parts (between 1st & 2nd as well as 3rd & 4th.) added breaks o:

[muzukashii]
00:08:222 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - that 4-4 is alone in that part, maybe do odd-numbered amount of notes like the rest so you get some sort of logic (keep the skeleton though) mentioned this on IRC so you know why im denying.
00:52:597 (278,279,280,281,282) - and 00:54:597 (289,290,291,292) - are noted differently but are the same in-song, maybe make them consistent to each other? the reason they're like this is if you listen to the bass synth, it doesn't have the same rhythm.

[futsuu]
nothing to say yay

_Gezo_ wrote:

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[dain's kantan]
00:55:972 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - same density as muzu, maybe tone it down so it equals futsuu ? I removed 00:56:972 - and 00:57:972 - and that's about as easy as I think I could make this pattern ;_;
(Also most parts feel like a futsuu like kiais but that can't really be helped if you want to make it less boring. I'm just recommending to break more sequences.) The Kiais are about as easy as I can get them...I believe anyways without being really boring. I got rid of 7 more notes and star rating is now 2.15* and I don't wanna make it easier 'cause it'll be too boring beyond what I have now, I am perfectly satisfied with this, let's go

also

COME AT ME BATS QATS.

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_Gezo_ wrote:

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1. i felt that timing is a bit early when i tried several times. try to +5.
2. disable Widescreen support.

1. 00:11:972 ~ 00:15:972 - so hard to get these rhythms. you should be reduced some notes. ex:00:12:347 (12) - ,00:12:722 (13) - ,00:14:347 (17) - ,00:14:722 (18) -
2. 00:22:222 (7) - actually unnecessary note. btw dat timestamp.
3. 00:23:222 (9,10) - remove. dont use such rhythm on Kantan. it doesnt work really well on 240bpm.
4. 00:27:222 (17,18) - the same.
5. 00:31:472 (26) - ^
6. 00:35:347 (35,36) - ^ i will omit the same suggestion.
7. 00:52:722 (79) - 00:54:722 (82) - remove.
8. 00:55:972 ~ suddenly backbeats... just needs a kindness for Kantan.
9. 01:00:722 (95) - remove. it would be fine for the consistency with 01:01:722 - .
10. then, 00:59:972 (93,95) - change to K? those are so strong.
    
    
11. there is too many unnecessary notes there. i think that this is still insufficient diff as Kantan. so please remove more notes then it will get better.

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - dont follow the song purely. this part has almost Muzukashii~Oni level imo. maybe you can remove these notes 00:12:597 (31) - 00:14:597 (37) -
2. 01:00:972 (205) - should be d or D? current pattern feels inconsistent.
3. 01:20:847 (283) - i dont recommend to use 4-plet. so remove this one?
4. 01:21:972 (289,290,291,292,293) - kinda hard. i guess that it should be changed to more simple pattern such as ddddk.
   
   
5. overall nice. but please consider changing some notes on "bbbbb-bonfire" like 00:23:597 (68) - . so such note can move to 00:23:472 - . current rhythm plays so hard ;_;

1. 00:15:972 ~ 00:17:722 - feels kinda weird. consider changing more simple and easy to beat pattern so like this? http://puu.sh/bjHRM/37eca19d13.jpg
2. 00:31:972 ~ 00:34:597 - you should remove some notes since this part isnt kiai time. so such long pattern makes me weird.
3. 00:54:784 (290) - => 00:54:722 - move here? plays kinda bad rhythm. it acutually fits the song but doesnt fit with the flow imo.

1. 00:23:847 (131) - how about d? for sure, there is the snaredrum sound but d will work better to emphasize next K
2. 00:48:097 (335) - remove? for the consistency with 00:44:097 - . or, move to 00:47:847 - as a k because there is strong drumroll sound.
3. 00:53:972 - add a d. because of 00:51:972 (365) - and 00:55:972 (386) -

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - this part should be reduced some notes. please make a break of 1/2. like 00:13:097 (84) - ,00:14:097 (92) - ,00:15:097 (100) - . current pattern doesnt fit the song/flow since this part is so quiet.
2. 01:24:659 (802) - remove. a bit long pattern only here.

1. just one thing. HP5 is tooooooo easy to pass.

TKS wrote:

[ General]

1. i felt that timing is a bit early when i tried several times. try to +5.
2. disable Widescreen support. Dolphin can fix these~

[ Dain's Kantan]

1. 00:11:972 ~ 00:15:972 - so hard to get these rhythms. you should be reduced some notes. ex:00:12:347 (12) - ,00:12:722 (13) - ,00:14:347 (17) - ,00:14:722 (18) - fixed two, but the other two I felt were necessary to keep a stable rhythm.
2. 00:22:222 (7) - actually unnecessary note. btw dat timestamp. fixed www
3. 00:23:222 (9,10) - remove. dont use such rhythm on Kantan. it doesnt work really well on 240bpm. I actually decided to try simplifying the rhythm a bit to 3 1/1s instead; this isn't really different from the non-Kiais so I think it works.
4. 00:27:222 (17,18) - the same. see above.
5. 00:31:472 (26) - ^ I think this one helps to keep a more stable rhythm; 4/1 gap might be a bit long for this part imo, since it's not exactly clear-cut, hence the extra note
6. 00:35:347 (35,36) - ^ i will omit the same suggestion. I actually altered the rhythm to make it simpler but to also follow the main instruments, it's a 2/1 thing now so yay?
7. 00:52:722 (79) - 00:54:722 (82) - remove. I didn't remove the notes since they help to keep the rhythm more stable imo. like I said before, 4/1 gap might be a bit big, but ask other BATs about this section, to see if it should be nerfed as you suggest.
8. 00:55:972 ~ suddenly backbeats... just needs a kindness for Kantan. But it's the main beat going on right now; again the rhythm is a bit more stable and I've actually seen way worse on Kantans just suddenly following back-beats out of the blue (this actually has sort of a buildup because doublets were used before)
9. 01:00:722 (95) - remove. it would be fine for the consistency with 01:01:722 - .
10. then, 00:59:972 (93,95) - change to K? those are so strong. Sure, fixed!
    
    
11. there is too many unnecessary notes there. i think that this is still insufficient diff as Kantan. so please remove more notes then it will get better. removed more notes for consistency in other parts, right now I'm at 209 notes and star rating is 1.8* so I'm not sure how much more I'd have to remove if you do ask me to

goodluck!

TKS wrote:

[ General]

1. i felt that timing is a bit early when i tried several times. try to +5. offset is now -23
2. disable Widescreen support. ok

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - dont follow the song purely. this part has almost Muzukashii~Oni level imo. maybe you can remove these notes 00:12:597 (31) - 00:14:597 (37) - removed the notes you mentioned
2. 01:00:972 (205) - should be d or D? current pattern feels inconsistent. fixed to D
3. 01:20:847 (283) - i dont recommend to use 4-plet. so remove this one? ok
4. 01:21:972 (289,290,291,292,293) - kinda hard. i guess that it should be changed to more simple pattern such as ddddk. fixed accordingly.
   
   
5. overall nice. but please consider changing some notes on "bbbbb-bonfire" like 00:23:597 (68) - . so such note can move to 00:23:472 - . current rhythm plays so hard ;_; sure, i'll fix these!

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:15:972 ~ 00:17:722 - feels kinda weird. consider changing more simple and easy to beat pattern so like this? http://puu.sh/bjHRM/37eca19d13.jpg fixed accordingly, fits nice!
2. 00:31:972 ~ 00:34:597 - you should remove some notes since this part isnt kiai time. so such long pattern makes me weird. fixed this section and the other section with the same melody.
3. 00:54:784 (290) - => 00:54:722 - move here? plays kinda bad rhythm. it acutually fits the song but doesnt fit with the flow imo. sure, fixed.

[Oni]

1. 00:23:847 (131) - how about d? for sure, there is the snaredrum sound but d will work better to emphasize next K sure, fixed!
2. 00:48:097 (335) - remove? for the consistency with 00:44:097 - . or, move to 00:47:847 - as a k because there is strong drumroll sound. removed the note.
3. 00:53:972 - add a d. because of 00:51:972 (365) - and 00:55:972 (386) - fixed.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:12:347 ~ 00:15:972 - this part should be reduced some notes. please make a break of 1/2. like 00:13:097 (84) - ,00:14:097 (92) - ,00:15:097 (100) - . current pattern doesnt fit the song/flow since this part is so quiet. I added breaks but not on same exact spots you pointed out!
2. 01:24:659 (802) - remove. a bit long pattern only here. fixed.

[ innerest of ;_;]

1. just one thing. HP5 is tooooooo easy to pass. changed to HP6

goodluck! thanks, i need it ;W;

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Dolphin wrote:

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Dolphin wrote:

Dain you're British, not American.