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nice song

hope u will finished this map :3
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mao130 wrote:

nice song

hope u will finished this map :3
(psst, notice it's in the "Beatmap Graveyard"?)
though yeah, I would've liked to see this finished :(
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Revived
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yay Pending.
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Star :]
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:)
another pink star for Azure :3
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;_;

I FUCKING LOVE YOU ANIKI!!!

:emoface:
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It'd be nice to have more distinct combo colours. Just two particularly noticably different colour changes would work.

Gold Truth:

00:00:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - This will add nothing but frustration to the map as I retry and have to play through this again and again.
01:17:290 (5,1,2,3,4) - Spacing change comes up out of nowhere, no thanks. That goes for most of the spacing changes, I just don't like them. Oh well.
01:21:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3) - Not as bad as the above example, but at least reduce the spacing between the notes a bit, I believe it plays better that way.
02:45:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Hitsound change what.
02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - Not liking these breaks one bit.

I looked at the other difficulties briefly, nothing really problematic there.
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Mmm, my new lullaby :P

[General]
SB ♥

[Red Truth]
00:51:023 (2,3) - Make these into a slider instead; I doubt beginners will be able to hit these easily, especially since they're stacked.
00:54:586 (1,2,3) - Make these into a slider/repeating slider instead.
01:05:086 (3) - Too close to (2)

[Blue Truth]
02:09:978 (4) - Uhh... was this an intentional jump?

[Gold Truth]
The combo colors still don't seem THAT distinctive enough...

Such a beautiful song :) ★~
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[Red Truth]

Suggestion

01:55:336 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20359

also

02:45:211 (1) - Maybe try something different with these, they can be kinda confusing, b/c the new player just had these stacts to do 02:42:211 (1) -

[Blue Truth]
01:43:728 (1) - IMO to hard for the diff~
lots of overlaps, but I fine I guess ><

[Gold Truth]

Perfect... so... Perfect..

-faints-

~

Comments

WHY isnt this ranked yet??

-goes emo-
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Pretty map O.O

~ Blue Truth ~
01:55:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – AHHHHH (but I guess isn't called an Insane for nothing...meh)

CUSTOM FRUIT-RYUUTA'S AND CTB FRUIT!!! <3 Kyaa~. Amazing skin + SB BG ;)

Sorry couldn't find anything to suggest/ point out for this set. I think it's ready to be ranked - BAT hunting time?

~Twinkle twinkle little star ~
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This map. Needs. To Be. Ranked. Now. :3 [/williamshatner]
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Red: really need to check this out
Black: would be good to check this
(suggestion): just a suggestion what i think would make your map better

Overall:
hmmmm it might just be me, but the tag "zts" i see no point to, unless its something to do with the song xD
(suggestion) it would be much more better if you made the strobe red for easy, blue for hard, and gold for insane, like the names incline ;), if you needed i could give you a hand with this and also clean your SB's code up into nice and tidy loops commands

[Red Truth]
01:06:211 (1) - remove new combo so that you are consistant with the pattern you did for this before it
(suggestion) 01:07:711 (2,3,4) - this part feels odd to the music, maybe think of a way what suits more, srry i cant help more over it though :oops:
01:27:211 (3) - new combo because i think the small combos suit this more, and also you have used smaller combos for the whole song upto this point so it looks abit odd
01:30:211 (5) - newcombo ^
01:55:336 (1) - maybe make this a down slider rather than a left slider, because it makes the note after kinda look like a half note
02:05:086 (2,3) - spacing, (3) needs to be closer to (2)
(suggestion) 02:10:711 (5) - newcombo
(suggestion) 02:19:336 (4,5) - new combo on either of these
if you do the above two, then go through the rest of the long combo part doing the same, while its not really needed i think it looks much better for a easy :p

02:54:211 (1,1,1,1,1) - cant you come up with something better for this part, its really boreing :(

[Blue Truth]
(suggestion) 00:55:915 (5) - newcombo
(suggestion) could you not merge the 72,032 timing section into the 71,845 by half timing it, i see no negative effect to doing this
01:24:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 16 combo xD new combo the (9)
01:39:603 (6) - new combo to follow your pattern at 01:42:603 (1,2,3) then 01:42:603 (1,2) -remove newcombo on (1) and then add combo to (2). i think it looks much better that way, and also then follows thw pattern you are using from then on
01:52:915 (6) - new combo

02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - again is there nothing better you could do :/

[Gold Truth]
the other maps have 3 combo colours, would it not be better to give this 3 too?

01:40:915 (5) - new combo to follow your own pattern, which your breaking xD

02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - again the same as the other diffs :(

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well there great maps, just a few combo probs :)

great job and enjoy my star :)
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Roley wrote:

This map. Needs. To Be. Ranked. Now. :3 [/williamshatner]
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jericho2442 wrote:

Red: really need to check this out
Black: would be good to check this
(suggestion): just a suggestion what i think would make your map better

Overall:
hmmmm it might just be me, but the tag "zts" i see no point to, unless its something to do with the song xD zts is technically the composer. 07th expansion is the company of which this music is found. Yes I know it's not right but it's a lot more well known than the composer's tag.
(suggestion) it would be much more better if you made the strobe red for easy, blue for hard, and gold for insane, like the names incline ;), if you needed i could give you a hand with this and also clean your SB's code up into nice and tidy loops commands No thanks. Golden Butterflies are a large part of the story this piece comes from. Thanks for your offer though.

[Red Truth]
01:06:211 (1) - remove new combo so that you are consistant with the pattern you did for this before it done
(suggestion) 01:07:711 (2,3,4) - this part feels odd to the music, maybe think of a way what suits more, srry i cant help more over it though :oops: hm, I think it sounds fine. Changed hitsounds though.
01:27:211 (3) - new combo because i think the small combos suit this more, and also you have used smaller combos for the whole song upto this point so it looks abit odd
01:30:211 (5) - newcombo ^
01:55:336 (1) - maybe make this a down slider rather than a left slider, because it makes the note after kinda look like a half note Fixed
02:05:086 (2,3) - spacing, (3) needs to be closer to (2) Fixed
(suggestion) 02:10:711 (5) - newcombo done
(suggestion) 02:19:336 (4,5) - new combo on either of these done
if you do the above two, then go through the rest of the long combo part doing the same, while its not really needed i think it looks much better for a easy :p

02:54:211 (1,1,1,1,1) - cant you come up with something better for this part, its really boreing :(Fine, I'll remove. Darn you people not liking slow.

[Blue Truth]
(suggestion) 00:55:915 (5) - newcombo
(suggestion) could you not merge the 72,032 timing section into the 71,845 by half timing it, i see no negative effect to doing this Silent spinner end, silent, next note, sound.
01:24:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 16 combo xD new combo the (9) done
01:39:603 (6) - new combo to follow your pattern at 01:42:603 (1,2,3) then 01:42:603 (1,2) -remove newcombo on (1) and then add combo to (2). i think it looks much better that way, and also then follows thw pattern you are using from then on
01:52:915 (6) - new combo

02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - again is there nothing better you could do :/

[Gold Truth]
the other maps have 3 combo colours, would it not be better to give this 3 too?

01:40:915 (5) - new combo to follow your own pattern, which your breaking xD

02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - again the same as the other diffs :(

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well there great maps, just a few combo probs :)

great job and enjoy my star :)
Thanks, changed most of what you asked.
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8-)
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great job! very beautiful map *___*
especially i liked Gold Truth - everything is so gold: sb, skin and that golden fountains *___*
the only thing that stands out is ordinary spin >_< is it possible to make some custom spin, also in gold colours? :roll:
if not, let it be, i like this map already the way it is now <3
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Melpomena wrote:

great job! very beautiful map *___*
especially i liked Gold Truth - everything is so gold: sb, skin and that golden fountains *___*
the only thing that stands out is ordinary spin >_< is it possible to make some custom spin, also in gold colours? :roll:
if not, let it be, i like this map already the way it is now <3
The spinner isn't in there? whoops. Fixed.
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This seems nice. I like 07th Expansion.
Tho I only checked the Gold diff:
Good flow in notes, some wierd spacings some places, but I belive that is the meaning.

Star'd
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