Eternity:
- 00:00:391 - Umm Imo this beat was too strong to be ignored. Not sure if you didn't wanted to start the map with a stream, but anyways consider adding a note here.
- 00:09:681 (9) - Consider adding a new combo as your combo pattern.
- 00:26:044 (6) - ^
- 00:36:612 (3) - Missing whistles.
- 01:01:499 (1) - Missing Whistle.
- 01:15:987 (2,3) - I think the current flow is a little broken. Even ctrl+G will remove the jump of 01:16:158 (3,4), this seems to be better in flow.
- 01:55:703 (2) - Check spacing.
- 02:30:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What happened to whistle?
- 02:33:544 (3) - The touch of the hp bar was a bit lot. Mind adjusting it?
- 02:48:884 (6) - Mind giving a curve to this for conistency with 02:48:544 (4)?
- 03:16:498 (1) - I wonder where the end is snapped to? Anyways 03:16:839 seems to need a beat.
- 05:48:799 (12) - Deleting this note fits the song better imo.
- 07:08:657 (3) - 1 grid left feels more stable pattern.
- 07:13:856 (1,1) - Imo, ending a spinner at the blue tick didn't felt nice.. http://puu.sh/9T7lI/e9653a1efa.jpg
I think you can improve your whistle hitsound better by yourself. I don't think they are all mentionable in one mod post.