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WubWoofWolf
yay Michael Jackson forevah
Breeze
oh Michael~
orioncomet
When you request Plz remember to fixed any modded on your map before going to request new one = =

many wrong spacing on this map =A=

~ [Over All] ~
Set preview point in all diffs
I'm not sure with your 2nd offset and bpm

~ [Moonwalk Trainee] ~
No jump and confuse note on Easy Plz
00:50:692 - remove break
01:11:580 (3) - spacing
01:23:626 (5,6) - ^
01:34:134 (1) - Can you make this spinner too long more this one?
01:37:979 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
01:54:638 (7,8) - ^
01:57:201 (4) - ^
02:03:608 (6) - ^
02:09:759 (2) - ^
02:13:604 (1,1) - unrankabke spinner and this diff IS easy, am I right?
02:26:675 (3,4,5) - spacing
02:34:620 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
02:37:055 (8) - stat at 02:36:927 and end at 02:37:183
ok, I know it isn't finish,, right?

~ [Moonwalker] ~
don't use note on blue tick
slider velocity too slow
00:24:935 (4,5,6) - spacing
00:42:107 (4) - ^
01:54:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:10:272 (5) - end at 02:11:810
02:17:704 (5,6) - spacing
02:43:078 (3) - end at 02:43:334
03:12:406 (1) - end at 03:13:665
03:15:807 (1) - end at 03:17:697
03:20:594 (3) - end at 03:21:224

~ [Airwalker] ~
00:12:878 (11) - end at 00:13:391
00:27:225 (7) - spacing
00:33:373 (12) - ^

wa... dude.. I'm not like your Insane too much.. so sorry that I will stop my modded here
TakeiHisashi
star~
orioncomet
*sigh*
benzvp
ให้ดาวแล้วนะครับ 8-)
Falenhine
ให้ดาวละงับ -0-
Matsuri_old
โยน~
arien666
[General]
Where's preview time point? I prefer to set this one :3...

[Moonwalk Trainee]
SPOILER
00:34:41(2,3) - I don't know if they're Jump...
01:00:56(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:10:81(1) - How about move 2 grid left?
01:20:55(2,3,4,5,6) - Distance are all diffenent... Maybe you need to check these notes :3
01:37:97(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:41:56(1,2,3) - Distance issue.
02:22:31(5,6,7) - How about align with (4)'s end?
02:34:36(2) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
02:42:05(2) - How about move 1 grid down?
02:42:82(3) - [Suggestion] New combo?
02:43:84() - Add note?

[Moonwalker]
SPOILER
00:01:10(1) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
00:08:53(6,7) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
00:10:58(6.7) - ^
00:12:63(6.7) - ^
00:30:06(2,3,4) - ^
00:40:56(1,2,3) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:46:72(3,4) - ^
01:28:24(5,6) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
01:29:00(6) - How about align with (5)?
01:29:52(2,3,[4,5,6]) - Distance issue.
01:42:33(4,5,1) - Not perfectly stacked.
01:43:61(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:45:66(1,2,3) - Distance issue.
01:56:94(5,6) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
02:02:83(2) - [Suggestion] How about align with (1)?
02:03:09(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
02:12:32(7,8,9,10) - Distance issue.
02:48:47(1,2,3,4,5) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
02:51:24(4) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
03:01:69(1,3,5,7) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
03:02:45(4,6,8) - How about move on white line?
03:06:61(3,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
03:08:87(7) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?

[Airwalker]
SPOILER
01:33:11(5,6,7) - Distance issue.
01:35:67(1) - How about move 2 grid up?
01:43:88(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:54:64(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:34:63(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
02:41:81(6,7) - Not perfectly stacked.
02:43:35(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid left?
02:57:64(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about 1 grid left?
03:30:66(3) - Move 1/4 timing earlier
03:32:70(3) - ^
03:34:75(3) - ^
03:37:31(5,6,7) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
03:42:94(3) - Move 1/4 timing earlier



Umm...?
Seems good and good luck for your 1st beatmap :3

Here's my star.
But not pubble yet :3
Topic Starter
termerys

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
Where's preview time point? I prefer to set this one :3...

[Moonwalk Trainee]
SPOILER
00:34:41(2,3) - I don't know if they're Jump...
01:00:56(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:10:81(1) - How about move 2 grid left?
01:20:55(2,3,4,5,6) - Distance are all diffenent... Maybe you need to check these notes :3
01:37:97(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:41:56(1,2,3) - Distance issue.
02:22:31(5,6,7) - How about align with (4)'s end?
02:34:36(2) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
02:42:05(2) - How about move 1 grid down?
02:42:82(3) - [Suggestion] New combo?
02:43:84() - Add note?

[Moonwalker]
SPOILER
00:01:10(1) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
00:08:53(6,7) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
00:10:58(6.7) - ^
00:12:63(6.7) - ^
00:30:06(2,3,4) - ^
00:40:56(1,2,3) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:46:72(3,4) - ^
01:28:24(5,6) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
01:29:00(6) - How about align with (5)?
01:29:52(2,3,[4,5,6]) - Distance issue.
01:42:33(4,5,1) - Not perfectly stacked.
01:43:61(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:45:66(1,2,3) - Distance issue.
01:56:94(5,6) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
02:02:83(2) - [Suggestion] How about align with (1)?
02:03:09(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
02:12:32(7,8,9,10) - Distance issue.
02:48:47(1,2,3,4,5) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
02:51:24(4) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
03:01:69(1,3,5,7) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
03:02:45(4,6,8) - How about move on white line?
03:06:61(3,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
03:08:87(7) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?

[Airwalker]
SPOILER
01:33:11(5,6,7) - Distance issue.
01:35:67(1) - How about move 2 grid up?
01:43:88(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:54:64(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:34:63(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
02:41:81(6,7) - Not perfectly stacked.
02:43:35(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid left?
02:57:64(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about 1 grid left?
03:30:66(3) - Move 1/4 timing earlier
03:32:70(3) - ^
03:34:75(3) - ^
03:37:31(5,6,7) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
03:42:94(3) - Move 1/4 timing earlier



Umm...?
Seems good and good luck for your 1st beatmap :3

Here's my star.
But not pubble yet :3
all fixed
thanks
GabrielRKF
Moonwalk Trainee
  1. 01:12:606(3) - Wrong spacing here. Fix like the pic1, please.
  2. 01:14:400(x) - Add a note here? makes the gameplay more natural.
  3. 01:32:340(4) - Not really ending well. End it at 01:33:878.
  4. 01:54:638(7) - Turn it to another direction an you will see that the spacing between (7) and (8) is wrong. It's too far. Please, fix the slider direction and the spacing.
  5. 02:16:679(1) - Too close with the previews note.
  6. 02:37:567(8,9) - Too confusing for a Easy.
Moonwalker
  1. 00:13:402(8) - New Combo?
  2. 00:27:754(6) - New Combo.
  3. 00:29:036(1,2,3,4) - Make the triple stream (2,3,4) at 00:29:036 and the single not at 00:29:548.
  4. 00:29:036(1) - No New Combo
  5. 01:02:098(3) - Not on the same place as (4). There is any reason for that? ._.
  6. 01:58:739(4) - Unexpected Jump. Please, make it withe right spacing.
  7. 02:17:704(5) - Too far from the previwes note. Doesn't look like a jump, actually.
  8. 02:41:284(4) - ^
  9. 03:20:594(3) - Nazi. One lvl 3 grid to the right.
Airwalker
  1. 00:21:600(Timing Section) - Off timing section. Replace it, please.
  2. 00:59:280(4) - Too far from the previews note.
  3. 01:30:809(10) - Pretty weard with notes hiding it.
  4. 01:33:885(7) - Too close w/ (6).
  5. 02:34:379(7) - ^
  6. 02:52:654(6) - Too close with the (5)
Overall
Use kiai on every diff would be nice.

Pic 1

It's a nice map :]
As I sayid on the forum, I think that you should use Distance Snap, even with a good spacing.
Star~ :)
vytalibus
<Timing Sections>

Use these instead:
1st Section
BPM: 117.040
Offset: 1,100 ms
2nd Non-Inherited Section
BPM: 117.300
Offset: 169,224 ms

Resnap and manually recheck everything. Some sliders might flunctuate as a result, so do a thorough search for wrongly-snapped sliders.

[Moonwalk Trainee]

02:23:343 (7) - NO. Blast this slider away. Add a different pattern.
02:34:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is rather complicated. Change this pattern.

[Airwalker]

00:31:853 (7) - Snap the end point to the white line (1/1). Basically, that tick very close to the end of the slider signifies that you ended it at a 1/8 line, and I don't see why you'd do that.
00:35:954 (9) - ^
00:36:980 (3) - ^
01:06:201 (2) - Confusing slight overlap by the start point. Move it away from the path.
01:44:138 (2) - Move this down and let it stack with the previous note.
02:21:562 (4,5,6) - End point of slider and the last two notes are poorly-spaced out.
02:23:613 (11,12,13) - ^
02:28:483 (3) - Same with 01:06:201.
All the notes after the second timing section - Because of the poor timing, the spacing on these notes flunctuate a bit, if you noticed that. After fixing the timing, properly space these out.
Topic Starter
termerys

vytalibus wrote:

<Timing Sections>

Use these instead:
1st Section
BPM: 117.040
Offset: 1,100 ms
2nd Non-Inherited Section
BPM: 117.300
Offset: 169,224 ms

Resnap and manually recheck everything. Some sliders might flunctuate as a result, so do a thorough search for wrongly-snapped sliders.

[Moonwalk Trainee]

02:23:343 (7) - NO. Blast this slider away. Add a different pattern.
02:34:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is rather complicated. Change this pattern.

[Airwalker]

00:31:853 (7) - Snap the end point to the white line (1/1). Basically, that tick very close to the end of the slider signifies that you ended it at a 1/8 line, and I don't see why you'd do that.
00:35:954 (9) - ^
00:36:980 (3) - ^
01:06:201 (2) - Confusing slight overlap by the start point. Move it away from the path.
01:44:138 (2) - Move this down and let it stack with the previous note.
02:21:562 (4,5,6) - End point of slider and the last two notes are poorly-spaced out.
02:23:613 (11,12,13) - ^
02:28:483 (3) - Same with 01:06:201.
All the notes after the second timing section - Because of the poor timing, the spacing on these notes flunctuate a bit, if you noticed that. After fixing the timing, properly space these out.
Next weak, i'll fix it. (now my school is open, don't have time to follow-up =w= )
anyway thanks for modded
yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
termerys

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Why there're so many sliders a bit longer than 1 beat ?
fix them .
Fixed completed, thanks for modded
CheeseWarlock
I have no idea what's going on with this timing. It wants to be a single BPM so badly.

[TimingPoints]
1092,512.820512820512,4,2,0,70,1,0
111861,512.163892445583,4,2,0,70,1,0
169223,511.60895140665,4,2,0,70,1,0
orioncomet
for termerys

i will teach you later
edit: teach him how to fix this thingy on IRC

on [Airwalker] still don't work.. so i will fix it for him =___=

Download: Michael Jackson - Billie Jean (termerys) [Airwalker].osu
Topic Starter
termerys
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
pete2528
;)
laikung0
Billie Jean is not my lover
Billie Jean is not my lover
Billie Jean is not my lover
Billie Jean is not my lover
Billie Jean is not my lover
aumu1995
เปนกำลังใจ นะ ^ ^
l3lueskyiiz
ขอให้ได้แรงค์เร็วๆนะคะ XD

เชียร์เพลงเฮียไมค์อยู่แล้ว :D
MaxwellDemon
Revived.
[DBF]
Take my moonstar~
Caroline7
Please rank this map :D
cait66
:arrow:
Topic Starter
termerys
revive XD
Jonis221
:)
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