yay Michael Jackson forevah
all fixedarken1015 wrote:
[General]
Where's preview time point? I prefer to set this one :3...
[Moonwalk Trainee]SPOILER00:34:41(2,3) - I don't know if they're Jump...
01:00:56(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:10:81(1) - How about move 2 grid left?
01:20:55(2,3,4,5,6) - Distance are all diffenent... Maybe you need to check these notes :3
01:37:97(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:41:56(1,2,3) - Distance issue.
02:22:31(5,6,7) - How about align with (4)'s end?
02:34:36(2) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
02:42:05(2) - How about move 1 grid down?
02:42:82(3) - [Suggestion] New combo?
02:43:84() - Add note?
[Moonwalker]SPOILER00:01:10(1) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
00:08:53(6,7) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
00:10:58(6.7) - ^
00:12:63(6.7) - ^
00:30:06(2,3,4) - ^
00:40:56(1,2,3) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:46:72(3,4) - ^
01:28:24(5,6) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
01:29:00(6) - How about align with (5)?
01:29:52(2,3,[4,5,6]) - Distance issue.
01:42:33(4,5,1) - Not perfectly stacked.
01:43:61(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:45:66(1,2,3) - Distance issue.
01:56:94(5,6) - Any reason about different distance againest other notes...?
02:02:83(2) - [Suggestion] How about align with (1)?
02:03:09(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
02:12:32(7,8,9,10) - Distance issue.
02:48:47(1,2,3,4,5) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
02:51:24(4) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
03:01:69(1,3,5,7) - Any reason that you placed on NOT CENTER? Move to center please :3
03:02:45(4,6,8) - How about move on white line?
03:06:61(3,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
03:08:87(7) - Cuz of Jump, new combo?
[Airwalker]SPOILER01:33:11(5,6,7) - Distance issue.
01:35:67(1) - How about move 2 grid up?
01:43:88(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:54:64(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:34:63(8) - [Suggestion] New combo?
02:41:81(6,7) - Not perfectly stacked.
02:43:35(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid left?
02:57:64(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about 1 grid left?
03:30:66(3) - Move 1/4 timing earlier
03:32:70(3) - ^
03:34:75(3) - ^
03:37:31(5,6,7) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
03:42:94(3) - Move 1/4 timing earlier
Umm...?
Seems good and good luck for your 1st beatmap :3
Here's my star.
But not pubble yet :3
Next weak, i'll fix it. (now my school is open, don't have time to follow-up =w= )vytalibus wrote:
<Timing Sections>
Use these instead:
1st Section
BPM: 117.040
Offset: 1,100 ms
2nd Non-Inherited Section
BPM: 117.300
Offset: 169,224 ms
Resnap and manually recheck everything. Some sliders might flunctuate as a result, so do a thorough search for wrongly-snapped sliders.
[Moonwalk Trainee]
02:23:343 (7) - NO. Blast this slider away. Add a different pattern.
02:34:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is rather complicated. Change this pattern.
[Airwalker]
00:31:853 (7) - Snap the end point to the white line (1/1). Basically, that tick very close to the end of the slider signifies that you ended it at a 1/8 line, and I don't see why you'd do that.
00:35:954 (9) - ^
00:36:980 (3) - ^
01:06:201 (2) - Confusing slight overlap by the start point. Move it away from the path.
01:44:138 (2) - Move this down and let it stack with the previous note.
02:21:562 (4,5,6) - End point of slider and the last two notes are poorly-spaced out.
02:23:613 (11,12,13) - ^
02:28:483 (3) - Same with 01:06:201.
All the notes after the second timing section - Because of the poor timing, the spacing on these notes flunctuate a bit, if you noticed that. After fixing the timing, properly space these out.
Fixed completed, thanks for moddedosu_CN_yaya wrote:
Why there're so many sliders a bit longer than 1 beat ?
fix them .