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WOW nice map :D take a star ;]
Remember to make normal and easy diffs ;]
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Hello,

[Normal]:
Notes with moved:

-01:23:123: This object is too close to the previous object.
-01:26:815: Same

[Hard]
Notes with moved:
-00:37:780: Too far
-00:43:318: Too far
-00:43:894:Too far
-01:31:084: Too close
-01:31:314: Too close
-01:31:545: Too close
-01:31:776: Too close
-01:44:928: Too close

First good beatmap ;)
Star~

Do not forget to give me a kudosu if my post you helped ace
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Ryugas wrote:

Hello,

[Normal]:
Notes with moved:

-01:23:123: This object is too close to the previous object. There is no circles/sliders
-01:26:815: Same same ^

[Hard]
Notes with moved:
-00:37:780: Too far
-00:43:318: Too far
-00:43:894:Too far
-01:31:084: Too close
-01:31:314: Too close
-01:31:545: Too close
-01:31:776: Too close
-01:44:928: Too close damn I was blind ~~' Thanks

First good beatmap ;)- thank You
Star~

Do not forget to give me a kudosu if my post you helped ace - take it!
Your informations was helpful, thanks for check it
posted
Aw I forget a thing,
Set a current position at:
00:51:817
For all difficulties!
Timing=>Set current position as Preview.
posted

Ryugas wrote:

Aw I forget a thing,
Set a current position at:
00:51:817
For all difficulties!
Timing=>Set current position as Preview.
Done. Thanks!
posted
Easy:
>>0:46:894 add clap in the first circle of the slider.
>>If you want to keep the same clap pattern as before would be nice.

Normal:
>>0:33:409 Spacing
>>I found some glitches in the spacing. Go through the beatmap and arrange everything.Other then that, everything is fine.

Hard:
>>Sounds fine
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General:
00:48:279 - The "speed up" sign isn't necessary over Easy and Normal diffs. On the hard diff, mark it in the "Design" tab as "Diff. Specific" and erase it on the other diffs.
01:52:889 - ^
00:57:970 - What does the arrow mean? Do another sign and follow the previous tip.

Easy:
00:38:126 (2,3) - To make the map easier, why don't you replace these with a reverse slider. (only if you want to)
00:39:972 (5,6) - ^
00:41:818 (2,3) - ^
01:40:890 (2,3) - ^
01:42:736 (5,6) - ^
01:44:582 (2,3) - ^
01:14:584 (1,3) - Try to keep the same form on this sliders.

Normal, hard:
OK, I suppose. Do advise of the other mods tips.

Good map!
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adron zhero wrote:

Easy:
>>0:46:894 add clap in the first circle of the slider.
>>If you want to keep the same clap pattern as before would be nice.
It's sound better now. ;)

adron zhero wrote:

Normal:
>>0:33:409 Spacing
>>I found some glitches in the spacing. Go through the beatmap and arrange everything.Other then that, everything is fine.
Fixed.. I think... :?

adron zhero wrote:

Hard:
>>Sounds fine
Thanks!
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Neo Adonis wrote:

General:
00:48:279 - The "speed up" sign isn't necessary over Easy and Normal diffs. On the hard diff, mark it in the "Design" tab as "Diff. Specific" and erase it on the other diffs.
01:52:889 - ^
I tried to delete this from other diff, but its dosent work.

Neo Adonis wrote:

00:57:970 - What does the arrow mean? Do another sign and follow the previous tip.
It's a kind of help, where ball in slider will move.

Neo Adonis wrote:

Easy:
00:38:126 (2,3) - To make the map easier, why don't you replace these with a reverse slider. (only if you want to)
00:39:972 (5,6) - ^
00:41:818 (2,3) - ^
01:40:890 (2,3) - ^
01:42:736 (5,6) - ^
01:44:582 (2,3) - ^
01:14:584 (1,3) - Try to keep the same form on this sliders.
Fixed.
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Request Accepted

SB
SB elements in easy and normal diff seems not needed at all... I think
Easy
00:32:126 (x) - add note?
00:33:049 (x) - ^
01:14:584 (1) - make the slider shape like 01:15:969 (3)
01:22:430 (x) - add note?
01:23:353 (x) - ^
01:29:353 (1) - Align with 01:27:968 (5)
Normal
consider adding some kiai times?
00:18:050 (x) - add note
01:20:815 (x) - ^
01:27:968 (5,6,7) - move them to the previous red tick
01:31:429 (x) - add note
Hard
map the rest of the song?
00:28:203 (3) - move this to the next white tick and then add note here
01:12:046 (5) - change it to slider that ends in the next 2 whte ticks and delete 01:12:277 (6,7)?
01:26:814 (x) - add note
01:33:737 (x) - ^
01:34:198 (x) - ^
01:34:660 (x) - ^
01:36:967 (x) - ^ and add new combo
01:37:198 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:429 (x) - add note
01:37:890 (x) - ^
02:02:811 (2) - slider shape make look like 02:02:119 (1)?

Not bad :D STAR!
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NAJS song Selectus

of course, STAR!
posted

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

SB
SB elements in easy and normal diff seems not needed at all... I think
Easy
00:32:126 (x) - add note?
00:33:049 (x) - ^
01:14:584 (1) - make the slider shape like 01:15:969 (3)
01:22:430 (x) - add note?
01:23:353 (x) - ^
01:29:353 (1) - Align with 01:27:968 (5)
Normal
consider adding some kiai times?
00:18:050 (x) - add note
01:20:815 (x) - ^
01:27:968 (5,6,7) - move them to the previous red tick
01:31:429 (x) - add note
Hard
map the rest of the song?
00:28:203 (3) - move this to the next white tick and then add note here
01:12:046 (5) - change it to slider that ends in the next 2 whte ticks and delete 01:12:277 (6,7)?
01:26:814 (x) - add note
01:33:737 (x) - ^
01:34:198 (x) - ^
01:34:660 (x) - ^
01:36:967 (x) - ^ and add new combo
01:37:198 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:429 (x) - add note
01:37:890 (x) - ^
02:02:811 (2) - slider shape make look like 02:02:119 (1)?

Not bad :D STAR!
Done~ *sigh*
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[general]
-Add Source

[easy]
-01:20:353 I suggest a circle

[normal]
-Hp drain rate +2
-Circle Size +1
-Overall Dificulty +2
-00:29:588 I suggest a simple slider

[hard]
-00:30:972 "verrrr" use a slider =)
-02:17:580 strange form, u can improve it (it's a suggestion).

Good luck and my star
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Astom wrote:

[general]
-Add Source

[easy]
-01:20:353 I suggest a circle

[normal]
-Hp drain rate +2
-Circle Size +1
-Overall Dificulty +2
-00:29:588 I suggest a simple slider

[hard]
-00:30:972 "verrrr" use a slider =)
-02:17:580 strange form, u can improve it (it's a suggestion).

Good luck and my star
Done. Thanks!
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Offset -13 (7 654)

The colors that you put are too dark (especially the fully black color). Please make
them brighter.
You've got 2 bg pictures in the beatmap folder. Delete the unused one and do full submit.
You don't have to double the artist and/or the title of the song in the tags.
The speed up thumbnails are showing in Normal and Easy difficulty too. Please set the option "Diff. Specific" in Hard on each picture, delete the .osb file and do the full submit.
Also, delete "Taylor Swift" from the source.

[Easy]

Definitively too fast sliders.
[02:24:039] - End kiai here.

[Normal]

[02:07:427] - A spinner?

[Hard]

Hm, reduce HP Drain by 1 tick?

00:50:343 (1) - The general rule about the spinners is that auto must do +2000 points on them.
This one is only 1000. Fix it (for example by ending it 1/1 later).
01:10:341 (1) - Place it on the next white tick (Move 1/6 forward).
01:36:262 (13) - Finish at the start.
01:53:107 (1) - The general rule about the spinners is that auto must do +2000 points on them.
This one is only 1000. Fix it (for example by ending it 1/1 later).

The map is really good. There are only few small issues.
+star
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I don't think you have done other mod yet but im here so :P
you don't need Taylor Swift You Belong With Me in tags as its already in artist and title (and I wouldn't put taylor swift as source..)
end kiai times in the same places on all difficulties

Easy:
00:13:205 (4,5) - stack endpoints?
00:20:589 (8) - new combo
00:39:049 (3) - new combo
00:42:741 (3) - ^
01:41:813 (3) - ^
01:45:505 (3) - ^
02:22:887 (1,2) - these two are not snapped
02:24:270 (3) - add note?

Normal:
00:20:589 (9) - new combo
00:42:741 (6) - ^
01:45:505 (6) - ^

Hard:
lower hp drain
00:20:589 (4) - new combo
00:28:434 (4,5) - spacing
00:50:356 (1) - needs 2000 on auto
01:25:199 (9,1) - switch new combo
01:53:120 (1) - needs 2000 on auto
02:24:270 (3) - add note?

*star*
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[General]
*Remove all tags except for 'Pop' and 'MTV'. The others are already searched from Title/Artist so it's redundant to have them in both spots.
*I'd add a 1/2 second audio lead-in to all difficulties for a nicer effect.
*arrow.png is ugly :/
*speed-up warning fades in kinda awkwardly, but I'm no good with SBing so I can't help you with that x-x
*SB in general should be difficulty-specific, not a .osb file.
*Offset is late. Try 7,655 and resnap!

[Easy]
00:18:050 (4,5) - I'd stack these on the end of (3) (and then fix the spacing of the next sliders and such)
01:05:354 (1) - Add a spinner here (like in Hard) and end kiai after it
01:15:969 (3) - (Nazi) Move one grid to the right
01:20:584 (4,5) - stack these on the beginning of (6) (and fix spacing, of course)
02:22:887 (1) - not snapped
02:23:810 (2) - ^ Also, I'd extend this (or add a repeat) so that it ends on the white tick. Then, end kiai before the slider ends and ADD a kiai fountain to the end (144250ms). Add this fountain to all diffs please. :P
129,502 - this timing section should NOT be uninherited. Change it and make sure notes are snapped afterwards with AIMod (ctrl+shift+A)
*I'd like to see a bit higher volume on this diff and lots more hitsounds. It was so quiet and lost a lot of its potential. Otherwise, the mapping was pretty good.

[Normal]
00:48:279 (1) - Eh, this spinner seems awkward here. I'd just scrap it.
01:03:662 (4,5) - 1/8th notes? No. They seem to be on 1/6th's, but regardless, it's ridiculous to get the perfect timing. I'd make (3) a repeating slider that ends on 01:04:431. (Yes, the white tick).
01:05:354 (1) - Add a spinner here (like in Hard) and end kiai after it
01:27:046 (4) - (Nazi) Move to the left a grid or two
01:51:043 (1) - Again, meh
02:07:138 (5) - Move forward to the white tick.
*Again, needs some volume/hitsound work.

[Hard]
*lower drain a notch or two
*up overall diff a notch
00:29:588 (5) - too far from previous
00:50:356 (1) - nazi spinner (auto can't get 2000 bonus points) So please change this~ (I'd just add notes for the pickup of the chorus)
00:51:971 (1) - Start kiai here to be consistent instead of the end of the spinner
01:03:681 (5) - move forward to the red tick
01:04:374 (6) - ^ white tick
01:53:120 (1) - Change this (again)
01:54:735 (1) - Start kiai here
02:09:503 (1) - Star kiai here
*Volume/sounds ffff

Not bad for your first (pending) map. :p
posted

fartownik wrote:

Offset -13 (7 654)

The colors that you put are too dark (especially the fully black color). Please make
them brighter.
You've got 2 bg pictures in the beatmap folder. Delete the unused one and do full submit.
You don't have to double the artist and/or the title of the song in the tags.
The speed up thumbnails are showing in Normal and Easy difficulty too. Please set the option "Diff. Specific" in Hard on each picture, delete the .osb file and do the full submit.
Also, delete "Taylor Swift" from the source.

[Easy]

Definitively too fast sliders.
[02:24:039] - End kiai here.

[Normal]

[02:07:427] - A spinner?

[Hard]

Hm, reduce HP Drain by 1 tick?

00:50:343 (1) - The general rule about the spinners is that auto must do +2000 points on them.
This one is only 1000. Fix it (for example by ending it 1/1 later).
01:10:341 (1) - Place it on the next white tick (Move 1/6 forward).
01:36:262 (13) - Finish at the start.
01:53:107 (1) - The general rule about the spinners is that auto must do +2000 points on them.
This one is only 1000. Fix it (for example by ending it 1/1 later).

The map is really good. There are only few small issues.
+star
Thanks, i fixed all problems. Kudosu 4 u
posted

James2250 wrote:

I don't think you have done other mod yet but im here so :P
you don't need Taylor Swift You Belong With Me in tags as its already in artist and title (and I wouldn't put taylor swift as source..)
end kiai times in the same places on all difficulties

Easy:
00:13:205 (4,5) - stack endpoints?
00:20:589 (8) - new combo
00:39:049 (3) - new combo
00:42:741 (3) - ^
01:41:813 (3) - ^
01:45:505 (3) - ^
02:22:887 (1,2) - these two are not snapped
02:24:270 (3) - add note?

Normal:
00:20:589 (9) - new combo
00:42:741 (6) - ^
01:45:505 (6) - ^

Hard:
lower hp drain
00:20:589 (4) - new combo
00:28:434 (4,5) - spacing
00:50:356 (1) - needs 2000 on auto
01:25:199 (9,1) - switch new combo
01:53:120 (1) - needs 2000 on auto
02:24:270 (3) - add note?

*star*
I think that general problem is 'new combo'. I fixed it at last. Thank you for check it, kudosu~
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Sorry for the delay.

General:

-- Hitsound volume is too low, your using soft hitsounds so there's no need to have it 50%, raise it by 1-3 ticks (max would even work lol). You could even use a lower volume normal hitsound set, its up to you but the hitsounds are definitely too quiet.
-- Tags?
-- Try find a consistent hitsound pattern like Hard.

Easy:

-- Delete the speed up warning from the SB here.
-- Delete the arrow event here.

00:42:731 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:959 to 01:04:419 -- Hitsounds?
02:09:490 - Remove the red timing section and add an inheriting section for the kiai flash.

Make sure you hitsound the whole difficulty and not just parts of it.

Normal:

-- Delete speed up warning from SB
-- Delete arrow event from SB. They look silly because there is no speed up and the arrow points to nowhere.

01:03:035 (3,4,5) - Returning slider imo, 4 should be on a red tick like 02:06:492 (4) - and 5 on a white tick.
02:20:567 (3,4,5) - Sounds kind of bad 1/2 might be better here.

Hard

-- The song is in 1/2 so most of the returning 1/6's sound weird, imo they should be 1/4.

00:59:343 (1) - Whoa that's way too confusing, the arrow didn't help here (It's more of a hold slider imo maybe a "hold" warning would be better idk)
01:03:669 (5) - Most likely a 1/3 but imo use a returning slider or something.
01:04:362 (6) - White tick.

Nice overall, star.
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