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[Overall]
  • The tag should be Nakano Azusa
    Delete the .osb and full submit


[Training Camp]
  • 00:16:606 (3) - Slider looks kinda funny, but it's your choice if you want to change it or not
    01:58:606 - You can get rid of this timing point in this difficulty


[School Festival]
  • 01:22:606 (5) - Check spacing
    01:12:106 (1) - Align with 01:12:606 (1)?


[Budokan!]
Fine ^^

Star~
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I like it. :3 I've played through [Budokan!] and [School Festival] quite a few times now, and the only change I could suggest is to change the "L"-shaped sliders in Budokan to something else... they just feel kinda funny. Eh, minor complaint.

I like the stars you made with the beatcircles in Budokan; they somehow just make it more fun to play. xD

Waiting for it to get ranked!

*star*

Edit: One more thing,
[Budokan!]
01:29:606 - this specific slider makes me want to hit the next note too early, but that might have been the approach you were going for :P
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Source: "K-ON!"

Any custom colours?

[Training Camp]

Slider tick: 1?

01:22:606 (1) - End this spinner at [01:26:106]
[01:26:606] - Add a note.


[Budokan!]


00:51:231 (2) - Move it a bit down (spacing).
02:20:606 (4) - New combo.


[School Festival]


00:43:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels a bit cramped. Space it properly with distance spacing.
00:51:231 (2) - Unstack this note?
02:35:231 (2,1) - Spacing.

good, +star
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don't have stack leniency all the way to the left
delete osb file and do full submit

Training Camp:
00:10:606 (2) - new combo
00:18:606 (2) - ^
01:00:606 (2) - ^
01:08:606 (2) - ^

School Festival:
00:10:606 (2) - new combo
00:51:731 (1) - start at same place as other 2 difficulties? (00:51:855)
01:00:606 (2) - new combo
02:20:606 (4) - agrees with new combo comment from above
02:30:356 (6,1) - switch new combo?

Budokan:
00:10:606 (2) - new combo
00:19:106 (2) - extend by 1/4
01:00:606 (2) - new combo
02:59:481 (8,9) - stack better (turn off grid snap)

*star*
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Pubbled~
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star~ =ω=
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~Training Camp~
00:51:731 - remove 2 timing sections
01:05:106 (2) - forgot to add hitfinish? :<

~School Festival~
00:51:731 - remove 2 timing sections
01:06:356 (5) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)

~Budokan!~
00:51:731 - remove 2 timing sections
02:46:606 (1) - make it more symmetry


Good job, I like this map ^^
+Star
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[genernal]
umm..... fine

[Training Camp]
fine

[School Festival]
02:20:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -How about using hit sounds? [Suggestion]

[Budokan!]
01:05:606 (3,4) - spacing check
02:20:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same Suggestion with [School Festival]
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hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[Skin]
-comboburst.png max size 500x767, please resize it.
-Search for a better BG or resize to 800x600 or 1024x768

[Training Camp]
-Don't place timing points over circles, spinners or sliders like in 01:42:606 with changes in volumen or normal/soft hit sound because sometimes this change not occur in that circle, spinner or slider, place it before of them. (same in other diff)

[General]
-In general, sliders have a very ugly form, try to improve them =3

Star x3
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Hello! Sorry, I've been dead to the world lately and didn't check my modding queue >_<

Training camp
00:14:606 (1) - I'm not a fan of overlapping so move this slightly to the left?
00:30:106 (4) - Same thing as above
00:32:606 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 2 beats (gives players more time before next combo since this is an easier difficulty)
00:46:606 (1) - Not loving the overlap here, maybe have (1) go down then (2) go back up (bascially flip what you have already)
01:20:106 (4) - Overlapping thing, blah blah blah
01:22:606 (1) - Shorten by 1 beat

School festival
01:19:731 (4) - Delete this note
... Can't find much else :P

Sorry I can't mod Bodukan! but it's too hard for me and watching autoplay made me dizzy (but in a good way!), but the map itself it pretty awesome. You're stuck with the two easier difficulties. Apologies once again, I ish a nub Osu! player :O

Good luck with your map! +1 star :D
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star
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Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Overall:
How about lowering the hitsounds a little ? The music isn't very loud.

Training Camp:
Hm... I think you should avoid using 1/4 snap divisor for an Easy diff... But it doesn't seem bad here.
How about mapping the rest of the song ?

School Festival:
This feels like a Hard to me. With OD+2 and HP drain +2, it will be a decent Hard diff in my opinion.
02:27:481 (5) - This should be a simple circle.
03:06:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is pretty confusing... I suggest you make (4,5,6,7) go on the right. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19167


Budokan:
OD +1 ?
Very nice Insane, nothing to say.
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i don't want to mod this. here's a star.
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Added difficulty [World Tour!] which was originally [Budokan!]. [Budokan!] was changed.
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[World Tour!]
00:30:106 (8) - Remove clap (That sound better !)
01:20:106 (6) - ^
01:39:606 (3,4,5) - A bit strange of the 1/4. I think you can put it in x0.5
01:40:106 (5,7,3) - Not in the same place. Please cover it well.
01:59:106 (1,2) - Spacing

[Budokan!]
02:27:481 (1) - Remove new combo

[All]
I love K-ON but ! Your mp3 Quality is BAD ! Please find someone to help you find it.

STAR.
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[Training Camp]
Hey, cool rhythmn for a easy! though the graphic could be better.
Use AR + 2 ? (it seems to flow more naturally :3 with this)
Using Grid Size 3 could produce better graphic...
00:10:084 (1,1) - Beat Blanket like this
00:16:584 (4) - i see this as being a shorter version of 00:15:084 (2) - ( this )
00:18:584 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2FSb could move those like this
etcetera. You can gain my Kudosu Star making the graphic in this better :3
02:34:834 (1,2) - Those slider are better if they end in red tick (not in blue)

[School Festival]
AR + 1 seems to flow better
Use Grid Size 3 for better placement.. as spacing errors here are more viewable...
00:12:084 (4) - Make it a simple Hit?
01:02:084 (4) - ^
00:16:334 (5) - Delete this... it's Hard to take if this is a Normal
01:06:334 (5) - ^
You should make graphic better here too.. for example:
00:37:334 (3) - do like this, it do flow better for eyes
00:38:834 (2) - ^,(just Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J and Ctrl+R (Fli Horizontally, Veritically, Reverse Selection) )

[World Tour]
When you use something like 00:19:709 (3,4) - be sure to be picky on graphic and make them end in the same point.. ( http://puu.sh/2FWF )

Well, Starred for Now :3

If you want i can make the graphic of the first 2 diff's better :3
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Training camp
00:15:834 - i dont like the slider (2,4)





adding some sound suggestions :P -

00:37:584(2) - add a finish



SCHOOL FESTIVAL
01:01:084-i dont like slider




World Tour
spacing problems?? Check Ai mod

STAR :D
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mebins wrote:

Training camp
00:15:834 - i dont like the slider (2,4) Changed (to my liking)





adding some sound suggestions :P -

00:37:584(2) - add a finish Doesn't sound right :/



SCHOOL FESTIVAL
01:01:084-i dont like slider Changed (to my liking)




World Tour
spacing problems?? Check Ai mod Intentional but your comment gave me the idea to storyboard a warning before the jumping

STAR :D
thanks for the suggestions :)
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