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Taketatsu Ayana - Watashi wa Watashi no Michi wo Iku

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konan-yoshi999
84 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
konan-yoshi999
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 07, 2011 at 10:52:28 PM

Artist: Taketatsu Ayana
Title: Watashi wa Watashi no Michi wo Iku
Source: K-ON
Tags: Nakano Azusa
BPM: 120
Filesize: 9178kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Budokan! (4.71 stars, 387 notes)
  2. School Festival (4.32 stars, 276 notes)
  3. Training Camp (2.25 stars, 144 notes)
  4. World Tour! (4.93 stars, 437 notes)
Download: Taketatsu Ayana - Watashi wa Watashi no Michi wo Iku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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One of Nakano Azusa's (Azu-nyan's) character songs
Update July 4, 2011: New MP3, Sound Effect, and Storyboard (for jump warning in [World Tour!] Please redownload if you downloaded before this date
Last edited by konan-yoshi999 , edited 50 times in total.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
BPM = 120.00
offset = 2,606
make sure u re-snap all notes in all diffs afterward

Training Camp
01:41:851 (1) - make this end on the white tick 1/4 back, and rebound once, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1659

School Festival
looks good ^^'

Budokan!
00:38:848 (1) - make the rebound point visible, so the players can see it
00:52:597 (1) - spinner needs to be 2000+(make sure in test, when u have auto play it, make sure auto can get 2000 at least)

hmmm, well nice map, looks good, is there a reason of why it's still in WIP?
anyways good luck on getting this ranked, Budokan! was actually pretty fun to play imo
*star
konan-yoshi999
84 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
konan-yoshi999

EEeee wrote:

BPM = 120.00
offset = 2,606
make sure u re-snap all notes in all diffs afterward

Training Camp
01:41:851 (1) - make this end on the white tick 1/4 back, and rebound once, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1659

School Festival
looks good ^^'

Budokan!
00:38:848 (1) - make the rebound point visible, so the players can see it
00:52:597 (1) - spinner needs to be 2000+(make sure in test, when u have auto play it, make sure auto can get 2000 at least)

hmmm, well nice map, looks good, is there a reason of why it's still in WIP?
anyways good luck on getting this ranked, Budokan! was actually pretty fun to play imo
*star
thnx EEeee :D
And i like playing Budokan! also :D
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[Training Camp]

Overall: Some objects are not snapped. Please go in Timing > Resnap All Notes to fix the problem.

00:30:849 (8) This slider is very ugly <_<. Make it better:

00:52:597 (1) Unrankable spinner, it's too short! A rankable spinner should give in Auto-mod over 2000 points.

For the hitsound modding please see the file .osu at the end of the post.

Overall rating 8/10

[School Festival]

Overall: Some objects are not snapped. Please go in Timing > Resnap All Notes to fix the problem

00:49:973 (6) Remove this slider and add two hitcircles instead
00:52:597 (1) Unrankable spinner
01:13:471 (2,3) These hitobjects don't fit the rythm correctly: try to fix it
00:26:849 (1,2,3,4,5) This part remember to me something <_<'''
01:11:471 (6) Remove this hitcircle, then add another repeat to 01:10:596 (5)
01:21:970 (4) 1/4 shorter

For the hitsound modding please see the file .osu at the end of the post.

Overall rating 7,5/10

[Budokan!]

Overall: No major problems found, just some imperfections.

01:11:481 (8) Stack this with the previous (7)
01:21:981 (4) 1/4 shorter

For the hitsound modding please see the file .osu at the end of the post.

Overall rating: 8,5/10

The Bg is too small, please use this:

http://up.ppy.sh/files/phpojzyiham.jpg

Download: Taketatsu Ayana - Watashi wa Watashi no Michi wo Iku (konan-yoshi999) [Training Camp].osu

Download: Taketatsu Ayana - Watashi wa Watashi no Michi wo Iku (konan-yoshi999) [School Festival].osu

Download: Taketatsu Ayana - Watashi wa Watashi no Michi wo Iku (konan-yoshi999) [Budokan!].osu
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Training Camp
00:16:606 (3) - shrink it to 00:17:481
00:19:606 (3,4,5,1) - fix spacing, please.
00:26:856 (1,2,3) - quite hard to understand rhythm here... try to link them in a slider with a repeat point!

School Festival
[General] hitsounds are well-placed here, but spacing often changes,creating trick sections hard to understand, like on 00:42:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and on 02:18:606 (2,3,4,5,6). Do something!

Budokan!
[General] watch out for the beat streams's spacing! It change too much...
01:36:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... random spacing?

Except of these spacing inconsistance on all modes, this map has good qualities... but before starring this, remember one last thing:
Easier modes DOESN'T mean Shorter modes!
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Azusa nyan~ФωФ

[General]
  1. osb.file didn't used, please delete then full submit
  2. k-on is already in source, no need to add it to tag again
  3. hit volume sounds loud, lower it a bit, about 60-70 sounds better, chorus use about 80
[Training Camp]
  1. There are few blue tick notes which I think are hard for beginner, I suggest put blue tick note as slider end, that would be easier to hit [just like 00:17:481 (3)], note like 01:21:231 (2) could use repeat slider to make it easier
    SPOILER
    blue tick notes blow :
  2. 00:13:481 (5)
  3. 00:21:481 (5)
  4. 00:25:481 (5)
    etc.
  5. 00:53:106 (1) - remove whistle
  6. 01:41:356 (1) - slider ends here
[School Festival]
  1. 00:53:106 (1) - remove whistle
  2. 03:00:606 (1) - spinner starts here
    I love the last part :3
[Budokan!]
  1. fine for me
cute song :3
star + kds star
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello

[General]
1) The source must be K-ON, just uppercase them all
2) k-on is in the source, so you don't need a "k-on" on the tags

[Training Camp]
00:14:106 (1) - Allign with 4 (end of slider) from up, do not this object overlapped by slider
00:27:981 (2) - Make parallel?
01:06:606 (4) - Make it curve?
01:13:106 (2,3) - Move 1 grid up?
01:16:106 (1) - Move 1 grid left?

[School Festival]
00:19:106 (2) - Make parallel?
03:07:231 (2,3,4) - Move 1 grid left?

GREAT MAP
STAR
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
(๑╹◡╹๑) GJ ! ☆
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
All the previous modders are too nice, this map really frustrates me, overlapping notes are bleh.

[Training Camp]
01:08:106 (1) - Move farther away from the slider?

[School Festival]
Every time there's a slider followed by another slider 1/4 later, it's very annoying.
02:19:231 (5,6) - notes are clustered together, looks ugly and awkward
02:27:231 (4) - Overlapped by the 300-burst in play, very ugly and awkward
02:52:606 (1) - At most 1 repeat, because it's followed by streams
02:58:606 (1) - ^
03:02:606 (1) - ^
03:04:606 (1) - ^
03:06:606 (1) - ^

[Budokan!]
00:42:356 (5) - Evil hidden note
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Ichigo-Sora
[Overall]
  • The tag should be Nakano Azusa
    Delete the .osb and full submit
[Training Camp]
  • 00:16:606 (3) - Slider looks kinda funny, but it's your choice if you want to change it or not
    01:58:606 - You can get rid of this timing point in this difficulty
[School Festival]
  • 01:22:606 (5) - Check spacing
    01:12:106 (1) - Align with 01:12:606 (1)?
[Budokan!]
Fine ^^

Star~
Phyrearms
78 posts
Joined October 2009
Phyrearms
I like it. :3 I've played through [Budokan!] and [School Festival] quite a few times now, and the only change I could suggest is to change the "L"-shaped sliders in Budokan to something else... they just feel kinda funny. Eh, minor complaint.

I like the stars you made with the beatcircles in Budokan; they somehow just make it more fun to play. xD

Waiting for it to get ranked!

*star*

Edit: One more thing,
[Budokan!]
01:29:606 - this specific slider makes me want to hit the next note too early, but that might have been the approach you were going for :P
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Source: "K-ON!"

Any custom colours?

[Training Camp]

Slider tick: 1?

01:22:606 (1) - End this spinner at [01:26:106]
[01:26:606] - Add a note.


[Budokan!]

00:51:231 (2) - Move it a bit down (spacing).
02:20:606 (4) - New combo.


[School Festival]

00:43:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels a bit cramped. Space it properly with distance spacing.
00:51:231 (2) - Unstack this note?
02:35:231 (2,1) - Spacing.

good, +star
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
don't have stack leniency all the way to the left
delete osb file and do full submit

Training Camp:
00:10:606 (2) - new combo
00:18:606 (2) - ^
01:00:606 (2) - ^
01:08:606 (2) - ^

School Festival:
00:10:606 (2) - new combo
00:51:731 (1) - start at same place as other 2 difficulties? (00:51:855)
01:00:606 (2) - new combo
02:20:606 (4) - agrees with new combo comment from above
02:30:356 (6,1) - switch new combo?

Budokan:
00:10:606 (2) - new combo
00:19:106 (2) - extend by 1/4
01:00:606 (2) - new combo
02:59:481 (8,9) - stack better (turn off grid snap)

*star*
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Pubbled~
masuo_old
179 posts
Joined July 2009
masuo_old
star～　＝ω＝
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Training Camp~
00:51:731 - remove 2 timing sections
01:05:106 (2) - forgot to add hitfinish? :<

~School Festival~
00:51:731 - remove 2 timing sections
01:06:356 (5) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)

~Budokan!~
00:51:731 - remove 2 timing sections
02:46:606 (1) - make it more symmetry


Good job, I like this map ^^
+Star
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[genernal]
umm..... fine

[Training Camp]
fine

[School Festival]
02:20:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -How about using hit sounds? [Suggestion]

[Budokan!]
01:05:606 (3,4) - spacing check
02:20:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same Suggestion with [School Festival]
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
:(
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[Skin]
-comboburst.png max size 500x767, please resize it.
-Search for a better BG or resize to 800x600 or 1024x768

[Training Camp]
-Don't place timing points over circles, spinners or sliders like in 01:42:606 with changes in volumen or normal/soft hit sound because sometimes this change not occur in that circle, spinner or slider, place it before of them. (same in other diff)

[General]
-In general, sliders have a very ugly form, try to improve them =3

Star x3
Last edited by Astom , edited 1 time in total.
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Hello! Sorry, I've been dead to the world lately and didn't check my modding queue >_<

Training camp
00:14:606 (1) - I'm not a fan of overlapping so move this slightly to the left?
00:30:106 (4) - Same thing as above
00:32:606 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 2 beats (gives players more time before next combo since this is an easier difficulty)
00:46:606 (1) - Not loving the overlap here, maybe have (1) go down then (2) go back up (bascially flip what you have already)
01:20:106 (4) - Overlapping thing, blah blah blah
01:22:606 (1) - Shorten by 1 beat

School festival
01:19:731 (4) - Delete this note
... Can't find much else :P

Sorry I can't mod Bodukan! but it's too hard for me and watching autoplay made me dizzy (but in a good way!), but the map itself it pretty awesome. You're stuck with the two easier difficulties. Apologies once again, I ish a nub Osu! player :O

Good luck with your map! +1 star :D
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