Becky(CV:Saitou Chiwa) - Ponytail no Shijuu ~TV Size~ · forum

pkhg

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-19T04:35:34+00:00

hii o/

[General]
Delete your old .osb file:"Saitou Chiwa - Ponytail no Shijuu (Lanturn).osb"
~~Your video still has audio~~nvm that mpc thing load the .mp3 file with the same name

[Gaia]

00:24:017 (2) - move 1 grid down

00:29:080 (3) - rotate 4º from selection

00:37:517 (2) - move to x490 y258

00:37:705 (3) -

316,336,37705,2,0,B|235:372|207:299|130:336,1,191.999994140625,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:00:955 (1) - ctrl+g better flow imo, circular and such

01:04:330 (1,2) - swap nc

01:21:955 (1) - 2nd slider point to x256 y216 and this 01:22:517 (2) - to x260 y336

01:29:267 (1) - finish on head maybe? its too empty (you forgot a clap on tail too

)
01:39:580 (5) - move to x44 y132 looks nice imo

01:47:080 (2) - 2 grids up

[Sonnyc's Insane]
Hp6 maybe, these sliders drain a lot, specially with HR

How old is this diff? xD

[Hard]

00:21:955 (1) -

216,80,21955,6,0,B|176:31|123:48|123:48|70:64|31:16,2,210,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[sample's Normal]

01:23:267 (4) - whistle on head
01:26:267 (3) - ^
01:29:267 (4) - ^
01:32:267 (4) - ^ and so on, you know

I hope this help :3

Good luck

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2015-01-19T10:48:48+00:00

Deleted old .osb (maybe that's what messed up KSHR or something :3

In Gaia:
I fixed everything, except for that NC as I prefer it how it is. I made 00:36:955 (1) - blanket the newly positioned 00:37:517 (2) - as well. Everything else looked nice with the coords given so I used them all. Thanks :3

In Hard:
I used the slider, but rotated it slightly so it wouldn't be touching the HP bar as bad.

Thanks for the mod <3

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2015-01-19T19:25:33+00:00

Yeah, your SB has been fixed! Nice lol
~~/me can't wait for Everyday Kareishuu w~~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-23T11:30:21+00:00

from Queue

crazy song, creepy voice and creepy BG lol

General

if player download this map w/o video, they will play the map with black background, maybe you can fade in the BG from 00:21:955 - and fade out in 01:51:580 - (

Easy

00:33:955 (1) - add finish on head since it has crash cymbal sound :3
00:48:955 (1) - hmm i dont hear any cymbal sound here, i feel finish sounds quite noisy here, how about change it with whistle instead?
00:57:955 (1) - hmm how about add whistle on tail to emphasize the piano? i just feel quite empty here
01:00:205 (2) - since the music isnt kick drum here, i feel clap sounds kinda random, how about whistle instead for keep consistency your hitsound pattern too?
01:15:955 (1) - the music isnt kick drum too here, try use sampleset soft for tail? it fits better imo
01:45:955 (2) - imo clap with 1/1 gap from before sounds not really well, i'd say to use finish on head here but that's really my taste :p
Nice Diff, cant catch anything from design ~

Normal

00:21:955 (1) - maybe just my taste but flow from its tail to next slider's head would feel more natural if ctrl+G this slider, just my tasteeee
00:29:455 (2) - the tail a little bit go to downward and i feel not really natural coz it, i'd say to make the flow become straight instead example http://puu.sh/eU4wr.jpg
00:44:830 (2,3,4) - so nazi but the shape of this pattern can be arranged better again http://puu.sh/eU7A1.jpg
from 00:42:955 - until 00:53:080 - whistles sound noisy for 00:44:830 (2,4) - and 00:50:830 (2,4) - , how about use sampleset soft for 2nd and 4th whiteticks here? it will give variation too. for intentional stuff like 00:47:080 (2) - you can use soft sampleset for 00:46:705 - instead, same for 00:48:205 - and similar musics
00:51:955 (1) - you can use circular flow from previous note to this slider to make more natural flow by move this slider to 360,120 and then move 00:53:455 (2) - 80,96 to fix the spacing
01:00:205 - intentional to not use hitsound here? i think it'd be better to add whistle here for consistency
01:15:955 (1) - finish on head because crash cymbal :p
01:17:455 (3) - maybe add whistle on tail for emphasize vocal? just my taste :p
01:21:205 - 01:21:580 - unnecessary greenlines
01:23:267 - 01:26:267 - 01:29:267 - 01:32:267 - 01:35:267 - 01:38:267 - 01:41:267 - for those vocals, i think a little bit empty w/o hitsound here, how about add whistles for them? it'd be nicer to hear imo
01:32:267 (4) - i think you can end the slider in 01:32:830 - and add note for 01:33:205 - , it will follow "tet" music sound
01:44:267 (1) - i think it would be nicer if you add note in 01:44:267 - to follow vocal and then start the spinner in 01:44:455 -

Hard

00:29:455 (4) - just nazi and my taste that the mouse's movement from (3) to (4) would be nicer if you ctrl+G this since you wont pass the movement to (2)'s slider's body
00:36:580 (4) - hmm imo red tick doesnt have kick drum here so clap sounds quite loud for me, how about use sampleset soft or just leave w/o hitsound instead?
00:37:705 (3) - nazi, maybe just my feel if the blanket could be better with 1 grid left?
00:39:767 - and other musics which are same , same as 00:36:580 (4) -
00:41:642 (3) - wtf nazi again, 1 grid down coz this slider's head with previous slider's head looked a little bit close lol
00:56:080 (3) - i feel the curve makes a little bit uncomfortable for next flow to (1)'s head, how about try other flow for make it better? i guess something like http://puu.sh/eUsuZ.jpg would work nicely
01:04:330 (1,3) - my first thing came out from my mind is 01:04:330 (1) - the NC looks unnecessary but you can swap NC for 01:04:330 (1,3) - to keep consistency NC every stanza
01:44:455 (1) - missing finish?

Insane
wtf 2,20 SV

other diffs use TR1 , hmm try to use TR1 too? just for consistency but that's up to you ~
00:28:517 (2) - maybe add whistle on tail since the piano sound is quite loud here like 00:26:080 -
00:42:955 (1) - finish on head coz the cymbal
00:44:080 (2) - im sure if you ctrl+G this one, you will get more natural flow and jump to emphasize vocal at stanza, but idk what would i do for 00:43:330 (2) - lol
01:14:267 (4) - nazi NC for consistency
01:20:267 (3) - ^
01:15:580 (7) - i think if you rotate the slider -30 degree clockwise and flip it, it will give more natural flow for next slider http://puu.sh/eUvvd.jpg
somehow i cant understand why this diff has 1,2 spacing like 01:31:892 (2,3,4) - 01:24:017 (4) - etc when the normal spacing is 1,0x either like 01:26:080 (4) - etc. better to use 1 spacing (i prefer 1,0x coz 1,2x looks quite far)
p.s : dont worry i know 01:43:892 (2,3,4) - this one intentional for design

Gaia

00:24:580 (3,1) - maybe just for me when i feel this placement will give better flow for this time http://puu.sh/eUEcL.jpg
00:35:642 (2,3) - just my taste again that ctrl+G will give smoother flow in my side
00:38:455 (1) - my taste again, the flow somehow feels smoother if we move the tail to 116,80
00:38:455 (1) - somehow the star pattern looks kinda untidy (maybe flat) here, i'd like to make it neater example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2591537 but i will reduce the jumps :p
01:06:205 (2) - the jump looks quite far imo, hmm i'd like to make http://puu.sh/eUFVd.jpg for design too but it will reduce your jump spacing again ww
01:09:017 (2) - somehow inconsistency spacing from previous and next this note looks not really well to feel, i'd say to make more consistent by move to 324,196
01:12:580 (5) - anti jump 0,5x not really well to see imo, i'd like to stack this circle or move to 436,180 for smaller spacing (overlap looks nicer lol)
01:13:517 (2) - hmm i'd say to make a triangle pattern for 01:13:517 (2,3,4) - , try move (2) to 160,312 for it? consistent spacing looks better too
01:15:955 - finish ~
01:33:580 (6,7,8,9) - just my taste but i prefer to flip them for more natural flow ;w; http://puu.sh/eUHKp.jpg
01:40:330 (2) - nazi, i still can see (2) and (4) placed quite close in testplay, i'd say to make further distance for them, just move (2) to 368,192
01:44:455 - finish ~
01:46:892 (1) - just my taste, i dont like high jump but i guess you did it on purpose.. just saying lol

get 20 SP coz my bubble policy and Call me back ~

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2015-01-24T01:05:50+00:00

Xinely wrote:
from Queue

crazy song, creepy voice and creepy BG lol

General
if player download this map w/o video, they will play the map with black background, maybe you can fade in the BG from 00:21:955 - and fade out in 01:51:580 - ( I actually can't do this, otherwise the BG will cover the video itself during play time. I'll just put a warning for players to turn off the SB if they want the BG only.

Easy
00:33:955 (1) - add finish on head since it has crash cymbal sound :3 Added.
00:48:955 (1) - hmm i dont hear any cymbal sound here, i feel finish sounds quite noisy here, how about change it with whistle instead? Changed to 'soft'
00:57:955 (1) - hmm how about add whistle on tail to emphasize the piano? i just feel quite empty here Added
01:00:205 (2) - since the music isnt kick drum here, i feel clap sounds kinda random, how about whistle instead for keep consistency your hitsound pattern too? it actually follows the change in music with 00:54:955 (1,2) - . There just isn't that many hitsounds to make it feel consistent lol.
01:15:955 (1) - the music isnt kick drum too here, try use sampleset soft for tail? it fits better imo Done, and I changed the next tail to a soft as well since it fits.
01:45:955 (2) - imo clap with 1/1 gap from before sounds not really well, i'd say to use finish on head here but that's really my taste :p I actually like the clap better here. maybe it's because I try following the guitar with the claps or something. In the higher diffs especially.
Nice Diff, cant catch anything from design ~

Hard
00:29:455 (4) - just nazi and my taste that the mouse's movement from (3) to (4) would be nicer if you ctrl+G this since you wont pass the movement to (2)'s slider's body yessssssssssssssssssssssssssss <3 <3
00:36:580 (4) - hmm imo red tick doesnt have kick drum here so clap sounds quite loud for me, how about use sampleset soft or just leave w/o hitsound instead? Removed in Gaia/Hard.
00:37:705 (3) - nazi, maybe just my feel if the blanket could be better with 1 grid left? Fixed.
00:39:767 - and other musics which are same , same as 00:36:580 (4) - I 'think' i got rid of them on both diffs.
00:41:642 (3) - wtf nazi again, 1 grid down coz this slider's head with previous slider's head looked a little bit close lol ok lol.
00:56:080 (3) - i feel the curve makes a little bit uncomfortable for next flow to (1)'s head, how about try other flow for make it better? i guess something like http://puu.sh/eUsuZ.jpg would work nicely Ok. Done.
01:04:330 (1,3) - my first thing came out from my mind is 01:04:330 (1) - the NC looks unnecessary but you can swap NC for 01:04:330 (1,3) - to keep consistency NC every stanza Even pkhg wanted me to do something about this, so I will I guess. changed on both diffs.
01:44:455 (1) - missing finish? Added with Easy's mod.

Gaia
00:24:580 (3,1) - maybe just for me when i feel this placement will give better flow for this time http://puu.sh/eUEcL.jpg ok done.
00:35:642 (2,3) - just my taste again that ctrl+G will give smoother flow in my side Done.
00:38:455 (1) - my taste again, the flow somehow feels smoother if we move the tail to 116,80 Done.
00:38:455 (1) - somehow the star pattern looks kinda untidy (maybe flat) here, i'd like to make it neater example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2591537 but i will reduce the jumps :p I made some major fixes here. Using polygon circles instead, I don't know if I reduced or even increased the distance of them, but I personally like how they are right now so I want to keep this
01:06:205 (2) - the jump looks quite far imo, hmm i'd like to make http://puu.sh/eUFVd.jpg for design too but it will reduce your jump spacing again ww This is part of the set I like so I wanted to keep this. XD even if it doesn't look the most aesthetically pleasing.
01:09:017 (2) - somehow inconsistency spacing from previous and next this note looks not really well to feel, i'd say to make more consistent by move to 324,196 Nice. Done.
01:12:580 (5) - anti jump 0,5x not really well to see imo, i'd like to stack this circle or move to 436,180 for smaller spacing (overlap looks nicer lol) I definitely want to keep this. It gives a lot of feeling into the song here. Sorry >_<;
01:13:517 (2) - hmm i'd say to make a triangle pattern for 01:13:517 (2,3,4) - , try move (2) to 160,312 for it? consistent spacing looks better too Oh nice. Done.
01:15:955 - finish ~ Oops! lol
01:33:580 (6,7,8,9) - just my taste but i prefer to flip them for more natural flow ;w; http://puu.sh/eUHKp.jpg I usually like my streams going against the slider at the end of them. Just a personal preference >_<.
01:40:330 (2) - nazi, i still can see (2) and (4) placed quite close in testplay, i'd say to make further distance for them, just move (2) to 368,192 Done.
01:44:455 - finish ~
01:46:892 (1) - just my taste, i dont like high jump but i guess you did it on purpose.. just saying lol This gives off a similar feel to 01:06:017 (1,2) -

get 20 SP coz my bubble policy and Call me back ~ So uh. If I give you a KD, I'll have 20 SP rofl. Did you want me to find one more mod or just get the 20sp?

Thank you so much for this helpful mod <3

Just waiting on Sampy / Sonnyc and I'll either try to get one more mod or call you back.

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

samplefish 2015-01-24T01:58:32+00:00

Xinely wrote:
from Queue

crazy song, creepy voice and creepy BG lol

Normal
00:21:955 (1) - maybe just my taste but flow from its tail to next slider's head would feel more natural if ctrl+G this slider, just my tasteeee remapped
00:29:455 (2) - the tail a little bit go to downward and i feel not really natural coz it, i'd say to make the flow become straight instead example http://puu.sh/eU4wr.jpg remapped
00:44:830 (2,3,4) - so nazi but the shape of this pattern can be arranged better again http://puu.sh/eU7A1.jpg remapped
from 00:42:955 - until 00:53:080 - whistles sound noisy for 00:44:830 (2,4) - and 00:50:830 (2,4) - , how about use sampleset soft for 2nd and 4th whiteticks here? it will give variation too. for intentional stuff like 00:47:080 (2) - you can use soft sampleset for 00:46:705 - instead, same for 00:48:205 - and similar musics took out whstles and added soft samplesets to those above
00:51:955 (1) - you can use circular flow from previous note to this slider to make more natural flow by move this slider to 360,120 and then move 00:53:455 (2) - 80,96 to fix the spacing remapped
01:00:205 - intentional to not use hitsound here? i think it'd be better to add whistle here for consistency added whistle
01:15:955 (1) - finish on head because crash cymbal :p ookay
01:17:455 (3) - maybe add whistle on tail for emphasize vocal? just my taste :p okay
01:21:205 - 01:21:580 - unnecessary greenlines taken out
01:23:267 - 01:26:267 - 01:29:267 - 01:32:267 - 01:35:267 - 01:38:267 - 01:41:267 - for those vocals, i think a little bit empty w/o hitsound here, how about add whistles for them? it'd be nicer to hear imo added
01:32:267 (4) - i think you can end the slider in 01:32:830 - and add note for 01:33:205 - , it will follow "tet" music sound nice!
01:44:267 (1) - i think it would be nicer if you add note in 01:44:267 - to follow vocal and then start the spinner in 01:44:455 - okay

thanks xinely o/

lambchop

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TitleUnicode:ポニーテールの四十 ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Saitou Chiwa
ArtistUnicode:斎藤千和
Creator:Lanturn
Version:samplefish's Normal
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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-24T03:46:55+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Insane
wtf 2,20 SV
other diffs use TR1 , hmm try to use TR1 too? just for consistency but that's up to you ~ // Come on, I'm using custom tick sounds lol
00:28:517 (2) - maybe add whistle on tail since the piano sound is quite loud here like 00:26:080 - // Sounds reasonable.
00:42:955 (1) - finish on head coz the cymbal // Added
00:44:080 (2) - im sure if you ctrl+G this one, you will get more natural flow and jump to emphasize vocal at stanza, but idk what would i do for 00:43:330 (2) - lol // I'd like to maintain the zigzag flow I was using at 00:42:955 (1,2) - and 00:45:205 (3,4).
01:14:267 (4) - nazi NC for consistency // NCed
01:20:267 (3) - ^ // I don't think it's needed here.
01:15:580 (7) - i think if you rotate the slider -30 degree clockwise and flip it, it will give more natural flow for next slider http://puu.sh/eUvvd.jpg // Fixed flow.
somehow i cant understand why this diff has 1,2 spacing like 01:31:892 (2,3,4) - 01:24:017 (4) - etc when the normal spacing is 1,0x either like 01:26:080 (4) - etc. better to use 1 spacing (i prefer 1,0x coz 1,2x looks quite far) // The main reason of the spacing you've pointed out is "symmetry" as you can see. Also using various spacings in an [Insane] difficulty is not an abnormal thing, so I don't feel the need for a fix..
p.s : dont worry i know 01:43:892 (2,3,4) - this one intentional for design

Diff setting HP6, CS4, AR8, OD8. I'd like to set it differently with Lanturn's.

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[Easy]
01:00:955 (1) - The rhythm felt weird here since this is following the vocal, but 01:03:580 is missing a note..

[Hard]
00:26:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - Readability highly concerned since the approach circle nearly merges with the video.
00:44:830 (2,3) - Imo making the symmetry more even would be appropriate here. http://puu.sh/eWulb/10393dd1cb.jpg
01:46:892 (1,2) - Imo a jump didn't suit nicely here.

[Gaia]
01:06:017 (1,2) - I also think the jump is too big, but well nvm.
01:27:861 (7) - 01:39:861 (7) - Are you sure about this hitsound? soft-hitnormal doesn't seem to fit the music nicely..

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-24T03:56:55+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Easy]
01:00:955 (1) - The rhythm felt weird here since this is following the vocal, but 01:03:580 is missing a note.. I don't believe this note is necessary, mostly due to the fact the 'you' sound is more dominant. Gonna leave this as is.

[Hard]
00:26:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - Readability highly concerned since the approach circle nearly merges with the video. Changed colors around a bit. I also changed Sampy's colors as well.
00:44:830 (2,3) - Imo making the symmetry more even would be appropriate here. http://puu.sh/eWulb/10393dd1cb.jpg Done.
01:46:892 (1,2) - Imo a jump didn't suit nicely here. Actually it's the whole maps purpose to have this jump here. I want to keep this.

[Gaia]
01:06:017 (1,2) - I also think the jump is too big, but well nvm. Hmm. Doesn't seem like people like this one. I thought it was pretty cool. reduced the jump on it.
01:27:861 (7) - 01:39:861 (7) - Are you sure about this hitsound? soft-hitnormal doesn't seem to fit the music nicely.. I actually really like this one. >_<

Thanks for the mod Sonnyc!

Updating all diffs shortly...

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-24T04:10:16+00:00

Updated.

I also swapped my combo colors to Sonnyc's, and made some difficulty setting adjustments to be balanced.

Should be all good to go <3

PS. should I remove the anime inception thing at the end? I've been contemplating over it for awhile now.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2015-01-24T04:12:56+00:00

Inception lol

Xinely

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Xinely 2015-01-24T09:23:47+00:00

recheck

Sonnyc's Insane uses OD 8 here? imo it'd be better with OD 7 to make spread with Gaia diff
also still on Insane what i've say 01:20:267 (3) - NC here actually to keep consistency whenever you NC every stanza, but if you dont want for it so please do for 01:21:205 (6) -

And for Normal

Normal

00:46:705 - maybe add soft sampleset here? sounds kinda empty imo
00:48:205 - same as above
01:44:267 (4) - add whistle for vocal, empty :'3
01:41:267 (4) - imo the curve of this slider looks quite curvy, i'd say to make it a little bit smoother example http://puu.sh/eX3FZ.jpg

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-24T19:33:59+00:00

I lowered the HP of Hard a little myself. Didn't realize it was the same as Sonnyc's diff.

Anyways, will update when samplefish and Sonnyc responds.

samplefish

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samplefish 2015-01-25T00:39:44+00:00

went thru xinely's mod

KECCO SHITAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: AKB40 40.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81861
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ponytail no Shijuu ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:ポニーテールの四十 ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Saitou Chiwa
ArtistUnicode:斎藤千和
Creator:Lanturn
Version:samplefish's Normal
Source:のうりん
Tags:samplefish Sonnyc Nourin No-Rin Ending Bekki Natsume 戸次菜摘 Becky Forty AKB40
BeatmapID:456883
BeatmapSetID:184420

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.7
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Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2015-01-25T02:20:29+00:00

I still refuse to believe that this insane teacher has the same VA as that dark demonic magical girl.

~~Just passing by.~~

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-25T16:33:25+00:00

All updated. Changed the OD to 7 on Sonnyc's diff as well as the new combo (he let me update this)

Updated Samps diff and changed settings around on Gaia/Hard. Should be good now.

Thanks for recheck!

Xinely

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Xinely 2015-01-25T20:54:37+00:00

okay i guess fine to go now

Bubbled!~

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-25T20:56:09+00:00

Thank you <3

I love your bubbled picture

pkhg

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pkhg 2015-01-26T03:13:42+00:00

yay

goww guys <3

Tari

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Tari 2015-01-27T06:58:10+00:00

<3

Shooting some stars, good luck on ranking!

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-27T14:27:03+00:00

Thank you Tari :3

Xgor

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Xgor 2015-02-07T11:59:57+00:00

Xgor's SB bubble check time!
Most of the things look fine, buut there is some minor stuff that could be improved.

Quite a lot of the subtitle images has a huge chunk of unused transparency.

Scene12-17 is just the same thing. Just one will be enough.

Aaand.... it looks a bit silly how the osu! logo is not quite fit into the TV. Intentional?

Not sure if these reasons is enough for a pop but I felt they was good enough to be mentioned.

Last edited by Xgor 2015-02-09T20:30:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-02-07T13:20:39+00:00

Talked to you ingame. Fixed everything mentioned.

Xgor

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Xgor 2015-02-09T20:30:24+00:00

Re-bub.

Edit:... nevermind osb removal first...

Edit 2: This time baby!

Suimya

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Suimya 2015-02-10T02:12:50+00:00

I love this song, so why not <3

General:

I highly suggest you to raise the volume on all diffs on kiai since, the kiai kinda sounded so too loud and the hitstound can be barely get heard. About 80% or 85% would do imo~

samplefish's Normal:

00:42:205 (5) - I highly suggest you here to switch the whistle on the head with a clap instead, the whistle here is not so strong, since there is a storng beat in the music. So clap would fit much better here o.o
01:08:830 (2) - I think you missed a whistle on slider's repeat, i highly suggest you to add it o.o
01:09:955 (1) - switch this whistle for a finish instead, since in the music i can hear a finish. So yeah..you should add it imo ></
01:30:955 (1) - ^ i can hear it that's why. It seems missing somehow o.o
01:36:955 (1) - ^ on slider's start
01:42:955 (1) - ^

Hard:

00:24:955 (1,3) - how about switching the nc here, since the music really didn't change on (1) it changed on the (3) imo
00:42:205 (4) - switch this whistle for a clap instead? it'll follow the finish in the background perfectly with it o.o
01:24:205 (3) - I don't think the whistle on the tail are really needed here, so i highly suggest you to remove it. it'll sound much better without tbh ></
01:28:517 (2) - ^ remove this whistle too. Same reason as above
01:29:455 (1) - switch this whistle for a finish instead on slider's start, i can hear so i think it'll sound much better. The whistle sounds a bit too low for this part, so yeah that's why you should change it to finish o.o
01:30:955 (1) - ^
01:36:955 (1) - ^
01:46:892 (1) - switch this clap for a finish too, i didn't really hear a clap in the music o.o i hear a finish imo.

Sonnyc's Insane

00:21:955 (1) - add a whistle to this slider's start, since you did the same here 00:23:455 (1) -
00:24:580 (3) - missing a whistle hear, since i saw you did the same here 00:23:080 (3) - , so it's kinda weird you didn't add one here o.o

Gaia:

01:18:955 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't even know...why the spam of the nc here? maybe do something like this instead o.o
01:24:955 (1) - finish instead of whistle here, it'll sound much better
01:30:955 (1) - ^
01:36:955 (1) - ^
01:42:955 (1) - ^

That's all. Call me back~

samplefish

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samplefish 2015-02-10T02:39:47+00:00

http://puu.sh/fIgAp/2a291ea068.png

nice

すぐしたいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいい

osu file format v14

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Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-02-11T06:02:06+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
I love this song, so why not <3

General:
I highly suggest you to raise the volume on all diffs on kiai since, the kiai kinda sounded so too loud and the hitstound can be barely get heard. About 80% or 85% would do imo~ Done on my diffs.
Hard:
00:24:955 (1,3) - how about switching the nc here, since the music really didn't change on (1) it changed on the (3) imo I'd honestly prefer to keep it by measures here. It's usually how I like to keep my combos unless it gets stupid like the gaia 1/2 note one lol.
00:42:205 (4) - switch this whistle for a clap instead? it'll follow the finish in the background perfectly with it o.o if you meant finish, then yes. omg this sounds so good as a finish.
01:24:205 (3) - I don't think the whistle on the tail are really needed here, so i highly suggest you to remove it. it'll sound much better without tbh ></ only reason I'm keeping this is because it gives off that double whistle feeling. If you look at this spot on Gaia, it should make sense. I have two earlier notes with these whistles.
01:28:517 (2) - ^ remove this whistle too. Same reason as above removed this one.
01:29:455 (1) - switch this whistle for a finish instead on slider's start, i can hear so i think it'll sound much better. The whistle sounds a bit too low for this part, so yeah that's why you should change it to finish o.o I did Gaia first, but it's basically the same thing. I don't like to overuse finishes here because it feels a little spammy otherwise. So I have it on a set pattern. Hope this makes sense.
01:30:955 (1) - ^
01:36:955 (1) - ^
01:46:892 (1) - switch this clap for a finish too, i didn't really hear a clap in the music o.o i hear a finish imo. If I remember correctly, I banged claps on to match the guitar. I do this elsewhere in the song as well, so I'm going to keep this one too.
Gaia:
01:18:955 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't even know...why the spam of the nc here? maybe do something like this instead o.o Alright, went 12,12,12,12.
01:24:955 (1) - finish instead of whistle here, it'll sound much better For all of these, the finish sounds a bit spammy imo. so I'd rather leave as whistles.
01:30:955 (1) - ^
01:36:955 (1) - ^
01:42:955 (1) - ^

That's all. Call me back~

Thanks :3
Just gonna wait on Sonnyc before I update all the diffs.

Sonnyc

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Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-02-13T00:12:32+00:00

Fix for me plz

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-02-13T13:13:54+00:00

All updated. Applied both whistles.

Should be ready to go!

Edit: I changed metadata after talking to KSHR / alacat. It should be fine now. Thanks you two :3

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-02-13T16:52:04+00:00

after some more fixes, I think this good to go now :3

Qualified~