Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi - Cinderella wa Mah... · forum

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2015-03-29T20:23:24+00:00

DahplA wrote:
[notice]Noz's Extra
00:18:107 (8,9) - Why don't you space these so they are all equal distance - Space at equal distance all 1/4 sliders.
00:30:764 (3,4,5) - Why don't you make this the same pattern as previous triples. Personally I like that triple pattern, and it should be placed like that throughout the whole map. - Wops fix.
01:32:404 (2) - This slider should be smoothed out slightly - I like it and I don't think there is a problem with it.
Overall, nice mapset and an amazing storyboard too. This song isn't really my style, but there is some great mapping behind it.

Thanks

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osu file format v14

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Title:Cinderella wa Mahoutsukai
TitleUnicode:シンデレラは魔法使い
Artist:Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi
ArtistUnicode:Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi
Creator:truonant
Version:Noz's Extra
Source:Touhou
Tags:Nozhomi TicClick Okoratu Mako Sakata Dream Materialise ムソウマテリアライズ Musou Materiaraizu ShibayanRecords Comiket 80 C80 シンデレラは魔法使い やまざきさやか 坂上なち Nachi Sakaue ラクトガール　～ 少女密室 東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil
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Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2015-04-09T14:28:48+00:00

Hi, from my queue

General

Replace Sakaue Nachi in the artist section by 坂上なち
Replace Touhou in the source section by 東方Project, it seems it's what is in right now :^)

Mako's Easy

Recheck all your blankets, they look fine but they could use a little bit more precision, here some examples:
00:11:311 (1,2) - >

00:13:186 (2,3) - >

01:05:686 (3,4) - Don't know if this has already been pointed out, but this might be too hard for easy. Here's a suggestion:
I feel like 01:06:154 - isn't emphasized enough, and it's quite a strong beat, so how about ending the slider here?
Then for 01:06:857 (4) - , begin it on 01:06:623 - and shape it into something like this to emphasize the beats:

02:09:436 (3,4) - I feel like this would get a little confusing since 3 points in 4's end direction rather than its begining, so I suggest just mirroring 3. This happens some other time so look out for the most obvious ones I'd say.

TicCl!ck's Normal

02:01:467 (4,5) - Check stack

That's all I could find, nice map!

oko's Hard

Maybe nerf HP a little, there is quite a gap between this and Normal, but none with Lunatic.
00:14:592 (6,1) - Don't know if this is intentional but check stack.
00:39:436 (1,2,3) - You made kick sliders overlap with the next object then decided not to do it here, I don't think this is a good decision and can be confusing as kick sliders are already hard enough as they are. I guess this applies for the rest of the map. Note that this is more about consistency than kick sliders not overlaping. In other words, pick a style (either overlap or not) and stick with it.

Lunatic

00:27:248 (5,6) - Recheck blanket
01:09:201 (7,1) - ^
00:40:373 (4) - Stack this better?

->

00:57:014 (2) - ^
01:12:951 (8) - ^
01:19:514 (3,5,7) - Recheck stacks
01:30:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:45:764 (4,6) - ^

Noz's Extra

00:23:732 (4,5,6) - Not really a fan of this but w/e
01:59:123 (7,9) - Recheck stack
02:01:936 (1,2) - Recheck blanket
02:06:623 (5,6,7) - Recheck stack

Nice storyboard, good luck on ranking this!

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,416 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2015-04-09T19:35:44+00:00

Alheak wrote:
[TicCl!ck's Normal]
02:01:467 (4,5) - Check stack

It's inevitable and happens to random stacks, also 1px unstack is totally not worth fixing, unless you play with a ruler and your screen is like two meters wide

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,911 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2015-04-09T20:36:10+00:00

Alheak wrote:
[General]Replace Sakaue Nachi in the artist section by 坂上なち ➥ ACTUALLY IDK TRUONANT WHY DID YOU NOT USE THE CORRECT NAME FOR NACHI TO BEGIN WITH
Replace Touhou in the source section by 東方Project, it seems it's what is in right now :^) ➥ That's how ZUN called the series, so it's making more sense to use this instead of Touhou yup

[oko's Hard]Maybe nerf HP a little, there is quite a gap between this and Normal, but none with Lunatic. ➥ decrease it by like 0.5/1.0 for me, truonant D: i also think the insanes could use slightly higher hp idk
00:14:592 (6,1) - Don't know if this is intentional but check stack. ➥ yes this is intentional
00:39:436 (1,2,3) - You made kick sliders overlap with the next object then decided not to do it here, I don't think this is a good decision and can be confusing as kick sliders are already hard enough as they are. I guess this applies for the rest of the map. Note that this is more about consistency than kick sliders not overlaping. In other words, pick a style (either overlap or not) and stick with it.
➥ but uhh 00:54:436 (1,2) - 00:44:475 (6,7,8) - 00:59:475 (4,5,6) - 01:08:498 (3,4) - 01:14:592 (5,6) - should i stop mentioning things where i do this? apparently i did this for most of the 1/4 slider patterns because overlapping so many 1/4 sliders looked and played shitty so.
After all it's like 2x 1/4 sliders in a row -> at least one of them is spaced

do that one thing for me D:

truonant

408 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

truonant 2015-04-13T00:25:24+00:00

Alheak wrote:
Hi, from my queue

General
Replace Sakaue Nachi in the artist section by 坂上なち - fixed
Replace Touhou in the source section by 東方Project, it seems it's what is in right now :^) - fixed

Lunatic
00:27:248 (5,6) - Recheck blanket - fixed
01:09:201 (7,1) - ^ - fixed
00:40:373 (4) - Stack this better? - fixed
->
00:57:014 (2) - ^ - fixed
01:12:951 (8) - ^ - fixed
01:19:514 (3,5,7) - Recheck stacks - fixed
01:30:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ - fixed
01:45:764 (4,6) - ^ - fixed

Nice storyboard, good luck on ranking this!

Thanks for modding~

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-04-13T02:06:04+00:00

Alheak wrote:
Hi, from my queue

[Mako's Easy]
Recheck all your blankets, they look fine but they could use a little bit more precision, here some examples:
00:11:311 (1,2) - > http://puu.sh/h7hMS/b86caa2442.jpg
00:13:186 (2,3) - > http://puu.sh/h7hPn/3b5ce4c86a.jpg Fixed both, I'm bad at blanket
01:05:686 (3,4) - Don't know if this has already been pointed out, but this might be too hard for easy. Here's a suggestion:
I feel like 01:06:154 - isn't emphasized enough, and it's quite a strong beat, so how about ending the slider here?
Then for 01:06:857 (4) - , begin it on 01:06:623 - and shape it into something like this to emphasize the beats: http://puu.sh/h7iBW/941fb3bed8.jpg http://puu.sh/h7iD2/cb98ac47a7.jpg Tbh this one 01:06:154 - is emphisized enough, since I use custom slider tick with drum sound there, furthermore I want to keep the rhythm as it is now, because I want to emphsize this drum sound on 01:06:857 - so I use 1/2 slider there
02:09:436 (3,4) - I feel like this would get a little confusing since 3 points in 4's end direction rather than its begining, so I suggest just mirroring 3. This happens some other time so look out for the most obvious ones I'd say. I want to make a bit circular clockwise flow between them 02:09:436 (3,4,1) - so I keep as it is

Nice storyboard, good luck on ranking this!

Thanks for mod

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Kyubey

osu! Alumni

3,097 posts

Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2016-04-16T23:06:36+00:00

Hello.
[General]
Fix source and artist in Easy.
Delete "坂上なち Nachi Sakaue" from the tags, it's pointless to post artist in the tags.
Add "touhou patchouli knowledge パチュリー・ノーレッジ Locked Girl ~ The Girl's Secret Room" to the tags, these are Patchouli's name (why didn't you add it?) and english version of her original theme.
Delete that epilepsy warning in the storyboard, your kiai doesn't contain rapid flickering so it's harmless. also you'd have to use the epilepsy warning in the settings instead if your sb was dangerous, since it's easier to notice and read
Delete these unused hitsounds:

SPOILER

soft-hitclap5.wav
soft-hitnormal5.wav
soft-hitwhistle5.wav

While modding your map, I realized it could use few extra mods, so I'd prefer to look closely at it after you gather some.

There are few things I'd like to mention though:
Hitsounds on Easy are very quiet, increase their overall volume by 10-15%.

Sliders like 00:24:201 (1) - in Lunatic are very questionable since the guitar they're following doesn't provide enough sound to get feedback from these sliders, they feel totally awkward, especially because they break your main rhythm you're following and vocals on blue ticks are left unmapped while being mapped in other places.

Also, 100% hitsound volume all the time?

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-04-17T23:30:34+00:00

Fixed artist and readjust the volume as kyubey said, umm well actually a remap to make the gap between easy > normal even lesser

Easy

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Shibayan - Cinderella was a Magician.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82795
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Title:Cinderella wa Mahoutsukai
TitleUnicode:シンデレラは魔法使い
Artist:Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi
ArtistUnicode:Shibayan feat. 坂上 なち
Creator:truonant
Version:Mako's Easy
Source:東方Project
Tags:Nozhomi TicClick Okoratu Mako Sakata Dream Materialise ムソウマテリアライズ Musou Materiaraizu ShibayanRecords Comiket 80 C80 シンデレラは魔法使い やまざきさやか 坂上なち Nachi Sakaue ラクトガール　～ 少女密室 東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil
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Don't give up truonant ;(

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,911 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-04-18T13:24:56+00:00

Delete Noz from tags if you dont plan on readding him here LoL

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2016-04-28T15:18:08+00:00

Oko asked me to take a look on it since I'm not part of this set, so just a reminder for the next week to take a look on it~

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-05-11T03:06:52+00:00

#modreqs

[General]
Artist name is correct? look at this website

I guess "坂上なち" is the correct vocal name than "坂上なち"

[Lunatic]
*I couldn't predict some slider's timing when i was playing.. especially at some 3/8s. I think you should inspect an overall distance on your map and try to make sure that this has proper distance
*00:08:967 - 00:22:561 - 01:07:326 - 01:53:029 - 01:59:592 - unnecessary green lines
*00:29:592 (7,8) - it's too far imo. um, and i think also using 1/4 would be better than streams.. like

(7) is stacked on (1)'s head

*00:31:701 (8) - DS 3.9 is excessive.. around 3.0 is better imo
*00:39:436 (1) - should be better to make it 1/4
*01:00:998 (4) - Um, what about reducing the distance with (5)?
*01:44:475 (7,8,9,1) - it's little hard to read but not major problem :p

OwO nice nice~ but i think this should need a detailed mod before BN check. hope to be ranked~!!

polunochnik

123 posts

Joined June 2013

polunochnik 2016-05-12T16:46:07+00:00

Hi! NM
Lunatic
00:08:850(2,3) - should be better if you'll swap this circle and slider. In other words put slider from 00:08:850 to 00:08:967 and put circle to 00:09:085.
00:12:365(1,2,3) - here is the same problem. Against the background of the music heard bright and colorful sounds. Short sliders in this part should follow this sounds.
01:42:717(7,8) - this slider and circle should be closer to each other.
00:29:592(7) - I cannot understand why this circle is not part of stream.
01:44:475(7,8,9,1) - this moment will break a lot of full combos.

02:01:936(1,2,3,4,5)
02:16:877(1,2,3,4,5)
Just my opinion: form of this streams looks not good

I hope I could help!
Good luck!

truonant

408 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

truonant 2016-05-12T20:33:38+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
Hello.
[General]
Delete "坂上なち Nachi Sakaue" from the tags, it's pointless to post artist in the tags. - Fixed.
Add "touhou patchouli knowledge パチュリー・ノーレッジ Locked Girl ~ The Girl's Secret Room" to the tags, these are Patchouli's name (why didn't you add it?) and english version of her original theme. - Fixed.
Delete that epilepsy warning in the storyboard, your kiai doesn't contain rapid flickering so it's harmless. - Oh perfect. Since it's not harmless, I think i'll just leave it there anyways. also you'd have to use the epilepsy warning in the settings instead if your sb was dangerous, since it's easier to notice and read
Delete these unused hitsounds: - fixed
SPOILER
soft-hitclap5.wav
soft-hitnormal5.wav
soft-hitwhistle5.wav
While modding your map, I realized it could use few extra mods, so I'd prefer to look closely at it after you gather some. - Thank you. I'll follow up on this after I get some more mods in.

There are few things I'd like to mention though:
Hitsounds on Easy are very quiet, increase their overall volume by 10-15%.

Sliders like 00:24:201 (1) - in Lunatic are very questionable since the guitar they're following doesn't provide enough sound to get feedback from these sliders, they feel totally awkward, especially because they break your main rhythm you're following and vocals on blue ticks are left unmapped while being mapped in other places. Well said. fixed

Also, 100% hitsound volume all the time?- fixed

Mako Sakata wrote:
Fixed artist and readjust the volume as kyubey said, umm well actually a remap to make the gap between easy > normal even lesser
Don't give up truonant ;( - Updated. Thanks. I'm trying!

Okorin wrote:
Delete Noz from tags if you dont plan on readding him here LoL - fixed

Nozhomi wrote:
Oko asked me to take a look on it since I'm not part of this set, so just a reminder for the next week to take a look on it~ - awesome. thank you!

Dailycare wrote:
#modreqs

[General]
Artist name is correct? look at this website

I guess "坂上なち" is the correct vocal name than "坂上なち" - I'm sure it's correct

[Lunatic]
*I couldn't predict some slider's timing when i was playing.. especially at some 3/8s. I think you should inspect an overall distance on your map and try to make sure that this has proper distance - I'd love to but i'd end up remapping everything. So it'd better not.
*00:08:967 - 00:22:561 - 01:07:326 - 01:53:029 - 01:59:592 - unnecessary green lines - fixed.
*00:29:592 (7,8) - it's too far imo. um, and i think also using 1/4 would be better than streams.. like - thank you for wonderful suggestion. fixed.
(7) is stacked on (1)'s head
*00:31:701 (8) - DS 3.9 is excessive.. around 3.0 is better imo - 3.9.. indeed excessively lunatic. Fixed.
*00:39:436 (1) - should be better to make it 1/4 - fixed
*01:00:998 (4) - Um, what about reducing the distance with (5)? - I can try it. Fixed
*01:44:475 (7,8,9,1) - it's little hard to read but not major problem :p - great.

OwO nice nice~ but i think this should need a detailed mod before BN check. hope to be ranked~!! - thank you for the kind mod from #modreq. I thought that channel was just for show

polunochnik wrote:
Hi! NM
Lunatic
00:08:850(2,3) - should be better if you'll swap this circle and slider. In other words put slider from 00:08:850 to 00:08:967 and put circle to 00:09:085.- Fixed
00:12:365(1,2,3) - here is the same problem. Against the background of the music heard bright and colorful sounds. Short sliders in this part should follow this sounds. - Fixed
01:42:717(7,8) - this slider and circle should be closer to each other. - No change. I don't see why it has to be close.
00:29:592(7) - I cannot understand why this circle is not part of stream. - probably cause the sounds are different.
01:44:475(7,8,9,1) - this moment will break a lot of full combos. - Duly noted. i'll see what other people say about it
02:01:936(1,2,3,4,5)
02:16:877(1,2,3,4,5)
Just my opinion: form of this streams looks not good - I'm sad you don't like it!
I hope I could help! - Thank you for the mod. It was indeed helpful.
Good luck!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-06-22T13:37:55+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Oko asked me to take a look on it since I'm not part of this set, so just a reminder for the next week to take a look on it~

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,911 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-06-22T16:01:11+00:00

hi noz

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2016-06-22T21:56:33+00:00

Hi oko~

[General :]

Metadata : Ok
Timing : Ok
AiMod : Unused files : soft-sliderslide7.wav / soft-slidertick7.wav
SB : Kiai is above 5.00x of SB load (spike at 5.93x). Could you see with someone to see if everything is enough optimized ?
Other: I guess the sb self advertising about epilepsy is enough ^^ Also add okorin to tags~

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Mako's Esy :

00:29:592 (2) - Move it at 299:82, to have a nice circular movement, because the little downward movement looks a little bad with the curve of next slider.

- oko's Hard :

00:07:561 - Could you put at least same volume for red and greenline ? Probably don't affect anything but better be cautious with it.
Why AR8 for this BPM ? 7 works better and do a nice setting progression (3 -> 5 -> 7 -> 9).
00:17:639 - I would be glad to know how you decided to not map this beat. Compared to 00:07:561 - , I understand 00:15:764 - but 2nd one should be then.

- Lunatic :

00:13:889 - Tbh I'm quite sad you skip this beat. It's quite strong and would make 00:14:006 (4,5) - less akward.
00:33:811 (1,2) - Something is wrong here. The 1/4 jump is definitly too big for this section because instead of other pattern, you go from a circle to a slider, so the gap should be lower (like 01:00:998 (4,5) - ). Or you can swap these objects because the slider would fit vocal here.
01:15:998 (6,7,8) - Why a higher spacing for 01:15:998 (6,7) - than 01:16:232 (7,8) - ? Is there anything special to do that ?
01:21:154 (5,6) - Imo the spacing for this 1/2 gap is too low. You break the dynamic of the play when you expect something bigger to emphasis the comming kiai.
02:01:467 (7,8) - Maybe ctrl+g to keep this clockwork movement ?
02:12:482 (6,7) - Too spaced. You previous one 01:57:482 (6,7) - are around 1.86x and and these one are 2.63x.

Can't defeat porn rhythm

Mukyu~
Patchouli is my waifu~

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,911 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-06-22T22:38:02+00:00

did most things

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:シンデレラは魔法使い
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ArtistUnicode:Shibayan feat. 坂上なち
Creator:truonant
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Source:東方Project
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447,124,107990,2,0,P|398:132|323:101,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,108,108459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,108,108576,2,0,P|145:128|65:117,1,119.999996337891,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,262,109045,5,2,0:0:0:0:
151,348,109279,1,4,0:0:0:0:
254,243,109514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
357,348,109748,2,0,P|416:312|438:261,1,119.999996337891,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,226,110100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,226,110217,2,0,P|381:203|340:144,1,119.999996337891,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,26,110686,5,8,0:0:0:0:
437,50,110920,2,0,P|411:45|382:19,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,90,111154,2,0,P|390:147|341:164,1,119.999996337891,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,198,111623,1,10,0:0:0:0:
293,46,111857,1,4,0:0:0:0:
133,117,112092,1,4,0:0:0:0:
304,154,112326,1,6,0:0:0:0:
189,30,112561,6,0,P|94:22|32:135,1,200,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,236,113264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,176,113498,2,0,P|251:150|318:158,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,176,113850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,176,113967,2,0,P|318:242|341:294,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,207,114436,5,8,0:0:0:0:
453,172,114553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,139,114670,2,0,P|427:116|397:96,1,50
371,83,114904,2,0,P|311:108|239:75,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,80,115256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,80,115373,2,0,B|183:108|183:108|218:157|144:190|219:287,1,200,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,360,116076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,243,116311,6,0,P|404:198|478:181,2,100,10|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,363,117014,2,0,L|232:338,1,50
194,320,117248,2,0,P|195:264|237:192,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,147,117717,2,0,P|357:97|357:13,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,50,118186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
235,190,118420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,222,118537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,236,118654,2,0,P|334:266|368:324,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,358,119123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,268,119357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,186,119592,1,4,0:0:0:0:
88,140,119826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,57,120061,6,0,B|276:40|323:86,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,178,120529,1,6,0:0:0:0:
325,300,120764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,324,120998,2,0,P|192:267|220:211,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,126,121467,2,0,P|323:184|293:240,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,105,121936,6,0,P|277:59|331:46,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,53,122287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,84,122404,2,0,P|400:139|370:187,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,199,122756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,199,122873,2,0,P|321:235|228:258,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,184,123342,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,101,123576,1,2,0:0:0:0:
115,109,123811,6,0,B|65:125|49:180|58:208|77:235|94:247|94:247|83:282|105:291,1,200,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,360,124514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,256,124748,2,0,P|281:199|231:144,2,100,10|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,285,125451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
141,144,125686,6,0,P|159:90|209:58,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,67,126037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,67,126154,2,0,P|309:91|383:70,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,53,126623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
489,192,126857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
478,221,126974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,245,127092,2,0,P|398:273|386:318,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,348,127443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,348,127561,6,0,P|295:349|221:222,1,200,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,127,128264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,77,128498,2,0,P|425:82|364:170,1,200,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,131,129201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
138,46,129436,6,0,L|90:88,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,116,129670,2,0,P|110:169|110:235,2,100,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,102,130256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,102,130373,2,0,P|230:126|280:112,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,130842,1,4,0:0:0:0:
308,19,131076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,167,131311,6,0,P|337:229|323:286,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,312,131779,2,0,P|189:249|203:192,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,84,132248,1,10,0:0:0:0:
390,77,132482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,216,132717,2,0,P|354:253|288:252,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,233,133186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,241,133303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,133420,2,0,L|127:372,2,100,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,248,134006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,248,134123,2,0,P|78:201|97:133,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,121,134475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,121,134592,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,173,134826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,69,135061,6,0,P|369:112|322:275,1,200,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,135764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,195,135998,2,0,P|162:151|219:92,2,100,10|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,136701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,333,136936,6,0,P|413:288|433:226,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,205,137287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,205,137404,2,0,P|452:139|499:94,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,34,137873,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,124,138107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,149,138225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,159,138342,2,0,P|133:149|78:98,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,30,138811,6,0,P|261:39|316:90,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,194,139279,1,6,0:0:0:0:
236,298,139514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,244,139748,2,0,P|102:187|62:119,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,98,140100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
59,98,140217,2,0,P|118:73|181:93,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,192,140686,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140803,12,4,142561,0:1:0:0:

Most things include:
AR=7.5 because 7 was dum with this SV
volume thingy
and im apped that beat because i don't even know what the fuck .
THANK

_handholding

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_handholding 2016-06-23T01:25:39+00:00

thnx for making this happen kisses

_handholding

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_handholding 2016-06-23T01:25:55+00:00

no problem

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2016-06-23T01:34:59+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi oko

truonant

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truonant 2016-06-23T04:21:05+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
- Lunatic :
00:13:889 - Tbh I'm quite sad you skip this beat. It's quite strong and would make 00:14:006 (4,5) - less akward. - fixed
00:33:811 (1,2) - Something is wrong here. The 1/4 jump is definitly too big for this section because instead of other pattern, you go from a circle to a slider, so the gap should be lower (like 01:00:998 (4,5) - ). Or you can swap these objects because the slider would fit vocal here. - fixed
01:15:998 (6,7,8) - Why a higher spacing for 01:15:998 (6,7) - than 01:16:232 (7,8) - ? Is there anything special to do that ? - fixed
01:21:154 (5,6) - Imo the spacing for this 1/2 gap is too low. You break the dynamic of the play when you expect something bigger to emphasis the comming kiai. - no change. I can't really tell since I can hardly play my own maps.
02:01:467 (7,8) - Maybe ctrl+g to keep this clockwork movement ? - fixed
02:12:482 (6,7) - Too spaced. You previous one 01:57:482 (6,7) - are around 1.86x and and these one are 2.63x. - fixed

Updated. Thanks Noz and Oko!

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-06-23T04:28:17+00:00

Umm truonant can you move (2) on my diff as noz's said? Thankies😚

truonant

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truonant 2016-06-23T04:30:34+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Umm truonant can you move (2) on my diff as noz's said? Thankies😚

Yeah I can do that. Thanks

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2016-06-23T15:12:03+00:00

Can you please also add my previous username to tags

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-06-27T12:31:47+00:00

So as I asked with oko recently, I'm not 100% sure about the Shibayan feat. 坂上なち, because I never saw it when I looked for metadata.
For example : https://soundcloud.com/shibayan/pachuli / http://homepage3.nifty.com/shibayan/stal1101/ / http://www.akibaoo.com/c/82/2500020206676/

~~Everytime, vocal is credited but not include with artist as feat.x. So I think it should be just Shibayan as artist.~~

EDIT : I asked to Alacat about it, artist should be 坂上なち / Sakaue Nachi so Shibayan should be added on tags.

truonant

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truonant 2016-06-28T22:59:13+00:00

Ok. I've added the tags and changed the artist name.

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-06-29T09:00:23+00:00

Remove old osb file with old artist name.
Remove soft-sliderslide7.wav / soft-slidertick7.wav who are unused hitsounds !

Ayyy

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-10-02T21:00:17+00:00

Okay seems fine now~

Got your bubble ^^

truonant

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truonant 2016-10-03T02:19:39+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Okay seems fine now~

Got your bubble ^^

Sweet <3

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-10-03T04:29:00+00:00

Great, after two years we have a bubble
Hope someone will check the bubble soon

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-11-01T05:27:01+00:00

ok. we have some consistency, rhythm, spacing, and minor aesthetic issues with Lunatic diff

aesthetics
00:08:029 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - you should try using convert slider to stream, it will look alot cleaner
00:36:389 (3,5) - this overlap doesn't look very intuitive
00:38:967 (7,2) - ^
01:57:014 (4,6) - try not to overlap here

consistency
00:16:350 (2,3) - 00:08:850 (2) - why are these different?
00:19:865 (1,2) - ^ same as above, why is this part different?
01:35:568 (8,1) - 01:39:084 (8,1) - why the inconsistency?

rhythm
00:23:029 (3,4) - i dont think extending this to the 1/8 is necessary, 00:23:264 - isn't that strong of a sound
00:27:248 (5,6) - ^
00:28:186 (1,2) - ^
00:31:467 (7,8) - ^ (also kind of inconsistent with 00:31:936 (1,2) - )
also, after 00:56:545 (2) - u don't seem to use them anymore in the same context.
00:56:311 (1,2,3) -
01:15:998 (6,7,8,9) - ^ again, the song doesn't really support an extended slider and it seems to come out of nowhere, it would be acceptable if you were at least consistent with your usage imo.
01:42:834 (8) - you're skipping a vocal by extending this slider, not necessary imo.
02:19:748 - why map such a strong beat with a slider end here?

spacing
00:09:436 (1,2) - needs some more spacing imo, it could easily be misread as 1/4 here.
00:29:826 (9,1,2) - you need to lower the spacing from 9>1 and increase it from 1>2, its a bit misleading again here.
00:13:889 (4,5,6) - why does this have such high spacing when the music isn't even that strong here? at least compared to ur streams like 00:09:904 (2,3,4,5) -
01:08:498 (6,7,8) - come on, u should know that this stuff really plays badly >< also there isn't really any special reason to use this kind of pattern here.
01:31:936 (1,2,3) - ^
01:54:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this spaced so much? i don't even hear a clear 1/4 track here ><
02:01:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:09:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:16:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

other comments
01:23:029 (3,4,5,6) - the movement is a little sharp here, and circles are not as lenient to land on as sliders are so its kind of hard to catch.
02:20:451 (7,8,9) - could ctrl'g this to make the spacing a little more recognizable here.

Last edited by Kibbleru 2016-11-01T23:29:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Winnie

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Winnie 2016-11-01T05:36:40+00:00

It was all Kibbs fault

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-11-01T07:27:12+00:00

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2016-11-01T14:19:25+00:00

so... i assume this is about truonant's diff?

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-11-01T23:29:08+00:00

Okorin wrote:
so... i assume this is about truonant's diff?

ah. sorry, yes

truonant

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truonant 2016-11-02T03:26:51+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Okorin wrote:
so... i assume this is about truonant's diff?
ah. sorry, yes

How bad is it? Should I just remap? Or even better, can you rank it if you deleted my difficulty?

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-11-02T06:26:25+00:00

truonant wrote:
How bad is it? Should I just remap? Or even better, can you rank it if you deleted my difficulty?

hmm, well to me it isnt rankable in its current state, but if other bns find it fine they can disagree with me and rebubble it. (apparently bonsai will do it so.)
but do look into my mod before doing so, cuz you may find some things that u could fix.

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2016-11-02T10:40:03+00:00

should just check the mod like any other, the stuff he pointed out looks fixable

truonant

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truonant 2016-11-06T17:12:41+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
ok. we have some consistency, rhythm, spacing, and minor aesthetic issues with Lunatic diff

aesthetics
00:08:029 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - you should try using convert slider to stream, it will look alot cleaner - fixed
00:36:389 (3,5) - this overlap doesn't look very intuitive - fixed
00:38:967 (7,2) - ^ - fixed
01:57:014 (4,6) - try not to overlap here - fixed

consistency
00:16:350 (2,3) - 00:08:850 (2) - why are these different? - fixed
00:19:865 (1,2) - ^ same as above, why is this part different? - fixed
01:35:568 (8,1) - 01:39:084 (8,1) - why the inconsistency? - fixed

rhythm
00:23:029 (3,4) - i dont think extending this to the 1/8 is necessary, 00:23:264 - isn't that strong of a sound - fixed
00:27:248 (5,6) - ^ - fixed
00:28:186 (1,2) - ^ - fixed
00:31:467 (7,8) - ^ (also kind of inconsistent with 00:31:936 (1,2) - ) - fixed
also, after 00:56:545 (2) - u don't seem to use them anymore in the same context. - fixed
00:56:311 (1,2,3) - - fixed
01:15:998 (6,7,8,9) - ^ again, the song doesn't really support an extended slider and it seems to come out of nowhere, it would be acceptable if you were at least consistent with your usage imo. - fixed
01:42:834 (8) - you're skipping a vocal by extending this slider, not necessary imo. - fixed
02:19:748 - why map such a strong beat with a slider end here? - fixed

spacing
00:09:436 (1,2) - needs some more spacing imo, it could easily be misread as 1/4 here. - fixed
00:29:826 (9,1,2) - you need to lower the spacing from 9>1 and increase it from 1>2, its a bit misleading again here.- fixed
00:13:889 (4,5,6) - why does this have such high spacing when the music isn't even that strong here? at least compared to ur streams like 00:09:904 (2,3,4,5) - - fixed
01:08:498 (6,7,8) - come on, u should know that this stuff really plays badly >< also there isn't really any special reason to use this kind of pattern here.
01:31:936 (1,2,3) - ^ - fixed
01:54:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this spaced so much? i don't even hear a clear 1/4 track here >< - fixed
02:01:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^- fixed
02:09:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^- fixed
02:16:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^- fixed

other comments
01:23:029 (3,4,5,6) - the movement is a little sharp here, and circles are not as lenient to land on as sliders are so its kind of hard to catch. - fixed
02:20:451 (7,8,9) - could ctrl'g this to make the spacing a little more recognizable here.

Thanks Kibbleru. Can you recheck?

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-11-29T01:13:13+00:00

although i don't plan on personally rechecking this, my complaints are satisfied @noz u are free to rebubble.

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