1. Glory (4,86 stars, 1299 notes)

1. The diff name sounded weird, try to rename it to ''Marathon'' or anything else
2. 02:21:765 (5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps are hard to read, try to stack it with 02:21:248 (2) ~ c:
3. 02:23:144 (3) - How about that you move this to x:312 y:139? The place that you added sounded weird though..
4. 02:29:868 (3,4,5,6,1) - Remove stack, like what you did in the other notes ~
5. 02:34:523 (1) - Copy this and past it at 02:35:213?
6. 02:40:041 (1) - ^ Past it at 02:40:730 (2)
7. 02:56:592 (1,2) - Try to do something like this:

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Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue ~ :3
[Little Diff]

1. The diff name sounded weird, try to rename it to ''Marathon'' or anything else I will think about it but diff's name based on poem used in this track. You can try to translate it(in description) u will understnad my idea. What ever mb i will rename to "Little marathon"
2. 02:21:765 (5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps are hard to read, try to stack it with 02:21:248 (2) ~ c: I did it on purpose cause of stacks - in game 02:21:765 (5) - stacked with 02:21:248 (2) -
3. 02:23:144 (3) - How about that you move this to x:312 y:139? The place that you added sounded weird though..Didnt understand what u mean "weird" but moved- looks better
4. 02:29:868 (3,4,5,6,1) - Remove stack, like what you did in the other notes ~Didnt understand. i guess its ok
5. 02:34:523 (1) - Copy this and past it at 02:35:213?Do your request something like this? I accept this
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6. 02:40:041 (1) - ^ Past it at 02:40:730 (2)^
7. 02:56:592 (1,2) - Try to do something like this:I dont like such blankets, sry

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Nice map ~

Good luck ~

Estellia- wrote:

Ok 5 min maps GO! It was 7

02:22:455 (1) - This note kinda starts at a weird time Why? I guess its ok
02:26:937 (3) - Consider Ctrl+G I wont. Want to see here cross flow between 02:26:248 (1,2,3,4) -
02:27:627 (1,2) - Flow seems weird i think its ok. In game looks better
03:11:075 (3,4,5,6) - Curve this a little more Done
03:11:765 (1,2,3,4,1) - Transitions here are weird Why? i guess its clear
03:53:748 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - No one likes these. It's gonna hard to not miss note 9. (unless that's your intent) Did on purpose, but i will fix it same on 06:04:006 (10) -
04:20:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Centralize? What do you mean? Pentagon with center in the end of 04:20:386 (4) - (little +-).
04:44:179 (1,2,3,4,1) - Feels very off Hm... Not sure. I think its clear. But if someone will remind me about this again, i will remap
05:42:800 (3,4,5,6,7) - This looks very confusing Got it. I will remap
06:17:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Sliders here appear too often (including sliders later in timeline as well). Try to cut downDunno. Thats sliders based on that cello sound
06:40:558 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This can get confusing I know. Ok i willr emap if too many people wont like itl
07:10:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Flow here is weird Dont know why. Imo pretty cool
07:26:937 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Oh. My. God. Spinners is my second love But i will remap thsi moment later

I would say your mapping style is very weird. As in, the transitions between patterns, transitions between curved and straight sliders and some beat placements are rather unstable, and can get awkward often. Flows like these: http://puu.sh/9L0hr/027c8ef493.jpg, http://puu.sh/9L0Cp/21552e7340.jpg. I'd highly discourage, but if its your style you can keep it. The spinners, please.
I like when flow broke itslef - mean than next objext change direction around 120-170 deg(hard to explain on english fro me). About beats - i did it on purpsoe to make map more diverse. Again, i like spinners

1. Flow improvements
2. Minor overlap fixes
3. Fixed a couple of tricky patterns
4. New BG
5. General metadata changes

21:54 *-Bakari- is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/441275 Receptor - Redstar [Glory]]
21:54 -Bakari-: Я это затестить пытаюсь, потом будет время для IRC? 
21:57 fergas: Да. Спасибо большое!
22:00 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/441275 Receptor - Redstar [Glory]]
22:00 *fergas is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/441275 Receptor - Redstar [Glory]]
22:00 -Bakari-: Благополучно слил на киаи, но игралось все прекрасно, во всяком случае до киая точно. 
22:01 fergas: нус киаем дело сложно - я не хчоу сильно увчеличивать сложность там
22:01 fergas: но черт возьми мне чертвски нарвиться, что я там сделал
22:01 -Bakari-: Там было достаточно сложно, чтоб я слил, когда шел на В. \:D/
22:02 fergas: ну я ее тоже на B прохожу, но киай 1 из 3 попыток обычно фейлю
22:02 fergas: иногда вообще фкашу
22:03 -Bakari-: Меня немного смутили хитсаунды, которые сами по себе очень невыразительные
22:03 -Bakari-: Такое чувство, что их с какого-то скина средней унылости взялии, чтоб они ложились на любую песню. Но это уже дело твое
22:03 fergas: Да! Тут я полностью согласен, я просто фатально незнаю как лучше их сделать, так как не умею с этйо частью работать
22:04 fergas: Так оно и есть, только я его брал не со скина и использовла раньше для дабстеп жанра
22:04 fergas: я думаю вообще забить на хитсаунды - оставить без, и пусть будет взависимости от пользователей
22:04 -Bakari-: Надо бы подумать, чем их заменить
22:05 -Bakari-: Ну, с дефолтными оно вроде бы кривовато звучит
22:05 fergas: да
22:05 fergas: вообще я в поиске, благо все что мне нудно сменить самы файлы только
22:06 -Bakari-: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/15407/start=30
22:06 -Bakari-: Если тут еще живы ссылки, можно попробовать.
22:06 fergas: Хз. Мб будет интресрно мб нет. Мне в своей же карте не нравиться следующие:
22:08 fergas: 02:12:455 (1) - 02:45:386 (6) - 05:09:006 (1) - 05:19:696 (4) -  07:04:868 (1) - 07:26:765 (7) - 
22:09 fergas: все эти три части скудны на хорошие паттерны, и идут в резонасн с общиим стилем, но как я не пытался, я не вижу эти места по другому
22:09 fergas: и еще
22:09 -Bakari-: 02:12:455 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9NXqc.jpg
22:09 -Bakari-: вроде как, тут по вокалу 3/4
22:11 fergas: ну не знаю. Я вообще на вокал не уперался, если это можно назвать вокалом
22:11 fergas: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xf7obbVxXEY
22:11 fergas: отсюда же взято. А сылка ЛКса не работает
22:13 -Bakari-: Ох, как это классно
22:13 fergas: решил просто сфокусирвоатсья на музыки, так как стих все атки явялетсья антружем по сути
22:14 -Bakari-: Ну, там они такие явные, а музыка гасится, как бы выделяя стих 
22:14 -Bakari-: Но это на твое усмотрение
22:14 -Bakari-: А еще, у тебя красный цвет тут только из-за слова Red в названии?
22:15 fergas: с цветом? По сути да. Вообще это карте наврное месяца два, но сам бг я нашел недели 2-3 назад. Так случайно оказалось, что рандомные цвета, кторые я тыкнул, подошли под этот бг
22:16 fergas: на самом бг есть чутка красного
22:16 -Bakari-: Ну, по идее, БГ под общую гамму должен вписываться, а не под маленький кусок фона
22:16 fergas: Верно. Предлогаешьь выпилить?
22:17 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/9NXSR.png
22:17 -Bakari-: Красная звезда без красного кк? Ну уж нет.
22:17 -Bakari-: В теги можно / russian русский / добавить, имеет же отношение к треку.
22:18 fergas: добавил
22:19 fergas: пусть будет аткой красный, он и не выдилаетсья резко, но и расбовляет камму
22:19 fergas: гамму*
22:20 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/9NY4b.jpg
22:21 fergas: ок, понял
22:22 -Bakari-: Ну вот и хорошо :)
22:22 -Bakari-: 03:17:627 (2,3,4,5) - вот таких вот стаков игроки, помнится мне, не очень любят
22:23 -Bakari-: Начинаешь тапать 1/2 а тут внезпно 1/4
22:23 -Bakari-: и наоборот
22:24 fergas: ну не знаю, именоо этот читаетсья вообщзе на ура, имхо(я вообще любитель играть такие стаки)
22:25 -Bakari-: где-то еще были, если найду - кину, точно помню, что отмечал пару таких
22:25 fergas: я хочу оставить такие стаки, но те(чуть позже будут) что с 1/2 после 1/4 я все таки уберу так как ты уже третий человек который просит их убратьь 
22:25 fergas: угу, я срауз понял что ты имешь виду, можешь не искать специально
22:26 -Bakari-: Отлтчно :)
22:26 -Bakari-: 06:40:903 (7,8) - кстати
22:26 fergas: играться норм
22:27 fergas: если проблемы проходиться как стрим
22:27 fergas: на полном серьезе
22:27 -Bakari-: Может быть маленький анстак, чтоб читалось легче?
22:27 fergas: мб в началле трудно, но мне этот паттерн дико пропер
22:28 fergas: ну я специально хотел сделать акцент на то, что бы два сладйера сливались в один, если будут слишком многоо говорить о нем - чутка анстакну, но сохряню идею
22:29 -Bakari-: 02:31:592 (6) - оверлап с дефолтным хп-баром
22:30 -Bakari-: сам по себе маленький, но в кастомных скинох хп-бары частенько рисуют большущими, и это будет выглядеть ну совсем нехорошо
22:31 fergas: ясно(у меня вообще его почти нет :D ). Вопрос тогда: собственно, раньше у меня 02:31:248 (4,5,6) - без джампов и получалось так что накидываеться дволльно ярко на слайдер
22:32 fergas: http://puu.sh/9NYMb/cde541ca18.jpg
22:32 fergas: не желательно же?
22:32 -Bakari-: Тут можно просто на 3-4 клетки вниз двинуть, для избежания проблем
22:33 -Bakari-: Лучше пусть будет джамп, но чуть поменьше
22:33 fergas: ctrl+z не работает tt. Понял
22:34 fergas: http://puu.sh/9NYTR/d3cd10b7bc.jpg
22:34 -Bakari-: Да, это должно решить проблему
22:35 -Bakari-: По идее, для ровного 1/1 ритма, можно поставить серкл на 02:34:179 - там есть что-то очень тихое и это не будет овермаппингом
22:36 -Bakari-: и играться будет чуууть ровнее (polarity, etc), но звучит тихо.
22:36 fergas: вопрос: 02:40:041 (1,2) - нужно ли их сдвинуть более плотно, как я сделал в 02:34:523 (1,2) - 
22:37 -Bakari-: Они примерно одинаково выглядят, я бы оставил, как есть
22:37 fergas: "АВ"-томат. На этот слог что ли? Играться вроде норм, но поставлю
22:38 fergas: Но если честно режит слух
22:38 -Bakari-: 02:45:558 (1,2) - извини, я больше не буду напрягать подобными мелочами, но опять же, хп бар  
22:38 fergas: Ты напрягай лучше
22:39 fergas: http://puu.sh/9NZdt/8f605c64ab.jpg
22:39 -Bakari-: Ну, как скажешь, я просто думал, что ты уже и сам их найдешь :)
22:39 fergas: у меня вот такой хп бар, так что на такие вещи я джае не обращаю внимания. А в этом плане, да конечно
22:39 -Bakari-: Что-то знакомое, куро усаги?
22:40 fergas: хз. скидывали скин, где слева на экране такая няшка танцует, я просто вязл и из нее хп бар сделал :D
22:40 fergas: http://puu.sh/9NZk4/6a1b78d65e.png
22:41 -Bakari-: Она самая, надо же, я узнал :D
22:42 fergas: 02:45:558 (1,2) - раньеш у меня она была изогнута и чутка флов меняла, я ее изогнул до такого сотояния
22:42 fergas: http://puu.sh/9NZpl/95b929766d.jpg
22:43 -Bakari-: Ловится следующий объект? По виду вроде бы должно быть нормально
22:43 fergas: да
22:43 -Bakari-: 03:05:903 (7) - просто напоминаю, что слайдер должен иметь четко видимый путь от начала и до конца
22:44 fergas: не понял, с ним вроде все норм
22:44 fergas: или 03:05:817 (6) - слишком много перекрывает?
22:45 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/9NZAl.jpg
22:45 -Bakari-: Как-то бы так
22:45 -Bakari-: 03:05:558 (3,4,5,6,7) - все вот это вот вместе немного пересекается и сливается в сложночитаемый момент
22:45 fergas: ну хз. какой страный стрим, я тогда слайдер изогну
22:46 fergas: понял
22:46 -Bakari-: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
22:47 -Bakari-: Кстати о слайдерах, отсюда можно идеи потырить
22:47 fergas: видел, но как не фдохновился
22:47 -Bakari-: и немного поправить 03:11:420 (7) - подобные
22:47 fergas: вдохновился*
22:47 fergas: http://puu.sh/9NZJu/251906f8e5.jpg
22:48 -Bakari-: Отлично
22:48 fergas: 03:11:420 (7) - а что с ним не так?
22:49 fergas: забей
22:49 fergas: понял
22:49 -Bakari-: А я уж начал делать скрин ;_;
22:50 -Bakari-: 03:34:868 (8) - вот этот вроде бы читабельный, но может его чуть больше отрыть
22:50 -Bakari-: открыть* :D
22:51 fergas: Блин. Не понял ._.
22:51 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/9NZX8.jpg
22:51 fergas: не я про пердыдущий, с этим все понятно(хотя изнчально хотелс жедать его паралельным с 03:33:489 (8,1) - )
22:52 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/9O03X.jpg
22:54 fergas: 03:32:799 (2,2) - я специально хотел что бы они в стрим вливались
22:54 -Bakari-: 03:42:799 (5,1) - очень уж странно себя ведет спейсинг. или поменьше, чтоб было как стак, или побольше, чтоб был обычный паттерн
22:55 -Bakari-: 04:07:972 (5) - опять же, подвигать, чтоб был чуть понятнее
22:55 fergas: окей - стакну
22:55 -Bakari-: в редакторе видно, а в игре на скорости можно не прочитать
22:56 -Bakari-: Кстати, пока не забыл, OD7 вообще не кусается и будет неплохо играться с этой дифой
22:57 fergas: од фикснул, просто сам по себе не люблю большие показатели од и хп
22:57 fergas: http://puu.sh/9O0lT/1983771ea1.jpg
22:58 -Bakari-: Отлично
22:59 fergas: а да вопрос
22:59 fergas: начиная с этого момента 04:01:420 (1) - я чередю каждый такт по разному(всего 2 вариант) можно ведь так делать?
22:59 fergas: в том палне что музыка там по сути повторяеться
23:00 -Bakari-: variety is awesome \o/
23:00 fergas: но ноты идут каждый раз разные
23:00 fergas: got it
23:01 -Bakari-: 05:04:868 (1) - быстровато после спиннера, особенно на марафоне, когда игроки и так подустали
23:01 -Bakari-: 05:06:248 (1) - и аналогично
23:01 fergas: 03:46:937 (5) - вниз двигать же?
23:02 -Bakari-: Да
23:02 fergas: дать паузы в один ьелый тик?
23:02 fergas: белый*
23:02 fergas: я лично фанат этого паттерна(нота после спиннера)
23:02 -Bakari-: Молодец, если так сделаешь
23:02 -Bakari-: ну, это такой генератор ярости и гнева
23:02 -Bakari-: В принципе, можно и оставить, но игроки не оценят, мне кажется
23:03 fergas: ок, убавлю до белого тика
23:03 -Bakari-: 03:50:730 (2,3,4,5) - анстакнуть (3)? Какой-то сомнительный стак, в плане читабельности
23:03 -Bakari-: что-то типа 04:03:144 (2,3,4,5) - такого сделать
23:04 -Bakari-:  05:45:903 (7) - читабельность.
23:05 -Bakari-:  06:05:041 (7,8) - опять же, или стакать, как тут или 06:05:904 (3,4) - анстакать. логичнее выбрать что-то одно :(
23:05 fergas: 0,9 спейсинг что ли? я хотел обычный стак, но обычный стак сдвинул бы в другое напраление. Сделать по пиксселям стак мю(3влево, 3 вверх)
23:06 -Bakari-: Я бы 0,9 спейсинг сделал там
23:06 -Bakari-: 07:02:196 (1,1) - ну и ты понял.
23:07 -Bakari-: 07:21:765 (2,3) - ♥
23:07 fergas: ну вроде понял(цвет? + тик после спиннера)
23:07 -Bakari-: тик после спиннера.
23:07 fergas: ♥ ван лав такие паттерны 
23:08 -Bakari-: 07:26:937 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - они ме напомнили паравозы. Едут и едут, едут и едут.
23:09 fergas: ДА ОНИ ЖЕ ОФИГЕННЫЕ!
23:09 fergas: обожаю спиннеры
23:09 -Bakari-: Убрать бы их, и пусть себе музыка гаснет без объектов
23:09 fergas: все говорят чтоо нуны слайдеры
23:09 fergas: а по мне слайдеры та мне сомтряться
23:09 -Bakari-: Но рука же отсохнет крутить столько спиннеров к ряду
23:10 fergas: да ладно
23:10 fergas: они же все там простые
23:10 fergas: ну посмотрю
23:10 fergas: ооооочнеь не хочетсья их убирать
23:10 -Bakari-: Ну, поспрашивай
23:10 -Bakari-: ~конец лога

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Я не могу промоддить сейчас, извини :с
Желаю удачи с мапкой!

Desperate-kun wrote:

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  General

1. Silencing both SliderSlide and SliderTick for the same slider is unrankable. That means, you have to remove either the silenced SliderSlider or SldierTick from your samplesets. I recommend you to delete the SliderTick and just set it to Tickrate 1. Basically, there's no sense in keeping Tickrate 2 anyways when you silence the ticks.Tottaly agree. It's my mistake.
2. Your custom HitNormals are just awkward and don't fit the song at all. This song has very clear and good drums, so you just destroy the atmosphere completely by having clicks like this. Take a look at maps like this. It's a similiar atmosphere in the song but the hitsounding adds much more to it. Also, your extended sliders like this 04:35:558 (5) or spinners like that 07:29:696 (1) which end on the blue tick sound horrible with those clicking-sounds. If you just change the HitNormals to the regular ones it will be much better already I will delate "normal-hitnormal" "soft-hitnormal"
3. Your hitsounding in general, besides the HitNormal issue, feels pretty empty at some sections of the song. Don't fear to add more hitsounds, they contribute much to the atmosphere of the song:
   ~ For "obvious" cymbal sounds in the music, for example 02:12:454 or 02:55:213 or 03:07:627, use finishes (regular soft ones, not your custom ones) to emphasize these. Listen clearly to the song and I'm sure you can spot all of them and add some finishes
   ~ Try to use your custom Clap more often. It's a rather calm one, so you can use it to emphasize more notes without sounding too strong. For example, you can easily add a clap to every note from 02:51:075 until 02:56:161, that's what those hitsounds are made for :3 Fell sorry for hitsounds but it's my most weak part. When i start working with sounds, my head turns off D: Basiclly i trying to make hitsounds which at least suits for map. In future i will improve myslef.
4. You can remove "bass" from the tags, since it appears in "drum & bass" anyways.Done
5. The correct tag should be "experimental", since "experiemental" seems to be a spelling error.Done
6. Your overlaps are contributing much to your style, but you could try to make them a bit more consistent and tidy. Patterns like this 03:20:386 (2,3,4,1) where all the sliders are touching each other with different spacing and in a different way or patterns like this 05:41:075 (2,3,4,1) where you even have multiple overlaps at once make it feel rather cramped than fun to play.Found 4 overlaps with different spacing. Normalized. Well... about mutiple overlaps. I undertood your idea and will keep in mind. However i wont change anything here. I did it on purpose and see song exactly in this way. It future i will try to make such patterns more wide.

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  Specific

1. 02:38:144 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try to avoid stacking circles with different timespacing onto each other, since it may confuse players. Sometimes it's okay, but looking at this one when playing you can't really notice it from the approach circles Tapping it correctly is completely based on intuition, which shouldn't be the case. Try moving 02:38:144 (4) to a different position to fix it, for example do something like in my screenshot. Also, please find the other ones yourself and fix them as well Next mod with this notice - i will delate them all. But i really-really love such patterns
   
   Example

   
2. 02:43:489 (3) - Curving this slider less would improve the flow much, try it:Done. Till i wanted to do something with it before
   
   Example

   
3. 02:45:558 - What you did in this section is a nice idea, to slowly build up the density. But it kind of breaks your style of before where you mainly followed drums, since they are almost the same in this section than before. I'd highly recommend you to add some notes to this section, maybe some streams for these 02:46:592 drum sounds.I understand your idea but there is some points why i dont want to do this. Firstly, i want that player clearly understand there is end of easier part. Secondary, start of this stream 02:49:351 - lie in really weak beat beside 02:49:006 (2) - i would be exstrmly hard momnet to play - understand when stream starts.
4. 03:48:661 (5,1) - I know you love overlaps, but things like this where 1/2-sliders touch each other in a random way like this just look awkward, especially since the 1/4-overlap before 03:48:317 (4,5) doesn't look much different. You could try to avoid some overlaps where they are not necessary, in my opinion, in order to make it more player-friendly and give the map more of a structure.Got it. Replaced about 6 same moments.
5. 04:19:351 (1,2) - The transition feels kind of bad at the moment. The easiest solution would be to curve (1) the other way, like in my screenshot, but maybe you can find a better solution on your own.Got it, but did in another way
   
   My solution

   
   Example

   
6. 04:34:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice idea to put jumps into these, but it doesn't flow very well. This 04:35:213 (3,4,5) plays rather awkward, since the player has to slow down the movement extremely after (4). I'd highly recommend you to change these circles to a regular curve without jumps, that means to Ctrl+G on 04:35:041 (2,3). Same applies to the other patterns like this in this section Understand. I will decide later what to do(prob it will be as u said
7. 04:52:454 - In the section starting here, your jump patterns felt overdone for me. Thought it was a bit less calm than the previous section, it's still a build-up section, which means that you should keep it a bit more simple here.I tired to fell that violin's\cello's\piono's flows and guess atm they suit great for music. But i will change if someone will write again.
8. 05:51:765 (1,2) - Ending these on blue ticks sounds really bad. Try ending them on the red ticks and silence the slidertails (5% + Soft Sampleset).Didnt do 5% but lower volume
9. 06:29:006 - This section is the best you've been doing here, really great job on this one! It has some flow breaks but they fit perfectly with the song and in general this section has a very dramatic feeling to it I also love it!!! So epic and at the same time not hard to play.

Well, I got not much to say on specifics, since your flow and rhythm are pretty good. There are only some basic mistakes (yes, I'd consider these as mistakes, sorryi am agree with you) you have to fix, especially according to hitsounding xO AAAAAAA and overlaps, and the map will be awesome!
Also, you have a very typical russian mapping-style, congratulations ^-^ ? xd Thanks btw

Good luck! Thanks!

1. 02:13:834 (1) - Лично я бы повернула его как-то так:
   
   
2. 02:23:489 (1) - Тоже, ctrl+j и ctrl+h
3. 02:28:144 (2,3) - Не лучше ли сделать наоборот?
   
   
4. 02:45:386 (6) - У меня вышло криво, но ты понял:
   
   
5. 04:04:868 (5) - Опять же, кривовато, но вот так:
   
   
6. И упомянутый Бакой конец со спиннерами. Ну серьезно, я устала их крутить, когда играла. Несмотря на то, что они простые, это выглядит нудно и некрасиво. Можно сделать AugoEidEs v2 (если ты играл версию happy30, то ты знаешь, как там заканчивается диффа)
   Так вот, 2 спиннера. Первый начинаешь на 07:26:937 - и заканчиваешь на 07:37:886 -
   Многоспин не очень выглядит и играется нудно. Если не принял мой вариант, то настоятельно рекомендую подумать/посоветоваться с кем-то опытным по этому поводу.

AlexaBM wrote:

На Земле безжалостно маленькой
жил да был моддер маленький
И написал он модик маленький
Ибо карта вообще збс.

[Marathon]

1. 02:13:834 (1) - Лично я бы повернула его как-то так:Не подходит под стиль, имхо. Однако если это был на то, что(1) и (2) стоят слишком близко - я перенес все красное комбо, и слегка выпрямил слайдер.
   
   
2. 02:23:489 (1) - Тоже, ctrl+j и ctrl+h ^. Ну вообще если на то пошло, я обожаю когда слайдеры такие пересекающиеся дуги пишу.
3. 02:28:144 (2,3) - Не лучше ли сделать наоборот? Действительно. Здесь этого не хватало.
   
   
4. 02:45:386 (6) - У меня вышло криво, но ты понял:Угу. Только я 1.2 раздвинул квадрат и все равно сместил ноту немножечко вниз от центра.Сейчас ноты выглядят более разряжено. Хочу именно смещенную чутка внизу ноту.
   
   
5. 04:04:868 (5) - Опять же, кривовато, но вот так:Я люблю использовать такие слайдеры, для подчеркивания какого-либо особенного звука или его отсутствие, здесь же играет все тот же инструмент. Однако я чутка изменил форму слайдера: увеличил дистанцию (5)-(1).
   
   
6. И упомянутый Бакой конец со спиннерами. Ну серьезно, я устала их крутить, когда играла. Несмотря на то, что они простые, это выглядит нудно и некрасиво. Можно сделать AugoEidEs v2 (если ты играл версию happy30, то ты знаешь, как там заканчивается диффа)
   Так вот, 2 спиннера. Первый начинаешь на 07:26:937 - и заканчиваешь на 07:37:886 -
   Многоспин не очень выглядит и играется нудно. Если не принял мой вариант, то настоятельно рекомендую подумать/посоветоваться с кем-то опытным по этому поводу.И так: сделал пока что по-твоему. OD7 спиннеры примерно по 21 и 7. Посмотрим, что получиться. Было предложение от 340 сделать очень медленные слайдеры, я пытался реализовать несколько раз, но это не во что не вылилось. Скорее всего чуть позже оставлю место пустым. Не любит народ спиннеры(((

Ничего более сказать не могу, perfect Спасибо
DnB <3 <3 Один из немногих семи минутных треков, которые действительно интересно замапать на всю длинну. Ну Рецептоp доставляет.
Удачи (:

RenzMichael wrote:

From my queue :3

[General]

wow


In the whole map, you used bad overlaps, Im not gonna point them 1 by 1, because this mod will be too long, but I will point out the worst overlaps.

The combo colors doesnt realy fit the music. It should be a strong song,
bout because of that pinkish color it has become gayish. Make every color
near to gray I think? Ok i will think, but the main idea here is war(as i feel) excatly about Second World War. One of the war's colors is red. Als, there is soviet poem about "little" hero - one of the color of soviet's is red. Dat my enlgish is so bad. I will try to add a little more gamma for red.

And also, Note: All are suggestions.

[Marathon]

02:12:454 - < This , I think is very early to start 5 circle streams, yes I know its DnB, but I guess players need a warm up because first it is marathon ,people will get tired quickly, but not entirely marathon, since you threw 2 mins out. 174 bpm isn't hard to stream. My fingers never get tired throw the all song.
02:14:351 - You threw a fust jump. Not sure if its helpful.May be later i will move (2)->(3)->(4)...
02:24:523 - This stream's design seem so bland.Didnt excatly understand. But fixed till such steam is uniq
02:35:558 - Some circles on the stream are being by the slider body, So it makes it difficult to read.Guess no. Its clearly that i will put white tick length stream here.
02:39:696 (4) - Why not make a nice symmetry to (3) by pulling of -21 degrees?No idea. Really missed that
02:41:420 (1) - Bad overlap. Doesnt seem to amuse me.Made little curved
02:55:299 (1) - Remove NC, I dont think this even make me happy, it disgusts me. NC usually dont start in blue ticks, and its not even the start of the stream. (3) is. Ok but i tried to make accent for trianlge pattern
02:56:248 - Now, NC here to emphasize this type of sound, and to lessen combo.I am using nc only for other speeds or sometime for patterns. Dont see any reason to use it here
03:01:420 (3,4) - I dont even know why this is done, you ignored a lot of streams, plus a bad overlap, making it dirty and badly layout.Perfect overlap ~O~ Wont change anyhting till i like that so hard
03:06:592 (2) - Same as above.
03:12:455 (3,4) - Same.
03:20:041 - Now I get your point here. You emphasize the piano. But couldnt (1) be extended for another 1/4? I didn't emphasize piano. May be a little but still i save same note's composition. Only changed some patterns till music also cahnges.
03:23:748 - Too straight stream and very boring. Not for me
03:25:558 - Refer to mod number 12 please.
03:31:075 - Same.
03:36:592 - Same.
03:40:386 - Bad overlap w/ (2)Fixed but only one. Second is ok
03:47:282 - Bad overlap.Its a great.
03:51:765 - Here. Nevermind, dont change, since its a new section and needs changes on rhythm.
03:58:661 - Bad overlap.Good
04:35:558 - This is too long. Reduce it of 1/4. Yes, i know you emphasize next vioilin, but no need, its a slow section.It follows to music. Exactly is 04:35:558 (5,1) - is one cello's sound when (5) get cut by changing direction and speed of the bow(cant explain on enlgish) . I wont change
04:44:868 - Too bad. Theyre all stacked.And? in the gane they gonna be unstacked
05:29:782 (1) - Remove NC as before. same
05:30:730 - Add NC.
05:35:558 - Why? There's no piano. And ignored lot of notes, plus bad overlap. Same as b4 i emphasize that bass sound.
05:41:075 - Same as above.
05:46:248 - Same.
05:51:765 - Decrease of 1/4. I will delate if someone will write again.
05:54:265 - You make 3/4 sliders here. After the 3/4 the next slider is unreadable. Never got problems with this place. Basically that palce got harder beat. I try to found another pattern, but guess its ok.
05:54:523 - Like this.
05:55:558 - Plus this. Didnt understand what u want to write with this two
06:17:972 - I dont know like to speed up kiai times alot, but I find it useless on your song.I love it and wont remove in anyway
06:43:317 - You ignore the stream alot,,. And?
06:45:041 - Same. I know youre following the piano, but its DnB right? now this goes for everything that is same. If i would follow only beat i can cut this song to 3 min mapset. Didnt understand why you dont like it.
07:12:454 - Bad overlap.If you join (4) to this overlap, it will become a great overlap. To violin's sounds 07:12:110 (2,3,4) - adds cello's sound 07:12:799 (4) - . I tired to stack them, but plays really horriable.

DoYouPlay_Osu wrote:

Wooo I love this map

02:17:799 (6,1) - Flow here is awkward. Instead, make it perhaps like Got it. Was little problem with angle - rotated to -7. Btw dont feel that this jumps suits here

SPOILER

03:44:868 - Maybe a flash of Kiai here? !!! Fogot about this at all! Thanks to remaind. I will put some fountains during the map.
05:03:489 (5) - NC fixed
05:51:420 (9,1) - Awkward flow here as well. Consider rotating it 180 degrees around the starting point. Dunno. I feel it ok. BUT was little mistake with slider's body (1). Redrawed a bit
05:56:937 (7,8,9) - Make this further than the last. Bring it down and right maybe Hmm... I understand uw anted to say that this place is a bit unreadable. Yeah! I fixed it in abit another way - moved this 05:56:248 (2,3,4,5) - down and gave little rotate
06:17:282 (5,6,7,8) - Make these jumps bigger Nah. This pattern is really hard at the moment, no need to amke it harder. Whatever. Swithced 06:17:627 (7,8) - it easier to play.

Really not much else I can say aside from well done. Thanks

1. 00:28:623 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stack them on 00:28:106 (2) -
2. 00:36:726 (3) - I'd Ctrl+G dis !
3. 00:48:968 (3,6,1) - Be careful ! 2 notes are overlapping the slider !
4. 00:52:071 (5,1) - Stack these notes !
5. 01:13:450 (2,3,4,1) - Oh men , these overlap ! It's kinda weird readable !
6. 01:18:968 (2,3,4,1) - Same as above !
7. 01:27:244 (2,3,4,1) - Same as above !
8. 01:28:623 (2,3,4) - Same as above !
9. 01:30:002 (2,3) - Same as above !
10. 01:31:381 (2) - I'd blanket (1)
11. 01:32:416 (1) - Same as above !
12. I'll stop speaking about overlaps cause there's a ton of them!
13. 01:34:140 (2) - I'd blanket !
14. 01:53:795 (5,6) - Stack it ?
15. 01:55:519 (5) - Same as above !
16. 02:18:968 (5) - Same as above !
17. 02:20:347 (6) - Same as above !
18. 02:54:657 (6,1) - Same as above !
19. 02:56:381 (5) - Stack it on (1)'s tail ?

1. And then , it's the saaaaaaaame thing. The map plays fine but overlaps and notes unstacked breaks the flow but I guess it was your choice. However , the map plays fine >­//< Good luck !

Secretpipe wrote:

Hai !

Trying to mod this !
Sorry if the mod isn't useful but idk how to mod that !
NO KD Yes kd, till you spent time to check it

[Glory]

1. 00:28:623 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stack them on 00:28:106 (2) - i wont till in game it will be stacked. Stack's system will move 5(head of the stream) to (-3*(notes in stacks in this case 5);-3*(blabla...)). I mean that in game (5) will have coordinates (444;52)
2. 00:36:726 (3) - I'd Ctrl+G dis ! Hm. I will think about it later. Not bad idea but not sure i will fix it till i want to see that copypast pattern with 45 deg rotations. However your choice gives better flow.
3. 00:48:968 (3,6,1) - Be careful ! 2 notes are overlapping the slider ! I will take care its kind of bad overlap i wanted to ssee pentagon here. Dunno. I will ask people about it. MAybe it i will just scalw that pattern
4. 00:52:071 (5,1) - Stack these notes ! Did it on purpose. !!ALSO!! End of the slider will be too high. Some times people have huge hp bars which goona overlap hit objects.
5. 01:13:450 (2,3,4,1) - Oh men , these overlap ! It's kinda weird readable ! It's great :3
6. 01:18:968 (2,3,4,1) - Same as above !
7. 01:27:244 (2,3,4,1) - Same as above !
8. 01:28:623 (2,3,4) - Same as above ! Fixed that place according to alek's mod. Made bigger angle between 01:28:968 (3,4) -
9. 01:30:002 (2,3) - Same as above !
10. 01:31:381 (2) - I'd blanket (1) I just want to see straight slider. Nothing more
11. 01:32:416 (1) - Same as above ! Definitely i wont change till this is pattern 01:32:071 (7,1) - copypast and ds from the head of (7)
12. I'll stop speaking about overlaps cause there's a ton of them!
13. 01:34:140 (2) - I'd blanket ! No need here. I will break flow
14. 01:53:795 (5,6) - Stack it ? Prob yes cause number (6) is invisable. But still i will try to save it
15. 01:55:519 (5) - Same as above ! No
16. 02:18:968 (5) - Same as above ! No
17. 02:20:347 (6) - Same as above ! No
18. 02:54:657 (6,1) - Same as above ! Yup. Redrawed this place.
19. 02:56:381 (5) - Stack it on (1)'s tail ?

No

1. And then , it's the saaaaaaaame thing. The map plays fine but overlaps and notes unstacked breaks the flow but I guess it was your choice. However , the map plays fine Hopefully you didnt see early map. It was full of overlap. Many bad overlaps i am alreadu have removed. I guess all this overlaps is awesome. If they are unrunkable(but they shuldn't) this map will go to graveyard >­//< Good luck !Thanks

1. I think HP+1. 6 is bit easy.
2. 00:19:312 (1) - remove whistle and add finish. because this part is symbals part. not fit.
3. 00:30:347 (1) - ^ add finish slider head. remove whistle.
4. 00:41:381 (1) - ^
5. 00:57:933 (1) - add finish. sample set soft. remove whistle. also, why custom-finish is clap sound?
6. 01:00:692 (1) - ^
7. 01:02:071 (3) - ^
8. 01:03:450 (1) - ^ slider head. sample set soft.
9. 01:14:485 (1) - ^
10. 01:20:002 (1) - ^
11. 01:22:761 (1) - ^
12. 01:24:140 (1) - ^
13. 01:24:830 (5) - ^
14. 01:25:519 (1) - ^
15. 01:36:554 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
16. 01:42:071 (1) - ^
17. 01:47:588 (1) - ^
18. 01:48:968 (1,5) - ^
19. 01:51:726 (1) - ^
20. 01:58:623 (1,3,1,4) - ^
21. 02:01:381 (1) - ^
22. 02:11:037 (1,5,1) - ^
23. 02:17:933 (1) - ^
24. 02:20:692 (1,1,1) - ^
25. 02:26:209 (1,1,3,5) - ^
26. 03:15:864 (1) - ^
27. 03:26:899 (1) - ^
28. 03:32:416 (1) - ^
29. 03:35:175 (1) - ^
30. 03:36:554 (3,11) - ^
31. 03:37:933 (1) - ^
32. 03:48:968 (1) - ^
33. 03:54:485 (1) - ^
34. 03:57:244 (1,1,1) - ^
35. 04:08:278 (1,3,1,5,1) - ^
36. 04:20:692 (1,5) - ^
37. 04:24:830 (1) - ^
38. 04:30:347 (1) - ^
39. 04:31:726 (1) - ^
40. 04:33:106 (1,5,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
41. 04:38:623 (1) - ^
42. 04:41:037 (6,1) - ^
43. 04:44:140 (1,1,3,1) - ^
44. 04:52:071 (6,1) - ^
45. 04:57:933 (1) - ^
46. 05:03:450 (1) - ^
47. 05:06:209 (1,1,1) - ^
48. 05:11:726 (1) - ^
    
    that' all i want to say. try add finish, symabals part.
    good luck!

P o M u T a wrote:

[Gloli]

1. I think HP+1. 6 is bit easy. Dont thinks so. But i will talk to people about it.
   
2. 00:57:933 (1) - add finish. sample set soft. remove whistle. also, why custom-finish is clap sound? Cause i was noob when i was putting hitsounds. Soon i gonna remap that stupid mistake -_-
   
   that' all i want to say. try add finish, symabals part.
   good luck! Thanks!

1. I suggest AR8.7 or 8.8
2. 00:22:071 (1) - I suggest Ctrl+G to make a jump to this strong beat.
3. 00:38:450 (6,1) - Increase spacing to emphasize (1).
4. 00:41:037 (4) - I think you should remove this circle, as there is no note in the music here.
5. 00:43:795 (5,6,1) - This flow is awkward, because I'd naturally expect for (1) to be left of (6), following the pattern of the circles before it. Therefore, I suggest reversing (1) using Ctrl+G.
6. 00:45:002 (4) - Unstack to prevent confusing the player into clicking 1/4 after that note where it's empty.
7. 00:54:485 (2,1) - Spacing is too small.
8. 01:03:450 - I feel like the way you mapped this section doesn't really do justice to the drop in the music. I feel that you used too many small spacings, where the song seems to call for jumps, especially on beats two and four with the drum.
9. 01:30:692 - I feel there should be some sort of triplet (1/3 beat spacing?) here to match the music.
10. 01:50:347 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you should use slightly larger spacing here. I found the sudden decrease in distance spacing a bit awkward to play.
11. 02:27:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a regular pentagon/star (with all distances and angles the same). You can do this either using the polygon tool and scale tool, or copy paste a pair of notes to rotate by 144 degrees multiple times.
12. 03:54:399 (1) - Should be at 03:54:485
13. 04:23:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make all of these move left to right as well, like the pattern before it.
14. 04:24:830 - Starting here, the timing goes to 3+3+2 until until 04:33:106 so it doesn't really fit with 4/4 time signature. Happens again from 04:35:864 until 04:41:381
15. 04:25:864 (6,1) - Swap NC around to match the feel of the song.
16. 04:26:899 (6) - Add NC.
17. Do the above two steps for the rest of the section until 04:33:106 and then again from 04:35:864 until 04:41:381
18. 05:18:278 (4) - Separate this like you did with the rest of these figures.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

[Glory]

1. I suggest AR8.7 or 8.8 Idk. 8.7 imo 2 slow but 8.8 suits not bad for tempo. I will take care about such ar adn maybe later cahnge it.
2. 00:22:071 (1) - I suggest Ctrl+G to make a jump to this strong beat. Not sure that it need here. Firstly it brokes a flow in my view and also that would be strange place(uniq jump on this beat suring all intro).
3. 00:38:450 (6,1) - Increase spacing to emphasize (1). moved (1) a bit down cant up (6) cause may be problems with overlapping hp bar.
4. 00:41:037 (4) - I think you should remove this circle, as there is no note in the music here. Some mods ago. It was about to add circle in this place. I will take care about this place but atm wont remove.
5. 00:43:795 (5,6,1) - This flow is awkward, because I'd naturally expect for (1) to be left of (6), following the pattern of the circles before it. Therefore, I suggest reversing (1) using Ctrl+G. Pattern copypast (2,3) adn rotate to 15. I guess its ok.
6. 00:45:002 (4) - Unstack to prevent confusing the player into clicking 1/4 after that note where it's empty. Nope. I decied to save such places.
7. 00:54:485 (2,1) - Spacing is too small. I dont feel that here need to follow ds
8. 01:03:450 - I feel like the way you mapped this section doesn't really do justice to the drop in the music. I feel that you used too many small spacings, where the song seems to call for jumps, especially on beats two and four with the drum. Just take it: i dont see this track with jumps at all. Only kiai.
9. 01:30:692 - I feel there should be some sort of triplet (1/3 beat spacing?) here to match the music. Clear beat on (4) and 3 cello's sounds after. Dont see any problems with it.
10. 01:50:347 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you should use slightly larger spacing here. I found the sudden decrease in distance spacing a bit awkward to play. Sorry bit i see this place only in this pattern and nothing more. I want to emphasize that one curve lane from slider's starts.
11. 02:27:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a regular pentagon/star (with all distances and angles the same). You can do this either using the polygon tool and scale tool, or copy paste a pair of notes to rotate by 144 degrees multiple times. Yup. It was a bit dirty
12. 03:54:399 (1) - Should be at 03:54:485 WOW Today worked with hs and seems accidentally moved it
13. 04:23:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make all of these move left to right as well, like the pattern before it. I want to emphasize cell's sound with such antijumps pattern. Also no space to continue this pattern and i dont want to change moving direction full patternat all
14. 04:24:830 - Starting here, the timing goes to 3+3+2 until until 04:33:106 so it doesn't really fit with 4/4 time signature. Happens again from 04:35:864 until 04:41:381 Got it. NC is on the way.
15. 04:25:864 (6,1) - Swap NC around to match the feel of the song.
16. 04:26:899 (6) - Add NC.
17. Do the above two steps for the rest of the section until 04:33:106 and then again from 04:35:864 until 04:41:381
18. 05:18:278 (4) - Separate this like you did with the rest of these figures.

236,99,216554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,61,216640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,33,216726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,25,216812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,42,216898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,76,216985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,113,217071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,144,217157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,182,217243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,216,217329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,243,217415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,238,217502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,214,217588,2,0,B|455:183|455:183|484:188|484:188|497:159|497:159|527:139,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Sieg wrote:

Hello

as requested

Генерал:
нельзя одновременно сайленсить sliderslide и slidertick Блин блин блин. Удалил тик для нормала, забыл про софт.
you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

Glory:
ОД бы повыше 8? Ну хз. Я не особо заворачивался над сложностью. Думаю 8 уже перебор(может быть ты хп имел ввиду? ._.)
00:24:657 (6,1) - 00:24:657 (6,1) - сломанный флоу тут отлично подходит еще бы джамп чуть больше Отодвинул чутка вниз. Вообще если обратишь внимание, тут 6 нот(подледная нот - слайдер ), которые сходятся в одну прямую по центру 00:24:140 (3,5,1) - так сложилось, что это паттерн перестал быть четким со стороны координат. Раньше все парные ноты были на 1.5 дистанции. И вот шестрочку забыл подвинуть.
00:27:416 (4,1) - стак, точно уверен? :\ Да
00:35:692 (4,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap8OI/fc6b136e48.jpg
01:21:381 (1) - подвинуть его под 01:21:726 (2) чтобы переход 01:21:726 (2,3) - игрался ну совсем хорошо http://puu.sh/aoUIm/4c28eccfa3.jpg Да
01:22:761 (1,2,3) - а вот тут отлично сделано Меня прикольнула идея, что можно нажать ноту, а потом провести стрим в обратную сторону.
02:00:692 (4) - финиш лишний имо Хз. Под музыку вроде.
02:01:985 () - сюда бы ноту и как-то весь паттерн поменять Акцентировал внимание на струнный звук. Оставлю без изменений все 3 такта.
02:03:709 () - ^
02:04:744 (5) - много триплетов тут пропустил
02:05:175 (7) - тут лучше сделать http://puu.sh/aoV7C/f6d0244dce.jpg ибо у тебя слайдер енд на начале крутого триплета в музыке Долго думал над этим местом, когда еще мапал. Все таки я делаю сильный акцент на струнные, это раз. Звук этот незначительный. Интересный, но незначительный, что бы подчеркивать его, имо.
02:11:726 (5) - замедление св сюда бы хорошо зашло, только не сильно большое Вай нот? 1.0 без нк. Читаемо и приятно.
02:45:692 (1) - лишняя Угу давно хотел удалить, но рука не поднималась. Бтв перемапал все комбо
02:46:899 (1) - короче на 1\2, http://puu.sh/aoVkc/84e7908762.jpg консистенси же вроде Ничего не знаю, все по музыке.
03:00:519 (5) - мне кажется уехала она слишком, мб что-то типо http://puu.sh/aoVpi/cad9e41bfa.jpg Дело говоришь
03:06:037 (5,1) - дс между ними нужно больше, опять же консистенси Не чувствую здесь сильного джампа, но чутка отдалил. играться стала проще.
03:36:554 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - нет ну если ты хотел его кривым сделать таким, то не трогай, а можно так Я просто криворукий. Твой вариант забираю.http://puu.sh/aoVAM/5a5560210e.jpg

236,99,216554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,61,216640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,33,216726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,25,216812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,42,216898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,76,216985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,113,217071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,144,217157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,182,217243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,216,217329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,243,217415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,238,217502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,214,217588,2,0,B|455:183|455:183|484:188|484:188|497:159|497:159|527:139,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:38:968 (7) - свисток на этом рипит слайдере заучит странно, т.е. не сам свисток в этом месте, а то что он на 2 рипит слайдере, теряется звук от рипитов -> смысл рипит от слайдера Не поспоришь
03:44:485 (7) - ^
03:50:002 (7) - ^
04:07:071 (2,3) - может это в слайдер, под музыку вроде больше подходит, подумай Нет. Во-первых, я не собираюсь сильные биты на конец слайдера ставить. Во вторых, весьма не плохо сама по себе карта звучит, имхо, после таких стримов и далее пару триплет 1/2.

киаи охуенно Полностью согласен.

04:47:761 (7,8) - это конечно крутая техника, но так неудобно играть Вообще забей я так с ними парился. Согласен визуально паттерн великолепен, но после месяца рассуждений я понял что надо что-то менять. Самое смешное что буквально сегодня пришла идея как ремапнуть и она близка к твоей, но с маленькой оговоркой http://puu.sh/apax3/991415d209.jpg Самое дурацкое, что это же моя карта, которую я мапал сразу после редстара. Как я вообще про него забыл? Помню что он мне дико понравился, но применить на редстар у меня руки не дошли. Визуальней он стоит рядом, играбельность хз, но на 88 бпм 1/4 вроде тянет Если интересно.
04:48:450 (2,3) - ^ если все это дело развернуть, то будет намного лучше в плане игры http://puu.sh/aoW1b/7f97a3e24c.jpg
04:49:140 (7,8) - ^ ну и далее
05:15:692 (7,1) - тут бы дс побольше как во всех следующих случаях, не забудь про свой стак 05:16:209 (2) - если будешь делать, он хорош Хз я хотел подчеркнуть конец такта + плюс такой жирный звук. Так и хочется сказать: стоп, точка, здесь пауза 1/1 дай аиму отдохнуть.
05:33:795 (1) - я уснул крутить уже первый а там еще и 2й :\ просто ноту с финишем сюда 05:33:795 (), спиннеры выкинуть Последняя капля. Прощайте мои милые спиннеры

Удачи! Спасибо!

ts8zs wrote:

00:24:657 (6) - 40,48 Kind of unreadable for me and suits fior my style
Whistle doesn't fit as I heard,Too light,and listens happy. I will keep in mind about this.
01:01:037 (3) - finish for this 2 notes no reasons
01:02:416 (7) - finish?
02:26:209 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1872292 Not bad ideam but dont suits for my style.
02:35:864 (1,2,3,4) - square? No, stack
02:47:761 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1872294 Some mods ago i decide to leave "calm" part wo any jumps. Before close staff
02:56:037 (3,4,5) - ^
03:10:433 (1) - end at 03:11:726 - Personality want to see here this pattern. Spinner->spinner->spinner will be boring and not interesting to play
03:11:813 (1) - ^
03:13:192 (1) - ^
04:24:485 (7,8) - swap Changed it some mods ago. Personlity my variant easier to play and iw ant to make this place easy as possiable
05:14:140 (6) - Ctrl+G Good
Many good patterns :3 :3

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

       General

1. I have made some research and found out that since your map is technically a marathon (Over 5 minutes drain time) and your difficulty name isn't something relted to marathons at all, you can add "Marathon" in your tags to clarify that you want this map to be approved as a marathon.
   Yup. Added
   
   

   Glory

2. Just a suggestion: Bring the AR up by 0.3? It makes some patterns play better. No need at all. 174 bpm. Insted of thinking about decrease AR.
    
3. 04:30:692 (2,3) - This jump is one of the few things that catched my eyes while testplayng. Is there a reason for it to be this big? The previous ones were just fine. I'd suggest to move 04:30:692 (2) - closer to 04:30:864 (3) - . Took a lot of time tothink. This jump only becasue of pattern's variety. Before this there 2 harder jumps than this one. Leave without changes.
   
4. From 02:59:313 - to 03:10:002 - , in my opinion there are a couple of unnecessary whistles that don't quite fit with the song. I'll list them out for you and explain why, for me, they shouldn't be there. Totally agree. Fixed
    
   03:00:692 (1) - Compared to the previous one there's no bass supporting the song in the background, thus another whistle here sounds out of place.
   03:03:450 (1) - ^
    
   The others are fine and fit very well since they're "covered" by the song.
    
5. 03:40:002 (3,7) - Add whistle on both and then listen to the stream again. It sounds much better. Really nice idea. Used.
    
6. 03:45:519 (3,7) - Add whistle, same reasoning.^
    
7. 03:51:037 (3,7) - ^
    
8. 03:41:381 (3) - Add whistle here and 03:41:726 (7) - on this slider head. The whole stream sounds better. Not usre about this. For my opinion hitsoudns become supersaturated(? google translate). If i will add them here i also have to add them first part. Guess no need here.
   
9. 03:46:899 (3,7) - ^
    
10. 03:52:416 (3,7) - ^
     
11. 03:53:795 (3) - Add whistle
     
12. 03:54:140 (4) - ^
     
13. It doesen't really matter in gameplay therms, but there are a couple of unsnapped green lines: Fixed. Got some problems after cutting song with transition all timing section - ALL 1 sec earlier Thanks to attention.
     
    03:59:226 - 1ms early
    03:59:313 - 2ms early Fixed this after moved all section.
     
     
     
    頑張って Thanks!

MillhioreF wrote:

I know you said I didn't have to m4m, but your mod really was helpful, so I think it's only fair! Besides, you don't have much stuff to point out either, it's already so good. I am happy that mod was usefull. Problem that i am not fun of 2010 so i cant say too many about such maps.

[Glory]

00:32:416 (3,5,1) - Make these all the same distance apart? Same with 00:32:244 (2,4,6). Fixed. ~1.58 dc sanpped
00:35:347 (3) - Might look better with the end stacked under 00:34:485 (1), but it's just a suggestion.Too long to explain. Just i like such not full overlaps.
00:36:381 (2) - Stack under 00:34:485 (1) - also? It's just nazi at this point but I like how it looks. Pretty ok but it will need tons of flow's remap fro next notes. I am lazy :zzz In the end no real need
00:54:485 (2) - Isn't perfectly stacked, restack plz! IDK just once all this unstacks appers from nowhere. Somewhere was mod by [-MrSergio-] where all little stacks was fixed. Anf later this stuff D: Also i can stack them only by typing coordination ;ss Whatever fixed. Is that bug?
00:55:864 (2) - Same.
00:57:244 (2) - And again.
01:50:347 (1) - Stack trace exception
01:53:450 (2) - Stack on top of 01:52:761 (6) - please
01:55:175 (4) - Stack-- okay you know what, this is a bit silly, I'm not gonna list them any more. Just check all circles under sliderends, about 50% of them are unstacked by 1-2px \D:/ Maybe i should write technical support that in-editor stacker(dunno how to call it) cant make ideal 0,00 stack?
02:42:761 (1,2) - Nazi blanket NAZI!
03:21:381 (1) - ^
03:52:761 (7) - This is a bit confusing to read because you're covering up at least half the slider trail with 03:52:675 (6). Consider a slight redesign. Hard to solve wo any huge redrawing. I moved stream a bit down, to emphize slider's body. Still overlapping half body but now viasialbe looks easier to read.
04:42:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delicious. <3 I really liked that star which become smaller with every next object. I am proud about this pattern.
04:55:519 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Consider the polygon tool if you meant to make a perfect star here, if you intended it to look a bit munted then ignore this suggestion. I guess its ok star. Also this place mostly about flow, not pattern.

Really nothing seriously wrong here. I could easily see the map being ranked in its current state, visual blemishes aside. (Don't feel bad about all the stack failures, I think that was an editor bug at the time you mapped this!)

Удачи! Спасибо!