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Well, since there is a full version and it's an ending, you could add TV Size in tags... unless this is a cut mp3.
Disable Widescreen Support in Desperate's Insane, that's especially for SB and you don't have it.
Nice mapset, I'd like to see an Easy but it's ok enough I think. Lovely song, btw.

Normal

00:26:015 (5) - I think this will flow better if you add Ctrl+J here and move it to y:53 (same place).
00:33:215 (4,1) - Nice blanket, but I think they are too close and I'd improve this a bit.
00:50:015 (5) - For consistency, here should be a NC.
Changing SV is not a good idea for Easy or Normal imo, they already are kinda slow, think about this another time.
00:51:935 (1,1) - I'd finish spinner at 00:53:855 (1) - but I'm not sure if it's already rankeable and good enough.
01:03:455 (1,2,3) - DID I JUST SEE SYMMETRY
01:16:895 (4) - Ctrl+H and move it to x:104 y:184. Maybe a bit nazi, but flows better imo.
01:21:695 (1,2) - Maybe NC should be added on (2) since that stanza.
Clean diff, nothing much to say.

Hard

00:11:375 (1,2) - NC is more necessary on (2), imo.
00:38:495 (1) - This type of slider feels a bit out of place for me here. You've been using straight and curve sliders, so, I'd curve this slider, at least a bit.
01:18:815 (3) - NC.
01:22:655 (4) - Same.
01:28:415 (6) - And same.
I really liked it, I didn't know what to say, those little jumps seem really nice to play, yay~

Desperate's Insane

00:45:935 (1,2) - What about moving (2) to x:305 y:336? Would look better imo.
01:18:815 - I'd make kiai finish here like the other diffs, and I wouldn't add the last one, seems unnecessary for me.
01:28:415 (6) - NC.
Pro Insane, I just wanted to say some suggestions indeed. But seriously, there's nothing much to improve.

Sorry for this poor mod, but at least I hope you appreciate my suggestions.

Good luck~

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2014-10-15T13:32:59+00:00

Baka !

- General :

Preview point is different for Hard.
Background is not 1366*768. Take this one (if you want) -> http://puu.sh/cd8xn/ee1166ef92.jpg

- Desperate's Insane :

00:54:575 (4,5) - Blanket.
01:10:655 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why not use same spacing than you use all along for triplet (0.50x) ? That's incoherent with 01:18:335 (4,5,6,7,1) - too.

- Hard :

Maybe SV is too high compared to other ? You got a 0.6 SV jump between Normal and hard an 0.2 with Insane. Try SV 1.40 or 1.30 maybe...
00:40:175 (4,1) - Bad stacking.
00:41:135 (2,4,1) - ^

- Normal :

00:01:775 (3,4) - DS is too high. Keep it constant.
00:09:455 (3) - Big white tic is too strong to being ignored. A 1/2 slider fit better with music imo.
00:11:375 - Maybe add a circle here, you can hear a strong beat, and add one here is not too hard for a Normal diff.
00:13:295 (4) - Same as 00:09:455 (3) - .
00:26:975 (1) - Slider end -> 417:33 for perfect blanket.

Nothing really bad. Yuzu saw me playing it so he know it's good

Good luck baka Yuzu and Despe-senpai. Mukyu~

Maruyu

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Topic Starter

Maruyu 2014-10-15T14:45:35+00:00

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Inyusnyan

Inyuschan wrote:
in-game request ~

General

Well, since there is a full version and it's an ending, you could add TV Size in tags... unless this is a cut mp3. Will do :p
Disable Widescreen Support in Desperate's Insane, that's especially for SB and you don't have it. Also done~
Nice mapset, I'd like to see an Easy but it's ok enough I think. Lovely song, btw.

Normal

00:26:015 (5) - I think this will flow better if you add Ctrl+J here and move it to y:53 (same place). Ehh, it's virtually the same so I'll keep mine for aesthetic reasons
00:33:215 (4,1) - Nice blanket, but I think they are too close and I'd improve this a bit. k done
00:50:015 (5) - For consistency, here should be a NC. lol true
Changing SV is not a good idea for Easy or Normal imo, they already are kinda slow, think about this another time. Should be fine.
00:51:935 (1,1) - I'd finish spinner at 00:53:855 (1) - but I'm not sure if it's already rankeable and good enough.^
01:03:455 (1,2,3) - DID I JUST SEE SYMMETRY No, you're delusional.
01:16:895 (4) - Ctrl+H and move it to x:104 y:184. Maybe a bit nazi, but flows better imo. Nah, I prefer how it is this way~
01:21:695 (1,2) - Maybe NC should be added on (2) since that stanza. done
Clean diff, nothing much to say.

Hard

00:11:375 (1,2) - NC is more necessary on (2), imo. For this exact part I'm keeping NC's on 00:09:455 (1,1,1) - and so on on purpose, since I'm stacking on the beat there
00:38:495 (1) - This type of slider feels a bit out of place for me here. You've been using straight and curve sliders, so, I'd curve this slider, at least a bit. It's also the first time I use 1/4, I like how it relates~
01:18:815 (3) - NC. aaaa
01:22:655 (4) - Same. aaaa
01:28:415 (6) - And same. aaaa
I really liked it, I didn't know what to say, those little jumps seem really nice to play, yay~

Sorry for this poor mod, but at least I hope you appreciate my suggestions. If I didn't, I wouldn't have asked, thanks :p

Good luck~

Nozhominyan~

Nozhomi wrote:
Baka !

- General :
Preview point is different for Hard. fixed
Background is not 1366*768. Take this one (if you want) -> http://puu.sh/cd8xn/ee1166ef92.jpg
Took it~

- Hard :
Maybe SV is too high compared to other ? You got a 0.6 SV jump between Normal and hard an 0.2 with Insane. Try SV 1.40 or 1.30 maybe... I feel like it should be fine ;w;
00:40:175 (4,1) - Bad stacking. fixed
00:41:135 (2,4,1) - ^ fixed
- Normal :
00:01:775 (3,4) - DS is too high. Keep it constant. ihavenoideawhatididthere
00:09:455 (3) - Big white tic is too strong to being ignored. A 1/2 slider fit better with music imo. This is constant, and mostly intended, since the sliders follow the rhythm I want perfectly if you listen to what they represent. So no changes to rhythm stuff
00:11:375 - Maybe add a circle here, you can hear a strong beat, and add one here is not too hard for a Normal diff.
00:13:295 (4) - Same as 00:09:455 (3) - .
00:26:975 (1) - Slider end -> 417:33 for perfect blanket. Nazi.

Nothing really bad. Yuzu saw me playing it so he know it's good
Good luck baka Yuzu and Despe-senpai. Mukyu~ uunyaaa~

Last edited by Maruyu 2014-10-15T16:42:29+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-15T15:09:26+00:00

Inyuschan wrote:
Desperate's Insane

00:45:935 (1,2) - What about moving (2) to x:305 y:336? Would look better imo. Nah, I really wanna keep it consistent with the other patterns. But I made the spacing a bit different so it might look and play a bit better now :3
01:18:815 - I'd make kiai finish here like the other diffs, and I wouldn't add the last one, seems unnecessary for me. Sorry, I really don't agree with Yuzu's kiai settings, and since it's a GD it should be fine
01:28:415 (6) - NC. But it would make my symmetric pattern at the end look bad D: And I think it's optional to NC the last note or not
Pro Insane, I just wanted to say some suggestions indeed. But seriously, there's nothing much to improve. Thank you

Sorry for this poor mod, but at least I hope you appreciate my suggestions.

Good luck~

Nozhomi wrote:
- Desperate's Insane :
00:54:575 (4,5) - Blanket. ;www;
01:10:655 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why not use same spacing than you use all along for triplet (0.50x) ? That's incoherent with 01:18:335 (4,5,6,7,1) - too. Fixed

Sank u

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AlexaBM

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AlexaBM 2014-10-16T15:06:10+00:00

I'm a really bad modder :<
[Normal]

00:17:135 (3) - Maybe delete this slider and add a not here 00:17:375 - ?
00:26:015 (5) - ctrl+j it?
00:45:935 - You can map it without changing slider velocity. It'd be better to read for the beginners.

[Hard]

00:59:615 (1) - You can ctrl+g it for flow
00:06:815 (3,4) - Maybe swap these 2 objects?

[Insane]

00:56:975 (6) - Too near from the HP Bar ;w;

Oh, my. This mod is nothing. no kd ;w;
good luck~

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-16T16:15:17+00:00

It's only a really, really slight overlap and I prefer to keep the pattern, so no change~
Thank you for modding

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2014-10-16T16:19:08+00:00

AlexaBM wrote:
I'm a really bad modder :<
[Normal]
00:17:135 (3) - Maybe delete this slider and add a not here 00:17:375 - ? nah, I prefer how it is atm owo
00:26:015 (5) - ctrl+j it? I declined it in a previous mod, it should be fin
00:45:935 - You can map it without changing slider velocity. It'd be better to read for the beginners. Well, it should be fine since SV goes lower at this point. I don't see the issue with these SV's since they're minimal anyway
[Hard]
00:59:615 (1) - You can ctrl+g it for flow If you notice closely, it's flowing the way I want it to, it's like a swinging movement. So no change
00:06:815 (3,4) - Maybe swap these 2 objects? Ehh, I think it'd be too much spacing for such a calm part of the song
Oh, my. This mod is nothing. no kd ;w; It's fine, actually. it pointed again some issues that people for some reason have trouble with, but I can't see the issue ;w; Thank you so much for your time~
good luck~

Aka

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Aka 2014-10-16T18:58:56+00:00

so, modded diffs via irc and since my internet was not stable back then i dont have logs, meh.
added one hitsound, changed some objects to fit the rhythm better in normal, added finishers and stuff, there also was a sv change in desperate's. oh, we also got another mp3 and got better timing. cheers

bubbled ~

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2014-10-16T18:59:46+00:00

what
ok gj

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-10-16T19:38:29+00:00

wah oh

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2014-10-17T08:41:40+00:00

Ah!!!!
Already bubbled....
Anyway gratz on this..

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-10-17T17:03:09+00:00

wheeeeeeeeeee~~~~

www

18:10 xChippy: hmm ok lemme testplay them to see owo
18:10 *Yuzu- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/440790 sphere - Hazy]
18:10 xChippy: got title confirmation?
18:10 Yuzu-: yea
18:14 xChippy: hmm ok
18:14 xChippy: can you show me where you utlized the Normal clap/whistle owo?
18:14 Yuzu-: on my own diffs?
18:15 xChippy: yeah I dun mind which diff
18:15 xChippy: ah nvm 
18:15 Yuzu-: cases like these 00:13:230 (1,2) -
18:15 xChippy: didnt notice desperate insane LOL
18:16 xChippy: 00:00:030 (1) - end is unsnapped
18:16 xChippy: Hard
18:17 xChippy: Have you considered making the kiai consistent?
18:17 Yuzu-: i've debated with desperate, yes
18:17 Yuzu-: but I prefer my kiai, and he prefers his
18:18 Yuzu-: since his is a GD being different shouldn't be an issue
18:18 xChippy: yeah just optional
18:18 xChippy: aight General should be good owo
18:18 xChippy: now into the diffs
18:18 xChippy: Normal I'll start I guess
18:21 xChippy: 00:47:790 (3) - Clap+Whistle --> Normal?
18:21 Yuzu-: aa ok
18:22 xChippy: 00:51:870 - how about moving the spinner 1/1 later and add a note on the place?
18:22 xChippy: just personal preference
18:22 Yuzu-: nah, it's logical
18:22 Yuzu-: ok
18:23 Yuzu-: done
18:26 xChippy: 00:25:950 (5) - ctrl+g?
18:26 xChippy: woud flopw beteter
18:26 xChippy: better*
18:26 Yuzu-: still on normal?
18:27 xChippy: yeah
18:27 Yuzu-: ctrl + g or ctrl + j?  XD
18:27 xChippy: J
18:27 xChippy: xD
18:27 Yuzu-: aaa
18:27 Yuzu-: 3rd time I get said that
18:27 Yuzu-: fiiine
18:27 Yuzu-: done
18:29 xChippy: 00:40:350 (1) - How about a 1/1 slider instead?
18:29 xChippy: fits better with the vocal ;x
18:29 xChippy: 78|309 + blanket its end with 00:41:310 (3) - is a possible pattern if you agree
18:30 Yuzu-: moving 00:40:110 (4) - along, correct?
18:31 xChippy: yes
18:31 xChippy: 00:45:390 (4) - Jump is a bit unfitting with the song
18:31 xChippy: imo
18:31 xChippy: Jump to (1) makes more sense imo 
18:32 xChippy: example:
18:32 xChippy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2142526
18:33 Yuzu-: looks good, ok
18:34 xChippy: 01:26:670 // 01:27:150 // no hitsound for these ;w;?
18:34 xChippy: 01:26:670 (1) - 
18:34 xChippy: 01:27:150 (2) - 
18:35 Yuzu-: added on 1, not on 2
18:35 Yuzu-: 01:28:110 (5) - added one here actually
18:36 xChippy: ok
18:36 xChippy: hmm not sure about Normal - Hard diff curve
18:37 xChippy: The note density increased alot hm...
18:39 xChippy: Try getting some opinions
18:40 xChippy: and than poke me
18:40 xChippy: insane seems fine

Asked around for the difficulty curve, should be fine.

Mao

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Mao 2014-10-17T17:31:43+00:00

Gratz guys :3

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-17T17:47:13+00:00

Yaaay :3 My first ranked Insane guest difficulty!
Congratz Yuzu o:

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-10-17T17:52:04+00:00

oh... Congrats ~~everyone!~~ Yuzu and Desperate-Kun

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2014-10-17T17:57:12+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
oh... Congrats ~~everyone!~~ Yuzu and Desperate-Kun

LOL

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-17T18:06:56+00:00

inb4 unqualify

Because of wrongly snapped objects in my diff. We noticed it a bit too late ;w;

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-10-17T19:09:50+00:00

rip.. srry orz

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2014-10-17T19:14:45+00:00

Disqualifying upon Desperate's request, there's wrongly snapped objects in his difficulty. 00:07:470 (5,6,7) - Should be 1/8 instead of 1/6, sorry!

Ansane

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Ansane 2014-10-17T19:18:32+00:00

aaahh

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2014-10-17T19:31:23+00:00

BANG! PEW! (҂`з´).っ︻デ═一

~Re-Qualified~

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-17T19:31:42+00:00

Thank you for helping me fix this error! :3

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2014-10-17T22:29:50+00:00

Grats

Tari

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Tari 2014-10-17T22:36:04+00:00

None of the normal custom hitsounds are used.

RIP

Gratz then LOL....

Last edited by Tari 2014-10-17T22:43:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2014-10-17T22:40:33+00:00

Tari wrote:
None of the normal custom hitsounds are used.

RIP

~~Not today :p~~

yup, today

Tari

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Tari 2014-10-17T23:08:57+00:00

Also the Metadata is incorrect

Artist should be スフィア

according to the official site http://www.hanasakuiroha.jp/hsh/goods/index.html

http://puu.sh/cgnQu.jpg

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-10-20T16:10:52+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Yeah sorry, when re-qualifying I missed a few things that need to get fixed;

Metadata is wrong according to this official website (Tari linked it) http://www.hanasakuiroha.jp/hsh/goods/index.html, スフィア (sphere) should be in the romanised artist. Also every hitsoundnormal in the folder seems to be unused.

[Normal]

00:51:870 (1) - Finish missing

unranked, tell me when done.
Sorry for the delay

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2014-10-20T16:21:27+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Asphyxia wrote:
Yeah sorry, when re-qualifying I missed a few things that need to get fixed;

Metadata is wrong according to this official website (Tari linked it) http://www.hanasakuiroha.jp/hsh/goods/index.html, スフィア (sphere) should be in the romanised artist. Also every hitsoundnormal in the folder seems to be unused. All hitsoundnormal are used. Cases like 00:17:070 (4,1) - (eg is on hard) use normal additions to use both clap and whistle, and finish (which is soft-hitfinish renamed to normal-hitfinish) is used on 00:55:710 (1) - because I want to use finish with normal additions due to clap.

[Normal]

00:51:870 (1) - Finish missing fixed
unranked, tell me when done.
Sorry for the delay

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-20T16:24:41+00:00

;www;

Gero

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Gero 2014-10-23T16:31:32+00:00

Yuzu- asked me for help so you here I am.

General

Clean

Normal

00:05:070 - To maintain consistency with the rhythm would be nice if you add an circle here.
00:38:430 (1) - Just a small suggestion but what do you think if you doing a rhythm like this one?, I think it would fit better with the voice.

Hard

01:03:270 - Since as along the entire of the kiai time you've added some triplets would be nice if you add an circle here because it fits with the instrumental.

Desperate's Insane

01:18:990 - I guess adding a note here wouldn't hurt because the rhythm at the background is kinda constant in this part.
01:26:910 - Same as above (you can do something like this for example)

call me back when you're done to apply the changes ~

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-23T16:35:56+00:00

I'd really prefer to keep those gaps.
For the first one, the vocals & drums have a sudden break here, so I wanted to have it too.
For the second one, I'm only following the main instrument because it's very emphasized.

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2014-10-23T16:39:26+00:00

Gero wrote:
Yuzu- asked me for help so you here I am.

General

Clean
Normal

00:05:070 - To maintain consistency with the rhythm would be nice if you add an circle here. okay~
00:38:430 (1) - Just a small suggestion but what do you think if you doing a rhythm like this one?, I think it would fit better with the voice. while it does fit well with the vocals I agree, most of my rhythm usage previously is focused on instruments, so I'ld like to keep it that way.
Hard

01:03:270 - Since as along the entire of the kiai time you've added some triplets would be nice if you add an circle here because it fits with the instrumental. Okay, done!
call me back when you're done to apply the changes ~

Thanks for the quick check, I'm good to go :3