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Asterisk_ - Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass [OsuMania|Osu]

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Asagi
1,020 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
no reply = fixed

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested!

[General]
  1. Please, keep the Widescreen support disabled for all diffs. This feature is for widescreen storyboards only.
  2. Try fading your combo colours a bit. Current ones are too bright and may hurt players' eyes a bit (a specially while playing with dimmed BG). ~its not too bright at all, its better that way than making it darker
  3. Consider adding dnb to the tags, I'm sure that this is related to the genre of the song and it may help players to find your map faster.
[Hard]
  1. Setting AR to 7 would create much more balanced mapset. But the problem is that AR7 seems too slow, try setting it to 7,5. It feels better and makes the spread a bit better balanced.
  2. 00:08:999 (1,2,3,4) - a spinner here would fit better, I feel like an intro to the song shouldn't be hardetr than the song itself. A spinner from 00:08:999 - and untill 00:10:028 - would be a nice idea, imo.
  3. 00:18:600 (1,2) - minor - a blanket here would look and flow a bit more natural. It is not a big deal, but it makes your diff look even prettier. :)
  4. 00:48:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - replacing then (or at least some of them) with a spinner would be a nice idea, I feel like this "stream" is too long and too hard for this kind of diff. ~not sure how/what to change on that part, ill keep it for now and get more suggestion about it
  5. 00:54:342 (1) - I would rather remve the last spinner and something similar to what was done in the Normal diff. ~the current one is much fitting imo

    Nice diff with awesome flow. I liked how it flows and it was a pleasure to test it. Good job!
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:171 (3,4,1,2,1) - reducing distance of those 1/4 jumps would be a good idea since it feels kinda exaggerated and too hard for the beginning of the map. Players need some time to "feel" the map, so I would lower DS here to make the pattern more playable. ~i just reduce the DS but i didnt change the style at all
  2. 00:19:200 (4) - a circle here does not sound and feel reasonable enough. I recommend you to replace (3,4) with a single 1/4 slider in order to reflect the vocals. And maybe it'd be a good idea to reduce volume on 00:19:200 - a bit. ~im following a certain sound here, dunno what kind of instru is that but it fits imo
    Note: 00:37:028 (4) - quite a similar thing happened here. I think you were trying to follow the drums, but it sounds really overmapped to me. Consider removing the circle here? ~ same as above
  3. 00:54:342 (1) - if you've changed the spinner on the hard, you should remove/change it here as well, I think it is okay to keep the streams, but the spinner here sounds really out of place to me. ~same as hard diff

    Quite a good diff, It was a really hard map for me but I had a lot of fun while testing it!
The mapset is nice, Normal may need some more modding or you can try to find/make an [Easy]. Anything else is alright. ~ill get more mods :D

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Thanks bakabakari (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ‎
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
Ok GO!

Normal
00:12:428 (4) - You can rotate this by 180deg instead, it flows better
00:14:485 (3) - This note can be shifted further away for distance snapping issues.
00:21:342 (1) - This too^
00:22:714 (3) - This too^

Its pretty good I guess. I like your beat placements!

Hard
00:18:257 (4) - You can make this a reverse of the previous note, 180deg turn, so it fits like the others
00:26:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can add some streams in place of some of the notes here
00:48:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This too^

Its a short song, so I don't have much to say. Your patterns and slider placements are really well done though!

Insane
00:33:342 (4) - This looks weird here
00:53:571 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - It seems kinda weird here

I can't say much. Its rather fantastic for a jump map + 1/2 stream map though!

>Song's annoying
>Dealt with it
>good map
>good day
>thank you for making my day as a modder!
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Thanks a lot Bakari and Estellia- for your mods. I fixed something :)

About the difficulty: I think I can reduce the diff but in that case I fear there would be an huge gap between my diff and the Hard. In any case, I'll let Asagi decide

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: moe moe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10114
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass
TitleUnicode:れんちょんのドラムンベース
Artist:Asterisk_
ArtistUnicode:Asterisk_
Creator:-Asagi
Version:Riki's Normal
Source:Non Non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより asterisk core remix drum and bass rikih_ arcwinolivirus renge miyauchi 宮内 れんげ nyanpass
BeatmapID:444581
BeatmapSetID:183669

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Frostings
913 posts
Joined May 2013
Frostings
hi there ~
from my queue o3o

Insane plays surprisingly well, except I don't know about the difficulty jump from Hard to Insane, might be a bit high
But honestly can't find much wrong with this mapset (at least for Standard difficulties anyways)

Only thing I had was a small suggestion for Riki's Normal:

00:46:028 (1) - the path of this slider is a little obscure for Normal. Maybe make it easier to discern?

No kudosu please

Good luck !
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Sorarei
[General]

for osu!mania stuff
Please remove all unused green line
set volume to 50%
don't forget placing hitsound

[Arcwin's NM]

00:13:971 - this had drum sound, if you only making note placement like this 00:13:457 (13457|2,13628|6,13885|3) - it's not comfortable. place double note to 1st & 3rd column, following this 00:13:457 (13457|0,13457|2) -

00:15:000 (15000|3) - this looks odd, better remove or add hold note in every same part to make consistent pattern and sound

00:21:171 (21171|3) - move to 1st, it might better

00:51:171 (51171|5,51342|3) - remove this, i see you you're only follow drum synth ( 00:49:285 (49285|5,49457|1,49628|5) - )
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus

ajeemaniz wrote:

from mod team queue~
since we accept ONLY mania diffs, so i'll working for archwinlolivirus GD..

hart hart music so demn legit.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`\ :v \

[General]
i found hitsound too noisy, change it to soft instead? and make the volume constant about 30%
and remove some unnecessary inherited timing points? since it's seems used only for std diff

seems the amount of GD diffs is more than your own diff (3 GD and 2 non GD), afaik it's unrankable? notice me if i wrong..

i found nothing major on each diffs, since arcwin maps are OP, teach me.. :I below just a suggestions from me.. :3
column - 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
SPOILER
[NM]
OK! Fixed: 00:51:342 (51342|3,51514|6) - suggestion : http://puu.sh/9BW49/5c11477458.png

[MX]
OK! Fixed: 00:09:599 (9599|1,9771|0,9942|1) - suggestion http://puu.sh/9BW7z/00b350d025.png
OK! Fixed: 00:21:000 (21000|4,21171|4,21257|5,21257|3,21342|2,21342|4) - http://puu.sh/9BWaZ/5fec20d0ef.png

[HD]
OK! Fixed: 00:16:371 (16371|2) - move to 4?

._. well, i hope you find this helpful, goodluck!

Yuutosan wrote:

Nyanpasuuuu!!

From my queue

[General]
where's the hitsound ET arcwin?

SPOILER
[ArcwinET's NM]
OK! Fixed: 00:23:571 (23571|3) - move to 2
OK! Fixed: 00:24:428 (24428|4) - move to 4
OK! Fixed: 00:24:600 (24600|2) - move to 1
OK! Fixed: 00:48:771 - add note for cymbal like 00:50:142 (50142|2,50142|6) - and 00:51:514 (51514|0,51514|6) -
OK! Fixed: 00:53:742 - add note for beat sound

[ArcwinET's HD]
(X)! Nope: 00:12:257 (12257|3) - move to 3 notes spread :3/
(X)! Nope: 00:13:285 (13285|1) - move to 1
(X)! Nope: 00:15:000 (15000|5) - move to 2
OK! Fixed: 00:16:371 (16371|2) - move to 4
OK! Fixed: 00:16:714 (16714|4) - move to 2
(X)! Nope: 00:16:714 (16714|4) - add note to 3 for cymbal no cymbals here @.@

[ArcwinET's MX]
00:10:199 (10199|4) - move to 2 rearranged from other mod

Good luck . :D

Reikosaka wrote:

[General]

for osu!mania stuff
Please remove all unused green line
set volume to 50%
don't forget placing hitsound
SPOILER
[Arcwin's NM]

00:13:971 - this had drum sound, if you only making note placement like this 00:13:457 (13457|2,13628|6,13885|3) - it's not comfortable. place double note to 1st & 3rd column, following this 00:13:457 (13457|0,13457|2) - I just moved the note beow that drum sound, (its actually for that drum sound.) no change for patterns though

OK! Fixed: 00:15:000 (15000|3) - this looks odd, better remove or add hold note in every same part to make consistent pattern and sound added hold at 00:25:971 with the same bass sound and strength

OK! Fixed: 00:21:171 (21171|3) - move to 1st, it might better

(X)! Nope: 00:51:171 (51171|5,51342|3) - remove this, i see you you're only follow drum synth ( 00:49:285 (49285|5,49457|1,49628|5) - ) that note represent the bass since its quite consistent and it feels off if not included as you can hear bass loudly at that part.
Thank you so much for the mods everyone~ really helpful and great >w<)b

*Updated code pm'd to the creator~
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Update, I changed that slider and nerfed a bit the whole diff 

osu file format v13

[General]
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[Metadata]
Title:Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass
TitleUnicode:れんちょんのドラムンベース
Artist:Asterisk_
ArtistUnicode:Asterisk_
Creator:-Asagi
Version:Riki's Normal
Source:Non Non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより asterisk core remix drum and bass rikih_ arcwinolivirus renge miyauchi 宮内 れんげ nyanpass
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226,219,25457,2,0,P|183:233|126:210,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,149,26142,2,0,P|131:135|188:158,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,148,26828,5,4,0:1:0:0:
335,122,27171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,42,27514,1,0,0:1:0:0:
413,16,27857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,76,28200,2,0,L|477:130,1,50,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,155,28542,2,0,L|431:206,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,217,28885,2,0,P|363:235|293:234,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29571,12,0,31628,0:0:0:0:
298,149,32314,6,0,L|302:85,2,62.5,4|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,196,32828,2,0,P|349:213|490:160,1,187.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,76,33685,6,0,P|442:75|392:11,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,61,34200,2,0,P|320:84|200:27,1,187.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,125,35057,6,0,P|154:170|63:202,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,139,35742,2,0,P|34:94|125:62,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,39,36428,6,0,B|225:44|225:44|257:39|257:39|289:45|289:45|321:39,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,133,37114,2,0,B|326:128|326:128|294:133|294:133|262:127|262:127|230:133,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,202,37800,6,0,P|144:249|220:361,1,187.5
261,344,38485,2,0,P|293:333|314:299,1,62.5
345,346,38828,2,0,P|367:320|368:280,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,303,39171,6,0,P|429:248|393:179,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,135,39857,2,0,P|276:125|242:130,1,62.5
259,77,40200,2,0,P|221:87|194:108,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,55,40542,6,0,P|154:91|68:118,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,210,41228,2,0,P|105:244|203:250,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,203,41914,6,0,B|270:203|270:203|281:193|281:193|294:200|294:200|300:184|300:184|333:177|370:186,1,125,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,237,42600,2,0,P|471:272|406:389,1,187.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,380,43285,6,0,L|285:385,2,62.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,331,43800,2,0,P|340:317|304:171,1,187.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,123,44657,6,0,P|409:136|453:210,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,253,45171,2,0,P|426:299|288:320,1,187.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,262,46028,6,0,B|227:166|227:166|202:191,1,125,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,46714,2,0,P|76:198|49:180,1,62.5
67,134,47057,2,0,P|42:112|27:83,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,48,47400,6,0,P|97:30|184:34,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,71,48085,2,0,P|308:89|395:85,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,50,48771,6,0,P|494:89|277:276,1,375,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,189,50142,2,0,P|309:141|223:121,1,125,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,132,50657,2,0,P|138:139|59:38,1,187.5,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,42,51514,1,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,51600,12,0,54257,0:0:0:0:
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
Joined June 2013
Deep Sea
Hello guys
mod ready

[Arcwin's HD]

00:42:257 - add note
00:50:828 - ^

[Arcwin's MX]

00:27:685 - add note
00:29:057 - ^
00:34:542 - ^
00:35:057 - ^
00:37:285 - ^
00:38:657 - ^
00:40:028 - ^
00:41:400 - ^
00:42:257 - ^
00:44:142 - ^
00:45:514 - ^
00:48:257 - ^

Good luck ! :P
Love Arcwin diff :oops:
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo



  • General
  1. The diff spread is fine, but the Normal is too difficult to be the easiest diff of this set, since it uses relatively much 1/2 on 175 BPM, as well as AR5 & OD4 & HP3, which are a bit high difficulty settings for the easiest diff :b I'd highly recommend you to get an Easy diff for this set.
  2. Widescreen Support isn't really needed since you don't have a storyboard :)
  3. Otherwise fine.


  • Riki's Normal
  1. Please, don't use 100% of volume for most of the song. I'd recommend you to use Asagi's volume settings instead o:
  2. 00:14:485 (3,4,1) - It doesn't really look appealing how (3) and (1) are touching each other slightly. Try rotating (1) so it looks similiar to this:
    Picture
  3. 00:19:971 (3) - It seems you are trying to follow vocals here, but it doesn't sound really good because they already end at 00:20:657. I recommend you to use the following rhythm instead, though you'll have to delete your awesome slider:
    Rhythm
  4. 00:22:028 (2) - This is personal opinion, but moving this a bit to the left (with DS of course) will improve the look of 00:21:342 (1,2), because it makes it look less square-y, and it will especially improve the flow with 00:22:028 (2,3) a little bit.
    Picture
  5. 00:39:171 (1) - Let this slider go on until 00:39:685, to fit with the loud instrument better.
  6. 00:41:914 (1) - Especially with CS3, this slider looks really cramped and the shape doesn't really fit so well either.. It might be personal opinion again, but using something like in my screenshot would make it look less cramped but still emphasize the "pew" sound effect there :3
    Picture
  7. 00:41:914 (1,2) - I don't really agree with the rhythm here. You are ignoring the loud instrument again, at 00:42:428, as well as the really emphasized drum beat at 00:42:942. Maybe you'll also like this rhythm better: (btw, before you fix, also look at the following suggestion about placement)
    Rhythm
  8. 00:42:600 (2,1,2) - If you fixed my suggestion from above this might already be fixed, but if not: This is placed really far down and is touching the scorebar. You might want to rearrange this pattern a little bit.
  9. 00:46:028 (1) - It feels rather weird to have this slidershape here, since there's nothing special in the music at this point and you didn't use those before. Probably it will be better if you just curve the first part of it, so it looks more smooth and fits better into this map. Something like this:
    Picture
  10. 00:51:600 (1) - Just start it at 00:51:685 instead, in order to give the newbies more time to react. It might sound strange to you, but spinners placed 1/4 after a circle can actually be quite confusing for newbie players since they expect a bigger gap. Also, though this isn't made for them, this is really cruel to play in other gamemodes, so there's no reason not to start it a bit later :)
  11. Probably I went a bit too far with my personal opinion here, but since it's a short map, it should be okay :3 Good Normal ofc, but what I listed about the rhythm could really be fixed :b


  • Hard
  1. 00:21:171 (1) - This NC should be removed and you should give it to 00:21:342 (3) instead, for consistency with 00:32:142 (3,4,1) and with 00:43:114 (6,7,1)
  2. 00:54:257 (1) - Remove this NC in order to avoid NC spam. 00:53:914 (1) already has an NC, so this one isn't necessary.
  3. 00:54:342 (1) - It might be my ears, but the instrument seems to be gone at 00:57:685, so you might want to end the spinner there.
  4. Whoa dude, perfect Hard. It's the best one I've seen and played in a long time. Normally I can be very critical and picky if I don't find any serious issues in a diff, but this time I just have nothing to point out! *Desperate knees down and praises Asagi*


  • Insane
  1. 00:09:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - That is a pretty cruel start and it will throw off most players right away :D Using a simple low-distance-stream or even reverse sliders might have been a better solution here.
  2. 00:10:885 (2) - Try to move this more down, to improve the flow. After the curvy shape of 00:10:371 (1), the natural cursor movement doesn't lead you up that much. With (210|90) it works just fine:
    Picture
  3. 00:13:971 (4) - I see no reason why this shouldn't have equal distance spacing to both the previous and following object. I'd recommend you to apply this, since things like that give the map a bit more structure. Also, the flow improves, since the players don't have to slow down after (4). I spaced it with 1,7x:
    Picture
  4. 00:14:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You could turn this into a perfect pentagon, in order to get more structure. Very minor though.
  5. 00:31:800 (1) - This one seems rather unneeded, and I'd recommend you to remove it, since you didn't add a NC to 00:31:285 (1) as well, which is basically the same thing in the music.
  6. 00:36:942 (3,4,5,6,7) - Having the triplet cut by the slider doesn't look appealing ingame in my opinion. It might be a better idea to stack (7) on the triplet, or to move it so it is placed on the right side of the triplet instead of the left side.
    Picture
  7. 00:38:828 (5) - Moving this note a bit downwards would really improve your flow here. Basically, hopping upwards after 00:38:485 (3,4) this far doesn't really feel that great, and if you move (5) to (50|210), the spacing between 00:38:828 (5,6,1) these objects will be equal. It would look like this:
    Picture
  8. 00:54:257 (1) - Same as Hard about this NC.
  9. 00:54:342 (1) - Same as Hard about the spinner.
  10. Very nice Insane! Especially very fun to play :) (And to look at of course) It could use a little bit more structure in terms of distance spacing, but meh, I generally dislike the trend of using no spacing at all (for 1/2), so it is only my personal opinion.

I hope you like my poor mod ;w; Please reply! :)
Good luck ^-^
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Since you have my guest diff now, don't forget to add my name to the tags as well :b
Asagi
1,020 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
All fixed except on the NC on the last part
Added the tags too (Thanks for the Easy diff :3)
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Mira-san
Hmm. Can you try offset 8990? I feel like there's a small delay.
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello guys
mod ready

[Arcwin's HD]

00:42:257 - add note
00:50:828 - ^

[Arcwin's MX]

00:27:685 - add note
00:29:057 - ^
00:34:542 - ^
00:35:057 - ^
00:37:285 - ^
00:38:657 - ^
00:40:028 - ^
00:41:400 - ^
00:42:257 - ^
00:44:142 - ^
00:45:514 - ^
00:48:257 - ^

ALL APPLIED~!

Good luck ! :P
Love Arcwin diff :oops: Thank you so much <3
Thank you so much for that great and very helpful mod, Shana >w<)bb

here's the updated code please download usagis :v
Updated .osu rar
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
hello i'm so late
i have caught a disease that i dont want to open my editer xDDD
general
xDD i dont like the Normal hitsound 70% too noisy
arc's NM
00:36:428 - add a note
00:37:285 - ^
00:37:800 - ^
00:39:171 - ^
00:40:542 - ^
00:44:657 - ^
00:47:414 - ^
00:48:257 - ^
00:49:628 (49628|5) - delete
00:49:628 (49628|5,51000|3,51171|5,51342|2) - ^
00:51:514 (51514|4) - double note
00:53:742 (53742|4) - move to 00:53:914 -

arc's hd
00:11:399 - add a note for heavy beat
00:14:142 - ^
00:15:514 - ^
00:22:371 - ^
00:23:742 - ^
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
[Rikimaru]

00:39:685 - add note? will be fit.

easy is already looks nice.

a bit irc
23:53 Asagi: Mod request pls
23:57 P A N: I think on kial part should increase volume to about 80%
23:57 P A N: and 00:26:948 - this should be better blanket
23:57 Asagi: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
23:57 Asagi: wat map? wtf wat?
23:57 P A N: random LOL
23:58 Asagi: it was pointed out here LOL http://puu.sh/bFsGK.jpg
23:58 P A N: LOL
23:59 Asagi: dat lag
00:00 Asagi: i got my sister's earphone hahaha
00:00 Asagi: shes asleep so i took it away hahaha
00:00 Asagi: hope she didnt notice
00:00 P A N: LOL
00:00 Asagi: DAT 100 HAHA
00:01 Asagi: HAHAHAHAHAHA
00:01 *P A N sighs
00:01 P A N: I want to have little sis
00:01 Asagi: i touched something, cant spect
00:01 P A N: missing dafuq
00:01 P A N: please
00:01 P A N: woah ar8
00:01 P A N: I can DT
00:01 P A N: udpated
00:02 Asagi: i made it ar8.2
00:02 P A N: fuq
00:02 Asagi: its on the graveyard RIP
00:02 P A N: wat
00:02 Asagi: btw mod request here pls ;w;
00:02 *Asagi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/449856 Asterisk_ - Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass]
00:02 Asagi: i need more mods on normal, i think
00:03 Asagi: i mean, all diffs are OKAY for me
00:03 Asagi: just the normal diff is a bit, errrr weird i guess
00:03 P A N: everything is weird for you I think XD
00:03 Asagi: not totally
00:04 Asagi: check it so you know what im telling
00:04 P A N: fuq I can't play normal
00:04 P A N: I mean
00:04 P A N: nv
00:04 P A N: m
00:05 Asagi: best song
00:06 P A N: brainwash song
00:06 Asagi: HAHAHAHA
00:06 Asagi: my old style hard diff
00:06 Asagi: RIP
00:07 P A N: 00:37:800 -
00:07 P A N: on normal
00:07 P A N: weird part for me
00:08 Asagi: so, what do you think on normal?
00:08 P A N: wait
00:08 P A N: but it's normal
00:08 Asagi: i guess just mod it and point it out
00:08 Asagi: god damn the easy diff is perfect
00:08 P A N: lol
00:09 P A N: what can I get from this testplay
00:09 P A N: damn
00:10 Asagi: ss pro
00:10 Asagi: teach me senpai
00:10 P A N: I always want to get #50 on normal since 3 years ago
00:10 P A N: ahahaha
00:10 P A N: maybe almost 3
00:10 P A N: anyway
00:10 P A N: his style is different form me....
00:10 P A N: and also his rhythm is not wrong
00:10 Asagi: well totally
00:11 Asagi: for me, some patterns are really weird for normal imo
00:11 P A N: but I think just circle instead of 1/2 slider there is more fit with normal diff
00:11 P A N: 00:38:485 (2) -
00:11 Asagi: but... well i think that his style
00:11 P A N: yea...
00:11 P A N: but I can SS it
00:11 P A N: with that mods...
00:11 P A N: so maybe patterns are fine? XD
00:12 Asagi: well if you saw rikih's maps, he is just creative on sliders
00:12 Asagi: more like experimental
00:12 P A N: hm i see
00:12 Asagi: maybe you should really mod it at all haha
00:12 Asagi: then point it out
00:13 P A N: tbh, it's his style and the rhythm is not wrong so
00:13 P A N: I think it's already fine
00:13 Asagi: im not sure myself
00:13 Asagi: well you know me, im not good at making normal
00:13 Asagi: or at least, i havent mapped normal diffs at all
00:14 P A N: hm but I mapped a lot right?
00:14 P A N: I mapped easy
00:14 P A N: that pattern is fine
00:14 Asagi: im just seeing your name on some random maps lol
00:14 Asagi: easy normal hard
00:14 Asagi: any diffs
00:15 P A N: he just play with blanket or make the body stack with previous note
00:15 Asagi: at least mod it pls ;w;
00:15 Asagi: i need mods QAQ
00:15 P A N: Desperate-kun......
00:15 P A N: wall of mod again
00:16 P A N: wow
00:16 P A N: 2 kds
00:16 Asagi: i told you that on skype
00:16 P A N: yea
00:16 Asagi: mod my map, it has 2 KD when you mod lol
00:18 Asagi: and now
00:18 Asagi: hmmm, time to find BATs
00:18 Asagi: oh wait, i need more mania mods ._.
00:19 P A N: so sad
00:19 Asagi: actually i just need 1 mod, so the GDer will find BAT
00:19 Asagi: mania is much easier to rank
00:20 P A N: well, I modded it carefully and I found that the rhythm is so various
00:20 Asagi: various?
00:20 P A N: hm
00:21 Asagi: sori for being dumb lol
00:21 P A N: my suck english
00:21 P A N: diverse?
00:21 P A N: what about it
00:21 Asagi: still dont know that
00:21 Asagi: wait google time LOL
00:21 P A N: ok
00:21 Asagi: you mean different?
00:22 P A N: ya
00:22 P A N: you made me forget
00:22 P A N: what I gonna say
00:22 P A N: oh yea
00:22 P A N: you don't have a snare sound?
00:22 P A N: damn I also suck at this
00:22 P A N: wait
00:23 Asagi: clap?
00:23 Asagi: wat
00:23 P A N: you have it
00:23 P A N: but in normal don't have it
00:23 Asagi: maybe he didnt use it
00:23 Asagi: and btw
00:23 Asagi: check my soft whistle hitsound thingy
00:23 Asagi: ahh damn
00:23 Asagi: i just call it PAN hitsound thingy
00:23 P A N: wa
00:24 P A N: ohhh
00:24 P A N: you mean
00:24 P A N: that whistle thingy?
00:24 P A N: XD
00:24 Asagi: yeah
00:24 Asagi: the PAN thingy
00:24 Asagi: HAHAHA
00:24 Asagi: you usually use that so yea
00:24 Asagi: i call it that lol
00:24 P A N: LOL
00:25 P A N: it fit well
00:26 Asagi: wooo
00:26 P A N: this damn almost stack thing 00:37:457 (7) -
00:26 P A N: and no one complain about whistle thing
00:26 P A N: XD
00:26 Asagi: HEY ITS INTENTIONAL HAHA
00:26 Asagi: wait
00:27 Asagi: but i just put it after the mods
00:27 Asagi: i mean, you are the 1st who mod it with PAN hitsound
00:27 P A N: hm
00:27 P A N: so no one have check it
00:28 Asagi: yea
00:28 Asagi: just mod it pls ;w;
00:29 P A N: I'm modding
00:29 P A N: lol
00:29 P A N: just ask your opinion too
00:30 P A N: 00:09:514 (1,2) -
00:30 P A N: these drum sound
00:30 P A N: really disturbing me
00:30 P A N: even they have on musi
00:30 P A N: c
00:30 Asagi: 10nyan point that out for me
00:30 Asagi: #neverforget
00:31 P A N: she too?
00:31 P A N: point to add or point that they are weird?
00:33 P A N: also
00:33 P A N: your pattern
00:33 P A N: why so nice
00:35 P A N: you should add some hitsound
00:35 Asagi: LOL
00:35 Asagi: where?
00:36 Asagi: shit
00:36 P A N: can you try something?
00:36 Asagi: my nerves on my arm is so wtf
00:36 Asagi: it really hurts ;w;
00:37 *Asagi is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/407642 BABYMETAL - MEGITSUNE [4K MX]] <osu!mania> |4K|
00:37 Asagi: after playing this
00:37 P A N: :(
00:37 Asagi: urgh, my arm
00:37 P A N: just don't
00:37 P A N: climax too much
00:37 Asagi: havent played mania
00:37 Asagi: shut up
00:37 Asagi: no climax happened
00:37 P A N: lol
00:38 P A N: 00:09:342 (4) - whistle with normal additions
00:38 P A N: 00:09:514 (1) - clap on tail
00:38 P A N: 00:09:685 (2) - whistle with normal addition on tail
00:38 P A N: 00:09:857 (1) - clap
00:39 P A N: 00:10:028 (2) - whistle with normal addition on head
00:39 Asagi: 00:09:342 (4) - tail?
00:39 Asagi: or head?
00:39 P A N: head
00:40 P A N: and you will hear
00:40 P A N: the most ugly random hitsound ever
00:40 Asagi: damn
00:40 P A N: but
00:40 P A N: it fit with 50% playrate comeon
00:40 P A N: XD
00:40 Asagi: maybe the whistle is a bit loud
00:41 P A N: yea
00:41 Asagi: but it really fits
00:41 P A N: decrease it then
00:41 Asagi: 40% will do
00:42 P A N: wtf
00:42 P A N: why so fit
00:42 Asagi: not sure if you really modding it hahaha
00:43 P A N: why not
00:43 P A N: I modded it
00:43 P A N: XD
00:46 Asagi: maybe its close to ranking lol
00:46 P A N: yea
00:46 P A N: can tell by pattern
00:46 P A N: and hitsounding
00:51 Asagi: just waiting for BAT
00:51 Asagi: oh wait
00:51 Asagi: UWS said he will bubble it
00:51 Asagi: WHERE THE FUCK IS HE
00:51 P A N: LOL
00:51 Asagi: i havent saw him
00:54 Asagi: ask UWS for bubble, ask bakari for rank
00:54 Asagi: ez shit HAHAHAHA
00:56 P A N: meh
00:56 P A N: damn
00:56 P A N: I'm so hard
00:56 P A N: I mean
00:56 P A N: my map so hard to get rank
00:57 Asagi: why?
00:59 P A N: I have less BAT friend
00:59 P A N: :(
01:00 Asagi: ;w;
01:00 Asagi: but you pro nayway
01:00 P A N: you are more pro
01:01 Asagi: impossible
01:01 P A N: 00:20:485 (3) - whistle on head?
01:01 P A N: Hard
01:05 Asagi: oh
01:05 Asagi: IRC on my diff?
01:06 P A N: I irc since a long time ago
01:06 P A N: :(
01:06 Asagi: hahahaha
01:06 Asagi: just go lol
01:09 P A N: DONE
01:12 Asagi: sdfsdf
01:12 Asagi: pro
01:12 P A N: LOL
01:12 P A N: it's really fine honestly
01:12 P A N: I fc Insane in two tried
01:12 P A N: first tried also miss by accident
01:13 Asagi: because its very short map
01:14 P A N: hmmm I don't know
01:15 Asagi: actually
01:15 Asagi: the jumps on insane is really big
01:15 P A N: easy
01:15 P A N: wait
01:15 Asagi: yeah
01:16 Asagi: really big jump, but easy on the same time
01:16 P A N: easy for us I guess
01:16 P A N: hard for about 7k rank+?
01:16 Asagi: maybe
01:16 Asagi: maybe ahaha
01:16 Asagi: post pls
01:17 P A N: later
01:17 P A N: doing soemthing
01:18 Asagi: wat
01:18 Asagi: is it really take a long time to post? lol
Asagi
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Asagi
Thanks for the mod climax-san
arcwinolivirus
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arcwinolivirus

victorica_db wrote:

hello i'm so late
i have caught a disease that i dont want to open my editer xDDD omg im so late checking ;3; tangina ferking owner of dis map :v
general
xDD i dont like the Normal hitsound 70% too noisy Fixed with new set of hitsounds xD
arc's NM
SPOILER
00:36:428 - add a note
00:37:285 - ^
00:37:800 - ^
00:39:171 - ^
00:40:542 - ^
00:44:657 - ^
00:47:414 - ^
00:48:257 - ^ No. thanks to all above, Only having 1-noter press in those parts for NM. no 2-noter press.
OK! Fixed: 00:49:628 (49628|5) - delete
OK! Fixed: 00:49:628 (49628|5,51000|3,51171|5,51342|2) - ^
00:51:514 (51514|4) - double note already 2-noter press
OK! Fixed: 00:53:742 (53742|4) - move to 00:53:914 - rearranged a bit though

arc's hd
SPOILER
OK! Fixed: 00:11:399 - add a note for heavy beat
OK! Fixed: 00:14:142 - ^
OK! Fixed: 00:15:514 - ^
OK! Fixed: 00:22:371 - ^
OK! Fixed: 00:23:742 - ^
Thank you so much for great mod,Victorica >w<)b

here's an update you fwakin asagis :v
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/bFYpm/b4e8585d1b.rar
10nya
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10nya
pan hentai asagi climax
P A N
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P A N

10nya wrote:

pan hentai asagi climax
wat
Nyukai
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Joined July 2012
Nyukai
From my queue~

General:

  1. You have enabled Widescreen Support in some diffs if not all. Disable it since you don't have SB.
Desperate's Easy:

  1. 00:31:628 (1) - I think spinner is too near from next note. Maybe finishing it in 00:30:942 - is ok enough.

    Cute diff, I don't really know what to say.
Riki's Normal:

  1. 00:19:971 (3) - I'd change a bit slider's end. Like this, since next slider begins slightly above.
  2. 00:32:314 (1) - Since here, you add NC each one stanzas. You could add it each two, like you were doing.
  3. 00:51:514 (4) - NC.

    I didn't like some sliders, but whatever, the diff is good enough for me.
Hard:

  1. 00:38:314 (2) - Why not moving it to x:484 y:192? For a better flow imo. Also, makes a good jump between it and next slider.
  2. 00:42:428 (3) - That stack. Move it to x:211.
  3. What about kiai D:

    Just wanted to say some suggestions. I like it.
Insane:

  1. Same about kiai D:

    Nothing to say, well done.
Good luck~
Asagi
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Topic Starter
Asagi
All Fixed on Hard diff
About the kiai, i intentionally didnt put it
Kawawa
Kawawa
halo~

i think about mania mod :)
suggest u

NM
HIT SOUND CHANGE : 00:09:514 ↔ 00:10:028

Arcwin's HD
00:09:085 - Delete
00:09:257 - 1add normal sound
00:09:514 - 1add normal sound
00:09:771 - 1add normal sound
00:10:028 - 2add normal sound
and, note place change :)


Arcwin's MX
00:10:028 - 4add normal sound

good luck u r beat map XD
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