MitiS - Movements Feat. MaHi (Original Mix) (Speed Up Ver.) · forum

Arlecchino

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-10T18:29:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 Maret 2017 at 14:44:00

Artist: MitiS
Title: Movements Feat. MaHi (Original Mix) (Speed Up Ver.)
Tags: FlandreScarlet- Serena- AnreFM Path to the Horizon Valentina Remenar CLSW Fort [ Joey ] Game Kin
BPM: 187
Filesize: 8269kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:

Anre's Hard (3,46 stars, 303 notes)
Crystal's Deluge (6,56 stars, 660 notes)
Easy (1,77 stars, 107 notes)
Fxtra (5,46 stars, 565 notes)
Joey's Insane (4,8 stars, 380 notes)
Kin's Normal (2,2 stars, 153 notes)
Rain (4,31 stars, 368 notes)
Serena's Overdose (5,71 stars, 422 notes)

Download: MitiS - Movements Feat. MaHi (Original Mix) (Speed Up Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Old map
Give up
for Loved
Special thanks for all Modder, GD, and Awesome SB
Finally, Thank you for everything~

Awesome Guest Difficulty

Normal by Kin
Hard by AnreFM
Insane by [ Joey ]
Extra by Fort
Overdose by Serena-
and decide to add Crystal's Deluge once again bcuz its for loved, so why not?

Awesome Storyboard

Storyboard by Ashasaki

Last edited by Arlecchino 2017-05-29T04:21:37+00:00, edited 149 times in total.

[ Joey ]

390 posts

Joined May 2013

[ Joey ] 2014-06-13T06:19:31+00:00

Here is my GD ^-^

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PreviewTime: 71635
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Majesty (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Majesty (Short Ver.)
Artist:MitiS
ArtistUnicode:MitiS
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Insane
Source:
Tags:Nightcore Mix [ Joey ] Eroge Game
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
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Yopkyu

45 posts

Joined May 2012

Yopkyu 2014-06-23T00:39:34+00:00

Insane:
00:28:640 (3,4,5) -
Something just doesn't feel right
Ctrl+Shift+R?
00:31:367 (3) -
Stack that onto the slider
01:10:993 (1,1,1) -
Shift timing to left by 1/4? (and obviously redo spacing)
01:13:720 (3,1) -
Add a circle between these two
01:44:362 (5) -
Increase spacing? Looks so *.*
01:56:266 (3,4) -
Should be kay. Just the rhythm this section is just flows slightly differently than the rest of the song, just stood out for me.

Would FC.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-23T05:29:02+00:00

Yopkyu wrote:
Insane:
00:28:640 (3,4,5) -
Something just doesn't feel right
Ctrl+Shift+R? it's wreid.. changed
00:31:367 (3) -
Stack that onto the slider Fixed
01:10:993 (1,1,1) -
Shift timing to left by 1/4? No i guess(and obviously redo spacing) No.. I guess.. keep end at white line
01:13:720 (3,1) -
Add a circle between these two ok. also in all part like 01:16:608 - and 01:19:175 -
01:44:362 (5) -
Increase spacing? Looks so *.* k.. how about 1.5x ?
01:56:266 (3,4) -
Should be kay. Just the rhythm this section is just flows slightly differently than the rest of the song, just stood out for me. repaire the imo.. but still not a good imo i guess.. still need suggestion for this part

Would FC.

Thanks for mod

Yopkyu

45 posts

Joined May 2012

Yopkyu 2014-06-23T06:25:34+00:00

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Yopkyu wrote:
Insane:
01:10:993 (1,1,1) -
Shift timing to left by 1/4? No i guess(and obviously redo spacing) No.. I guess.. keep end at white line
---Heh, rhythm wise it makes perfect sense to leave it, and its perfectly playable, or you can adjust it to the musics 'hierarchy' if that makes sense.
01:44:362 (5) -
Increase spacing? Looks so *.* k.. how about 1.5x ?
---That would work (I think that's what you used with the 2 previous sliders) 01:43:400 (2,3)
01:56:266 (3,4) -
Should be kay. Just the rhythm this section is just flows slightly differently than the rest of the song, just stood out for me. repaire the imo.. but still not a good imo i guess.. still need suggestion for this part
---This sorta destroys what you were trying to do but heh.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-23T20:42:29+00:00

Yopkyu wrote:
-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Insane:

01:56:266 (3,4) -
Should be kay. Just the rhythm this section is just flows slightly differently than the rest of the song, just stood out for me. repaire the imo.. but still not a good imo i guess.. still need suggestion for this part
---This sorta destroys what you were trying to do but heh. Fix this one..

actually i'm confused.. this is a hard or insane.. o,o

Yopkyu

45 posts

Joined May 2012

Yopkyu 2014-06-24T09:04:53+00:00

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
actually i'm confused.. this is a hard or insane.. o,o

---Pretty sure difficulty said insane.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-24T20:10:10+00:00

Yopkyu wrote:
-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
actually i'm confused.. this is a hard or insane.. o,o
---Pretty sure difficulty said insane.

nonoono,.. i mean the diff.. not a diff name..

Insane.. but i think it's too easy for insane..
if hard.. too hard for hard diff.. :3

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-06-25T02:35:56+00:00

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
actually i'm confused.. this is a hard or insane.. o,o

Yopkyu- wrote:
---Pretty sure difficulty said insane.

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
nonoono,.. i mean the diff.. not a diff name..

Insane.. but i think it's too easy for insane..
if hard.. too hard for hard diff.. :3

Hard+ pls or just Hard

My diff

U mad Bro, soon xD

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-25T03:43:45+00:00

Fort wrote:
Hard+ pls or just Hard

-_- cuma gonta ganti gonta ganti ke hard insane hard insane..
ok.. terakhir mau susah mau gampang.. changed to HARD

My diff
U mad Bro, soon xD

^^ golok mana golok..

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-06-26T06:10:30+00:00

Ok my diff ↓
Fort's Expert

thanks

Edit: Warning
Yellow → Fast Slider, Complex Pattern
Blue → Fast Slider, Hard pattern same like Yellow
Green → Slow & normal speed
Pink → Same like Green, but very slow in kiai time

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-26T19:27:36+00:00

Fort wrote:
Ok my diff ↓
Fort's Expert

thanks

Edit: Warning
Yellow → Fast Slider, Complex Pattern
Blue → Fast Slider, Hard pattern same like Yellow
Green → Slow & normal speed
Pink → Same like Green, but very slow in kiai time

Thanksuuuu.... bodo mamat dengan warna warnaan.. gw gk main Std.. :3

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-06-27T05:51:09+00:00

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Thanksuuuu.... bodo mamat dengan warna warnaan.. gw gk main Std.. :3

wakakakakak

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-06-27T07:33:37+00:00

Fort wrote:
-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Thanksuuuu.... bodo mamat dengan warna warnaan.. gw gk main Std.. :3
wakakakakak

gk usah tawa luw.. i know i'm noob and i'm proud.. xD

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-07-01T07:28:46+00:00

http://puu.sh/9RRfU/94d436abf7.osu

Deluge has done.

~~BLACK or WHITE streams~~

[ Joey ]

390 posts

Joined May 2013

[ Joey ] 2014-07-04T07:17:56+00:00

Hi Asuna! Here is a quick mod on your Osu Std diffs

[Hard]
00:21:261 (4) - Would give it better flow if you ctrl + g this slider. But then you would have to re-position the notes that come after
00:22:223 (3,4) - Can make a better blanket
00:24:148 (6,1) - Move so these don't overlap
00:25:913 (6) - NC should be here. Remove NC from 00:26:234 (1) -
00:27:196 (4,6) - Move so these don't overlap
00:26:394 (2) - When you blanket sliders like this, you should think of the movement of your cursor. ctrl + g this and the flow would be much better. I'll show you in a picture: http://puu.sh/9WcdX/462012777f.jpg The green line has better flow.
00:28:720 (4) - I don't think a triplet fits the music here.
00:28:961 - The 1/1 slider should start here to fit the music. Then a hitcircle would go here 00:28:801 -
00:33:293 (1,4) - Can stack these better
00:33:774 (2,4) - Can blanket better
00:36:020 (5,1) - ^
01:04:255 (5) - ctrl + g
01:10:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - This distance snap may be too difficult for a hard
01:28:961 (1,2,3) - ^
01:39:228 (5,6,7) - ^
01:41:795 (1,2,3) - ^
01:39:870 (1,3) - Move a little so these don't overlap
01:41:956 (3,5) - Stack these perfectly
01:42:277 (4,1) - ^
01:42:918 (1,3) - Make a blanket
01:56:988 (1,2,3,4) - Maintain distance
02:03:405 - Place a note here. Make the spinner start a 1/4 note later

[Easy]
01:03:132 (2,3) - distance snap these properly. AI mod says it's too far
01:04:736 (2,4) - Stack
01:05:699 (3,2) - Stack
01:32:330 (4,1) - Move so no overlap
02:02:122 (1) - Should split this up into more sliders or hitcircles

You are pretty good at mapping Std diffs, even though you are a ctb player haha. But your placement needs some work.
Always look for places to stack notes and blanket sliders. And try not to overlap a lot of notes. It looks kind of ugly lol.
But good job overall

I changed a few little things in my GD. Here is the updated version:

GD

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71635
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20779,30405
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Majesty (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Majesty (Short Ver.)
Artist:MitiS
ArtistUnicode:MitiS
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Joey's Insane
Source:
Tags:Fort Nightcore Mix [ Joey ] Eroge Game Kin
BeatmapID:439858
BeatmapSetID:183132

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-04T08:41:43+00:00

[ Joey ] wrote:

Hi Asuna! Here is a quick mod on your Osu Std diffs

[Hard]
00:21:261 (4) - Would give it better flow if you ctrl + g this slider. But then you would have to re-position the notes that come after so dayo ne.. Fixed~
00:22:223 (3,4) - Can make a better blanket k
00:24:148 (6,1) - Move so these don't overlap ^
00:25:913 (6) - NC should be here. Remove NC from 00:26:234 (1) - Fix~
00:27:196 (4,6) - Move so these don't overlap k
00:26:394 (2) - When you blanket sliders like this, you should think of the movement of your cursor. ctrl + g this and the flow would be much better. I'll show you in a picture: http://puu.sh/9WcdX/462012777f.jpg The green line has better flow. hhmm.. tabun.. oki
00:28:720 (4) - I don't think a triplet fits the music here.
00:28:961 - The 1/1 slider should start here to fit the music. Then a hitcircle would go here 00:28:801 - hhmm.. fix the 1/1 slider but for 00:28:801 - i add 1/2 slider from 00:28:640 -
00:33:293 (1,4) - Can stack these better k
00:33:774 (2,4) - Can blanket better ^
00:36:020 (5,1) - ^ it's already blanket i guess ?
01:04:255 (5) - ctrl + g k,also 01:04:576 (1) - too and i think i should ctrl + g 01:05:378 (4) - too..
01:10:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - This distance snap may be too difficult for a hard Fix to 1.2x
01:28:961 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:39:228 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:41:795 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:39:870 (1,3) - Move a little so these don't overlap k
01:41:956 (3,5) - Stack these perfectly k
01:42:277 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:42:918 (1,3) - Make a blanket ofc
01:56:988 (1,2,3,4) - Maintain distance 1.5x ? iie 1.2x :3
02:03:405 - Place a note here. Make the spinner start a 1/4 note later and add a little jump there.. xD

You are pretty good at mapping Std diffs, even though you are a ctb player haha. But your placement needs some work. How2mappingStd? xD i'm still bad at mapping Std `3`
Always look for places to stack notes and blanket sliders. And try not to overlap a lot of notes. It looks kind of ugly lol. wa-wakarimashita ._.
But good job overall

I changed a few little things in my GD. Here is the updated version:

GD

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71635
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Majesty (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Majesty (Short Ver.)
Artist:MitiS
ArtistUnicode:MitiS
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Joey's Insane
Source:
Tags:Fort Nightcore Mix [ Joey ] Eroge Game Kin
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:9
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38,306,70271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,320,70351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,324,70432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,319,70512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,312,70592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,317,70672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,328,70753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,342,70833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,243,70993,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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381,243,71154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,122,71394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,241,71634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,241,71715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,241,71795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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308,121,72758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,226,72918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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199,165,74202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,286,74362,2,0,P|205:299|260:279,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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130,101,74843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,50,75004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,169,75164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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378,160,76287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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38,105,77089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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236,43,82223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,334,90565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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66,216,94255,2,0,L|-7:134,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,76,94576,2,0,P|197:62|282:98,1,150
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384,78,95218,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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382,174,95699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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227,183,101314,2,0,P|185:221|227:327,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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182,54,105325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,38,108533,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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331,281,109015,2,0,P|274:238|142:263,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,133,109496,5,0,0:0:0:0:
227,95,109656,2,0,P|281:59|333:52,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,182,109977,2,0,P|255:217|201:228,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,257,110298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,305,110458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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206,144,111100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
307,61,111261,2,0,L|378:131,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,260,111581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,222,111742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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245,130,122122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,125,122443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,225,122764,5,0,0:0:0:0:
338,256,122924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,297,123085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,174,123245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,331,123405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123486,12,0,129823,0:0:0:0:

k.. updated.

[-Sophie-]_old

[-Sophie-]_old 2014-07-05T05:52:23+00:00

[General]
Normal > Easy wat
[Easy]
01:04:736 (2,4) - 2 is overlapping 4
01:54:422 (1) - Extend this slider and delete note in the middle EG ;

[Hard]
Fine!
[Joey's Insane]
01:56:988 (1) - No need for a reverse
[Rain]
Seems ok to me

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-05T06:27:01+00:00

[-Sophie-] wrote:
[General]
Normal > Easy wat wat ? oki.. reduce my CS in easy
[Easy]
01:04:736 (2,4) - 2 is overlapping 4 Fixed~
01:54:422 (1) - Extend this slider and delete note in the middle sry.. i want add note at 01:54:903 - cuz there is a sound of guitar ? or something else
EG ;
[Hard]
Fine! >,<

[Rain]
Seems ok to me weeew~

thanks for mod spophie~

EXC4L1BUR123

15 posts

Joined April 2012

EXC4L1BUR123 2014-07-05T08:20:20+00:00

Excalibur Mod!

[General]
All is good. Yeah. All is good. I guess haha lolwhut

[Easy]
00:33:613 (1) - Blanket this with the previous slider for them to look good together.

00:40:031 (2,3) - Blanket~

00:56:073 (4) - Blanket with the previous one.

00:59:282 (1) - Wouldn't it look better like this: (http://puu.sh/9XzJF/d7df90c62b.jpg)?

01:00:565 (3) - move this slider a bit to the right so that it would blanket with the next slider.

01:28:480 (1) - Blanket

01:50:298 (1) - Blanket

I'm so sorry for asking so many blankets haha lol
You can call me Blanket Mod! hahah lolno

Good luck~

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-05T08:52:39+00:00

EXC4L1BUR123 wrote:
Excalibur Mod!

[General]
All is good. Yeah. All is good. I guess haha lolwhut

[Easy]
00:33:613 (1) - Blanket this with the previous slider for them to look good together. No.. i guess xD

00:40:031 (2,3) - Blanket~ -_- ok

00:56:073 (4) - Blanket with the previous one. Nope.

00:59:282 (1) - Wouldn't it look better like this: (http://puu.sh/9XzJF/d7df90c62b.jpg)? Nope.. dats will broke the DS

01:00:565 (3) - move this slider a bit to the right so that it would blanket with the next slider. No i guess..

01:28:480 (1) - Blanket it's already blanket i guess..

01:50:298 (1) - Blanket ^^

I'm so sorry for asking so many blankets haha lol
You can call me Blanket Mod! hahah lolno

Good luck~

Thanks for mod..

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-07-06T06:19:45+00:00

Heyy Asuna! From my queue~

[General]
I've seen this bg on another song before.. (am I allowed to link it? lol) *cough.https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87500
Wait nvm it's a little different o_o
Love your hitsounds!!
01:53:186 Is this cropped or does it actually sound like that? Doesn't connect smoothly at all :s

[Easy]
00:23:346 (1) - whistle on this too?
00:31:047 (1) - ^
00:32:330 (2) - ^ (And basically the next couple sliders)
00:35:539 (3) - Remove whistle on the end, sounds off
00:36:180 (1) - Whistle again
00:41:314 (1) - Whistle this one for sure!!
00:52:865 (2) - Soft:Custom2 Clap?
01:01:849 (1) - Soft:Custom2 Whistle
01:04:416 (1) - ^
01:05:699 (3) - ^
01:06:982 (1) - ^ (So basically every beginning of a measure)
01:32:009 (3) - I wouldn't stack in Easys
01:59:555 (1) - Random clap sound
02:03:405 (1) - take out the finish
Mainly just hitsounds cuz this is pretty well done!

[Kin's Normal]
01:31:367 (1) - I would shorten the spinner to put something 01:33:934
01:41:314 (1,2) - remove whistle noise

Inconsistent hitsounds :s Even tho they're so beautiful D:
This is really well done too!

[Hard]
00:20:940 (2,3) - Ctrl + G
00:22:223 (3) - http://puu.sh/9YMAs/e8bc5ed2e3.jpg
00:23:025 (1) - maybe stack this with ^?
00:23:988 (5) - Make this into (4)
00:24:148 (6) - ^ into (5)
00:23:827 (4) - (348, 224) and into (6)
00:26:394 (3) - curl up a bit more
00:34:897 (1) - stack?
00:53:988 (7) - 00:54:950 (4) - stack?
01:01:207 (3) - not perfect stack
01:10:913 - weird pause, feels empty
01:20:779 (1) - better blanket
01:23:827 (1) - Ctrl + G
01:24:469 (4) - ^
01:24:950 (1) - weird whistle
01:29:442 (4,5,6,7) - Space these out evenly
01:32:651 (1,2,3) - looks better http://puu.sh/9YN7M/51510c5994.jpg
01:33:613 (4) - put in center
01:37:464 (4) - (336,296)
01:54:422 (2) - NC
01:56:988 (1,2,3,4) - Equal distance plz

[Joey's Insane]
00:23:667 (4) - Ctrl + G?
00:40:031 (6) - NC
00:52:223 (5) - since you're not trying to stack, and its not much of a jump (284,104)
01:19:817 (1) - (348,128)
01:52:544 (9) - NC or you have 17 combo
02:00:036 (2) - Curve inwards instead of outwards?
02:02:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - omg illuminati http://puu.sh/9YNNH/62f7ddc179.jpg (edit: just realized my pic isn't very straight but u get my point:] )

[Fortune]
00:03:613 (3,4,5) - not perfect triangle
00:06:180 (2,3,4) - ^
00:11:635 (5) - Center?
00:16:448 (3,4,5) - not perf triangle
00:31:367 (2,3,5,1) - are these supposed to stack?
00:36:501 (3) - (464,68)
00:37:785 (3) - (267,276)
00:45:325 (2) - not stacked properly
00:52:143 (5) - http://puu.sh/9YOik/4458ad6cf9.jpg and http://puu.sh/9YOj4/a79d8e17b8.jpg
00:57:678 (8) - take clap off
01:33:613 (6) - You can speed the SV up here instead of 01:33:934 (1) -
01:40:031 (1) - stack with 01:40:351 (1) - ?
01:41:314 (6) - overlap eh
01:44:362 (2) - tilt this down so no overlap
01:48:373 (2) - blanket more
01:49:175 (2) - (212,272)
01:49:977 (7) - (180,92)
01:50:940 (2,3) - unnecessary overlap
01:56:186 (2) - don't end sliders on a blue tick ):

I hope I helped!
GL with ur map~~

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-06T07:42:55+00:00

Gaia wrote:
Heyy Asuna! From my queue~

[General]
I've seen this bg on another song before.. (am I allowed to link it? lol) *cough.https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87500
Wait nvm it's a little different o_o Lol!~
Love your hitsounds!! Thanks~
01:53:186 Is this cropped or does it actually sound like that? Doesn't connect smoothly at all :s sshhh..

[Easy]
00:23:346 (1) - whistle on this too? k
00:31:047 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:330 (2) - ^ (And basically the next couple sliders) ^
00:35:539 (3) - Remove whistle on the end, sounds off ^
00:36:180 (1) - Whistle again ^
00:41:314 (1) - Whistle this one for sure!! ^
00:52:865 (2) - Soft:Custom2 Clap? k
01:01:849 (1) - Soft:Custom2 Whistle ^
01:04:416 (1) - ^ ^
01:05:699 (3) - ^ ^
01:06:982 (1) - ^ (So basically every beginning of a measure) ^
01:32:009 (3) - I wouldn't stack in Easys Why not?
01:59:555 (1) - Random clap sound changed to whistle
02:03:405 (1) - take out the finish uunn..kei
Mainly just hitsounds cuz this is pretty well done! apef.. :v

[Hard]
00:20:940 (2,3) - Ctrl + G Novveee...
00:22:223 (3) - http://puu.sh/9YMAs/e8bc5ed2e3.jpg i wont blanketing here..
00:23:025 (1) - maybe stack this with ^?
00:23:988 (5) - Make this into (4)
00:24:148 (6) - ^ into (5) just say ctrl+g them
00:23:827 (4) - (348, 224) and into (6) i'm confused.. for this part i make better flow.. idk what you mean
00:26:394 (3) - curl up a bit more wat ?
00:34:897 (1) - stack? sry.. it's already repaire the placing
00:53:988 (7) - 00:54:950 (4) - stack? k
01:01:207 (3) - not perfect stack repaired~
01:10:913 - weird pause, feels empty idthink so
01:20:779 (1) - better blanket i'll thinking about it later..
01:23:827 (1) - Ctrl + G nope..
01:24:469 (4) - ^ ^
01:24:950 (1) - weird whistle Fix~
01:29:442 (4,5,6,7) - Space these out evenly k
01:32:651 (1,2,3) - looks better http://puu.sh/9YN7M/51510c5994.jpg idthink so.. i want make them more fun.. follow the flow.. fly around
01:33:613 (4) - put in center No change since i didnt applied your mod in above.. i want keep stacking
01:37:464 (4) - (336,296) better (344,300) for PF blanket
01:54:422 (2) - NC -_-)a ... `-`.. ma ii NC'd
01:56:988 (1,2,3,4) - Equal distance plz wakatta

I hope I helped!
GL with ur map~~

Thanks For Mod~

Fuuyu

856 posts

Joined September 2013

Fuuyu 2014-07-06T09:58:57+00:00

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

*Mp3 --> OK

*BG --> OK

( I can't edit your BG for now , too tired XD )

Nyan~MOD

Important : The way I'll be modding is to NOT change your mapping style so sorry if I only modded few

I'll be more accurate about slider blankets now . .

[Easy]
01:49:015 Fix .

01:50:298 (1,2) Fix

01:52:865 Fix

01:58:593 Change .

[Kin's Normal]
AR +0.5
00:02:779 Fix

00:22:544 (2,3) Fix and Change

00:23:346 Fix

01:21:421 Fix

01:47:410 Fix

01:56:988 Fix

01:58:272 (3,4) Fix and Change

01:59:555 Fix

[Hard]
00:23:507 Fix

00:25:913 Fix

00:27:678 Improve

00:32:811 Improve

00:38:426 Improve

00:54:148 Fix

01:02:811 Improve

01:05:378 Fix

01:18:052 Fix / Copy + paste --> 01:17:731 then Ctrl+H

01:22:384 Fix

01:32:651 (1,2) Fix and Change

01:50:619 Fix .

01:57:149 (2,3,4) Fix placement

That's All, so sorry if I was not much of a help

Good Luck~

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-07-06T11:47:30+00:00

Fortune

http://puu.sh/9Z3At/527deafab7.osu

little stacking

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-06T12:52:11+00:00

xLoupGarou wrote:
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue
hheeyy.. rainbow sheep.. i'm kwan's sheep :v

*Mp3 --> OK

*BG --> OK

( I can't edit your BG for now , too tired XD ) what's wrong with my bg ? :v

Nyan~MOD
Important : The way I'll be modding is to NOT change your mapping style so sorry if I only modded few
I'll be more accurate about slider blankets now . .

[Easy]
01:49:015 Fix .

01:50:298 (1,2) Fix

01:52:865 Fix

01:58:593 Change .

[Kin's Normal]
AR +0.5
00:02:779 Fix

00:22:544 (2,3) Fix and Change

00:23:346 Fix

01:21:421 Fix

01:47:410 Fix

01:56:988 Fix

01:58:272 (3,4) Fix and Change

01:59:555 Fix

[Hard]
00:23:507 Fix

00:25:913 Fix

00:27:678 Improve

00:32:811 Improve

00:38:426 Improve

00:54:148 Fix

01:02:811 Improve

01:05:378 Fix

01:18:052 Fix / Copy + paste --> 01:17:731 then Ctrl+H

01:22:384 Fix

01:32:651 (1,2) Fix and Change

01:50:619 Fix .

01:57:149 (2,3,4) Fix placement

That's All, so sorry if I was not much of a help
Good Luck~

thanks for mods some mod applied..

Fort wrote:
Fortune
http://puu.sh/9Z3At/527deafab7.osu
little stacking

thanks for update...

UPDATED.

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-07-07T04:30:46+00:00

From my modding queue

Easy first

1. 00:33:613 (1,3) - This would look a whole lot better.

Like this

2. 00:54:148 (1,3) - Almost the same issue as 1. You might need to temporary turn of the DS for that (or change DS value)

Sample here

3. 01:03:453 (3,2) - These two sliders don't mirror well.

Example

4. If you altered 3. you should make this change too. (Directly after 3.)

Changes for a blanket

5. Like a chain reaction, you will need to change 01:06:982 (1) - if you altered 3. and 4.

6. These two don't fit well. 01:13:720 (1,2) -

But this fits

7. 01:28:480 (1,2) - Same issue with 6. Quick reminder: You can use Flip Horizontally and Flip Vertically to achieve a perfect pair of fitting sliders.

8. 01:33:934 (1) - Move it a little higher than 01:32:330 (4) -

9. 01:34:255 (2,3) and 01:34:255 (2,3) - - Same as 7.

10. 01:38:747 (1) - avoid overlapping with 01:37:464 (1) - even in the editor.

Hard diff

Okay I don't really see big problems here but only some really really minor ones.

1. 00:56:394 (5) - Stack it with 00:55:592 (2) -

2. 01:00:726 (1) - Stack it with 00:59:603 (2) 's head.

3. 01:00:886 (2,3) - Make them fit perfectly using the flip horizontally + vertically trick.

...Perhaps that's all...(you don't use DS for this diff, right?)

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-07T05:03:05+00:00

Thanks For Mod.. Fix some stuff~

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-07-07T12:12:29+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[Kin's Normal]
01:31:367 (1) - I would shorten the spinner to put something 01:33:934 I want to let at least 2/1 break after a spinner, to let some time for the beginners
01:41:314 (1,2) - remove whistle noise ye fix'd

Inconsistent hitsounds :s Even tho they're so beautiful D: just pointing out won't help me <_< Could you tell me why you find it inconsistent ?
This is really well done too! thanks \o

xLoupGarou wrote:
[Kin's Normal]
AR +0.5
00:02:779 Fix this will break the flow between the 2 objects

00:22:544 (2,3) Fix and Change will break the flow between 3 and 1, also vertical/horizontal slider won't make a better map

00:23:346 Fix when I watch it, look like the flow is lil broken between the 2 objects

01:21:421 Fix same as said earlier, don't focus your mod on vertical/horizontal slider <_<

01:47:410 Fix will break the flow, and also same as earlier

01:56:988 Fix blanket improv'd

01:58:272 (3,4) Fix and Change same thing vertical/horizontal

01:59:555 Fix looks good, but will break the curve between this one and the next object :/

only few fix'd sorry :/

here is some thing I want to tell you to improve your modding

Instead of pointing out some slider to make a vertical/horizontal slider, try to watch if the timelines is good, if hit sound are good, if New Combo are consistent etc ... and also it's flow well, if the flow is broken, or when it's broken, if it's fit with the music.

thanks \o

update

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Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-07T21:37:35+00:00

Kin... you updat my rain ?

i get surprised... after i paste the code your diff is gone.. :v
i re-copy.. still gone... and i see..

this

[Metadata]
Title:Majesty (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Majesty (Short Ver.)
Artist:MitiS
ArtistUnicode:MitiS
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Rain
Source:
Tags:Fort Nightcore Mix [ Joey ] Eroge Game Kin
BeatmapID:438826
BeatmapSetID:183132

VER Rain :v

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-07-08T05:30:25+00:00

Mod requested. o/

[General]

As I see you don't have SB so Widescreen should be turned off.
Add CLSW to the tags?

[Platter]

00:29:763 (4) - Move this one a little bit the right. I can be learned but its kinda sudden at first play.
01:09:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know this is Platter but you can still use an easier patter during stream. Like a nice S.

I won't point them out one by one but during the kiai where you used sudden jumps like 01:45:004 (1,2) you also can use HDash. If you use them wisely they can be really interesting. And currently your map is only hard because it requires to memorize the random jumps. Only a few HDash is used (well, the song is calm) but during the kiai there are some possible place to use some. (ok, shit sentence).

Kinda reminds me to Steven's maps but good work. Just try to use more HDash during kiai and this should be fine.

[Rain]

Why most of your patterns merged in the middle of the screen? q.q

00:29:603 (8,1) - This HDash is unfitting. The song is still calm at this part. If you really want a HDash here then separate (8) into two circle and add HDash between them. There is a high pitched sound on that big white tick.
00:36:180 (5,6) - Just one long slider? There is a small sound between them.
00:55:432 (1,2,3) - Shorten the distance between these. Its kinda hard to catch 'em all.
00:56:555 (6) - Just use one circle here. This way the rhythm will be consistent with your previous mapping at 00:53:667.
00:59:763 (3,4,5,6,7) - I know what you followed but here you can hear one more, different sound. And maybe it will be better following it since your slider is already ending on that. Remove (4,5) and move (6,7) 1/4 earlier. Well, there is a few more possible combination here but I like this one. :3 Decide which one you want.
01:01:849 (6) - Remove this one to make your rhythm consistent.
01:11:073 - Add a circle and handle it as a small stream. This way it will be a nice outro from your stream (16-5-3-3). Although this part is still stream I see what you tried to do. :3
01:14:843 (2,3,4) - Avoid these jumps as much as possible because its really hard to come back after the circle on high speed.
02:03:245 (4) - Move this a little bit closer to the previous note.

As I see this is a mixed CLSW and ZHSteven map. Random jumps out from the flow and edge jumps. I'm not saying its bad but I can't test it properly. This is all I can do after 10+ try. q.q

[Deluge]

I know this is Deluge but I don't think having this many HDash is fitting. I know you followed the white ticks with your dashes but during these dashes the song is calm. The whole song is calm even the kiai. Some HDash can be used or even a fine overdose can be mapped but not this. I suggest you to remove most of your dash. After playing with your Princess Blood I though your mapping is finally starting to be better, but this is totally countering it. I'm not willing to mod it.

[]

Worst mod ever. \o/ I can't even touch Deluge, Rain is too random to me and Platter is more or less good. Anyways, good luck. o/

/send me a pm after you changed things on Platter, or after a few more mod and I test it once more. Well, I can take a look at your whole mapset once more.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-08T06:32:04+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Mod requested. o/

[General]

As I see you don't have SB so Widescreen should be turned off.
Add CLSW to the tags? D: why i can forget this

[Platter]

00:29:763 (4) - Move this one a little bit the right. I can be learned but its kinda sudden at first play.k
01:09:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know this is Platter but you can still use an easier patter during stream. Like a nice S.i'll try

I won't point them out one by one but during the kiai where you used sudden jumps like 01:45:004 (1,2) you also can use HDash. If you use them wisely they can be really interesting. And currently your map is only hard because it requires to memorize the random jumps. Only a few HDash is used (well, the song is calm) but during the kiai there are some possible place to use some.added some HDash not at all sudden jump (ok, shit sentence).xD

Kinda reminds me to Steven's maps but good work. Just try to use more HDash during kiai and this should be fine. `3`

[Rain]

Why most of your patterns merged in the middle of the screen? q.q really ?

00:29:603 (8,1) - This HDash is unfitting. The song is still calm at this part. If you really want a HDash here then separate (8) into two circle and add HDash between them. There is a high pitched sound on that big white tick.i prefer remove Hdash
00:36:180 (5,6) - Just one long slider? There is a small sound between them.changed
00:55:432 (1,2,3) - Shorten the distance between these. Its kinda hard to catch 'em all. k
00:56:555 (6) - Just use one circle here. This way the rhythm will be consistent with your previous mapping at 00:53:667.removed
00:59:763 (3,4,5,6,7) - I know what you followed but here you can hear one more, different sound. And maybe it will be better following it since your slider is already ending on that. Remove (4,5) and move (6,7) 1/4 earlier. Well, there is a few more possible combination here but I like this one. :3 Decide which one you want. applied your suggestion
01:01:849 (6) - Remove this one to make your rhythm consistent.Nope.. i think i keep add this cicle there and add circle 01:04:416 - for consistenting the rythme
01:11:073 - Add a circle and handle it as a small stream. This way it will be a nice outro from your stream (16-5-3-3). Although this part is still stream I see what you tried to do. :3 added i guess :3
01:14:843 (2,3,4) - Avoid these jumps as much as possible because its really hard to come back after the circle on high speed.ctrl+g it's enough right xD
02:03:245 (4) - Move this a little bit closer to the previous note.Nope.. i know we always miss there xD

As I see this is a mixed CLSW and ZHSteven map.Really ? it's my map style "jump will follow the rythme" idk if this is Mix of crystal and steven map xD Random jumps out from the flow and edge jumps. I'm not saying its bad but I can't test it properly. This is all I can do after 10+ try. xD 10+ xq.q

[Deluge]

I know this is Deluge but I don't think having this many HDash is fitting. I know you followed the white ticks with your dashes but during these dashes the song is calm. The whole song is calm even the kiai. Some HDash can be used or even a fine overdose can be mapped but not this. I suggest you to remove most of your dash. After playing with your Princess Blood I though your mapping is finally starting to be better, but this is totally countering it. I'm not willing to mod it. xD blame CLSW map.. xD

[]

Worst mod ever. \o/ I can't even touch Deluge, Rain is too random to me and Platter is more or less good. Anyways, good luck. o/

/send me a pm after you changed things on Platter, or after a few more mod and I test it once more. Well, I can take a look at your whole mapset once more.

thanks for mod

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2014-07-09T00:02:55+00:00

Came from mod queue... I have problems reading low AR at fast songs...

[Overview]

On every diff (every diff includes the CtB ones) the last spinner ends at different points. Modify it so that it will end at the same place on every diff.

[Easy]

01:32:009 (3,4) - Stacking notes on Easy makes them hard to read. Correct that.
02:02:122 (1) - Sliders with more than 1 reverse are hard to read on Easy. Delete a reverse and add a circle.

[Kin's Normal]

01:14:041 (3,4,1) - Even I had problems at first seeing this kind of combo. I pray of you, move the second slider somewhere else.
01:16:608 (2,3,1) - ^^
01:19:175 (2,3,1) - ^^
01:24:309 (2,3,1) - ^^
01:29:603 (3,4,1) - ^^ (This kind of combo is along the Kiai, so I'll stop mentioning those. Fix all of them if you can/want)

[Hard]

HP Drain = 6?
Dat jumps... They make this look like an Insane. Try to make jumps somehow easier.
01:10:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream... Change it for a triple one and make last note a 1/4 length slider that ends at (5) end?
01:36:501 (5,1) - In a situation like this, people most likely will get 100. What if you move the stream somewhere else (without making it a jump)?

That's all.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-09T06:16:26+00:00

LixRei wrote:
Came from mod queue... I have problems reading low AR at fast songs...

[Overview]

On every diff (every diff includes the CtB ones) the last spinner ends at different points. Modify it so that it will end at the same place on every diff.
[Easy]

01:32:009 (3,4) - Stacking notes on Easy makes them hard to read. Correct that.._. okay
02:02:122 (1) - Sliders with more than 1 reverse are hard to read on Easy. Delete a reverse and add a circle.changed

[Hard]

HP Drain = 6? Nope
Dat jumps... They make this look like an Insane. Try to make jumps somehow easier.it's insane before xD now changed to Hard , maybe i'll change to Hard+
01:10:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream... Change it for a triple one and make last note a 1/4 length slider that ends at (5) end? I make all note to 1/4 slider reverse.
01:36:501 (5,1) - In a situation like this, people most likely will get 100. What if you move the stream somewhere else (without making it a jump)? it's fine i guess
That's all.

thanks for mod

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-07-09T20:36:06+00:00

LixRei wrote:
[Kin's Normal]

01:14:041 (3,4,1) - Even I had problems at first seeing this kind of combo. I pray of you, move the second slider somewhere else.
01:16:608 (2,3,1) - ^^
01:19:175 (2,3,1) - ^^
01:24:309 (2,3,1) - ^^
01:29:603 (3,4,1) - ^^ (This kind of combo is along the Kiai, so I'll stop mentioning those. Fix all of them if you can/want)

I won't unstack, sorry, so nothing fix :/

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-07-10T04:22:37+00:00

i've got maps sorted by difficulty and this map has a very similar background to another one

they're right next to each other

it's creepy af

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2014-07-10T04:40:28+00:00

pishifat wrote:
i've got maps sorted by difficulty and this map has a very similar background to another one

they're right next to each other

it's creepy af

xD lol~

Famous

404 posts

Joined April 2011

Famous 2014-07-10T16:31:06+00:00

Mod request from my Queue

Damn, that song is good!

General

"Short ver." you cut the song yourself, right? That's not a nice 01:53:186 cut.

Easy

That's a really hard Easy. Maybe rename it in Easy+ or something like that?
00:30:726 (4,1) - Spacing. Beginners will be have their problems when you don't keep the spacing.
00:33:613 (1,3) - No stack at Easy diff's. That will confuse beginners.
00:40:031 (2,1) - ^
00:54:148 (1,3) - ^
01:00:565 (3,1) - These objects need more distance. That Easy diff is a hard one anyway, so it's really hard to read.
01:05:699 (3,1) - Beginners will be confused.
01:09:549 (1,1) - Not enough time to react for beginners.
01:34:897 (3,2) - These two are too close.
01:58:272 (1) - Remove NC.
02:00:839 (1) - ^

Kim's Normal

The only one error I can see is, that this diff is a little bit hard to read.
01:14:523 (4,1) - I guess that's too hard to read.
01:17:089 (3,1) - Actually the same as above, but it's more readable. Maybe change it?
01:19:656 (3,1) - ^
01:24:790 (3,1) - ^
01:29:924 (4,1) - ^
01:35:218 (3) - You should add NC here, because it's easier too read.
01:36:662 (1) - Remove NC and add NC 01:36:822 (1). Same reason as above. Then remove NC 01:37:785 (1).
01:40:191 (4,1) - The same as the second point.
01:41:154 (3,1) - ^
01:45:325 (4,1) - I guess that's obvious.
01:47:892 (3,1) - ^

Hard+

00:22:223 (3,4) - Spacing?
01:10:993 (1,1,1,2) - I guess you should space them more.
01:33:293 (3,4,1) - Spacing again.
01:41:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - That's hard to read, even for Hard+.

Joey's Insane

Stack the end of 00:23:346 (3) with the head of 00:22:544 (7).
00:55:031 (6) - I don't understand the placement. Why don't put them more between 00:54:790 (5,7)?

Fortune

00:23:186 (6,1,2,1,2,3) - I guess the NC should help reading it, but they don't. Removing the NC 00:23:346 (1), 00:23:667 (1) and adding NC 00:23:988 (10) looks weird too. It's also hard to read 00:23:988 (2,3). Maybe change the pattern.
00:46:127 (2,3,4,5,1) - Too confusing.
00:47:250 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the pattern changed there? It's hard to read and also doesn't fit imo.
00:47:731 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - Hitsounds too quiet. That's unrankabel.
00:51:902 (4,5,6,7), 00:53:186 (2,3,4,5), 00:54:469 (3,4,5,6), 00:55:913 (4,5,6,7), 00:57:197 (4,5,6,7) and 00:58:319 (2,3,4,5) - don't feel and sound right. Adding a circle between them (00:52:223 for example) sounds better.
01:06:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Them stream jumps.
01:09:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Think about it to change that stream.
01:12:116 - Sliders are too fast for the pattern. They're way faster than the most jumps.
01:17:571 (2,3,4,5) - I said it already.
01:20:779 (1) - Nope. It's hard enough to play with that slider speed.
01:23:827 (2,3) - Too hard.
01:28:961 (7) - Add NC?
01:28:961 (1,2) - Too hard again.
01:34:255 (3,4,5,6) - The same as 00:51:902 (4,5,6,7).
01:36:662 (2,3,2,3) - Too hard.
01:38:105 (2,3,4,5) - The same as 00:51:902 (4,5,6,7).
01:40:672 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:41:314 (7) - Sounds wrong. Make the slider shorter.
01:44:362 (2,1) - Too hard.
01:47:571 (4,1) - ^
01:49:496 (4,5) - ^
01:51:902 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Feels more like the whole part is a stream.
02:03:486 (4,5) - Delete them.

I guess that should be a Extra diff, but many parts are too hard to play and to read.

That's it. Nice song and nice mapset. Good luck!

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-07-11T15:07:05+00:00

-Famous- wrote:
Kim's Normal who is Kim ?
The only one error I can see is, that this diff is a little bit hard to read.
01:14:523 (4,1) - I guess that's too hard to read.
01:17:089 (3,1) - Actually the same as above, but it's more readable. Maybe change it?
01:19:656 (3,1) - ^
01:24:790 (3,1) - ^
01:29:924 (4,1) - ^
01:35:218 (3) - You should add NC here, because it's easier too read. fix'd
01:36:662 (1) - Remove NC and add NC 01:36:822 (1). Same reason as above. Then remove NC 01:37:785 (1). no, it'll make my NC inconsistent, if you watch/listen carefully, my NC is on melody
01:40:191 (4,1) - The same as the second point.
01:41:154 (3,1) - ^
01:45:325 (4,1) - I guess that's obvious.
01:47:892 (3,1) - ^
about stack, no I won't unstack. Also, it's a normal diff, so 1/2 stack is not a problem, and when I stack it's only 1/2, so consistent

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Mystyk

osu! Alumni

950 posts

Joined June 2011

Mystyk 2014-07-11T16:02:46+00:00

Hi! Mod from my queue!

General:
I would suggest you to change the yellow color, because the reverse arrow can be hardly seen - http://puu.sh/a5NgB/c66d74c770.jpg

[Easy]
01:00:565 (3) - why does the distance change here suddenly? o.o you used 1,20 and now it's 1,00, you should use the same distance
01:01:849 (1) - I think you forgot to change this to custom hitsound, the normal whistle doesn't fit - http://puu.sh/a5Cbz/a66cd7b800.png
01:34:897 (3,1,2) - might be a small thing but you could make this look nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1804346
01:54:422 (1) - this would have better flow: http://puu.sh/a5Eaz/4564b6ad51.jpg
02:03:085 (2) - nazi but put this a little further >.< it will look better - http://puu.sh/a5Eim/f569f05fec.jpg (I also added a little bit bigger curve to the slider)

[Kin's Normal]
01:14:041 (3,4,1) - well tbh I think there was too much of this stack so I would remove some of them maybe, but the difficulty is quite nice imo it just might be a bit hard
01:22:865 (2) - remove? There are quite a lot 1/2 notes, so it would be nice if you could make this a little easier

[Hard+]
Well this rather plays like an insane imo and the gap between Normal and Hard+ is a bit too big in my opinion
00:22:223 (3) - nazi but put this a little up so that it will look nicer - http://puu.sh/a5PZ8/4c8b582a36.jpg
00:24:950 (2,3,4,5,1) - I don't really see a reason why you used different spacing between these, but it would really be better and more logical if you used equal spacing - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806345
00:26:876 (4) - ctrl+g on this, it will flow better - http://puu.sh/a6AWP/ea39cf8889.jpg
01:01:528 (4) - it would fit better if you removed the reverse and added a hit circle instead, because there is a big beat in the music, so it will feel better to click it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806366
01:08:587 (2,3) - I'm sure you can improve this blanket - http://puu.sh/a6BHG/ae4ff90356.jpg
01:09:389 (5) - nazi, but put this a few grids up so that it won't touch 01:08:908 (3) -
01:09:549 (1,2,1) - why did you use different distance? it's confusing, please use equal distance
01:11:314 (1,1,2) - I think this pattern doesn't look nice because 01:11:635 (1,2) - these are placed too close to the previous slider, so I would rather do something like this - http://puu.sh/a6BY7/b5412b475f.jpg
01:12:116 (1,2,3) - please try to decide whether you want to use 1,00 or 1,10 spacing, your map will be neater if you use them nicely, but just randomly changing distance dosen't look nice (and doesn't make sense), in this case the problem could be solved if you put this 01:12:597 (3) - here x:124 y:16
01:20:458 (3,1) - small thing but imo this would look nicer - http://puu.sh/a6Che/224ff26fac.jpg
01:26:715 (3,4,5) - 4 and 5 has bigger spacing, why? place 01:26:876 (4) - x:380 y:284 and it won't look as messy as before imo

- http://puu.sh/a6CnY/c0f462f5fc.jpg
01:27:196 (7,2) - this overlap doesn't look nice either imo, try to stack (7) with (2) properly and then replace the upcoming objects a little bit - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806426
01:27:517 (1) - tbh I'm not a fan of this shape, but it's really just my opinion, don't change it if you like it, but again random distance change as well, so here's an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806443 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806449
01:38:105 (2,3) - in general, try to avoid placing sliders so "close" to each other, it would already look a lot better if they were a few grids away - http://puu.sh/a6CZF/99c7cfba61.jpg --> http://puu.sh/a6D2S/769ecdc9c6.jpg
01:50:940 (2,3,4) - if you're trying to make a blanket pattern, do it properly! - http://puu.sh/a6D7D/db45fb19bd.jpg
01:55:544 (5,1,2) - you're using different distance again, but this time it doesn't look good imo, it would look a lot neater if you used equal spacing in the slow part - something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806475 - it would also flow better imo
01:57:470 (4,5,6) - same here ^ but it's also enough if you just move (5) a little - http://puu.sh/a6Djg/526b6b5409.jpg
01:58:432 (1,2,3) - this would fit to the rhythm better - http://puu.sh/a6Dlr/65595d39ef.jpg - because 01:58:753 (2) - in the middle of this slider you can hear the piano sound, so the one I suggested plays better and sounds better

[Joey's Insane]
00:32:330 (1) - remove clap from the end of the slider, it doesn't fit especially that you used different sounds o.o I think you wanted this without the clap anyway
01:07:945 (6,1) - it's annoying that you didn't follow the fast beats in the music, so it would fit better if you shortened the slider and added a hit circle - http://puu.sh/a6JTo/ab78a1e2c1.jpg
01:11:795 (9) - add clap? (or a different hitsound) that beat is bigger and slightly different from the others, it would be nice if it was emphasized
01:44:442 - similar to 01:07:945 (6,1) - I would add a hit circle here, because it follow the background music nicely

[Fortune]
00:52:384 (7) - this - http://puu.sh/a6KpX/66104bc4cf.jpg - would fit better because the "long" melody starts on the whit tick and it's better to hit a big beat with a slider start or hitcircle than with a reverse
01:12:116 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider to emphasize the kiai part and the big beat better
01:18:533 (1,4) - this might be small but I think it would look better if you put 01:19:015 (4,5) - a little to the right like this - http://puu.sh/a6KLc/c77c01ea98.jpg
01:21:982 - add hit cirlce to emphasize the fast beat in the music, this is the highest diff yet you don't map to fast beats, but you added a hit circle 01:22:624 (2) - where it doesn't fit well imo, so it would be nice if you followed my suggestions here
01:28:159 (3,5) - why do they overlap? if you do that at least make it look like a pattern, e.g. like this http://puu.sh/a6L1V/08810fae18.jpg
01:32:651 (3) - I would rather replace this, because it's a bit confusing after the stream - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806950
01:33:613 (6,1) - I'm sure you can improve this blanket to make your map look nicer - http://puu.sh/a6Lc5/ea110a76d8.jpg
01:40:031 (1,1) - this is very similar to 01:28:159 (3,5) - but in this case I would just place it a little upwards - http://puu.sh/a6LfQ/781c845d77.jpg
01:41:154 (5,6) - I personally don't like how the end of (6) overlaps with (4) and it might as well be confusing to play, so I would rather do something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806961
01:43:881 (1,2) - I think this doesn't flow well, because the direction of (1) leads to the opposite direction than where (2) is - http://puu.sh/a6LwC/3ca44c5737.jpg so I would suggest this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1806972 but something different might work as well, since this is just an example

Good luck!

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