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Disasterpeace - Deleterious Abscondee

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Timorisu
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Timorisu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 4. Juli 2014 at 22:08:32

Artist: Disasterpeace
Title: Deleterious Abscondee
Source: Bit.Trip Presents: Runner 2 - Future Legend of Rhythm Alien
Tags: cheesiest Priti Irreversible 8-bit 8bit bit platformer chiptune
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3627kb
Play Time: 00:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (1,52 stars, 38 notes)
  2. cheesiest's Easy (1,48 stars, 47 notes)
  3. Hard (2,87 stars, 98 notes)
  4. Irre's Extra (4,27 stars, 100 notes)
  5. Normal (1,91 stars, 56 notes)
  6. Priti's Insane (3,76 stars, 110 notes)
Download: Disasterpeace - Deleterious Abscondee
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Last edited by Timorisu , edited 27 times in total.
cheesiest
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Joined September 2009
cheesiest
http://puu.sh/9nedd/39f127f1c5.rar

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Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena
pending yey
Yoeri
433 posts
Joined March 2012
Yoeri
[General]
Offset +19 or something idk but timing is wrong.

[Beginner]
00:03:897 (4) - Slant this a bit, it'd fit the style more.
00:06:710 (4,2) - (2) needs to be curved a little more for a better blanket.
00:12:335 (5,6) - Try to make these angles exactly 45 degrees.
00:14:960 (2,3) - This maybe? http://puu.sh/9oWLp/3bb29ea0a9.jpg

[cheesiest's Easy]
00:15:897 (2,1,2,1) - These 1/2 sliders are very interesting, but I don't think they really work in these kind of situations where 1/1 and 1/2 have the same distance.
00:31:085 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same here really.

[Normal]
00:01:647 (5) - Use two circles instead? Seems more fun in my opinion.
00:03:897 (5) - ^
00:07:460 (2,3) - Try for 45 degree angles.

[Hard]
AR 7? Doesn't seem too hard.
00:03:335 (4) - Outside of the grid.
00:26:585 (1,2) - Change both or just (2) to all circles.

[Priti's Insane]
Can be AR 8 if you want.
00:00:710 (1,2) - I find this unfitting to be honest. At least silence the sliderends.
00:02:960 (1,2) - ^
00:24:710 (4) - Change to two circles.
00:27:710 (4) - ^

[Irre's Extra]
00:13:085 (1) - This is a bit too loud.
00:21:897 (4,5,6) - Confusing antijumps.
00:29:585 (1,2) - The flow isn't great.
00:31:835 (1,2) - Put these under (1)'s end and remove (2).
00:32:303 (4) - Remove.
Timorisu
771 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Timorisu

Yoeri wrote:

[General]
Offset +19 or something idk but timing is wrong. Ye I'll ask other people

[Beginner]
00:03:897 (4) - Slant this a bit, it'd fit the style more.
00:06:710 (4,2) - (2) needs to be curved a little more for a better blanket.
00:12:335 (5,6) - Try to make these angles exactly 45 degrees.
00:14:960 (2,3) - This maybe? http://puu.sh/9oWLp/3bb29ea0a9.jpg Hmmm, makes sense but the break would be quite obnoxious

[Normal]
00:01:647 (5) - Use two circles instead? Seems more fun in my opinion.
00:03:897 (5) - ^
00:07:460 (2,3) - Try for 45 degree angles.

[Hard]
AR 7? Doesn't seem too hard.
00:03:335 (4) - Outside of the grid.
00:26:585 (1,2) - Change both or just (2) to all circles. I think the sliders play better
No comment = fixed, thanks a lot :)
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena

Yoeri wrote:

[Priti's Insane]
Can be AR 8 if you want. k
00:00:710 (1,2) - I find this unfitting to be honest. At least silence the sliderends. Changed into circles
00:02:960 (1,2) - ^
00:24:710 (4) - Change to two circles. Why? ._.
00:27:710 (4) - ^
http://puu.sh/9p1sg.osu
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Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible

Yoeri wrote:

[Irre's Extra]
00:13:085 (1) - This is a bit too loud. Well, okay.
00:21:897 (4,5,6) - Confusing antijumps. I think it's okay, at least my testplayers didn't have problems with it.
00:29:585 (1,2) - The flow isn't great. Suggestion? I like how it follows the sound, if you can provide something, sure :)
00:31:835 (1,2) - Put these under (1)'s end and remove (2). Done and no, it follows the sound clearly.
00:32:303 (4) - Remove. no, ^

thx!

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Disasterpeace - Deleterious Abscondee.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 4835
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10460
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Deleterious Abscondee
TitleUnicode:Deleterious Abscondee
Artist:Disasterpeace
ArtistUnicode:Disasterpeace
Creator:Timorisu
Version:Irre's Extra
Source:Bit.Trip Presents: Runner 2 - Future Legend of Rhythm Alien
Tags:cheesiest Priti Irreversible 8-bit 8bit bit platformer chiptune
BeatmapID:438865
BeatmapSetID:183003

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:7
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.48
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Timorisu
771 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Timorisu
You guys are so fast what the fuck
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
You even told me in game. . . . :(
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
heyo

moar bit trip runner plz

[Beginner]
  1. 00:05:210 (2,3) - This blanket can be much better
[cheesiest's Easy]
  1. 3 objects unsnapped !
  2. 00:13:835 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing !
  3. 00:27:521 (2,3) - Transition here is weird !
  4. 00:29:209 (3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing !
  5. 00:32:960 (2) - Same as above !

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:835 (1) - This kinda slider isn't recommanded in Easy/Normal diff , it's repetitive !
  2. 00:16:835 (6) - Same as above !
  3. 00:18:335 (2,3) - Blanket could be better!
  4. 00:24:335 (2,3) - Same as above !
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:085 (1) - This slider is a bit boring
  2. 00:19:085 (1) - Same as above
  3. 00:32:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shape can be improved ! Make a star !
[Faggot's Insane]
  1. 00:28:272 (1) - I'd Ctrl+G this
[Irre's Extra]
  1. 00:31:835 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get the double here ! Just put 1 note for each white tick !

Pretty nice mapset !
Sorry for my decent mod , hope you'll rank that soon :D
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena
No change Sikritpoop
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible

Priti wrote:

No change

Really. There is a sound which should be covered by 2 circles.
Timorisu
771 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Timorisu

Secretpipe wrote:

heyo

moar bit trip runner plz

[Beginner]
  1. 00:05:210 (2,3) - This blanket can be much better
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:835 (1) - This kinda slider isn't recommanded in Easy/Normal diff , it's repetitive ! I think it's fine tbh, plus it helps to aid the kiai
  2. 00:16:835 (6) - Same as above ! ^
  3. 00:18:335 (2,3) - Blanket could be better!
  4. 00:24:335 (2,3) - Same as above ! Not supposed to blanket 3
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:085 (1) - This slider is a bit boring I know, but it's the only way I found to be able to make the fade in effect and the two loud sounds, couldn't find a good transition from that 1/8 slider back to 1/2 . _.
  2. 00:19:085 (1) - Same as above
  3. 00:32:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shape can be improved ! Make a star !D00d stars are boring, triangles ftw

Pretty nice mapset !
Sorry for my decent mod , hope you'll rank that soon :D
No comment=fixed
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena

Irreversible wrote:

Priti wrote:

No change

Really. There is a sound which should be covered by 2 circles.
All that seekrtpawp said is Ctrl + G ._.
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
Beginner:

i don't think you need 1/4 beat snap divisor, try 1/2
00:00:335 (1) - 2,3,4, blanketing
at 00:20:960 (1) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9pcGw/3cc607238e.jpg so the beat is a bit more even for this level
00:25:835 (1) - is a bit low on the screen, move it up a bit
spinner 00:31:085 (1) - end on a white tick

cheesiest's Easy

possibly change to 1/2 sd
00:01:460 (3) - either 1. put this slider on a white tick and extend it so its 2 beats or 2.move it (distance snap)
00:03:897 (3) - move this slider foward to the white tick
00:13:835 (1) - to 00:15:710 (2) - try something like http://puu.sh/9pd9q/ca3f518f36.jpg
add a spinner somewhere (preferably the end so the obtainable score can be more diverse (lol those words))

Normal

again change to 1/2 sd
at 00:13:835 (1) - try this so the rhythm is more even (??) http://puu.sh/9pdwR/82bbc33704.jpg
00:20:585 (1) - ^
(personal opinion: i dont like when sliders bigger than 1/4 has more than 1 repeat)

Hard

00:04:835 (1) - try this placement so the flow is a bit better http://puu.sh/9pdJg/6b33e83ce0.jpg
00:08:959 (6) - make this stream curve down so it looks better (like this http://puu.sh/9pdQd/85298324dc.jpg
00:33:428 (1) - end on a white tick

Priti's Insane

00:11:960 (1) - is pretty hard to see, move it out
00:16:835 (1) - ^
00:32:210 (1) - spacing (move it away from the stream)
00:33:428 (1) - end on white tick

Irre's Extra

woah circle size is very small ;w;
place 00:08:772 (1) - here : http://puu.sh/9pell/80e8b52c28.png
try putting 00:09:710 (2) - here : http://puu.sh/9pepH/61117713a1.jpg ??
00:31:085 (1) - 2,3,4 could also change into a stream

thats all ~ gl with your bm
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe

Priti wrote:

No change
All that seekrtpawp said is Ctrl + G ._.

I only said that cause your diff is fine :(
Try to respect my mod , I did my best !
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Priti: Lol yes, I just quoted it because I didn't fix anything.



konoshin69 wrote:

place 00:08:772 (1) - here : http://puu.sh/9pell/80e8b52c28.png
try putting 00:09:710 (2) - here : http://puu.sh/9pepH/61117713a1.jpg ?? I honestly like mine better, sorry.. but well, I think your suggestion is valid.
00:31:085 (1) - 2,3,4 could also change into a stream no, I think having a cool 1/4 slider pattern here is more awesome!
sorry for no fixes! thanks for having a check tho :)
Avena
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Avena

konoshin69 wrote:

Priti's Insane

00:11:960 (1) - is pretty hard to see, move it out Fixed
00:16:835 (1) - ^ This one is intentional
00:32:210 (1) - spacing (move it away from the stream) Intentional antijumps..
00:33:428 (1) - end on white tick Did it to match the rest of the diffs
@Timo: If you decide to change the spinners in all diffs, also change it on mine.
http://puu.sh/9pg3G.osu
Timorisu
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Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Timorisu

konoshin69 wrote:

Beginner:

i don't think you need 1/4 beat snap divisor, try 1/2
00:00:335 (1) - 2,3,4, blanketing ??? I don't understand
at 00:20:960 (1) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9pcGw/3cc607238e.jpg so the beat is a bit more even for this level Lands on a strong beat atm, so no
00:25:835 (1) - is a bit low on the screen, move it up a bit
spinner 00:31:085 (1) - end on a white tick I considered this, will ask more people :3

Normal

again change to 1/2 sd
at 00:13:835 (1) - try this so the rhythm is more even (??) http://puu.sh/9pdwR/82bbc33704.jpg Again, lands on a strong beat, so no
00:20:585 (1) - ^ The rhythm is even, kinda
(personal opinion: i dont like when sliders bigger than 1/4 has more than 1 repeat)

Hard

00:04:835 (1) - try this placement so the flow is a bit better http://puu.sh/9pdJg/6b33e83ce0.jpg That'd make it more complicated imho
00:08:959 (6) - make this stream curve down so it looks better (like this http://puu.sh/9pdQd/85298324dc.jpg The stream is upwards to provide good oval flow into the next slider
00:33:428 (1) - end on a white tick

thats all ~ gl with your bm Thanks!
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AndreasHD
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Joined June 2010
AndreasHD
So here is my mod ♫♪♫♪


[General]
I don't get why there is so many timing sections when they don't change the BPM, perhaps you can remove all of them but the first?
And ye, the offset is wrong. Im not 100% sure, but I think it's 346
(Don't forget to resnap all notes after changed timing)



[Beginner]
00:20:960 (1,2) - Try to do like this? Because it was kinda odd rhythm http://puu.sh/9qFNE/fcf7d04df8.jpg

Sorry, can't find anything else in this difficulty :(



[cheesiest's Easy]
00:33:335 (3) - Remove the whistle on thsi? It was so random, and the music doesn't really scream after a whistle anyway.

Nothing much to say here either. The rest seems fine.


[Normal]
00:33:335 (3) - Make these two a better blanket

00:29:585 (1) - NC



[Irre's Extra]
00:11:960 (1,2) - Make this overlap perfect by turning off Grid Snap, and just drag the middle node of (2) a bit up.

00:13:835 (1,2,3,4) - These are spaced out in a cool way, but the space between, say for instance, (1) and (3) compared to the space between (3) and (2) are different, resulting in bad pattern.

00:09:710 (1) - NC

00:10:085 (3) - Remove NC

00:19:835 (2) - Okay, so here, its not NC
00:25:835 (1) - But here it is.. I hope this make sense to you.. I suggest you to make this 00:19:835 (2) - a new combo.

The very last slider ends different with the other difficulties.



[Hard]
I see you are very precise with your blankets, and thats why Im gonna be a little picky on this one.00:06:522 (6) - You can make a even better blanket if you want to.

00:07:835 (3) - ^

00:22:460 (6) - Remove NC

00:11:585 (1) - NC

00:11:960 (2) - and then Remove NC here

00:16:272 (6) - Remove NC

00:23:585 (3) - Remove NC?



[Priti's Insane]
00:21:147 (3) - This slider have soo many unnecessary nodes, consider removing some of them.

00:28:835 (3) - Remove NC

00:32:303 I miss something here, like a note, or end of a slider :(



I was surprised about this map, it's so hard to find any flaws. Feel like this is going to be ranked in the next few days :D Good luck and let's hope some of this was helpful..
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