Kloyd wrote:

hai. Hai again Kloyd

using tick 2 so cool but i prefer 1 more lol Fixed to tick 1
Actually, ur map is mainly on vertical/horizontal grids so there is really nothing to catch out in placement of notes. That means good, but also bad. You might find out all of your map is becoming same and same if you continue this kind of placing. I'm aware of that, I already try many style but the outcome is not so good so I stick with this vertical/horizontal style


First -> offset issues. I'll looking someone expert on timing
Second -> mp3 bitrates. Fixed thanks to Setsurei

Hard

• 
  00:49:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - isn't this slightly difficult considering its harddiff? think others instead of using 4hits.
  (example http://puu.sh/9mWk7/750d6594f2.jpg) <- this is example
  I think following drum sound is the best like you did. In this case using a slider for avoiding 4hits can be possible. 1 1234 123 12 1 Fixed, yes that patern that I have is the best following the drum sound, changed into 1 12(3) 123 12 1. The (3) is a 1/4 slider, so it will still have 4 hits but easier to hit, I can't describe It well on english XD
  
  01:16:560 (3) - try this! (following full sounds here) http://puu.sh/9mWo7/7495b0783e.jpg Sure

Normal

• 01:07:957 (1) - this pattern is bit difficult in Normaldiffs. replace this with 2 stack circles or a slider I geuss no, if I replace with 2 stack circles It'll be harder imo
  01:15:898 - notes should be placed here imo Fixed

Easy
everything is okay



GL

1. 00:13:252 (3) - Overlap. Don't use this pattern. But 00:16:781 (3) - this pattern It's okay.

1. 00:50:972 - add note more little harder.

1. 00:35:641 (1,1) - Nc spam, please remove Nc this. I guess not need Nc.
2. 01:15:347 (1,1) - ^
3. 01:15:898 - add note.

1. 00:11:487 (1,3) - not recommended to overlap head of slider under another
2. 00:27:369 (2) - blanket better by moving middle slider point to (84, 72)
3. 00:30:899 (3) - blanket better by moving middle slider point to (408, 244) and end point to (496, 192)
4. 00:32:663 (1) - copy and paste the previous slider and flip it upside down to use here
5. 01:03:986 (3) - fix this blanket

1. 01:07:957 (1,2) - short repeating sliders, especially followed by another object immediately after, are too hard for normal
2. 01:16:780 (1) - put a hit object at this time and the spinner after

1. 00:08:840 map something here
2. 00:11:266 (1,2) - better to start new combos on white ticks
3. 00:15:899 here too
4. 00:18:325 (1,2) - switch new combo
5. 00:21:855 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:25:384 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:32:443 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 00:34:428 (6,1) - ^
9. 00:40:383 (1,2,3) - ^
10. 00:43:913 (1,2) - ^
11. 00:47:442 (1,2) - ^
12. 00:49:427 (7,1) - ^
13. 00:50:972 (1,2,3) - 00:54:501 (1,2,3) - 00:58:030 (1,2) - 01:01:559 (1,2) - 01:05:089 (1,2,3) - ^
14. 00:34:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - a stream this long is really hard for hard
15. 00:35:641 (1,1,1,1) - don't need this many new combos. keep the circles on the same combo and the sliders on the same combo
16. 00:37:736 (2,3) - put another circle at 00:37:957 because if you turn the playback speed to 25% you can hear something playing, and doubles are annoying for hard difficulty
17. 00:41:266 (4,5) - same here
18. 00:51:854 (4,5) - ^
19. 00:55:383 (4,5) - ^
20. 01:07:957 (1,1) - put these on the same combo
21. 01:15:016 (1,1,1) - ^

Satellite wrote:

From My Queue.

[Easy]

1. 00:13:252 (3) - Overlap. Don't use this pattern. But 00:16:781 (3) - this pattern It's okay. I have testplay that part many times, and that overlaping is still readable and visible then It's not that hard to play since the beat is 1/1

[Normal]

1. 00:50:972 - add note more little harder. Sure

[Hard]

1. 00:35:641 (1,1) - Nc spam, please remove Nc this. I guess not need Nc. Fixed
2. 01:15:347 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:15:898 - add note. Sure

nice mapset :3 good luck~ ありがとう～：３

xxdeathx wrote:

hi, m4m here:

[Easy]

1. 00:11:487 (1,3) - not recommended to overlap head of slider under another I have testplay that part many times, and that overlaping is still readable and visible then It's not that hard to play since the beat is 1/1
2. 00:27:369 (2) - blanket better by moving middle slider point to (84, 72) Honestly I'm bad at making a good blanket
3. 00:30:899 (3) - blanket better by moving middle slider point to (408, 244) and end point to (496, 192) ^
4. 00:32:663 (1) - copy and paste the previous slider and flip it upside down to use here ^
5. 01:03:986 (3) - fix this blanket ^

[Normal]

1. 01:07:957 (1,2) - short repeating sliders, especially followed by another object immediately after, are too hard for normal Since the song sounds like that, so I put a 1/4 slider with reverse rather than a circle on 1/4 beat to make It easier to play
2. 01:16:780 (1) - put a hit object at this time and the spinner after Sure

[Hard]

1. 00:08:840 map something here Yeah I hear a drum sound too, but I follow the singer instead
2. 00:11:266 (1,2) - better to start new combos on white ticks About that new combo, for that NC, I follow the singer to match the lyric she sing instead of stanza, and I do that consistent in this diff
3. 00:15:899 here too Yeah I hear a drum sound too, but I follow the singer instead
4. 00:18:325 (1,2) - switch new combo I follow the singer to match the lyric she sing instead of stanza, and I do that consistent in this diff
5. 00:21:855 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 00:25:384 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 00:32:443 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
8. 00:34:428 (6,1) - ^ ^
9. 00:40:383 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
10. 00:43:913 (1,2) - ^ ^
11. 00:47:442 (1,2) - ^ ^
12. 00:49:427 (7,1) - ^ ^
13. 00:50:972 (1,2,3) - 00:54:501 (1,2,3) - 00:58:030 (1,2) - 01:01:559 (1,2) - 01:05:089 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
14. 00:34:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - a stream this long is really hard for hard Because It suppose to be haaard XD I want to put slider streams on that part but I think It too easy since the next part is kiai time, so I make It a bit harder
15. 00:35:641 (1,1,1,1) - don't need this many new combos. keep the circles on the same combo and the sliders on the same combo Fixed some, except the slider stream
16. 00:37:736 (2,3) - put another circle at 00:37:957 because if you turn the playback speed to 25% you can hear something playing, and doubles are annoying for hard difficulty Yeah I hear a drum sound too, but I follow the singer instead, a double note are haaard I know that XD
17. 00:41:266 (4,5) - same here ^
18. 00:51:854 (4,5) - ^ ^
19. 00:55:383 (4,5) - ^ ^
20. 01:07:957 (1,1) - put these on the same combo I geuss no, since if you play this on ctb mode the fruit will stack on the plate making a big mountain of fruits so you can't see the screen clearly, so better put them on diffrent NC
21. 01:15:016 (1,1,1) - ^ Fixed some

That's all I have. Good luck! Thank youuu

ChiLynn wrote:

Hi, from Newcomer Queue.

[General]
Raise all difficulties volume by 10 %, too quite. XD If I do that, the clap sound will sound too loud, I already try that once XD

[Easy]
00:11:487 (1,3) - Avoid overleap. I have testplay that part many times, and that overlaping is still readable and visible then It's not that hard to play since the beat is 1/1
00:15:016 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:37:075 ~ 01:05:310 - Raise the volume + 5 % on all this area. (so it'll be total + 15 %) Same reason as in general but will reconsider later

[Normal]
01:07:957 (1,2) - too hard for Normal Since the song sounds like that, so I put a 1/4 slider with reverse rather than a circle on 1/4 beat to make It easier to play
00:37:075 ~ 01:05:310 - Raise the volume + 5 % on all this area. Same reason as in general but will reconsider later


[Hard]
HP Drain + 1 Sure

---------------------------------------------

That's all I able to find, Good luck. Makasih kaaak

MisakiYuri wrote:

Hi It's Misaki-san from modding queue~

Easy

00:24:581 You could make slider three longer since the syllable she's saying goes on for much longer than the slider - not in beat. I follow the piano backsound instead of the singer saying, since if I follow the singer saying It will took a loooong slider to catch up with what she saying
01:06:664 make another long slider after this slider? I prefer a little drain time or you can say "a stop" no put any notes, I applied this kind of thing alongside with the Normal and Hard diff also
01:15:752 one more turn backs on this? Sureeee I know what you mean XD

Normal

01:08:255 too hard for a normal song. Since the song sounds like that, so I put a 1/4 slider with reverse rather than a circle on 1/4 beat to make It easier to play and my Normal diff is not that hard imo so I geuss It's ok to put something hard but readble

Sorry If this mod was not of help, and I couldn't find much to mod because it's already good It's ok Misaki-san, just keep up your goood work. I'll be looking forward on your mod later and thanks for the mod~

1. Itu kenapa ada dua .osb, satunya Aki sebagai artist dan satunya Silver Forest...

1. 00:18:546 (1) - Geser dikit ke bawah lagi (ke (178,91))? Lebih ngikut lengkungan 00:20:310 (2) dan terlihat lebih rapi, IMO.
2. 00:25:163 (3) - Pindah ke (128,167) biar flow-nya lebih bagus? Dengan posisi yang sekarang, flow 00:23:840 (2,3,1) terkesan dikit maksa.
3. 00:40:604 - Hapus finish di sini? Gak ada bunyi instrumen yang bisa mendukung keberadaan finish ini, nggak kayak 00:37:075 dan 00:44:133 yang emang ada suara instrumen sebagai pendukung.
4. 00:49:427 (2,3) - Blanket di sini masih kurang sempurna. Coba pindahin node di kepala (3) ke (172,185), yang di tengah ke (256,139), dan yang di ekor ke (340,185)? Dijamin simetris 100%.
5. 01:03:544 (2,3,1) - Blanket di sini juga masih bisa diperbagus. Coba eksperimen aja dulu.
6. 01:08:839 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:12:369 (1,2,3) - ^

1. 00:41:486 (2) - Ctrl+G untuk ngebagusin flow?
2. 01:07:957 (1,2) - Uh gak apa-apa kah ada pattern kayak gini di diff Normal... Ini bakal susah dibaca buat pemain Normal pada umumnya loh, FYI. Buat Hard ke atas sih oke, tapi buat Normal ya, masih terkesan tricky. Kalau bisa ya, tolong ganti slider 1/4-nya dengan slider 1/2 biasa, gitu.
3. 01:11:486 (4) - Again, Ctrl+G agar flow-nya lebih bagus? Ini juga biar flow-nya simetris (?)/mirip dengan 01:08:839 (1,2).

1. 00:36:193 (1,1,1) - Coba dibikin seperti ini biar kelihatan lebih rapi?
2. 00:49:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Buat saya pribadi sih ini agak susah buat dimainin. Terasa nggak nyaman aja, biarpun ritmenya sendiri pas dengan lagunya. Saya sendiri merasa lebih bagus kalau (1,2) dijadiin slider juga kayak (3), tapi ini cuma pendapat kok, gak harus.
3. 01:15:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kecilin spacing di sini? Musiknya udah jadi calm sih, jadi spacing yang relatif gede gini jadi terasa aneh.

1. "Aki - Prayer (Mako Sakata).osb" file doesn't associated with this map in folder. Please remove it.

1. 00:13:252 (3) - This is overlapped with sliderslide of 00:11:487 (1) - which it may too difficult and confused for newbie player that played easiest difficulty like this diff. So please try to avoid overlapping with it.
   
2. 00:27:369 (2) - Move this to up 2 grids and left a bit (about x:100 y:136). It would look better, because this causes 00:25:163 (3,1,2) is equilateral triangle. Then after that, try to blanket with 00:25:605 (1), if you moved it.
   
3. 00:32:663 (1) - Add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm.
   
4. 00:37:075 (1) - Try to avoid stack with slider 00:35:310 (3) if possible, because
   
5. 00:40:604 (1) - Wait... Why do you add finish here? It's too loud and don't fit with this rhythm. Please remove it.
   
6. 00:54:722 (1) - Remove finish on slider begin would be better? It's really weird sound for me.
   
7. 01:03:986 (3) - It doesn't blanket beautifully. Please try it better, or you can copy my code to fix it.
   

   340,208,63986,2,0,P|256:164|168:208,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 01:05:310 (1) - This, too. Try to blanket with slider end of 01:03:986 (3) to cause this look better.
   
9. 01:06:854 - I don't like to leave this drain empty. So you can add a spinner here until 01:08:839 - Then change slider in 01:08:839 (1) is a circle, but move this circle at 01:09:722 instead.
   
10. 01:15:106 (1) - Add NC here. I think it would fit with a song.

1. 00:12:700 - I think you ever use slider tick rate is 2 imo, but now you change it is 1. So this green line section is unnecessary. Please remove it.
   
2. 00:12:921 - ^
   
3. 00:32:663 (1) - Add clap on 1st slider tick (on 00:33:105 -)
   
4. 00:34:207 (2) - I understand about using 1/2 slider here because of follow the rhythm, but I prefer to use 1/1 slider more than, because I think it would more fit with the rhythm and vocal, and please add finish on slider begin and clap on slider end. I think it would more fit with the rhythm.
   
5. 00:40:604 (1) - Same with in the Easy diff. Please remove it.
   
6. 00:49:427 (2) - Add clap on slider end, too. I heard the rhythm here.
   
7. 00:49:869 (3) - Change this slider is a circle would be better, because I don't think a note in 00:50:089 fit with anything in song.
   
8. 00:50:310 (4) - The reason same with 00:49:427 (2). Please add clap on slider begin, too.
   
9. 00:54:722 (1) - This is same with in the Easy diff.
   
10. 01:07:957 (1) - You can't use 1/4 slider in the Normal diff, which I think Hinsvar have said about it in previously mod imo. So please try to avoid using it.
    
11. 01:14:133 (3,4,5) - Move a bit like this picture may cause look and flow better.
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:31:340 (6,7) - Umm... I suggest that make these note like this picture. I think these would more fit with the rhythm and melody imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
2. 00:36:634 (1) - It doesn't necessary to use NC, because this slider hasn't difference with previously note or 00:36:193 (1). So please remove NC.
   
3. 00:49:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are so difficult like the Insane diff (I just can't read here when played xD). So please try these easier. Such as change (5,6) are 1/4 slider imo.
   
4. 01:08:398 (1) - Same with 00:36:634 (1), and add claps on this slider, which I suggest that add it on slider begin (on 01:08:398 -), 3rd slider repeat (on 01:08:619 -), and slider end (on 01:08:766 -).
   
5. 01:15:677 (3,1) - Please reduce this spacing. It's overjumped.

Hinsvar wrote:

Random mod!

>General

1. Itu kenapa ada dua .osb, satunya Aki sebagai artist dan satunya Silver Forest... Fixed

>Easy

1. 00:18:546 (1) - Geser dikit ke bawah lagi (ke (178,91))? Lebih ngikut lengkungan 00:20:310 (2) dan terlihat lebih rapi, IMO. Thank you Thank you
2. 00:25:163 (3) - Pindah ke (128,167) biar flow-nya lebih bagus? Dengan posisi yang sekarang, flow 00:23:840 (2,3,1) terkesan dikit maksa. Biarin aja kak, aku lebih suka (3) blanket sama (2)
3. 00:40:604 - Hapus finish di sini? Gak ada bunyi instrumen yang bisa mendukung keberadaan finish ini, nggak kayak 00:37:075 dan 00:44:133 yang emang ada suara instrumen sebagai pendukung. Fixed
4. 00:49:427 (2,3) - Blanket di sini masih kurang sempurna. Coba pindahin node di kepala (3) ke (172,185), yang di tengah ke (256,139), dan yang di ekor ke (340,185)? Dijamin simetris 100%. Thank you
5. 01:03:544 (2,3,1) - Blanket di sini juga masih bisa diperbagus. Coba eksperimen aja dulu. Thank you
6. 01:08:839 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:12:369 (1,2,3) - ^

>Normal

1. 00:41:486 (2) - Ctrl+G untuk ngebagusin flow? Fixed
2. 01:07:957 (1,2) - Uh gak apa-apa kah ada pattern kayak gini di diff Normal... Ini bakal susah dibaca buat pemain Normal pada umumnya loh, FYI. Buat Hard ke atas sih oke, tapi buat Normal ya, masih terkesan tricky. Kalau bisa ya, tolong ganti slider 1/4-nya dengan slider 1/2 biasa, gitu. Menurut aku, dengan update baru-baru ini tentang star/difficulty rating atau apalah itu namanya, satu atau dua bagian untuk Normal yg agak menjurus ke Hard masih acceptable deh kak, lagian juga kalo miss dibagian itu juga ga langsung mati dan berhubung Easy aku mirip Normal, makanya aku buat Normal yg agak susah, aku mencoba menyesuaikan dengan update yang sekarang
3. 01:11:486 (4) - Again, Ctrl+G agar flow-nya lebih bagus? Ini juga biar flow-nya simetris (?)/mirip dengan 01:08:839 (1,2). Fixed

>Hard

1. 00:36:193 (1,1,1) - Coba dibikin seperti ini biar kelihatan lebih rapi? Biarin aja kak itu sengaja kok
2. 00:49:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Buat saya pribadi sih ini agak susah buat dimainin. Terasa nggak nyaman aja, biarpun ritmenya sendiri pas dengan lagunya. Saya sendiri merasa lebih bagus kalau (1,2) dijadiin slider juga kayak (3), tapi ini cuma pendapat kok, gak harus. It's suppose to be Hard, lagian lagu ini udah dimap sama dua orang yang berbeda, aku mau buat bagian yang beda dengan nada yang sama walaupun agak susah tapi tetep playable
3. 01:15:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kecilin spacing di sini? Musiknya udah jadi calm sih, jadi spacing yang relatif gede gini jadi terasa aneh. Fixed

Well udah deh itu aja, map-nya udah cukup bagus kok.

Good luck on the way Makasih kaaaaak

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, this is your request from ♥Moe Modding Room♥ >w<

[General]

1. "Aki - Prayer (Mako Sakata).osb" file doesn't associated with this map in folder. Please remove it. Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:13:252 (3) - This is overlapped with sliderslide of 00:11:487 (1) - which it may too difficult and confused for newbie player that played easiest difficulty like this diff. So please try to avoid overlapping with it. Thank you
   
2. 00:27:369 (2) - Move this to up 2 grids and left a bit (about x:100 y:136). It would look better, because this causes 00:25:163 (3,1,2) is equilateral triangle. Then after that, try to blanket with 00:25:605 (1), if you moved it. Thank you
   
3. 00:32:663 (1) - Add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm. Fixed
   
4. 00:37:075 (1) - Try to avoid stack with slider 00:35:310 (3) if possible, because of whaaaaaat XD
   
5. 00:40:604 (1) - Wait... Why do you add finish here? It's too loud and don't fit with this rhythm. Please remove it. Fixed
   
6. 00:54:722 (1) - Remove finish on slider begin would be better? It's really weird sound for me. Fixed
   
7. 01:03:986 (3) - It doesn't blanket beautifully. Please try it better, or you can copy my code to fix it. Thank you
   

   340,208,63986,2,0,P|256:164|168:208,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 01:05:310 (1) - This, too. Try to blanket with slider end of 01:03:986 (3) to cause this look better. Thank you
   
9. 01:06:854 - I don't like to leave this drain empty. So you can add a spinner here until 01:08:839 - Then change slider in 01:08:839 (1) is a circle, but move this circle at 01:09:722 instead. I don't wanna, I want to make that part same throug out the whole diff
   
10. 01:15:106 (1) - Add NC here. I think it would fit with a song. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:12:700 - I think you ever use slider tick rate is 2 imo, but now you change it is 1. So this green line section is unnecessary. Please remove it. Fixed, my bad
   
2. 00:12:921 - ^ ^
   
3. 00:32:663 (1) - Add clap on 1st slider tick (on 00:33:105 -) Fixed
   
4. 00:34:207 (2) - I understand about using 1/2 slider here because of follow the rhythm, but I prefer to use 1/1 slider more than, because I think it would more fit with the rhythm and vocal, and please add finish on slider begin and clap on slider end. I think it would more fit with the rhythm. But I prefer a 1/2 slider
   
5. 00:40:604 (1) - Same with in the Easy diff. Please remove it. Fixed
   
6. 00:49:427 (2) - Add clap on slider end, too. I heard the rhythm here. Fixed
   
7. 00:49:869 (3) - Change this slider is a circle would be better, because I don't think a note in 00:50:089 fit with anything in song. I don't thing so
   
8. 00:50:310 (4) - The reason same with 00:49:427 (2). Please add clap on slider begin, too. Fixed
   
9. 00:54:722 (1) - This is same with in the Easy diff. Fixed
   
10. 01:07:957 (1) - You can't use 1/4 slider in the Normal diff, which I think Hinsvar have said about it in previously mod imo. So please try to avoid using it. It's not that hard imo, one or two parts that a bit hard on Normal still acceptable you just need to hear carefully the beat since my Easy almost like Normal
    
11. 01:14:133 (3,4,5) - Move a bit like this picture may cause look and flow better. The curent already looking like that
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:31:340 (6,7) - Umm... I suggest that make these note like this picture. I think these would more fit with the rhythm and melody imo.
   
   SPOILER

   Fixed
   
   
2. 00:36:634 (1) - It doesn't necessary to use NC, because this slider hasn't difference with previously note or 00:36:193 (1). So please remove NC. Fixed
   
3. 00:49:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are so difficult like the Insane diff (I just can't read here when played xD). So please try these easier. Such as change (5,6) are 1/4 slider imo. I want a part that a bit hard but still playable, because this song already mapped by two people so I want make It diffrent
   
4. 01:08:398 (1) - Same with 00:36:634 (1), and add claps on this slider, which I suggest that add it on slider begin (on 01:08:398 -), 3rd slider repeat (on 01:08:619 -), and slider end (on 01:08:766 -). Fixed
   
5. 01:15:677 (3,1) - Please reduce this spacing. It's overjumped. Fixed

Pretty mapping :3 and flow okay. So I give a star

Good luck~ Thank youuuuu

General

1. jangan pake combo color warna putih, pas kiai nanti ngga jelas
   
   

   Do not use pure white combo color (255,255,255); it makes Kiai blinding and hurts the eyes.

2. kurasa slider tick 1 lebih cocok untuk lagu ini

Easy

1. 01:06:854 kok kosong? masukin breaks ato spinner

Normal

1. CS =3,5
2. AR=4,5 /4 , ini masih normal kaka Q.Q
3. 00:12:590 ganti slidernya, ngga cocok sama beat vocalnya

Hard

1. 01:04:869 x:300 y:48
2. 01:16:560(4,5,6) dirapiin kak

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From modding queue.

[Easy]

- 00:23:840 (2) - fix this blanket
- 00:27:369 (2) - ^
- 00:29:134 (1) - ^ Fixed
- 00:30:899 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
- 00:34:428 (2,3) -
- 00:34:428 (2) - try a spinner from 00:34:207 to 00:35:310. It seems better than those sliders that overlap with a distance of 2/1, and the song allows it.
- 00:49:869 (3) - blanket just *slightly* off Fixed
- 01:03:986 (3) - ^ Fixed

Only minor fixes, looks good c:

[Normal]

- 00:32:663 (1) - fix blanket on the tail Fixed
- 00:41:486 (2) - Move it just a bit to the left Fixed
- 00:44:133 (1) - blanket fix
- 00:54:722 (1) - blanket just *slightly* off Fixed
- 01:07:957 (1) - not sure about this one..

[Hard]

- 00:09:722 (5) - blanket is off Fixed
- 00:22:737 (3) - Blanket with 4 is fine, but poor with 2 Fixed
- 00:34:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not sure if you should do that in a hard diff. Well, it's not much of a problem, but... Well, try sliders, if you don't like them keep the stream. It's not a problem imo, since I don't want to make an Insane so I make Hard a bit hardeeer XD
- 01:09:722 (3) - blanket is off

Great mapset, good song Good luck~ Thank you so muuuch, Fixed some blanket honestly I'm bad at that thing XD

Reikosaka wrote:

[General]

Offset : 895 (136.000 BPM) and have only single timing Makasih kak udah diperiksain, tapi masih agak ganjil pas mau masuk kiai timenya, menurut aku baiknya metronomnya direset buat timing section baru gitu, untuk sementara engga aku ganti dulu ya kak

[Hard]

00:29:796 (2) - this enough far and weird as make it closer (x:52 y:132) Kayanya engga deh kak, nanti jadi terlalu deket sama slider (1) nya, aku coba buat jaraknya sekonsisten mungkin 1.5 tiap note

[Normal]

00:39:718 (4,5,6) - this one looks monotone, suggest to move 00:39:938 (5) - to x:304 y:188 Nanti jadinya jump kaaaak, jaraknya nanti jadi lebih dari 1.0

00:53:835 (4,5,6) - same like before, making them different place by moving 00:54:056 (5) - Sama ^

Celizavia wrote:

hei from M4M!

pake bahasa indonesia juga ya XD

General

1. jangan pake combo color warna putih, pas kiai nanti ngga jelas Thank you for reminding, aku baru tau loh kak, tp engga aku ganti dulu yah belum dapet custom color lain, dan mungkin kalo modders lain bilang nanti aku gantii
   
   

   Do not use pure white combo color (255,255,255); it makes Kiai blinding and hurts the eyes.

2. kurasa slider tick 1 lebih cocok untuk lagu ini Untuk slider tick, aku lebih milih pake yg 2 kak, karena aku ada custom slidertick sound yang membutuhkan slidertick yg lebih untuk maksimalin suara hitsoundnya

Easy

1. 01:06:854 kok kosong? masukin breaks ato spinner Sengaja kak, biar bagian itu sama di semua diff

Normal

1. CS =3,5
2. AR=4,5 /4 , ini masih normal kaka Q.Q Iya ini normaaaaal XD aku lebih seneng angka yang pasti kak kaya 4 5 gitu
3. 00:12:590 ganti slidernya, ngga cocok sama beat vocalnya Itu sengaja kok, biar enak diliat tp pas dimainin cocok kok sama lagunya

Hard

1. 01:04:869 x:300 y:48 Ih jaraknya nanti jadi terlalu deket kaaak
2. 01:16:560(4,5,6) dirapiin kak Itu sengaja kak, aku mau stream yang bagian akhir agak dempetan gituu

mapnya bagus kak^^ smoga cepet dirank ya Makasih kaaaaak

makasih~ sori modnya dikit

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Mod Reqs from Queue~

Suggestion :

01:06:744 : suggesting a spinner here I'd chose to empty that part on all diffs without break time

Easy

00:25:163 : fix blanket like this That blanket is nice, but It'll break the Distance Space, the one you sugesting is 1.23 DS and the one I have is 1.00 so if I change that It'll be a jump

01:16:119 : Remove NC Since the hitsound (I use the soft sample set rather than normal sample set) is diffrent and in every diff that part is on NC so I think It's no problem

Normal

00:39:722(3,4,5) : suggesting this to be Reverse Slider so they can catch it easily That part at the beginning is a 1/2 slider with a reverse but I think that's to easy so I replace them with triplet instead and It's not that hard to catch up with the rhythm

Hard seems Fine >.<

That's All >.> Thank youuu

_Stan wrote:

M4M

Easy

00:30:899 (3,4,1) - you can blanket these more nicely, 00:30:899 (3,4) - and 00:32:222 (4,1) - a little different, right? Fixed
00:35:310 (3,1) - I don't know whether it's appropriate. It's fine since the beat not close each other
00:49:427 (2,3) - you can blanket these more nicely It's already good
01:03:544 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:15:016 (4) - the slider's beginning should move to x:264 y:168, then blanket nicely Fixed

Normal

01:16:780 (4) - this circle should move to x:216 y:180, then blanket nicely Fixed

Hard

00:34:428 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - blanket Fixed
00:36:193 (1,2,1) - make these into a arc?? I don't know what is an arc
01:07:957 (1,2,1) - ^ ^

Personal views, hope these can be helpful. NICE MAP I LIKE IT, good luck! Thank youuuuu

my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/182427

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

Nyan~MOD

[Normal]

00:15:678 Extend? till here - 00:16:119 I follow the singer, and It's stop on red tick I geuss
00:30:899 Blanket? Not a blanket in the first place
01:15:898 Add a note? then Start the NC here? I geuss no
01:16:780 Move Here? - 00:16:669 Maybe you mistyped that one

[Hard]
00:08:730 Add a note Fixed
00:12:369 ^ The rhythm is ok but I geuss no, I follow the drum backsound instead
00:15:899 ^ ^
00:19:428 ^ ^
00:30:016 ^ ^
( Highly Recommended ) It's much better . .
00:44:133 Remove the repeat then end it here - 00:44:574 I love the curent one and I don't find a problem on that
00:44:795 Add a note ^
00:58:251 Remove the repeat End - 00:58:692 ^
00:58:913 Add a note ^
01:16:780 Remove I geuss no, It'll be weird

Well That's All . .Hope it Helped
Good Luck~ Thank youuuuu

chaee wrote:

From:
chaee's queue [NM 2/2] [M4M 3/3] Status: CLOSED
Thanks for your mod

[Normal]

00:22:075 (1) - Replace this slider with a duplicate of 00:25:605 (3) - ? Thank you so muuuch for noticing. But, It was intended and if I do that, this overlap part 00:22:075 (1,2) - will look bad imo, here the image to make It simple to understand (before) http://puu.sh/9HLrK/4c62a26c12.jpg and (after) http://puu.sh/9HLG5/bf92fe9f56.jpg I want to make them neat as possiblee XD
00:22:075 (5) - New combo I geuss It's already NC
00:32:663 (1) - Move slider 482x 333y If I do that, the Distance Spacing will change for prev and next notes, so I geuss no change

[Hard]

00:11:487 (2) - NC About New Combo, I prefer to follow the singer to match the lyric she sing instead of following NC on stanza/white big tick, so I geuss no change
00:22:075 (2) - ^ Same as above

"Thank you for playing." No, Thank you for mapping this. Good luck Your welcomeeee XD

1. Nothing to do here, its just awesome~
2. Maybe... 01:06:795 - Add a spinner here

1. Nothing to do here~

1. 00:10:715 (7,8,9,1) - Make a triplet with them. Remove the clap from 00:10:935 (9) , and move 00:10:715 (7,8,9) to x:132 y:192. Replace 00:11:707 (3) to 00:11:607
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:245 (6,7,8) - ^ Same here. Make a triplet, then add a note to 00:14:766 and add a clap on it.
   
   SPOILER

   http://puu.sh/9Kw7P/d90125b942.png
   http://puu.sh/9Kwbf/661acd8688.png
3. 00:17:774 (5,6,7,1) - ^
4. 00:21:303 (6,7,8,1) - ^
5. 00:38:004 - Add a note, and you'll make a triplet with the previous notes. (x:44 y: 96)
6. 00:41:530 - ^ (x:144 y:328)
7. 00:55:631 - ^ (x:336 y:192)

1. I don't think your SB really have that "quick" strobing, since you don't even apply any radical lighting effect, so you might turn off the epilepsy warning

1. Your lyrics files still have some transparent pixel, try to trim it to make the filesize more efficient
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Other than that, looks decent. It's a bit sad though since I think you can still add a star falling effect in kiai time, which will make it prettier imo (this kind of star http://puu.sh/9NgVZ/e7aaf0734c.png)

1. Move 00:11:487 (1) tail 1 grid leftward, then move the next circle 1 grid leftward
2. 00:16:781 (3) Move tail 1 grid leftward
3. 00:27:369 (2) Move the middle point 1 grid left
4. 00:32:222 (4,1) I think the blanketing could be improved, coparing to the previous slider
5. 00:51:192 (1) Move the middle point 1 grid downward
6. 01:08:839 (1,2,3) Improve the blanketing? To make it perfectly symmetrical
7. 01:12:369 (1,2) Here as well

1. 00:22:075 (1) Perhaps you could make the curve similar with 00:25:605 (3) unless it is intentional
2. 00:27:369 (4) Move the whole slider 1 grid leftward
3. 00:32:222 (5,1) Is it intentional not to blanket these notes? I think it wouldn't be hurt to try
4. 00:38:839 (3) Move the whole slider 1 grid downward
5. 01:07:957 (1) Just my opinion, but it might be hard to read in normal diff, especially because the reverse arrow is quite hard to see, which make it hard to guess when the looping stop. Well, it's up to you

1. Try to use slider tick rate 1, I think 2 isn't necessary since it would over-emphasize some sliders like 00:09:722 (6) and 00:11:487 (2) and 00:13:252 (5) and many more. The tick there doesn't even emphasize anything if you hear closely
2. 00:34:428 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) I think you still could improve the shape and blanketing (well, calling it blanketing is also wrong though, I'm sure you know what I mean)
3. 00:44:133 (2) Nope, I think the rhythm here is forced. I understand your intention to make that pattern, but that doesn't meant you have to sacrifice the rhythm. If I didn't wrong hearing it, I'm sure the rhythm should be like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:58:251 (2) The same goes here
5. 01:10:383 (4,5,6) How about this pattern? The spacing won't be misleading this way (if you dislike the sharp turn on (4,5), try to rotate (5,6,7) a little)
   
   SPOILER

   

-Kyra- wrote:

Let's see~
Its a nice song, the storyboard is nice too~

[Easy]

1. Nothing to do here, its just awesome~
2. Maybe... 01:06:795 - Add a spinner here It was intentional

[Normal]

1. Nothing to do here~

[Hard]

1. 00:10:715 (7,8,9,1) - Make a triplet with them. Remove the clap from 00:10:935 (9) , and move 00:10:715 (7,8,9) to x:132 y:192. Replace 00:11:707 (3) to 00:11:607 It's doesn't sound right especially when you miss the clap sound on white tick, I follow the drum backsound instead so no need a triplet there
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:245 (6,7,8) - ^ Same here. Make a triplet, then add a note to 00:14:766 and add a clap on it. Same
   
   SPOILER

   http://puu.sh/9Kw7P/d90125b942.png
   http://puu.sh/9Kwbf/661acd8688.png
3. 00:17:774 (5,6,7,1) - ^ Same
4. 00:21:303 (6,7,8,1) - ^ Same
5. 00:38:004 - Add a note, and you'll make a triplet with the previous notes. (x:44 y: 96) And again I follow the drum sound and the reason is same as above
6. 00:41:530 - ^ (x:144 y:328) Same
7. 00:55:631 - ^ (x:336 y:192) Same

Thats all. Good luck, the song is very beautiful, and the map is great. ^^ Thank you so muuuuch

Estellia- wrote:

Ok GO!

Easy

A perfectly alright Easy diff. Since your style was largely based off symmetry and blanketting, and they were executed perfectly, I don't see a problem with Easy at all.

Normal

00:18:546 (1,2,3) - Consider centralizing this Fixed, I don't realize that

Same as Easy, but for Normal, you can consider angling some of your straight sliders, because they might get boring. Nice Normal. Thanks

Hard

00:21:855 (1,2) - Consider shifting them lower so 00:21:303 (6,7,8,1) kinda forms a spread-out triangle Fixed
00:32:663 (3,4) - Jump may be a little too big It's not that big, I already reduce some

Again, nice style~ Modding this is too easy, because your style allows for less creativity, but higher rank-ability. Nice blankets, and I must commend on your beat placements. Really nice! Thanks your coment make confident!

I suggest you add an Insane Diff, since this song is rather short and easy to map. Keep it up! I'm actually surprised this isn't ranked yet. Thank you, I think no need an Insane diff, the curent Hard is pretty hard you know XD

El SolarBeam wrote:

3rd mod counting from above, hope you don't get bored
maaf telat ya kak

Personally I don't quite like modding a short map since I'll seem like a useless modder (usually I can just give few suggestions on this) but the good thing is it means the mapset is already good. Well, here we go XD


[General]

1. I don't think your SB really have that "quick" strobing, since you don't even apply any radical lighting effect, so you might turn off the epilepsy warning Add 3 pulse effect, so no need to disable that warning

[Storyboard]

1. Your lyrics files still have some transparent pixel, try to trim it to make the filesize more efficient No need to do, the whole .osz size is only 2.7mb, It's quite small for an sb map with good sound and custom hitsound
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Other than that, looks decent. It's a bit sad though since I think you can still add a star falling effect in kiai time, which will make it prettier imo (this kind of star I don't know, will reconsider later http://puu.sh/9NgVZ/e7aaf0734c.png)

[Easy]

Can't find any significant issue, so I hope you don't mind with some nazi mod

1. Move 00:11:487 (1) tail 1 grid leftward, then move the next circle 1 grid leftward
2. 00:16:781 (3) Move tail 1 grid leftward
3. 00:27:369 (2) Move the middle point 1 grid left
4. 00:32:222 (4,1) I think the blanketing could be improved, coparing to the previous slider
5. 00:51:192 (1) Move the middle point 1 grid downward
6. 01:08:839 (1,2,3) Improve the blanketing? To make it perfectly symmetrical
7. 01:12:369 (1,2) Here as well Fixed some

I'm a bit concerned with the emphasizement on the kiai time though, since it's quite 1/1 slider spammy, try to differentiate the note usement on your next mapset! I'll improve somehoooow


[Normal]

1. 00:22:075 (1) Perhaps you could make the curve similar with 00:25:605 (3) unless it is intentional Yes, I don't want (1)'s tail cross over the (2)'s reverse arrow
2. 00:27:369 (4) Move the whole slider 1 grid leftward I don't know, just no diffrent
3. 00:32:222 (5,1) Is it intentional not to blanket these notes? I think it wouldn't be hurt to try Yes
4. 00:38:839 (3) Move the whole slider 1 grid downward I don't know, just no diffrent
5. 01:07:957 (1) Just my opinion, but it might be hard to read in normal diff, especially because the reverse arrow is quite hard to see, which make it hard to guess when the looping stop. Well, it's up to you Fixed, to many complaint. I change the 1/4 slider into 1/2 slider with repeat, I hope no more complaint

Seems useless even with my modding level haha, just try rechecking the blanketing, the rest is good~ Thanks


[Hard]

1. Try to use slider tick rate 1, I think 2 isn't necessary since it would over-emphasize some sliders like 00:09:722 (6) and 00:11:487 (2) and 00:13:252 (5) and many more. The tick there doesn't even emphasize anything if you hear closely It has a drum sound, so why not. beside I make the hitsound same in the whole diffs, so if I use 1 tick rate It doesn't sound right as for me
2. 00:34:428 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) I think you still could improve the shape and blanketing (well, calling it blanketing is also wrong though, I'm sure you know what I mean) Nothing to be improved, the blanket is fine
3. 00:44:133 (2) Nope, I think the rhythm here is forced. I understand your intention to make that pattern, but that doesn't meant you have to sacrifice the rhythm. If I didn't wrong hearing it, I'm sure the rhythm should be like this The rhythm is ok, I do not force anything
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:58:251 (2) The same goes here Same
5. 01:10:383 (4,5,6) How about this pattern? The spacing won't be misleading this way (if you dislike the sharp turn on (4,5), try to rotate (5,6,7) a little) It's intended, I want to make a jump between (6) and (7)
   
   SPOILER

   

Perhaps I'm a bit picky this time, but try to do a blanketing here wherever possible, for example on 00:09:060 (4,6) and 00:22:075 (2,3) Sure


jumlah kudos saya udah mulai krisis sih, tapi gapapa deh owo)/ Makasiiiiih bintangnya
またね～

• 00:29:134 (1,2,3) - fix distance
  00:37:075 (1) - smooth this slider a bit
  00:40:604 (1) - ^, for blanket with 00:39:722 (4) -

• 00:30:899 (3) - smooth this slider for sym or flow
  00:39:722 (4,5,6) - make something nice here instead of stacking.
  00:53:839 (4,5,6) - ^

• 00:09:722 (6) - add new combo
  00:32:663 (3,4) - since your using 1.5x spacing all the way here, this is weird spacing here, or is it a jump?
  01:10:604 (5) - add new combo
  01:11:045 (6,7) - i dont like the flow or a jump here, ctrl + g?

Ghostuki wrote:

Awesome!
Can I make taiko diffs for this map? :3 Muzu and Oni or Futsuu and Muzu

Decipher wrote:

This song is not a Touhou song. Please don't repeat the same mistake. Take a bit of your time to look at Touhou Wiki, VGMdb, and probably also Silver Forest's official web if you didn't believe me.

Also, add NYO and Aki to tags (they're the composer and vocalist, respectively)

don't kd

the SB font looks boring btw

KSHR wrote:

As Decipher posted, this is not a Touhou song.

SPOILER

3. Player (Vocal: Akitan), "The first original song Silver Forest products...", Music and Lyrics: NYO,

So..

Romanized/Unicode Artist: Silver Forest
Romanized/Unicode Title: Prayer
Source: None

Also add "Akitan" (not Aki) please.

No kds

Hi , From SoGa's Modding Queue

Since im Modding Nothin , No kd plz > <
[General]

1. Fine

[Easyl]

1. 00:25:163 (3) - I don't hear anything here but if u want to overmap ~~

[Normall]

1. 01:16:780 (4) - Delete this one and move the spinner here(Ignore this

[Hard]

1. Fine!

Good Song !
I love it xD ,Stars !

1. 00:11:487 (1,3) - I have read you can read this overlap; but believe me, beginners won't be able to read it. I actually recommend you change it.

1. 01:07:957 (1) - For Normal players it's still a bit complicated to read 1/2 beat sliders with more than a reverse. What if you better remove a reverse and add a circle at 01:08:619 - ?
2. 01:16:119 (1,2,3,4) - Well, I said that Normal players aren't used to 1/2 sliders with more than a reverse, but I think you should put one here, instead of those circles.

1. Oh, wow. Many streams. Get rid of some. Especially this one: 00:34:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's too big for a Hard...

SoGa wrote:

Hi , From SoGa's Modding Queue

Since im Modding Nothin , No kd plz > <
[General]

1. Fine

[Easyl]

1. 00:25:163 (3) - I don't hear anything here but if u want to overmap ~~

I follow the piano sound there, so I think that's not an overmap

[Normall]

1. 01:16:780 (4) - Delete this one and move the spinner here(Ignore this)

It's Intended

[Hard]

1. Fine!

Good Song !
I love it xD ,Stars !

LixRei wrote:

You asked for a mod, but this is mostly done... so short mod, here we go.

[Easy]

1. 00:11:487 (1,3) - I have read you can read this overlap; but believe me, beginners won't be able to read it. I actually recommend you change it.

Fix, I'm sure that one is playable, but why people complain that part so much

[Normal]

1. 01:07:957 (1) - For Normal players it's still a bit complicated to read 1/2 beat sliders with more than a reverse. What if you better remove a reverse and add a circle at 01:08:619 - ? Sure, change into 2x 1/2 slider
2. 01:16:119 (1,2,3,4) - Well, I said that Normal players aren't used to 1/2 sliders with more than a reverse, but I think you should put one here, instead of those circles. Sure, change triplet into 1/2 slider with repeat

[Hard]

1. Oh, wow. Many streams. Get rid of some. Especially this one: 00:34:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's too big for a Hard... It's suppose to be hard, since I don't make Insane diff

Very short mod, too short it surprised me... Well, good luck!
No kudosu, please.

1. 00:35:310 (3,1) - Don't stack these sliders. Stacks aren't suggested in E/N stuff. The beginner will click a bit earlier and missclick.
2. Otherwise it's a nice easy!

1. 01:08:398 (2) - Why didn't you make this slider like 01:07:957 (1) - ? You should add some curves for getting a better flow here.
2. Super Normal , pretty clean.

1. 00:30:237 (3,4) - I'm not gonna critic that pattern but I thought you could rearrange the placement of the note with another rhythm in the timeline
2. 01:15:016 (1) - Useless NC , it can't be seen with the stack.
3. Otherwise it's fun to play!