1. Gunsillie's Hard (2,38 stars, 200 notes)
2. Hard (3,04 stars, 232 notes)
3. Insane (3,98 stars, 312 notes)
4. Normal (1,65 stars, 139 notes)

1. i suggest you choose the songs with rhythmic beats of the drums as a beginner.
2. jump..jump..it is my first impression since i played your insane,maybe every edit beginner think its fun and make their map's difficulty looks like insane,i dont suggest always use it.Creat some sliders replace the circles.
3. 01:34:309 (6) - 01:39:446 (6) - object isnt snapped...
4. i dont think this piano music suit to edit into the maps.
5. you have the talent to edit...i expect you can make some better maps...

pandorawindy wrote:

[insane]

1. i suggest you choose the songs with rhythmic beats of the drums as a beginner.
2. jump..jump..it is my first impression since i played your insane,maybe every edit beginner think its fun and make their map's difficulty looks like insane,i dont suggest always use it.Creat some sliders replace the circles.
3. 01:34:309 (6) - 01:39:446 (6) - object isnt snapped...
4. i dont think this piano music suit to edit into the maps.
5. you have the talent to edit...i expect you can make some better maps...

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue


*Mp3 - OK

*BG - OK

Nyan~MOD

[Normal]

01:10:448 (2,3,4,5) Change to Slider End - 01:11:064 w/ 2 repeats
01:20:311 (2,3,4,5) Change to Slider End - 01:20:927 w/ 2 repeats
01:25:653 (2,3,4,5) ^ End - 01:26:270 w/ 2 repeats
01:40:266 (2,3,4,5) ^ End - 01:41:088 w/ 3 repeats
Problems above are unrankable. . . maybe or should I say the pattern is not for Normal, If you change this it will become lower than Hard . . .

[Hard]
HP Drain - 7
OD - 7

00:46:818 Add a note
00:47:023 ^
00:47:229 ^
00:47:434 ^
00:47:640 ^
01:45:609 ^

What I wrote above is a suggestion feel free to decline it . . .

Sorry I can't MOD Insane . . . Though it seems OK to me .

That's All, First time modding a piano song that was mapped using STD Diff, it's still a " Nice Map " in it's own ways XD
Good Luck~

1. Please lower the song bitrate to 192kbps, you have Tags conflict on the mapset, you can check those on AiMod (ctrl+shift+A)
2. You need custom colours to make the mapset more beauty

1. I guess AR 6 for a Normal is too fast, maybe you can lower to 4/5, and lower both HP and OD to 4
2. About the SV, the slider is also to fast imo, maybe you should consider to lower It about 0.8~1.0
3. For a Normal I sugest you to follow the Distance Spacing, to make It more readable and easy to play, and must be consistent, your current one is a mess
4. 00:08:393 (3,4) - I think you should prevent stack under slider end, since It's the easiest diff in your mapset
5. 00:18:462 (2,3,4,5,6) - That part looks too crowded, I think you should try another patern
6. 00:10:653 (3,4,5) - The flow is not good imo

1. 00:01:612 (2) - Move that to x:256 y:236
2. 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Umm that's to crowded if I have to say, you put notes in same place over, I think you fix that
3. 00:09:010 (4,5) - Move both to x:296 y:228
4. 00:21:955 (7) - Move to x:152 y:328, looks like this http://puu.sh/9PWmu/d0c417f6e7.jpg
5. 00:32:229 (6,1) - Maybe It should better looks like this http://puu.sh/9PWsj/23a7314de2.jpg
6. 00:33:873 (2) - New Combo, since the previouse slider have diffrent SV with the next slider
7. 00:37:777 (3) - New combo because have diffrent SV
8. 00:38:804 (4) - New Combo, since the previouse slider have diffrent SV with the next slider
9. 00:39:010 (5,6) - Try this http://puu.sh/9PWJP/737d44628c.jpg
10. 00:40:448 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - Just too crowded
11. 01:34:128 (4) - I'm barely see the reverse arrow, I think you should fix that

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hellooooo from my Queue


[Gunsillie's Hard]

•01:34:128 (4) - I'm barely see the reverse arrow, I think you should fix that[/list] Depends on the skin, so I didn't change. MY BAD, it's unrankabke, I have to fix it !

• Sometimes I hear the cymbal finish sound just too loud at some part Depends on the player's hitsounds, but I reduced the volume in those parts

neonat wrote:

General

SPOILER

Your mp3 file is 228kbps. The bitrate has to be 128-192kbps to be allowed. 192kbps is the recommended rate

Tags for Normal: journey video-game visual novel key instrumental piano
Gunsillie's Hard: journey video-game Key instrumental piano visual novel
For Hard: journey video-game Key instrumental piano visual novel
For Insane: journey video-game Key instrumental piano visual novel

Tags on the Normal are not the same as the rest of the difficulties, please fix that

The map starts at 00:00:380 but you need at least 2000ms before the map starts. Add 2000 to AudioLeadIn in the .osu in Notepad to all difficulties

Normal

00:00:380 (1,2) - lower 00:01:201 (2) so that the path is better from 00:00:380 (1)
00:02:434 (4,1) - spacing discrepancy
00:10:653 (3,4,5) - avoid this overlap
00:13:941 (2,3,4) - spacing changes here as well
00:19:078 (4,5,6) - don't stack
00:20:516 (2,4,5) - not a good overlap
00:48:873 (1,2) - not following proper spacing too
01:20:106 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:160 (5,6) - looks ugly, stack or place them away from each other
01:29:147 (3,1) - not following spacing used beforehand
01:29:147 (3) - object end not snapped
01:30:018 - this timing point screws up the beat, now it's no longer in line with the 4 beat tempo, it will always be 1 beat ahead

Lack hitsounds. Add hitsounds to the difficulty

Gunsillie's Hard

00:21:338 (6,7) - blanket them
00:29:147 (7) - the repeat arrow is covered by 00:28:736 (6) so you have to shift them or else this is a ranking issue
00:31:612 (5,6) - blanket
00:36:544 (1,2,1) - equal spacing between them

Hard

00:02:023 (4,1) - use the normal spacing between them, this is too close
00:52:571 (1,2,3,4) - watch the spacing, the spacing here is too irregular, and too close to the previous objects
01:32:893 (4) - object end not snapped
01:33:304 (5) - ^
01:34:948 (1) - ^
01:36:181 (5) - ^
01:37:414 (1) - ^
01:38:647 (5) - ^
01:41:112 (1) - ^
01:41:934 (2) - ^
01:42:756 (3) - ^

Spacing used is too erratic, use it less randomly and seldom and better purpose/use/function

Lack hitsounds. Add hitsounds to the difficulty

Insane

00:06:544 (8,1,2,3) - separate and space them from each other
00:31:407 - add a note

Lack hitsounds. Add hitsounds to the difficulty



Good Luck

BTW @Gunsillie: When it comes to mapping, everything depends on default skin and hitsounds. So ranking criteria is based on that, and not any kind of custom skin.

neonat wrote:

I'm sure you can find something online. Something like this http://audio.online-convert.com

But check if it affects the offset, it might get changed

General

normal

1. remove the whitsle at 00:17:074(7) since it doesnt sound machtly well
2. 00:17:691(1) too round, maybe blanket it with (2)?
3. 00:20:567(2) blanket it better with the (1)
4. 00:34:746(1) u dont need to use 4 anchor points to make this slider, and make it better please to make a blanket to the prev circles
5. would be better if u put 2 sliders than this on 00:57:965(1)
6. 01:02:074(2) remove whistle ?
7. 01:04:129(1,1,1) remove new combo for consistency
8. 01:05:362(1) a not really good overlap to the prev circles, please move it
9. 01:23:855(1,1,1,1) remove NC for consistency
10. 01:29:198(3) i dont know if this is a unrankable issue or not, but at Aimod says that this is not snapped. but considering this is a multi bpm started maybe change it with a spinner?
11. bad placing imo at 01:40:342(2,3,4)

Gunsilie hard

1. make the slider's end at x:160 y:96 at 00:07:571
2. 00:55:859(5) maybe a blanket?

hard

1. the triple beats at 00:56:321(3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) didnt matches the rhtym well

1. 01:29:429 - Got to admit, that was pretty smart to reset the offsets here, I wouldn't have figured that out. xD
2. 01:23:855 - You will need a red timing section here. Reason: The upbeat (longest white tick) changes it's position.
3. This one's qutie difficult to hear, so I recommend you ask a timing expert for this: There should be two further red timing sections at:
   01:44:041 - with 139 BPM
   01:44:904 - with 94BPM
   Only then you can rearrange the notes in this section at higher difficulties.

1. I'd rather go with 0.8xDS here, looks better to me since the objects won't stack too much anymore.
2. Put DS on at all times and check AIMod for distance snap issues again.
3. 00:00:431 (1,2,3) - Try to make it like http://puu.sh/bekbW/7b9cabe220.jpg
4. 00:01:252 (2,4) - Finish HS is unfitting here, go with whistle HS instead.
5. 00:15:020 (4,5) - Make them more parallel, looks and plays better: http://puu.sh/bekju/9ea06f1b56.jpg
6. 00:19:951 (1,2) - THis overlap looks bad. Just blanket here: http://puu.sh/bekq6/cc8e229743.jpg
7. 00:22:417 (6,7) - This overlap looks bad too. ALthough you can't avoid it, you can avoid overlapping both circles of slider 6: http://puu.sh/bekvQ/69e0d6a5ce.jpg
8. 00:28:787 (2) - Zig-zag slider feels a bit unfitting to the music. You should use something more smoother, like: http://puu.sh/bekKX/dedda67092.jpg
9. 00:34:129 (3,1) - check your blanket again.
10. 00:34:746 (1,2) - Don't overlap here: http://puu.sh/bekUC/b0af0f6772.jpg
11. 00:39:677 (5,6) - Don't stack here, but rather make it symmetric: http://puu.sh/bel0x/c40ac4cbfe.jpg
12. 00:42:965 (1) - Please put these finish HS off, they really don't fit to this part of the song. You should generally avoid finish HS until 00:48:924 - where the song starts to change it's mood.
13. 01:02:896 (5,1) - overlap
14. 01:03:307 (1,2,1,1,1) - This part has 1. bad flow and 2. a new combo spam that isn't necessary and just ruins the HP drain at this section. Make a visually more appealing pattern: http://puu.sh/belvP/773a5d7a43.jpg
15. 01:09:883 (5,1,2,1,2) - really weird to play for a normal, since slider 2 starts on red and ends on white tick (which isn't good at all). Go with this:
16. 01:13:992 (2,3,4) - really clumpy, make a triple stack instead. Also, delete the finish HS on 3
17. 01:20:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - orz...I don't really know what to say about this, it just looks plainly bad and clustured. Please map it more spacious.
18. 01:20:157 (1,2) - similar case to 01:09:883 (5,1,2,1,2) -
19. 01:25:499 (2,1) - You didn't use DS here.
20. 01:37:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too clustered. The symm

1. Please check your Offset again and use the timing sections of your friend as a scaffold. You have uninhereted timins section issues.
2. I highly recommend that you use a higher DS of 1.2x . It fits much more to the patterns and occasional jumps you are using and would make the map look and play much better.
3. 00:00:380 - Delete this red timing section, it's really off here.
4. 00:05:362 (1,2,3,4,5) - For consistency, please make a jump between 1-2 as well
5. 00:08:444 (3,4) - Check the blanket again.
6. 00:14:609 (2,4) - This looks more appealing if it wouldn't overlap. Try this out: http://puu.sh/ber85/62bf5d94f5.jpg
7. 00:21:389 (6,7) - Blanket check. No more of those, you will find them out by yourself and it's just minor problems with these.
8. 00:27:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The sample of why i recommend higher DS: Patterns like this look terribly clustered if you don't use higher distances.
9. 00:32:280 - I recommend you use a small SV drop here already since the one at 00:32:896 - Is just too sudden in my opinion.
10. 00:37:211 - ^

1. 00:02:075 (4,2,3) - Don't overlap here.
2. 00:05:363 (5,6,7) - Only stack 6-7, not 5
3. 00:02:075 (4,1,2,3) - The DS increase between 4-1-2 comes very sudden. Make a bigger distance between 4 and 1. Also rearrange the circles after this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1984695
4. 00:11:527 (1,2,3,4) - Thsi is a bit confusing, since 2 and 3 are stacked on 1, but both have different beat lengths. Avoid that by distance spacing slider 3. Also don't stack 00:12:555 (3,4) - , these are two different notes in the music.
5. 00:14:404 (7,8,1) - Similar case to above.
6. 00:33:103 (2,3,4,5,6) - This isn't a pattern you should use in a hard map. It's very flow-breaking and doesn't support the music at all. Something like this should be better: http://puu.sh/beow0/a86c61e31b.jpg
7. 00:37:623 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too clustered up, use more of the space available for mapping.
8. 00:47:897 (1) - I don't recommend a spinner here at all. 00:48:924 - I'd rather set on a strong clickable beat at 00:48:924 - (circle).
9. 00:50:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I recommend you look at this pattern again, it doesn't look good at the moment.
10. 00:56:322 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Clearly overmap, there is no need for the triples here. The msot simple beats are usually the best ones: http://puu.sh/beoY4/55c561a8ad.jpg
11. 01:07:829 (3,4,5,6) - Are you sure you put DS in here? Even if intended, this is more like a trap to me. You can either use DS here or stack 01:07:829 (3,4) -
12. 01:12:760 (4,5,6,7) - similar case as above
13. 01:15:842 (5) - Sliders starting at red ticks and ending on white ones is usually a bad idea since white ticks are the emphasized notes in songs, while red ticks are not. Please swap into two circles here.
14. 01:18:308 (5) - ^
15. 01:31:096 (7,2,3) - ^
17. 01:29:198 (3) - Not snapped.

1. I can image a good light insane with this song... but not this way.
   You overmap very much, which destroys the character of this song. Making too much use of triples and streams like in 01:25:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - or even inventing own rhythm patterns which go against the rhythm of the song like at 01:14:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - isn't the way to go for an insane here.
   You should focus on elaborating your jump patterns - take care though that you don't exaggerate with the DS, keep the calm nature of this song in mind. Don't make a map more difficult than a song can offer to you.

1. 00:02:053 - This should be clickable since the beat contain strong feeling
2. 00:10:273 - ^
3. 00:11:504 (4,5) - A really example that if you put slider end at emphasized beat it will result in strange rhythm like this I recommend this http://puu.sh/bJhXK/6f28a15b96.png
4. 00:13:560 - Make this clickable you can use this rhythm
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   notice that the rhythm will be better
5. 00:14:998 (3) - No need to use repeat slider this beat 00:15:204 - is a bit keybeat that will change the rhythm. For repeat slider I recommend to use it on a consistent type of beat like this one for an example 00:16:847 (6) -
6. 00:20:136 - Make this clickable try this
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   notice that I also change NC too
7. 00:21:779 - Try this
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8. 00:33:902 (2,3,1) - Blanket
9. 00:36:163 - I'm really sure 1/2 repeat sliders are the problem for this diff
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10. 00:38:833 (1) - NC this is the new beatset now, I guess
11. 00:51:367 (3,4) - This can be a slider while this 00:52:600 (5) - can be 2 circle
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12. 00:57:943 (1) - I don't recommed you to use this kind of repeat slider for the easiest diff of the mapset it just too confusing for the beginner please fix it
13. 01:02:052 (2,3) - Try use slider here no need to emphasis this beat 01:02:259 - by using circle
14. 01:09:861 (1,2) - Better stack
15. 01:43:197 (1) - Fix slider end it need to be on white line
    I see that mostly the problem here is the slider usage hope that I can apply the easy information for this diff
    SPOILER

    
    well also rhythm is a bit not so good for me too

1. 00:02:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find that Ctrl+G these notes would give you a better rhythm
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:09:010 (4,5) - This is a bit too hard to read for Hard, I guess try change this to a slider
3. 00:11:886 (2) - I think you should NC here
4. 00:20:106 (1) - NC
5. 00:21:749 - This is emphasized beat you should make this clickable try this rhythm http://puu.sh/bJk94/64b99dd096.png
6. 00:59:558 (7) - NC
7. 01:29:147 (2,3,4,5,6) - Would use 1/2 repeat slider here using circle at new timing is like need some reaction which might be too hard to reading for Hard
   The beginning is a bit untidy while after the beginning is very clean and NC consistencies can be improve, try listen to the music and if you find some beat feel strong and feel like this number of combo should be enough just NC it. It will work

1. 00:22:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - No need to do anti-jump here the notes seem to be emphasized so just normal spacing should be good for this
2. 00:53:834 - I find this beat to be suit for slider end instead of circle
   The problems I find for this is NC consistencies and unbalance in numbers of sliders and circles for some part, try make the amount of sliders and circles balance. You can change some circles to sliders

1. 00:01:232 (4,1,2) - Stack
2. 00:04:519 (3,4) - You should use high spacing here instead of 00:04:314 (2,3) -
   Honestly, this is really bad Insane for me. You use too many circles, too much unnecessary jumps and the NCs are also inconsistent and the notes really place nicely I recommend you to think again about this diff, it just not really good like the others diff

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from my modding queue


[Gunsille's Hard]

1. 00:02:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find that Ctrl+G these notes would give you a better rhythm If I understood correctly what you meant, I think it's a close call, but I wanted to start the combo with circles as opposed to sliders because the previous object is a slider, and I prefer it that way because it finishes on 3 circles who lead to the 00:06:544 (5) slider.
2. 00:09:010 (4,5) - This is a bit too hard to read for Hard, I guess try change this to a slider This is indeed hard to read, but it's the kind of note players will miss only once, and besides I love having a circle @ 00:09:626 (5) too much to put a slider instead^^
3. 00:11:886 (2) - I think you should NC here Yep, you are probabaly right
4. 00:20:106 (1) - NC Yep
5. 00:21:749 - This is emphasized beat you should make this clickable try this rhythm http://puu.sh/bJk94/64b99dd096.png It's most likely not the only occurence of not making an emphasized rhythm clickable in this map, but I've changed the rhythm.
6. 00:59:558 (7) - NC I really consider this combo as a whole sentence, like 00:54:215, and even though I understand 7 is emphasized, I prefer to keep this sentence in one combo, as a personal whim~
7. 01:29:147 (2,3,4,5,6) - Would use 1/2 repeat slider here using circle at new timing is like need some reaction which might be too hard to reading for Hard Personal whim again, I want this five notes to be important in the gameplay as much as they are in the music. But it might indeed be hard for players, who will eventually be the ones to decide over this point...

sheela901 wrote:

Hey, KromKrom. Sorry for the really late mod, but I still notice issues. Please take a look below.

1. The timing is wrong: time signature, offset and some timing points unused.
2. The kiai mode points are placed on the wrong tick.
   Here's the new code for the timing:
   
   SPOILER

   424,410.958904109589,3,2,1,20,1,0
   30937,-200,3,2,1,20,0,0
   31554,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
   42239,-200,3,2,1,20,0,0
   43780,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
   49328,410.958904109589,3,2,1,20,1,0
   55903,-200,3,2,1,25,0,0
   56314,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
   63506,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
   65355,-100,3,2,1,30,0,1
   82615,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
   83848,410.958904109589,4,2,1,20,1,0
   85491,410.958904109589,3,2,1,20,1,1
   89395,422.535211267606,3,2,1,20,1,1
   90451,410.958904109589,3,2,1,20,1,1
   99697,-100,3,2,1,30,0,1
   101341,-100,3,2,1,25,0,1
   104020,431.654676258993,4,2,1,25,1,0
   104883,638.297872340426,4,2,1,25,1,0

   Remember to snap all the objects.

1. In Normal, the distance between objects are inconstent. Please use the Distance Snap tool to all of the objects present.
2. In Insane, there're some notes that land on silent beats, which breaks a critera, overmapping.

So, check them, and I can mod it. And no kudosu for this post.