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IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park

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Rotte
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Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月13日 at 0:22:29

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Endless Tewi-ma Park
Source: Touhou
Tags: Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi Tewi Tei Inaba
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2893kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.97 stars, 81 notes)
  2. Hard (2.81 stars, 285 notes)
  3. Lunatic (4.10 stars, 516 notes)
  4. Normal (1.87 stars, 180 notes)
Download: IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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TETETETETETETETETE

Finished.
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Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku
mod到啦~好久没这么快给出来了
General

建议把滑条音效去掉

00:00:627 这里的绿线似乎不必要，00:00:510 (1) - 这里直接additions调成soft就完事了
另外我觉得00:04:260之前是soft或许比较好


Normal

00:53:010 (1) - 这里果然还是改成单点好呢

01:21:135 (1) - 建议加长，从01:19:260开始

02:08:947 (3) - 最后这里改成normal finish吧

Easy

00:48:791 加个note吧

00:56:291 还是建议加个note

01:02:385 (3) - 这里一定少了个clap音效

01:30:041 依然加个note，感觉太空了

Hard这真的是hard？！
00:04:260 (1) - 这里的开头是不是少了个clap？00:05:431 (4) - 感觉也是应该加clap呢

00:25:353 (3,4,5,6) - 比起原来凹进去，个人认为果然还是突出来比较好

00:39:885 (1) - 与后面对应的话，这里果然不该有nc呢，相对的00:40:119 (2) - 应该要nc

00:48:205 (8,1) - 还是建议两者之间加大间距

01:02:853 (1) - 按照前面的规律，这里的nc不是很合理啊
01:08:010 这里的绿线音量改成50%试试？

01:25:119 (3) - 仅仅是个试验型意见，3的中间和末尾加上whistle音效，然后01:25:822 (5,6) - 和01:27:111 (3,4,6,7) - 也一样
感觉这样是比较合适的音效
01:28:869 (2,5) - vocal的重音部分似乎需要whistle支援

01:30:275 (1,2,3,4,5) -试试这种排列？？？
感觉这里直接那么直着上去不大好，要不然改成了后面类似的也行
01:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是和上面一样的意见（估计是强迫症犯了

依然是关于音效方面的试验型意见01:40:119 (3,4) - 01:40:939 (4,5) - 01:43:869 (3,4) - 都加上whistle音效
嗯，我管这个叫做1.5/3.5 whistle*2（笑）似乎特别适合这种副歌后面跟一长串的曲子

01:57:697 (11) - 这里应该加个nc

Finish
Last edited by Kuuhaku , edited 3 times in total.
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hello.

[General]
- I think you could do an Insane, the song suits one.

[Easy]
- I really think that the slider velocity is too slow even for an Easy. A good velocity would be 0.90 or 1.00. Your sliders would be shortened after you change the velocity, keep that in mind.
- Use distance snap 1.0x
- 00:03:322 Instead of this, try putting notes on 00:03:322 and 00:03;791 then add a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197.
- 00:28:636 I think you should put a reverse slider like the one on 00:13:635.
- 00:35:197 Move this slider to 00:35:666 and add a note here.
- 00:38:010 Too many repeats are not good on an Easy. You could try something like this http://puu.sh/9ljhS/3f64a1e220.png
- 00:45:510 Remove a repeat and add a note on 00:46:916
- 01:30:510 Make the reverse arrow fall at 01:30:978 and add a note on 01:31:916.
- 01:35:197 Remove the repeat, then add notes on 01:36:135 (start new combo here) and on 01:36:603.
- 01:52:541 Add a note.
- 01:53:010 Remove the repeat and add notes on 01:54:416 and 01:54:885.

[Normal]
- Again, the slider velocity is a little too slow. I think 1.20 or 1.30 should be fine.
- 00:04:494 Add a note
- 00:04:728 Shorten the slider until 00:05:197 and add a repeat. Delete (4).
- 00:07:072 End the slider here and add a note on 00:07:306.
- 00:08:478 (2,3) Change their places in the timeline.
- 00:16:213 Delete this and add notes on 00:16:447 and 00:16:681.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and just put a note here and on 00:30:510.
- 00:38:010 I think that too many sliders on a row are kind of difficult to play for not so experienced players. Maybe try this http://puu.sh/9lkWn/d34dfaa82a.png
- 00:45:510 Too hard for a Normal. Try this http://puu.sh/9ll6o/cee22c587b.png
- 00:53:010 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9lleI/0b774c379b.png
- 01:24:416 Silence this spinner's end.
- 01:41:760 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9llpY/b7fe734161.png
- 01:51:135 Too hard. Try http://puu.sh/9llzr/4c69d90d2d.png
- 02:02:385 Remove a repeat.
- 02:05:431 Move (5) here.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

[Hard]
- AR -1
- Too be honest, I think this difficulty is too streamy for a Hard.
- I would suggest increasing the slider velocity to 1.70, it feels more energetic and cool.
- 00:04:260 Shorten the slider until 00:04:494
- 00:05:666 Remove a repeat and move to 00:05:549. Then add a note to 00:05:900.
- 00:06:135 Instead of this, put a 1/4 repeat slider. Also delete the note on 00:06:486.
- 00:06:955 Add a note.
- 00:07:541 I think it would be better if instead of notes, you used a repeat slider.
- 00:09:885 (7,1) Don't stack, it's confusing.
- 00:20:197 (4,5,6) Delete (5), make a jump (like you did before) between (4) and (6).
- 00:21:838 Add a note.
- 00:27:697 (4,1) Spacing.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and make a 1/2 slider.
- 00:38:010 Too hard for a Hard. This is more for an Insane.
- 00:45:041 Same as above.
- 00:52:541 Same as above.
- 01:13:635 You should use the slowdown from 01:08:010.
- 01:26:994 Too hard.
- 01:37:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Too hard.
- 01:39:885 - 01:41:291 Too hard.
- 01:41:994 Too hard.
- 01:43:635 Too hard.
- 01:45:510 (1,2,3,4,5) Too hard because of the jumps.
- From this point on until the end there are too many hard patterns, too many streams and jumps that would suit better a Insane.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

You can ask me to recheck this after you have made the changes if you want.
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello.

[General]
- I think you could do an Insane, the song suits one.

[Easy]
- I really think that the slider velocity is too slow even for an Easy. A good velocity would be 0.90 or 1.00. Your sliders would be shortened after you change the velocity, keep that in mind.
- Use distance snap 1.0x
- 00:03:322 Instead of this, try putting notes on 00:03:322 and 00:03;791 then add a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197. I dont want to fix this idea now.
- 00:28:636 I think you should put a reverse slider like the one on 00:13:635. Symmetric Rhythm。
- 00:35:197 Move this slider to 00:35:666 and add a note here. No.
- 00:38:010 Too many repeats are not good on an Easy. You could try something like this http://puu.sh/9ljhS/3f64a1e220.png
- 00:45:510 Remove a repeat and add a note on 00:46:916 I dont want to fix this idea now. - 01:30:510 Make the reverse arrow fall at 01:30:978 and add a note on 01:31:916.
- 01:35:197 Remove the repeat, then add notes on 01:36:135 (start new combo here) and on 01:36:603. umm,this idea I am not want to
change.
- 01:52:541 Add a note. fit in the previous note
- 01:53:010 Remove the repeat and add notes on 01:54:416 and 01:54:885. Not to do that.

[Normal]
- Again, the slider velocity is a little too slow. I think 1.20 or 1.30 should be fine.
- 00:04:494 Add a note
- 00:04:728 Shorten the slider until 00:05:197 and add a repeat. Delete (4).
- 00:07:072 End the slider here and add a note on 00:07:306.
- 00:08:478 (2,3) Change their places in the timeline.
- 00:16:213 Delete this and add notes on 00:16:447 and 00:16:681.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and just put a note here and on 00:30:510.
- 00:38:010 I think that too many sliders on a row are kind of difficult to play for not so experienced players. Maybe try this http://puu.sh/9lkWn/d34dfaa82a.png
- 00:45:510 Too hard for a Normal. Try this http://puu.sh/9ll6o/cee22c587b.png
- 00:53:010 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9lleI/0b774c379b.png
- 01:24:416 Silence this spinner's end.
- 01:41:760 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9llpY/b7fe734161.png
- 01:51:135 Too hard. Try http://puu.sh/9llzr/4c69d90d2d.png
- 02:02:385 Remove a repeat.
- 02:05:431 Move (5) here.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

[Hard]
- AR -1
- Too be honest, I think this difficulty is too streamy for a Hard.
- I would suggest increasing the slider velocity to 1.70, it feels more energetic and cool.
- 00:04:260 Shorten the slider until 00:04:494
- 00:05:666 Remove a repeat and move to 00:05:549. Then add a note to 00:05:900.
- 00:06:135 Instead of this, put a 1/4 repeat slider. Also delete the note on 00:06:486.
- 00:06:955 Add a note.
- 00:07:541 I think it would be better if instead of notes, you used a repeat slider.
- 00:09:885 (7,1) Don't stack, it's confusing.
- 00:20:197 (4,5,6) Delete (5), make a jump (like you did before) between (4) and (6).
- 00:21:838 Add a note.
- 00:27:697 (4,1) Spacing.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and make a 1/2 slider.
- 00:38:010 Too hard for a Hard. This is more for an Insane.
- 00:45:041 Same as above.
- 00:52:541 Same as above.
- 01:13:635 You should use the slowdown from 01:08:010.
- 01:26:994 Too hard.
- 01:37:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Too hard.
- 01:39:885 - 01:41:291 Too hard.
- 01:41:994 Too hard.
- 01:43:635 Too hard.
- 01:45:510 (1,2,3,4,5) Too hard because of the jumps.
- From this point on until the end there are too many hard patterns, too many streams and jumps that would suit better a Insane.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

You can ask me to recheck this after you have made the changes if you want.
I don't change any place /.\,and I changed the hard diff →Lunatic diff. and thank you for modding.
:3
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

Kuuhaku wrote:

mod到啦~好久没这么快给出来了
General

建议把滑条音效去掉 之前忘了

00:00:627 这里的绿线似乎不必要，00:00:510 (1) - 这里直接additions调成soft就完事了 还是绿线咱习惯=。=
另外我觉得00:04:260之前是soft或许比较好 不啊，用这种音效就是为了增加节奏的。

Normal

00:53:010 (1) - 这里果然还是改成单点好呢 不错

01:21:135 (1) - 建议加长，从01:19:260开始 行

02:08:947 (3) - 最后这里改成normal finish吧 这个不用

Easy

00:48:791 加个note吧 不加

00:56:291 还是建议加个note 不加

01:02:385 (3) - 这里一定少了个clap音效 被发现了

01:30:041 依然加个note，感觉太空了 还好吧，没觉得空啊=。=

Hard这真的是hard？！

00:04:260 (1) - 这里的开头是不是少了个clap？00:05:431 (4) - 感觉也是应该加clap呢 不错啊，这样更好了！

00:25:353 (3,4,5,6) - 比起原来凹进去，个人认为果然还是突出来比较好 没明白啥意思=。=

00:39:885 (1) - 与后面对应的话，这里果然不该有nc呢，相对的00:40:119 (2) - 应该要nc 这里nc因为大白线，然后刚好也把后面给独立出来了，所以个人还是喜欢以前的

00:48:205 (8,1) - 还是建议两者之间加大间距 根据音乐这里还是不加了

01:02:853 (1) - 按照前面的规律，这里的nc不是很合理啊 很合理啊，梗，看梗
01:08:010 这里的绿线音量改成50%试试？ 不错

01:25:119 (3) - 仅仅是个试验型意见，3的中间和末尾加上whistle音效，然后01:25:822 (5,6) - 和01:27:111 (3,4,6,7) - 也一样
感觉这样是比较合适的音效 换了另一种音效，感觉更好了
01:28:869 (2,5) - vocal的重音部分似乎需要whistle支援 暂时先留着吧

01:30:275 (1,2,3,4,5) -试试这种排列？？？
感觉这里直接那么直着上去不大好，要不然改成了后面类似的也行 这个不错，改了改
01:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是和上面一样的意见（估计是强迫症犯了 后面还是不弄了

依然是关于音效方面的试验型意见01:40:119 (3,4) - 01:40:939 (4,5) - 01:43:869 (3,4) - 都加上whistle音效
嗯，我管这个叫做1.5/3.5 whistle*2（笑）似乎特别适合这种副歌后面跟一长串的曲子 感觉会破坏整体啊，不过这个想法先保留。

01:57:697 (11) - 这里应该加个nc 也行

Finish
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,526 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
I get an error trying to download the map, in the folder of the song I downloaded, it doesn't have the audio file or the BG

If I can download it next time, I will mod
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
音频出错...需要重传下
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,526 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Easy

00:03:322 (1) - the beat at 00:04:260 is the strongest, I think you should have a circle at 00:03:322 and a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197 instead to make more impact for that beat
00:06:135 (2) - if you just go listen to the song at 00:06:603 - there is a cymbal here, add finish on the repeat end of slider?
00:33:322 (3) - shift it more to the left, it will be easier to hit after 00:32:385 (2) because it's less straight up in movement, which is not as easy to move that way.
SPOILER
01:30:510 (3) - reconsider this rhythm, there are 3 parts of this music that should have focus, the first is 01:30:510 where a circle could fit, and then 01:31:447 to 01:31:916 which you could use a slider
01:32:385 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:51:135 (1,2) - slightly off? The blanket a little bit off

Normal

00:06:603 (5) - music has cymbal sound, finish on start of slider?
00:17:385 (4) - if you want a gap in the beats, I think if this slider is from 00:17:150 - 00:17:385 it would be better
01:19:260 (1) - ending at 01:22:775 seems to fit
02:09:885 - I think should put something here to end it lol, nice big sound here

Lunatic

00:04:260 (1) - feels weird to have it stacked with 00:04:025 (12) I think space here better
00:06:603 (2) - finish on start of slider
00:28:400 (1,3) - not really nice looking :X
00:29:338 (5,6) - is it supposed to stack perfectly? Currently slightly off
00:34:260 (7,8) - can't tell if slider or circle comes first @@
00:39:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:291 - going to ignore this bass?
01:48:674 - might want to map to the vocals here
02:09:885 - same thing, put something here to end the song, the beat here is strong

Never get tired of this song lol, cute.
Lunatic seems very packed and close though lol, maybe consider some big spacings for some parts.

Other than that, Good Luck!
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:03:322 (1) - the beat at 00:04:260 is the strongest, I think you should have a circle at 00:03:322 and a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197 instead to make more impact for that beat I see,but I dont know how to change it. <3
00:06:135 (2) - if you just go listen to the song at 00:06:603 - there is a cymbal here, add finish on the repeat end of slider? I dont wangt to add it ,add some sound is make the sound have no oeder
00:33:322 (3) - shift it more to the left, it will be easier to hit after 00:32:385 (2) because it's less straight up in movement, which is not as easy to move that way. OK,I fixed it
SPOILER
01:30:510 (3) - reconsider this rhythm, there are 3 parts of this music that should have focus, the first is 01:30:510 where a circle could fit, and then 01:31:447 to 01:31:916 which you could use a slider this over is my idea,I dont want to delete it.
01:32:385 (1) - finish on start of slider add
01:51:135 (1,2) - slightly off? The blanket a little bit off fixed

Normal

00:06:603 (5) - music has cymbal sound, finish on start of slider? finish sound is too loudly.
00:17:385 (4) - if you want a gap in the beats, I think if this slider is from 00:17:150 - 00:17:385 it would be better I think this idea's sound is good
01:19:260 (1) - ending at 01:22:775 seems to fit no,I think 01:22:775 is echo.
02:09:885 - I think should put something here to end it lol, nice big sound here add it

Lunatic

00:04:260 (1) - feels weird to have it stacked with 00:04:025 (12) I think space here better but it's rhythm is stack in my feel/.\
00:06:603 (2) - finish on start of slider sounds is have no order
00:28:400 (1,3) - not really nice looking :X fixed them
00:29:338 (5,6) - is it supposed to stack perfectly? Currently slightly off fixed them
00:34:260 (7,8) - can't tell if slider or circle comes first @@ ok,fixed
00:39:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:291 - going to ignore this bass? yes
01:48:674 - might want to map to the vocals here so I dont add any object in this place
02:09:885 - same thing, put something here to end the song, the beat here is strong No,I m not think it's a good idea

Never get tired of this song lol, cute.
Lunatic seems very packed and close though lol, maybe consider some big spacings for some parts.

Other than that, Good Luck!
neonat Thank you~
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Hello from PM request.

[Lunatic]
前面hitsound稍微小声点? 有点大声...
感觉CS 3.8会比较好看.

00:01:916 (4) - 加多一次reverse? 恩... 00:02:267 - 这里明显有音, 然后btw不用移什么地方了 恰好placement也适合.
00:02:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这个好挤...放远点吧 那么靠近又难看又容易.
00:04:260 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这个明显不跟BGM阿...
00:13:635 (7) - NC?
00:27:697 (4,1) - slider盖过slider好像不妥吧...
00:34:260 (8) - NC?
02:09:885 - 加个note吧? 音挺大声的.

[Hard]

00:01:447 (3,4) - blanket不够完美.
01:49:260 (7) - NC? 好像有点长.

Normal和Easy还好
加油~
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

mintong89 wrote:

Hello from PM request.

[Lunatic]
前面hitsound稍微小声点? 有点大声... 没觉得大啊
感觉CS 3.8会比较好看. 还是用4算了。

00:01:916 (4) - 加多一次reverse? 恩... 00:02:267 - 这里明显有音, 然后btw不用移什么地方了 恰好placement也适合. 这个不一定有音就要跟，要听音轨
00:02:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这个好挤...放远点吧 那么靠近又难看又容易. 行
00:04:260 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这个明显不跟BGM阿... 但是听带感啊
00:13:635 (7) - NC? 号
00:27:697 (4,1) - slider盖过slider好像不妥吧... 没啥不妥吧
00:34:260 (8) - NC? 好
02:09:885 - 加个note吧? 音挺大声的. 不在同一个音轨上啊

[Hard]

00:01:447 (3,4) - blanket不够完美. 弄了弄
01:49:260 (7) - NC? 好像有点长. ok

Normal和Easy还好
加油~
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
小貓 早
M4M


  • 黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

  1. 01:53:010 (1) - 找不到需要NC的理由...
  2. 頭有點暈, 貌似大部分都順時針旋轉
嗚, 感覺沒什麼問題

[Normal]

  1. 01:06:135 (1) - 要不要改成這樣?! 感覺flow比較滑順
    圖片
    , 如果有改, 當然後面的三角排列要移動一下位置
    306,241,66135,6,0,L|200:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
瞎了, 是我的摸變質了么

[Hard]

  1. 01:46:447 (8,9,10) - 只是一個梗的支援, 可以考慮NC(8), 然後把jump條大點, 因為現在有種不夠力的感覺, 讓vocal說的jump真的成為了一個jump的感覺
  2. 02:09:885 - 看要不要在這加個note, 音效用finish來提高表示歌曲就到這裡, 其實我注意你的Normal和Easy都有加, 為何其他難度沒統一呢QAQ
...我的摸......

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 這裡的節奏並不太感, 要不要試看看像圖片裡的這樣的節奏? 用1/6去排的節奏
    圖片
  2. 00:08:478 (3,6) - 這兩個忘了whistle么?!
  3. 00:13:635 (7) - 這個是忘記NC了么, 因為我看00:21:135 (1) - 有NC
  4. 00:46:213 (7,7) - 加個whistle, 讓前面的whistle音繼續延續, 讓人對於音效比較不會感到奇怪. 01:01:213 (1,1) - 的slider開頭同這
  5. 01:29:924 - 考慮在這加個note吧, 因為我看01:37:775 (1) - 同樣的音, 可是01:29:924 - 卻少了note
  6. 01:33:674 (8) - 我覺得加上NC會比較容易判讀, 當然只是單純個人想法
  7. 02:05:197 (11) - 按照01:57:697 (1) - , 這邊應該也會是NC吧?!
  8. 02:09:885 - 同Hard
各種連梗

就這些了!
給個星支持看看(逃
加油 小貓~
Fuuyu
856 posts
Joined September 2013
Fuuyu
Nyan - pasu~ Here's my Sheep.
I'm here to Mod ~ As Requested
Try to set your Preview Time here - 00:37:892 - - - - 1/4 Snap Divisor

Easy
00:09:885 I think the LN's off , Try it in this pattern.

00:13:635 Same Pattern Above
01:30:510 ^
Just a Suggestion in this Part :
02:07:072 End it on 02:07:541
02:08:010 Add a Note

Normal
00:01:447 End it Here? 00:01:916
00:03:322 End it Here? 00:03:791
02:09:885 Why change the combo?

Hard
Seems Fine to me

Lunatic
Sorry I can't mod Lunatic(Insane) but here's a suggestion Lunatic Diff dosen't really need a 1 or 2 secs break ( Meaning: Your Lunatic need more insanity ) :)
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

Loneight wrote:

小貓 早
M4M


  • 黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

  1. 01:53:010 (1) - 找不到需要NC的理由... 行
  2. 頭有點暈, 貌似大部分都順時針旋轉
嗚, 感覺沒什麼問題 转晕你w

[Normal]

  1. 01:06:135 (1) - 要不要改成這樣?! 感覺flow比較滑順
    圖片
    , 如果有改, 當然後面的三角排列要移動一下位置 弄了弄，其实是你的强迫症犯了吧
    306,241,66135,6,0,L|200:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
瞎了, 是我的摸變質了么

[Hard]

  1. 01:46:447 (8,9,10) - 只是一個梗的支援, 可以考慮NC(8), 然後把jump條大點, 因為現在有種不夠力的感覺, 讓vocal說的jump真的成為了一個jump的感覺
  2. 02:09:885 - 看要不要在這加個note, 音效用finish來提高表示歌曲就到這裡, 其實我注意你的Normal和Easy都有加, 為何其他難度沒統一呢QAQ
...我的摸......

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 這裡的節奏並不太感, 要不要試看看像圖片裡的這樣的節奏? 用1/6去排的節奏
    圖片
    麻麻我害怕1/6
  2. 00:08:478 (3,6) - 這兩個忘了whistle么?! 也许是吧（逃
  3. 00:13:635 (7) - 這個是忘記NC了么, 因為我看00:21:135 (1) - 有NC 加了个
  4. 00:46:213 (7,7) - 加個whistle, 讓前面的whistle音繼續延續, 讓人對於音效比較不會感到奇怪. 01:01:213 (1,1) - 的slider開頭同這 ok，估计是忘掉了
  5. 01:29:924 - 考慮在這加個note吧, 因為我看01:37:775 (1) - 同樣的音, 可是01:29:924 - 卻少了note vocal w
  6. 01:33:674 (8) - 我覺得加上NC會比較容易判讀, 當然只是單純個人想法 感觉差别不太大，先改了试试
  7. 02:05:197 (11) - 按照01:57:697 (1) - , 這邊應該也會是NC吧?! 也行
  8. 02:09:885 - 同Hard 这个还是保留
各種連梗

就這些了!
給個星支持看看(逃
加油 小貓~
谢啦
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

xLoupGarou wrote:

Nyan - pasu~ Here's my Sheep.
I'm here to Mod ~ As Requested
Try to set your Preview Time here - 00:37:892 - - - - 1/4 Snap Divisor about this time,00:08:010 - is well :)

Easy
00:09:885 I think the LN's off , Try it in this pattern.

00:13:635 Same Pattern Above I think this idea is good.
01:30:510 ^
Just a Suggestion in this Part :
02:07:072 End it on 02:07:541
02:08:010 Add a Note ok,fixed.

Normal
00:01:447 End it Here? 00:01:916 no,my idea is have rhythm itself.
00:03:322 End it Here? 00:03:791
02:09:885 Why change the combo? big white line

Hard
Seems Fine to me

Lunatic
Sorry I can't mod Lunatic(Insane) but here's a suggestion Lunatic Diff dosen't really need a 1 or 2 secs break ( Meaning: Your Lunatic need more insanity ) :)
thank you Xl :)
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
fine!　~☆
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

RandomEffect wrote:

fine!　~☆
<3
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
General
  • normal-hitnormal_1.wav 这应该是复制留下的? 可以取缔
    建议offset-8

Hard

Hitsounds
  • 没东西写
Arrangement & Design
  • 没东西写

Lunatic

Hitsounds
  • 感觉没有音效卧槽我听到了clap
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 要不要换成1/8slider
  2. 00:23:010 (1,2,3) - 可以往左移一点 现在和后面叠了不好看
  3. 01:32:150 - 跟的vocal但是这里又有音的样子 感觉就显得空了
  4. 01:41:994 (2) - 建议拉大和1的间距
  5. 01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - 过于魔能
  6. 01:54:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗略显丧病 也是不好读

低难度没东西了 也只能写这么点东西..
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

fanzhen0019 wrote:

General
  • normal-hitnormal_1.wav 这应该是复制留下的? 可以取缔 瀑布汗
    建议offset-8 先看看不着急

Hard

Hitsounds
  • 没东西写
Arrangement & Design
  • 没东西写

Lunatic

Hitsounds
  • 感觉没有音效卧槽我听到了clap
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 要不要换成1/8slider 这个还是算了...比较怕这东西
  2. 00:23:010 (1,2,3) - 可以往左移一点 现在和后面叠了不好看 这个不错
  3. 01:32:150 - 跟的vocal但是这里又有音的样子 感觉就显得空了 先留着算了
  4. 01:41:994 (2) - 建议拉大和1的间距 好
  5. 01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - 过于魔能 让他们继续魔能下去吧...
  6. 01:54:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗略显丧病 也是不好读 其实不是不想换，但是不知道换成啥

低难度没东西了 也只能写这么点东西..
反震谢啦 :)
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
-3- 小猫~

Luna

00:00:98(1,2)- 是不是太近了
00:03:791(1,2,3)- 一起移动,(3)移到00:04:963(2)-的位置比较好?移到这的话nc也不一定需要
00:06:955(x)-add note?
00:09:416(6)-向左转40度左右?
00:16:213(4,8)放在X轴上面比较舒服吧?
00:19:260(1)-换成向下弯
00:45:041(7,8,9,10)-这里换成和前面(6)一样的slider吧 (10)去掉
00:48:791(3)-向上弯
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束

感觉连打有点花眼 然后排版可以放的再开一点~间距可以再大一点~

Hard

00:06:135(6)-NC
00:09:885(9)-NC
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束

侯 加油！
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

BakaHuang wrote:

-3- 小猫~

Luna

00:00:98(1,2)- 是不是太近了 这个完全不知道是怎么回事儿啊啊啊
00:03:791(1,2,3)- 一起移动,(3)移到00:04:963(2)-的位置比较好?移到这的话nc也不一定需要 这个不知道怎么挪....
00:06:955(x)-add note? 不加，和前面配合
00:09:416(6)-向左转40度左右? 这个好啊
00:16:213(4,8)放在X轴上面比较舒服吧? 没啊感觉挺好的..
00:19:260(1)-换成向下弯 好！
00:45:041(7,8,9,10)-这里换成和前面(6)一样的slider吧 (10)去掉 但是音乐本身有点声音啊，先不去了
00:48:791(3)-向上弯 ok
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束 这里是另个一音轨

感觉连打有点花眼 然后排版可以放的再开一点~间距可以再大一点~

Hard

00:06:135(6)-NC 好
00:09:885(9)-NC 好
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束 向你们妥协了，哎哟

侯 加油！
阿黄么么哒
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
加无声sliderslide吧。。

[Easy]
00:09:885 (3) - 挺别扭
刚进来我还以为游戏被减速了。。

[Normal]
01:23:010 (1) - 静音 而且我感觉这里slider应该会比spinner感觉好
都没啥问题啊。。

[Hard]
00:00:510 - 开头这段你调一下音量吧 有点吵了
00:07:541 (4) - 其实我想说这是1/6 鼓和那个乐器都是
00:14:806 (4) - 间距
00:29:572 (4) - 空掉tete不太好吧
00:53:713 (2,3) - 现在挺多人hard里1/4也不overlap。。为了防误导我觉得可以稍微再往左边点
01:52:541 (5,6) - ???
02:05:900 (6) - 间距
加点跳就更好了

[Insane]
00:40:119 (1) - 有一丢丢坑
00:54:885 (9,1) - ^ 我觉得这种不如变成把78放一个1/4 slider里然后9不和他们overlap那种 类似于这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1716252
01:13:635 (1) - 被枪毙可能性极大
01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2) - 神难读
。。够屌

整体够干净我喜欢 ☆
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

No_Gu wrote:

加无声sliderslide吧。。

[Easy]
00:09:885 (3) - 挺别扭
刚进来我还以为游戏被减速了。。

[Normal]
01:23:010 (1) - 静音 而且我感觉这里slider应该会比spinner感觉好
都没啥问题啊。。

[Hard]
00:00:510 - 开头这段你调一下音量吧 有点吵了
00:07:541 (4) - 其实我想说这是1/6 鼓和那个乐器都是
00:14:806 (4) - 间距
00:29:572 (4) - 空掉tete不太好吧
00:53:713 (2,3) - 现在挺多人hard里1/4也不overlap。。为了防误导我觉得可以稍微再往左边点
01:52:541 (5,6) - ???
02:05:900 (6) - 间距
加点跳就更好了

[Insane]
00:40:119 (1) - 有一丢丢坑 坑死人才好=。=
00:54:885 (9,1) - ^ 我觉得这种不如变成把78放一个1/4 slider里然后9不和他们overlap那种 类似于这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1716252
01:13:635 (1) - 被枪毙可能性极大 为啥啊
01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2) - 神难读 但是好玩啊
。。够屌

整体够干净我喜欢 ☆
谷子大法好，改了的有90%
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
01:08:010 ~ 01:24:885 sliderslide略吵

overlay的pattern最好用combo color给个读图上的提示 ar8再加上叠叠叠简直杀人
比赛间隔瞎看了看Insane 不用给kudosu了
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