IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park

posted
Total Posts
25
show more
mintong89
音频出错...需要重传下
neonat
Easy

00:03:322 (1) - the beat at 00:04:260 is the strongest, I think you should have a circle at 00:03:322 and a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197 instead to make more impact for that beat
00:06:135 (2) - if you just go listen to the song at 00:06:603 - there is a cymbal here, add finish on the repeat end of slider?
00:33:322 (3) - shift it more to the left, it will be easier to hit after 00:32:385 (2) because it's less straight up in movement, which is not as easy to move that way.
01:30:510 (3) - reconsider this rhythm, there are 3 parts of this music that should have focus, the first is 01:30:510 where a circle could fit, and then 01:31:447 to 01:31:916 which you could use a slider
01:32:385 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:51:135 (1,2) - slightly off? The blanket a little bit off

Normal

00:06:603 (5) - music has cymbal sound, finish on start of slider?
00:17:385 (4) - if you want a gap in the beats, I think if this slider is from 00:17:150 - 00:17:385 it would be better
01:19:260 (1) - ending at 01:22:775 seems to fit
02:09:885 - I think should put something here to end it lol, nice big sound here

Lunatic

00:04:260 (1) - feels weird to have it stacked with 00:04:025 (12) I think space here better
00:06:603 (2) - finish on start of slider
00:28:400 (1,3) - not really nice looking :X
00:29:338 (5,6) - is it supposed to stack perfectly? Currently slightly off
00:34:260 (7,8) - can't tell if slider or circle comes first @@
00:39:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:291 - going to ignore this bass?
01:48:674 - might want to map to the vocals here
02:09:885 - same thing, put something here to end the song, the beat here is strong

Never get tired of this song lol, cute.
Lunatic seems very packed and close though lol, maybe consider some big spacings for some parts.

Other than that, Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Rotte

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:03:322 (1) - the beat at 00:04:260 is the strongest, I think you should have a circle at 00:03:322 and a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197 instead to make more impact for that beat I see,but I dont know how to change it. <3
00:06:135 (2) - if you just go listen to the song at 00:06:603 - there is a cymbal here, add finish on the repeat end of slider? I dont wangt to add it ,add some sound is make the sound have no oeder
00:33:322 (3) - shift it more to the left, it will be easier to hit after 00:32:385 (2) because it's less straight up in movement, which is not as easy to move that way. OK,I fixed it
01:30:510 (3) - reconsider this rhythm, there are 3 parts of this music that should have focus, the first is 01:30:510 where a circle could fit, and then 01:31:447 to 01:31:916 which you could use a slider this over is my idea,I dont want to delete it.
01:32:385 (1) - finish on start of slider add
01:51:135 (1,2) - slightly off? The blanket a little bit off fixed

Normal

00:06:603 (5) - music has cymbal sound, finish on start of slider? finish sound is too loudly.
00:17:385 (4) - if you want a gap in the beats, I think if this slider is from 00:17:150 - 00:17:385 it would be better I think this idea's sound is good
01:19:260 (1) - ending at 01:22:775 seems to fit no,I think 01:22:775 is echo.
02:09:885 - I think should put something here to end it lol, nice big sound here add it

Lunatic

00:04:260 (1) - feels weird to have it stacked with 00:04:025 (12) I think space here better but it's rhythm is stack in my feel/.\
00:06:603 (2) - finish on start of slider sounds is have no order
00:28:400 (1,3) - not really nice looking :X fixed them
00:29:338 (5,6) - is it supposed to stack perfectly? Currently slightly off fixed them
00:34:260 (7,8) - can't tell if slider or circle comes first @@ ok,fixed
00:39:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:291 - going to ignore this bass? yes
01:48:674 - might want to map to the vocals here so I dont add any object in this place
02:09:885 - same thing, put something here to end the song, the beat here is strong No,I m not think it's a good idea

Never get tired of this song lol, cute.
Lunatic seems very packed and close though lol, maybe consider some big spacings for some parts.

Other than that, Good Luck!
neonat Thank you~
mintong89
Hello from PM request.

[Lunatic]
前面hitsound稍微小声点? 有点大声...
感觉CS 3.8会比较好看.

00:01:916 (4) - 加多一次reverse? 恩... 00:02:267 - 这里明显有音, 然后btw不用移什么地方了 恰好placement也适合.
00:02:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这个好挤...放远点吧 那么靠近又难看又容易.
00:04:260 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这个明显不跟BGM阿...
00:13:635 (7) - NC?
00:27:697 (4,1) - slider盖过slider好像不妥吧...
00:34:260 (8) - NC?
02:09:885 - 加个note吧? 音挺大声的.
[Hard]

00:01:447 (3,4) - blanket不够完美.
01:49:260 (7) - NC? 好像有点长.

Normal和Easy还好
加油~
Topic Starter
Rotte

mintong89 wrote:

Hello from PM request.

[Lunatic]
前面hitsound稍微小声点? 有点大声... 没觉得大啊
感觉CS 3.8会比较好看. 还是用4算了。

00:01:916 (4) - 加多一次reverse? 恩... 00:02:267 - 这里明显有音, 然后btw不用移什么地方了 恰好placement也适合. 这个不一定有音就要跟,要听音轨
00:02:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这个好挤...放远点吧 那么靠近又难看又容易.
00:04:260 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这个明显不跟BGM阿... 但是听带感啊
00:13:635 (7) - NC?
00:27:697 (4,1) - slider盖过slider好像不妥吧... 没啥不妥吧
00:34:260 (8) - NC?
02:09:885 - 加个note吧? 音挺大声的. 不在同一个音轨上啊
[Hard]

00:01:447 (3,4) - blanket不够完美. 弄了弄
01:49:260 (7) - NC? 好像有点长. ok

Normal和Easy还好
加油~
Loneight
小貓 早
M4M


  • 黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

  1. 01:53:010 (1) - 找不到需要NC的理由...
  2. 頭有點暈, 貌似大部分都順時針旋轉

嗚, 感覺沒什麼問題

[Normal]

  1. 01:06:135 (1) - 要不要改成這樣?! 感覺flow比較滑順
    , 如果有改, 當然後面的三角排列要移動一下位置
    306,241,66135,6,0,L|200:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

瞎了, 是我的摸變質了么

[Hard]

  1. 01:46:447 (8,9,10) - 只是一個梗的支援, 可以考慮NC(8), 然後把jump條大點, 因為現在有種不夠力的感覺, 讓vocal說的jump真的成為了一個jump的感覺
  2. 02:09:885 - 看要不要在這加個note, 音效用finish來提高表示歌曲就到這裡, 其實我注意你的Normal和Easy都有加, 為何其他難度沒統一呢QAQ

...我的摸......

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 這裡的節奏並不太感, 要不要試看看像圖片裡的這樣的節奏? 用1/6去排的節奏
  2. 00:08:478 (3,6) - 這兩個忘了whistle么?!
  3. 00:13:635 (7) - 這個是忘記NC了么, 因為我看00:21:135 (1) - 有NC
  4. 00:46:213 (7,7) - 加個whistle, 讓前面的whistle音繼續延續, 讓人對於音效比較不會感到奇怪. 01:01:213 (1,1) - 的slider開頭同這
  5. 01:29:924 - 考慮在這加個note吧, 因為我看01:37:775 (1) - 同樣的音, 可是01:29:924 - 卻少了note
  6. 01:33:674 (8) - 我覺得加上NC會比較容易判讀, 當然只是單純個人想法
  7. 02:05:197 (11) - 按照01:57:697 (1) - , 這邊應該也會是NC吧?!
  8. 02:09:885 - 同Hard

各種連梗

就這些了!
給個星支持看看(逃
加油 小貓~
Fuuyu
Nyan - pasu~ Here's my Sheep.
I'm here to Mod ~ As Requested
Try to set your Preview Time here - 00:37:892 - - - - 1/4 Snap Divisor

00:09:885 I think the LN's off , Try it in this pattern.

00:13:635 Same Pattern Above
01:30:510 ^
Just a Suggestion in this Part :
02:07:072 End it on 02:07:541
02:08:010 Add a Note
00:01:447 End it Here? 00:01:916
00:03:322 End it Here? 00:03:791
02:09:885 Why change the combo?
Seems Fine to me
Sorry I can't mod Lunatic(Insane) but here's a suggestion Lunatic Diff dosen't really need a 1 or 2 secs break ( Meaning: Your Lunatic need more insanity ) :)
Topic Starter
Rotte

Loneight wrote:

小貓 早
M4M


  • 黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

  1. 01:53:010 (1) - 找不到需要NC的理由...
  2. 頭有點暈, 貌似大部分都順時針旋轉

嗚, 感覺沒什麼問題 转晕你w

[Normal]

  1. 01:06:135 (1) - 要不要改成這樣?! 感覺flow比較滑順
    , 如果有改, 當然後面的三角排列要移動一下位置 弄了弄,其实是你的强迫症犯了吧
    306,241,66135,6,0,L|200:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

瞎了, 是我的摸變質了么

[Hard]

  1. 01:46:447 (8,9,10) - 只是一個梗的支援, 可以考慮NC(8), 然後把jump條大點, 因為現在有種不夠力的感覺, 讓vocal說的jump真的成為了一個jump的感覺
  2. 02:09:885 - 看要不要在這加個note, 音效用finish來提高表示歌曲就到這裡, 其實我注意你的Normal和Easy都有加, 為何其他難度沒統一呢QAQ

...我的摸......

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 這裡的節奏並不太感, 要不要試看看像圖片裡的這樣的節奏? 用1/6去排的節奏
    麻麻我害怕1/6
  2. 00:08:478 (3,6) - 這兩個忘了whistle么?! 也许是吧(逃
  3. 00:13:635 (7) - 這個是忘記NC了么, 因為我看00:21:135 (1) - 有NC 加了个
  4. 00:46:213 (7,7) - 加個whistle, 讓前面的whistle音繼續延續, 讓人對於音效比較不會感到奇怪. 01:01:213 (1,1) - 的slider開頭同這 ok,估计是忘掉了
  5. 01:29:924 - 考慮在這加個note吧, 因為我看01:37:775 (1) - 同樣的音, 可是01:29:924 - 卻少了note vocal w
  6. 01:33:674 (8) - 我覺得加上NC會比較容易判讀, 當然只是單純個人想法 感觉差别不太大,先改了试试
  7. 02:05:197 (11) - 按照01:57:697 (1) - , 這邊應該也會是NC吧?! 也行
  8. 02:09:885 - 同Hard 这个还是保留

各種連梗

就這些了!
給個星支持看看(逃
加油 小貓~
谢啦
Topic Starter
Rotte

xLoupGarou wrote:

Nyan - pasu~ Here's my Sheep.
I'm here to Mod ~ As Requested
Try to set your Preview Time here - 00:37:892 - - - - 1/4 Snap Divisor about this time,00:08:010 - is well :)

00:09:885 I think the LN's off , Try it in this pattern.

00:13:635 Same Pattern Above I think this idea is good.
01:30:510 ^
Just a Suggestion in this Part :
02:07:072 End it on 02:07:541
02:08:010 Add a Note ok,fixed.
00:01:447 End it Here? 00:01:916 no,my idea is have rhythm itself.
00:03:322 End it Here? 00:03:791
02:09:885 Why change the combo? big white line
Seems Fine to me
Sorry I can't mod Lunatic(Insane) but here's a suggestion Lunatic Diff dosen't really need a 1 or 2 secs break ( Meaning: Your Lunatic need more insanity ) :)
thank you Xl :)
RandF
fine! ~☆
Topic Starter
Rotte

RandomEffect wrote:

fine! ~☆
<3
fanzhen0019
General
  • normal-hitnormal_1.wav 这应该是复制留下的? 可以取缔
    建议offset-8
Hard

Hitsounds
  • 没东西写


Arrangement & Design
  • 没东西写
Lunatic

Hitsounds
  • 感觉没有音效卧槽我听到了clap


Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 要不要换成1/8slider
  2. 00:23:010 (1,2,3) - 可以往左移一点 现在和后面叠了不好看
  3. 01:32:150 - 跟的vocal但是这里又有音的样子 感觉就显得空了
  4. 01:41:994 (2) - 建议拉大和1的间距
  5. 01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - 过于魔能
  6. 01:54:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗略显丧病 也是不好读

低难度没东西了 也只能写这么点东西..
Topic Starter
Rotte

fanzhen0019 wrote:

General
  • normal-hitnormal_1.wav 这应该是复制留下的? 可以取缔 瀑布汗
    建议offset-8 先看看不着急
Hard

Hitsounds
  • 没东西写


Arrangement & Design
  • 没东西写
Lunatic

Hitsounds
  • 感觉没有音效卧槽我听到了clap


Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:07:541 (5,6,7,8) - 要不要换成1/8slider 这个还是算了...比较怕这东西
  2. 00:23:010 (1,2,3) - 可以往左移一点 现在和后面叠了不好看 这个不错
  3. 01:32:150 - 跟的vocal但是这里又有音的样子 感觉就显得空了 先留着算了
  4. 01:41:994 (2) - 建议拉大和1的间距
  5. 01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - 过于魔能 让他们继续魔能下去吧...
  6. 01:54:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗略显丧病 也是不好读 其实不是不想换,但是不知道换成啥

低难度没东西了 也只能写这么点东西..
反震谢啦 :)
Axey
-3- 小猫~

Luna

00:00:98(1,2)- 是不是太近了
00:03:791(1,2,3)- 一起移动,(3)移到00:04:963(2)-的位置比较好?移到这的话nc也不一定需要
00:06:955(x)-add note?
00:09:416(6)-向左转40度左右?
00:16:213(4,8)放在X轴上面比较舒服吧?
00:19:260(1)-换成向下弯
00:45:041(7,8,9,10)-这里换成和前面(6)一样的slider吧 (10)去掉
00:48:791(3)-向上弯
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束

感觉连打有点花眼 然后排版可以放的再开一点~间距可以再大一点~

Hard

00:06:135(6)-NC
00:09:885(9)-NC
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束

侯 加油!
Topic Starter
Rotte

BakaHuang wrote:

-3- 小猫~

Luna

00:00:98(1,2)- 是不是太近了 这个完全不知道是怎么回事儿啊啊啊
00:03:791(1,2,3)- 一起移动,(3)移到00:04:963(2)-的位置比较好?移到这的话nc也不一定需要 这个不知道怎么挪....
00:06:955(x)-add note? 不加,和前面配合
00:09:416(6)-向左转40度左右? 这个好啊
00:16:213(4,8)放在X轴上面比较舒服吧? 没啊感觉挺好的..
00:19:260(1)-换成向下弯 好!
00:45:041(7,8,9,10)-这里换成和前面(6)一样的slider吧 (10)去掉 但是音乐本身有点声音啊,先不去了
00:48:791(3)-向上弯 ok
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束 这里是另个一音轨

感觉连打有点花眼 然后排版可以放的再开一点~间距可以再大一点~

Hard

00:06:135(6)-NC
00:09:885(9)-NC
02:09:885(x)-这里可以放个note作为结束 向你们妥协了,哎哟

侯 加油!
阿黄么么哒
No_Gu
加无声sliderslide吧。。

[Easy]
00:09:885 (3) - 挺别扭
刚进来我还以为游戏被减速了。。

[Normal]
01:23:010 (1) - 静音 而且我感觉这里slider应该会比spinner感觉好
都没啥问题啊。。

[Hard]
00:00:510 - 开头这段你调一下音量吧 有点吵了
00:07:541 (4) - 其实我想说这是1/6 鼓和那个乐器都是
00:14:806 (4) - 间距
00:29:572 (4) - 空掉tete不太好吧
00:53:713 (2,3) - 现在挺多人hard里1/4也不overlap。。为了防误导我觉得可以稍微再往左边点
01:52:541 (5,6) - ???
02:05:900 (6) - 间距
加点跳就更好了

[Insane]
00:40:119 (1) - 有一丢丢坑
00:54:885 (9,1) - ^ 我觉得这种不如变成把78放一个1/4 slider里然后9不和他们overlap那种 类似于这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1716252
01:13:635 (1) - 被枪毙可能性极大
01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2) - 神难读
。。够屌

整体够干净我喜欢 ☆
Topic Starter
Rotte

No_Gu wrote:

加无声sliderslide吧。。

[Easy]
00:09:885 (3) - 挺别扭
刚进来我还以为游戏被减速了。。

[Normal]
01:23:010 (1) - 静音 而且我感觉这里slider应该会比spinner感觉好
都没啥问题啊。。

[Hard]
00:00:510 - 开头这段你调一下音量吧 有点吵了
00:07:541 (4) - 其实我想说这是1/6 鼓和那个乐器都是
00:14:806 (4) - 间距
00:29:572 (4) - 空掉tete不太好吧
00:53:713 (2,3) - 现在挺多人hard里1/4也不overlap。。为了防误导我觉得可以稍微再往左边点
01:52:541 (5,6) - ???
02:05:900 (6) - 间距
加点跳就更好了

[Insane]
00:40:119 (1) - 有一丢丢坑 坑死人才好=。=
00:54:885 (9,1) - ^ 我觉得这种不如变成把78放一个1/4 slider里然后9不和他们overlap那种 类似于这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1716252
01:13:635 (1) - 被枪毙可能性极大 为啥啊
01:52:306 (8,9,10,1,2) - 神难读 但是好玩啊
。。够屌

整体够干净我喜欢 ☆
谷子大法好,改了的有90%
Colin Hou
01:08:010 ~ 01:24:885 sliderslide略吵

overlay的pattern最好用combo color给个读图上的提示 ar8再加上叠叠叠简直杀人
比赛间隔瞎看了看Insane 不用给kudosu了
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply