IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park

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Rotte
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月13日 at 0:22:29

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Endless Tewi-ma Park
Source: Touhou
Tags: Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi Tewi Tei Inaba
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2893kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.97 stars, 81 notes)
  2. Hard (2.81 stars, 285 notes)
  3. Lunatic (4.10 stars, 516 notes)
  4. Normal (1.87 stars, 180 notes)


Download: IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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TETETETETETETETETE

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Kuuhaku
mod到啦~好久没这么快给出来了
General

建议把滑条音效去掉

00:00:627 这里的绿线似乎不必要,00:00:510 (1) - 这里直接additions调成soft就完事了
另外我觉得00:04:260之前是soft或许比较好


Normal

00:53:010 (1) - 这里果然还是改成单点好呢

01:21:135 (1) - 建议加长,从01:19:260开始

02:08:947 (3) - 最后这里改成normal finish吧

Easy

00:48:791 加个note吧

00:56:291 还是建议加个note

01:02:385 (3) - 这里一定少了个clap音效

01:30:041 依然加个note,感觉太空了

Hard这真的是hard?!
00:04:260 (1) - 这里的开头是不是少了个clap?00:05:431 (4) - 感觉也是应该加clap呢

00:25:353 (3,4,5,6) - 比起原来凹进去,个人认为果然还是突出来比较好

00:39:885 (1) - 与后面对应的话,这里果然不该有nc呢,相对的00:40:119 (2) - 应该要nc

00:48:205 (8,1) - 还是建议两者之间加大间距

01:02:853 (1) - 按照前面的规律,这里的nc不是很合理啊
01:08:010 这里的绿线音量改成50%试试?

01:25:119 (3) - 仅仅是个试验型意见,3的中间和末尾加上whistle音效,然后01:25:822 (5,6) - 和01:27:111 (3,4,6,7) - 也一样
感觉这样是比较合适的音效
01:28:869 (2,5) - vocal的重音部分似乎需要whistle支援

01:30:275 (1,2,3,4,5) -试试这种排列???
感觉这里直接那么直着上去不大好,要不然改成了后面类似的也行
01:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是和上面一样的意见(估计是强迫症犯了

依然是关于音效方面的试验型意见01:40:119 (3,4) - 01:40:939 (4,5) - 01:43:869 (3,4) - 都加上whistle音效
嗯,我管这个叫做1.5/3.5 whistle*2(笑)似乎特别适合这种副歌后面跟一长串的曲子

01:57:697 (11) - 这里应该加个nc

Finish
lovhin456
Hello.

[General]
- I think you could do an Insane, the song suits one.

[Easy]
- I really think that the slider velocity is too slow even for an Easy. A good velocity would be 0.90 or 1.00. Your sliders would be shortened after you change the velocity, keep that in mind.
- Use distance snap 1.0x
- 00:03:322 Instead of this, try putting notes on 00:03:322 and 00:03;791 then add a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197.
- 00:28:636 I think you should put a reverse slider like the one on 00:13:635.
- 00:35:197 Move this slider to 00:35:666 and add a note here.
- 00:38:010 Too many repeats are not good on an Easy. You could try something like this http://puu.sh/9ljhS/3f64a1e220.png
- 00:45:510 Remove a repeat and add a note on 00:46:916
- 01:30:510 Make the reverse arrow fall at 01:30:978 and add a note on 01:31:916.
- 01:35:197 Remove the repeat, then add notes on 01:36:135 (start new combo here) and on 01:36:603.
- 01:52:541 Add a note.
- 01:53:010 Remove the repeat and add notes on 01:54:416 and 01:54:885.

[Normal]
- Again, the slider velocity is a little too slow. I think 1.20 or 1.30 should be fine.
- 00:04:494 Add a note
- 00:04:728 Shorten the slider until 00:05:197 and add a repeat. Delete (4).
- 00:07:072 End the slider here and add a note on 00:07:306.
- 00:08:478 (2,3) Change their places in the timeline.
- 00:16:213 Delete this and add notes on 00:16:447 and 00:16:681.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and just put a note here and on 00:30:510.
- 00:38:010 I think that too many sliders on a row are kind of difficult to play for not so experienced players. Maybe try this http://puu.sh/9lkWn/d34dfaa82a.png
- 00:45:510 Too hard for a Normal. Try this http://puu.sh/9ll6o/cee22c587b.png
- 00:53:010 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9lleI/0b774c379b.png
- 01:24:416 Silence this spinner's end.
- 01:41:760 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9llpY/b7fe734161.png
- 01:51:135 Too hard. Try http://puu.sh/9llzr/4c69d90d2d.png
- 02:02:385 Remove a repeat.
- 02:05:431 Move (5) here.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

[Hard]
- AR -1
- Too be honest, I think this difficulty is too streamy for a Hard.
- I would suggest increasing the slider velocity to 1.70, it feels more energetic and cool.
- 00:04:260 Shorten the slider until 00:04:494
- 00:05:666 Remove a repeat and move to 00:05:549. Then add a note to 00:05:900.
- 00:06:135 Instead of this, put a 1/4 repeat slider. Also delete the note on 00:06:486.
- 00:06:955 Add a note.
- 00:07:541 I think it would be better if instead of notes, you used a repeat slider.
- 00:09:885 (7,1) Don't stack, it's confusing.
- 00:20:197 (4,5,6) Delete (5), make a jump (like you did before) between (4) and (6).
- 00:21:838 Add a note.
- 00:27:697 (4,1) Spacing.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and make a 1/2 slider.
- 00:38:010 Too hard for a Hard. This is more for an Insane.
- 00:45:041 Same as above.
- 00:52:541 Same as above.
- 01:13:635 You should use the slowdown from 01:08:010.
- 01:26:994 Too hard.
- 01:37:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Too hard.
- 01:39:885 - 01:41:291 Too hard.
- 01:41:994 Too hard.
- 01:43:635 Too hard.
- 01:45:510 (1,2,3,4,5) Too hard because of the jumps.
- From this point on until the end there are too many hard patterns, too many streams and jumps that would suit better a Insane.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

You can ask me to recheck this after you have made the changes if you want.
Topic Starter
Rotte

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello.

[General]
- I think you could do an Insane, the song suits one.

[Easy]
- I really think that the slider velocity is too slow even for an Easy. A good velocity would be 0.90 or 1.00. Your sliders would be shortened after you change the velocity, keep that in mind.
- Use distance snap 1.0x
- 00:03:322 Instead of this, try putting notes on 00:03:322 and 00:03;791 then add a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197. I dont want to fix this idea now.
- 00:28:636 I think you should put a reverse slider like the one on 00:13:635. Symmetric Rhythm。
- 00:35:197 Move this slider to 00:35:666 and add a note here. No.
- 00:38:010 Too many repeats are not good on an Easy. You could try something like this http://puu.sh/9ljhS/3f64a1e220.png
- 00:45:510 Remove a repeat and add a note on 00:46:916 I dont want to fix this idea now. - 01:30:510 Make the reverse arrow fall at 01:30:978 and add a note on 01:31:916.
- 01:35:197 Remove the repeat, then add notes on 01:36:135 (start new combo here) and on 01:36:603. umm,this idea I am not want to
change.

- 01:52:541 Add a note. fit in the previous note
- 01:53:010 Remove the repeat and add notes on 01:54:416 and 01:54:885. Not to do that.

[Normal]
- Again, the slider velocity is a little too slow. I think 1.20 or 1.30 should be fine.
- 00:04:494 Add a note
- 00:04:728 Shorten the slider until 00:05:197 and add a repeat. Delete (4).
- 00:07:072 End the slider here and add a note on 00:07:306.
- 00:08:478 (2,3) Change their places in the timeline.
- 00:16:213 Delete this and add notes on 00:16:447 and 00:16:681.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and just put a note here and on 00:30:510.
- 00:38:010 I think that too many sliders on a row are kind of difficult to play for not so experienced players. Maybe try this http://puu.sh/9lkWn/d34dfaa82a.png
- 00:45:510 Too hard for a Normal. Try this http://puu.sh/9ll6o/cee22c587b.png
- 00:53:010 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9lleI/0b774c379b.png
- 01:24:416 Silence this spinner's end.
- 01:41:760 Too hard. Try this http://puu.sh/9llpY/b7fe734161.png
- 01:51:135 Too hard. Try http://puu.sh/9llzr/4c69d90d2d.png
- 02:02:385 Remove a repeat.
- 02:05:431 Move (5) here.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

[Hard]
- AR -1
- Too be honest, I think this difficulty is too streamy for a Hard.
- I would suggest increasing the slider velocity to 1.70, it feels more energetic and cool.
- 00:04:260 Shorten the slider until 00:04:494
- 00:05:666 Remove a repeat and move to 00:05:549. Then add a note to 00:05:900.
- 00:06:135 Instead of this, put a 1/4 repeat slider. Also delete the note on 00:06:486.
- 00:06:955 Add a note.
- 00:07:541 I think it would be better if instead of notes, you used a repeat slider.
- 00:09:885 (7,1) Don't stack, it's confusing.
- 00:20:197 (4,5,6) Delete (5), make a jump (like you did before) between (4) and (6).
- 00:21:838 Add a note.
- 00:27:697 (4,1) Spacing.
- 00:30:041 Delete this and make a 1/2 slider.
- 00:38:010 Too hard for a Hard. This is more for an Insane.
- 00:45:041 Same as above.
- 00:52:541 Same as above.
- 01:13:635 You should use the slowdown from 01:08:010.
- 01:26:994 Too hard.
- 01:37:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Too hard.
- 01:39:885 - 01:41:291 Too hard.
- 01:41:994 Too hard.
- 01:43:635 Too hard.
- 01:45:510 (1,2,3,4,5) Too hard because of the jumps.
- From this point on until the end there are too many hard patterns, too many streams and jumps that would suit better a Insane.
- 02:09:885 Add a note with a finish.

You can ask me to recheck this after you have made the changes if you want.
I don't change any place /.\,and I changed the hard diff →Lunatic diff. and thank you for modding.
:3
Topic Starter
Rotte

Kuuhaku wrote:

mod到啦~好久没这么快给出来了
General

建议把滑条音效去掉 之前忘了

00:00:627 这里的绿线似乎不必要,00:00:510 (1) - 这里直接additions调成soft就完事了 还是绿线咱习惯=。=
另外我觉得00:04:260之前是soft或许比较好 不啊,用这种音效就是为了增加节奏的。

Normal

00:53:010 (1) - 这里果然还是改成单点好呢 不错

01:21:135 (1) - 建议加长,从01:19:260开始

02:08:947 (3) - 最后这里改成normal finish吧 这个不用

Easy

00:48:791 加个note吧 不加

00:56:291 还是建议加个note 不加

01:02:385 (3) - 这里一定少了个clap音效 被发现了

01:30:041 依然加个note,感觉太空了 还好吧,没觉得空啊=。=

Hard这真的是hard?!

00:04:260 (1) - 这里的开头是不是少了个clap?00:05:431 (4) - 感觉也是应该加clap呢 不错啊,这样更好了!

00:25:353 (3,4,5,6) - 比起原来凹进去,个人认为果然还是突出来比较好 没明白啥意思=。=

00:39:885 (1) - 与后面对应的话,这里果然不该有nc呢,相对的00:40:119 (2) - 应该要nc 这里nc因为大白线,然后刚好也把后面给独立出来了,所以个人还是喜欢以前的

00:48:205 (8,1) - 还是建议两者之间加大间距 根据音乐这里还是不加了

01:02:853 (1) - 按照前面的规律,这里的nc不是很合理啊 很合理啊,梗,看梗
01:08:010 这里的绿线音量改成50%试试? 不错

01:25:119 (3) - 仅仅是个试验型意见,3的中间和末尾加上whistle音效,然后01:25:822 (5,6) - 和01:27:111 (3,4,6,7) - 也一样
感觉这样是比较合适的音效 换了另一种音效,感觉更好了
01:28:869 (2,5) - vocal的重音部分似乎需要whistle支援 暂时先留着吧

01:30:275 (1,2,3,4,5) -试试这种排列???
感觉这里直接那么直着上去不大好,要不然改成了后面类似的也行 这个不错,改了改
01:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是和上面一样的意见(估计是强迫症犯了 后面还是不弄了

依然是关于音效方面的试验型意见01:40:119 (3,4) - 01:40:939 (4,5) - 01:43:869 (3,4) - 都加上whistle音效
嗯,我管这个叫做1.5/3.5 whistle*2(笑)似乎特别适合这种副歌后面跟一长串的曲子 感觉会破坏整体啊,不过这个想法先保留。

01:57:697 (11) - 这里应该加个nc 也行

Finish
neonat
I get an error trying to download the map, in the folder of the song I downloaded, it doesn't have the audio file or the BG

If I can download it next time, I will mod
mintong89
音频出错...需要重传下
neonat
Easy

00:03:322 (1) - the beat at 00:04:260 is the strongest, I think you should have a circle at 00:03:322 and a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197 instead to make more impact for that beat
00:06:135 (2) - if you just go listen to the song at 00:06:603 - there is a cymbal here, add finish on the repeat end of slider?
00:33:322 (3) - shift it more to the left, it will be easier to hit after 00:32:385 (2) because it's less straight up in movement, which is not as easy to move that way.
01:30:510 (3) - reconsider this rhythm, there are 3 parts of this music that should have focus, the first is 01:30:510 where a circle could fit, and then 01:31:447 to 01:31:916 which you could use a slider
01:32:385 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:51:135 (1,2) - slightly off? The blanket a little bit off

Normal

00:06:603 (5) - music has cymbal sound, finish on start of slider?
00:17:385 (4) - if you want a gap in the beats, I think if this slider is from 00:17:150 - 00:17:385 it would be better
01:19:260 (1) - ending at 01:22:775 seems to fit
02:09:885 - I think should put something here to end it lol, nice big sound here

Lunatic

00:04:260 (1) - feels weird to have it stacked with 00:04:025 (12) I think space here better
00:06:603 (2) - finish on start of slider
00:28:400 (1,3) - not really nice looking :X
00:29:338 (5,6) - is it supposed to stack perfectly? Currently slightly off
00:34:260 (7,8) - can't tell if slider or circle comes first @@
00:39:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:291 - going to ignore this bass?
01:48:674 - might want to map to the vocals here
02:09:885 - same thing, put something here to end the song, the beat here is strong

Never get tired of this song lol, cute.
Lunatic seems very packed and close though lol, maybe consider some big spacings for some parts.

Other than that, Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Rotte

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:03:322 (1) - the beat at 00:04:260 is the strongest, I think you should have a circle at 00:03:322 and a slider from 00:04:260 to 00:05:197 instead to make more impact for that beat I see,but I dont know how to change it. <3
00:06:135 (2) - if you just go listen to the song at 00:06:603 - there is a cymbal here, add finish on the repeat end of slider? I dont wangt to add it ,add some sound is make the sound have no oeder
00:33:322 (3) - shift it more to the left, it will be easier to hit after 00:32:385 (2) because it's less straight up in movement, which is not as easy to move that way. OK,I fixed it
01:30:510 (3) - reconsider this rhythm, there are 3 parts of this music that should have focus, the first is 01:30:510 where a circle could fit, and then 01:31:447 to 01:31:916 which you could use a slider this over is my idea,I dont want to delete it.
01:32:385 (1) - finish on start of slider add
01:51:135 (1,2) - slightly off? The blanket a little bit off fixed

Normal

00:06:603 (5) - music has cymbal sound, finish on start of slider? finish sound is too loudly.
00:17:385 (4) - if you want a gap in the beats, I think if this slider is from 00:17:150 - 00:17:385 it would be better I think this idea's sound is good
01:19:260 (1) - ending at 01:22:775 seems to fit no,I think 01:22:775 is echo.
02:09:885 - I think should put something here to end it lol, nice big sound here add it

Lunatic

00:04:260 (1) - feels weird to have it stacked with 00:04:025 (12) I think space here better but it's rhythm is stack in my feel/.\
00:06:603 (2) - finish on start of slider sounds is have no order
00:28:400 (1,3) - not really nice looking :X fixed them
00:29:338 (5,6) - is it supposed to stack perfectly? Currently slightly off fixed them
00:34:260 (7,8) - can't tell if slider or circle comes first @@ ok,fixed
00:39:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:291 - going to ignore this bass? yes
01:48:674 - might want to map to the vocals here so I dont add any object in this place
02:09:885 - same thing, put something here to end the song, the beat here is strong No,I m not think it's a good idea

Never get tired of this song lol, cute.
Lunatic seems very packed and close though lol, maybe consider some big spacings for some parts.

Other than that, Good Luck!
neonat Thank you~
mintong89
Hello from PM request.

[Lunatic]
前面hitsound稍微小声点? 有点大声...
感觉CS 3.8会比较好看.

00:01:916 (4) - 加多一次reverse? 恩... 00:02:267 - 这里明显有音, 然后btw不用移什么地方了 恰好placement也适合.
00:02:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这个好挤...放远点吧 那么靠近又难看又容易.
00:04:260 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这个明显不跟BGM阿...
00:13:635 (7) - NC?
00:27:697 (4,1) - slider盖过slider好像不妥吧...
00:34:260 (8) - NC?
02:09:885 - 加个note吧? 音挺大声的.
[Hard]

00:01:447 (3,4) - blanket不够完美.
01:49:260 (7) - NC? 好像有点长.

Normal和Easy还好
加油~
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