Hello there. From my queue.
Pandemic
hope this helps a bit
- 00:20:534 (3,4) - ^
- 00:24:575 (2,3,4) - i suggest you change the sliderend into a soft hitsound because you're clearly mapping the clock-ticks here. this way you can show it a bit more and the ends don't get that much attention. otherwise this feels a bit weird to play you could continue that hitsounding until 00:34:681 -
- 00:34:838 (2,2) - some emphasize here maybe? the notes here are different so maybe hitsound here something
- 00:37:207 (1,2) - i don't understand that stack. i know diversity is important in a map and all, but this is really off. you treat 00:37:365 (2) - like it's not that much of an important note, even though the sound is really loud here. this is not nice to play at all and feels really wrong while playing. At least add a slider here. better would be if you add a jump. a nice forth-and-back-motion would fit
- 00:38:470 (1,2) - ^
- 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - there's no 1/4 in the background why are you mapping this? maybe change this into a spinner? else it's overmapped.
- 00:44:470 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) - this plays really boring, imo. those noises are really loud and you treat them like the ghost-notes afterwards and this is no good, imo. maybe make a 1/2 slider out of those. there's some sound in the background so this would fit and you can stick with that square
- 01:05:786 (4,5) - how about you put some kick in here? this is really loud in the music and you could make a bigger sliderspeed here (slider velocity) and make it look like this:
- 01:14:391 (2,3) - this is difficult to read and therefore to tap. do you know about polarity? apply it please.
- 01:14:944 (3,4,8,9) - the ds between those two is different but it's both 1/2 and there's no change in music so no jump is suggested so i think you should make those distances the same.
- 01:15:417 (8) - there's no sound suggesting this repeating slider. overmap again. it's 1/2 and not 1/4 here
- 01:15:733 (9) - ^
- 01:22:049 (7,8) - before you go with clockwise flow and it suddenly changes and feels a bit off. maybe ctrl + g those two for better flow?
- 01:25:523 (8,9) - like before there's no 1/4 but 1/2
- 01:30:496 - i suggest in this part you map the synths from the music because they are in the foreground. this is more interesting than a lon 1/2 spam
- 01:30:575 (3,4) - i don't understand that sudden jump. please use the same ds for those 3 sliders
- 01:41:154 (3) - i don't think the emphasized sound should be on a sliderend especially because you're making it tappable in the next sliders 01:41:786 (4,5) -
- 01:42:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - again the thing i said about polarity from before. this is difficult to read and this rhythm has never been there before so how should i be supposed to read this?
- 01:44:075 (2,3,4,5) - ^
- 01:50:944 - again this emphasize. please. make this tappable
- 01:58:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool
- 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - again hard to read
- 02:33:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
- 02:34:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 02:41:075 - this is a really loud drop here maybe map it
- 03:16:698 (1,2) - readability
- 03:47:690 (8,1) - this may be difficult because you used the same ds for 1/4 and 1/2. don't do this.
- 04:03:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - how am i supposed to tap that? i suggest you use sliders here
- 04:06:795 (1) - cool slider
- 04:14:137 - maybe add a circle here? the song suggests it
- 04:17:848 (6) - two 1/4 slider instead for the sirens?
- 04:20:058 (3,4) - maybe add a jump here to emphasize the change in the pitch
- 04:25:190 - add a circle again? especially because you mapped those synths before at 04:24:243 (2,3,4) -
- 05:57:637 (7,8) - i think you should ctrl + h this jump because of the flow. you suddenly change the direction for that jump and this feels awkward. make it look like this? nice circular flow
- 06:10:269 (3,4) - again ctrl + g for flow?
- 06:25:111 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - maybe use sliders instead, again
- 06:36:795 (9) - this is overmapped. there's no 1/4 there's 1/2 again. please change this
- 06:39:164 (4,5,6) - you first mapped the synthesizer and then you suddenly change to drums again. this is weird. please stick to either of them. i suggest synthesizer because you map this all the time
- 07:25:455 (7) - the bell is a bit earlier. timed wrong a bit?
- 07:26:266 (8) - ^
- 07:27:077 (9) - ^
- 07:27:481 (1) - i don't understand this spinner. let it end on the note before to have a bigger impact.
hope this helps a bit