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Hello there. From my queue.


Pandemic


  1. 00:20:534 (3,4) - ^
  2. 00:24:575 (2,3,4) - i suggest you change the sliderend into a soft hitsound because you're clearly mapping the clock-ticks here. this way you can show it a bit more and the ends don't get that much attention. otherwise this feels a bit weird to play you could continue that hitsounding until 00:34:681 -
  3. 00:34:838 (2,2) - some emphasize here maybe? the notes here are different so maybe hitsound here something
  4. 00:37:207 (1,2) - i don't understand that stack. i know diversity is important in a map and all, but this is really off. you treat 00:37:365 (2) - like it's not that much of an important note, even though the sound is really loud here. this is not nice to play at all and feels really wrong while playing. At least add a slider here. better would be if you add a jump. a nice forth-and-back-motion would fit
  5. 00:38:470 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - there's no 1/4 in the background why are you mapping this? maybe change this into a spinner? else it's overmapped.
  7. 00:44:470 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) - this plays really boring, imo. those noises are really loud and you treat them like the ghost-notes afterwards and this is no good, imo. maybe make a 1/2 slider out of those. there's some sound in the background so this would fit and you can stick with that square
  8. 01:05:786 (4,5) - how about you put some kick in here? this is really loud in the music and you could make a bigger sliderspeed here (slider velocity) and make it look like this:
  9. 01:14:391 (2,3) - this is difficult to read and therefore to tap. do you know about polarity? apply it please.
  10. 01:14:944 (3,4,8,9) - the ds between those two is different but it's both 1/2 and there's no change in music so no jump is suggested so i think you should make those distances the same.
  11. 01:15:417 (8) - there's no sound suggesting this repeating slider. overmap again. it's 1/2 and not 1/4 here
  12. 01:15:733 (9) - ^
  13. 01:22:049 (7,8) - before you go with clockwise flow and it suddenly changes and feels a bit off. maybe ctrl + g those two for better flow?
  14. 01:25:523 (8,9) - like before there's no 1/4 but 1/2
  15. 01:30:496 - i suggest in this part you map the synths from the music because they are in the foreground. this is more interesting than a lon 1/2 spam
  16. 01:30:575 (3,4) - i don't understand that sudden jump. please use the same ds for those 3 sliders
  17. 01:41:154 (3) - i don't think the emphasized sound should be on a sliderend especially because you're making it tappable in the next sliders 01:41:786 (4,5) -
  18. 01:42:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - again the thing i said about polarity from before. this is difficult to read and this rhythm has never been there before so how should i be supposed to read this?
  19. 01:44:075 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  20. 01:50:944 - again this emphasize. please. make this tappable
  21. 01:58:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool
  22. 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - again hard to read
  23. 02:33:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  24. 02:34:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  25. 02:41:075 - this is a really loud drop here maybe map it
  26. 03:16:698 (1,2) - readability
  27. 03:47:690 (8,1) - this may be difficult because you used the same ds for 1/4 and 1/2. don't do this.
  28. 04:03:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - how am i supposed to tap that? i suggest you use sliders here
  29. 04:06:795 (1) - cool slider
  30. 04:14:137 - maybe add a circle here? the song suggests it
  31. 04:17:848 (6) - two 1/4 slider instead for the sirens?
  32. 04:20:058 (3,4) - maybe add a jump here to emphasize the change in the pitch
  33. 04:25:190 - add a circle again? especially because you mapped those synths before at 04:24:243 (2,3,4) -
  34. 05:57:637 (7,8) - i think you should ctrl + h this jump because of the flow. you suddenly change the direction for that jump and this feels awkward. make it look like this? nice circular flow
  35. 06:10:269 (3,4) - again ctrl + g for flow?
  36. 06:25:111 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - maybe use sliders instead, again
  37. 06:36:795 (9) - this is overmapped. there's no 1/4 there's 1/2 again. please change this
  38. 06:39:164 (4,5,6) - you first mapped the synthesizer and then you suddenly change to drums again. this is weird. please stick to either of them. i suggest synthesizer because you map this all the time
  39. 07:25:455 (7) - the bell is a bit earlier. timed wrong a bit?
  40. 07:26:266 (8) - ^
  41. 07:27:077 (9) - ^
  42. 07:27:481 (1) - i don't understand this spinner. let it end on the note before to have a bigger impact.

hope this helps a bit :)
Topic Starter
rui
fixed Hard's mod

but couldn't update :(


I will write reply after could update.
Topic Starter
rui

Hard wrote:

Hello there. From my queue.


Pandemic


  1. 00:20:534 (3,4) - ^ what?
  2. 00:24:575 (2,3,4) - i suggest you change the sliderend into a soft hitsound because you're clearly mapping the clock-ticks here. this way you can show it a bit more and the ends don't get that much attention. otherwise this feels a bit weird to play you could continue that hitsounding until 00:34:681 - I see. changed to use soft hitsound
  3. 00:34:838 (2,2) - some emphasize here maybe? the notes here are different so maybe hitsound here something fixed. used drum hitsound
  4. 00:37:207 (1,2) - i don't understand that stack. i know diversity is important in a map and all, but this is really off. you treat 00:37:365 (2) - like it's not that much of an important note, even though the sound is really loud here. this is not nice to play at all and feels really wrong while playing. At least add a slider here. better would be if you add a jump. a nice forth-and-back-motion would fit ok. changed placement
  5. 00:38:470 (1,2) - ^ same
  6. 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - there's no 1/4 in the background why are you mapping this? maybe change this into a spinner? else it's overmapped. not overmapping. keep
  7. 00:44:470 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) - this plays really boring, imo. those noises are really loud and you treat them like the ghost-notes afterwards and this is no good, imo. maybe make a 1/2 slider out of those. there's some sound in the background so this would fit and you can stick with that square boring part i know. but I want to keep
  8. 01:05:786 (4,5) - how about you put some kick in here? this is really loud in the music and you could make a bigger sliderspeed here (slider velocity) and make it look like this: Interesting but this time it kept
  9. 01:14:391 (2,3) - this is difficult to read and therefore to tap. do you know about polarity? apply it please. I understand that you are saying but 01:14:233 (2) - have not sound. So blue → blue →blue plasemts can't imo. I did the distance widely to understand that it was different from others
  10. 01:14:944 (3,4,8,9) - the ds between those two is different but it's both 1/2 and there's no change in music so no jump is suggested so i think you should make those distances the same. kept it. because The difficulty of " jump from stream to stream" is different from "jump from repeat slider to repeat slider" So I think different distance but same difficult.
  11. 01:15:417 (8) - there's no sound suggesting this repeating slider. overmap again. it's 1/2 and not 1/4 here 1/4 imo
  12. 01:15:733 (9) - ^ same
  13. 01:22:049 (7,8) - before you go with clockwise flow and it suddenly changes and feels a bit off. maybe ctrl + g those two for better flow? nope
  14. 01:25:523 (8,9) - like before there's no 1/4 but 1/2 nope
  15. 01:30:496 - i suggest in this part you map the synths from the music because they are in the foreground. this is more interesting than a lon 1/2 spam I didn't understand that you want to say
  16. 01:30:575 (3,4) - i don't understand that sudden jump. please use the same ds for those 3 sliders (3) chaged note
  17. 01:41:154 (3) - i don't think the emphasized sound should be on a sliderend especially because you're making it tappable in the next sliders 01:41:786 (4,5) - fixed
  18. 01:42:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - again the thing i said about polarity from before. this is difficult to read and this rhythm has never been there before so how should i be supposed to read this? keep
  19. 01:44:075 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
  20. 01:50:944 - again this emphasize. please. make this tappable same to 01:30:496
  21. 01:58:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool thank you :3
  22. 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - again hard to read keep
  23. 02:33:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
  24. 02:34:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  25. 02:41:075 - this is a really loud drop here maybe map it keep
  26. 03:16:698 (1,2) - readability
  27. 03:47:690 (8,1) - this may be difficult because you used the same ds for 1/4 and 1/2. don't do this. 1/4 imo
  28. 04:03:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - how am i supposed to tap that? i suggest you use sliders here nope
  29. 04:06:795 (1) - cool slider thanks XD
  30. 04:14:137 - maybe add a circle here? the song suggests it fixed
  31. 04:17:848 (6) - two 1/4 slider instead for the sirens? good!
  32. 04:20:058 (3,4) - maybe add a jump here to emphasize the change in the pitch fixe
  33. 04:25:190 - add a circle again? especially because you mapped those synths before at 04:24:243 (2,3,4) - yay! added
  34. 05:57:637 (7,8) - i think you should ctrl + h this jump because of the flow. you suddenly change the direction for that jump and this feels awkward. make it look like this? nice circular flow fixed
  35. 06:10:269 (3,4) - again ctrl + g for flow? ok
  36. 06:25:111 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - maybe use sliders instead, again keep
  37. 06:36:795 (9) - this is overmapped. there's no 1/4 there's 1/2 again. please change this nope
  38. 06:39:164 (4,5,6) - you first mapped the synthesizer and then you suddenly change to drums again. this is weird. please stick to either of them. i suggest synthesizer because you map this all the time fixed
  39. 07:25:455 (7) - the bell is a bit earlier. timed wrong a bit? fixed
  40. 07:26:266 (8) - ^ fixed
  41. 07:27:077 (9) - ^ fixed
  42. 07:27:481 (1) - i don't understand this spinner. let it end on the note before to have a bigger impact. deleted

hope this helps a bit :) Yay! helpful your mod :)
Thank you for modding Hard :3
DeletedUser_1574070
  • Pandemic
  1. 00:22:397 (1,2) - 今までのようにOverlapせず離すのはどうでしょうか
  2. 02:46:207 (2) - ちょっとだけ読みにくいのでNC

言うことないです。。。gl
Topic Starter
rui

Kloyd wrote:

  • Pandemic
  1. 00:22:397 (1,2) - 今までのようにOverlapせず離すのはどうでしょうか 直した~
  2. 02:46:207 (2) - ちょっとだけ読みにくいのでNC 直した~

言うことないです。。。gl
直すところが見つかれば問題ないのです!Kloydさんmodありがとう
Momovely
  1. 00:39:417 (6) - ここうしろのどぅ~んって感じの音にあわせて sampleset Drum の clap にしない?
  2. 01:12:181 (9) - add whistle 01:12:102 (8) - ここと同じ音なのに 01:12:181 (9) -には入ってなかったら ちょっと違和感あるかも
     
  3. 03:39:795 (7) - 後ろのどぅ~ん!!って音とAdditions Drum の finishが合うと思うけどどうかな? 
  4. 03:40:269 (1) - と 03:41:532 (1) - の音違うから 03:40:269 (1) - に Additions Drum の finishを追加しない? で 03:41:532 (1) - はこのままwhistleってのはどうかな?
  5. 03:40:743 (4) - ^
  6. 03:42:164 (3) - 終点にAdditions Drum のfinish
  7. 03:43:111 (1) - 終点にAdditions Drum のclap
  8. 03:44:848 (6) - Additions Drum のfinish
  9. 03:45:322 (1) - ^ 始点に
  10. 04:20:690 (1) - ここにNC入れてもいいかなあ~って思う
  11. 04:40:427 (5) - add additions Drum finish
  12. 04:40:901 (1) - ^ 始点
  13. 04:41:216 (2) - ^ 終点
  14. 04:42:479 (3) - ^ 始点
  15. 04:42:795 (4) - ^ 終点
  16. 04:43:901 (2) - ^
  17. 04:45:479 (7) - ^
  18. 04:45:953 (1) - ^
  19. 04:46:427 (4) - ^
  20. 04:48:479 (6) - ^
  21. 06:01:269 (5) - ^
  22. 06:01:743 (2) - ^ 始点
  23. 06:02:216 (4) - ^
  24. 07:20:628 (4) - 後ろに音ないからかなりやりずらE

後ろの音が似てるけどちょっと違う~ってところが多いからそれを聞き分けて音ツケしたらもっとよくなると思う ;)

寝起きでmodしたからわけわからん事書いてるかもしれない :?  そういうのがあったらすまそ :o
Topic Starter
rui

Momovely wrote:

  1. 00:39:417 (6) - ここうしろのどぅ~んって感じの音にあわせて sampleset Drum の clap にしない?
  2. 01:12:181 (9) - add whistle 01:12:102 (8) - ここと同じ音なのに 01:12:181 (9) -には入ってなかったら ちょっと違和感あるかも
     
  3. 03:39:795 (7) - 後ろのどぅ~ん!!って音とAdditions Drum の finishが合うと思うけどどうかな? 
  4. 03:40:269 (1) - と 03:41:532 (1) - の音違うから 03:40:269 (1) - に Additions Drum の finishを追加しない? で 03:41:532 (1) - はこのままwhistleってのはどうかな?
  5. 03:40:743 (4) - ^
  6. 03:42:164 (3) - 終点にAdditions Drum のfinish
  7. 03:43:111 (1) - 終点にAdditions Drum のclap
  8. 03:44:848 (6) - Additions Drum のfinish
  9. 03:45:322 (1) - ^ 始点に
  10. 04:20:690 (1) - ここにNC入れてもいいかなあ~って思う 入れた
  11. 04:40:427 (5) - add additions Drum finish
  12. 04:40:901 (1) - ^ 始点
  13. 04:41:216 (2) - ^ 終点
  14. 04:42:479 (3) - ^ 始点
  15. 04:42:795 (4) - ^ 終点
  16. 04:43:901 (2) - ^
  17. 04:45:479 (7) - ^
  18. 04:45:953 (1) - ^
  19. 04:46:427 (4) - ^
  20. 04:48:479 (6) - ^
  21. 06:01:269 (5) - ^
  22. 06:01:743 (2) - ^ 始点
  23. 06:02:216 (4) - ^
  24. 07:20:628 (4) - 後ろに音ないからかなりやりずらE 消した

後ろの音が似てるけどちょっと違う~ってところが多いからそれを聞き分けて音ツケしたらもっとよくなると思う ;)

寝起きでmodしたからわけわからん事書いてるかもしれない :?  そういうのがあったらすまそ :o

ヒットサウンドの指摘は全部直した
drum hitsoundの提案は全部直した。そんなところまで意識してなかったから為になったわ
Momovelyさんmodありがとうございました
Winnie
Here as requested :)


[Pandemic]
  1. 00:10:099 (6) - I believe the note would fit better here http://puu.sh/hG1Gx/7b9d2f1bab.jpg considering the way how the triples are spaced out and in the way you made them before, feels efficient, and flows the same way without a huge gap in between notes
  2. 00:21:279 (1) - Since this note is NC and emphasized, I don't believe you need to make them the same distance from one another, since you can stack (4) and have a mini jump here to express that http://puu.sh/hG1Os/85c9969727.jpg
  3. 00:24:260 (1) - Space this a tad bit out, because touching seems awkward
  4. 01:33:970 (4) - Idk about this, but we can leave that as is :? and as the other ones
  5. 02:19:207 (2) - Why not just lay it on top for neatness? Wouldn't really change much tbh http://puu.sh/hG25h/c00d7fc55c.jpg
    To be frank I don't see anything that would be of an issue, it's very consistent with how it's mapped :) Sorry for short mod but as it is, I believe it to be fine
Topic Starter
rui

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested :)


[Pandemic]
  1. 00:10:099 (6) - I believe the note would fit better here http://puu.sh/hG1Gx/7b9d2f1bab.jpg considering the way how the triples are spaced out and in the way you made them before, feels efficient, and flows the same way without a huge gap in between notes ok fixed
  2. 00:21:279 (1) - Since this note is NC and emphasized, I don't believe you need to make them the same distance from one another, since you can stack (4) and have a mini jump here to express that http://puu.sh/hG1Os/85c9969727.jpg good idea
  3. 00:24:260 (1) - Space this a tad bit out, because touching seems awkward fixed
  4. 01:33:970 (4) - Idk about this, but we can leave that as is :? and as the other ones keep it.
  5. 02:19:207 (2) - Why not just lay it on top for neatness? Wouldn't really change much tbh http://puu.sh/hG25h/c00d7fc55c.jpg Why would I not do so it lol fixed
    To be frank I don't see anything that would be of an issue, it's very consistent with how it's mapped :) Sorry for short mod but as it is, I believe it to be fine I am also happy to be able to have you say that. :)
Thank you for modding Kocari
wring
in-game

[Pandemic]
・00:18:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 前4つと後ろ4つ. 34のところは飛ばしたくなります. 特に今のままですと後ろの三角形が微妙になるので、それぐらいならもっと狭めてひし形にしたほうがいいです.
・00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 個人的にはキックにしてほしい. キックにしてもっと細かくしてもいいと思うレベル.
・00:49:523 (1,2,3,4) - 角度がちょっと足りないです. もっと右に傾けていいと思います.
・01:15:102 (4,5,6,7,8) - もっと01:14:786 (1) - に対してblanketさせよう.
・01:36:260 (3) - 角度揃えたくならない?
・01:38:312 (2) - ^
・01:43:365 - 音ほしい(スタックさせて)
・01:44:628 - ^
・02:01:207 (4) - 終点whistle
・02:07:838 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 12間のDSは徐々に上げていきませんか? 1.0→1.2→1.4など.
・02:36:575 (2) - ,02:36:891 (1) - 前をもっと速度遅くして、後ろをはやしくしたい.
・02:46:049 (1) - 1/4スライダーとかどうでしょう.
・02:48:260 (1) - もうちょっと下に置こう. 流れ的に綺麗にしたい.
・02:53:312 (5) - NC
・02:58:365 (5) - ^
・03:00:891 (5) - ^
・03:03:417 (5) - NC?
・03:04:838 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 変えるなら対称の対応するのも一緒にしてもしなくてもあり. 無理にすることはない.
・03:08:562 (4) - NC
・03:10:596 (7) - ^
・03:17:545 (1,2,3) - 突然でわかりにくいし、ずらしていきたい.
・03:19:410 (3) - NC
・03:21:444 (6) - ^
・03:36:006 (3) - もうちょっと上に置きましょう.
・07:23:884 (5) - NC

owariyoshi
Topic Starter
rui

wring wrote:

in-game

[Pandemic]
・00:18:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 前4つと後ろ4つ. 34のところは飛ばしたくなります. 特に今のままですと後ろの三角形が微妙になるので、それぐらいならもっと狭めてひし形にしたほうがいいです. 配置は変えたけどあまり飛ばしたくないのでそのままで
・00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 個人的にはキックにしてほしい. キックにしてもっと細かくしてもいいと思うレベル. 00:44:470 (1) - をnoteにしたいからキックはやめてる
・00:49:523 (1,2,3,4) - 角度がちょっと足りないです. もっと右に傾けていいと思います. ok
・01:15:102 (4,5,6,7,8) - もっと01:14:786 (1) - に対してblanketさせよう. ok
・01:36:260 (3) - 角度揃えたくならない? なった
・01:38:312 (2) - ^ なった
・01:43:365 - 音ほしい(スタックさせて) (´・д・`)ヤダ
・01:44:628 - ^ (´・д・`)
・02:01:207 (4) - 終点whistle ok
・02:07:838 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 12間のDSは徐々に上げていきませんか? 1.0→1.2→1.4など. いいね!
・02:36:575 (2) - ,02:36:891 (1) - 前をもっと速度遅くして、後ろをはやしくしたい. ちょっと違うけどSV変化は採用
・02:46:049 (1) - 1/4スライダーとかどうでしょう. くっついてる1/4からのstream好きじゃない
・02:48:260 (1) - もうちょっと下に置こう. 流れ的に綺麗にしたい. ok
・02:53:312 (5) - NC ok
・02:58:365 (5) - ^ ok
・03:00:891 (5) - ^ ok
・03:03:417 (5) - NC? ok
・03:04:838 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 変えるなら対称の対応するのも一緒にしてもしなくてもあり. 無理にすることはない. やめておく
・03:08:562 (4) - NC  ok
・03:10:596 (7) - ^ ok
・03:17:545 (1,2,3) - 突然でわかりにくいし、ずらしていきたい. 突然でありたい
・03:19:410 (3) - NC ok
・03:21:444 (6) - ^ ok
・03:36:006 (3) - もうちょっと上に置きましょう. ok
・07:23:884 (5) - NC ok

owariyoshi
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wringさんmodありがとう :)
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pandemic
combine 'niconico' in tags. 2 'nico' is just duplicate.
00:23:515 (4,1) - spacing feels a bit high (its 3/4 slider, but same distance as 00:25:207 (4,5) - ), slidershape of 4 can be improved too. i recommend this: http://i.imgur.com/ExNZjCT.png
00:33:417 (2) - i dislike perfect overlap, especially when you don't use it more than once. it can make players be confused for things like 00:35:470 (5,1) - , they will expect overlap but there isnt one lol.
00:49:207 (4,1) - the small spacing here is odd, maybe rotate this by 90deg clockwise http://i.imgur.com/vnOn6Mt.jpg. (alonbg with the rest of the squares)
01:02:786 (1,2,1,2,1) - ctrl+G all 1 by 1, so it looks like: http://i.imgur.com/GOY33Hf.jpg (its also nice because 01:04:365 (2) - is different sound, so you can go opposite direction with 1.)
01:05:786 (4,5,6) -keep 6 overlap, so its a nicer, readable 1/1 pattern. http://i.imgur.com/Fh8Ny9d.png
01:08:786 (5,6) - because the slider is fast, its possible to misread as 1/4 lol. maybe increase spacing, like jumps.
01:46:838 (3) - follow violin http://i.imgur.com/o4BvqNe.png like 01:51:891 (4,5,6) - ?
01:47:944 (2) - follow violin http://i.imgur.com/aE32E8s.png
01:57:023 (4,2,4) - delete?
01:56:470 (6,1) - swap nc
02:04:049 (5) - better rhythm, and fix nc http://i.imgur.com/yxW2XeL.png
02:10:049 (3,4) - better to have closer spacin g, so its not confused for 3/4
02:46:128 - add note and fix stream? http://i.imgur.com/qxIdLPd.png
03:43:111 (1) - remove nc
06:06:085 (3,5) - delete and do jumps instead

thats all, good luck
Topic Starter
rui

handsome wrote:

ticket

pandemic
combine 'niconico' in tags. 2 'nico' is just duplicate. fixed
00:23:515 (4,1) - spacing feels a bit high (its 3/4 slider, but same distance as 00:25:207 (4,5) - ), slidershape of 4 can be improved too. i recommend this: http://i.imgur.com/ExNZjCT.png nice idea XD
00:33:417 (2) - i dislike perfect overlap, especially when you don't use it more than once. it can make players be confused for things like 00:35:470 (5,1) - , they will expect overlap but there isnt one lol. I see
00:49:207 (4,1) - the small spacing here is odd, maybe rotate this by 90deg clockwise http://i.imgur.com/vnOn6Mt.jpg. (alonbg with the rest of the squares) nice
01:02:786 (1,2,1,2,1) - ctrl+G all 1 by 1, so it looks like: http://i.imgur.com/GOY33Hf.jpg (its also nice because 01:04:365 (2) - is different sound, so you can go opposite direction with 1.) fixed
01:05:786 (4,5,6) -keep 6 overlap, so its a nicer, readable 1/1 pattern. http://i.imgur.com/Fh8Ny9d.png ok
01:08:786 (5,6) - because the slider is fast, its possible to misread as 1/4 lol. maybe increase spacing, like jumps. fixed lol
01:46:838 (3) - follow violin http://i.imgur.com/o4BvqNe.png like 01:51:891 (4,5,6) - ? ok
01:47:944 (2) - follow violin http://i.imgur.com/aE32E8s.png ok
01:57:023 (4,2,4) - delete? nope
01:56:470 (6,1) - swap nc fixed
02:04:049 (5) - better rhythm, and fix nc http://i.imgur.com/yxW2XeL.png fixed
02:10:049 (3,4) - better to have closer spacin g, so its not confused for 3/4 ok
02:46:128 - add note and fix stream? http://i.imgur.com/qxIdLPd.png ok
03:43:111 (1) - remove nc ok
06:06:085 (3,5) - delete and do jumps instead ok

thats all, good luck
Thank you handsome. Your mod was useful :)
P o M u T a
from Dune

All suggestion.


  • [Pandemic]
  1. このままでもokですが、もし画像の解像度に完璧を求めるなら、1366x768のこちらを使ってみてはいかかでしょうか。
  2. osb.fileが入っています。使っている様子も無いので削除?
  3. 00:59:470 (4,1,2,3,4) - 五角形を意識している配置であれば、個人的に綺麗な五角形をCtrl+Shift+Dで作成して置き換えたいです。
  4. 01:29:628 (2) - 音取りも兼ねて、このサークルを1/4スライダーにしてあげるのはどうでしょうか。より良いプレイが出来そうです。
  5. 01:34:996 (3) - ここの緑線のスピードを0.5倍速にして、(3)のサークルをスライダーに変えてみるのはどうでしょう。他にも同じ音があるので、変更するのであればスピードも統一が良いのかな。一応、配置も画像参考にどうぞ。
  6. 02:10:049 (3,4) - 自分なら、この(3)を消して、(4)をCtrl+Jにしたものを同じところにコピーしたいかもです。配置は違っても、音取りとしてはこちらの方がいいかも?
  7. 02:41:075 - 02:40:681 (6)のドラムの音を拾っている事からここに音を取りたい感じです。提案としては02:40:996 - (2)を1/4にした配置が無難です。
  8. 03:17:461 - 現に此処にアクセントとなる音が無くて、(3)のsliderの尻尾の音に違和感を覚えます。尻尾をSamplesetのSoftにしてあげると、自然な感じに聞こえます。試してみてください。
good luck
Topic Starter
rui

P o M u T a wrote:

from Dune  だ・・・誰だ?

All suggestion.


  • [Pandemic]
  1. このままでもokですが、もし画像の解像度に完璧を求めるなら、1366x768のこちらを使ってみてはいかかでしょうか。作ってもらったので差し替えた。Thanks
  2. osb.fileが入っています。使っている様子も無いので削除? 削除した
  3. 00:59:470 (4,1,2,3,4) - 五角形を意識している配置であれば、個人的に綺麗な五角形をCtrl+Shift+Dで作成して置き換えたいです。 直した
  4. 01:29:628 (2) - 音取りも兼ねて、このサークルを1/4スライダーにしてあげるのはどうでしょうか。より良いプレイが出来そうです。そのままで
  5. 01:34:996 (3) - ここの緑線のスピードを0.5倍速にして、(3)のサークルをスライダーに変えてみるのはどうでしょう。他にも同じ音があるので、変更するのであればスピードも統一が良いのかな。一応、配置も画像参考にどうぞ。  そのまま使った
  6. 02:10:049 (3,4) - 自分なら、この(3)を消して、(4)をCtrl+Jにしたものを同じところにコピーしたいかもです。配置は違っても、音取りとしてはこちらの方がいいかも? 確かにいいかも、配置は多少変えた
  7. 02:41:075 - 02:40:681 (6)のドラムの音を拾っている事からここに音を取りたい感じです。提案としては02:40:996 - (2)を1/4にした配置が無難です。  変えた
  8. 03:17:461 - 現に此処にアクセントとなる音が無くて、(3)のsliderの尻尾の音に違和感を覚えます。尻尾をSamplesetのSoftにしてあげると、自然な感じに聞こえます。試してみてください。直した
good luck
P o M u T aさんmodありがとうございました。
Makeli
Yo! From my que.

[Pandemic]

00:30:260 (3) - I had to go full nazi. Rotate -3 degrees lol
00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - You could maybe make the volume rise up from low since in the song the sound is getting louder too.
01:07:996 (2,4) - I don't really like how these overlap but that's just my opinion
01:35:312 (1,3) - Imo this overlap just looks dumb
01:37:838 (1,2) - ^
03:18:054 (1,2) - This looks a bit dumb imo. maybe ctrl+h (2) and move it back to the same place
07:15:464 (5) - Why is this with different spacing?

Well there's pretty much nothing for me to point out. In my eyes this should be ranked already. I don't want kudosu for this kind of a small mod I'll feel bad.
Love your maps keep up the awesome work! :)
Topic Starter
rui

Maakkeli wrote:

Yo! From my que.

[Pandemic]

00:30:260 (3) - I had to go full nazi. Rotate -3 degrees lol fixed lol
00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - You could maybe make the volume rise up from low since in the song the sound is getting louder too. ok. Gradually increase the volume.
01:07:996 (2,4) - I don't really like how these overlap but that's just my opinion I do not care overlap. sorry
01:35:312 (1,3) - Imo this overlap just looks dumb ^
01:37:838 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:18:054 (1,2) - This looks a bit dumb imo. maybe ctrl+h (2) and move it back to the same place keep
07:15:464 (5) - Why is this with different spacing? I thought it is better placement one years ago lol. so fixed

Well there's pretty much nothing for me to point out. In my eyes this should be ranked already. I don't want kudosu for this kind of a small mod I'll feel bad.
Love your maps keep up the awesome work! :) I see. I don't give you kds . If you come to want kds, please call to me
thanks for the mod :3
Hollow Wings
m4m

Pandemic

  1. 02:09:575 (1) - recommend you remove this nc, for the sudden 3/4 notes patterns, which can be packed in series of jumps to players. meanwhile you did that at 02:33:102 (1) - as well.
  2. 04:03:637 (1) - idk if this nc spam is necessary... thou it's fine to me, maybe get more opinion on it.
  3. some streams' ds can be considered a bit more, like 04:13:901 (4,5,6,7,1) - should be larger ds ones to me for the heated electric beats, and 04:26:532 (6,7,8,9,1) - should be shorter to me for it's not that heavy in the original track.
  4. idk how to give general comment to this map, let me write in chinese:
    放荡不羁,浑然天成。
sry for didn't help you much things, 5 stars, fav.

good luck
Topic Starter
rui

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

Pandemic

  1. 02:09:575 (1) - recommend you remove this nc, for the sudden 3/4 notes patterns, which can be packed in series of jumps to players. meanwhile you did that at 02:33:102 (1) - as well. remove NC
  2. 04:03:637 (1) - idk if this nc spam is necessary... thou it's fine to me, maybe get more opinion on it. I have consulted with Guy. remove NC
  3. some streams' ds can be considered a bit more, like 04:13:901 (4,5,6,7,1) - should be larger ds ones to me for the heated electric beats, and 04:26:532 (6,7,8,9,1) - should be shorter to me for it's not that heavy in the original track. I review some stream and fixed.
  4. idk how to give general comment to this map, let me write in chinese:
    放荡不羁,浑然天成。I can't read chinese ;;
sry for didn't help you much things, 5 stars, fav. Thank you very much. It means a lot to me XD

good luck
Thank you Hollow Wings
Satellite
NM slot

[Pandemic]
  1. 00:04:136 (5) - add whistle おそらく入れ忘れ
  2. 00:16:062 (5) - ^
  3. 00:22:397 (1,2) - Nc入れ替えたほうが、手前からの線見えるからやりやすくなるしダウンビートにも沿う
  4. 00:33:417 (2) - やっぱり見づらいよね・・・
  5. 00:34:996 (3,4,5) - 音取りおかしくない?どこどうとってるかよくわかんねえ
  6. 00:36:260 (3,4,5) - ^
  7. 00:39:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 曲調にあわせてSliderの速度変えてみるのも面白そう
  8. 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 音にあってる?よくわかんけどSliderでフォローしたほうがよさそう
  9. 01:06:733 (7,8,9) - Ctrl+Hした形のほうが好き、次への流れもよくなるし、手前からも!
  10. 01:18:260 (8,1) - 今までspacing広かったのにここだけ狭くしてるのは何か意図が。。
  11. 01:37:049 (4,5) - リズムわかりづらいし、Appだけどちょっと変えたほうがいいかもSliderに変えてもかっこよさはかわらんとおもう
  12. 02:15:417 (1) - これ絶対Ctrl+Gしたほうが叩きやすいよ
  13. 03:43:111 (2) - 流れ手前からの1読めないし、まだCtrl+Gのほうがプレイできる
  14. 04:08:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 5番から曲げないと音にあってないとおもう、SSは形は違うけど意図は読み取ってくれるはず
  15. 04:06:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - 06:27:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - この2つほんと好き、まじでいいこれ。
全体を通して、要所要所でいきなり難しくなったり、流れがいきなり悪くなったりするのでもう少し一貫性を重視してもいいかもしれません。。。

あんまりhardcore系見るの得意じゃないので、参考程度に見ていただければ~ o/
Topic Starter
rui

Satellite wrote:

NM slot

[Pandemic]
  1. 00:04:136 (5) - add whistle おそらく入れ忘れ 故意的だったはずだけど2年たったから入れた
  2. 00:16:062 (5) - ^
  3. 00:22:397 (1,2) - Nc入れ替えたほうが、手前からの線見えるからやりやすくなるしダウンビートにも沿う OK
  4. 00:33:417 (2) - やっぱり見づらいよね・・・ 皆に指摘されてるけど変えたくない
  5. 00:34:996 (3,4,5) - 音取りおかしくない?どこどうとってるかよくわかんねえ 何でこんな音取りしたのか謎、直した
  6. 00:36:260 (3,4,5) - ^
  7. 00:39:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 曲調にあわせてSliderの速度変えてみるのも面白そう こんかいはそのままで
  8. 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 音にあってる?よくわかんけどSliderでフォローしたほうがよさそう 1/16使うべきだろうけどあえて1/4で
  9. 01:06:733 (7,8,9) - Ctrl+Hした形のほうが好き、次への流れもよくなるし、手前からも! そのままで
  10. 01:18:260 (8,1) - 今までspacing広かったのにここだけ狭くしてるのは何か意図が。。 修正しました
  11. 01:37:049 (4,5) - リズムわかりづらいし、Appだけどちょっと変えたほうがいいかもSliderに変えてもかっこよさはかわらんとおもう 変わらなかったので修正
  12. 02:15:417 (1) - これ絶対Ctrl+Gしたほうが叩きやすいよ 直した
  13. 03:43:111 (2) - 流れ手前からの1読めないし、まだCtrl+Gのほうがプレイできる add NCで乗り切りたい
  14. 04:08:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 5番から曲げないと音にあってないとおもう、SSは形は違うけど意図は読み取ってくれるはず 修正した
  15. 04:06:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - 06:27:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - この2つほんと好き、まじでいいこれ。 マリオネットの快楽から使い続けてる
全体を通して、要所要所でいきなり難しくなったり、流れがいきなり悪くなったりするのでもう少し一貫性を重視してもいいかもしれません。。。 大分極端に配置の強弱をつけているからそう感じるかもしれない、配置カッコよさとってるとかあるしなこの譜面においては

あんまりhardcore系見るの得意じゃないので、参考程度に見ていただければ~ o/
参考になりましたよ。ありがとうさてて
Rizia
[General]
  1. about the artist, it's need to add space between Rin and (Ginsuke), so Rin (Ginsuke) is right, because the "("
  2. seem your map not have any storyborad, so Rin(Ginsuke) - Majestic Infection - Extend mix (rui).osb in your song file is unused, please delete
  3. normal-hitclap.wav delay 10ms
[Pandemic]
  • 04:25:901 (2,4) - ctrl+g, star flow seem more fun
very good
nothing to say
Topic Starter
rui

Rizia wrote:

[General]
  1. about the artist, it's need to add space between Rin and (Ginsuke), so Rin (Ginsuke) is right, because the "(" I see fixed
  2. seem your map not have any storyborad, so Rin(Ginsuke) - Majestic Infection - Extend mix (rui).osb in your song file is unused, please delete deleted
  3. normal-hitclap.wav delay 10ms oops X3 Thank you checkining. fixed
[Pandemic]
  • 04:25:901 (2,4) - ctrl+g, star flow seem more fun fixed
very good
nothing to say
Thank you Rizia :3
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