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Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 30, 2014 at 8:42:49 PM

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo
Tags: Flower ユリカ YURiCa Yurika Kin Oracle doriko Vocaloid Hatsune Miku
BPM: 98
Filesize: 10595kb
Play Time: 05:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.93 stars, 675 notes)
  2. Kin's Easy (1.26 stars, 231 notes)
  3. Normal (1.86 stars, 444 notes)
  4. Oracle's Insane (3.66 stars, 815 notes)
Download: Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Try out [ -Scarlet- ]'s version ~

Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo
花たん - 歌に形はないけれど
花碳 - 虽然歌声无形

- Kin
- Rakuen
- Rakuen
- Oracle

CDFA
smallboat
Lust
Asphyxia

Thanks to KSHR, Melophobia, Natsu, and Gero for metadata!
Thanks to Oracle for the present :)

Thanks to modders!
Project Railgun
ffstar0716
Celizavia
xLoupGarou
Ringating
RandomEffect
Streliteela
Fort
AlpacaCokelat
jinhang_ang
buhei
Gleipnir
[Mahua]
Amamiya Yuko
Irie Miyuki
Mei
Kawaiwkyik
Eni
First :)

[Test Play]
  1. Normal


    ~
  2. Hard

[General]
  1. Add combo colors!
  2. You should use underscores for usernames with spaces since osu! recognizes each space as a new tag (i.e my ranked maps have project_railgun in tags).
  3. I would personally ditch the [ brackets ] in a difficulty name because it looks something ugly like this:


    ~
  4. Well I personally prefer Scarlet's Kiai time because the chorus is split into 16 downbeat intervals. Your decision.
I mod easy/normal

[Normal]
  1. General: Change the OD to 2.5 because the spinners are really short.
  2. General: Consider reducing the AR to 4.5 or 4 as AR5 on a 98bpm song isn't really fun.... and kind of hard.
  3. 00:32:991 (2,3,1) - I don't think you should do this at BPM this low.
  4. 00:45:848 (4) - Replace this with a slider so you can follow the emphasized vocal. The next pattern may need to be slightly modified.
  5. 00:47:072 (2,3) - Please don't stack here. There is no cue in the song that would indicate a stack.
  6. 01:17:072 (2,3) - You must move this to x:312 y:235 to stack properly with 01:15:542 (4) -.
  7. 01:29:929 (3,4) - Well this stack does not fit either. Try something like this instead?


    ~
  8. 03:29:317 (2,3) - Why......... these sliders are not connected in any way. Please make them flow. 03:30:848 (1,2) - is OK because they make a sort of triangle, but this pattern is not.
  9. 03:51:358 (2,3,4) - Same as mentioned above, I do not think this pattern fits in this song for a Normal.
  10. 04:15:848 (2) - Move this to x:358 y:118 to stack properly with 04:14:317 (4) -.
  11. 04:19:827 (1) - Move this to x:116 y:298 to stack properly with 04:18:603 (3) -.
  12. 04:39:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Too many circles, try adding another slider somewhere.
  13. 04:58:705 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above, so many circles together do not fit well for this song.
Some minor issues in Hard, so I will do a short mod on it......

[Hard]
  1. General: Try AR6.8
  2. 05:26:256 (1,2) - After a Final Spinner, the map is usually over, no? The song is really long, it should end with a final spinner. Not notes at the end to confuse players. Please fix this.

Call me back when Easy is finished~ EDIT: Now that Easy is finished, here's my mod:


[Kin]
  1. 01:05:133 (2) - Just a personal preference, but I would use non-red vertices on both sides. Feel free to keep this as it's pretty cool (I may use it later in my own maps).
  2. 02:06:358 (2) - Lower this a bit more? Current is a bit too close, maybe try x:396 y:148? You may need to slightly adjust the next pattern if you do so.
  3. 03:58:399 - Move the circle 2 up a bit so the slider ball flows into it?
  4. 04:39:419 (1) - It would be cool if you could get this on the center of the grid.
  5. After going through your old map, I saw that 00:52:889 (1,2) - is the only time you use a 1/2 slider -> 1/2 wait -> circle pattern in the whole song.Consider adding more of these patterns or remove it altogether.
  6. Nothing else, the map played very nicely.

Good luck
ffstar
yo random mod lel

[General]
  • add Kin to tag
    add Hatsune Miku to tag because original vocal?
    add some custom combo colour will be better
[Kin's Easy]
  • 00:22:889 (1,2) - stacking in Easy diff is not recommended, maybe consider rotate 00:23:195 (2,1) - 30 degree clockwise and DS it
    == http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783044 == (00:23:195 (2) - x:316 y:192)
    00:47:991 (1) - this is kinda weird because it combines 2 different part into a slider. maybe change the rhythm to this
    == http://puu.sh/9WyCX/e3737484da.jpg == (00:47:378 - 00:47:991 - add circle and 00:49:215 - add slider)
    01:05:133 (2) - i would just remove the second red tick to make it smoother
    01:11:868 (1) - slider end add whistle
    01:32:684 (2) - 2 heavy beats here 01:32:684 - and 01:33:297 - , change it to 2 circles will be better to highlight both beat
    02:21:358 (2) - maybe add repeat to this slider?
    03:16:766 (2,3) - yea same as above, maybe try editing some blanket here
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783143 == (example)
    03:33:297 (1) - feel weird for this, because flow a bit off, consider curve up a bit like this
    == http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783156 == (remember move the notes after it for same distance snapping)
    03:40:644 (1) - maybe you are trying to make it consistent but putting 3/2 repeat slider here not really suitable. (don't be lazy xD just map it like this 01:47:378 (1,2,3) - or 02:07:582 (1,2) - )
    04:00:236 (1) - ^
    05:03:909 (1) - dangerous slider lol
    05:16:154 (2) - NC for consistency

    overall is fine.
    There is one thing i want to say is try not to mapping in the same flow direction, that's mean dont keep mapping in clockwise or anti-clockwise and people will feel like it's just circle all the time. (like 01:40:644 - to 01:57:174 - )
[Normal]
  • AR a bit high i think, try 4.5
    00:05:133 (4) - NC? kinda long combo
    01:33:909 - this break, sometimes i feel weird, sometimes i think it's ok, orz
    01:56:256 (2) - remove break here
    05:17:684 (3) - don't put this, it's kinda confusing, remove it
    05:22:276 (3) - why here? remove it please

    nothing much to say because this is your style xd
[Hard]
  • err, i really think AR shouldn't be that high, AR6.5~6.8 is enough
    01:34:674 - move the break to 01:34:521 - for consistency
    02:57:787 (4,1,2) - this combination not that good, can't figure when to click, try this rhythm and pattern
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783330 ==
    code
    216,188,177787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    80,236,178093,6,0,L|48:192,2,30,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    108,184,178399,2,0,L|116:130,2,30,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    164,160,178705,2,0,L|196:140,2,30,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    216,188,179011,6,0,B|248:176|248:176|280:188|316:184,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    03:06:358 (1,2) - at least in this soft part, dont use 1/4 slider like this, just a circle enough
    05:00:236 (5,1,2) - same as above, don't use this kind of pattern, it's really confusing
    05:07:889 (3) - i didnt hear anything here ._. remove it
    05:16:766 (2) - remove repeat (please don't overmap it)
    05:26:256 (1,2) - ... if you want to keep this why dont you stop the spinner 05:25:644 - and add a note 05:25:950 - ?

    tbh kinda overmapped... other is ok but i want to mention this part 05:06:970 - , this part is very soft, why keep adding notes where don't have any sound there? i just mentioned some but there is still a lot of them, please consider remove it yourself
[Scarlet's Insane]
  • 00:02:378 (3,4,5) - definitely intended, but kinda confusing. try NC 00:02:684 (5) - and remove NC 00:03:603 (1) - because it's the new part
    00:07:582 (4) - NC
    00:13:399 (3) - maybe unrankable, it's kinda unreadable, but i won't force you to remove it, but at least NC 00:13:399 (3) - and make it nicer.
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1785268 ==
    code
    364,368,13093,2,0,L|361:321,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    356,216,13399,6,0,B|352:160|352:160|264:136|232:256|328:288,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    00:26:562 (1,2,3,4) - kinda weird pattern, i think you want to change the distance, so NC 00:26:868 (3) -
    00:27:787 (3,4) - turn both slider another way to make it follow the flow
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1785283 ==
    00:39:419 (1) - rotate 25 degree and move it to prevent overlapping
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1785292 ==
    00:41:868 (1) - rotate -25 degree or just copy paste ctrl+H from the previous one
    00:46:766 (1) - i am not sure with this but the rule says repeat sign can't hide behind, but since this is the long slider so i not sure about it
    01:33:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think there are some BPM changes here, but i am noob at timing lol. as long as it is playable so i think it's ok (or you can find some timing expert to ask)
    and please, 3 notes 1 NC ._.
    02:36:154 (6) - wrong timing, start: 02:36:205 - end: 02:36:664 -
    02:57:787 (4) - personally think this note can move far away from the previous one, make bigger jump
    05:11:868 (2) - slider start add whitsle
    05:23:807 - add a green line and reduce the volume to 20%
    05:25:950 - add a green line and increase the volume to 60% to highlight the last 4 sound

    last slider <3
good luck :3
EXC4L1BUR123
Excalibur Mod!

No Kusodus please :)

It's good. I actually like the map and love the song. It can be used in a drama or something where u know... Is it an OST? haha

Anyways, Everything's fine
Spacing is fine~
EVERYTHING

I hope this map get ranked already hahaha :D
Celizavia
hi~
M4M :D

General

  1. the custom colours didnt really worked well on the map, try this?
SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 70,238,238
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 173,85,196
Combo4 : 255,6,255
  1. slider tick 2 sounds better imo
Kin's Easy

  1. 00:05:133(2) blanket this better
  2. 00:35:440 add a note
  3. 00:40:338 ^
  4. at 00:54:572(2) move into 00:55:031, the vocals started there
  5. 01:13:399 add a note
  6. 01:39:564 remove nc
  7. 02:53:544(2) sounds off
  8. 03:27:480 http://puu.sh/9XEQN/9d7f6b351e.jpg
  9. 03:30:542 add a note
Normal
  1. 01:33:297 remove nc
  2. 02:22:276 start the spinner here instead
Hard
  1. 00:26:876(7) ctrl+g
  2. 01:33:297 remove nc
  3. 01:39:130 sounds off
  4. 02:22:276 start the spinner here instead
hope my mod helps ^^
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue



*Mp3 --> OK
-Now that's a Mp3 :)

*BG --> Nyan~LINK
-Resized to 1024*576
-Improved Photo Quality

Nyan~MOD
[Kin's Easy]
00:14:929 Remove NC
00:27:174 ^
00:51:052 ^
01:57:787 and 01:59:011 Improve blanket


[Normal]
00:50:746 Ctrl+G
01:36:970 Blanket?
04:03:603 Blanket?

Well That's it, really not needed anymore
Good Luck~
[ -Scarlet- ]

ffstar0716 wrote:

yo random mod lel

[General]
  • add Kin to tag
    add Hatsune Miku to tag because original vocal?
    add some custom combo colour will be better
[Scarlet's Insane]
  • 00:02:378 (3,4,5) - definitely intended, but kinda confusing. try NC 00:02:684 (5) - and remove NC 00:03:603 (1) - because it's the new part Okay~ >.>
    00:07:582 (4) - NC Okay~
    00:13:399 (3) - maybe unrankable, it's kinda unreadable, but i won't force you to remove it, but at least NC 00:13:399 (3) - and make it nicer.
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1785268 == Actually I also dislike this pattern. Changed to other pattern
    code
    364,368,13093,2,0,L|361:321,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    356,216,13399,6,0,B|352:160|352:160|264:136|232:256|328:288,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    00:26:562 (1,2,3,4) - kinda weird pattern, i think you want to change the distance, so NC 00:26:868 (3) - Hmm, I think so. change the spacing a little here
    00:27:787 (3,4) - turn both slider another way to make it follow the flow Oh god, why did I make this in the first place orz. Changed~
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1785283 ==
    00:39:419 (1) - rotate 25 degree and move it to prevent overlapping I don't mind the overlapping here, wanted to make it symmetrical
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1785292 ==
    00:41:868 (1) - rotate -25 degree or just copy paste ctrl+H from the previous one ^
    00:46:766 (1) - i am not sure with this but the rule says repeat sign can't hide behind, but since this is the long slider so i not sure about it It's fine as long is readable ~
    01:33:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think there are some BPM changes here, but i am noob at timing lol. as long as it is playable so i think it's ok (or you can find some timing expert to ask) Yea, I can't get the bpm right here too. Temporary putting a spinner here until I get a right timing ><
    and please, 3 notes 1 NC ._. LOL, kk
    02:36:154 (6) - wrong timing, start: 02:36:205 - end: 02:36:664 - wtf is wrong with my ears orz. Fixed~
    02:57:787 (4) - personally think this note can move far away from the previous one, make bigger jump Hmm.... Okay gua. Fits with the cymbal
    05:11:868 (2) - slider start add whitsle Okay~
    05:23:807 - add a green line and reduce the volume to 20%
    05:25:950 - add a green line and increase the volume to 60% to highlight the last 4 sound

    last slider <3
Thanks for the mod~

Tolongg update >>> http://puu.sh/9YEK1/27cd50b22f.osu ~

good luck :3
Ringating

xLoupGarou wrote:

*BG --> Nyan~LINK
-Resized to 1024*576
-Improved Photo Quality
o.e

osu accepts images up to 768 pixels in height, and actually doesn't care about the width of the image at all. so 1366x768 is the best standard aspect ratio (16:9) resolution for backgrounds.

I did a slight mod of the bg. the image was 1365x768 instead of 1366x768, so I fixed that by downscaling this. I then made an alternate version with some minor changes to the contrast/saturation of the image. Also all the images are png since there is a noticeable loss in sharpness when jpg is used. Here are the two possible BGs:
edit: also made an alternate alternate that is a version of the original that smooths similar colors to create a somewhat "cleaner" sort of aesthetic:
edit2: fixed first two image links >.>

no kudosu
Kin

ffstar0716 wrote:

yo random mod lel

[General]
  • add Kin to tag
    add Hatsune Miku to tag because original vocal?
    add some custom combo colour will be better
[Kin's Easy]
  • 00:22:889 (1,2) - stacking in Easy diff is not recommended, maybe consider rotate 00:23:195 (2,1) - 30 degree clockwise and DS it it's not forbidden, also as long my stack are consistent, it's ok
    == http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783044 == (00:23:195 (2) - x:316 y:192)
    00:47:991 (1) - this is kinda weird because it combines 2 different part into a slider. maybe change the rhythm to this no sry, that won't follow the piano, which was aim'd for those one
    == http://puu.sh/9WyCX/e3737484da.jpg == (00:47:378 - 00:47:991 - add circle and 00:49:215 - add slider)
    01:05:133 (2) - i would just remove the second red tick to make it smoother meh I don't like the slider without it
    01:11:868 (1) - slider end add whistle fix'd
    01:32:684 (2) - 2 heavy beats here 01:32:684 - and 01:33:297 - , change it to 2 circles will be better to highlight both beat ye fix'd
    02:21:358 (2) - maybe add repeat to this slider? ^
    03:16:766 (2,3) - yea same as above, maybe try editing some blanket here same as above
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783143 == (example)
    03:33:297 (1) - feel weird for this, because flow a bit off, consider curve up a bit like this I know what you mean but I still prefer no curve slider here
    == http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783156 == (remember move the notes after it for same distance snapping)
    03:40:644 (1) - maybe you are trying to make it consistent but putting 3/2 repeat slider here not really suitable. (don't be lazy xD just map it like this 01:47:378 (1,2,3) - or 02:07:582 (1,2) - )
    04:00:236 (1) - ^ both fix'd
    05:03:909 (1) - dangerous slider lol
    05:16:154 (2) - NC for consistency only 1 combo feel kinda weird for me :/

    overall is fine.
    There is one thing i want to say is try not to mapping in the same flow direction, that's mean dont keep mapping in clockwise or anti-clockwise and people will feel like it's just circle all the time. (like 01:40:644 - to 01:57:174 - ) I hate break the flow on easy diff

Celizavia wrote:

Kin's Easy

  1. 00:05:133(2) blanket this better This is NOT a blanket
  2. 00:35:440 add a note it will feel too much unnatural on easy diff, no
  3. 00:40:338 ^ ^
  4. at 00:54:572(2) move into 00:55:031, the vocals started there vocal or not, this one is following the drum not the vocal
  5. 01:13:399 add a note I won't make triplet 1/2 on easy diff
  6. 01:39:564 remove nc it'll make inconsistent NC
  7. 02:53:544(2) sounds off listen carefully the music, and the stronger beat are on blue tick
  8. 03:27:480 http://puu.sh/9XEQN/9d7f6b351e.jpg I know it's for vocal, but I prefer let some time after a spinner
  9. 03:30:542 add a note same as previously said

xLoupGarou wrote:

[Kin's Easy]
00:14:929 Remove NC it'll make inconsistent NC
00:27:174 ^ ^
00:51:052 ^ ^
01:57:787 and 01:59:011 Improve blanket there's no blanket on your screenshot, + I won't make a blanket here <_<
update
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai Keredo.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 94521
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Uta ni Katachi wa Nai Keredo
TitleUnicode:歌に形はないけれど
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Kin's Easy
Source:Flower
Tags:Yurica Yurika [_-Scarlet-_]
BeatmapID:451003
BeatmapSetID:181430

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"women_vocaloid_dress_hatsune_m_2560x1440.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,144925,162877
2,184109,192265
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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396,204,250031,6,0,P|428:252|428:344,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,252480,6,0,P|376:104|464:136,2,150,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,254929,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,136,255542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,216,256154,2,0,P|120:256|132:324,2,100,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,257991,6,0,L|192:72,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,259215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,136,259827,6,0,P|368:116|432:124,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,261664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,136,262276,6,0,P|144:116|80:124,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,180,263501,2,0,P|4:220|12:276,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,352,264725,6,0,P|136:316|220:320,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,265950,2,0,P|324:348|376:332,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,292,267174,6,0,L|460:188,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,268399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,269011,2,0,L|304:24,2,50,8|6|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,270236,5,8,0:0:0:0:
172,112,270848,2,0,P|156:160|168:216,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,272072,6,0,B|264:280|264:280|328:280,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,284,273297,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,192,273909,2,0,L|504:192,2,50,8|6|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,100,275133,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,68,275746,2,0,B|224:96|224:96|196:76|160:68|128:80,1,200,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,277582,5,8,0:0:0:0:
80,232,278195,2,0,P|108:260|184:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,279419,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,304,280031,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,244,280644,2,0,L|476:256,2,50,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,281868,6,0,B|312:168|304:140|312:100|312:100|248:20,2,200,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,124,284929,6,0,P|444:84|496:60,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,212,286766,6,0,P|324:228|264:228,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,312,287991,2,0,P|172:295|126:257,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,196,289215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,108,289827,2,0,L|92:36,2,50,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,168,291052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,100,291664,6,0,P|295:73|356:72,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,292889,2,0,P|374:173|422:210,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,268,294113,2,0,L|184:296,1,150,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,295338,2,0,P|88:304|48:280,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,296562,6,0,L|28:84,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,124,297787,2,0,L|196:52,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,141,299011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,135,299623,2,0,L|360:76,2,50,8|6|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,300848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,308,301460,6,0,P|288:328|224:324,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,284,302684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,184,303297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,120,303909,6,0,B|265:97|265:97|300:71|291:19|249:11|213:33|222:85|265:97|265:97|326:99,1,300,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,132,306358,6,0,P|440:176|416:280,2,150,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,68,308807,6,0,P|288:88|228:76,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,68,309725,2,0,P|112:68|56:112,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,200,311256,6,0,P|24:264|32:356,2,150,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,104,313705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,36,314929,6,0,P|280:32|312:36,2,50,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,316154,2,0,P|148:144|148:196,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,317072,2,0,P|180:292|264:328,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,228,318603,6,0,B|360:208|360:208|416:216,2,150,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,321052,6,0,P|104:252|52:224,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,208,321970,2,0,P|4:160|40:64,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,323501,12,2,326868,0:0:0:0:
Ringating
just a quick notice that I fixed the 2 broken image links from my previous post (sorry about that)
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Project Railgun wrote:

First :)

[Test Play]
  1. Normal


    ~
  2. Hard

[General]
  1. Add combo colors! Fixed
  2. You should use underscores for usernames with spaces since osu! recognizes each space as a new tag (i.e my ranked maps have project_railgun in tags). the GD mapper disagreed with this :(
  3. I would personally ditch the [ brackets ] in a difficulty name because it looks something ugly like this:


    ~
  4. Well I personally prefer Scarlet's Kiai time because the chorus is split into 16 downbeat intervals. Your decision.
I mod easy/normal

[Normal]
  1. General: Change the OD to 2.5 because the spinners are really short.
  2. General: Consider reducing the AR to 4.5 or 4 as AR5 on a 98bpm song isn't really fun.... and kind of hard. Reduced to 4
  3. 00:32:991 (2,3,1) - I don't think you should do this at BPM this low. Fixed
  4. 00:45:848 (4) - Replace this with a slider so you can follow the emphasized vocal. The next pattern may need to be slightly modified. Fixed
  5. 00:47:072 (2,3) - Please don't stack here. There is no cue in the song that would indicate a stack.
  6. 01:17:072 (2,3) - You must move this to x:312 y:235 to stack properly with 01:15:542 (4) -. But after saving it goes back to the original place, maybe cuz the stack latency
  7. 01:29:929 (3,4) - Well this stack does not fit either. Try something like this instead? Fixed


    ~
  8. 03:29:317 (2,3) - Why......... these sliders are not connected in any way. Please make them flow. 03:30:848 (1,2) - is OK because they make a sort of triangle, but this pattern is not. I wanna try this pattern
  9. 03:51:358 (2,3,4) - Same as mentioned above, I do not think this pattern fits in this song for a Normal.
  10. 04:15:848 (2) - Move this to x:358 y:118 to stack properly with 04:14:317 (4) -. Fixed
  11. 04:19:827 (1) - Move this to x:116 y:298 to stack properly with 04:18:603 (3) -. Fixed
  12. 04:39:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Too many circles, try adding another slider somewhere.
  13. 04:58:705 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above, so many circles together do not fit well for this song.
Some minor issues in Hard, so I will do a short mod on it......

[Hard]
  1. General: Try AR6.8 Fixed
  2. 05:26:256 (1,2) - After a Final Spinner, the map is usually over, no? The song is really long, it should end with a final spinner. Not notes at the end to confuse players. Please fix this.
Hmm I'm ok for both, but I'll keep it first. IMO I love maps with less spinners

Good luck
Thanks for mods!

Celizavia wrote:

hi~
M4M :D

General

  1. the custom colours didnt really worked well on the map, try this?
Thanks, I changed the brightness and things a bit
SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 70,238,238
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 173,85,196
Combo4 : 255,6,255
  1. slider tick 2 sounds better imo
Normal
  1. 01:33:297 remove nc Leading to KIAI, before break
  2. 02:22:276 start the spinner here instead Keep for a hit before spinner
Hard
  1. 00:26:876(7) ctrl+g Keep for pattern
  2. 01:33:297 remove nc Leading to KIAI, before break
  3. 01:39:130 sounds off
  4. 02:22:276 start the spinner here instead Keep for a hit before spinner
hope my mod helps ^^
Thanks for mods!

ffstar0716 wrote:

yo random mod lel

[General]
  • add Kin to tag
    add Hatsune Miku to tag because original vocal?
    add some custom combo colour will be better
[Normal]
  • AR a bit high i think, try 4.5 Changed to 4.0
    00:05:133 (4) - NC? kinda long combo Fixed
    01:33:909 - this break, sometimes i feel weird, sometimes i think it's ok, orz ikr orz
    01:56:256 (2) - remove break here
    05:17:684 (3) - don't put this, it's kinda confusing, remove it Got piano there
    05:22:276 (3) - why here? remove it please Fixed

    nothing much to say because this is your style xd
[Hard]
  • err, i really think AR shouldn't be that high, AR6.5~6.8 is enough
    01:34:674 - move the break to 01:34:521 - for consistency
    02:57:787 (4,1,2) - this combination not that good, can't figure when to click, try this rhythm and pattern
    == https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783330 ==
    code
    216,188,177787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    80,236,178093,6,0,L|48:192,2,30,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    108,184,178399,2,0,L|116:130,2,30,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    164,160,178705,2,0,L|196:140,2,30,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    216,188,179011,6,0,B|248:176|248:176|280:188|316:184,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    03:06:358 (1,2) - at least in this soft part, dont use 1/4 slider like this, just a circle enough Coz there's a boop sound at 03:06:358 -
    05:00:236 (5,1,2) - same as above, don't use this kind of pattern, it's really confusing Maybe just easy to miss for some players
    05:07:889 (3) - i didnt hear anything here ._. remove it Fixed
    05:16:766 (2) - remove repeat (please don't overmap it) Keep
    05:26:256 (1,2) - ... if you want to keep this why dont you stop the spinner 05:25:644 - and add a note 05:25:950 - ? Fixed

    tbh kinda overmapped... other is ok but i want to mention this part 05:06:970 - , this part is very soft, why keep adding notes where don't have any sound there? i just mentioned some but there is still a lot of them, please consider remove it yourself
good luck :3
Thanks for mods!

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue



*Mp3 --> OK
-Now that's a Mp3 :)

*BG --> Nyan~LINK
-Resized to 1024*576
-Improved Photo Quality

Nyan~MOD
[Normal]
00:50:746 Ctrl+G
01:36:970 Blanket?
04:03:603 Blanket?

Well That's it, really not needed anymore
Good Luck~
Thanks for mods!
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Ringating wrote:

xLoupGarou wrote:

*BG --> Nyan~LINK
-Resized to 1024*576
-Improved Photo Quality
o.e

osu accepts images up to 768 pixels in height, and actually doesn't care about the width of the image at all. so 1366x768 is the best standard aspect ratio (16:9) resolution for backgrounds.

I did a slight mod of the bg. the image was 1365x768 instead of 1366x768, so I fixed that by downscaling this. I then made an alternate version with some minor changes to the contrast/saturation of the image. Also all the images are png since there is a noticeable loss in sharpness when jpg is used. Here are the two possible BGs:
edit: also made an alternate alternate that is a version of the original that smooths similar colors to create a somewhat "cleaner" sort of aesthetic:
edit2: fixed first two image links >.>

no kudosu
Thanks for the BG!

Using the 2nd pic (color alter)

Accidentally pressed kudosu =3= keep it if you don't mind
RandF
Hello, Rakuen :)
M4M request!

[General]
  1. add guest name "Kin" for tags
  2. tags suggetion:
    doriko
    vocaloid
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:072 (4) - I prefer to delete
  2. 00:34:521 (1,2) - swap DS
  3. 01:54:419 (4) - I recommend downward slider for better flow
  4. 02:14:317 (4,1) - not good flow
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:684 (1) - u~m, end at 00:02:991
  2. 01:37:889 (5,6) - combine into 1 slider
  3. 03:06:358 (1,2) - not suit to melody, imo. suggetion~
  4. 03:52:429 (5) - reverse slider is not good. I suggest this
  5. 04:21:511 (5) - I prefer to delete
  6. 04:46:154 (6,7) - how about 1/4 rhythm?
  7. 04:55:950 (4,5,6,7) - not good flow?
[Kin's Easy]
  1. 01:13:705 (1,2) - symmetric slider is better
[ -Scarlet- 's Insane]
  1. 00:01:766 (1,2,3,4) - hard to find rhythm...
  2. 00:49:215~00:51:664- add break time?
  3. 00:58:705 (6,1) - increase DS
  4. 02:35:746 (5) - suggetion
  5. 02:36:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - intersting!
  6. 05:13:705 (4) - NC?
that's the one of my favorite song! impressive song~
nice mapping ~☆
~Good Luck~
Kin

RandomEffect wrote:

[Kin's Easy]
  1. 01:13:705 (1,2) - symmetric slider is better it will hurt my blanket <_<
sorry nothing fix'd ><
anyway, thanks !
Streliteela
Hi~m4m~:D

[General]
Very nice and moving song, I love it very much :). And as I'm not a pro mapper, my mod may not helpful :(
And since I haven't made an easy diff before, so idk how to make or mod it...so I'll skip easy diff, sorry about it :(

[Insane]
00:01:766 (1,2,3,4) - These notes have different rhythm, so you'd better not put these notes into equal distance. Try to make 00:02:378 (3,4) - into a short slider
00:08:500 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - This part is a little bit strange...especially 00:09:725 (3,4) - , not flow well
00:13:399 (3,1) - not flow very well
00:17:225 (5,1) - ^
00:26:562 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern could be changed into a pentagon, like this:
00:27:480 (2) - ctrl+g?
00:30:542 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - This pattern looks strange
00:46:766 (1) - ctrl+g? That could be more coherent imo
00:49:215 - 00:51:664 - Add break time? Really don't want to see HP decrease... :o
01:02:072 (7,1) - not flow well
01:03:909 (1,2,3) - ds of this part is different from before (01:03:297 (3,4,5) - ). Try to fix this, it's hard to read
01:05:133 (4,5) - ^
01:05:746 (6,1,2,3,4) - rhythm of this part is not very well, try like this:
01:10:644 (5,1,2) - flow problem :o
01:14:623 (3,4,5) - decrease DS
02:04:521 (6,7,8) - bad flow
02:08:501 (3,4,5) - like this?
02:34:521 (1,2) - since there's a higher piano sound in slider 2, it's ok to increase the ds between 1 and 2
02:43:552 (4,5,6,7,8) - pattern looks strange
03:02:991 (6,7,8,9,1) - bad flow
04:21:511 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - I don't like this pattern :o
04:26:766 (1,2,1,2) - change them to 2 1/6 sliders
05:00:644 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read

[Hard]
00:14:317 (6,7,8) - personally I don't like this kind of flow :o
00:32:072 (1,2,3,4) - change another pattern? this one looks a little strange..
01:05:746 (6) - delete this note?
03:55:338 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm?
04:46:154 (6) - change to this? (sorry idk how to say this kind of slider...poor English :()
04:55:950 (4,5,6,7,1) - strange pattern, try pentagon?

[Normal]
00:10:031 (1,2) - try blanket?
02:01:460 (3,4) - flow in this part is not very well
02:22:276 (1) - as NM diff, this note can be deleted and spinner begins from 02:22:276. Also in 03:01:460 (1) - and 05:03:909 (1) - (just a suggestion)
03:23:195 (4,1) - new players may feel confused in this part, delete 03:23:501 (1) - and let spinner begins from here
03:52:582 (4) - not sure if this note is hard for new players...
05:22:889 (1,2) - use 1/6 and change it to ... (don't know how to say it again :o let's see picture :( )

That's all, very nice song and I love that~ Hope it could get rank soon~star~ 8-)
[ -Scarlet- ]

RandomEffect wrote:

Hello, Rakuen :)
M4M request!

[ -Scarlet- 's Insane]
  1. 00:01:766 (1,2,3,4) - hard to find rhythm... Yea, moved (4) 1/8 earlier
  2. 00:49:215~00:51:664- add break time? Nope, intentionally leave this part empty here. Adding break time here would be very weird for me
  3. 00:58:705 (6,1) - increase DS Hmm.. adjust some other notes a little
  4. 02:35:746 (5) - suggetion Seems okay, but giving the slight pause here fits the song more for me >.>
  5. 02:36:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - intersting! Thanks~!
  6. 05:13:705 (4) - NC? Okay~


that's the one of my favorite song! impressive song~
nice mapping ~☆
~Good Luck~


Streliteela wrote:

Hi~m4m~:D

[General]
Very nice and moving song, I love it very much :). And as I'm not a pro mapper, my mod may not helpful :(
And since I haven't made an easy diff before, so idk how to make or mod it...so I'll skip easy diff, sorry about it :(

[Insane]
00:01:766 (1,2,3,4) - These notes have different rhythm, so you'd better not put these notes into equal distance. Try to make 00:02:378 (3,4) - into a short slider Yea, changed the rhythm a bit here
00:08:500 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - This part is a little bit strange...especially 00:09:725 (3,4) - , not flow well The flow looks pretty fine here.
00:13:399 (3,1) - not flow very well Hmm.. Nope. I find nothing wrong with the flow here
00:17:225 (5,1) - ^ Same
00:26:562 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern could be changed into a pentagon, like this: Hmm, changed to star pattern instead ~
00:27:480 (2) - ctrl+g? Nope, I want to have straight flow here
00:30:542 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - This pattern looks strange It doesn't look strange at all to me. For me, it fits pretty well with the music too
00:46:766 (1) - ctrl+g? That could be more coherent imo Nah, I prefer not to stack here
00:49:215 - 00:51:664 - Add break time? Really don't want to see HP decrease... :o It's okay, giving a pause here does fit with the music for me. I put HP 6 which makes it not easy to drop HP. Plus the NC from the previous sliders already boost up enough HP for the players
01:02:072 (7,1) - not flow well It does.
01:03:909 (1,2,3) - ds of this part is different from before (01:03:297 (3,4,5) - ). Try to fix this, it's hard to read Hmm... did a little adjustment here
01:05:133 (4,5) - ^ Trying to follow the vocal here
01:05:746 (6,1,2,3,4) - rhythm of this part is not very well, try like this: Hmm, interesting. But for me its current state emphasize with the vocal more
01:10:644 (5,1,2) - flow problem :o There isn't any flow problem here
01:14:623 (3,4,5) - decrease DS No. The vocal starting to get stronger here. Increasing DS here is like starting up the excitement here
02:04:521 (6,7,8) - bad flow How is it a bad flow when there's a slight pause here already?
02:08:501 (3,4,5) - like this? Nah, I think triple circles here does better along with the hitsound
02:34:521 (1,2) - since there's a higher piano sound in slider 2, it's ok to increase the ds between 1 and 2 Not necessary though.I would try not to increase DS here since there's a change in beat later
02:43:552 (4,5,6,7,8) - pattern looks strange It's okay. It does fit the song and hitsound too
03:02:991 (6,7,8,9,1) - bad flow It's not.
04:21:511 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - I don't like this pattern :o It does fit the hitsound here
04:26:766 (1,2,1,2) - change them to 2 1/6 sliders I have been using 1/6 stream most of the time. Not changing anything
05:00:644 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read The NCs here makes it easier to read.

That's all, very nice song and I love that~ Hope it could get rank soon~star~ 8-)
Thanks for the mods~

http://puu.sh/a2oYO/ea8298456f.osu ~
Topic Starter
Rakuen

RandomEffect wrote:

Hello, Rakuen :)
M4M request!

[General]
  1. add guest name "Kin" for tags Added
  2. tags suggetion:
    doriko Added
    vocaloid Added
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:072 (4) - I prefer to delete Fixed
  2. 00:34:521 (1,2) - swap DS Keep
  3. 01:54:419 (4) - I recommend downward slider for better flow Keep for pattern
  4. 02:14:317 (4,1) - not good flow Fixed a little
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:684 (1) - u~m, end at 00:02:991 Fixed
  2. 01:37:889 (5,6) - combine into 1 slider Keep
  3. 03:06:358 (1,2) - not suit to melody, imo. suggetion~ Keep
  4. 03:52:429 (5) - reverse slider is not good. I suggest this Keep, because there's none of this pattern before, I wanna try it :)
  5. 04:21:511 (5) - I prefer to delete Keep, I like to hit that >_<
  6. 04:46:154 (6,7) - how about 1/4 rhythm? Tried to consider, maybe off the music a bit but it may lead to slower pace of the violin, and it seems not hard to read too
  7. 04:55:950 (4,5,6,7) - not good flow? Keep to shock players, let them miss x)
that's the one of my favorite song! impressive song~
nice mapping ~☆
~Good Luck~
Thanks for mods!

Done modding your M4M~


Streliteela wrote:

Hi~m4m~:D

[General]
Very nice and moving song, I love it very much :). And as I'm not a pro mapper, my mod may not helpful :(
And since I haven't made an easy diff before, so idk how to make or mod it...so I'll skip easy diff, sorry about it :(

[Hard]
00:14:317 (6,7,8) - personally I don't like this kind of flow :o Fixed
00:32:072 (1,2,3,4) - change another pattern? this one looks a little strange.. I feel cool when I play
01:05:746 (6) - delete this note? Keep, there's a soft hit
03:55:338 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm? Keep
04:46:154 (6) - change to this? (sorry idk how to say this kind of slider...poor English :() It's short slider with reverse maybe...but I'll keep it, like to slow it down for violin instead of 1/4 hits
04:55:950 (4,5,6,7,1) - strange pattern, try pentagon? Keep

[Normal]
00:10:031 (1,2) - try blanket? Keep for the flowy thing I prefer
02:01:460 (3,4) - flow in this part is not very well Keep...for me it's quite ok
02:22:276 (1) - as NM diff, this note can be deleted and spinner begins from 02:22:276. Also in 03:01:460 (1) - and 05:03:909 (1) - (just a suggestion)
03:23:195 (4,1) - new players may feel confused in this part, delete 03:23:501 (1) - and let spinner begins from here Should be no problem, players won't fail by missing 0.15 sec in spinner, and since there's an Easy diff too
03:52:582 (4) - not sure if this note is hard for new players... Imma not sure too, but keep atm, will consider
05:22:889 (1,2) - use 1/6 and change it to ... (don't know how to say it again :o let's see picture :( ) Thanks, but keep it like as previous

That's all, very nice song and I love that~ Hope it could get rank soon~star~ 8-)
Thanks for mods!

Will mod your M4M next...might be tomorrow cuz I have school today (spare me pls)


Updated and added tags: Kin doriko Vacaloid Hatsune Miku
Ciyus Miapah
hello quickmod™ by Fortune cookies
↓ i dont know but these my feel for this map ↓

WARNING!! THIS MOD CONTAINS BAD WORDS CAUSE FORT IS MAD TO THIS MAP!!

hey you im here for your request

[Scarlet's Insane]
hell crap the sliders, the circles and the overlaps, i dont want to describe more but this map is a cancer, Like hanzershit map! (with Double Time mod)

this kinda Overmap right :D

the slider velocity doest feel good at all

use combo colours pls

use OD8, AR 8.3, and HP7 if you want (AR10 in DT too hard for this map, pls let it be AR9.8)

01:06:511 (1) - why this NC , nc 01:05:746 (6) - pls
01:44:623 - clickable object in here
01:48:910 (3,4) - very hard to read, pls do some jump for 01:48:604 (2) -
02:14:419 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - this fuck! miss my headshit >:( please dont spam 1 2 combo in here)
03:23:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing stream pls, you cant do that?, ok fine :)
04:26:664 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - - really this pattern is extremely hard to read! are you want player miss in there?
04:28:399 (3,4,5,6) - pls dont overmap in here
04:33:603 (5) - maybe stack this with 04:33:143 (4) - slider tail

ah im just confuse about your map, seems flow is good for your mapping style, hope this help little bit.
and sorry im just cant take Screenshot in here cause i dont want to play this map with DT ever!!!

but overall your map is good, nice pattern, and some 1/4 pattern, but i think some 1/6 pattern is needs some fix, it because its hard to read. just pay attention, your notes must visible and easy to read!
[ -Scarlet- ]

Fort wrote:

hello quickmod™ by Fortune cookies
↓ i dont know but these my feel for this map ↓

WARNING!! THIS MOD CONTAINS BAD WORDS CAUSE FORT IS MAD TO THIS MAP!!

hey you im here for your request

[Scarlet's Insane]
hell crap the sliders, the circles and the overlaps, i dont want to describe more but this map is a cancer, Like hanzershit map! (with Double Time mod) I never intended to make this a Double Time playable kinda of map in the first place

this kinda Overmap right :D Isn't Insane and above considered overmapped in most of the recent ranked maps?

the slider velocity doest feel good at all Is fine for me

use combo colours pls Added

use OD8, AR 8.3, and HP7 if you want (AR10 in DT too hard for this map, pls let it be AR9.8) Changed to HP7, but I'll still stick with AR8.5

01:06:511 (1) - why this NC , nc 01:05:746 (6) - pls Ahh, Thanks for pointing out~
01:44:623 - clickable object in here You mean adding a circle there instead of there? Nah, I'll stick with slider for now.
01:48:910 (3,4) - very hard to read, pls do some jump for 01:48:604 (2) - The reason why I didn't make big jump here because I want to slow down the flow following the song
02:14:419 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - this fuck! miss my headshit >:( please dont spam 1 2 combo in here) Why not? NC is there to alert player about the spacing and the change of beat there
03:23:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing stream pls, you cant do that?, ok fine :) No, following the piano here. From soft and it gets louder and louder therefore slowly increasing the spacing
04:26:664 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - - really this pattern is extremely hard to read! are you want player miss in there? I'm following the music here. Giving a pause there totally fits the song. Obviously I didn't intentionally did this to make player miss. NC is there is make the reading easier. If the player miss there means is their own fault for not listening to the music carefully enough
04:28:399 (3,4,5,6) - pls dont overmap in here I don't see how is this part being "overmapped"
04:33:603 (5) - maybe stack this with 04:33:143 (4) - slider tail Seems nicer, fixed~

ah im just confuse about your map, seems flow is good for your mapping style, hope this help little bit.
and sorry im just cant take Screenshot in here cause i dont want to play this map with DT ever!!! Insane diff is not even suppose to be a diff that is easy to DT. Keep that in mind

but overall your map is good, nice pattern, and some 1/4 pattern, but i think some 1/6 pattern is needs some fix, it because its hard to read. just pay attention, your notes must visible and easy to read!
Thanks for the mod~
jyu
Hi, from queue, Rakuen's request :3

well mostly hitsound suggestions

[Insane]

  • whoa 5 minutes

    00:01:766 (1) - i strongly suggest to remove whistle here. because the intro is piano and adding whistle, which is a deep bass like that is kinda... derp
    00:01:766 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi, i suggest to make the ds even. (3)'s position is a bit weird
    00:03:603 (2) - move this a bit farther? idk it plays better
    00:04:980 (3,1) - a bit weird when you use 1/4 snap here while you use 1/8 snap here 00:02:608 (4,1) - . i suggest to move 00:04:980 (3) - to 00:05:057 -
    00:06:970 (3) - add whistle at slider's tail
    00:11:562 (2) - ^
    00:13:399 (3) - add finish at slider's head. there's a legit loud cymbal there
    00:12:480 (1,3) - well this is really nazi lol. (3)'s slider head is a bit too close with (1)'s slider head
    00:15:848 (1) - add finish at slider's head? there's a legit loud cymbal there
    00:18:297 (1) - ^
    00:19:827 (1) - ^
    00:22:889 (3) - add finish at slider's arrow? there's a legit loud cymbal there
    00:25:644 (5) - add finish at slider's head? same reason ^
    00:27:787 (3) - add finish at slider's tail? same reason ^
    00:29:623 (2) - make it more... idk appealing? a bit?
    00:31:460 (4) - add clap?
    00:32:072 (1,1,1) - what's with the nc spam. i suggest to remove it since there's no strong reason to do it
    00:32:991 (1) - prefer if you add a note at 00:32:914 - like 00:02:608 (4,1) - . but yeah maybe you have to re-arrange other patterns
    00:33:909 (1) - clap at slider's tail sounds really weird. i suggest to replace it with whistle
    00:36:970 (1,1,1) - these nc spam is also not necessary since 00:34:521 (1,1) - and 00:39:419 (1,1) - are each in the same verse. i suggest to remove nc at 00:36:970 (1,1) - like 00:44:317 (1,2) -
    01:06:664 (2,3,4) - slightly overmapped, but since it plays well so it's not really a big problem for me
    01:11:256 (3) - add finish at slider's tail? there's a legit loud cymbal there
    01:17:531 (6) - add clap? fits the song more
    01:19:674 (5) - ^
    01:22:123 (3) - ^
    01:26:256 (2) - add finish at slider's tail? there's a legit loud cymbal there
    01:32:379 (6) - add whistle?
    02:35:338 (3) - remove clap? idk it kinda ruin the piano sound you're following in 02:35:338 (3,4,5) -
    02:36:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - i just realized that the piano stream ended here 02:37:582 - and start again at 02:38:960 - so 02:37:736 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - kinda doesn't follow anything
    01:40:644 (1,3) - not really neat. make sure they don't overlap
    02:41:868 (1) - add finish at slider's head? there's a legit loud cymbal there
    02:43:093 (3) - ^
    02:43:858 (6) - i suggest to nc, since it has different spacing with 02:43:552 (4,5) -
    02:56:256 (5) - replace whistle with clap at slider's tail?
    02:55:338 (4) - add whistle at slider's head and arrow?
    04:26:766 (1,2,1,2,1) - really hard to read :cry:
    04:29:623 (1,3) - since they're linear, i suggest to move 04:30:236 (2) - in the same line with them
    04:41:256 (1,2,3,4,1) - a bit unreadable idk it depends on player's skills anyway. but maybe you can arrange them into somewhat a neat formation, since the current one is a bit jumbled
    04:55:338 (1) - same issue with 00:29:623 (2) -

    well, for a calm and slow song (hella BPM is 98), this diff is really difficult for insane at some parts. usually mappers make a 'safe' insane for this kind of song, which is why your diff is quite unique. i'm not sure BATs will be happy for this but we'll see

    anyway, usually insane for slow song like this kinda avoids separated streams like these. would be better and 'safe' if you use sliders for each duplet streams
    00:21:052 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:36:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -

    but what irks me are these 1/6 streams. map resembles the song anyway, and i don't want to rage double-click for a song with calm demeanor like this 02:58:195 (5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 02:14:419 (4,1,2,1,2) - 02:21:359 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 03:23:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 04:26:766 (1,2,1,2,1) - 05:00:644 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) -

    but yeah people have different skills anyway. maybe you don't have trouble playing them. maybe other players too. but idk if the people who's in charge of ranking beatmaps can agree with this lel

    but i will be lying if i say i don't enjoy this diff. it's actually far better than those 'safe' insane in most slow songs. they only have boring jumps lol
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