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Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

HabiHolic wrote:

Alright 2nd check here

[Normal]

00:33:275 (1) - 클랩 추가해주세요. 허전한 느낌이 들어서
00:36:050 (1) - 여긴 딱히 뉴콤보 필요 없을듯요
00:42:293 (2,3) - 디스턴스 확인해주세요. 그냥봐도 안맞는거 같아요
00:50:963 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
00:53:391 (2) - 같은 박자에 같은 리듬인데 디스턴스가 왜이리 넓죠 수정바랍니다.

[Hard]

00:41:946 (3) - 그냉 간격 일정하게 맞춰주세요 점프도 아니고 뭐도 아닌 애매한 것이기 때문에 반드시 수정하셔야 합니다.
01:05:530 (6) - Ctrl + g? 하시는게 어떠신가요 치기 굉장히 편하고 흐름도 좋아집니다.
01:05:876 (7) - ^ (마찬가지)
01:10:732 (5) - 시작부분에는 휘슬대신 클랩으로 바꿔 넣으시는게 좋을겁니다.

[Insane]

00:27:033 (5) - 모양 제안입니다. 확실히 옆으로 휘면 더 흐름이 괜찮아집니다.
다 고 쳤 어 요 !! 감사 :D
Ozato Fumika

Sonnyc wrote:

아 맞다

내 모딩 로그
히익
ZLOdeuka-
Hi, m4m req.

[General]

1) BG widescreen but it is not visible in the game. either reduce bg or tick the settings here http://puu.sh/9vW1Q/a0aea50c66.jpg

2) map size exceeds 24MB

3) break length exceeds 20 seconds. it's really long.I suggest you either cut mp3 or spinner start here 01:25:645 and finish here 01:29:807 and spinner start here 01:45:067 and finish here 01:46:454 and 01:47:842 add circle or slider (for Normal and Hard)

Kiai time

incorrect setup kiai time.

00:52:350 - start kiai 01:14:547 - finish kiai
01:58:940 - start kiai 02:10:038 - finish kiai

[Normal]

1) 00:58:940 (2,3) - broken distance. turn Distans snap and place it
2) 01:48:535 (2,3) - ^ should be placed slightly further apart
3) 00:18:362 (1,2) - sliders are not readable. replace it http://puu.sh/9vXdB/0e50f03e55.jpg
4) 00:58:940 (2) -it does not look one thread, ctrl+h - it would be better
5) 01:57:553 (3) - new combo
6) 02:28:073 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1) 00:18:709 (5,6) - swap them http://puu.sh/9vXDr/e1995dc165.jpg
2) 01:25:559 (1) - start here 01:25:645
3) 01:47:842 add circle
4) 02:19:749 (5) - new combo
5) 02:21:050 (1) - start here 02:21:137

[Insane]

1) 00:57:900 (1,2) - looks as if it's made by accident. Place Circle at the beginning of the slider
2) 01:22:350 (5,6) - spacing.
3) 01:25:559 (1) - start here 01:25:645
4) 01:53:391 (1) - 1 grid down
5) 02:04:836 (2,3) - uncomfortable to play. They should be one stream http://puu.sh/9vY5T/0acd52520f.jpg
6) 02:21:050 (1) - start here 02:21:137

Done ~
;) good luck
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hi, m4m req.

[General]

1) BG widescreen but it is not visible in the game. either reduce bg or tick the settings here http://puu.sh/9vW1Q/a0aea50c66.jpg fix it

2) map size exceeds 24MB ok.

3) break length exceeds 20 seconds. it's really long.I suggest you either cut mp3 or spinner start here 01:25:645 and finish here 01:29:807 and spinner start here 01:45:067 and finish here 01:46:454 and 01:47:842 add circle or slider (for Normal and Hard) fix it

Kiai time

incorrect setup kiai time.

00:52:350 - start kiai 01:14:547 - finish kiai fix it
01:58:940 - start kiai 02:10:038 - finish kiai fix it

[Normal]

1) 00:58:940 (2,3) - broken distance. turn Distans snap and place it fix it
2) 01:48:535 (2,3) - ^ should be placed slightly further apart keep
3) 00:18:362 (1,2) - sliders are not readable. replace it http://puu.sh/9vXdB/0e50f03e55.jpg fix it
4) 00:58:940 (2) -it does not look one thread, ctrl+h - it would be better keep
5) 01:57:553 (3) - new combo fix it
6) 02:28:073 (3) - ^ fix it

[Hard]

1) 00:18:709 (5,6) - swap them http://puu.sh/9vXDr/e1995dc165.jpg fix it
2) 01:25:559 (1) - start here 01:25:645 keep
3) 01:47:842 add circle keep
4) 02:19:749 (5) - new combo fix it
5) 02:21:050 (1) - start here 02:21:137 keep

[Insane]

1) 00:57:900 (1,2) - looks as if it's made by accident. Place Circle at the beginning of the slider keep
2) 01:22:350 (5,6) - spacing. fix it
3) 01:25:559 (1) - start here 01:25:645 keep
4) 01:53:391 (1) - 1 grid down fix it
5) 02:04:836 (2,3) - uncomfortable to play. They should be one stream http://puu.sh/9vY5T/0acd52520f.jpg fix it
6) 02:21:050 (1) - start here 02:21:137 keep

Done ~
;) good luck
Thanks~~
Kihhou
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa A M4M from your queue? :D

[Normal]
  1. you should work on your blankets :O like i said in the hard diff. since theres a couple here ill avoid blanket mods
  2. 02:13:160 (1) - make this point to 02:12:813 (3) - for better flow?
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:402 (1,2) - blanket better? you can use the approach circle to help you
  2. 00:24:258 (5,1) - separate these a bit to give more space? it will also make it easier to read 00:24:605 (1) -
  3. 00:31:888 (6,1) - move these sliders around for better flow
  4. 00:50:963 (1) - end slider at 00:51:483 - at the vocal?
  5. 00:58:593 (2) - make this face the other way for better flow?
  6. 01:14:894 (1) - move NC. no reason to have NC here
  7. 02:24:605 (3,5) - blanket better?
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:709 (3) - point this from 00:18:535 (2) - for better flow? may also move 00:19:402 (4) - for symmetry
  2. 00:18:709 (3) - theres a strong piano at 00:19:056 - so i think it would be better to remove the reverse and addhitcircle at 00:19:056 - for an antijump
  3. 00:25:125 - there is a stronger vocal here i think it would would be a better rhythm for the music if you tried this
  4. 00:25:819 - you skipped over strong vocal here. maybe use a a 1/2 slider to represent it? and then place a hitcircle at 00:25:645 - to catch the previous vocal
  5. 00:28:073 (2,3) - ctrl-g? to have better flow both from 00:27:379 (1,2,3) - and to 00:28:420 (1) - ?
  6. 00:42:986 (2,3,4,5) - have the same distance between these?
  7. 00:57:726 - add note to catch the drum? it will also give a stronger effect to the anti jump at 00:57:900 (1) -
  8. 01:02:755 - add note to catch strong guitar hit here
  9. 01:02:928 (6,1) - blanket?
  10. 01:07:957 (3,6) - overlapping these like this might be confusing for some people since they happen in a short time. try unstacking them a bit like this?
  11. 01:11:772 (2,4) - try not to overlap
  12. 01:22:350 (5) - drag and end slider at 01:22:697 - ? the vocal is being held and there is a second vocal at 01:22:697 - , which would make a better end for the tail with a 1/2 spacing to the next note
  13. 01:25:559 (1) - start spinner at 01:25:645 - since another guitar starts playing there?
  14. 01:45:067 - theres a finish sound that would match this perfectly ._." but i dont know how to use puush.. so if you have time to check, download https://osu.ppy.sh/s/174926 and take the "soft-hitfinish" and see if you would like to use that instead~
  15. 01:47:842 (9,1) - swap NC. strong guitar sound and new section starts at 01:47:842 - . using it to color triangles is less important imo'
  16. 01:49:576 (3) - ctrl-j for better flow?
  17. 02:07:957 (5) - ctrl-g for better flow?
good luck~
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

Kihhou wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa A M4M from your queue? :D

[Normal]
  1. you should work on your blankets :O like i said in the hard diff. since theres a couple here ill avoid blanket mods
  2. 02:13:160 (1) - make this point to 02:12:813 (3) - for better flow?
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:402 (1,2) - blanket better? you can use the approach circle to help you
  2. 00:24:258 (5,1) - separate these a bit to give more space? it will also make it easier to read 00:24:605 (1) -
  3. 00:31:888 (6,1) - move these sliders around for better flow
  4. 00:50:963 (1) - end slider at 00:51:483 - at the vocal?
  5. 00:58:593 (2) - make this face the other way for better flow?
  6. 01:14:894 (1) - move NC. no reason to have NC here
  7. 02:24:605 (3,5) - blanket better?
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:709 (3) - point this from 00:18:535 (2) - for better flow? may also move 00:19:402 (4) - for symmetry
  2. 00:18:709 (3) - theres a strong piano at 00:19:056 - so i think it would be better to remove the reverse and addhitcircle at 00:19:056 - for an antijump
  3. 00:25:125 - there is a stronger vocal here i think it would would be a better rhythm for the music if you tried this
  4. 00:25:819 - you skipped over strong vocal here. maybe use a a 1/2 slider to represent it? and then place a hitcircle at 00:25:645 - to catch the previous vocal
  5. 00:28:073 (2,3) - ctrl-g? to have better flow both from 00:27:379 (1,2,3) - and to 00:28:420 (1) - ?
  6. 00:42:986 (2,3,4,5) - have the same distance between these?
  7. 00:57:726 - add note to catch the drum? it will also give a stronger effect to the anti jump at 00:57:900 (1) -
  8. 01:02:755 - add note to catch strong guitar hit here
  9. 01:02:928 (6,1) - blanket?
  10. 01:07:957 (3,6) - overlapping these like this might be confusing for some people since they happen in a short time. try unstacking them a bit like this?
  11. 01:11:772 (2,4) - try not to overlap
  12. 01:22:350 (5) - drag and end slider at 01:22:697 - ? the vocal is being held and there is a second vocal at 01:22:697 - , which would make a better end for the tail with a 1/2 spacing to the next note
  13. 01:25:559 (1) - start spinner at 01:25:645 - since another guitar starts playing there?
  14. 01:45:067 - theres a finish sound that would match this perfectly ._." but i dont know how to use puush.. so if you have time to check, download https://osu.ppy.sh/s/174926 and take the "soft-hitfinish" and see if you would like to use that instead~
  15. 01:47:842 (9,1) - swap NC. strong guitar sound and new section starts at 01:47:842 - . using it to color triangles is less important imo'
  16. 01:49:576 (3) - ctrl-j for better flow?
  17. 02:07:957 (5) - ctrl-g for better flow?
good luck~

almost fix. :D

thanks~

cheak mod later~
Voli
hi, nice beatmap, just one thing, i would put OD on the insane a bit lower, maybe 6,5 or 7 to match the difficulty of your map. same with hard, put it on 5 maybe instead of 6
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

Polar Storm wrote:

hi, nice beatmap, just one thing, i would put OD on the insane a bit lower, maybe 6,5 or 7 to match the difficulty of your map. same with hard, put it on 5 maybe instead of 6
I will not change now because it is easy enough.
Spinner is a lot worse as the relationship of the map do not want to be aberrations.

Thank you :D
zigizigiefe
[Hard]
00:15:241 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem.Try to keep equal
00:18:709 (3,4) - This is intertwined.
00:27:900 (1) - Remove NC.
00:21:657 (1) - Remove NC.
00:36:397 (2,3) - Blanket better.


Sorry I'm new in modding.I may a few faults.
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

zigizigiefe wrote:

[Hard]
00:15:241 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem.Try to keep equal fix it.
00:18:709 (3,4) - This is intertwined. nooh.
00:27:900 (1) - Remove NC. keep
00:21:657 (1) - Remove NC. keep
00:36:397 (2,3) - Blanket better. keep


Sorry I'm new in modding.I may a few faults.
Thanks~
Vinc_Angel
Hi eINess, I'm here for modding your map that had requested on my modding queue.

[General]
Offset must be on 1014 for looking better.
Size of file is more than 24 MB. Please make it below 24 MB with lowering video size, like lowering bitrate or resize the video (Because it would broke the rules)
First Kiai must be started at 00:52:343.
Second Kiai must be started at 01:58:933.

[Normal]
01:13:153 (3) - Look worst and too long slider. Must be changed to be like this (3,4) http://puu.sh/9AtDV/827dd11bb4.jpg
01:22:170 (3) - Move circle into 01:22:343
01:22:517 (4) - Move circle into 01:22:517
01:47:835 (4) - Make to new combo
01:48:182 (1) - Cancel new combo
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map


[Hard]
01:02:054 (2,3) - It look like not sync with the major of bg sound. Change it into one slider like this http://puu.sh/9AuOG/fc95acace2.jpg
01:02:575 (4) - Change it into slider from 01:02:582 until 01:02:755
01:56:852 until 01:57:372 - Please add slider or circle based on drum sound. Don't leave them empty.
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map like this - 00:51:476 (1) - because it look weird, so try to scale this again)

[Insane]
00:01:014 until 00:10:552 - Please add circle and slider based on piano sound.
00:10:725 - Add Spinner until 00:12:112
00:21:650 (1) - This spinner look weird because too long. Please make it to be like this http://puu.sh/9AweE/8321bfe905.jpg
01:55:812 - Add Circle
01:55:985 - ^
01:58:066 (4) - Slider too long. Please short it until 01:58:239.
02:21:043 (1) - Spiner look weird. Please change it into slider and circle based on band sound.
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map


(note : all of my mod is based on my new offset. The offset is 1014, not 13507).

I hope your map got ranked. ^^
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

Vinc_Angel wrote:

Hi eINess, I'm here for modding your map that had requested on my modding queue.

[General]
Offset must be on 1014 for looking better. no. this offset is not match vocal's vocie.
Size of file is more than 24 MB. Please make it below 24 MB with lowering video size, like lowering bitrate or resize the video (Because it would broke the rules) look this. It's not matter. http://puu.sh/9ABtN/6e1b9ea81d.jpg
First Kiai must be started at 00:52:343. keep. it's not match Rhythm
Second Kiai must be started at 01:58:933. keep. it's not match Rhythm

[Normal]
01:13:153 (3) - Look worst and too long slider. Must be changed to be like this (3,4) http://puu.sh/9AtDV/827dd11bb4.jpg noop. follow better now.
01:22:170 (3) - Move circle into 01:22:343 fix it.
01:22:517 (4) - Move circle into 01:22:517 fix it.
01:47:835 (4) - Make to new combo why? It's not start here.
01:48:182 (1) - Cancel new combo // ^
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map


[Hard]
01:02:054 (2,3) - It look like not sync with the major of bg sound. Change it into one slider like this http://puu.sh/9AuOG/fc95acace2.jpg keep. I dont want broken snap.
01:02:575 (4) - Change it into slider from 01:02:582 until 01:02:755 keep
01:56:852 until 01:57:372 - Please add slider or circle based on drum sound. Don't leave them empty.
keep. Haphazard circle and put the slider will be a problem.
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map like this - 00:51:476 (1) - because it look weird, so try to scale this again)

[Insane]
00:01:014 until 00:10:552 - Please add circle and slider based on piano sound. I;m not change offset.
00:10:725 - Add Spinner until 00:12:112 why? It's not start here.
00:21:650 (1) - This spinner look weird because too long. Please make it to be like this http://puu.sh/9AweE/8321bfe905.jpg
following vocal's voice. you may hear that.
01:55:812 - Add Circle noop
01:55:985 - ^ noop
01:58:066 (4) - Slider too long. Please short it until 01:58:239. following vocal's voice.
02:21:043 (1) - Spiner look weird. Please change it into slider and circle based on band sound. keep. Is not a problem at all.
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map


(note : all of my mod is based on my new offset. The offset is 1014, not 13507).

I hope your map got ranked. ^^

Does not seem to be a big help in. But thank you mod.
Inahime
Normal:
01:20:443 (1) - I think if you lower this slider to 01:20:790 and put a circle in 01:20:963 .It'll get better
Hard:
00:25:645 (5), 00:25:992 (6) - maybe put whistle?

~My first mod :? I know that this is bad, but I don't speak english and never done it ~
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

Inahime wrote:

Normal:
01:20:443 (1) - I think if you lower this slider to 01:20:790 and put a circle in 01:20:963 .It'll get better // sorry keep. add hit sound here.
Hard:
00:25:645 (5), 00:25:992 (6) - maybe put whistle? // rework hit sound all diffs know~

~My first mod :? I know that this is bad, but I don't speak english and never done it ~
No chage Thanks~ :)
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya
I want to rank ;w;
[ Zzz ]
Irc mod

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18:19 eINess: 쿨쿨님아
18:19 [ Zzz ]: 넹~
18:19 eINess: 죄송한데 모딩있잖아요.. 먼저좀 부탁드려도되요..?
18:19 [ Zzz ]: 물론이죠!
18:19 *eINess is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/434979 u's - Snow halation (TV Size)]
18:20 eINess: 내일 아마 벳이 해줄꺼같은데 코펭님이 박자가 엉성해서 버블받기글럿다고..
18:20 eINess: 첫랭좀 먹고싶어서 크 ㅠ
18:20 [ Zzz ]: 흑..
18:20 [ Zzz ]: 그맘
18:20 [ Zzz ]: 아주잘알죠!!
18:20 eINess: ㅠㅠ
18:20 [ Zzz ]: 첫랭크 먹으면 뙇 하고
18:20 [ Zzz ]: 기록생기고 프로필도 멋있어지고
18:20 [ Zzz ]: 이힣힣ㅎ
18:21 eINess: ㅋㅋ;;
18:23 eINess: IRC로 해주실 수 있어요?
18:23 [ Zzz ]: 포스트던지 irc던지 편하실대로 말해주시면
18:23 [ Zzz ]: 원하시는걸로 해드릴꺠여
18:23 eINess: irc로좀 해주세요 ㅠㅠ 바로바로 고치게
18:24 *[ Zzz ] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/434980 u's - Snow halation (TV Size)]
18:24 [ Zzz ]: 넹
18:24 eINess: 내일까지 최대한 좋게하고싶어서
18:24 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/434980 u's - Snow halation (TV Size) [Normal]]
18:24 [ Zzz ]: 노말
18:24 eINess: 넵
18:24 [ Zzz ]: 전체적으로 박자가 문제있다는건
18:24 [ Zzz ]: 지금으로 따지면
18:24 [ Zzz ]: 살짝 엇박이 있는것같은느낌?
18:25 eINess: 엇박이요?
18:25 [ Zzz ]: 네 조금
18:25 [ Zzz ]: 먼가 들리는게 조금 밀려들린다랄까
18:25 [ Zzz ]: 맞긴하는거같은데 조금먼가 ..
18:25 [ Zzz ]: 00:13:507 (1,2,1,2,3) - 여기 보면
18:25 [ Zzz ]: 00:16:281 (1,2) - 여기같은느낌이 안나듯이.
18:26 [ Zzz ]: 음..일단 본론으로
18:27 eINess: 봐도 몰르겟네...끄응
18:27 [ Zzz ]: http://puu.sh/9NDg2/dba0d4a0f7.jpg
18:27 [ Zzz ]: 00:13:507 (1,2) - 여기 부분인데
18:27 [ Zzz ]: 저렇게 해주시면 괜찮아보이는뎅
18:28 eINess: 우왕
18:28 [ Zzz ]: 00:24:605 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 여기 바꿔주시는게 좋다고봐요.
18:28 [ Zzz ]: 00:24:605 (1,2) - 처음과 똑같은 박자로
18:28 [ Zzz ]: 00:28:073 (2) - 여기는 슬라이더를 제거하고 서클 + 긴슬라이더로 해주시는게 좋을꺼같고
18:29 [ Zzz ]: http://puu.sh/9NDkY/75f3349579.jpg 아마 이런형태에서
18:29 [ Zzz ]: 긴 3번슬라이더를 앞쪽으로 땅겨오고
18:29 [ Zzz ]: 00:29:807 (4) - 서클추가
18:31 [ Zzz ]: 일단.. 아니면
18:31 [ Zzz ]: 박자만 찍어드릴까요 ?
18:31 [ Zzz ]: 난이도 하나 파서
18:31 [ Zzz ]: 조금 귀찮으시려나 ..
18:31 eINess: 저기
18:31 [ Zzz ]: 넹
18:31 eINess: 무슨 의미인지 이해를 못햇어요..
18:32 [ Zzz ]: 어떤곳?
18:32 [ Zzz ]: 아니면 마지막말?
18:32 eINess: 박자만 찍어드릴까요 는 뭘 해준다는거에요?
18:32 [ Zzz ]: 그냥 난이도파일 하나생성해서
18:32 [ Zzz ]: 참고용으로
18:32 [ Zzz ]: 찍어드려서 드린다는말인데 ..
18:32 [ Zzz ]: 이해하기 쉽도록..?
18:33 eINess: 아..
18:33 eINess: 코펭님이 다른맵꺼 보라는데 도움이 않되는거보면 도움않될꺼같음..
18:33 [ Zzz ]: 그렇군요..
18:34 [ Zzz ]: 음.. 슬라이더를 많이 안쓰는게 좋아요!
18:34 [ Zzz ]: 적절히 서클도 섞어주는게
18:34 [ Zzz ]: 박자 딱딱맞고 ..
18:34 eINess: 아..네...
18:35 [ Zzz ]: 음..
18:35 [ Zzz ]: 님도 저처럼
18:35 [ Zzz ]: 1/3 쓰는게 어때요 ?
18:35 [ Zzz ]: 노말에
18:35 [ Zzz ]: 1/2만 맟추려하지말고
18:36 eINess: 1/3?
18:36 [ Zzz ]: 01:13:160 (3) - 이런거요
18:36 [ Zzz ]: 박자만 보고 따라가면 괜찮을꺼같은데.. 난이도 살짝 신경쓰면서
18:36 [ Zzz ]: 01:15:934 (3) - 이런대도 1/3 들어가면 괜찮고
18:38 eINess: 힘들다
18:38 [ Zzz ]: ㅠㅠ..
18:38 [ Zzz ]: 오랜만에 모딩잡아서 모딩 힘이 안오네요 흑흑..
18:39 eINess: 맵을 갈아 업어야 된다는 거죠? 그냥 이건?
18:39 [ Zzz ]: 음..... 어떻게말해야되지 ..
18:39 [ Zzz ]: 수정하고싶으시면 살짝살짝 바꾸어가면서 수정하셔도되는데
18:39 [ Zzz ]: 전 항상 맵 맘에안들면 제가 제맵을 바꿔서 'ㅅ' ..
18:39 [ Zzz ]: 리매핑겸 'ㅅ' ..
18:41 eINess: 왜 다 박자에 맞춰찎으라는거에요 근데?
18:41 [ Zzz ]: 음..
18:41 eINess: 아니 박자라기보다 뭐라해야돼
18:41 eINess: 드럼인가
18:41 [ Zzz ]: 쿵짝쿵짝 거리는거에 맟추는이유ㅜ가
18:41 [ Zzz ]: 일부러 보컬만따라가면
18:41 [ Zzz ]: 조금 맵이 이상하다랄까 ..
18:42 eINess: 쿵짝쿵짞 거리기만 하면 재미없던데
18:42 [ Zzz ]: ㅠㅠ.
18:42 eINess: 그냥 내가 떄려치든해야지 이걸 나노ㅓㅏㅣㄹ노ㅓ뢰ㅗㄴ로ㅗㅓㄴ ㅣ넝 ㅇㄴf dsk jg라 kfs h라ㅗㅓㄹㅇ나 ㅗㄹㄴkfh jfdskh fjhk ㄹ나ㅗ
18:42 [ Zzz ]: ㅠㅠ..
18:43 eINess: 저기 있잖아요
18:43 eINess: 님이 이맵 주인이면 리맵할꺼임?
18:43 [ Zzz ]: 물론 자기가 힘들게 맵을 만들었으니까 조금 리맵하기는 그럴태지만..
18:43 [ Zzz ]: 저라면.. 퀄을 생각해서 리맵하는타입이라 ..제맵들도 그렇고 ..
18:44 eINess: 그냥 모딩 여기까지만 해주세요
18:44 [ Zzz ]: ..넹..
18:44 eINess: 버블 포기하는게 낳을듯
18:45 [ Zzz ]: 근데 ..
18:45 [ Zzz ]: 되긴 할탠데 ..
18:45 [ Zzz ]: 안되나 ..
18:46 eINess: 솔직히 주변에서 말하는거보면 이건 아니다 라는 심정인거같아요 다
18:46 [ Zzz ]: ...
18:46 eINess: 코펭님 말하기전에 모딩해준 사람들보면 대충 해주고 영 이상하니까 대충 한거같음
18:46 eINess: 뭐래니
18:47 eINess: 맵이 이상해서 대충한거 같음
18:47 [ Zzz ]: ..
18:47 [ Zzz ]: 리맵까지는 안해도 .. 몇군대만 고치는정도라면
18:47 [ Zzz ]: 지금 제가 님이랑 말하면서 대충 살짝만 지우고
18:48 [ Zzz ]: 박자 필요한것만 넣어봣는데 ..
18:48 [ Zzz ]: 보시면 도움좀 되실탠뎅..
18:48 eINess: 그냥 그파일 좀 보내주시고 비교하면서 가르쳐주시면않돼요 그럼?
18:48 eINess: 차라리 재가 님이 만든거 보면서 이해하는ㄱ ㅔ빠를 듯 ..
18:48 [ Zzz ]: 넹
18:48 eINess: 이름 바꿔서 보내주세요 그럼
18:49 [ Zzz ]: http://puu.sh/9NEc5/b5ae2711fa.zip
18:49 [ Zzz ]: 노말
18:49 [ Zzz ]: re 노말로 바꾸었어요.
18:50 [ Zzz ]: 그냥 한번보시고
18:50 [ Zzz ]: 이부분 박자 이렇게 하면 되겠다 하고
18:50 [ Zzz ]: 본래 맵에 적당히 바꾸시면 될듯.
18:50 [ Zzz ]: 전 박자만 넣었어서 .
18:51 eINess: 감사감사
18:51 [ Zzz ]: 넹
19:03 [ Zzz ]: 노래 정말 좋은듯.
19:04 eINess: 그래요?
19:04 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
19:04 [ Zzz ]: 뮤즈노래 좋아함!
19:04 eINess: 뭐 좋아서 만든건 맞지만
19:04 [ Zzz ]: 노래도 좋공
19:05 eINess: 로그나 달아주세요 쿠도스라도 드릴꼐요
19:05 eINess: 드릴께 그거뿐이니
19:05 [ Zzz ]: 노말로 되겠어요 ?
19:05 eINess: 나중에 이상한거 맞아 부탁드려볼께요
19:06 eINess: 그냥 소닉님 잡고 해야할꺼같음
19:06 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ..
19:06 eINess: 그분한태 하는법 배웠으니까
19:06 eINess: 차라리 그분한태 부탁해보는게 낳을꺼깥음
19:06 [ Zzz ]: 넹~
19:06 eINess: 노멀감사해요 그래도 좋은거 많이 봤음
19:07 [ Zzz ]: 저야말로 ..큰 도움 못드려서 죄송해여 ..!
19:07 [ Zzz ]: 나중에 박자랑 다 되고
19:07 [ Zzz ]: 한번 잡아드릴꺠여 모딩으로
19:07 eINess: 네
Seijiro
Let's see....like you requested in #modreqs, here's a mod for you ;)

[Insane]

00:17:842 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I think these notes should go all in the same combo
00:19:402 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Same ^
00:23:911 (3,4) - Why not a new combo?
00:27:900 (1,2,3) - Put them clockwise
00:35:356 (5,6) - i know you tried to repeat the triangle here too, but I think moving them to (296;284) (x;y) would fit better (try to put them this way and see yourself)
00:57:900 (1) - This is the end of the previous combo. Put the new combo on 00:58:246 (2)
01:56:165 (1,2) - On these two sliders you put the hitsounds on the wrong spot. Put the hitsounds only on sliders' start and remove them from their end
02:09:171 (1) - It's somehow awkward, but I don't have any ideas to how to replace it, sorry :/
02:28:940 (2) - Add one more repeat

[Hard]

00:24:258 (5) - i think it should go in the next combo
00:28:940 (1,2) - These should go in the previous combo
00:32:061 (1) - Why all alone this slider? Put it in the previous combo
|¯ 00:48:535 - Add note
| 00:48:709 (2) - Put a slider --- >
|_ 00:49:056 (3) - Put a slider
00:53:391 (3) - Stack this properly (it's 0.02 afar from 00:54:085 (2) 's end)
01:52:004 (3,4,1) - All together in the same combo
02:01:368 (7) - This isn't stacked properly with 02:00:674 (5)
02:20:963 (10) - Remove this note: -->
(Adjust spinner's length after moving these notes)
02:28:073 (4,5) - Combo on its own
02:28:767 (6,7) - Same ^
02:28:940 (7) - Add a repeat

[Normal]

00:23:911 (3,4) - Combo on its own
00:37:784 (4) - New combo
00:38:478 (5) - Put it in the next combo
01:03:449 (3) - Press Q
01:20:443 (1,2) - Why? Shorten the first slider, add a note to 01:21:137 , shorten the second slider and add a note to 01:22:524 :

01:22:871 (1) - Start: 01:22:871 Finish: 01:24:258
01:24:952 (1) - -->
( 01:29:807 End of spinner)
01:52:697 (3,1) - Combo on its own
01:54:778 (2) - Press Q
01:58:246 (3,4) - Combo on its own
02:29:807 (1) - End of spinner: 02:33:275

I like the song, it's really beautiful :)
Good Luck with this ;)
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Let's see....like you requested in #modreqs, here's a mod for you ;)

[Insane]

00:17:842 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I think these notes should go all in the same combo // ok.
00:19:402 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Same ^ // ok.
00:23:911 (3,4) - Why not a new combo? // ok.
00:27:900 (1,2,3) - Put them clockwise // ok.
00:35:356 (5,6) - i know you tried to repeat the triangle here too, but I think moving them to (296;284) (x;y) would fit better (try to put them this way and see yourself) // sorry this place awkward for me. D:
00:57:900 (1) - This is the end of the previous combo. Put the new combo on 00:58:246 (2) // ok.
01:56:165 (1,2) - On these two sliders you put the hitsounds on the wrong spot. Put the hitsounds only on sliders' start and remove them from their end
// Nice idea. :D . fix it.
02:09:171 (1) - It's somehow awkward, but I don't have any ideas to how to replace it, sorry :/ // sorry keep. I want overlap parttern.
02:28:940 (2) - Add one more repeat // GOOD. :D

[Hard]

00:24:258 (5) - i think it should go in the next combo // ok.
00:28:940 (1,2) - These should go in the previous combo // ok.
00:32:061 (1) - Why all alone this slider? Put it in the previous combo // this trak going 0.8x
|¯ 00:48:535 - Add note
| 00:48:709 (2) - Put a slider --- >
|_ 00:49:056 (3) - Put a slider

// nice idea :D

00:53:391 (3) - Stack this properly (it's 0.02 afar from 00:54:085 (2) 's end) // ok.
01:52:004 (3,4,1) - All together in the same combo // ok.
02:01:368 (7) - This isn't stacked properly with 02:00:674 (5) // ok.
02:20:963 (10) - Remove this note: --> //sorry keep.
(Adjust spinner's length after moving these notes)

02:28:073 (4,5) - Combo on its own // ok.
02:28:767 (6,7) - Same ^ // ok.
02:28:940 (7) - Add a repeat // ok.

[Normal]

00:23:911 (3,4) - Combo on its own // ok.
00:37:784 (4) - New combo // sorry keep
00:38:478 (5) - Put it in the next combo // sorry keep
01:03:449 (3) - Press Q // ok.

01:20:443 (1,2) - Why? Shorten the first slider, add a note to 01:21:137 , shorten the second slider and add a note to 01:22:524 :

01:22:871 (1) - Start: 01:22:871 Finish: 01:24:258
01:24:952 (1) - -->
( 01:29:807 End of spinner)

change this part , thanks for good idea :D

01:52:697 (3,1) - Combo on its own // ok.
01:54:778 (2) - Press Q // ok.
01:58:246 (3,4) - Combo on its own // ok.
02:29:807 (1) - End of spinner: 02:33:275 // sorry keep

I like the song, it's really beautiful :) me too o3o
Good Luck with this ;)
Thank you for nice mod~
Len
노말하고 하드 전체적으로 디스턴스가 왔다갔다하지만 맵은 좋네요.. 모딩하려고왔는데 지적할부분이없습니다 :(
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

Fast wrote:

노말하고 하드 전체적으로 디스턴스가 왔다갔다하지만 맵은 좋네요.. 모딩하려고왔는데 지적할부분이없습니다 :(
케헥 D:

디스턴트 노래 맞춰서 늘리고 줄인건데 ; _ ;

모딩할꼐없다니... 역시 펭귄?파워? ㅋ
Kritikally
Quick IRC mod:

SPOILER
2014-07-08 13:30 Kritikally: check AiMod on Hard, some snapping issues
2014-07-08 13:31 eINess: it not matter :D
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: 00:32:061 (1)
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: maybe end that slider a half beat early and place a circle at its current end?
2014-07-08 13:32 Kritikally: feels like it would make more sense and be more natural to play through
2014-07-08 13:32 eINess: I want following dram ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:33 Kritikally: ?
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: this place hear only base
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: isn't it?
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: I want following dram sound lol
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: oh, the kicks
2014-07-08 13:35 eINess: ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: you would still be following the kick
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: but also accentuate the ending of the vocals in that section
2014-07-08 13:36 eINess: i almost match dram sound so i don't want other sound for playing , If i change it . maybe most palyer are confused for this
2014-07-08 13:36 Kritikally: okay
2014-07-08 13:37 Kritikally: I might recommend removing the grey combo group (changing the color of it)
2014-07-08 13:37 eINess: D: . ok. i'll think about it.
2014-07-08 13:37 Kritikally: grey resembles the color of targets already hit and can be incredibly confusing, especially at this bpm/difficulty
2014-07-08 13:38 eINess: but movie is so bright xD
2014-07-08 13:38 Kritikally: try a different lighter color, perhaps?
2014-07-08 13:38 eINess: ; _ ; . other said same that , i'll change it.
2014-07-08 13:39 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:40 Kritikally: 01:20:443 (1) -
2014-07-08 13:41 Kritikally: the approach circle triggers at exactly the same time one would click the slider
2014-07-08 13:41 Kritikally: for an overlapping target, seems easy to overlook
2014-07-08 13:42 eINess: it's ok. :D no promblem playing
2014-07-08 13:42 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:42 Kritikally: I'll take your word for it
2014-07-08 13:43 eINess: ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: Insane:
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: 00:46:454 (7)
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: since you're following the guitar riff, turn that into a slider that goes til the red tick
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: as the note is held for that duration
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: never mind, you're following the vocals
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: 00:46:454 (7) - here. sound is so strong D:
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: you're right
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: like end ?
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: lol
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: I was tunnelling on the guitar riff as opposed to the vocals
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: i want more slider but
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: yea
2014-07-08 13:47 Kritikally: they're on point with the vocals, no issues there, I'll carry on
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: but i match raum ; _ ; sorry
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: lol
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: k
2014-07-08 13:51 Kritikally: 01:00:674 (3)
2014-07-08 13:52 Kritikally: that slider seems too long, maybe change it to two smaller sliders, e.g.:

2014-07-08 13:55 eINess: ok. :D
2014-07-08 13:55 Kritikally: and that's all I can find on the Insane one
2014-07-08 13:55 Kritikally: your Normal difficulty is spot on, no issues there
2014-07-08 13:56 Kritikally: other than maybe the timing of a couple 16th notes that could be too hard given the tempo
2014-07-08 13:56 eINess: :D
2014-07-08 13:56 eINess: ok. thanks~
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: again, consider removing the grey-colored group from all difficulties (or at least hard and insane)
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: make it a green or literally any other color (other than white, of course)
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: more think it D: , thanks mod~
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: yw <3
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: I'll post log
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: green is not match lol
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: ok.
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: thanks a lot :D
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: was just giving a random example
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: you're welcome ♥
2014-07-08 13:58 eINess: :D
Topic Starter
Ujimatsu Chiya

Kritikally wrote:

Quick IRC mod:

SPOILER
2014-07-08 13:30 Kritikally: check AiMod on Hard, some snapping issues
2014-07-08 13:31 eINess: it not matter :D
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: 00:32:061 (1)
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: maybe end that slider a half beat early and place a circle at its current end?
2014-07-08 13:32 Kritikally: feels like it would make more sense and be more natural to play through
2014-07-08 13:32 eINess: I want following dram ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:33 Kritikally: ?
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: this place hear only base
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: isn't it?
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: I want following dram sound lol
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: oh, the kicks
2014-07-08 13:35 eINess: ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: you would still be following the kick
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: but also accentuate the ending of the vocals in that section
2014-07-08 13:36 eINess: i almost match dram sound so i don't want other sound for playing , If i change it . maybe most palyer are confused for this
2014-07-08 13:36 Kritikally: okay
2014-07-08 13:37 Kritikally: I might recommend removing the grey combo group (changing the color of it)
2014-07-08 13:37 eINess: D: . ok. i'll think about it.
2014-07-08 13:37 Kritikally: grey resembles the color of targets already hit and can be incredibly confusing, especially at this bpm/difficulty
2014-07-08 13:38 eINess: but movie is so bright xD
2014-07-08 13:38 Kritikally: try a different lighter color, perhaps?
2014-07-08 13:38 eINess: ; _ ; . other said same that , i'll change it.
2014-07-08 13:39 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:40 Kritikally: 01:20:443 (1) -
2014-07-08 13:41 Kritikally: the approach circle triggers at exactly the same time one would click the slider
2014-07-08 13:41 Kritikally: for an overlapping target, seems easy to overlook
2014-07-08 13:42 eINess: it's ok. :D no promblem playing
2014-07-08 13:42 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:42 Kritikally: I'll take your word for it
2014-07-08 13:43 eINess: ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: Insane:
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: 00:46:454 (7)
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: since you're following the guitar riff, turn that into a slider that goes til the red tick
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: as the note is held for that duration
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: never mind, you're following the vocals
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: 00:46:454 (7) - here. sound is so strong D:
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: you're right
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: like end ?
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: lol
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: I was tunnelling on the guitar riff as opposed to the vocals
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: i want more slider but
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: yea
2014-07-08 13:47 Kritikally: they're on point with the vocals, no issues there, I'll carry on
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: but i match raum ; _ ; sorry
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: lol
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: k
2014-07-08 13:51 Kritikally: 01:00:674 (3)
2014-07-08 13:52 Kritikally: that slider seems too long, maybe change it to two smaller sliders, e.g.:

2014-07-08 13:55 eINess: ok. :D
2014-07-08 13:55 Kritikally: and that's all I can find on the Insane one
2014-07-08 13:55 Kritikally: your Normal difficulty is spot on, no issues there
2014-07-08 13:56 Kritikally: other than maybe the timing of a couple 16th notes that could be too hard given the tempo
2014-07-08 13:56 eINess: :D
2014-07-08 13:56 eINess: ok. thanks~
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: again, consider removing the grey-colored group from all difficulties (or at least hard and insane)
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: make it a green or literally any other color (other than white, of course)
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: more think it D: , thanks mod~
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: yw <3
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: I'll post log
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: green is not match lol
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: ok.
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: thanks a lot :D
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: was just giving a random example
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: you're welcome ♥
2014-07-08 13:58 eINess: :D
Thanks you so much :D
riffy
As requested via #modreqs

[General]
  1. Your video looks pixelated and I'm sure that you can get a better-quality version of this video. Try to look for it!
  2. The same thing as I've mentioned above happens with your BG, I'm sure that there're some nicer ones. So, I tried to get some better ones. How do you like this or that one?
  3. Please, disable the letterboxes during breaks. They kinda hurt your video and don't look really good.
  4. Your kiais are inconsistent, please, try to fix it and keep them consistent. It is important to keep the spread consistent. ths may help you to fix it.
  5. 01:25:819 (1) - this spinner is way too long. It seems really boring in harder diffs and gives too much spinning in the Normal. Try to remov it, it doesn't sound really necessary here, anyway.
    Note: if you remove the spinner, probably you'll have to remove 01:42:293 (1) - this one, as well. Both the spinner and 01:45:761 (1) - the beats here sound overmapped and aren't really needed here. Since there're no beats in music, they can confuse players a lot.
  6. Try to increase volume of your hitsounds? The soft-hitnormal.wav during kiais is almost inaudible. :(
[Normal]
  1. AR4 will match better with your diff settings and slider velocity. Also, it will make your spread more balanced. I highly recommend you to use it.
  2. 00:21:657 (2,3) - minor - the transition here feels rather uncomfortable and forced. Try to make your flow softer? Here's an example of what you can do to make it look/play better
    Note: 00:58:246 (1,2) - pretty similar thing happens here. Please, take your time and try to improve your flow a bit, I'm sure that you'll be able to make your patterns look better! :)
  3. 00:33:275 (1) - the way how you switch from vocals to the music is rather hard to understand. To make the transition from red ticks to the white ones more readable, try to place an 1/1 slider at 00:32:928. Example
    Note: see this guide if you are unsure about this pattern.
  4. 00:49:576 - the downbeat here sounds way too strong, I'm sure that it deserves a circle, so your rhythm will be more understandable and logical. Try to finish 00:48:362 (3) - this slider at 00:49:229 - and then place a circle with a new combo 00:49:576 - there. THis way, you'll have a clear and playable transition from vocals to drums and the strong beat will be pointed out. Example
  5. 00:50:963 (1) - the spinner here doen't really match with the vocals and music. You can map this part easily and make it much more pleasant and fitting.See if it sounds better to you.
  6. 01:02:755 - ignoring this beat doesn't sound right to me. I'd rather go with something like 1/1 slider and one more 1/1 slider. example. This way, it matches perfectly with the music and plays easily.
    Note: don't forget to remove NC from 01:03:796 (1) - since it won't be necessary anymore.
  7. 01:06:223 (5) - try to add a new combo here, this combo chain seems to be too long and breaks your consistent comboing. :(
  8. 01:58:940 (1,2) - since both 01:57:553 (1,2) - and 01:58:246 (1,2) - were 1/2 stacks, some players may misread 01:58:940 (1,2) - as 1/2 stack as well. To avoid that confusion, try to unstack 01:58:940 (1,2).

    I'd recommend you to work more on your rhythm and flow, I like what you've got here so far, but it still needs some improvements!
[Hard]
  1. There are lots of minor (x0,1 ~ x0,3) spacing changes, they are noticeable but thye don't work as jumps since the DS changes are too minor. In general, they make your spacing appear quite random and might bug some players. Try to get rid of some of them and/or keep only the most important ones with higher DS.
    Note: 00:41:252 (1,2,3,4,5) - here's an example of those DS changes, if you need one.
  2. Try to use CS 3,5 here, it will make your spread more balanced. (N - 3 / H - 3,5 / I - 4) CS3 seems too big for that diff and makes it look a bit too easy, I think.
  3. 00:21:830 - even though you follow vocals, you shouldn't ignore music completely. The loud pano beat here sounds really confuising and makes 00:21:657 (1) - really uncomfortable to play. I'm highly suggesting you to start trhe slider at 00:21:830 - this point to make it more reasonable and playable.
  4. 00:49:402 (1) - since the drum/bass kicks in at 00:49:576 - the spinner shouls start at 00:49:402 (1) - as well. Starting it easier makes no sense with the song and feels random.
  5. 01:47:148 (4,5) - these two objects are clearly overmapped and 01:45:414 (1,2,3) - these, probably, are overmapped as well. Perhaps, you shuld finish the break later and avoid overmapping since it feels really confusing as it is now.

    The only thinh that really bugs me here is those minor spacing changes, apart from this, the diff seems okay. Try to get more opinions on it, please. the diff itself is quite alright, but it may need some more modding and some more improvements.
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:830 - the downbeat is here, and for the hardest diff, I wouldn't igore it so easily.
  2. 00:29:113 (4,5) - to add some variety and emphasize the piano, try to make a jump here. Something like this would work good, imo.
  3. 00:49:576 - same was with the hard diff, the spinner is off music.
    Note: it may not be noticeable instandard, but it is way too easy to spot in o!m/taiko. And since the diff is playable in these modes, you probably should fix that.
  4. 00:50:963 (1) - I feel uncomfortable with this slider, it doesn't represent the song as it should. Listen, 00:51:483 - vocals and 00:51:137 - music. I'd rather go with something different and try to point out the missed beats/vocals.
    Note: 01:02:235 - same here, you ignre qute a lot of important beats and it really bugs me.
  5. 01:22:871 (6) - holding this slider for so long will make players bored or nervous. try to break it into 3 or more sliders, so, players will keep moving?example

    I feel uncomfortable with the way how you ignore the instruments in some patterns, also I did not really like how the flow breaks in patterns like 01:08:998 (7,1) - when players "feel" your flow and it suddenly breaks, it feels rather tricky and confusing. At the same time, I liked a couple of your aideas, they were rally great, like 01:14:894 - the slowdown here, for example. All in all, you should pay more attention to your rhythm and flow and if you do it - this will be a really awesome diff!
The mapset needs more work, but it has potential and some great ideas. Keep improving!

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Best of luck!
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