妹妹胸部太贫乏，必须要有金坷垃
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star!
ps.
大盗魔理莎 专偷金坷垃
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大盗魔理莎 专偷金坷垃
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凹啊哈 啊哈哈 凹哈哈啊哈哈哈 哈凹哈
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cool map. i want my jinkela。
太刺激了，玩几局就没力气了。
ps：最后一个难度难得太霸气了，一度让我怀疑tsuka is a girl的真实性。
太刺激了，玩几局就没力气了。
ps：最后一个难度难得太霸气了，一度让我怀疑tsuka is a girl的真实性。
我要金坷拉
good 。。
:):):):)
WWTF....
没有金坷拉,如何日产SS一千八?
有了金坷垃，SS日产一千八。。
love this map..
love this map..
[General]
11.810 Offset.
Put in Ignorethis as tag.
4 Insane diff's, holy shit xD
[Crazy Jay's Insane]
11.810 Offset.
Put in Ignorethis as tag.
4 Insane diff's, holy shit xD
[Crazy Jay's Insane]
- 00:58:720 (5) - Clap here (?)
- 01:35:022 (6) - New combo here (?)
- 01:39:101 (1,1,1,1,1) - Don't like this at all, it feels out of place with the rest of the map, which is awesome. But these notes are buu~
- 00:22:317 (5,6) - This is poorly stacked under slider end (5). See for your self and fix it.
- 01:11:361 (8) - New combo here (?)
- 00:15:790 (3,4) - Hitcircle (4) Isn't stacked right under slider end (3). Please fix.
- 00:35:471 (x) - Extra note here (?)
wo de tian a..
Not too sure about timing, but it really close, so I really don't have much problems with it
... dunno how to find Source for this >_<
Normal- Pretty easy despite star rating
01:08:915 (1,2,3,4) - continue the claps? (just tilll the spinner)
5 objects aren't snapped
Hard- =/ The start is harder than the rest of the map
00:29:760 (1) - looks kinda rough, try Linear? or you were aiming for that rough look
00:36:287 (1) - ^
00:44:036 (7,8,9,10) - left+up a tick for equal spacing?
00:53:214 (2,3,4) - left a tick?
01:08:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - continue claps till spinner as well?
Insane- @_@
Same suggestion as Hard on the rough sliders and claps
00:58:516 (6,7,8) - claps sound too fast here?
01:05:247 (9) - left a tick for the curve~
01:28:496 (2,3) - left a tick so (3) is in on the y axis... so (4,5)'s flips make more sense?
01:36:246 (8) - right a tick for curve x-x
ignore's- No Preview point here
Remix- The start is sooo much harder than the rest of the map >_<
Crazy Jay's-This was much easier than Remix >:
00:11:814 (1,2) - the whistles make this part really loud ._.
00:12:935 (3) - don't stack this please, it just makes the stream here look weird
01:39:101 (1,1,1,1,1) - whyyyyy >:
Evil ending (compared to rest of map)
Not sure about the combos >_<
ummm..... yea... -runs-
Not too sure about timing, but it really close, so I really don't have much problems with it
... dunno how to find Source for this >_<
Normal- Pretty easy despite star rating
01:08:915 (1,2,3,4) - continue the claps? (just tilll the spinner)
5 objects aren't snapped
Hard- =/ The start is harder than the rest of the map
00:29:760 (1) - looks kinda rough, try Linear? or you were aiming for that rough look
00:36:287 (1) - ^
00:44:036 (7,8,9,10) - left+up a tick for equal spacing?
00:53:214 (2,3,4) - left a tick?
01:08:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - continue claps till spinner as well?
Insane- @_@
Same suggestion as Hard on the rough sliders and claps
00:58:516 (6,7,8) - claps sound too fast here?
01:05:247 (9) - left a tick for the curve~
01:28:496 (2,3) - left a tick so (3) is in on the y axis... so (4,5)'s flips make more sense?
01:36:246 (8) - right a tick for curve x-x
ignore's- No Preview point here
SPOILER
00:11:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - mm either use a lower volume overall, or at least make this section quieter (the whistles make it really loud)
00:26:701 (2,3,4,5) - this is really misreading, since the spacing is equal for the 1/2 and 1/4 notes >_<
00:38:938 (4,1) - switch new combo due to "vocal"?
00:41:589 (7) - new combo for own beats
00:44:852 (7) - ^
00:51:786 (5,1) - switch new combo for "vocal"? maybe
00:54:234 (1,2,3) - make these 00:57:497 (1,2,3,4) - a bit more similar?
00:58:924 (4,2) - down a tick?
01:08:306 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - equally space these?
01:14:628 (2) - !?!? didn't see this coming
01:21:154 (2) - ^
01:22:990 (4,5,6) - up a tick?
01:23:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - oddly spaced O-o?
00:26:701 (2,3,4,5) - this is really misreading, since the spacing is equal for the 1/2 and 1/4 notes >_<
00:38:938 (4,1) - switch new combo due to "vocal"?
00:41:589 (7) - new combo for own beats
00:44:852 (7) - ^
00:51:786 (5,1) - switch new combo for "vocal"? maybe
00:54:234 (1,2,3) - make these 00:57:497 (1,2,3,4) - a bit more similar?
00:58:924 (4,2) - down a tick?
01:08:306 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - equally space these?
01:14:628 (2) - !?!? didn't see this coming
01:21:154 (2) - ^
01:22:990 (4,5,6) - up a tick?
01:23:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - oddly spaced O-o?
Remix- The start is sooo much harder than the rest of the map >_<
SPOILER
Why 4 slider ticks...?
00:13:853 (3) - up a tick for equal spacing?
00:16:504 (4) - err, stack this? (right a tick?) oh Gladi already mentioned
00:17:116 (3) - up a tick?
00:19:869 (9) - @_@ hard to see coming in the mist of the sliders
00:24:866 (9) - new combo for jump (and makes (13) easier to see)
00:25:274 (13) - right a tick
00:27:313 (4) - new combo for odd jump?
00:28:537 (5,6,7,8) - up a tick (for the (1,2,3,4,5) stream's spacing)
00:33:839 (4) - new combo for jump?
00:35:063 (5,6,7,8) - copy of 28:537
00:47:096 (2) - new combo so those sliders before this stay as single combos
00:52:704 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - could look a lot better >_<
00:56:069 (3,3,3,3) - ^
01:36:246 (2) - maybe new combo? not really sure here
Some combos get a bit long, but I don't know how to break them up~
00:13:853 (3) - up a tick for equal spacing?
00:16:504 (4) - err, stack this? (right a tick?) oh Gladi already mentioned
00:17:116 (3) - up a tick?
00:19:869 (9) - @_@ hard to see coming in the mist of the sliders
00:24:866 (9) - new combo for jump (and makes (13) easier to see)
00:25:274 (13) - right a tick
00:27:313 (4) - new combo for odd jump?
00:28:537 (5,6,7,8) - up a tick (for the (1,2,3,4,5) stream's spacing)
00:33:839 (4) - new combo for jump?
00:35:063 (5,6,7,8) - copy of 28:537
00:47:096 (2) - new combo so those sliders before this stay as single combos
00:52:704 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - could look a lot better >_<
00:56:069 (3,3,3,3) - ^
01:36:246 (2) - maybe new combo? not really sure here
Some combos get a bit long, but I don't know how to break them up~
Crazy Jay's-This was much easier than Remix >:
00:11:814 (1,2) - the whistles make this part really loud ._.
00:12:935 (3) - don't stack this please, it just makes the stream here look weird
01:39:101 (1,1,1,1,1) - whyyyyy >:
Evil ending (compared to rest of map)
Not sure about the combos >_<
ummm..... yea... -runs-
Hmm
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
Looks good
[HARD]
All good
[INSANE]
[IGNORE'S INSANE]
No preview point's been set for this. You should set one. Shinxyn has already said that though
00:52:602 (1) - This 0.5 BPM slider feels out of place to me. maybe replace it with something else?
[REMIX]
Some serious spacing in this one D:
Some of the jumps are a little awkward, and it feels overmapped, but theres nothing that I can pick out to fix though, so I guess this passes, just.
[CRAZY JAY'S INSANE]
Before I noticed the title, I thought DJPop mapped this.
And like DJPop maps, you can't find any technical faults in them. Seems fine.
Nice map. That difficulty balance isn't great though. I recommend making Normal a little easier.
Starred
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
- Timing looks pretty close. seems fine
- 4 insanes ;_;
- "Normal" isn't too hard, but it still feels a little much for the easiest difficulty, especially with those 4 insanes. theres too many difficulties already, so you shouldn't make an easy. I can let it pass, but i recommend making "Normal" a little easier
- No source. Isn't there anything you could put here? (Even though I don't think something like this needs a source, I'd have a look anyway)
Looks good
[HARD]
All good
[INSANE]
[IGNORE'S INSANE]
No preview point's been set for this. You should set one. Shinxyn has already said that though
00:52:602 (1) - This 0.5 BPM slider feels out of place to me. maybe replace it with something else?
[REMIX]
Some serious spacing in this one D:
Some of the jumps are a little awkward, and it feels overmapped, but theres nothing that I can pick out to fix though, so I guess this passes, just.
[CRAZY JAY'S INSANE]
Before I noticed the title, I thought DJPop mapped this.
And like DJPop maps, you can't find any technical faults in them. Seems fine.
Nice map. That difficulty balance isn't great though. I recommend making Normal a little easier.
Starred
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Woah. Where did Ignore's Insane go :/
I'll assume for now that he requested it to be removed, If that isn't the case, let me know.
Protobubbled
I'll assume for now that he requested it to be removed, If that isn't the case, let me know.
*Pop*
General:
-- End the kiai on all difficulties.
Normal:
-- Fix all unsnapped notes (5 in total).
Insane:
-- Reduce Hp drain by 1? (So it's a little easier than remix).
Remix:
-- Some of these jumps are evil...
00:15:077 (5) - Looks messy.
Crazy Jay's Insane:
-- Please raise stacking leniency for 1 tick.
Rest is good, fix the stacking leniency and unsnapped notes and I'll re pubble.
~ Star.
Edit: Re Pubbled
General:
-- End the kiai on all difficulties.
Normal:
-- Fix all unsnapped notes (5 in total).
Insane:
-- Reduce Hp drain by 1? (So it's a little easier than remix).
Remix:
-- Some of these jumps are evil...
00:15:077 (5) - Looks messy.
Crazy Jay's Insane:
-- Please raise stacking leniency for 1 tick.
Rest is good, fix the stacking leniency and unsnapped notes and I'll re pubble.
~ Star.
Edit: Re Pubbled
Normal
It's ok!
Hard
00:15:586 (2) - move it a square down
Insane
Sounds good.
Remix
00:15:077 (5,1) - new combo on 5th, remove next new combo
00:18:340 (5) - new combo
Crazy Jay's Insane
Sounds fine! (Maybe with less whistles can be better to listen ;3)
Even if I don't see a mode easier than the Normal one (which is already too difficult for a "standard Normal", imo), spacing was properly adyusted and fixed.
Two last things, before starring:
-) The Source tag on the Song Setup menu is empty so far. Add there where this song is came from! (...tv commercial?)
-) Since I've seen good hitsound-placing skills on the Remix and Crazy Jay's mode, I suggest you to add more hitsounds to the other modes, too...
It's ok!
Hard
00:15:586 (2) - move it a square down
Insane
Sounds good.
Remix
00:15:077 (5,1) - new combo on 5th, remove next new combo
00:18:340 (5) - new combo
Crazy Jay's Insane
Sounds fine! (Maybe with less whistles can be better to listen ;3)
Even if I don't see a mode easier than the Normal one (which is already too difficult for a "standard Normal", imo), spacing was properly adyusted and fixed.
Two last things, before starring:
-) The Source tag on the Song Setup menu is empty so far. Add there where this song is came from! (...tv commercial?)
-) Since I've seen good hitsound-placing skills on the Remix and Crazy Jay's mode, I suggest you to add more hitsounds to the other modes, too...
tutu wawan tutu wawan ~ 
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lol
Remove the audio from the video file D:
BPM: 147.08
Offset: 11,821
BPM: 147.08
Offset: 11,821