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go go rank ;w;
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From queue :D sorry delay :o
00:14:825 (14825|0) - LN end 00:15:714 -
00:27:492 (27492|3) - sound change
00:57:047 (57047|2) - change to single note
00:14:158 (14158|2) - change to LN
00:33:936 to 00:35:714 - leak note
00:48:381 - add
00:52:936 (52936|3) - remove
00:03:492 - add
00:14:270 (14270|1) - remove


gogo for rank :D
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mike91lau wrote:

From queue :D sorry delay :o
00:14:825 (14825|0) - LN end 00:15:714 - ok :3
00:27:492 (27492|3) - sound change keep
00:57:047 (57047|2) - change to single note I follow the vocal
00:14:158 (14158|2) - change to LN ok~
00:33:936 to 00:35:714 - leak note no thanks
00:48:381 - add seem its not good >>> keep for hand balance <<<
00:52:936 (52936|3) - remove oh i didn't notice this drum is end at red line
00:03:492 - add no thanks
00:14:270 (14270|1) - remove stair with drum sound is ok


gogo for rank :D
thanks for mod :3
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"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|


[EZ]
00:12:603 (12603|3) - move to 3
00:13:936 (13936|2) - I suggest to delete since its more consistent to follow the main melody at that part. Also to avoid awkwardness in LN part.
00:21:936 (21936|2) - I suggest to delete since the sound here is not that very consistent to be 2-noted suddenly for EZ. If applied, move 00:21:936 (21936|0) - to 3
00:53:936 (53936|2) - Change this to short note as to have LN with single notes will be too hard for EZ.



[NM]
00:06:603 - add note here since there is a piano-like sound in this line.
00:13:714 (13714|2) - move to 4 for comfortability.
00:14:825 (14825|2) - change to short note. Seems inconsistent to put LN. If we assume that its following the piano long sound, its too short for it.
00:41:047 (41047|2) - move to 4
00:41:492 (41492|2) - remove since this LN is too much for LN. Suggesting: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986719
00:49:047 (49047|2) - move to 4
01:02:381 (62381|1) - move to 3 for balance.
01:12:158 (72158|1) - move to 1
01:12:825 (72825|2,73047|1) - move 1 column to left.
01:14:603 (74603|1,74825|2) - move 1 column to right.



[HD]
00:05:714 (5714|0) - reduce length until 00:06:603
00:12:381 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986749
• Only consistent drum notes. Consider the HS.
• Balance Pattern for both hands.
00:12:825 (12825|0,14158|2,14381|0,14603|1,14825|2) - change to short/single notes as they are not that consistent to be LN.
00:17:492 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986758
• Removed the 1st LN since inconsistent.
• 2-noted for the piano + hithat and piano + drum sound.
• Comfortable pattern.
00:21:936 (21936|1) - remove to avoid sudden 3-noted press and move the Hitsound to the LN.
00:23:158 (23158|1) - move to 3
00:27:492 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986767
• More comfortable and balance pattern.
00:39:936 (39936|0,40047|1,40158|2) - move to 4, 3 and 2 accordingly.
00:43:270 (43270|1) - Suggesting to remove so to avoid 3-noted notes on HD. If removed, move the Hitsound to the LN.
00:46:825 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986790
• Comfortable Pattern.
• No stack ups, spread notes.
00:51:603 (51603|0,51714|2,51714|3) - move to 3 and [1,2] accordingly.
00:52:158 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986800
• Balance Pattern.
00:53:936 (53936|1) - remove and move the HS to the LN.
00:54:381 (54381|2,54825|1,55270|0,55714|1) - change to single notes. Quite inconsistent to make it LN
00:55:714 (55714|2) - extend until 00:57:492 since the rolling sound stops there.
00:56:158 (56158|3) - reduce lengh until 00:56:603
01:04:603 (64603|1) - move to 3


[MX]
00:12:381 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986831
• Hand balance
• Avoid sudden jack notes.
00:13:714 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986838
• Removed inconsistent LNs.
• Comfortable Pattern.
00:17:714 (17714|0) - move to 4 and
00:18:381 (18381|1) - remove to avoid 3 noted notes. Not strong sound not like 00:28:825 (28825|3,28825|0,28825|1) - which has a consistent cymbals.
00:21:936 (21936|2) - ^
00:53:936 (53936|3) - ^
00:53:936 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986879
00:55:714 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986880
• Both recommendations are balanced and no overdensity of notes.
• Used 1/4 before the chorus for comfortability and fun factor.
00:57:603 (57603|0) - move to 2
01:04:047 (64047|2) - move to 4 and...
01:04:158 (64158|3) - remove this to avoid jack and move its HS to LN.

So far good difficulty~ just need major fix in some parts


[Overall]
That Sora BG though *nosebleeds* Anyway, cool mapset~!
posted

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|


[EZ]
00:12:603 (12603|3) - move to 3
00:13:936 (13936|2) - I suggest to delete since its more consistent to follow the main melody at that part. Also to avoid awkwardness in LN part.
00:21:936 (21936|2) - I suggest to delete since the sound here is not that very consistent to be 2-noted suddenly for EZ. If applied, move 00:21:936 (21936|0) - to 3
00:53:936 (53936|2) - Change this to short note as to have LN with single notes will be too hard for EZ.



[NM]
00:06:603 - add note here since there is a piano-like sound in this line.
00:13:714 (13714|2) - move to 4 for comfortability.
00:14:825 (14825|2) - change to short note. Seems inconsistent to put LN. If we assume that its following the piano long sound, its too short for it.
00:41:047 (41047|2) - move to 4
00:41:492 (41492|2) - remove since this LN is too much for LN. Suggesting: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986719
00:49:047 (49047|2) - move to 4
01:02:381 (62381|1) - move to 3 for balance.
01:12:158 (72158|1) - move to 1
01:12:825 (72825|2,73047|1) - move 1 column to left.
01:14:603 (74603|1,74825|2) - move 1 column to right.



[HD]
00:05:714 (5714|0) - reduce length until 00:06:603
00:12:381 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986749
• Only consistent drum notes. Consider the HS.
• Balance Pattern for both hands.
00:12:825 (12825|0,14158|2,14381|0,14603|1,14825|2) - change to short/single notes as they are not that consistent to be LN.
00:17:492 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986758
• Removed the 1st LN since inconsistent.
• 2-noted for the piano + hithat and piano + drum sound.
• Comfortable pattern.
00:21:936 (21936|1) - remove to avoid sudden 3-noted press and move the Hitsound to the LN.
00:23:158 (23158|1) - move to 3
00:27:492 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986767
• More comfortable and balance pattern.
00:39:936 (39936|0,40047|1,40158|2) - move to 4, 3 and 2 accordingly.
00:43:270 (43270|1) - Suggesting to remove so to avoid 3-noted notes on HD. If removed, move the Hitsound to the LN.
00:46:825 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986790
• Comfortable Pattern.
• No stack ups, spread notes.
00:51:603 (51603|0,51714|2,51714|3) - move to 3 and [1,2] accordingly.
00:52:158 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986800
• Balance Pattern.
00:53:936 (53936|1) - remove and move the HS to the LN.
00:54:381 (54381|2,54825|1,55270|0,55714|1) - change to single notes. Quite inconsistent to make it LN
00:55:714 (55714|2) - extend until 00:57:492 since the rolling sound stops there.
00:56:158 (56158|3) - reduce lengh until 00:56:603
01:04:603 (64603|1) - move to 3


[MX]
00:12:381 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986831
• Hand balance
• Avoid sudden jack notes.
00:13:714 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986838
• Removed inconsistent LNs.
• Comfortable Pattern.
00:17:714 (17714|0) - move to 4 and
00:18:381 (18381|1) - remove to avoid 3 noted notes. Not strong sound not like 00:28:825 (28825|3,28825|0,28825|1) - which has a consistent cymbals.
00:21:936 (21936|2) - ^
00:53:936 (53936|3) - ^
00:53:936 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986879
00:55:714 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986880
• Both recommendations are balanced and no overdensity of notes.
• Used 1/4 before the chorus for comfortability and fun factor.
00:57:603 (57603|0) - move to 2
01:04:047 (64047|2) - move to 4 and...
01:04:158 (64158|3) - remove this to avoid jack and move its HS to LN.

So far good difficulty~ just need major fix in some parts


[Overall]
That Sora BG though *nosebleeds* Anyway, cool mapset~!
thank you so much x333
I accept most of your mod , It's really helpful :3
posted
Checked Notes, Hitsounds and SVs. Seems all good to me now~! BUBBLED
posted

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Checked Notes, Hitsounds and SVs. Seems all good to me now~! BUBBLED
thank you so much :3
you help me a lot , thank for information and helpful mod x33
love you <3
posted
How about change the source to 'スガノソラ' and move 'Yosuga no Sora' to tags?

And please remove 'Anime' from tags, because it'll be included in Genre (if ranked) ;)
posted
Grats Sora \(owo)/
posted
ranking criteria stated that
HP OD should be at least 7
fix nm and ez hp od to 7

[HD]
also fix the x3 sv

[MX]
00:53:158 - change to x0.25
00:53:492 - ^
00:53:825 - remove sv and add x0.25 at 00:53:770 -
01:11:270 - x3 is too harsh , also ruins the sightread , i suggest to lower it
01:22:381 (82381|2,84825|3) - these hold u can just end it here though 01:26:455 -
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Rumia- wrote:

ranking criteria stated that
HP OD should be at least 7
fix nm and ez hp od to 7 OD 6

[HD]
also fix the x3 sv remove :3

[MX]
00:53:158 - change to x0.25 no thanks
00:53:492 - ^ ^
00:53:825 - remove sv and add x0.25 at 00:53:770 - ^ I love this style lol
01:11:270 - x3 is too harsh , also ruins the sightread , i suggest to lower it OK , change to 2.00x
01:22:381 (82381|2,84825|3) - these hold u can just end it here though 01:26:455 - rearange
thank you x3
posted
ok some tags and hp/od discussed in game , qualified !
damn i totally forgot about the tv size rule forgive me
posted
nice gez! :)
posted
Grats Sora \(owo)/
posted
Congratz
posted

Reason for Disqualification


  1. Disqualified for incorrect metadata.
  2. Following concerns are brought up by Krah, KSHR, and myself.


___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding


[General]
  1. Artist: Team.ねこかん【猫】 featuring.天乙准花
  2. Romanized Artist: Team.Nekokan[Neko] featuring.Amaoto Junka
  3. Title: ツナグキズナ
  4. Romanized Title: tsunagukizuna
  5. Since this is an insert song not an ending source, add "insert" into Tags instead of "ending".


Rest is fine. Any labels such as (TV Size) aren't needed.
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PROGUY wrote:

Reason for Disqualification


  1. Disqualified for incorrect metadata.
  2. Following concerns are brought up by Krah, KSHR, and myself.


___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding


[General]
  1. Artist: Team.ねこかん【猫】 featuring.天乙准花
  2. Romanized Artist: Team.Nekokan[Neko] featuring.Amaoto Junka
  3. Title: ツナグキズナ
  4. Romanized Title: tsunagukizuna
  5. Since this is an insert song not an ending source, add "insert" into Tags instead of "ending".


Rest is fine. Any labels such as (TV Size) aren't needed.
Hueee ;w; Unranked ;w;
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PROGUY wrote:

Reason for Disqualification


  1. Disqualified for incorrect metadata.
  2. Following concerns are brought up by Krah, KSHR, and myself.


___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding


[General]
  1. Artist: Team.ねこかん【猫】 featuring.天乙准花
  2. Romanized Artist: Team.Nekokan[Neko] featuring.Amaoto Junka
  3. Title: ツナグキズナ
  4. Romanized Title: tsunagukizuna
  5. Since this is an insert song not an ending source, add "insert" into Tags instead of "ending".


Rest is fine. Any labels such as (TV Size) aren't needed.
oh i see ( my bad >.< )
posted
Tags are correct, but the rest should've been done like this:




Edit: All corrected now. Since it's just a metadata issue, I guess I can safely requalify this. Here you go. :)
posted

PROGUY wrote:

Tags are correct, but the rest should've been done like this:




Edit: All corrected now. Since it's just a metadata issue, I guess I can safely requalify this. Here you go. :)
thank you :3
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