Hello~ From
my queue [Easy]
OD 2 HP 2
SV 1 with tickrate 1 sounds good
00:23:073 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:834 (1) - ^
00:45:045 (1) - ^ and pretty much every other one with only 1 combo, unless it's to accent a certain note i.e. 00:39:975 (1) -
00:56:031 (1,1) - blanket these 2 better.
01:02:792 (1) -(Until break) These straight sliders are kinda boring.. I'm sure you can think of more interesting things!
01:24:764 (1,2,1,1) - I don't get this part at all... You should remove it imo
01:49:271 (2) - Random break outta nowhere ?!?!
02:49:271 (1) - Not stacked properly
03:11:665 (1) - why not start here instead? 03:12:933 -
Small issue is long sliders and a lot of circles (But thats imo, and I don't think its that big of a deal)
[Normal]
00:17:369 (2,3) - Don't stack these together, confusing for beginners
00:19:059 (2,3,4,5) - ^ tbh not even I could follow this
00:21:806 (3,1) - Line it up by moving up more
00:26:876 (5) - put it somewhere else
00:41:031 (1) - a bit short, I'd just take out and insert a break instead.
00:42:510 - if u followed ^ then add something here
00:45:890 (1) - there's nothing on the upbeat of the reverse so it sounds weird
00:50:961 (1) - (144, 216) to line up
00:58:989 (5) - somewhere else
01:01:947 (4,5) - change these 2 into a slider maybe?
01:06:172 (1) - Doesn't stack with 01:07:862 (3) -
01:37:017 (1) - kinda short even for normal
01:50:961 (3) - 01:52:651 (1) - 01:54:341 (1) - not stacked properly
01:55:186 (1,2,3,4) - crooked (not sure if intentional) but i'd shift all to the left more since (3) overlaps
02:12:087 (1,2) - not parallel
03:11:665 (1) - same as easy
[Hard]
CS4
00:05:749 (2) - (160, 328)
00:06:172 (3) - (56, 232)
00:06:595 (4) - (160, 136)
00:07:017 (1,2,3,4) - Basically just copy and paste ^ and Ctrl + H
00:19:904 (3) - move somewhere else
00:20:538 (1,2,3) - same time interval, sudden jump is misleading
00:21:595 (4,1) - not parallel
00:26:454 (3,4) - center these 2
00:27:299 (1) - stack properly
00:27:721 (2) - blanket better
00:29:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a perfect straight line
00:35:961 (1,2,3,4) - 3 is good enough
00:36:595 (5,6,2) - Stack better
00:37:440 (1) - blanket better
00:50:116 (2) - blanket
00:53:918 (4) - I'm sure you can do better than this slider
01:20:538 (2,3,1) - distance is misleading
01:25:609 (2) - (384, 320)
01:26:454 (1) - drag this on longer
01:27:299 (2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl + G entire thing and maybe shorten it?
01:31:947 (1) - stack?
01:32:369 (2,3) - line these up if u ^
01:43:355 (1,1) - I'd remove these completely
01:55:186 (1) - spinner's way too short
02:10:609 (1) - best to leave some space after spinner so remove
02:26:031 - rhythm starts here
02:26:242 (3,6) - not perfectly stacked
02:49:271 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty confusing
03:11:665 (1) - same as other diffs
[Omega Zero]
00:00:257 (1) - These notes I think should be 1/2 beat longer, to fit with music
00:07:017 (1) - long sliders like these don't really occur in insanes often, also blanket
00:13:989 (2,3) - move further apart
00:26:665 (6) - stack on (3)
00:31:102 (3) - keep distance the same
00:34:271 (2) - this should really start 1/2 a beat earlier
00:36:172 (2,4) - not sure if trying to stack
00:37:440 (1,2) - overlap doesn't look pretty
00:44:094 (5) - there's nothing in the music that goes in the blue tick!!
00:44:306 (1) - way too short so might as well not
00:49:693 (2) - funny shape
00:52:123 (3,4,5,6,7) - move everything 1/4 back
01:00:574 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:01:313 (1,4) - not perfect stack
01:21:172 (4,1,2,3) - spread apart?
01:25:186 (5) - make 1/2 earlier?
01:26:454 - start stream here
01:29:834 (1,2) - Ending isn't on beat.
01:31:841 (1,2) - why a circle? and why on a blue tick? o-o tbh I'd change the entire guitar solo into a giant death stream lol.
01:39:130 (1) - This note feels so lonely being alone
01:43:355 (1,1) - long sliders dont suit insane diff, + it's oddly shaped
01:56:876 - I'd start break here
01:57:933 (4) - If u dont follow ^ then shift 1/4 beat later
01:58:778 (1) - ^ to match music
02:12:087 - Something's missing here
02:12:404 (1) - shift 1/4 early
02:14:411 (8) - long slider
02:20:538 (1) - stack better
02:32:792 (3) - 02:33:637 (5) - 02:34:059 (1) - (272, 192)
02:42:510 (1,5) - stack better
02:55:609 - missing something here
02:55:820 (4) - 1/2 beat later
02:59:411 (1) - same as beginning, make longer
03:06:172 (1) - long slider not suitable for this diff
03:12:827 - Missing 2 more notes here
It's quite nice for a 1st map.. I saw someone else say it's like one of those old maps and I agree too lol
Look at some newer ranked maps and learn their patterns and such
anyways GL with ur map!