owo/ mod from queuhuehue
[General]
You don't need to have tags that repeat the source, it's redundant owo, remove "episode of" from tags
Converted to 192kbps for you :
http://puu.sh/9essR/894046bc65.mp3The offset might be incorrect
[Inner Oni]
This looks somewhat easy for an inner oni imo, it's pretty similar to Oni in terms of amount of 1/4 streams, you might need to add more notes here
00:27:175 - Might want to map to the piano here?
00:31:322 - Maybe add a k here to as to keep consistency with 00:29:822 (126,127,128) -
00:33:704 - Maybe add a 1/4 stream here to fit to the music, you might want to add more notes, it's inner oni after all owo
00:43:234 - Add a k here to map to vocals
00:55:410 - The vocals end here, the triplet here ends rather early, which feels weird imo
00:56:646 - k for vocal
[Oni]
00:45:881 - This pattern repeats over and over and over again, please vary it owo/
01:17:116 (342,345,346,347) - ddkd > kkdk | This is to follow the vocals
ww no other problems x_x
[Muzu]
00:08:822 (21) - k > K | Since this is the last note to this section and the vocals are strong here, I suggest to emphasize this
00:11:116 - Add a don here for the bass in the music
00:14:116 (20) - d > k | This is to mantain the kat rhythm here 00:11:999 (8,12,15) -
00:16:763 - Add a don for the bass
00:56:646 - Add a kat here for the vocals owo
01:15:528 (262,263) - This pattern feels weird since the notes do not fall directly onto the vocals here, you might want to change this pattern
[Futsuu]
00:06:528 (7) - I don't get why is this note placed on a red line here?
00:25:410 (42) - A finish after a 1/2 note is pretty hard for Futsuu players, maybe use a kat instead
00:29:116 - Add a don here to follow the vocals
00:31:057 - Add a don here | The transition between 1/2 and 1/1 between 00:30:881 (56,57) - can confuse Futsuu players, I suggest to add a note here to make the transition better since there is no significant instrument they can follow
00:54:881 (115,116,117) - These 1/2 notes are hard to follow, I suggest to make an easier pattern
01:20:469 (193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - All kats? maybe add some dons in there
[Kantan]
Don't get why 00:04:587 (3) - has a finish while 1 doesn't, I think you should add finishes to both 1 and 3
00:28:587 - Maybe add a note here, it has a stong vocal and bass
00:40:410 - Add a note here, this portion feels to empty
00:41:646 (54) - Move to 00:41:822 -
00:45:528 - TO 00:50:822 - Some parts just feels too empty imo, I suggest to fill some of them up
00:51:175 (69,70,71,72,73,74) - I don't get why this rhythm? owo
01:02:469 - Add a note here so that it doesn't feel too empty
01:16:940 - I don't get this break here since this is too empty compared to the rest of the parts in the kiai time
Good luck on this owo/